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Thesis Statement
What is an effective way to start a thesis statement without using, I think... I think the world is a better place. The world is a better place. Is the world a better place? No better place could the world be. Shakespeare could have not found a better place. enough? Could you ...
October 8, 2006 by Gina

english1A- need help with my thesis
Ok I think I was going the wrong way with my Gender topic. I think I should write about how times have changed and society evolved, women and men do not perform their traditional roles as they use to and do not dress the same as they use to. And women go to school now, work, ...
October 3, 2009 by Kuromi

English1A
I'm still having a bit of trouble with my introduction and thesis. This is what I have, I hope it's any better. Greetings and Gestures All culture groups have various ways of communicating with each other whether it is through speaking, sign language, or body movement. ...
October 24, 2009 by Kuromi

Enligsh
My teacher told me how to revise my thesis in terms of parallelism. I am not sure what she means or how to do it. This is my thesis: "School uniforms should be required in all public schools because not only do they cut down on the teasing and bullying but they also help ...
October 5, 2010 by Kayla

English
What is your thesis? My thesis is The obesity prevention programs and their guidelines that inspire health centers, and weight centers to concentrate on the physically, mentally and social part of the whole child. How do you plan to support this thesis? Suggest ways to avoid ...
September 15, 2008 by Gwen

Thesis statement
How do I write a thesis statement about why I choose Medical Billing and Coding as a career. I have read what a thesis statement is, but my writing is terrible and I just can't get the understanding of what to include in my thesis statement
February 18, 2010 by Fannie

english
I have to wrtie a paragraph in which I make claim, state thesis, can not use "For instance or for example and support with 4 examples.I choose this prompt "The internet is a much better resource for students than a library" Please tell me how to start this without using "for ...
November 14, 2010 by Lisa

english
Can somebody help me restate my thesis please. statement for the conclusion. My thesis is: An analysis of the literary devices in Katy Perry " Fireworks" and Miley Cyrus " The Climb" reveals Miley Cyrus creates a better argument for how every person is an exclusive individual ...
November 3, 2011 by jane

English (essay help)
I have to write a essay about the confederation of Canada in 1867 and why it was a good choice. I have all of my body paragraphs done but I'm having trouble thinking of a proper introduction. My first sentence for my intro is: confederation was the best choice for the British ...
April 6, 2014 by Anonymous

english
I'm putting the finishing touches on my final draft of my essay. In my conclusion we have to restate are thesis in different words. My thesis in my introduction was Therapeutic cloning is better than reproductive cloning because of the great ethics, effective techniques, and ...
March 8, 2009 by Michele

TO MS SUE Essay help
I have to write a essay about the confederation of Canada in 1867 and why it was a good choice. I have all of my body paragraphs done but I'm having trouble thinking of a proper introduction. My first sentence for my intro is: confederation was the best choice for the British ...
April 6, 2014 by Anonymous

concude refuting paragraph
i dont know what to do on this one. my teacher told that i need to get the readers attention again back to my thesis which is girls are better friends than men. here's the paragraph. However, some people think that men are better in handling friendships. Even though men are ...
July 13, 2011 by won sho han

English/writing
what is a catchy topic for my essay based on this thesis statement? In Nathaniel Hawthorne's, The Scarlet Letter, it suggests that one must find their own internal strength and strive for individual redemption by applying the beliefs of transcendentalism and individualism to ...
March 27, 2013 by Sally

Social Studies(Thesis)
I read all about thesis and i made my thesis about child labor At what age is it appropriate for a child to have a job and a child should have a right to freedom. That is my thesis is it correct yes or no THANKS
April 26, 2011 by macy

english1A - still working on my thesis
I have a couple. If society would realize the true meaning of success and take advantage of opportunities available to them, they would know that with enough determination and motivation, dreams are definitely possible. Society not only needs to realize the true meaning of ...
September 30, 2009 by Kuromi

english 114
can anyone please help me? I am having to write an essay on Protecting Freedom of Expression by Derek Bok ,I have come up with a thesis but my teacher says no can some one help me with a arguemental thesis. new thesis how does this sound? Thesis: Using confederate flags and ...
January 31, 2012 by sharon

english
I did help with my thesis statement? I writing an essay from the play trifles by susan Glaspell. Thesis: Minnie Wright loses her mind which relates to isolation,the gender differneces and the canary death. I need a very strong thesis
September 15, 2010 by terri

English
I need a 450 word thesis about why buying a house is better than renting an apartment?
October 30, 2010 by randy

com 156
need help with writing a thesis statement on renting an apartment is better than buying a house.
July 19, 2011 by Jane

english
I need a thesis statement of 450 words for why renting a house is a better option than buying a homr
May 29, 2011 by Amie

English
To protect the environment, what do you have to do? 1. I'd better use less water. 2. I'd better take the stairs instead of the elevator. 3. I'd better ride my bike to school. 4. I'd better use less electricity. 5. I'd better not use paper cups or plates. 6. I'd better not use ...
April 8, 2014 by rfvv

world history
Need Thesis help for essay on....this is the question being answered: Prompt: Hinduism, Confucianism and Buddhism are three of the world’s great belief systems. Compare and contrast their impact on the societies that embraced them. I started this thesis, but am trying to make ...
November 29, 2011 by Fort

Research Writing
My topic is on Abortion and I am supposed to come up with a thesis statement. Create a thesis statement for your research paper. Abortion is one of the most controversial moral issues of our age. Although pro-choice and pro-life arguments centering on the morality of the issue...
January 14, 2009 by Marleen

English writing
Can a thesis statement have the word BECAUSE? For example, Cats make better housepets because they are friendly, clean, and trained.
June 30, 2008 by Ingle

English1A
I need to come up with a thesis for my next essay regarding Race and Culture. I want to talk about how people judge others by the color of their skin or their race. For example, I feel offended that because I'm asian, people expect me to know my math and I don't. I am really ...
October 15, 2009 by Kuromi

speech
ok im still confused about the thesis tho my thesis was Without getting in trouble, life would be more fun. Then we have to do a Division of Labor (DOL), A, support your thesis B. Major division fo top key words, spoken in sentences
March 31, 2009 by jerson

english1a- my thesis, is it better?
Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that everyone strives for; the American Dream. The American Dream can mean different things to many ...
September 29, 2009 by Kuromi

English
Explain,in your own words, why the following sentence is a thesis statement, a story, or a topic. Computers allow students to learn better.
January 22, 2013 by Ryan

English
I writing a compare/contrast essay on movie i watched that be smke signals. i got my thematic statement done, and i have to do thesis now, this is what teacher say Thesis: introduce the story and tag it. I not get how to start thesis? do i say In the story....
September 26, 2012 by Mohammad

english thesis
I am not sure if my my original post, posted? lol o Age, understanding the concept of death, and the changes in family structure all depict the type of grieving a child will experience after to the death of a sibling. that is my thesis, but I want to know if anybody has ...
December 12, 2011 by Dawn

writing thesis
So, thanks for the help to those who answered my last question. My book is Murder on The Orient Express by Agatha Christie, and I need a thesis for it. In the book, a man is murdered by a grieving family, because he killed their daughter. I want to do my research paper on how ...
September 6, 2012 by Chelsea

english
okay is this a better thesis? Minnie Wright’s insanity relates to isolation, unhappy marriage and the gender difference all causes her to the murder of her husband.
September 15, 2010 by terri

Writing
Help me create a better thesis statement than this: Three arguments can be identified in “The Private History of a Campaign That Failed” that support the idea that war isn’t for everyone.
July 19, 2011 by Clair

English
Is this thesis statement better . Solving our economical problems of fear and destruction that has been created among gang violence and drug trafficking, is more challenging than society imagine. The topic of the essay : " Gang Violence and Destruction ". This is for the ...
January 20, 2010 by April

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Writeacher, I responded to the last post with more to proofread, Thank you.
November 15, 2009 by Kuromi

Hisotry- Dialectics
What are Hegel's, Fukuyama's, Marx's and St.Augustine's dialectics and how do they differ from each other. What are their views on the progression of humanity? I know that Hegel's view said that an thesis gave rise to an antithesis which was resolved by a thesis which then ...
October 9, 2008 by Jamie

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
I put a post earlier last nite. Did everyone miss it? :(
November 15, 2009 by Kuromi

English
I have difficulty restating my thesis in a different way in my conclusion. my thesis: Ruby's sense of responsibility becomes her weaknesses as it makes her blind to the fact that her decision to stay with a man that maltreats her is wrong. For this, she develops a habit of ...
December 19, 2012 by Ted

english
Need help with writing an essay. My essay will be about giving advices to high school students on how to be a successful. I have to create arguements for it and I don't know how. At first I want to give a difinition of the word "Successful".Then write about being unsuccessful...
November 30, 2010 by Luna

English
Is this a better thesis statement? The reason Willie was taken out of such a bad environment was to protect him from the mob, but it also ended up teaching him a new way of survival.
August 7, 2011 by lizzie

Please proofread my essay
Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis. Here is my prompt: 1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a ...
October 29, 2006 by Soly

English Comp.
I'm hoping this is a better thesis statement, please let me know. "Although most Schools of Pharmacy have added cultural competency training to their curriculum, not all have added the Service learning experience, which should be a requirement for all schools which would ...
January 30, 2011 by Meredith

english
K im not trying to cheat or nothing but im doing this exam im not asking for the answer i just need to understand the first part of the question more it asks me to give a thesis statement for no gumtion and barrio boy, but what im trying to figure out is does it want a thesis ...
January 11, 2011 by someone :D

English Thesis Paper
I'm writing my thesis paper on bullying and I need help writing a thesis statement about how to overcome and prevent the different types of bullying (school and cyber bullying mainly).
January 6, 2011 by JD

writing
parents should organize children to learn thru activities,whatchin television,and expressing their feelings with their parents, please help me to mak it a better thesis sentence.
November 19, 2008 by genci

com
The most difficult problem alcoholics face is self denial of his or her drinking problem . Is this a good thesis statement for a essay on alcoholism ? If not , any suggestion how to make it better ?
October 22, 2009 by David Chaney

social studies
Alice and Andrew are discussing thesis development. Alice argues that a topic becomes a thesis if we want to write about the topic. Andrew, on the other hand, maintains that a topic is not a thesis but that a thesis is the foundation of a topic. Who is correct? A. Alice is ...
March 24, 2014 by phia

english1A-need help with thesis
This is my intro on Individual Opportunity, a myth or reality. But my professor says that my thesis in the last sentences needs "more argument." Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of ...
September 29, 2009 by Kuromi

thesis statement
"A nation Apart" How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments?
November 11, 2009 by Anonymous

com220
how do you plan to support your thesis with complelling arguments and counterarguments? My thesis statement is on oil and gas.
October 4, 2008 by lynn

english
im writing an persuasive essay on technological advances help teens an i cant figure a thesis please help me with a thesis
October 10, 2013 by kevin

Hamlet Essay Thesis
I'm suppose to write an essay on the play Hamlet which connects one of the themes to a character in the play. This is my thesis, Ophelia, Hamlet's ex lover, is one of the main characters in the play Hamlet which re-enforces the theme that women were weakminded. Throughout the ...
December 1, 2009 by Camille P

COLLEGE
HOW DO YOU PLAN TO SUPPORT YOUR THESIS WITH COMPELLING ARGUMENTS AND COUNTERARGUMENTS? MY THESIS IS HOW TO SAVE PRAYERS IN THE SCHOOL SYSTEMS?
September 10, 2008 by ED

english1a - topic/thesis
I need to think of an argument to write about before I think of a thesis, our topic has to do with Gender Roles and Society. this is our assignment: Gender Roles Essay Each society has its own definition for the proper roles of men and women, but for the most part these ...
October 1, 2009 by Kuromi

English
In my concluding paragraph of my essay I was thinking of doing this: In conclusion, it is evident that THESIS. I don't really know what to say after I've restated my thesis.
May 4, 2009 by Lena

research writing
How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments? My thesis statement: Teenage Depression and Suicide
May 13, 2009 by missy

thesis statement
need a hook + thesis statement for a paper on psychoanalysis Psychoanalysis is a really broad subject. Narrow the subject considerably, and then worry about thesis. As it is, you could write a very, very large book and not finish the subject.
October 26, 2006 by erik

english
what is a thesis http://www.onelook.com/?w=thesis&ls=a The word has several meanings. Please check this site for explanations. http://www.answers.com/topic/thesis If you still need help, please post another question.
January 16, 2007 by jillian

ENG102
So, I went in and change the sentence is this better? Thesis Statement: Computers and cell phones have made cyber-bullying easy to hurt others and the effects it has not only on students, but also with teachers, parents and caregivers.
January 21, 2012 by Jazmyne

writing thesis statments
I am stuck on what would be a good thesis statement for my topic of, " How does drug addiction affect America as a whole?
January 11, 2014 by ashley

English1A-Critical Thinking and Writing
I need to write a 7 page essay and I need some ideas for my paper so I could think of a thesis. I wrote a paper earlier on Gender roles, I'm not sure who helped me, but it is similar to this except this one is a research paper. I need at least 7 sources. Argue and discuss ...
November 10, 2009 by Kuromi

Writing
I'm writing a paper on comparing and contrasting the emotional characteristics of Elizabeth from Pride and Prejudice and Jane from Jane Eyre, and need help with my thesis. My working thesis is: Elizabeth Bennett and Jane Eyre tend to let subconscious feelings rule their ...
November 7, 2007 by Angela

english
Hi need help with need thesis. My thesis before was "Justice is not being severed in the case of the Somali pirates. Truth is being hindered from others about the Somali pirates and how the Somali pirates emerged in the beginning. How can I come up with another thesis that ...
December 8, 2010 by Mariae

COM/105
How would I go about making my thesis statement less vague and more percise? Developing Healthy Eating habits along with exercise will promote a better quality of life, lower health cost, and longevity for all.
October 18, 2011 by Sade C

Psychology
Jiskha Support Team, I am supposed to do a written assignment however I am having a problem with understanding instruction number #1 and #3 #1 through #4 is part of the requirement for my written paper #1). Must include an introductory paragraph with a succinct thesis. X #2...
January 29, 2012 by Sharon

Science
Ms. Sue I understand, but what the professor requested was the following: NOTE: In the “Sample: Outline,” it states that the thesis statement is the last one to three sentences of the introduction. However, the thesis statement must be one sentence in length and the last ...
June 17, 2012 by BJ

Modern History
I've got to compose a thesis for my modern history paper on Hitler or Stalin. We are looking at studies of power, in particular the abuse thereof. I'm normally an A grade student but both thesis' I've proposed were either just a statement or too broad. I would like to do ...
March 31, 2011 by Hayley

English 12
Yesterday, i posted a question about writing a thesis for Life of Pi. However i'm not sure how to develop a thesis from my topic. The topic of my essay is "Yann Martel's depiction on the role of setting in India and Canada". If anyone can kindly help me to develop a thesis ...
November 21, 2010 by Andy

English
I having a hard time developing a complete thesis for an research paper. I need ideas for a thesis on the topic Why do you enjoy reading/watching television?
August 23, 2008 by Crane

writing essay
I am having diffucties with an introductiory paragraph with a given thesis statement. How do i write a thesis for the subject on Americans eat junk food daily?
September 25, 2008 by Fayna

Eng/102
I need help with Create a full-sentence outline that includes effective arguments and counterarguments to support your thesis. Outline only the body of your paper. Remember to avoid bias and fallacies and to include rhetorical devices that strengthen your writing. Address the ...
June 24, 2013 by kim

English: Children's Literature
I have to write an 8 page essay about Picture Books in Children's Literature. My thesis is: "Children can learn reading and writing from picture books, because it helps the child develop cognitive skills." Can you give me your input on this thesis? And I need suggestions of ...
September 25, 2010 by Kassi

English1A
I'm doing a research project and chose "Greetings and Gestures" for my topic. So far I have my introduction and thesis. Greetings and Gestures All culture groups have various ways of communicating with one another. Some forms may be universal while others may vary with the ...
October 23, 2009 by Kuromi

Thesis/ History
Any ideas on how to make my thesis stronger or how to change it. My paper is going to be on jacksonian democracy principles, election of 1824, election of 1828, Peggy Eaton Affair, Indian Policy (Worcester vs. Georgia, Trail of tears, Nullification Crisis/Force Act), and the ...
November 5, 2009 by Unknown

English
I am trying to come up with a thesis for my english paper. It is going to be on Social class in Katherine Mansfields The Garden Party and A Cup of Tea. I want to show how both the upper class main characters take particular interest in the lower class characters. I came up ...
July 5, 2012 by Jessica

eng composition
Which statement is true? A. Once you write a thesis statement dont change it. B. A theisi statement is the first thing you should write before drafting an essay. C. Feel free to change a thesis statement if you feel you can improve it. D. If you change your thesis statement ...
August 29, 2014 by Tony

History
My instructor requested that I write a reflective prep paper for my final essay. Will I use words like (I, me, myself or personally) when referring to myself in a reflective essay? What words do I start the thesis statment with in a reflective essay? My instructor wants me to ...
March 21, 2011 by David

English
I'm tryna think of my thesis sentence but its taking me longer than I expected. My Research paper topic is on Teen Pregnancies and I want a Thesis that would make a good argument.........................................PLEASE HELP!!!!
January 25, 2011 by Susan B.

English
need help with thesis and topic sentences. Is this a good thesis? Social networking help change the we speak it is daily journals,send invitation to events, and meet new friends.
March 31, 2011 by Anna

english
can anyone please help me? I am having to write an essay on Protecting Freedom of Expression by Derek Bok ,I have come up with a thesis but my teacher says no can some one help me with a arguemental thesis.
January 30, 2012 by sharon

English
I have to make a thesis statement about a book and a movie. I need help creating the thesis. I am doing the hobbit. This is a comparative essay with the topic of human development. Thanks..Please help me out..
July 17, 2013 by Kristen

c
The topic sentence of a body paragraph: A. introduces the thesis statement. B. outlines one thesis point. C. is developed during the proofreading step. D. summarizes the essay’s main points. C
April 14, 2014 by Angela

n&w
for my research paper on Diet and Diabetes, i need to write a thesis statement. "Your thesis statement should include a strong argument that can be proven" i picked my topic, but i'm not sure what 'strong argument' i'm going to try to prove. can i please get some ideas of what...
July 15, 2009 by y912f

Thesis Statement for Research Paper
I need a thesis statement for my research paper on The Place de la concorde.How can I do that? http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html Above are two very good sites on how to write a thesis statement. In ...
April 14, 2007 by margie

english - thesis
I have to write the introduction to literary essay on The Remains of the Day with the topic "self-deception as self-destruction". our teacher gave us a packet with things we need to include in our introduction, and for our thesis it says "the thesis statement is the topic/...
September 27, 2006 by Chris

To Kuromi - re English
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1254257821 and http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1254258297 and http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1254263202 Your first (and better) thesis statement attempt: "While some are struggling to survive in this world today, Americans should...
September 29, 2009 by Writeacher

English
The topic sentence of a body paragraph: A. introduces the thesis statement. B. outlines one thesis point. C. is developed during the proofreading step. D. summarizes the essay’s main points. D
April 14, 2014 by Angela

english
my Topic & Thesis Statement is this... Topic: How Do You Know If Your Nail Salon is Clean and Safe? Thesis: The best solution as to not getting a toe or nail fungus, is to avoid unclean nail salons. But my teacher says "how do you persuade people that nail fungus is a real ...
June 20, 2008 by gee gee

writing
Thesis help, please? for a research paper, the assignment is to write about the portrayal of injustice in "how the garcia girls lost their accents". ....i have made up a horrible thesis. lol. Can anybody either help me fix it, or if you know the book well, come up with another...
May 24, 2008 by Anonymous

n&w
for my research paper on Diet and Diabetes, i have to think of a thesis statement thesis: Diet and Diabetes are two things that go side by side and highly impact each other is that ok. i don't think it's detailed enough. it's mostly my opinion, and not really an argument. can ...
July 16, 2009 by y912f

English
Can "I" be apart of a thesis statement? How can a thesis statement be worded without "I" if the topic is, Do you like the daytime or nightime in the city?
July 4, 2008 by Ahai

Thesis Statement
“The subject of this paper is my experience with teaching elementary school children” Is this a weak or strong thesis statement
February 17, 2014 by Anonymous

us history
is this a good thesis statement for a paper i have to write about changes in the us from 1776 to 1870? "while we are still not a perfect country, political,social and economical changes are shaping up out country" is it ok or is there anything i can do to make it better?
September 9, 2013 by john

resaerch writing
My thesis statement is Teen Depression and Suicide. How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counter arguments?
May 13, 2009 by missy

Thesis Statement
Is this thesis OK for my schizophrenia essay? Schizophrenia is a severe mental illness that deeply affects the patient's daily life Thanks -MC
June 16, 2009 by mysterychicken

communication arts
can you please help me make my thesis statement? My topic is domestic violence on children. I can't think of a good thesis statement
January 2, 2010 by cherry

Thesis statement
How do you start a thesis statement that discusses the use of metaphors, simile, imagery and symbolism in a text?
March 2, 2010 by Stephanie

English College composition I
I need help on writing a thesis statement about child abuse/my story. so far this is what i have THESIS #1 "While other children were beaten to death or were abused in so many ways. I was one of the few who survived child abuse and became an adult trapped in a small body." ...
January 15, 2012 by Samantha

Social Studies
I'm working on creating a Thesis statement for my social studies fair project. The topic I originally picked out was "Why is female gendercide taking place in India?. However, I don't know how to turn it into a debatable thesis statement. Can a debatable thesis statement be ...
August 16, 2014 by Brandi

Thesis For History
My topic for History is,"French Troops refusing to fight in WWI." How can I make my thesis?
September 30, 2007 by Margie

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