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English
What is the relationship between revision and content? A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content with sources. C. Revision makes sure all content is relevant. D. Content connects revised sentences together. Is it hmmmm wow well is it C Ms. Sue or...
April 26, 2013 by Ms. Sue Please Help (Sandy)

English
what is meant by revision and what are the important steps in the revision process?
June 1, 2009 by Anonymous

Maths Revision
Does anyone know of any websites where I might be able to find a set of GCSE maths revision notes or anywhere I could purchase some revision notes? It would be a big help if someone could help me! Thank you Sam
November 6, 2007 by sam

REVISION
what good websites are there that help with science and maths revision? I have tried Google but there is nothing that has interested me. Also the websites, which are a good source of revision i.e. Bite size etc. Are already what I am using. I have asked around but there no one...
February 4, 2014 by Anonymous

Business communication
I have to revise these sentences as if speaking to a 10th grade level in education. Can you tell me if these are correct: 1. We must terminate all deficit financing. Revision: We need to end all debts. 2. We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. ...
March 5, 2012 by Sue

business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012

com220
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?
November 20, 2008 by anonymoys

english
revision is??
October 20, 2010 by danny

science
does anyone know any science revision games about mr mcluthon i need to use it for my revision but can`t find them . thanks
May 16, 2008 by ANON

English
In one to two sentences, define revision
October 11, 2011 by Anonymous

Geog tectonics
please could someone give me a link for tectonic activity revision. Is this what you're looking for? http://geobytesgcse.blogspot.com/2007/01/plate-tectonics-revision.html yes. thank you for your help!
March 20, 2007 by sam

Grammar and Composition
Hi, I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i ...
November 4, 2009 by y912f

english-final revision
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great easter. Rose
March 22, 2008 by rose

Revision
Can you please give me advice and tips on revising for a formal English essay?
November 7, 2013 by Anonymous

English
Select the answer that does NOT make the following sentence true. The editing process: A. does not apply the practices of standard English B. follows revision of your draft C. includes the accuracy of grammar, mechanics, and spelling. D. puts the finishing touching on your ...
April 8, 2011 by anthony

English
When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _____phase. a)organization b)revision c)writing d)outline
July 11, 2009 by Anonymous

Business English
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company. Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
October 17, 2013 by Michelle

English
A word closely associated with altercation is ? A. revision B. Adherent C. Sensible D. Argument I think it is letter B is that right ? Please answer me
April 16, 2014 by Alex

Grammar
What revision will correct the sentence? "Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the should be capitalized. B. The period after began should be changed to a comma. C. The word to should be capitalized. D. No revision is needed. i think it...
May 1, 2013 by bubbie

to writeacher
The following sentence illustrate several kinds of nonparallel constuction. Rewrite the sentence to achieve parallelism. If you insist on reading the Old Testament all the way through and to do the same with the New Testament, you are in for some big surprises. Would you write...
October 19, 2006 by anonymous

English
Here is the second exercise. Thank you very much for the revision. 1) John ……………………… buy the dictionary for the exam: he can take mine. 2) You ………………………stand on the left on the escalators. 3) I ……………………… buy any butter, mum has just bought some. 4) I think you ………………………cycle ...
April 16, 2012 by Matthew

English
When preparing a formal business presentation the phase that can make or break your report is the ----phase. A. writing B. outline C. revision D. organization Answer (c )
March 25, 2012 by Brenna

English
Please check my answer thsnks :) When preparing a formal business presentaion, the phase that can make or break your report is the _________ phase. 1 2 revision outline 3 4 organization writing I picked 3
November 11, 2007 by Anonymous

English
13. When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _______ phase. A. outline B. revision C. organization D. writing I selected (D) for the answer, is this the correct answer?
December 19, 2011 by Sis

English
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language ...
February 3, 2010 by Robin

business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012

Writing
I'm stuck on 2 questions and could use a little help please! First question is When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the_______ phase. A. organization B. revision C. writing D. outline I think it is revision but I'am not...
August 13, 2009 by Shaenna

second revision - English
When evaluating online sources, one of the points to remember is that, all information listed on the internet is not reliable. In essence, when reading this blog titled "The Nation," I can not determine that the information is reliable because the source, author and ...
April 17, 2008 by Rose- Ms. Sue

English
Barack Hussein Obama II (How do we read II here? the second, second, two?)
September 17, 2013 by rfvv

English redo
Ok, for my first question Flying over the oak tree,the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised to: The farmer saw the flock of birds, flying over the oak tree that had damaged his crops. Second sentence: Ironing out all wrinkles, the pants looked ...
July 10, 2006 by Clark

biology
i just need this for revision: the formula for photosynthesis and chemosynthesis
September 30, 2007 by Jessica

science
Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision?
March 19, 2011 by Edward

English
Which class are you in? I'm in class 2. What class are you in? I'm in class 2. Which year and which class are you in? I'm in the second year and the second class. What year and what class are you in? I'm in the second year and second class. I'm in the second year, second class...
March 17, 2009 by John

English
I need to ask you a few more things about my letter. I hope you can have a look at them. 1) I'm terribly sorry that I didn't manage to write you (or to you?) earlier. ...... 2) Some of our science teachers would like to include twenty students taken from one single second ...
January 10, 2012 by Henry2

English
Thank you very much for your revision! I just wanted to know if I can use indirect speech in this rephrase: Then the poet has doubts about the fate of a fair youth. Will he also undergo the ravages of time since sweet and beautiful creatures don't stay that way forever; they ...
February 21, 2012 by Henry2

Cultural Diversity
Will someone please check my answer to make sure I have chosen the most appropriate choice. 1. Gabriella speaks Spanish at home with her family and friends. She attends public school where she is learning some English and is instructed in English for all of the subjects. ...
September 4, 2007 by Raven

reading articles in english
could you give me some advice how to read academic articles in english?? english is my second language and also I have to read sociological and philosophical texts in english for my master thesis. do you have any idea??
November 7, 2008 by asia

business communication
which of the following is not something to check during a thorough revision?
September 25, 2011 by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Revision of the second paragraph: "Leisure time is another one of my favorite things about summer. It brings me happiness beyond belief. It enables me to spend time with my family, to take part in the things they wish to do. It enables me to live life without the worry of ...
April 5, 2014 by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Revision of second paragraph: "Liesure time is another one of my favorite things about summer. It brings me happiness beyond belief. It enables me to spend time with my family, to take part in the things they wish to do. It enables me to live life without the worry of ...
April 6, 2014 by Victoria

English
pwsafmix copy the letter string above on a piece of paper. cross out the second and last letters. Replace all vowels with letter C. insert an O before the second C. cross out the first and third letters. double the second letter. help!
March 5, 2013 by mary

Reading
I need help with a assignment on a 150 to 300 words that summarizes the steps to be taken in the revision process.
June 15, 2012 by Jessica

English-teaching
Hello I have a question for all teachers. I teach English and German as a second language. I started working at a new school last week. I have the first, second ,third and fourth grade of highschool. (15-19 years old). Classes are big (30 pupils). I need some advice on how to ...
November 12, 2011 by tee

English
Please say hello to your parents. Give my best wishes to your parents. Give my regards to your parents. Give my best regards to your parents. ------------------------ 1. Are they all the same? Can we add or delete 'best'? 2. He had lunch in a second. (What is the meaning of '...
June 26, 2008 by John

English
What we should take note of is the fact that the designation of English as a second language will not solve everything. (What is the grammar mistakes in the sentence above?)
January 31, 2009 by John

English Expression
ex) Threre are some roses there. I think the first 'there' is different from the second 'there'. The second 'there' is an adverb of place. What about the first 'there' What is the term for the first 'there'?
April 18, 2008 by John

English
Can you help me determine if I chose the correct/incorrect sentences appropriately. It’s really urgent. 1)Jenny, 13, says “My favourite subject is English. We all have to learn English in my country because it is very difficult to find a job if you don’t know it. Jenny thinks ...
September 19, 2011 by Henry2

English
p w s a f m l x copy the letter string above on a piece of paper. cross out the second and last letters. replace all vowels with the letter C. Insert an O before the second C. cross out the first and third letters. Double the second letter. which letter sequence remains on ...
March 12, 2013 by mary

Physical Science
An object travels 6m in the first second of travel, 6m again durning the second second of travel, and 6m again druning the third second. It acceleration in meters per second per second(M/S2) is
October 25, 2009 by Caitlyn

english - revision
What do the terms race and ethnicity mean to you? The term race defines what we are and where we come from. In essence, race is a classification between different groups of people; where each race looks different, speaks a different language and has totally different culture. ...
June 10, 2008 by rose -Ms. Sue

Math
Need help on factoring. HOw exactly would I solve these(big test coming up): -3x to the second+18x+12 -5x to the second-13x=6 -5x to the second-6x_1 -and xto the second + 6x=10 Thanks.
May 15, 2008 by John

business communication
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company." Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
May 26, 2010 by Anonymous

BUSINESS
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity
May 30, 2010 by Anonymous

business
which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision. style and tone organization punctuation and spelling content and clarity
November 24, 2010 by terrie

spell
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity
January 23, 2012 by Anonymous

English 4 help
1. both George Orwell and Stevie Smith employed irony in their writing. True or False 2. Alfred, Lord Tennyson's poem "Crossing the Bar" and Dylan Thomas's poem "Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night" convey a similar view point about death. True or False 3. the revision phase...
May 23, 2014 by Karen

english
12. In a short story, any pronoun that indicates a person or thing spoken of is given in the _______ person. A. first B. second C. second or third [D. third] is my answer correct
December 14, 2011 by jake

English - ms. sue
ms. sue sorry yesterday i ask question that not make sense but i be talking about the occasion question where rock say the bith word for second time it ask when be this second occasion? first occasion be daytime and second occasion be night time? also i still not get the last ...
March 1, 2012 by Mohammad

Greeks
Do you know any webs for Greek famous landscapes? We need one or some right away please. The most famous Greek landscape is the Acropolis in Athens. Also, some of the Greek islands are famous for their landscapes. Check this site for thousands of pictures of Greek landscapes. ...
May 17, 2007 by LG

math,help
I did the revision for this one i posted before but i don't seem to find my error... Multiply. (x-8)^2 this is what i did to solve. (x-8)(x-8) then I foiled x^2-8x-8x+64 then i combined like terms x^2-16x+64 correct
March 2, 2007 by jas20

research and paper revision
what does it mean to incorporate feed back and what feedback you will not incorporate
September 13, 2008 by Anonymous

Science
Starting from rest, a boulder rolls down a hill with constant acceleration and travels 3.00 during the first second. How far does it travel during the second second? How fast is it moving at the end of the first second? How fast is it moving at the end of the second second? If...
September 19, 2006 by Morgan

English-Ms Sue
This is my revision to my earlier question, please proofread. Often, the dictionaries are wrong about this, in fact by putting one word first; they are supporting a self fulfilling prophecy. Consider the entry, "ax or axe", which appears with the two words in that order, in ...
February 1, 2010 by Robin

second revision
Discuss an environmental problem that you feel is significant in your town or city. What are some causes? Are any of these causes related to human values and environmental ethics? Explain. (Ms. Sue I am a bit confused about the second question) The city of Miami located on the...
June 13, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue

English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...
April 28, 2008 by rose- revision-

physics
A bicyclist moving at a constant speed takes 10.0 seconds to travel 500 meters down a path inclined 30.0° downward from the horizontal. What is the vertical velocity of this motion?Select one of the options below as your answer: A. 18.3 meters/second B. 43.3 meters/second C. ...
May 25, 2012 by Anonymous

English
Can you check if these sentences are OK please? I forgot to include them before. 1) The first three questions are questions on the revision and must be answered by all those students with low marks. 2)The British Museum is such a fantastic place to visit. 3) She is giving a ...
February 10, 2011 by nco

English
I left out the following two sentences. Thank you very much. 1) My sister is in her second year a university. 2) My sister just entered her second year of university degree in medicine in Turin.
September 22, 2011 by Henry2

RE: Math
Need help on factoring. HOw exactly would I solve these(big test coming up): -3x to the second+18x+12 -5x to the second-13x=6 -5x to the second-6x=1 -and xto the second + 6x=10 I can't use the quadratic equation. I have to use the a times c method.
May 15, 2008 by John

psy - please help
What relationship factors or considerations might be influencing Michael’s problems? Need some informations to help me answer this question. I just send a post which is revision 6, check it out for me. Thanks
June 8, 2008 by rose -psydag

science (revision)
I have a test on electricity on Friday and I wandering if I could get a basic summary of what I should know. I'm British so I don know what grade I am but I'm 11 so aound that sort of basic level please!!! Thanks.
January 9, 2013 by Zoe

English
Please check my correction. Punctuation within Sentences—Hyphen You will need to write both short and long- term goals. The president-elect of the Rotary Club had the winning lottery ticket. Please buy three half gallon containers of ice -cream for the party. The ill defined ...
December 14, 2007 by Mckenzie

algebra
Find the two consecutive odd integers such that 5 times the first integer is 12 more than 3 times the second. can some explain to me how to get this i was thinking the formula would be ' 5x+12=3x No, that's not it. The second integer is x+2, since it is "consecutive" and also ...
March 29, 2007 by laura

Spanish
can't you do actual revision ; instead of just words. it would make it a whole lot easier, because what if we didn't need to revise on those particular words and needed RESEARCH?
November 6, 2008 by Grace

English
1. A: Let's put a bell on the cat. Do you agree? B:Yes, I do. I'll second that. (What other expressions can we use instead of 'second'?) 2. It is a piece of cloth or other material. 3. It is a piece of cloth or other materials. (Are both sentences correct and grammatical? Or ...
September 7, 2009 by John

english 12 grade
Hello, have anyone ever read a story called "The Affair of The Twisted Scarf" by Rex Stout?? It is a long story, and English is my second language and I am not sure what the story is about. Can you give me an overlook of it?
June 9, 2009 by Yana

Math - PreCalc (12th Grade)
If the distance covered by an object in time t is given by s(t) = 2t2 + 3t, where s(t) is in meters and t is in seconds, what is the average velocity over the interval from 2 seconds to 4 seconds? A) 15 meters/second B) 14 meters/second C) 13 meters/second D) 12 meters/second ...
March 21, 2014 by Shawna

english - revision
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the rise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in inflaion in developing...
April 30, 2008 by rose- Ms. Sue

English 101
My question is to correct the faulty parallelism.How can we do that. "The streets were not only too steep but also were too narrow for anything other than pedestrian traffic." The structure is parallel. Perhaps the second were isn't needed. Please check back here because ...
June 11, 2007 by Niraj

English
First, Second or Third person "Do you love candy?" I asked my friend Roxis. I always make friends with other people. a)first person b) second-person c) third-person I think A
March 15, 2014 by SUE

Science
An object travels 8 m in the 1st second of travel, 8 m again in the 2nd second of travel, and 8 m again during the 3rd second of travel. its acceleration in meters per second per second is? Would the answer to this question be 0? I'm not positive, but wouldn't the acceleration...
March 8, 2007 by Anonymous

English
1. What class are you in? I'm in the second class. I'm class 2. 2. What year and what class are you in? I'm in the second year and second class. I'm a student in class 2-2. (Are the questions and answers correct? Do you have more questions and answers about that?) 3. What is ...
March 9, 2009 by John

English
* simple-- sim/ple The word is composed of two consonants. In the second syllable, there is no vowel. However, the second part is also a syllable. l is a syllabic consonant. What is syllabic consonant? Would you name the syllabic consonant? Thank you.
February 28, 2010 by rfvv

English
Can you please check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much. 1) There are other teenagers who like wearing baggy jeans. You'll listen to the test twice. 2) You are asked either to cross the correct alternative (among three) or to fill in the blanks with a suitable...
May 17, 2011 by Henry1

science
I have been trying to write a research paper, that poses questions as my focus. Rather then a general topic. Is there somewhere online; I can submit my paper for revision suggestions before i turn it in.
March 24, 2009 by chasity

english
8. Before writing a recommendation report to the CEO, Dee and Carlos distribute a survey to everyone in their company to determine which new benefits employees are most interested in. What part of the writing process does this activity represent? Writing Planning Revising ...
May 22, 2013 by sue

ESL
what is English Second Language?
November 13, 2011 by Laruen

English
* This is Tony. I'm Mr. Smith's son. How do you pronounce 'Smith's son'? It's difficult to pronounce. * Hold on a second. Q1) Is 'for' omitted before 'a second'? Q2) What is the opposite of 'hold on' in the telephone conversation? Q3) Can we use 'hang on' instead of 'hold on...
July 2, 2008 by John

English
I AM NEW TO THIS WEBSITE. THIS IS MY SECOND OR THIRD DAY (NOT SURE MAYBE SECOND OR THIRD DAY) USEING JISKHA WEBSITE. I JUST WANT TO KNOW ARE MS.SUE,WRITEACHER AND BOPURSLEY TEACHERS IN THIS WEBSITE? yes. All of them do a great job. There are other teachers here, too.
December 24, 2006 by Sanjana

algebra
I am supposed to correc t the parenthesis in this equation (a+b)second power+ a to the second + b to the second
September 2, 2009 by alex

Pre Calculus
If you are riding on a Ferris wheel that is 60 feet tall and it takes 5 minutes to make a one revolution, what is your linear velocity? A. 0.62 feet per second B. 0.31 feet per second C. 37.68 feet per second D. 3.14 feet per second E. 9.42 feet per second
April 22, 2013 by Deontre

English
I left out the following two sentences I varied. Thank you very much! 1) Macbeth hears a supernatural voice telling him that in murdering Duncan he has deprived his life of sleep. 2) He compares sleep to an innocent murder victim, to someone who repairs clothes, death, rest ...
November 1, 2011 by Henry2

science
A science student drops a rok down a mine shaft. It takes 3 sec. for the rock to hit the bottom of the shaft , at what speed of the rock just before impact? 32 feet per second per second is the acceleration rate of earth. At the end of second 1 the speed is 32 feet per second...
October 24, 2006 by pat

Physics
3. A Truck is pulled by a rope horizontally. The mass of the truck is 200kg and the tension in the rope is 500N. Assuming the initial velocity to be zero, how long will it take the truck to reach a speed of 8m/s. Ignore the friction : a) 2 second b) 4.5 second c) 3.2 second d...
August 28, 2012 by Maroa,

English
At night, the two necklaces are kept together in the safe on the second floor. (situation: after one necklace was stolen.) (What is the active form of this passive sentence between the following?) 1. At night, I keep the two necklaces together in the safe on the second floor. ...
November 17, 2011 by rfvv

English
1. WPM=130 means 130 words a minute. This is the similar reading speed of the listening test for first graders in middle school. 2. Write the second sentence in Number 2 in Italic script. 2-1. Write the second sentence in Number 2 in cursive type. 3. Arrange the following ...
March 11, 2009 by John

physics
one ball is dropped off a cliff. A second ball is thrown down 1 second later with an initial speen of 40 ft/sec. How long after the second ball is thrown will the second ball overtake the first?.
May 11, 2011 by Eric

Grammar (Writeacher)
Rewrite the sentences below, inserting commas where they are needed. If no comma is needed, write "correct." 1. You won't be disappointed nor will you ever forget your visit. My revision of this sentence is the following: 1. Correct.
June 7, 2013 by Anonymous

College Math
The posted speed limit on many U.S. highways is 65 miles per hour. What is this speed in feet per second? My answer was 5720 feet per second. The other answers that would be a possibility are: (A)3600 feet per second, (B)95 1/3 feet per second, (C) 5720 feet per second, which ...
August 28, 2012 by Carol

English - Native speakers
Hello once again! Can you tell me the difference between Don't underestimate me! and Don't underrate me! Which one is more used in English and what's the difference between those two words? Is there any other similar word? My second question. Can we say both I'm Croatian and I...
March 8, 2011 by Mark

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