I has to revise the following sentence
naomi winned, why d you leave me like this! naomi soon began to cry.naomi lucas yelled Its okay youwill be just fine
Naomi whined, "Why did you leave me like this?"
Naomi soon began to cry.
"Naomi," Lucas yelled, "it's okay. You will be just fine."
Thank you very much. That should help me on my english homework.
You're welcome.
To revise the sentence, you can make some corrections for grammar, punctuation, and capitalization:
"Naomi winned. Why did you leave me like this? Naomi soon began to cry. 'Naomi!' Lucas yelled. 'It's okay, you will be just fine.'"
Here are the changes made:
1. "winned" should be changed to "win" because "winned" is not a word.
2. The question "why" should be capitalized.
3. A period is added after "winned" to separate the sentences.
4. The exclamation mark is changed to a question mark after "like this" to indicate a question.
5. The first letter of the sentence "naomi soon began to cry" is capitalized since it starts a new sentence.
6. The name "Lucas" is capitalized.
7. Quotation marks are added around the dialogue "It's okay, you will be just fine."
8. A period is added at the end of the overall sentence to complete it.