posted by Minerva .
Ummm does this work with my heading?
Sport and the Economy
Our economy is at an uncertain point. High taxes, high maintenance and don’t we all dread the announcement blaring on our TV? You know the one! The reserve bank has decided to raise intrest rates. With all that fuss the finance minister is probably having a bad case of… finance blues.
Where am I going you may well ask. So I will answer you. Sport on Television is crucial to the free tv industry. Without money they bring in from sport advertising revenue they are not able to supply other tv shows such as the simpsons CSI Law and Order. all of these shows are supplied because of POPULAR DEMAND. At the moment however
• 80% of sport watchers are men.
So if that popular demand was to change then, not only would it stop a bad case of unpopularity for any TV station under law, it will also gain more advertising from sponsors. This will not take away from the Revenue money. How would this change? Easy! By Let the situation even out by encourageing womans sport from a early age with no age limit. This is not only giving the TV station “RIGHTS AT WORK!!! but also not giving them the well known case of finance blues
I don't agree with most of your points, and the train of thought seems disjointed. The heading/title seems OK for the points you are trying to make.