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In this study I will argue that prolonged exposure of social oppression and subjugation is the basis for Black women’s limited participation in society’s political structure. I will support my argument by providing a more detailed analysis of the relationship between social powerlessness and racism, sexism and economic oppression that impact Black women simultaneously.

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    How can you rephrase this and leave out all the "I will" phrasing?

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