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At first I didn’t believe that I could relate to my classmates in any way; they all came from different backgrounds and social classes, but as time progressed we came to know each other as family rather than peers.

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    The sentence is grammatically correct. I would put a comma after 'first' and a comma after progressed.

    NOTE - I think the sentence is a little long. Were it I, I would put a period after classes, and start the new sentence However, as time progressed, we.....

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