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Thesis Statement
What is an effective way to start a thesis statement without using, I think... I think the world is a better place. The world is a better place. Is the world a better place? No better place could the world be. Shakespeare could have not found a better place. enough? Could you ...

english1A- need help with my thesis
Ok I think I was going the wrong way with my Gender topic. I think I should write about how times have changed and society evolved, women and men do not perform their traditional roles as they use to and do not dress the same as they use to. And women go to school now, work, ...

English
I am doing argument essay on learning in the traditional classroom is better than online. I cannot figure out how to do my thesiS.my teacher wants it fits the is/not thesis/antithesis formula.

English1A
I'm still having a bit of trouble with my introduction and thesis. This is what I have, I hope it's any better. Greetings and Gestures All culture groups have various ways of communicating with each other whether it is through speaking, sign language, or body movement. ...

History, college
Hi, I need help with making a stronger thesis statement that I'm going to use on my midterm assignment for Pre-Modern World History. Here's the thesis statement that I've come up with: The book 'The Natural and the Supernatural in the Middle Ages' portrays that the Middle Ages...

Enligsh
My teacher told me how to revise my thesis in terms of parallelism. I am not sure what she means or how to do it. This is my thesis: "School uniforms should be required in all public schools because not only do they cut down on the teasing and bullying but they also help ...

English
1. Identify which description below is untrue of a good thesis A. A thesis mentions a broad topic. B. A thesis narrows the broad topic to a single statement C. A thesis very briefly mentions the factors that contribute to the writer’s position D. A thesis belongs in the ...

English
What is your thesis? My thesis is The obesity prevention programs and their guidelines that inspire health centers, and weight centers to concentrate on the physically, mentally and social part of the whole child. How do you plan to support this thesis? Suggest ways to avoid ...

Thesis statement
How do I write a thesis statement about why I choose Medical Billing and Coding as a career. I have read what a thesis statement is, but my writing is terrible and I just can't get the understanding of what to include in my thesis statement

english
I have to wrtie a paragraph in which I make claim, state thesis, can not use "For instance or for example and support with 4 examples.I choose this prompt "The internet is a much better resource for students than a library" Please tell me how to start this without using "for ...

english
Can somebody help me restate my thesis please. statement for the conclusion. My thesis is: An analysis of the literary devices in Katy Perry " Fireworks" and Miley Cyrus " The Climb" reveals Miley Cyrus creates a better argument for how every person is an exclusive individual ...

English (essay help)
I have to write a essay about the confederation of Canada in 1867 and why it was a good choice. I have all of my body paragraphs done but I'm having trouble thinking of a proper introduction. My first sentence for my intro is: confederation was the best choice for the British ...

english
I'm putting the finishing touches on my final draft of my essay. In my conclusion we have to restate are thesis in different words. My thesis in my introduction was Therapeutic cloning is better than reproductive cloning because of the great ethics, effective techniques, and ...

English
Which of the following is a common error in composing a thesis statement? A. You offer an original perspective on a familiar theme. B. Your thesis statement is specific as opposed to general. C. Your thesis statement contains two or more central points. D. You focus your ...

English
The topic sentence of a body paragraph provides a thesis link by ________. A. revising the thesis to fit the body paragraph B. introducing the thesis of the essay C. mentioning the general subject of the essay D. providing an example that underscores the thesis

concude refuting paragraph
i don't know what to do on this one. my teacher told that i need to get the readers attention again back to my thesis which is girls are better friends than men. here's the paragraph. However, some people think that men are better in handling friendships. Even though men are ...

TO MS SUE Essay help
I have to write a essay about the confederation of Canada in 1867 and why it was a good choice. I have all of my body paragraphs done but I'm having trouble thinking of a proper introduction. My first sentence for my intro is: confederation was the best choice for the British ...

English/writing
what is a catchy topic for my essay based on this thesis statement? In Nathaniel Hawthorne's, The Scarlet Letter, it suggests that one must find their own internal strength and strive for individual redemption by applying the beliefs of transcendentalism and individualism to ...

reading and writing
Which of the following is a common error in composing a thesis statement? A. Your thesis statement is specific as opposed to general. B. You offer an original perspective on a familiar theme. C. You focus your thesis statement after you begin writing. D. Your thesis statement ...

Social Studies(Thesis)
I read all about thesis and i made my thesis about child labor At what age is it appropriate for a child to have a job and a child should have a right to freedom. That is my thesis is it correct yes or no THANKS

english
How can this thesis statement be written better? Rap music is the best ever.

english1A - still working on my thesis
I have a couple. If society would realize the true meaning of success and take advantage of opportunities available to them, they would know that with enough determination and motivation, dreams are definitely possible. Society not only needs to realize the true meaning of ...

thesis
could this be a thesis for this topic When Bullying Turns Deadly: Can It Be Stopped Thesis" Bullying causes many problems in teenager's lives such as stress, depression and suicide

english 114
can anyone please help me? I am having to write an essay on Protecting Freedom of Expression by Derek Bok ,I have come up with a thesis but my teacher says no can some one help me with a arguemental thesis. new thesis how does this sound? Thesis: Using confederate flags and ...

english
I did help with my thesis statement? I writing an essay from the play trifles by susan Glaspell. Thesis: Minnie Wright loses her mind which relates to isolation,the gender differneces and the canary death. I need a very strong thesis

English
I need a 450 word thesis about why buying a house is better than renting an apartment?

com 156
need help with writing a thesis statement on renting an apartment is better than buying a house.

english
I need a thesis statement of 450 words for why renting a house is a better option than buying a homr

English
To protect the environment, what do you have to do? 1. I'd better use less water. 2. I'd better take the stairs instead of the elevator. 3. I'd better ride my bike to school. 4. I'd better use less electricity. 5. I'd better not use paper cups or plates. 6. I'd better not use ...

world history
Need Thesis help for essay on....this is the question being answered: Prompt: Hinduism, Confucianism and Buddhism are three of the world’s great belief systems. Compare and contrast their impact on the societies that embraced them. I started this thesis, but am trying to ...

Research Writing
My topic is on Abortion and I am supposed to come up with a thesis statement. Create a thesis statement for your research paper. Abortion is one of the most controversial moral issues of our age. Although pro-choice and pro-life arguments centering on the morality of the issue...

English writing
Can a thesis statement have the word BECAUSE? For example, Cats make better housepets because they are friendly, clean, and trained.

English1A
I need to come up with a thesis for my next essay regarding Race and Culture. I want to talk about how people judge others by the color of their skin or their race. For example, I feel offended that because I'm asian, people expect me to know my math and I don't. I am really ...

english1a- my thesis, is it better?
Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that everyone strives for; the American Dream. The American Dream can mean different things to many ...

speech
ok im still confused about the thesis tho my thesis was Without getting in trouble, life would be more fun. Then we have to do a Division of Labor (DOL), A, support your thesis B. Major division fo top key words, spoken in sentences

English
Explain,in your own words, why the following sentence is a thesis statement, a story, or a topic. Computers allow students to learn better.

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Writeacher, I responded to the last post with more to proofread, Thank you.

English
I writing a compare/contrast essay on movie i watched that be smke signals. i got my thematic statement done, and i have to do thesis now, this is what teacher say Thesis: introduce the story and tag it. I not get how to start thesis? do i say In the story....

english thesis
I am not sure if my my original post, posted? lol o Age, understanding the concept of death, and the changes in family structure all depict the type of grieving a child will experience after to the death of a sibling. that is my thesis, but I want to know if anybody has ...

writing thesis
So, thanks for the help to those who answered my last question. My book is Murder on The Orient Express by Agatha Christie, and I need a thesis for it. In the book, a man is murdered by a grieving family, because he killed their daughter. I want to do my research paper on how ...

english
okay is this a better thesis? Minnie Wright’s insanity relates to isolation, unhappy marriage and the gender difference all causes her to the murder of her husband.

Writing
Help me create a better thesis statement than this: Three arguments can be identified in “The Private History of a Campaign That Failed” that support the idea that war isn’t for everyone.

english
Is this good thesis? How can I make it better? This book is not only mysterious, but it also can relate to readers through emotions, such as jealousy and hatred. Thank you

English
Is this thesis statement better . Solving our economical problems of fear and destruction that has been created among gang violence and drug trafficking, is more challenging than society imagine. The topic of the essay : " Gang Violence and Destruction ". This is for the ...

English
Prewriting can be helpful when trying to narrow a topic because it A. can reveal an interesting angle that may become your thesis. B. can usually be submitted as the final essay. C. helps you eliminate ideas that would support your thesis. D. raises a lot of issues related to ...

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
I put a post earlier last nite. Did everyone miss it? :(

Hisotry- Dialectics
What are Hegel's, Fukuyama's, Marx's and St.Augustine's dialectics and how do they differ from each other. What are their views on the progression of humanity? I know that Hegel's view said that an thesis gave rise to an antithesis which was resolved by a thesis which then ...

Writing
Formulate a workable thesis statement for each of the following general subjects and topics. a. The importance of your family. Thesis: The success of a child depends on the support of his or her family. b. The difficulty of adjusting to college. Thesis: Despite the difficulty ...

English
I have difficulty restating my thesis in a different way in my conclusion. my thesis: Ruby's sense of responsibility becomes her weaknesses as it makes her blind to the fact that her decision to stay with a man that maltreats her is wrong. For this, she develops a habit of ...

english
Need help with writing an essay. My essay will be about giving advices to high school students on how to be a successful. I have to create arguements for it and I don't know how. At first I want to give a difinition of the word "Successful".Then write about being unsuccessful ...

English
Is this a better thesis statement? The reason Willie was taken out of such a bad environment was to protect him from the mob, but it also ended up teaching him a new way of survival.

english
Hello! Is this good thesis? How can I make it better? I would recommend this novel to other readers because it is mysterious, appeals through emotions, but hard to understand some of the context. Thank you.

Please proofread my essay
Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis. Here is my prompt: 1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a ...

English Comp.
I'm hoping this is a better thesis statement, please let me know. "Although most Schools of Pharmacy have added cultural competency training to their curriculum, not all have added the Service learning experience, which should be a requirement for all schools which would ...

english
K im not trying to cheat or nothing but im doing this exam im not asking for the answer i just need to understand the first part of the question more it asks me to give a thesis statement for no gumtion and barrio boy, but what im trying to figure out is does it want a thesis ...

English Thesis Paper
I'm writing my thesis paper on bullying and I need help writing a thesis statement about how to overcome and prevent the different types of bullying (school and cyber bullying mainly).

English
In today's society, many middle class people argue that they cannot build wealth because of wrong choices , over spending, own a car, and rather go to school than work. Ms Sue is this better thesis

writing
parents should organize children to learn through activities,whatchin television,and expressing their feelings with their parents, please help me to mak it a better thesis sentence.

com
The most difficult problem alcoholics face is self denial of his or her drinking problem . Is this a good thesis statement for a essay on alcoholism ? If not , any suggestion how to make it better ?

social studies
Alice and Andrew are discussing thesis development. Alice argues that a topic becomes a thesis if we want to write about the topic. Andrew, on the other hand, maintains that a topic is not a thesis but that a thesis is the foundation of a topic. Who is correct? A. Alice is ...

english1A-need help with thesis
This is my intro on Individual Opportunity, a myth or reality. But my professor says that my thesis in the last sentences needs "more argument." Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of ...

thesis statement
"A nation Apart" How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments?

com220
how do you plan to support your thesis with complelling arguments and counterarguments? My thesis statement is on oil and gas.

english
im writing an persuasive essay on technological advances help teens an i cant figure a thesis please help me with a thesis

English
I'm doing a paper about Usher Syndrome and am having a hard time thinking about a thesis statement. I already have my paper typed up but can't think what to write as my thesis statement. Any examples would help to get my mind going. The source online about thesis statement ...

Hamlet Essay Thesis
I'm suppose to write an essay on the play Hamlet which connects one of the themes to a character in the play. This is my thesis, Ophelia, Hamlet's ex lover, is one of the main characters in the play Hamlet which re-enforces the theme that women were weakminded. Throughout the ...

COLLEGE
HOW DO YOU PLAN TO SUPPORT YOUR THESIS WITH COMPELLING ARGUMENTS AND COUNTERARGUMENTS? MY THESIS IS HOW TO SAVE PRAYERS IN THE SCHOOL SYSTEMS?

English (Freshman)
I need a good example of a thesis. Can anyone give me a thesis for the death of Edgar Allan Poe???

english1a - topic/thesis
I need to think of an argument to write about before I think of a thesis, our topic has to do with Gender Roles and Society. this is our assignment: Gender Roles Essay Each society has its own definition for the proper roles of men and women, but for the most part these ...

English
In my concluding paragraph of my essay I was thinking of doing this: In conclusion, it is evident that THESIS. I don't really know what to say after I've restated my thesis.

research writing
How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments? My thesis statement: Teenage Depression and Suicide

community psycology
When Bullying Turns Deadly: Can It Be Stopped? Thesis: To me, it was normal because that's what I was used to. This was in an article was wondering if the thesis is good

thesis statement
need a hook + thesis statement for a paper on psychoanalysis Psychoanalysis is a really broad subject. Narrow the subject considerably, and then worry about thesis. As it is, you could write a very, very large book and not finish the subject.

english
what is a thesis http://www.onelook.com/?w=thesis&ls=a The word has several meanings. Please check this site for explanations. http://www.answers.com/topic/thesis If you still need help, please post another question.

ENG102
So, I went in and change the sentence is this better? Thesis Statement: Computers and cell phones have made cyber-bullying easy to hurt others and the effects it has not only on students, but also with teachers, parents and caregivers.

writing thesis statments
I am stuck on what would be a good thesis statement for my topic of, " How does drug addiction affect America as a whole?

English1A-Critical Thinking and Writing
I need to write a 7 page essay and I need some ideas for my paper so I could think of a thesis. I wrote a paper earlier on Gender roles, I'm not sure who helped me, but it is similar to this except this one is a research paper. I need at least 7 sources. Argue and discuss ...

Writing
I'm writing a paper on comparing and contrasting the emotional characteristics of Elizabeth from Pride and Prejudice and Jane from Jane Eyre, and need help with my thesis. My working thesis is: Elizabeth Bennett and Jane Eyre tend to let subconscious feelings rule their ...

english
Hi need help with need thesis. My thesis before was "Justice is not being severed in the case of the Somali pirates. Truth is being hindered from others about the Somali pirates and how the Somali pirates emerged in the beginning. How can I come up with another thesis that ...

COM/105
How would I go about making my thesis statement less vague and more percise? Developing Healthy Eating habits along with exercise will promote a better quality of life, lower health cost, and longevity for all.

Psychology
Jiskha Support Team, I am supposed to do a written assignment however I am having a problem with understanding instruction number #1 and #3 #1 through #4 is part of the requirement for my written paper #1). Must include an introductory paragraph with a succinct thesis. X #2). ...

Science
Ms. Sue I understand, but what the professor requested was the following: NOTE: In the “Sample: Outline,” it states that the thesis statement is the last one to three sentences of the introduction. However, the thesis statement must be one sentence in length and the last ...

Modern History
I've got to compose a thesis for my modern history paper on Hitler or Stalin. We are looking at studies of power, in particular the abuse thereof. I'm normally an A grade student but both thesis' I've proposed were either just a statement or too broad. I would like to do ...

English 12
Yesterday, i posted a question about writing a thesis for Life of Pi. However i'm not sure how to develop a thesis from my topic. The topic of my essay is "Yann Martel's depiction on the role of setting in India and Canada". If anyone can kindly help me to develop a thesis ...

Eng/102
I need help with Create a full-sentence outline that includes effective arguments and counterarguments to support your thesis. Outline only the body of your paper. Remember to avoid bias and fallacies and to include rhetorical devices that strengthen your writing. Address the ...

English
I having a hard time developing a complete thesis for an research paper. I need ideas for a thesis on the topic Why do you enjoy reading/watching television?

writing essay
I am having diffucties with an introductiory paragraph with a given thesis statement. How do i write a thesis for the subject on Americans eat junk food daily?

English1A
I'm doing a research project and chose "Greetings and Gestures" for my topic. So far I have my introduction and thesis. Greetings and Gestures All culture groups have various ways of communicating with one another. Some forms may be universal while others may vary with the ...

English
In a well organized essay, analyze the language and rhetorical devices the narrator uses to convey his attitude toward Hester and toward women in general Thesis The narrator conveys his attitude towards Hester through descriptions of her during her isolation. Based on his ...

English: Children's Literature
I have to write an 8 page essay about Picture Books in Children's Literature. My thesis is: "Children can learn reading and writing from picture books, because it helps the child develop cognitive skills." Can you give me your input on this thesis? And I need suggestions of ...

English
What can you do to save the environment? 1. I'd better take the stairs instead of the elevator. 2. I'd better turn off the light when I don't use it. 3. I'd better turn off the tap water when I am not using it. 4. I'd better not use paper cups or plates. 5. I'd better take a ...

Thesis/ History
Any ideas on how to make my thesis stronger or how to change it. My paper is going to be on jacksonian democracy principles, election of 1824, election of 1828, Peggy Eaton Affair, Indian Policy (Worcester vs. Georgia, Trail of tears, Nullification Crisis/Force Act), and the ...

English
I am trying to come up with a thesis for my english paper. It is going to be on Social class in Katherine Mansfields The Garden Party and A Cup of Tea. I want to show how both the upper class main characters take particular interest in the lower class characters. I came up ...

eng composition
Which statement is true? A. Once you write a thesis statement don't change it. B. A theisi statement is the first thing you should write before drafting an essay. C. Feel free to change a thesis statement if you feel you can improve it. D. If you change your thesis statement ...

History
My instructor requested that I write a reflective prep paper for my final essay. Will I use words like (I, me, myself or personally) when referring to myself in a reflective essay? What words do I start the thesis statment with in a reflective essay? My instructor wants me to ...

English
I'm tryna think of my thesis sentence but its taking me longer than I expected. My Research paper topic is on Teen Pregnancies and I want a Thesis that would make a good argument.........................................PLEASE HELP!!!!

English
need help with thesis and topic sentences. Is this a good thesis? Social networking help change the we speak it is daily journals,send invitation to events, and meet new friends.

english
can anyone please help me? I am having to write an essay on Protecting Freedom of Expression by Derek Bok ,I have come up with a thesis but my teacher says no can some one help me with a arguemental thesis.

English
I have to make a thesis statement about a book and a movie. I need help creating the thesis. I am doing the hobbit. This is a comparative essay with the topic of human development. Thanks..Please help me out..

c
The topic sentence of a body paragraph: A. introduces the thesis statement. B. outlines one thesis point. C. is developed during the proofreading step. D. summarizes the essay’s main points. C

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