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I has to revise the following sentence
naomi winned, why d you leave me like this! naomi soon began to cry.naomi lucas yelled Its okay youwill be just fine

Naomi whined, "Why did you leave me like this?"
Naomi soon began to cry.
"Naomi," Lucas yelled, "it's okay. You will be just fine." 
Thank you very much. That should help me on my english homework.

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