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Hi Muchachos, Esto había sido un viaje muy largo. Primero volé a Nueva York y en seguida esperé 6 horas el plano siguiente. Finalmente lo hicimos a Londres. Es increíble aquí. El tiempo es grande y la gente es muy agradable. Vi a tía Susan y a tío Henry ayer por la noche. Fuimos a un restaurante muy costoso para la cena. Le compré ambas camisas para la escuela. Vamos mañana por la mañana a mirar un juego del fútbol. Después de que se acabe el juego iremos a un partido en el primo Sara a casa. Toda la familia va a estar allí. Cada uno pregunta por mis hermanos y les demuestro cuadros de ambos usted. Estoy permaneciendo en mi casa de los amigos para el resto de la semana. Entonces iré con el grandma y el grandpa a Italia. El grandpa desea ver todos los coches de los deportes. El grandma desea ver los museos. Deseo ir a hacer compras para los presentes. Sea buenos muchachos para la mama. Le falto y amo ambos.

  • spanish sra Mcguin -

    Since "Hi" is English, how about "Hola" or even "Saludos, muchachos." había = accent (had been) ¿el plano? = the plan, but not the plane = el avión.

    We did it to London? "lo tomamos" = we took it?

    The weather is great? Hace buen tiempo
    Susan = Susana and Henry = Enrique
    Le compré = I bought for him or for her or for you?

    un juego de fútbol
    en el primo = in the cousin? perhaps "con la prima Sara" = This actually says as you wrote it "we will go to a game in the cousin at home!
    "me pregunta" seems better since they are "mis hermanos"

    both you? ambos ustedes.
    You can't be staying in "my house of friends" = en la casa de los amigos
    Grandmother = watch gender~! la abuela y el abuelo = best yet = los abuelos
    My grandfather = mi abuelo
    "los coches de los deportes" = do you want sport cars? = los coches de deporte or coches deportivos.
    Grandmother = Mi abuela
    for presents = better "para los regalos"
    Because you are saying be good BOYS (plural) = Sean buenos muchachos and mamá has an accent.

    I miss you both? = Me faltan ustedes dos.

    Sra

    I think that is all of them. Got home late from concert.

  • spanish sra Mcguin -

    * Esto fue un viaje largo. *
    * Finalmente fuimos a Londres.*
    You could work in the Preterit instead of present tense with *Cada uno me preguntó y les demostró, etc.*

    Sra

    You also have the present and future but that's fine.

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