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Grammar and Composition
Ok, here is my complete "Pet Peeve" Speech. Thanks a lot to bobpursley, and writeacher, and gurublue. There are some people in this world that you can’t live without, and then there are some other people who you just can’t bear to live with. That second category is the one ...
November 12, 2009 by y912f

Grammar and Composition
Ok, here is my complete "Pet Peeve" Speech. Thanks a lot to bobpursley, and writeacher, and gurublue. There are some people in this world that you can’t live without, and then there are some other people who you just can’t bear to live with. That second category is the one ...
November 13, 2009 by y912f

Foreign Languages
Proofread Please!!! ¡El acontecimiento que ha ocurrido hoy eso ha dado lugar a este día que era extraordinario ha sido que he conseguido presentes porque es mi cumpleaños hoy! Hoy en la universidad de Carolina del Norte en la colina de la capilla mis amigos me lanzaron una ...
March 28, 2007 by Stephen

Writting papers
Please critique and correct this document in APA STYLE AND FORMAT. Nursing Theory as the Basis of Care Who am I? One of the greatest ironies of my life is that my generation has eyes yet can not see they have ears and yet can not hear. My generation has advanced so much in ...
March 22, 2010 by Susan

English passage interpretation
A student and I disagree with her AP English teacher about the author's purpose in this passage. Does the author intend this to show the wild, animistic nature of the swamp or is it intended to show the swamp as negative and repulsive? Of course, the student will rewrite her ...
October 21, 2006 by Ms. Sue

english
Please correct my sentence english is not my native language and I don't feel comfortable to turn in. Also my Summary and Anecdote. Thank u very much! (Anecdote) She lives in land that almost has the same climate in the desert. Starvation is not something new to her as she ...
November 22, 2010 by Mariae

English- edit my essay please?
The Great Gatsby Mortality is something we will all face at some point in our life. However, I doubt many people will deal with it in the same light as James Gatz did. He died once in his youth, at the age of seventeen, only to be reborn again as someone entirely new and ...
December 16, 2012 by Andrea

Chemistry
Using the following information, identify the strong electrolyte whose general formula is Mx(A)y * zH2O Ignore the effect of interionic attractions in the solution. a. A"-is a common oxyanion. When 30.0 mg of the anhydrous sodium salt containing this oxyanion (Na,,A, where n...
April 11, 2007 by Gaby

English- Proofreading
Please proofread this paper (without paragraphing... sorry) Thank you so much! Jane Goodall, the eminent woman known for changing the human perception of chimpanzees, is a renowned primatologist, speaker, and humanitarian. After her parents divorced, Goodall was able to foster...
March 30, 2008 by Anonymous

Medical Transcriptionist
I need help with this scenario please!Ten years ago, you started working as a clerk for DMD Medical Supplies. Six months ago, Liz Jakowski, the human resources director, promoted you to office manager. You manage two employees: Jack Snyder and Ruth Disselkoen. Your office ...
May 24, 2010 by Kay

Foreign Languages
Can someone proof read this spanish paragraph for me. La decisión más grande de mi vida que he tenido que hacer frente, me fue dada en High School secundaria. En High School secundaria, estaba en mi año menor y jugué a fútbol del varsity. En el comienzo de la estación, sabía ...
March 28, 2007 by Kishore

please correct my essay with details please
Can you please read my essay and correct any grammar mistakes i made. Also the last sentence of my first paragraph is my thesis, but i still don't feel comfortable with it. How do i make it better or is that fine. NOTE: There are some quotes i used from websites and the ...
October 16, 2008 by jen

English essay, could I have someone proofread it?
The title states it. Please be gentle. The day started off pretty normal, well, before I was out rocking out to music, besides the fact that we had all stayed in a house with nothing but an old Dean ‘’Z’’ guitar and an Xbox 360 system. We went to breakfast at Denny's, after ...
October 26, 2011 by Allyson

english
Is this a good body paragraph? Did I include a topic sentence? Please let me know as I have to turn it in tonite!!! Thanks. Healthful eating encourages Americans to adopt a healthier lifestyle which will help society avoid the number one killer of Americans: Diabetes. ...
April 16, 2008 by Ivana

I REALLY NEED HELP ON THIS--IM SO LOST.
SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME :( I AM SO LOST. I HAVE READ MY BOOK AND STILL CONFUSED. I HAVE TWO PROBLEMS BELOW AND EACH HAS ONE PART. THERE ARE SEVERAL MORE BUT I DON'T WANT TO ASK FOR TOO MUCH. PLEASE HELP ME ON THESE TWO. MY TEACHER SAID IT IS SIMPLE AND THAT IS WHY HE WON'T BE ...
June 15, 2006 by Manny

history help plzzzzzz
1. What was the Trail of Tears? (1 point) the nickname given to Manifest Destiny by many Native Americans the battlefield where thousands of Cherokees were killed defending their home territory the path walked by Native Americans as they were forced to relocate to Indian ...
January 29, 2014 by josh

com220
Need some feedback or a review of a rough draft essay and full sentence outline. It may appear that I am not referencing sources, but believe me I have full reference page with 7 sources to site thus far in. I just need someone to take a look at the layout and give me some ...
February 3, 2010 by wendy

crt-205
can someone help to indentify fallacies and rhetorical devices in this article? The government's 2008 banking bailout is a fraud perpetrated on the American people. The government has abandoned sound money practices in favor of allowing the Federal Reserve—a banking cartel—to ...
October 30, 2010 by joe

STATISTIC
1. I took a sample of the grade point averages for students in my class. For 25 students, the standard deviation of grade points was 0.65 and the mean was 2.89. The standard error for the sample was: (3 marks) 2. The heights (in inches) of adult males in Bhutan are believed ...
August 11, 2013 by CHIMI

Will someone be able to help me?
Posted by Anonymous on Tuesday, June 13, 2006 at 8:59am. Please tell me what you think about my assignment. Also, if you would improve my response by including your add-ins, it would be great. But ofcourse, I will have to rewrite it and reference you. In this assignment we are...
June 14, 2006 by Anonymous

persuasive essay
need help checking grammar errors please and how good is it? Credits cards have some positive value to them from being able to make big purchases, to making an everyday purchase. This reminds me of a quote said by John Mc Donald’s “Everything that has a positive side also has ...
June 17, 2011 by mike

psy
Ms. Sue help me identify the following Rational and guilty Guilty but insane Not guilty by reason of insanity on the text below HE 911 CALLS BEGAN COMING JUST BEFORE 5 A.M. on June 21, 2000, from a residential neighborhood in Flagstaff, Ariz. The callers complained of a pickup...
June 9, 2009 by Rose

math
help with solving a magic square http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1125461237.1125498843 MAGIC SQUARES Magic squares, those seemingly innocent looking collections of numbers that have fascinated so many for centuries, were known to the ancients, and were thought to possess ...
June 5, 2007 by nicholas

Medical English essay
I have to write an essay on 8 questions which are listed in my essay. Each paragraph is to contain an answer for each question using MLA I need an introduction 4 body sentences and a conclusion. Please check my work,my citing and any information on the works cited page would ...
October 31, 2010 by Debby

Language arts help ms sue.
1. Based on reading only the title and headings, what would you think the article was about? (1 point) a renewed interest in hunting and fishing an animal population with an uncertain future the threat logging poses to forest animals a group of dinosaurs roaming a local ...
April 9, 2014 by Manny

writing essay english
can you help me to revise this please? The book focuses on nursing through Sue Bauer's life as a patient, grabbing the reader's attention with her experiences and heartfelt thoughts. That's how this book provides an interesting chance to gain perspective, since the way nurses...
June 11, 2009 by andrew

english
Can you proofread my essay? Thanks! A man with the last name of Yang and his assistant tried to sell the fur of a panda cub, but the Chinese police captured them. The reporter found out that Yang and his accomplice bought their twenty-four inches long fur seven years ago from ...
August 2, 2006 by bob

12th grade English 4
#1. "Something new." "Never been guessed before." "A very fresh note." The critics agreed there was something different going on here. Many books about war, some quite realistic, had already been written. First-person narration was not unusual. What was fresh in Crane's ...
August 1, 2014 by Emily

english
Any suggestions on punctuation, grammer and sentence structure? Springfield Homeless Camps and the Law The growing homeless population in Springfield Missouri is unavoidable. They are seen everywhere, especially in more populated towns and cities. As they are coming down the ...
November 22, 2011 by Shell

English III short story
I'm writing a short story for english based on the painting Nighthawks and I would really like some feedback. I'm kind of stuck. Thanks in advance! The Job They were just names. Just two insignificant names in the little black book, just like all the rest. Targets. Forty ...
January 7, 2013 by Rose

English
ms. sue you please help me with story questions? if you have time then this be story Field of Broken Dreams by Sharon Butala My memories of drives in the country when I was a child in the 1940s and early 1950s, after the devastation of the 1930s, are of abandoned farmstead ...
April 19, 2012 by Mohammad

French
I hope you very kind people out there will correct my French essay! Some places I have problems with past tense, so there I could use some help. Here's my essay: Chère mère et père, Comment Va va? Ici il va bien! Hier nous arrivér dans la colonie de vacancies à Mulhouse, et ...
May 21, 2007 by Juliane

English-writeteacher
Apologies for the re-post but it didn't seem like my last post would be answered. I'm writing a short story for english based on the painting Nighthawks and I would really like some feedback. Any type of feedback would be highly appreciated. I'm kind of stuck. Thanks in ...
January 7, 2013 by Rose

Legal Writing
I am asked to write and internal office memo to my supervising attorney that advises of the results of my research on a given topic and applies the law to the facts in my case. I have attached the exercise along with my draft internal memo. Can someone please proof and advise ...
January 26, 2013 by Ang

Spanish - Need paper proofread asap!
Hello everyone. I'm new to this board, found it on google when trying to find someplace to have someone look over my paper. I'm in my last year of spanish at high school, but I haven't done much writing in Spanish over the past few years (and I'm not that great in Spanish to ...
October 31, 2006 by Andrew

english
Excerpted from A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens [1] Saint Antoine* had been, that morning, a vast dusky mass of scarecrows heaving to and fro, with frequent gleams of light above the billowy heads, where steel blades and bayonets shone in the sun. A tremendous roar ...
November 23, 2013 by orpheus

college essay
can someone edit my college essay? I was told by an admissions counselor to write a supplement describing my low cumulative GPA. It is a rough first draft, and probolaly needs to be heavily edited I am my truest and purest self, a mere child embarking on the beginning of the ...
November 10, 2013 by chhristine

writing( short story)
Can you proofread? I need some figurative language. The word limit is 750-1500 words. “Don’t go in that room,” screamed Kayla and her best friend Rebecca at the top of their lungs while watching the movie, “Martha's End.” Kayla’s mother, Tina, asked,” Girls, if it’s so scary, ...
September 18, 2011 by Amanda

english
can you help with this passage on hazlitt On the want of money There are two classes of people that I have observed who are not so distinct as might be imagined - those who cannot keep their own money in their hands, and those who cannot keep their hands from other people's. ...
April 16, 2007 by steph

survey for school
This is a survey WHEN YOU ANSWER PLEASE GIVE DETAILS FOR EACH ANSWER. AND CAN YOU ANSWER THIS WAY: Letter followed by words next to the letter. Thanks (1) If around nine people (for example) over the years said negative things (or what you perceive as negative) about your ...
August 11, 2008 by lover454

english- write a teacher
can you please give me an example here in the essay of a transitional word- i don't think i am understanding it really... author: Brent Staples my first victim was a woman-white, well dressed, probably in her early twenties. I came upon her late one evening on a deserted ...
September 10, 2008 by kayla

Please proofread my essay
Weather Gone Wild -During this semester, I was to keep track of a current event. I chose researching extreme weather nation wide, but I was most interested in discovering if there was any sort of extreme weather happening around the United States, as well as finding out what ...
November 19, 2006 by shining_star007

Spanish
Yo he encontrado y he oído de muchas personas inspiradores en mi vida. Sin embargo, nadie me ha inspirado más en mi vida que mi padre. oops that's not all of it...i'll post below I have met and heard of many inspirational people in my life. However, no one has inspired me more...
March 25, 2007 by JYD

english
I read this essay for my english class but i dont understand what this question is trying to ask me- How does staples avoid having the piece sound like a list even though he includes a lot of examples in small area? How is coherence established between all examples(look for ...
September 10, 2008 by kayla

College writing
it's 5.5 pages double spaced: The Prophet Muhammad (PBUH) and his Impact on Mankind In order to analyze the impact of any person on humanity as a whole, it is very important that we examine the historical data and books on the person to understand the character and it’s impact...
November 25, 2009 by y912f

Can someone please help me with this history!!!!!!
Multiple Choice 1. Which of the following statements describes the most common experience of Native Americans after encountering Europeans for the first time? (1 point) Native Americans thought the settlers had nothing to offer them in trade or knowledge. Native Americans ...
November 3, 2013 by josh

CRITICAL THINKING
1 Identify the principal issue presented by the source. 2 Identify any examples of bias presented by the author. If none exist, explain how you determined this. 3 Identify any areas that are vague or ambiguous. If none exist, explain how you determined this. 4 Do you find the...
July 15, 2009 by queeni

Egnlish
Writing an argument essay. If anyone can read and comment that would be great!. Helicopter Parents: Harmful To Our Youth Picture the following: A young woman twenty-two years of age walks into her apartment, she turns on the light switch and the light in the main lamp does not...
December 9, 2009 by Marco

Please look over for mistakes
Assisignment is: Identify and describe whichm if any, of these creation and consequence situations the group has faced: 1. Creation: migration,annexation , or colonization 2. Consequences: extermination, expulsion, secession, segregation, fusion or assimilation Write a ...
July 1, 2007 by ann

child development
• Compose a 1,400- to 1,700-word paper analyzing the information processing theory. o Identify the components of the information processing theory described in the text. o Define the components and their functions. o Summarize the interrelationship among the components and ...
December 6, 2009 by scooby

French
Hey, could someone check my short piece of French homework for mistakes? Have you got any ideas what I could add into it to make it a better text? Thank you, here it is: Pour être en forme, il est important de faire de l’exercise souvent et manger sain. Je ne faire pas l’...
May 23, 2007 by Sarah

History
Please help me revise my History essay. The Inevitable Decision: America’s Entry into WWI Words are cheap. The infamous maxim has survived throughout history and its value has been demonstrated on a multitude of occasions. One situation that is particularly fitting is America’...
May 27, 2008 by Brad

French #2
IMPARFAIT/PASSE COMPOSE The non-native speaker is often confused about when to use the imperfect (imparfait) and present perfect (passé composé). The imperfect is most often used to indicate continuity, habit and repetition, in the past; keywords which help to determine the ...
September 5, 2007 by Suzana

French = one more!
IMPARFAIT/PASSE COMPOSE The non-native speaker is often confused about when to use the imperfect (imparfait) and present perfect (passé composé). The imperfect is most often used to indicate continuity, habit and repetition, in the past; keywords which help to determine the ...
September 5, 2007 by Suzana

College Writing
Society sets its own predetermined laws for everyone to follow but sometimes certain people disobey the common norms to hide something deeper within. Whether this society is enclosed within boundaries, or outside in real life circumstances, these people always find a way to ...
December 6, 2008 by Tiger

chemistry
This is what it says on his website. Look at the posts from 06/28/10 to 07/07/10, but specifically look at 07/07/10. Our test that we took was our midterm. Sorry to keep bothering you. I just want to prove that I am not taking a take home exam...
July 7, 2010 by G

english help in Revising
Hi I answered all my question for this lesson correct only 4 were incorrect I really need help correcting them Here is my work #6-What is the conflict in the story? Be sure to discuss all the conflicts. #6 – The first conflict was Jacks mother and jack vs the cow. The cow ...
December 31, 2011 by Anonymous

Grammatical Errors
Please check to see if I have made any grammatical errors or if my sentence structure is off on the paper below: Running Head: MARKETING MIX PROJECT Marketing Mix Project Natashia Johnson Keiser University MARKETING MIX PROJECT Marketing Mix Project I chose the product Banana ...
July 23, 2013 by Natashia

Marketing
Please check my grammer, sentence structure and how the references are places. Running Head: MARKETING MIX PROJECT Marketing Mix Project Natashia Johnson Keiser University MARKETING MIX PROJECT Marketing Mix Project I chose the product Banana Colada Fuze because it regulates ...
July 22, 2013 by Natashia

BUS 210
Content and Development 170 Points Points Earned XX/170 Additional Comments: The student covers all key elements of the assignment in a substantive way. · Reviews the three business problems identified in Week Six paper · Develops technology solutions to the identified ...
March 26, 2011 by Amanda

English
Can anybody help in evaluating this essay. i have to write an evaluation on it its by Wole Soyinka called Every Dictator's Nightmare With the blood-soaked banner of religious fanaticism billowing across the skies as one prominent legacy of this millennium, Martin Luther's ...
February 6, 2011 by dillon

English
I have to evaluate this essay.Can someone help me with this. how to evaluate this. some points on evaluating it. The essay is "Every dictator's Nightmare" by Wole Soyinka. thanks With the blood-soaked banner of religious fanaticism billowing across the skies as one prominent ...
February 6, 2011 by dillon

French
Please check this over. Thank you. Dans les histoires, la poignée de main et Nathalie et le Bonheur, les caractères principaux se battent rendre leurs parents satisfaits en essayant d'accomplir des buts de les rendre heureux. Sans tenir compte de toutes les difficultés que l'...
June 3, 2007 by Anonymous

French
Can someone edit this? Mon rêve a commencé dans un ascenseur. J'allais au cinq millième cinq cent et cinquante cinquième plancher. Pendant que j'étais dans l'ascenseur j'ai rencontré un petit garçon. Il était pâle et calme et tenu à la fin de contraire. Il était autour de ...
May 7, 2007 by Anonymous

psychology
1. The experimental rats were being raised in separate environments. One group lived in the traditional cage in a quiet, but well lighted room. They were supplied with plenty of food and water. The second group inhabited "Rat Disney Land." There were colorful toys, exercise ...
March 13, 2009 by shawn

Chem
I have a chemistry test that I need help with. My answers have stars by them Can someone please help me with the answers to this test??? Part 1 – Matter as Energy & Structure 1. When a pair of electrons is shared between two atoms, a covalent bond is said to have formed. Most...
July 20, 2011 by Winona

psychology
# 1.1 (1 pts.) Roger is experiencing a memory loss that may be related to recently contracting herpes. Which of the following diagnoses would best fit his condition? A) dissociative amnesia B) retrograde amnesia C) amnestic disorder due to a general medical condition D) ...
November 12, 2011 by adeniyi

Social Studies
Hi Jiskha!! I have been researching the Civil war and wanted to know it you can add to this. No this is not my work it is essays and summary's i found on the computer, this is what I found: Summary of the Civil War: Fought 1861-1865, the American Civil War was the result of ...
November 10, 2010 by Erin

Reading
TO BUILD A FIRE Jack London Day had broken cold and gray, exceedingly cold and gray, when the man turned aside from the main Yukon trail and climbed the high earthbank, where a dim and little-traveled trail led eastward through the fat spruce timberland. It was a steep bank, ...
June 7, 2010 by Unknown

Reading (literally)
TO BUILD A FIRE Jack London Day had broken cold and gray, exceedingly cold and gray, when the man turned aside from the main Yukon trail and climbed the high earthbank, where a dim and little-traveled trail led eastward through the fat spruce timberland. It was a steep bank, ...
June 7, 2010 by Unknown

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