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English
What is the relationship between revision and content? A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content with sources. C. Revision makes sure all content is relevant. D. Content connects revised sentences together. Is it hmmmm wow well is it C Ms. Sue or...

English
what is meant by revision and what are the important steps in the revision process?

Maths Revision
Does anyone know of any websites where I might be able to find a set of GCSE maths revision notes or anywhere I could purchase some revision notes? It would be a big help if someone could help me! Thank you Sam

REVISION
what good websites are there that help with science and maths revision? I have tried Google but there is nothing that has interested me. Also the websites, which are a good source of revision i.e. Bite size etc. Are already what I am using. I have asked around but there no one...

Business communication
I have to revise these sentences as if speaking to a 10th grade level in education. Can you tell me if these are correct: 1. We must terminate all deficit financing. Revision: We need to end all debts. 2. We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. ...

business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...

com220
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?

english
revision is??

science
does anyone know any science revision games about mr mcluthon i need to use it for my revision but can`t find them . thanks

English
In one to two sentences, define revision

Geog tectonics
please could someone give me a link for tectonic activity revision. Is this what you're looking for? http://geobytesgcse.blogspot.com/2007/01/plate-tectonics-revision.html yes. thank you for your help!

Grammar and Composition
Hi, I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i ...

english-final revision
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great easter. Rose

Revision
Can you please give me advice and tips on revising for a formal English essay?

English
Select the answer that does NOT make the following sentence true. The editing process: A. does not apply the practices of standard English B. follows revision of your draft C. includes the accuracy of grammar, mechanics, and spelling. D. puts the finishing touching on your ...

English
When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _____phase. a)organization b)revision c)writing d)outline

Business English
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company. Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?

English
A word closely associated with altercation is ? A. revision B. Adherent C. Sensible D. Argument I think it is letter B is that right ? Please answer me

Grammar
What revision will correct the sentence? "Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the should be capitalized. B. The period after began should be changed to a comma. C. The word to should be capitalized. D. No revision is needed. i think it...

to writeacher
The following sentence illustrate several kinds of nonparallel constuction. Rewrite the sentence to achieve parallelism. If you insist on reading the Old Testament all the way through and to do the same with the New Testament, you are in for some big surprises. Would you write...

English
Here is the second exercise. Thank you very much for the revision. 1) John ……………………… buy the dictionary for the exam: he can take mine. 2) You ………………………stand on the left on the escalators. 3) I ……………………… buy any butter, mum...

English
When preparing a formal business presentation the phase that can make or break your report is the ----phase. A. writing B. outline C. revision D. organization Answer (c )

English
During revision, you should scan your paper for _______ words and replace them with concrete words or phrases. A. figurative B. general C. formal D. informal my answer is b.

English
During revision, you should scan your paper for _______ words and replace them with concrete words or phrases. A. figurative B. general C. formal D. informal my answer is b.

English
Please check my answer thsnks :) When preparing a formal business presentaion, the phase that can make or break your report is the _________ phase. 1 2 revision outline 3 4 organization writing I picked 3

English
Reading your draft aloud, using peer review, and using a typed and printed copy are all examples of A. points of view. B. useful techniques for revision. C. patterns of development. D. graphic organizers. my answer is b.

English
13. When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _______ phase. A. outline B. revision C. organization D. writing I selected (D) for the answer, is this the correct answer?

English
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language ...

Writing
I'm stuck on 2 questions and could use a little help please! First question is When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the_______ phase. A. organization B. revision C. writing D. outline I think it is revision but I'am not...

business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer

english
4. In both the Gettysburg Address and “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” the writers (1 point) comment on the tribulations faced by a nation at war. honor those who have fought for freedom. demand the revision of the nation’s unjust laws. expound on the notion of tolerance ...

second revision - English
When evaluating online sources, one of the points to remember is that, all information listed on the internet is not reliable. In essence, when reading this blog titled "The Nation," I can not determine that the information is reliable because the source, author and ...

English redo
Ok, for my first question Flying over the oak tree,the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised to: The farmer saw the flock of birds, flying over the oak tree that had damaged his crops. Second sentence: Ironing out all wrinkles, the pants looked ...

English
Barack Hussein Obama II (How do we read II here? the second, second, two?)

english
which sentence is the best revision? a. My niece is a ballet dancer. b. My niece is a ballet dancer who performs both solo ballets and as a member of the ballet corps. c. My niece is a ballet dancer and I always enjoy attending performances.

enlgish
not a question, just want you to check my revision of a draft with an action lead in. this is just the revision of the beginning, i may post more revisions of my draft for the middle and end, and will probably ask questions in the answer section. Revision For Beginning Opening...

biology
i just need this for revision: the formula for photosynthesis and chemosynthesis

science
Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision?

English
Thank you very much for your revision! I just wanted to know if I can use indirect speech in this rephrase: Then the poet has doubts about the fate of a fair youth. Will he also undergo the ravages of time since sweet and beautiful creatures don't stay that way forever; they ...

business communication
which of the following is not something to check during a thorough revision?

English
In both the Gettysburg Address and “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” the writers comment on the tribulations faced by a nation at war. honor those who have fought for freedom. demand the revision of the nation’s unjust laws. expound on the notion of tolerance for others my ...

English 10th Grade
Choose the answer that shows a correct revision to the following sentence: Why if you did not want to hear it did you ask me what I thought a) Why, if you did not want to hear it, did you ask me what I thought? b) Why, if you did not want to hear it did you ask me what I ...

public law N6
The manner in which cases are brought from the lower court for revision purposes

English
Which class are you in? I'm in class 2. What class are you in? I'm in class 2. Which year and which class are you in? I'm in the second year and the second class. What year and what class are you in? I'm in the second year and second class. I'm in the second year, second class...

English
I need to ask you a few more things about my letter. I hope you can have a look at them. 1) I'm terribly sorry that I didn't manage to write you (or to you?) earlier. ...... 2) Some of our science teachers would like to include twenty students taken from one single second ...

Cultural Diversity
Will someone please check my answer to make sure I have chosen the most appropriate choice. 1. Gabriella speaks Spanish at home with her family and friends. She attends public school where she is learning some English and is instructed in English for all of the subjects. ...

reading articles in english
could you give me some advice how to read academic articles in english?? english is my second language and also I have to read sociological and philosophical texts in english for my master thesis. do you have any idea??

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Revision of the second paragraph: "Leisure time is another one of my favorite things about summer. It brings me happiness beyond belief. It enables me to spend time with my family, to take part in the things they wish to do. It enables me to live life without the worry of ...

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Revision of second paragraph: "Liesure time is another one of my favorite things about summer. It brings me happiness beyond belief. It enables me to spend time with my family, to take part in the things they wish to do. It enables me to live life without the worry of ...

Reading
I need help with a assignment on a 150 to 300 words that summarizes the steps to be taken in the revision process.

English
Hello!! I have to write paragraph. What I do, english is my second language. Help thank yuo.

English
"Let's look for Ferdinand. I must find him -- dead or alive." =============== In this sentences, what is the role of "--" in the second sentence? would you paraphrase the second sentence?

english
In the website I was able to learn about the English language very well, because in the website there are a lot of menus that english grammar, english vocabulary, english basics, english lesson, english pronunciation, english fun and games, english test, english quizzes, ...

English
pwsafmix copy the letter string above on a piece of paper. cross out the second and last letters. Replace all vowels with letter C. insert an O before the second C. cross out the first and third letters. double the second letter. help!

English-teaching
Hello I have a question for all teachers. I teach English and German as a second language. I started working at a new school last week. I have the first, second ,third and fourth grade of highschool. (15-19 years old). Classes are big (30 pupils). I need some advice on how to ...

English
Can you help me determine if I chose the correct/incorrect sentences appropriately. It’s really urgent. 1)Jenny, 13, says “My favourite subject is English. We all have to learn English in my country because it is very difficult to find a job if you don’t know it. Jenny ...

English
Please say hello to your parents. Give my best wishes to your parents. Give my regards to your parents. Give my best regards to your parents. ------------------------ 1. Are they all the same? Can we add or delete 'best'? 2. He had lunch in a second. (What is the meaning of '...

english - revision
What do the terms race and ethnicity mean to you? The term race defines what we are and where we come from. In essence, race is a classification between different groups of people; where each race looks different, speaks a different language and has totally different culture. ...

business communication
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company." Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?

BUSINESS
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity

business
which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision. style and tone organization punctuation and spelling content and clarity

spell
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity

English
What we should take note of is the fact that the designation of English as a second language will not solve everything. (What is the grammar mistakes in the sentence above?)

English Expression
ex) Threre are some roses there. I think the first 'there' is different from the second 'there'. The second 'there' is an adverb of place. What about the first 'there' What is the term for the first 'there'?

English 4 help
1. both George Orwell and Stevie Smith employed irony in their writing. True or False 2. Alfred, Lord Tennyson's poem "Crossing the Bar" and Dylan Thomas's poem "Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night" convey a similar view point about death. True or False 3. the revision phase...

English
p w s a f m l x copy the letter string above on a piece of paper. cross out the second and last letters. replace all vowels with the letter C. Insert an O before the second C. cross out the first and third letters. Double the second letter. which letter sequence remains on ...

Greeks
Do you know any webs for Greek famous landscapes? We need one or some right away please. The most famous Greek landscape is the Acropolis in Athens. Also, some of the Greek islands are famous for their landscapes. Check this site for thousands of pictures of Greek landscapes. ...

Physical Science
An object travels 6m in the first second of travel, 6m again durning the second second of travel, and 6m again druning the third second. It acceleration in meters per second per second(M/S2) is

math,help
I did the revision for this one i posted before but i don't seem to find my error... Multiply. (x-8)^2 this is what i did to solve. (x-8)(x-8) then I foiled x^2-8x-8x+64 then i combined like terms x^2-16x+64 correct

research and paper revision
what does it mean to incorporate feed back and what feedback you will not incorporate

Math
Need help on factoring. HOw exactly would I solve these(big test coming up): -3x to the second+18x+12 -5x to the second-13x=6 -5x to the second-6x_1 -and xto the second + 6x=10 Thanks.

English-Ms Sue
This is my revision to my earlier question, please proofread. Often, the dictionaries are wrong about this, in fact by putting one word first; they are supporting a self fulfilling prophecy. Consider the entry, "ax or axe", which appears with the two words in that order, in ...

english
12. In a short story, any pronoun that indicates a person or thing spoken of is given in the _______ person. A. first B. second C. second or third [D. third] is my answer correct

English - ms. sue
ms. sue sorry yesterday i ask question that not make sense but i be talking about the occasion question where rock say the bith word for second time it ask when be this second occasion? first occasion be daytime and second occasion be night time? also i still not get the last ...

English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...

second revision
Discuss an environmental problem that you feel is significant in your town or city. What are some causes? Are any of these causes related to human values and environmental ethics? Explain. (Ms. Sue I am a bit confused about the second question) The city of Miami located on the...

Spanish
What present-tense form of the verb ensenar (~ mark on second n) would you use to speak about yourself? a. ensena (~ mark on second n) b. ensenas (~ mark on second n) c. enseno (~ mark on second n) d. ensenamos (~ mark on second n)

Spanish
What present-tense form of the verb ensenar (~ mark on second n) would you use to speak about yourself? a. ensena (~ mark on second n) b. ensenas (~ mark on second n) c. enseno (~ mark on second n) d. ensenamos (~ mark on second n)

Science
Starting from rest, a boulder rolls down a hill with constant acceleration and travels 3.00 during the first second. How far does it travel during the second second? How fast is it moving at the end of the first second? How fast is it moving at the end of the second second? If...

English
Can you check if these sentences are OK please? I forgot to include them before. 1) The first three questions are questions on the revision and must be answered by all those students with low marks. 2)The British Museum is such a fantastic place to visit. 3) She is giving a ...

English
About reading 1/2 a half one half a-half one-half a second one second a-second one-second --------------- Which one is right?

psy - please help
What relationship factors or considerations might be influencing Michael’s problems? Need some informations to help me answer this question. I just send a post which is revision 6, check it out for me. Thanks

science (revision)
I have a test on electricity on Friday and I wandering if I could get a basic summary of what I should know. I'm British so I don know what grade I am but I'm 11 so aound that sort of basic level please!!! Thanks.

physics
A bicyclist moving at a constant speed takes 10.0 seconds to travel 500 meters down a path inclined 30.0° downward from the horizontal. What is the vertical velocity of this motion?Select one of the options below as your answer: A. 18.3 meters/second B. 43.3 meters/second C. ...

English
Please check my correction. Punctuation within Sentences—Hyphen You will need to write both short and long- term goals. The president-elect of the Rotary Club had the winning lottery ticket. Please buy three half gallon containers of ice -cream for the party. The ill defined...

Spanish
can't you do actual revision ; instead of just words. it would make it a whole lot easier, because what if we didn't need to revise on those particular words and needed RESEARCH?

English
I left out the following two sentences. Thank you very much. 1) My sister is in her second year a university. 2) My sister just entered her second year of university degree in medicine in Turin.

RE: Math
Need help on factoring. HOw exactly would I solve these(big test coming up): -3x to the second+18x+12 -5x to the second-13x=6 -5x to the second-6x=1 -and xto the second + 6x=10 I can't use the quadratic equation. I have to use the a times c method.

english - revision
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the rise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in inflaion in developing...

algebra
Find the two consecutive odd integers such that 5 times the first integer is 12 more than 3 times the second. can some explain to me how to get this i was thinking the formula would be ' 5x+12=3x No, that's not it. The second integer is x+2, since it is "consecutive" and also ...

science
I have been trying to write a research paper, that poses questions as my focus. Rather then a general topic. Is there somewhere online; I can submit my paper for revision suggestions before i turn it in.

calc 1
If a ball is thrown in the air with a velocity 50 ft/s, its height in feet t seconds later is given by y = 50t − 16t^2. (a) Find the average velocity for the time period beginning when t = 2 and lasting 0.5 second 0.1 second 0.05 second 0.01 second i plugged in 50(0.5)-...

English
Can you please check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much. 1) There are other teenagers who like wearing baggy jeans. You'll listen to the test twice. 2) You are asked either to cross the correct alternative (among three) or to fill in the blanks with a suitable...

English
1. A: Let's put a bell on the cat. Do you agree? B:Yes, I do. I'll second that. (What other expressions can we use instead of 'second'?) 2. It is a piece of cloth or other material. 3. It is a piece of cloth or other materials. (Are both sentences correct and grammatical? Or ...

english 12 grade
Hello, have anyone ever read a story called "The Affair of The Twisted Scarf" by Rex Stout?? It is a long story, and English is my second language and I am not sure what the story is about. Can you give me an overlook of it?

english
It had been there when the midwife had announced, ‘You’ve a boy.’ The hat was there when his wife had their second little joy. Why does the author MOST likely choose the words, ‘their second little joy’? A)They had twin boys. B)It expresses that their second child ...

Math - PreCalc (12th Grade)
If the distance covered by an object in time t is given by s(t) = 2t2 + 3t, where s(t) is in meters and t is in seconds, what is the average velocity over the interval from 2 seconds to 4 seconds? A) 15 meters/second B) 14 meters/second C) 13 meters/second D) 12 meters/second ...

english
8. Before writing a recommendation report to the CEO, Dee and Carlos distribute a survey to everyone in their company to determine which new benefits employees are most interested in. What part of the writing process does this activity represent? Writing Planning Revising ...

English
1. Class 2 in the second year won first place. 2. Class 2 in the second grade won first place. 3. Class 2-2 in the second year won first place. 4. Class 2-2 in the second grade won first place. (Are they all grammatical and the same in meaning?)

English 101
My question is to correct the faulty parallelism.How can we do that. "The streets were not only too steep but also were too narrow for anything other than pedestrian traffic." The structure is parallel. Perhaps the second were isn't needed. Please check back here because ...

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