According to scholar Frederic Grare, the underlying issues that are generating the conflict are “expropriation, marginalization, and dispossession” (Grare 5). The Pakistani government has expropriated Baluchistan land the for recreation area. Despite being the richest province in terms of energy and mineral resources, Baluchistan remains one of the most underdeveloped provinces. Baluchistan subsoil holds a significant portion of Pakistan’s energy and mineral resources. It accounts for thirty six percent of its total gas production (Grare 4). However, Baluchistan only consumes seventeen percent of its own production. The remaining eighty three percent is distributed throughout the rest of the country. Furthermore, Baluchistan receives only twelve point four percent of the earnings due to it for its supply (Grare 5).
Baluchistan is the poorest province of Pakistan (Grare 4). Over 70% of the Baloch population lives on a part of their traditional territory. Baluchistan is the largest among Pakistan’s four provinces, comprising forty three percent of land area, but only six percent of Pakistan’s total population (Jafferelot 31). Baloch trace their roots to tribes that migrated east from around Aleppo, in Syria before Christian era. Baloch speak Balochi, part of the Iranian group of Indo-European languages. The majority of Baloch peoples are Hanafi Sunni, of Islam faith (Jafferelot 31).
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According to scholar Frederic Grare, the conflict in Baluchistan, a province in Pakistan, is rooted in issues of expropriation, marginalization, and dispossession. The Pakistani government has been accused of expropriating Baluchistan land for recreational purposes, leading to a sense of dispossession among the Baloch population. Despite being rich in energy and mineral resources, Baluchistan remains underdeveloped compared to other provinces.
In terms of energy resources, Baluchistan contributes significantly to Pakistan's total gas production, accounting for thirty-six percent of it. However, only seventeen percent of the gas produced is consumed within Baluchistan itself, with the remaining eighty-three percent being distributed to other parts of the country. As a result, Baluchistan receives only a small portion (12.4 percent) of the earnings generated from its own resources.
This disparity in resource distribution has contributed to Baluchistan being the poorest province in Pakistan. Over 70 percent of the Baloch population lives in their traditional territory, which comprises a significant part of Baluchistan's land area. However, despite being the largest province in terms of land area (43 percent of Pakistan's total), Baluchistan has a much smaller population (only six percent of Pakistan's total). This has further marginalized the Baloch people, exacerbating economic and social disparities.
The Baloch people trace their roots back to tribes that migrated from Aleppo, Syria, before the Christian era. They primarily speak Balochi, which is part of the Iranian group of Indo-European languages. The majority of Baloch follow the Hanafi Sunni sect of Islam.
To understand these details, one can refer to the sources mentioned, such as the works of Frederic Grare and Christophe Jafferelot, who have conducted research and analysis on the conflict and socio-economic conditions in Baluchistan.