posted by Lena .
I`m writing a bio-poem. Is what I wrote below (just one part in the poem) gramaticcaly correct?
Who feels that he has been robbed of his faith in God and fellow human beings, exposed to the deepest inhumanity and that life has becomes as black as ‘Night’
Does this make sense?
Who fears that liberty has gone extinct, his family will cease to exist and that God is hanging from a gallows