English- Ms. Sue
posted by rose- revision- .
Identify the thesis statement in the article AIDS in Africa: Dying by the numbers. What strategies does the author use to formulate his argument? What makes the argument so compelling?
The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease.
What strategies does the author use to formulate his argument? What makes the argument so compelling?
The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The argument is so compelling because these statistics will move the mankind to take action. If this is accomplished the world would have made major strides in eliminating HIV/AIDS. If not, the world is on its own and that is the seriousness of the situation.
English- Ms. Sue -
Without reading the article, I assume your thesis is right.
Your answer for the second part looks good --
except -- omit "the" before "mankind"
-- omit the last sentence.