Can someone check this over?
Nous sommes allées au club. L'Alibi était un club de danse et nous avons écouté une variété de musique. Nous avons dansé à la musique salsa, le rock, et le hip-hop. Nous avons dansé pour deux heures! Le prix de l’entrée était 12 euros. L’adresse était 13 quai Romain Rolland.
I am not amazing at french, but my translator says that it says:
We went to the club. The Alibi was a club of dance and we listened to a variety of music. We danced with the music salsa, the rock'n'roll, and the hip-hop. We danced for two hours! The entrance fee was 12 euros.
Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. The French is perfect. In the English, I'd only change "with" to the word "to Salsa music." Instead o f saying "a club of dance" it's better as "a dance club." The last sentence, I'm sure, gave you no problem = The address was 13 Romain Rolland wharf. (quai = sharf)
Mme
Of course! I can help you check the text. Here's the corrected version:
Nous sommes allées au club. L'Alibi est un club de danse et nous avons écouté une variété de musiques. Nous avons dansé sur de la musique salsa, du rock et du hip-hop. Nous avons dansé pendant deux heures ! Le prix de l'entrée était de 12 euros. L'adresse était 13 quai Romain Rolland.
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