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This year, the local magazine reaches all homes in the area. It would be a great opportunity to let people know the benefits of your business.

I want to ask, should the two sentences from above be connected into one with a comma, or is leaving as two separate sentences?
Which is grammatically correct?

  • Grammar -

    It's much better to leave them as two separate sentences.

  • Grammar -

    then, how about the use of "so" to connect it? Or is it still better to leave it as two sentences?

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    You could connect the sentences with "so." I personally prefer shorter sentences, but if you prefer a compound sentence -- then go for it.

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