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loans????
what is the diffrence between student loan and a scholarship? the difference is that a student loan you have to pay back and a scholarship you don't. A scholarship rewards you based on your academic achievements and your writting essay...depending on the scholarship ...
Saturday, November 4, 2006 at 5:14pm by Ken!

Algebra
Mary, Margaret, Ron and Nick are to share a sholarship. Ron receives 1/3 of the scholarship; Nick gets 1/4 of the scholarship; Mary receives the same as Nick, and Margaret receives $72,000. Find each person's share in the scholarship as well as the original scholarship ...
Thursday, January 10, 2013 at 10:42am by Michelle

English
Stop right here! If you need to find sentences on the internet to answer personal questions in order to get a scholarship -- you don't deserve the scholarship. Asking for help in rewording two simple passages before you even get to college suggests that you're not ...
Saturday, June 13, 2009 at 10:33pm by Ms. Sue

scholarship
so i should've applied for the private one before instead of the public. because, their price difference is huge. so that means i can't get this scholarship if i chose the private college? :(
Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 11:26am by y912f

Question
What is National Merit Scholarship Program and National Achievement Scholarship Program?????? Is it when you take this test (i forgot) and if you pass you earn a scholarhship for a college of your choice??????
Thursday, December 15, 2011 at 3:11pm by Lauren

Mathhh
what is PSU's (penn state university)"annual scholarship" i have to fill out the yearly tuition & the room and board amount which all equals to $36,144. I need the annual scholarship amount but idk where to find that information...
Monday, May 30, 2011 at 5:49pm by surfsupmel

scholarship thing
I doubt if photos would do you much good. The scholarship committee is looking for as much information as possible that would indicate that you would excel in an honors program. This might include any environmental work you've done or hardships you've overcome.
Thursday, January 1, 2009 at 10:16pm by Ms. Sue

stats
Three scholarships are available for needy students. Their values are $2,00, $2,400 and $3,000 12 students have applied and no student may receive more than one scholarship. Assuming all 12 students are in need of funds, how many different ways could the scholarship be awarded?
Wednesday, March 16, 2011 at 6:57pm by Maria B

scholarship thing
for the scholarship, it says we can submit additional work that would give evidence to why we would excel in an honors program. i would really like to submit some photos i took but i'm not sure that would help me, especially when i plan on majoring in environmental studies.
Thursday, January 1, 2009 at 10:16pm by lillian

calculus
a university alumni group wishes to provide an annual scholarship in the amount of 1500 beginning next year. if the scholarship fund will earn an interest rate of 8%/year compounded continuously, find the amount of the endowment the alumni are required to make now.
Tuesday, June 12, 2012 at 1:09pm by soffy

Scholarship
I'm not convinced. In the first place you have three errors in your first two sentences. You mention nothing concrete about your accomplishments until about half way through the essay. What have you achieved that would convince the reader that you've earned this ...
Friday, October 14, 2011 at 3:06pm by Ms. Sue

English
How would you put this in your own words. My teacher gave this to us as an example and were suppose to fix it to make it stronger. I deserve this scholarship, because I have the ability to follow through with all the hard work it will take to achieve my dreams and my goals. I ...
Friday, May 14, 2010 at 10:08pm by Courtney

scholarship
What can I do to improve my chances for a scholarship? For academic scholarships: Your ACT and/or SAT scores. Class Standing Meaningful Community service Demonstrated leadership In that order, is my experience. Class standing is very helpful if you are 1,2, or 3 in your class...
Saturday, November 4, 2006 at 5:19pm by Ken!

probability
1) A secret admirer has been leaving you roses at the rate of 4/day. What is the probability that, on a given day, you will receive (a) exactly one rose (b) at least one rose? 2) Every student has a 1 in 9 chance of winning a certain prestigious scholarship. What is the ...
Wednesday, May 4, 2011 at 7:52am by Anonymous

English
Paragraph #2-Social awkwardness Paragraph #3-Basketball Scholarship offers Paragraph #4-Free Education I am giving my thesis statement a try: Social awkwardness, basketball scholarship offers, and free education are the disadvantages and advantages of learning to cope with my ...
Monday, July 11, 2011 at 8:36pm by lizzie

application essay, plz help Writeacher, SarJMcgin
Honestly, I have read hundreds of these and rated for scholarship or other awards probably a quarter of those. This just doesn't sound as if a HS student wrote it. It is highly polished, and speaks from an "adult" perspective. But more importantly, it is very ...
Tuesday, August 4, 2009 at 9:35am by bobpursley

Scholarship money
Does anyone know a good website where I can compete for a scholarship(NOT a college one)? Like a site where you have to write a poem or an essay or do something like that where a load of kids compete for a scholarship? I have to tell you frankly, most contest sites on the web ...
Thursday, May 10, 2007 at 8:48pm by brie

scholarship
ok. i will, thank you
Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 11:26am by y912f

scholarship essay
Read and use the ideas in MANY of these articles: http://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+write+a+good+scholarship+application+essay&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a You MUST make yourself stand out. Simply saying you ...
Sunday, July 17, 2011 at 10:49pm by Writeacher

scholarship essay
This is for a scholarship the topic is "Why do you deserve to win this scholarship?" I am hoping that someone can proofread this and also give any tips for improvement. In addition, the essay has to be under 250 words. I believe that I deserve this scholarship ...
Sunday, July 17, 2011 at 10:49pm by Angelina

scholarship
I need to apply to HOPE scholarship but I'm having some trouble. I've applied to two colleges already, one's public and one's private. So when I go to apply for HOPE, it tells me I can either apply to one that's for private and one that's for public ...
Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 11:26am by y912f

English 3
what i had been hoping for was a scholarship
Tuesday, September 18, 2012 at 3:41pm by Deondrea

scholarship essay
Thank you I will try again and repost.
Sunday, July 17, 2011 at 10:49pm by Angelina

Fine Art
what is hilda m. willis arts scholarship??????
Saturday, December 17, 2011 at 9:53am by Lauren

Writing
How do you write a personal statement for a college scholarship?
Wednesday, December 29, 2010 at 9:47am by Jennifer

Computer Science
I hope nowhere. What a stupid criterion for a grant or scholarship.
Thursday, October 4, 2012 at 3:51am by Steve

English
A married couple met at Juanita College in Huntingdon, Pennslvania. They are both left-handed,and they have set up a scholarship for needy left handed students attending Juanita. Here is my answer does it make sense? A married couple who met at Juniata College in Huntington, ...
Thursday, March 25, 2010 at 10:47am by christopher

Scholarship (plz read)
Since none of us lives in New York, we don't know.
Saturday, November 26, 2011 at 3:55pm by Writeacher

Ms. Sue
I am writing a formal essay for a contest to win a scholarship.But it has to be written formally.
Thursday, September 24, 2009 at 12:13pm by Brooke

LOGIC - Strength of enumerative arguments
#1 Here's my argument: Alice went to Lincoln High and earned a college scholarship. Ben went to Lincoln High and earned a college scholarhip. Carol went to Lincoln High and earned a college scholarship. Dan went to Lincoln High and earned a college scholarship. Ellen goes ...
Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 6:28pm by K

History
the finacial support of ______ helped arts,literature,and scholarship thrive during the renaissance.
Tuesday, September 4, 2007 at 8:22pm by star don

Proof read please
In addition, it would be helpful to see the instructions you were given for this. What scholarship are you applying for? What are they looking for?
Saturday, October 15, 2011 at 11:22am by Writeacher

language arts
No. A role model exhibits specific traits such as honesty, leadership, scholarship, etc.
Thursday, October 23, 2008 at 6:51pm by Ms. Sue

11th grade
what is the difference between a student loan, a grant and a scholarship and how would you go about applying for each of them.
Thursday, October 16, 2008 at 11:47am by Melissa

Scholarships
I am applying for a scholarship that requires a 250 word essay on a topic of my choice. What kind of topics should i consider?
Wednesday, June 24, 2009 at 9:37pm by Amanda

Leadership Quality
Not on its own, however, if it is a pattern of behaviour... volunteering is a leadership quality making the world a better place is a leadership quality helping others in need is a leadership quality doing tasks which lead to personal growth (grading papers) is a leadership ...
Wednesday, May 15, 2013 at 8:49pm by bobpursley

grammar
need help with this one : 2. To enroll in film school being my primary goal, so I am always saving my money and watching for scholarship opportunities.
Saturday, December 1, 2012 at 2:24pm by miguel

grammar
need help with this one: To enroll in film school being my primary goal, so I am always saving my money and watching for scholarship opportunities.
Saturday, December 1, 2012 at 12:39pm by miguel

Top Schools
If you're not satisfied with your school district, you could investigate getting a scholarship to a private school.
Friday, December 9, 2011 at 6:46pm by Ms. Sue

Scholarship Essay
Why do I deserve this scholarship? 250 words or less. Any advice on the paragraph itself or on grammar is greatly appreciated. Throughout my life, I have faced multiple obstacles that I have not let hold me back. I am the first person in my family to not only go to college but...
Monday, July 18, 2011 at 10:19pm by Angelina

Fine Art
Lauren, you should learn to use Google. You can answer the vast majority of your questions yourself. http://www.google.com/search?rlz=1C2GGGE_enUS379US455&hl=en&site=&q=hilda+m.+willis+arts+scholarship&btnK=Google+Search&oq=&aq=&aqi=&aql=&...
Saturday, December 17, 2011 at 9:53am by Writeacher

English
I'd change number 1 to: Each scholarship applicant . . . The deadline is October 24, so applicants should . . . 5. It's not clear whether the protesters or the shopping center has outraged many residents.
Monday, May 28, 2012 at 2:09pm by Ms. Sue

english
I have a four page paper I have written for a scholarship. It is still in its rough draft. Would anyone be willing to proof read it?
Thursday, January 26, 2012 at 7:11pm by martha

English
Ok. Thanks for the explanation. For the first one -- I feel I deserve this scholarship because I work hard and successfully complete every task I attempt. How would you reword the second passage?
Saturday, June 13, 2009 at 10:33pm by Ms. Sue

Harvard
I assume you're asking about scholarships>/b> and Harvard Arts and Creative Writing School. Apparently Harvard doesn't have an Arts and Creative Writing School. All of those courses are in http://arts.harvard.edu/ http://www.harvard.edu/schools Here's...
Friday, October 21, 2011 at 5:11pm by Ms. Sue

Question
Yes. It takes a very, very high score on this prestigious and difficult test to earn a scholarship. Don't even think about it for a few years.
Thursday, December 15, 2011 at 3:11pm by Ms. Sue

american legion award???
Given to one 8th grade boy and girl in recognition of outstanding courage, leadership, scholarship, and integrity. ohh now it make sense, it's like valedictorian
Tuesday, August 21, 2012 at 9:53am by Laruen

Conflict Management Communications
How do we balance the scholarship and conventional wisdom that we should deal with problems ("Never go to bed angry") versus let them slide ("The secret to long relationship is a short memory")?
Monday, February 15, 2010 at 8:29pm by Breanna

college writing
ok. so i found out that there is also an artistic scholarship program in the private college that i applied to. ONe of the helpers told me that if I send in a written portfolio, one of my best works, to the counselor, then they will decide if I can qualify for the artistic ...
Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 12:28pm by y912f

Algebra
Thanks. I figuired out the working, but not sure how to use the Let statement. Would it be correct to say Let A = original scholarship amount A = 1-1/3 -1/4-1/4 x72,000 A = 1/6 x 72 = 432,000
Thursday, January 10, 2013 at 10:42am by Michelle

English
I'm not writing a scholarship or anything like that. We had to find two things like that on the internet and reword them because were doing commercials that have to do with the characteristics of college for a project. I'm only in 9th grade.
Saturday, June 13, 2009 at 10:33pm by Natalie

stats help!
thank you in advance! in a given year the college admissions office accepts applicants from students, who are then either accepted or not accepted. accepted students may or may not decide to attend college. suppose the scores on a certain entrance exam for applicants of murphy...
Wednesday, January 12, 2011 at 11:37pm by ashley

Statistics
2. In a given year the Murphy College admissions office accepts applications from students, who are then either accepted or not-accepted. Accepted students may or may not decide to attend Murphy College. Suppose the scores on a certain entrance exam for applicants of Murphy ...
Wednesday, January 12, 2011 at 11:20pm by Sam

English
Hi, I'm trying to start on my argumentatvie essay today and at least get the rough draft done. The topic is Recent changes to Georgia's HOPE scholarship program. I have found a few sources that I can include in the essay but what I need help on is how to start this out...
Friday, March 18, 2011 at 1:24pm by y912f

english
This part should be the basis of your thesis: "basketball scholarship offers that led to the free education were advantages to coping with my height" The first part of what you wrote should be a separate sentence.
Sunday, July 17, 2011 at 9:24pm by Writeacher

english
Will this work? The social awkwardness that I was so self-conscious of in school, made me very insecure with being tall, but eventually in high school the basketball scholarship offers that led to the free education were advantages to coping with my height.
Sunday, July 17, 2011 at 9:24pm by lizzie

English
Select the abbreviation that tells how the italicized noun clause is used. S-subject, DO-direct object, SC-subject complement, OP-object of preposition What I had been hoping for was a scholarship.
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 12:57am by brenda

English
I am really struggling with the 3 step format for my Thesis Statement Paragraph #2- Paragraph #3-Social akwardness of being tall Paragraph #4-Basketball scholarship=free education Are 3 and 4 okay or would I need to change 4. I am not sure how to write an advantage for ...
Monday, July 11, 2011 at 8:36pm by lizzie

Applications
I'm applying to the local Chamber of Commerce for a scholarship open to high school juniors to become ambassadors for our town, and it says that a cover letter and job resume are required. What should a cover letter be in this situation?
Thursday, April 16, 2009 at 5:14pm by Katie

Question
Ok Ms. Sue. No. Kumon is not a tutoring service, my friend is in honors and honors for math and she have Kumon. It's like a program for kids to changelles theirslefs something like that. For more info just google it and read about it. Plus I'm going to be taking a lot ...
Friday, December 9, 2011 at 4:54pm by Laruen

business communication
You are writing to alumni of a fraternity raising money for a scholarship. If you cannot personalize the letters, what would be the best salutation? (Points: 5) "Dear Brother" "Dear Sir" "Dear Wealthy Alumnus" "Dear Alpha Kappa Psi Member"
Saturday, June 4, 2011 at 12:13am by Anonymous

English
Not bad. Here's one suggestion: A married couple who are both left-handed and met at Juniata<~~?? College in Huntington, Pennsylvania, have set up a scholarship for left-handed students attending Juanita.
Thursday, March 25, 2010 at 10:47am by Writeacher

business
You are writing to alumni of fraternity raising money for a scholarship. if you cannot personalize the letters, what would be the best salutation? A) Dear Brother B) Dear Sir C) Dear wealthy Alumnus D) Dear Alpha Kappa Psi Member My answer is D, but i am not really sure.
Wednesday, January 19, 2011 at 2:17pm by Nancy

Question
Discus Awards College Scholarship Description: The Discus Awards College Scholarship is available to high school students planning to attend college. You must choose three areas from the categories on the Web site and provide evidence of your excellence in each, then post the ...
Thursday, December 29, 2011 at 1:01pm by Lauren

English
Thanks for your help in English.Writeacher.I have passed my examination which is Japanese Government Scholarship examination.Your advise helped my examination.Writeacher Thank you very much.^.^
Saturday, July 9, 2011 at 3:01am by Bayarbold

Need help in clarifying this sentence.
What are the key epistemological issues raised by Eugen Weber as he reflects on the nature of historical scholarship? I am having a hard time understanding what the above question is asking me... DO you mind clarifying the above question for me? Thanks alot...
Sunday, May 3, 2009 at 3:00am by Judith

scholarship essay
I agree. I for several years was a reader for these. Yours would not stand out. Scholarships are given to those who show academic promise, and need the money. Colleges are looking for winners, and those who have shown potential or past success in community leadership and ...
Sunday, July 17, 2011 at 10:49pm by bobpursley

Question (PLZ ANSWER)
also this Alliance Scholarship Partners (Seniors Only) The Alliance for Young Artists & Writers partners with art institutes, colleges and universities to provide scholarships for Scholastic Award Winners. National Award-Winning Seniors who earn Gold Medals, American ...
Monday, November 28, 2011 at 6:28pm by Laruen

English
Those are details that belong in the supporting paragraphs. Try something like this: Social awkwardness in junior high made me hate being taller than other students, but in high school, the basketball scholarship offers that led to a free education were the advantages of ...
Monday, July 11, 2011 at 8:36pm by Writeacher

Scholarships for College
Check this fantastic scholarship site for Gates Millenium Scholars. http://www.gmsp.org/
Friday, August 1, 2008 at 5:49pm by Ms. Sue

Scholorship (plz read)
You might be able to earn a scholarship to a summer camp or to a private middle school or private high school. Don't even think about college scholarships till you're at least a sophomore in high school.
Saturday, November 26, 2011 at 3:55pm by Ms. Sue

A.C./U of Phoenix
I suggest you investigate your local public junior colleges. Also talk with admissions people at universities. You may be able to get scholarship help by attending on-site classes. Many colleges and universities also offer online classes.
Thursday, August 7, 2008 at 9:17pm by Ms. Sue

english
In front of Hey should be the opening quote = "Hey... A comma after elementary school, would give someone pause for a breath (and/or emphasis) basketball scholarship offers = sounds better with less sibilant (s) sounds? advantages of OR in? Nicely done---just a few ...
Wednesday, July 13, 2011 at 9:26am by SraJMcGin

economics
Suppose you wish to create a scholarship fund which will pay 73.43 each year for the next 14 years. If you accomplish your task by depositing a single amount today into a bank account which pays 12.91% per year, what must the deposit amount be? (Accuracy is at the second ...
Saturday, February 5, 2011 at 2:22pm by Rachel

scholarship essay
What makes me deserving of this scholarship is my dedication to succeed, my work ethic, and leadership skills. Throughout my years in school I have always been recognized as a person that loves to be the best. People all over the world have dreams that never come true. One ...
Sunday, July 17, 2011 at 10:49pm by Dontavious

writing
Can you help me correct these sentences? 1.She wants to become an environmental scientist she is especially interested in marine life. 2.If she can get a scholarship she would like to spend her senior year in New Zealand. 3.The Great Coral Reef almost cicles New Zealand it has...
Tuesday, February 23, 2010 at 7:43pm by ruby

LOGIC - Strength of enumerative arguments
Although I am not trained in formal logic, it would seem that whatever traits — which are linked to getting scholarships — Ellen has that equal or exceed those of the others would lead to predicting that she would get the scholarship. In other words, they would ...
Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 6:28pm by PsyDAG

English
Most of these are news articles: http://www.google.com/search?rlz=1C1GGGE_enUS379US379&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8&q=Recent+changes+to+Georgia's+HOPE+scholarship+program Something from among these is undoubtedly better: http://scholar.google.com/scholar?rlz=...
Tuesday, March 15, 2011 at 8:31pm by Writeacher

English
To continue the journey metaphor, you could cite specific instances in your hard work and determination paid off. A journey ends when you reach your destination. What is your destination? Examples -- * studying every evening and ending with an A in the class * being accepted ...
Sunday, September 28, 2008 at 6:48pm by Ms. Sue

Scholarships
What are you passionate about? (And forget cheerleading and sports.) One of my friends wrote a scholarship essay about the stolen babies in Guatemala being adopted by Americans. Another wrote about how she wanted to translate for new immigrants. Since you're choosing the ...
Wednesday, June 24, 2009 at 9:37pm by Ms. Sue

Scholastic Arts and Writing Awards (plz help)
I mean like I thought you first registor online to make your profile. Then, you find the submission form. After you fill it out and finish your work (art work and writing) you mail both to them. Then, when they announce the winner they let the school know then they send you ...
Monday, December 26, 2011 at 2:21pm by Lauren

Religions of the World
I beg to differ.... there are many people who give up time and money to help others. I have an 18 year old neighbor who is working in the slums of Philidelphia for this year. She had the choice of that or a college scholarship. One of the unique character traits of Americans ...
Thursday, June 18, 2009 at 1:17pm by GuruBlue

Question
Nuts to your plan. Community service counts bigtime. But with a school club? Hardly, colleges want to know what you did, not the club. Girl Scouts...Did you get your bronze, and silver? Lord, those are great community service. Quitting in the 10 grade, no GOLD? The GOLD award ...
Friday, December 30, 2011 at 12:25pm by bobpursley

reflective journal
Here are some websites that may help: http://www.teachervision.fen.com/writing/letters-and-journals/48544.html http://www.clt.uts.edu.au/Scholarship/Reflective.journal.htm http://www.sdcoe.k12.ca.us/SCORE/actbank/treflect.htm "Reflect on it" means to write what YOU ...
Saturday, December 8, 2007 at 4:12am by Writeacher

western civilization 2
Representatives of postmodernism in the arts and scholarship share the tendency to Answer reject the formal rules of their discipline and looking for hidden meanings and subtle messages. embrace an aesthetic of simplicity and directness. assert that the tastes of the common ...
Sunday, January 9, 2011 at 4:57pm by dynasty

College Scholarships
I plan on attending a college in the fall with a tution of $26,000, needless to say I cannot afford this and my parents are in no situation to assist. If anyone knows of any websites that have info/applications for scholarships I would be most greatful. I do not mind writing ...
Saturday, January 13, 2007 at 11:26pm by Kellie

English
I have to write an argumentative paper on the topic: Recent changes to Georgia's HOPE scholarship program. To start off I wanted to conduct some research on the topic, but I only want to use good secondary sources from academic websites or something like that...Can someone...
Tuesday, March 15, 2011 at 8:31pm by y912f

educ-3
It isn't much of a reflective journal if you just use someone else's ideas. Be sure to write only what YOU THINK in your reflective journal, once you understand each term. Here are some websites that may help: http://www.teachervision.fen.com/writing/letters-and-...
Saturday, December 8, 2007 at 11:45pm by Writeacher

English
I can re-word these two seperate things. I found them on the internet but need to change the words. Any help would greatly be appreciated. "I believe that I deserve this scholarship because I put so much effort into every task that I am given. I give only my best, and see...
Saturday, June 13, 2009 at 10:33pm by Natalie

English
I need help with starting my essay. These are the organization of my essay. I am not sure what to put for paragraph #2. *Broad subject-My name *Limited Topic for thesis statement-Learning to cope with my height *Main Idea about this topic- Advantages of being tall Paragraph #2...
Monday, July 11, 2011 at 8:36pm by lizzie

actuarial science
The harder the courses and the higher the grades, the better your chances are of getting into your preferred college and receiving scholarship help. You definitely need four years of math, English, social studies, and science. Business classes will also be helpful. Check with ...
Thursday, February 19, 2009 at 7:48pm by Ms. Sue

Writing
The personal statement is basically a way for you to discuss why you should get the scholarship. Choose a personal experience that relates to an academic-related positive character trait (hard-working, for example) and elaborate on how your experience affected you. Also, make ...
Wednesday, December 29, 2010 at 9:47am by Marth

French
Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. Since you can't do the accent marks, it would be best if you merely type what you need without trying for accent marks. Thus, it will be far easier for us to read! 1. other possibilities: car, gare, par, tartare 2. Must ...
Tuesday, February 26, 2008 at 12:22pm by SraJMcGin

english
What about the rest of the essay? I will move the quote. Ever since I can remember people have always commented on my height, this made me very uncomfortable and awkward about it around my peers. Others acted as if my height was built on a grand scale like the Washington ...
Monday, July 18, 2011 at 8:44pm by lizzie

Fantsy
There was this contest I'm partcipating in which is called: L. Ron Hubbard's Writers & Illustrators of the Future Contest. They said that I have to submit 3 drawings that relate to fantasy or science fiction. I don't have to do writing and drawing I can do one...
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 4:56pm by Lauren

scholarship
On the surface, public colleges cost less than private ones do.* So if you're applying for scholarships that make you make a choice, opt for the private. Most scholarships don't make you make that choice, though. *If you get enough scholarships, though, private schools...
Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 11:26am by Writeacher

Grammar and Composition
1. He was (quite/quiet/quit) lazy and (quite/quiet/quit) his job in the (personal/personnel) department. quite, quit, personnel 2. The sun will (sit/set) in the west set 3. The (capitol/capital) building is in the (capitol/capital) city for a (capitol/capital) reason. capitol...
Thursday, October 15, 2009 at 5:40pm by y912f

SAT Essay Critiques
I cant answer that without seeing your outline and scratch paper. In general, your organization is ok, a couple of them have weak conclusions, and a couple had weak supporting arguments. A couple were wordy. One in particular had readability problems, mainly long, complex ...
Sunday, November 4, 2012 at 4:47pm by bobpursley

grammar
revise the following sentences to eliminate faulty sentence structure, making them clear and grammatically need help with the following sentences: An effective Web site is well designed, provides useful information, and links are given to other relevant sites. To enroll in ...
Saturday, December 1, 2012 at 12:39pm by miguel

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