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After 1945, during the disintegration of colonialism, new formed established states in Asia and Africa declared their independence. As a result, these newly formed states established border that had been previously drawn to accommodate the political and administrative interests of the colonial power (Hurrf & Gurr 21). Hence, Baluchistan territory was among the territory that was divided into the new independent states of Pakistan, Afghanistan and Iran (Harrison 55).In 1947, Pakistan declared its independence, which included the territory of Baluchistan. This discharged Baluch nationalists’ desire for autonomy. However, the Islamabad government had different plans; they seek to assimilate Baluch identity into Pakistani identity (Harrison 55). Since then the Pakistani government of Islamabad has come into conflict with the Baluch on four different occasions, in 1948, 1958, 1960 and the most brutal on confrontation in 1973 to 1977 (Harrison 55).

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    After 1945, during the disintegration of colonialism, newly formed states in Asia and Africa declared their independence. As a result, these newly formed states established borders that had been previously drawn to accommodate the political and administrative interests of the colonial power (Hurrf & Gurr 21). Hence, Baluchistan territory was among the territories that was divided between the new independent states of Pakistan, Afghanistan and Iran (Harrison 55). <<<Note that Iran had been independent for hundreds of years. In 1947, Pakistan declared its independence, which included the territory of Baluchistan. This discharged << wrong word Baluch nationalists’ desire for autonomy. However, the Islamabad government had different plans; they sought to assimilate Baluch identity into Pakistani identity (Harrison 55). Since then the Pakistani government of Islamabad has come into conflict with the Baluch on four different occasions, in 1948, 1958, 1960 and the most brutal ___ confrontation in 1973 to 1977 (Harrison 55).

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    can I use "fueled" instead of discharge?

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    Yes. That would work.

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