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Please help. How can I word this better?

Rhea did not even question why they can not just all go together up to his room.

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    For one thing, there's a problem with the sequencing of the verb tenses. The main verb is past tense ("did...question") but the subordinate verb is present tense ("can...go"). If you fix that issue, it'll be better.
    http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/verbs.htm#sequence

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    past tensefor am is are

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