posted by Anonymous .
Address the following: What feedback did you receive from your instructor? From the peer reviewer? From the Center for Writing Excellence? Explain how you will incorporate the feedback into your paper. How will this feedback improve your expository essay? What feedback did you choose not to include? Explain your answers.
Only YOU can respond to this. Only YOU have the feedback from the different people mentioned. Only YOU will be the one deciding how to incorporate these people's feedback into your essay.
As a person that took this course, take the feedback that the instructor gave you when they graded your assignment. During the peer review assignment, the instructor would have placed a copy of your peer review in your individual forum. At this point you should have already submitted your paper to the CWE for review, take the feedback from the "W". Take a look at these three things and write how you plan on using the feedback in your paper. From the feedback that you chose to use, describe how you think it will improve your essay. Besides the feedback that you chose to use, why did you not use the other feedback. They want you to elaborate on your answers.
I HOPE THAT THIS HELPS
How will this feedback improve your expository essay?