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English
What is the relationship between revision and content? A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content with sources. C. Revision makes sure all content is relevant. D. Content connects revised sentences together. Is it hmmmm wow well is it C Ms. Sue or...
Friday, April 26, 2013 at 4:59pm by Ms. Sue Please Help (Sandy)
English
what is meant by revision and what are the important steps in the revision process?
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 11:54pm by Anonymous
english -final revision
This looks good, Rose. The only correction is to omit "that are" in the second paragraph.
Wednesday, April 2, 2008 at 10:32pm by Ms. Sue
English
What are all your choices for the second question? The one you chose sounds OK, but without seeing the others, it's impossible to tell if it's "the best revision."
Thursday, June 19, 2008 at 7:02pm by Writeacher
Maths Revision
Does anyone know of any websites where I might be able to find a set of GCSE maths revision notes or anywhere I could purchase some revision notes? It would be a big help if someone could help me! Thank you Sam
Tuesday, November 6, 2007 at 8:08am by sam
second revision - English
You apparently misunderstood my italicized comments at the end of the first paragraph. Why do you consider the "Wikipedia" article unreliable? Citing data from different sources does not make it unreliable.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:20pm by Ms. Sue
BUSINESS
I agree, c is the least important during the revision, you do it after revision.
Sunday, May 30, 2010 at 9:05pm by bobpursley
Writing
I just took the test, and the answers are Revision, and Tone. I'm 100% positive. I got the revision one wrong... I thought it was organization. :S Oh well.
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 10:12pm by Holly
English
Study these definitions. http://definitions.dictionary.net/revision
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Ms. Sue
Business communication
I have to revise these sentences as if speaking to a 10th grade level in education. Can you tell me if these are correct: 1. We must terminate all deficit financing. Revision: We need to end all debts. 2. We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. ...
Monday, March 5, 2012 at 8:00pm by Sue
science
does anyone know any science revision games about mr mcluthon i need to use it for my revision but can`t find them . thanks
Friday, May 16, 2008 at 8:02am by ANON
com220
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?
Thursday, November 20, 2008 at 7:29pm by anonymoys
business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...
Thursday, February 9, 2012 at 7:53pm by sososola2012
English
revision
Saturday, July 11, 2009 at 9:08am by Anonymous
english
revision is??
Wednesday, October 20, 2010 at 11:08am by danny
English
I agree with Writeacher's comments. This is too rough to edit. YOu need to revise, revise, revise. But one thing puzzles me, the essay seems to not have a clear thread, but easily could have a clear moral. Work on that, making clear what you want the essay to say. Thoreau...
Tuesday, July 7, 2009 at 9:38am by bobpursley
6th grade spelling
Oho - you're choosing from all the words, not just the few in the second post. Then it could be revision ... or summary ... or argument ... or what?
Monday, November 7, 2011 at 5:49pm by Writeacher
English
We'll be happy to check your revision.
Wednesday, April 4, 2012 at 10:04am by Writeacher
english revision, editing
Thank you so much :)
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Anonymous
English
We'll be glad to check your revision.
Monday, February 1, 2010 at 5:15pm by Ms. Sue
english - final revision
Thanks.
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:38pm by rose - Ms. Sue
english - revision
This is much better. :-)
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:43pm by Ms. Sue
english - third revision
You're welcome, Rose.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Ms. Sue
english - third revision
Good. :-)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Ms. Sue
english - revision
Sorry, but what is your question here?
Sunday, March 30, 2008 at 9:23pm by SraJMcGin
Grammar and Composition
Hi, I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i ...
Wednesday, November 4, 2009 at 10:22am by y912f
english
Are you asking if the sentence has correct grammar? If so, no revision is required.
Friday, May 17, 2013 at 9:18am by Kate
English
In one to two sentences, define revision
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Anonymous
english - revision
Good work, to the point, and on target.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by bobpursley
english - final revision
Good job! :-)
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:38pm by Ms. Sue
english - after revision
Great, Rose! :-)
Monday, April 14, 2008 at 10:32pm by Ms. Sue
Geog tectonics
please could someone give me a link for tectonic activity revision. Is this what you're looking for? http://geobytesgcse.blogspot.com/2007/01/plate-tectonics-revision.html yes. thank you for your help!
Tuesday, March 20, 2007 at 3:35pm by sam
English
No problem! I'm pleased with the corrections/revision you made. That is GREAT!!
Saturday, September 3, 2011 at 1:31pm by Writeacher
English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 9:02pm by rose- revision-
english
The subject is plural, but the verb is singular. What is your correction and revision?
Tuesday, January 17, 2012 at 10:33pm by Ms. Sue
English revision, editing
You're welcome! If you don't understand why I made the corrections/revisions I did, be sure to ask.
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Writeacher
English
Now it's your turn. We'll be glad to check your revision of this sentence.
Thursday, April 29, 2010 at 12:34pm by Ms. Sue
Science-English
Yes, your revision of that sentence is correct. Now ... how will you fix "alot"??
Monday, April 6, 2009 at 5:56pm by Writeacher
Social Studies
http://www.revision-notes.co.uk/revision/836.html http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/League_of_Nations
Tuesday, October 21, 2008 at 1:16pm by Ms. Sue
English revision, editing
Also don't use a hyphen for the term "fairy tales."
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Writeacher
English
Revision is the changing and organizing of the contents in order to communicate the writers topic.
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Anonymous
English
Excellent!!! Now how will you alter your outline to support that statement. What a good revision!! =)
Sunday, February 6, 2011 at 6:07pm by Writeacher
english - revision
I am of the race Caucasian, and for ethnic group: WASP, with the P meaning Evangelical.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by bobpursley
Language Arts
Here is a site on peer revision: http://www.madison.k12.ky.us/district/projects/webquest/Emily/revision.htm Sra
Tuesday, May 5, 2009 at 7:26pm by SraJMcGin
english-final revision
You're very welcome, Rose! Thanks -- and have a great Easter, also.
Saturday, March 22, 2008 at 5:18pm by Ms. Sue
second revision
The second question is asking whether it's the people's fault that the storm sewers overflow. People can't control the storms, but they didn't have to build such a huge city in such a fragile environment. They also could have built a more expensive but better ...
Friday, June 13, 2008 at 10:55pm by Ms. Sue
English
Select the answer that does NOT make the following sentence true. The editing process: A. does not apply the practices of standard English B. follows revision of your draft C. includes the accuracy of grammar, mechanics, and spelling. D. puts the finishing touching on your ...
Friday, April 8, 2011 at 7:18pm by anthony
English
GuruBlue is correct that it's better if you rephrase it. As you wrote it, it's a run-on, but it isn't smoothly fixed without revision.
Monday, March 24, 2008 at 3:03pm by Writeacher
english revision, editing
Another kind of story people pass on are fairytales. <-Your subject and verb do not agree.
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Anonymous
Parable revision
It's just one brother. I meant to say "while taking over her home"
Friday, November 20, 2009 at 2:30pm by English Lit
to writeacher
The following sentence illustrate several kinds of nonparallel constuction. Rewrite the sentence to achieve parallelism. If you insist on reading the Old Testament all the way through and to do the same with the New Testament, you are in for some big surprises. Would you write...
Thursday, October 19, 2006 at 9:39pm by anonymous
writing
These two sites should get you started. http://www.revision-notes.co.uk/revision/961.html http://zenpundit.blogspot.com/2005/04/understanding-cognition-part-ii.html
Monday, February 4, 2008 at 9:17pm by Ms. Sue
literature
Here are some sites which may be of help. However, before I can give you specific ideas, I would need to know what kind of project. Look at the themes and motifs section of this site. Setting is extremely important to the message of this play. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/...
Friday, March 13, 2009 at 12:33pm by GuruBlue
Grammar
What revision will correct the sentence? "Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the should be capitalized. B. The period after began should be changed to a comma. C. The word to should be capitalized. D. No revision ...
Wednesday, May 1, 2013 at 4:01pm by bubbie
English
When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _____phase. a)organization b)revision c)writing d)outline
Saturday, July 11, 2009 at 9:08am by Anonymous
English
Here is the second exercise. Thank you very much for the revision. 1) John ……………………… buy the dictionary for the exam: he can take mine. 2) You ………………………stand on the left on the escalators...
Monday, April 16, 2012 at 12:42pm by Matthew
english-final revision
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great easter. Rose
Saturday, March 22, 2008 at 5:18pm by rose
English
Your revision is good -- you've changed that last one so you have "parallel" verbs: learn, adapt, be Your sentence will be better if you put a comma after "circumstances."
Wednesday, June 30, 2010 at 7:01am by Writeacher
statistics
Danny or Yadira, I enjoy answering your questions, and I understand that you need help when you have complex problems. It is perhaps time to do some revision and work out some of the fundamental definitions. The work will pay off at exam time. I suggest you show us your ...
Tuesday, August 18, 2009 at 3:08pm by MathMate
eng4u
Check these sites for ideas. Then, if you want to post your dialogue, we'll be happy to critique it for you. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/salesman/ http://www.revision-notes.co.uk/revision/16.html http://www.gradesaver.com/classicnotes/titles/salesman/
Saturday, January 12, 2008 at 11:13am by Ms. Sue
English
When preparing a formal business presentation the phase that can make or break your report is the ----phase. A. writing B. outline C. revision D. organization Answer (c )
Sunday, March 25, 2012 at 8:06pm by Brenna
Literature (revision)
yes that looks about right..I hate my English III teacher lol... Mine puts on too much MAKEUP!!! Also she makes us use twitter like wtf.
Friday, December 7, 2007 at 9:42pm by ______
essay
Here are some excellent sites for ideas on essay revision. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=ISO-8859-1&q=Essay+Revision&btnG=Google+Search&aq=f&oq=&aqi=
Tuesday, July 14, 2009 at 7:06am by GuruBlue
English J.B.
Here a huge number of sites that will help you with J.B. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=UTF-8&q=j.b.+macleish&revid=1888846220&sa=X&oi=revisions_inline&resnum=0&ct=revision&cd=1 A metaphor is a comparison. After you go through some of ...
Thursday, February 21, 2008 at 5:58pm by GuruBlue
English
Thank you:)I don't have to teach them both at the same time.Next week I have to teach them the alphabet.It is actually a revision.
Saturday, March 28, 2009 at 8:47am by mir
English
Please check my answer thsnks :) When preparing a formal business presentaion, the phase that can make or break your report is the _________ phase. 1 2 revision outline 3 4 organization writing I picked 3
Sunday, November 11, 2007 at 1:33am by Anonymous
physics!!!! Monkey & hunter
http://waowen.screaming.net/revision/force&motion/mandh.htm Do it virtually. My experience is that this cannot be easily done without an electromagnet
Friday, September 12, 2008 at 5:35pm by bobpursley
English
Here is a good place to begin: http://www.google.com/search?q=revision+process&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a Sra
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 11:54pm by SraJMcGin
ONE MORE COMMENT - Maths
Last revision. Back in x= 79, subbing back into the second equation gave me y = 54 but there was also y = -66 Calculating THAT distance gives me √(79-68)^2 + (-66+6)^2) - 10 = 51 ..... the same as before!! I actually ran the two curves through my graphing program (in...
Friday, November 20, 2009 at 3:59am by Reiny
English
All are fine except the last sentence. Only YOU can regret something that you did. People don't "regret" what other people do. Here's a revision: She was disappointed that I had missed...
Monday, December 12, 2011 at 11:40am by Writeacher
Business
Actually, you'd need four rows and five columns! See if this opens for you: http://docs.google.com/View?docID=0ASgCKUJJfasKZGZ2cmcyOGpfOTRjdDl2c2JoYg&revision=_latest&hgd=1
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 12:15pm by Writeacher
English
13. When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _______ phase. A. outline B. revision C. organization D. writing I selected (D) for the answer, is this the correct answer?
Monday, December 19, 2011 at 6:03pm by Sis
English
I would delete "in" in #8. In #12, the word in the blank would be "speak" not "speaking." If you wanted all the answers to be -ing verb forms, this sentence needs revision. All else is fine.
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 7:48pm by Writeacher
eth-revision
Your answer is mostly right. But I don't know why you started the second sentence with "Therefore." If you take it out, your answer will make more sense. I think you need to understand the word, "differentiates." It means to know the difference between...
Monday, June 16, 2008 at 9:49pm by Ms. Sue
Writing
I'm stuck on 2 questions and could use a little help please! First question is When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the_______ phase. A. organization B. revision C. writing D. outline I think it is revision but I&#...
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 10:12pm by Shaenna
English
You revise after writing your first (and maybe later) draft. Revision is making sure the CONTENT of your paper is good -- organization and sequence of ideas; wording; etc. Proofreading is when you take care of the grammar and usage issues -- spelling, capitals, punctuation, etc.
Wednesday, October 20, 2010 at 11:08am by Writeacher
English
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language...
Wednesday, February 3, 2010 at 2:45pm by Robin
english - revision
Ms. Sue, I am lost.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by rose -Ms. Sue
English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Great!
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 9:02pm by Ms. Sue
english - third revision
thank you Ms. Sue.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Rose- Ms. Sue
english - after revision
Thank you! Ms. Sue.
Monday, April 14, 2008 at 10:32pm by rose - Ms. Sue
business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
Thursday, February 9, 2012 at 7:28pm by sososola2012
Micro Economics
You will find tha correct answer by reading http://tutor2u.net/economics/revision-notes/as-markets-scarcity-and-choice.html
Saturday, February 14, 2009 at 12:43pm by drwls
ENGLISH : Types of business writing
All looks good in your latest revision except for one word -- it should read "in room 200" -- and one comma that needs to be removed -- the one after "would you" -- nice job.
Tuesday, April 3, 2012 at 7:51am by Writeacher
Com 220
These sites will be useful to you. http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/revision.html http://academic.brooklyn.cuny.edu/english/melani/cs6/revise.html http://www.dartmouth.edu/~writing/materials/student/ac_paper/revise.shtml
Tuesday, October 21, 2008 at 11:05am by Ms. Sue
English
1. Storm damage to water filtration plant #3 caused it to shut down. This revision eliminates "minimal" and "temporarily," which are undefined. It would be better if these words were used more precisely. 2. All customers qualify for a discount. You try the ...
Friday, January 13, 2012 at 12:20pm by Ms. Sue
English
Delete the second instance of "go to" in the second sentence.
Wednesday, October 22, 2008 at 4:18pm by Writeacher
English
Which class are you in? I'm in class 2. What class are you in? I'm in class 2. Which year and which class are you in? I'm in the second year and the second class. What year and what class are you in? I'm in the second year and second class. I'm in the ...
Tuesday, March 17, 2009 at 9:14am by John
second revision - English
When evaluating online sources, one of the points to remember is that, all information listed on the internet is not reliable. In essence, when reading this blog titled "The Nation," I can not determine that the information is reliable because the source, author and ...
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:20pm by Rose- Ms. Sue
English Research Project Information - Sadako
Also, try some of these sites. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=UTF-8&q=sadako+sasaki&revid=266513091&ei=RFimS6DlIYaVtgf_oPnfAw&sa=X&oi=revisions_inline&resnum=0&ct=broad-revision&cd=3&ved=0CC0Q1QIoAg
Sunday, March 21, 2010 at 12:33pm by Ms. Sue
In Science Plant Quiz
I don't know if this is the site you want. http://www.woodlands-junior.kent.sch.uk/revision/Science/plants.html
Wednesday, October 22, 2008 at 6:09pm by Ms. Sue
English-Grammar
The first is correct, but the second is not. Big clue in the second = " ... , but ... " AND 2 separate subjects, each with its own verb.
Tuesday, December 11, 2012 at 7:57am by Writeacher
English
Wow, that's rough. They're both pretty awful!! The second one is slightly better. It does have a main idea (second sentence), and the other sentences are explaining that one, although not smoothly. The first sentence ... I don't know what to do with that unless it...
Friday, May 13, 2011 at 5:10pm by Writeacher
7th Grade English
btw ESL stand for english second laugange for students who dont speak english
Thursday, November 10, 2011 at 7:04pm by Laruen
English
Only #1 is correct. All the others are run-ons. Read each one aloud (or ask someone else to read each one aloud to you) until the first sentence clearly ends. That should indicate to you where you need to make a division and/or revision.
Friday, April 29, 2011 at 9:22pm by Writeacher
com220
Here are a couple of sites with excellent suggestions on how to go about revising a paper. http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/revision.html http://academic.brooklyn.cuny.edu/english/melani/cs6/revise.html A couple of suggestions I give my students a) Have someone read it ...
Sunday, August 16, 2009 at 4:48pm by GuruBlue
English
This site may give you some ideas. http://images.google.com/images?gbv=2&hl=en&ie=UTF-8&q=perfume+ads&revid=376634661&ei=qEEVS_vfMdCRlAfo7PijBQ&sa=X&oi=revisions_inline&resnum=0&ct=broad-revision&cd=4 You'll want to keep your poster ...
Tuesday, December 1, 2009 at 11:15am by Ms. Sue
English?
This sounds more like English than psychology. The first verb is active and the second is passive. However, English is not my area of expertise.
Sunday, October 31, 2010 at 5:23pm by PsyDAG
English
Here's a revision. One thing you can do to make your writing better is to start combining ideas so there aren't so many short sentences. During summer vacation, I went by car to Spo1 Park. I enjoyed swimming in the pool there and learned how to do the backstroke. It is...
Saturday, August 28, 2010 at 6:04am by Writeacher
english
You have a lot of misspelled words, so you need to exercise your spell checker. Secondly, what makes you think they are depressed? I remember Lady Godiva (look her up), she got a lot of publicity in her time, and it changed her Husbands terrible taxation of his tenent farmers...
Thursday, September 1, 2011 at 6:46pm by bobpursley
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