This a research on HIV/AIDS
It is believed that in 1959 is the earliest known case of AIDS and the discovery suggest that AIDS virus has a common African ancestor. Later on (1981), men () were getting sick with pneumonia and dying and discovered that all had the same infections. Now, they were thinking that it had to do with only men.
In such little time, this disease was spreading. It was worrying the scientist. USA warned the blood banks of a possible blood problem. Other countries started testing the people for possible infections of this kind. This was going global, and panic was arising among people, and got to their own conclusions. There were many myths like, getting it through kissing, touching or anything that came to mine.
In 1987, President Reagan called AIDS "public enemy number one" and later in 1990 apologized for his neglect of the epidemic while he was president.
In the article written by Leonard G. Horowitz, D.M.D., says that AIDS is undoubtedly "man made". Meaning a scientific mistake, why, because trying to make new studies on vaccinations, they would take blood from chimpanzees and then back to humans with infected seum samples. Later, it was given to human subjects in NYC ans sub-Saharan Sfrican. So, this woul be the best explanation to the origin of HIV/AIDS,
Today, we know more about this disease and how it's transmitted. HIV is spread by sexual contact with an infected person, by sharing needles (drug users) by someone infected, rarely, but could happen through infected blood transfusions. Also, babien born to HIV-mothes may get infected before, during or after irth, through breast feeding. There will always be the fear of being infected in some way.
The world is well aware and educated on how to avoid being infected. That is why many precautions have been taken by different places such as; restaurnats, healthcare facilities, nurses and others by using gloves. It is saver no to deal with people infected with the HIV disease. There is no scientific evidence that this disease can be transmitted by any other way than what is already established.
Researches were and are looking for a cure for this disease. Today thera are milllions infected but new drugs have helped them prolong their lives. For examplel, there is the preventive vaccine for HIV-negative individuals to prevent them from the infection. Also, the therapeutic vaccine is for HIV-positive individuals, they are to improve their immune system. In July 12,2006, the FDA approved a once a day, three drug combination tablet for those with HIV. These and other drug combined helps them prolong and have a better and productive life.
This disease HIV/AIDS doesn't discriminate in race, age, female, male or children of all ages. It is a worldwide disease, thera are over 40,000 new cases each year and it doesn't stop there, no matter the precautions and education. There are sitll people out there that don't take care of themselves or others. this is an epidemic that ha no time limits,millions are dying and dying. When are the people going to take responsibility for their actions?
In the beginning of this disease, people would not talk about it for many causes; homosexuality, promiscuos, shame, hur and many more reasons. Many important people died of it. Rock Hudson was one of them, this shock the world but then came Magic Johnson saing he was infected with HIV virus. A movie was done "Philadelphia" and all this contributed so the people pay attention of how serious this was and started to talk.
However, people don't get it, they still don't take their precaution, out there are many different ways to prevent this disease and avoid getting infected. What is being done wrong? What is happening to our children and adolencents? Where are the parents? Something has to be done quickly and more effective to help the human race.
This is a case of global collaboration to improve access to quality tools and expertise. Working together, within and across countries will help with the shortage of health workforce, technical advances, reseaches and more information to educate all countries rich or poor. It can conclude with national leadership and global solidarity, beyond borders to address issues of human resources for more effective health.
This a research on HIV/AIDS I hope that's not your title.
It is believed that in 1959 is the earliest known case of AIDS and the discovery suggest that AIDS virus has a common African ancestor.<~~problems with this sentence: what's the subject for "is" after "1959"? "discovery" is a singular subject; what needs to happen to "suggest"? Later on (1981), men ()<~~get rid of both sets of parentheses and rephrase smoothly were getting sick with pneumonia and dying and discovered<~~there's no subject for "discovered" -- who discovered... ? that all had the same infections. Now,<~~when is "now" and delete the comma they<~~who are "they"? were thinking that it had to do with only men.
In such little time,<~~need to be more specific; what does "little" refer to? this disease was spreading. It was worrying the scientistonly one scientist??. USA<~~the entire country warned...?? warned the blood banks of a possible blood problem. Other countries started testing the people for possible infections of this kind. This was going global, and panic was arising among people, and got to their own conclusions<~~what?? there's no subject for "got" which isn't a very good verb to use here; find another verb and make sure it has a subject. There were many myths like,move comma to immediatly after "myths" and replace "like" with "such as" getting it<~~what? through kissing, touching or anything that came to mine<~~I think you mean "mind". It seems to me that you need to make many of these statements more specific. There are too many generalities in this paragraph.
In 1987, President Reagan called AIDS<~~meaning what? "public enemy number one" and later in 1990 apologized for his neglect<~~what does this mean? of the epidemic while he was president. One sentence is not enough for a paragraph in an academic paper. You need lots of support and explanation to make the paragraph's topic sentence absolutely clear to the reader.
In the article written by Leonard G. Horowitz, D.M.D., says<~~there is no subject for "says" that AIDS is undoubtedly "man made".<~~quotation marks go after the period Meaning a scientific mistake,<~~what?? why,<~~you're asking a question? because<~~this is making all this a fragment~~> trying to make new studies on vaccinations, they<~~who? would take blood from chimpanzees and then back<~~how "back"? by drinking? bathing? what? to humans with infected seum samples. Later, it was given to human subjects in NYC ans sub-Saharan Sfrican. So, this woul be the best explanation to the origin of HIV/AIDS,
Today, we know more about this disease and how it's transmitted. HIV is spread by sexual contact with an infected person, by sharing needles (drug users) by someone infected, rarely, but could happen through infected blood transfusions. Also, babien born to HIV-mothes may get infected before, during or after irth, through breast feeding. There will always be the fear of being infected in some way.
The world is well aware and educated on how to avoid being infected. That is why many precautions have been taken by different places such as; restaurnats, healthcare facilities, nurses and others by using gloves. It is saver no to deal with people infected with the HIV disease. There is no scientific evidence that this disease can be transmitted by any other way than what is already established.
Researches were and are looking for a cure for this disease. Today thera are milllions infected but new drugs have helped them prolong their lives. For examplel, there is the preventive vaccine for HIV-negative individuals to prevent them from the infection. Also, the therapeutic vaccine is for HIV-positive individuals, they are to improve their immune system. In July 12,2006, the FDA approved a once a day, three drug combination tablet for those with HIV. These and other drug combined helps them prolong and have a better and productive life.
This disease HIV/AIDS doesn't discriminate in race, age, female, male or children of all ages. It is a worldwide disease, thera are over 40,000 new cases each year and it doesn't stop there, no matter the precautions and education. There are sitll people out there that don't take care of themselves or others. this is an epidemic that ha no time limits,millions are dying and dying. When are the people going to take responsibility for their actions?
In the beginning of this disease, people would not talk about it for many causes; homosexuality, promiscuos, shame, hur and many more reasons. Many important people died of it. Rock Hudson was one of them, this shock the world but then came Magic Johnson saing he was infected with HIV virus. A movie was done "Philadelphia" and all this contributed so the people pay attention of how serious this was and started to talk.
However, people don't get it, they still don't take their precaution, out there are many different ways to prevent this disease and avoid getting infected. What is being done wrong? What is happening to our children and adolencents? Where are the parents? Something has to be done quickly and more effective to help the human race.
This is a case of global collaboration to improve access to quality tools and expertise. Working together, within and across countries will help with the shortage of health workforce, technical advances, reseaches and more information to educate all countries rich or poor. It can conclude with national leadership and global solidarity, beyond borders to address issues of human resources for more effective health.
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