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PLEASE GRADE THIS PRACTICE SAT ESSAY FOR ME Question: Do you agree with the statement that figures of authority tend to abuse their power? Government entities and rulers of the general population consistently mark history with periods of unrestrained, unchecked and abusive ...
Monday, August 18, 2008 at 10:34pm by Sahil
Monday, August 18, 2008 at 10:34pm by bobpursley
Question: What must we do to understand ourselves? Time Limit-25 minutes (handwritten) Please grade this based on this rubric--- blog. eprep. com /2006 /12/04 /sat-essay-rubric Human nature is nothing like an open book. It works in mysterious ways, solely responsible for our ...
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 at 9:47pm by Sahil
This essay is much better than your other practice essays. http://blog.eprep.com/2006/12/04/sat-essay-rubric I'd give it a 5 -- some mechanical errors, weakly developed conclusion.
Friday, August 22, 2008 at 11:55am by Writeacher
Strong conclusion. The tone I would not put in a college admission essay, as they are looking for folks who want to contribute to society, not benefit themselves. But for a SAT essay, the tone is ok, readers will accept it. A few structural errors, but for a first draft, they...
Wednesday, August 27, 2008 at 12:52pm by bobpursley
Since this is a SAT Essay, you might like the following SAT sites: 1. http://www.majortests.com/sat/essay.php 2. http://blog.eprep.com/2006/12/04/sat-essay-rubric 3. (slide down to SAT): http://www.teacheroz.com/college.htm Sra
Saturday, November 8, 2008 at 10:43am by SraJMcGin
I'm sure I gave you the SAT essay rubric before. Just look at that and you should be able to score this yourself. Sra P.S. If you've lost it, just ask again.
Thursday, November 27, 2008 at 10:03pm by SraJMcGin
Hello Sahil. I disagree with the above response. I think your doing a great connection. This is an SAT essay, not for a class where you get days or a week to think. This is a great writing.
Sunday, November 30, 2008 at 6:01pm by sam
# T Essay - sam , Sunday, November 30, 2008 at 7:34pm Hello Sahil. I disagree with the above response. I think your doing a great connection. This is an SAT essay, not for a class where you get days or a week to think. This is a great writing. * SAT Essay - Sahil, Sunday, ...
Sunday, November 30, 2008 at 6:01pm by Fad
OK, maybe a 4 !! http://blog.eprep.com/2006/12/04/sat-essay-rubric
Wednesday, October 7, 2009 at 9:19pm by Writeacher
Some problems with idioms and grammar/usage, but overall the organization and focus are good. I'd give this a 4 or possibly a 5. http://blog.eprep.com/2006/11/09/how-your-sat-essay-is-scored/ http://blog.eprep.com/2006/12/04/sat-essay-rubric/
Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 10:14am by Writeacher
This is well organized and well supported. Your conclusion could be a little stronger and make a specific discovery. I would definitely give you a 5 on this. I am sure that you will be able to think of points to support a thesis. I have never seen a SAT essay question that was...
Sunday, October 25, 2009 at 11:48am by GuruBlue
GuruBlue is correct. It's a good paper. Here are a couple of webpages that may help you as you prepare to write the SAT essay: http://blog.eprep.com/2006/11/09/how-your-sat-essay-is-scored/ http://blog.eprep.com/2006/12/04/sat-essay-rubric/
Sunday, October 25, 2009 at 11:48am by Writeacher
I agree with Bob. A 2 is the highest score I'd give this. The structure of the paper is not apparent. You need to clearly have 4-5 paragraphs, including an introduction and a conclusion. Your thesis statement belongs at the end of the intro. The paragraphs in the body of the ...
Wednesday, November 4, 2009 at 8:44am by Writeacher
spend a few minutes here and look at some of the essays. http://www.jiskha.com/search/index.cgi?query=sat+essay
Tuesday, November 10, 2009 at 2:33am by bobpursley
Here are a couple of websites to help you: http://blog.eprep.com/2006/11/09/how-your-sat-essay-is-scored/ and http://blog.eprep.com/2006/12/04/sat-essay-rubric/ I would give your paper a weak 5. The organization is quite good, especially because you set it up as a contrast ...
Monday, November 16, 2009 at 10:09am by Writeacher
Here are a couple of websites to help you: http://blog.eprep.com/2006/11/09/how-your-sat-essay-is-scored/ and http://blog.eprep.com/2006/12/04/sat-essay-rubric/ I would give your paper a 3. The organization is good, but there are issues with verbs (Mother Teresa is not alive ...
Tuesday, November 17, 2009 at 1:18am by Writeacher
Please understand that no one here will do your work for you. However, we will be happy to read over whatever you come up with and make suggestions and/or corrections. Please post what you write. Here are a couple of webpages that will explain what the SAT people are looking ...
Saturday, November 28, 2009 at 6:05am by Writeacher
I agree 1. http://sat.collegeboard.com/scores/sat-essay-scoring-guide You have to base your argument so evidence.
Monday, December 20, 2010 at 12:33pm by bobpursley
http://sat.collegeboard.org/scores/sat-essay-scoring-guide 4, I think, or maybe a weak 5. Wordiness Repetition Strange phrasing in places Some mechanical issues
Friday, November 30, 2012 at 3:53pm by Writeacher