posted by sydney .
need help to write a descriptive paragraph
These webpages give excellent explanations and examples of descriptive writing. (Narrative, too, because they're closely tied together.) The primary thing you need to do is to include descriptive details that apply to as many of the five senses as possible: sight, sound, touch, taste, feel (texture).
When you've written your paragraph, be sure to repost if you'd like some feedback on your ideas.
Sorry -- the five senses: sight, sound, touch, taste, smell.