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english1a - topic/thesis
I'm not really sure how you'll tie in your idea of what you want to write about with the questions.
Thursday, October 1, 2009 at 2:04am by MattsRiceBowl

English1a - topic/thesis
Matt is right. It's hard to see where you intend to go with such a vague thought. You should probably brainstorm many ideas, such as men's traditional roles now taken on by women and vice versa, and then list them here if you want someone's input into your thinking. At this ...
Thursday, October 1, 2009 at 2:04am by Writeacher

social studies
Alice and Andrew are discussing thesis development. Alice argues that a topic becomes a thesis if we want to write about the topic. Andrew, on the other hand, maintains that a topic is not a thesis but that a thesis is the foundation of a topic. Who is correct? A. Alice is ...
Monday, March 24, 2014 at 12:52pm by phia

Grammar and Composition
um...i don't think that's how i'm supposed to do it. asheville will be the broad topic then i have to pick a narrower topic then make a thesis , and then a three-step thesis. both about the more narrower topic.. i need help narrowing hte topic
Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 12:30pm by y912f

english1A- need help with thesis and to proofread
Get your thesis statement straightened out first. Then we can deal with the rest of the paper.
Tuesday, September 29, 2009 at 5:04pm by Writeacher

English1A - Need to think of an argument/thesis
I think you need to find a different topic. This is just too emotionally charged, IMO, for any student to write about -- it's too subjective (and almost ephemeral). You'll be trying to argue points that simply cannot be made. Or you'll be writing such generalities that it will...
Thursday, October 1, 2009 at 3:53pm by Writeacher

english1A- need help with thesis and to proofread
Your thesis statement is too wordy. Are you trying to argue that Americans do not realize that the "American Dream" is the possibility, not the guarantee, to achieve by determination and hard work.
Tuesday, September 29, 2009 at 5:04pm by GuruBlue

english1A - still working on my thesis
You need to check the "grammar" in your statement. Yes, I think we are on the same track. Can you now outline support for your thesis? You need to be sure that your thesis and the supporting paragraphs are on the same track.
Wednesday, September 30, 2009 at 4:28pm by GuruBlue

English
Remember that a thesis statement needs to have a topic (which you've written above) and your position or opinion about that topic (which is missing from what you've written above). Once you decide what your opinion is -- that is, the angle you plan to take on this topic or ...
Sunday, February 7, 2010 at 6:25am by Writeacher

english1A- need help with my thesis
I'd narrow it down to this thesis: Women were the first crossdressers. Please refer back to my post about women wearing pants.
Saturday, October 3, 2009 at 8:23pm by Ms. Sue

english1A- need help with my thesis
Ok I think I was going the wrong way with my Gender topic. I think I should write about how times have changed and society evolved, women and men do not perform their traditional roles as they use to and do not dress the same as they use to. And women go to school now, work, ...
Saturday, October 3, 2009 at 8:23pm by Kuromi

English1A
Your thesis would be much better if you didn't preach and tell your reader what they "must" or "should" do. I'm sure you can make a convincing thesis about how all people are human with strenghts and weaknesses, regardless of their ethnic background.
Thursday, October 15, 2009 at 8:13pm by Ms. Sue

English 12
My thesis before was "Yann Martel's book "Life of Pi", shows his depiction of the settings in India, Canada, and the ocean. These settings play an important role on the character Pi as he embarks on his journey to Canada That's not a thesis statement because you have taken no ...
Sunday, November 21, 2010 at 2:37pm by Writeacher

English1A - Does my thesis sound better?
"Individuals not only need to realize the true meaning of success, but must also know that with enough determination and motivation, and with the right attitude, the American Dream can become a reality." This is a GOOD thesis statement. Congrats!
Wednesday, September 30, 2009 at 7:32pm by Writeacher

english1A - Does my thesis sound better?
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wednesday, September 30, 2009 at 7:32pm by Kuromi

Grammar and Composition
the draft sheet is organized in a confusing way, here's how i filled it: 1. Broad Subject: Phonebook Names 2. Limited Topic for Thesis Statement: John E. Mackintosh 3. Main Idea about This Topic (how do you feel about this topic) (what is your opinion about this topic or issue...
Tuesday, November 3, 2009 at 6:24pm by y912f

thesis statement for my research report below
Hi, my thoughts..I wouldn't be too closed ended with your thesis. What I mean is you have to write an essay based off of your thesis. Did you try a thesis generator? This will help give a few ideas. Try two create a thesis where people can argue the other side. Can you answer ...
Wednesday, April 29, 2009 at 6:23pm by unknown

english1A- need help with thesis and to proofread
yes that is my argument. that the american dream is possible.
Tuesday, September 29, 2009 at 5:04pm by Kuromi

English1A
Can you support your thesis with three good solid arguments?
Thursday, October 15, 2009 at 8:13pm by Ms. Sue

english - thesis
I have to write the introduction to literary essay on The Remains of the Day with the topic "self-deception as self-destruction". our teacher gave us a packet with things we need to include in our introduction, and for our thesis it says "the thesis statement is the topic/...
Wednesday, September 27, 2006 at 8:27pm by Chris

English
That's not quite a thesis statement. It's a statement, but not a thesis. In a thesis statement, you need to have not only a factual topic, but also your opinion or position or stance about that topic. Study the poor and re-done thesis statements on this webpage, and then ...
Thursday, May 14, 2009 at 8:23pm by Writeacher

English Research
Thesis and Topic for paper on Led Zeppelin-- Does this work for a thesis:Although some People do not recognize them as the best band, nevertheless, Led Zeppelin is among the most notable because of their many musical accomplishments What would be a good topic for it?
Thursday, October 30, 2008 at 12:44pm by M

English
This is a statement of fact, not a thesis statement. There is no indication of what YOU THINK about these facts. In order to be a thesis statement, you need to include your opinion or position or stance on the topic. http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html ...
Monday, March 15, 2010 at 10:12am by Writeacher

english1A - still working on my thesis
oh i actually changed my thesis. If society would realize the true meaning of success and take advantage of opportunities available to them, they would know that with enough determination and the right attitude, the American Dream can become a reality. think it kinda sounds ...
Wednesday, September 30, 2009 at 4:28pm by Kuromi

Philosophy
Yes, with little detail. It's those details and examples you need to add. Make sure that each of your internal paragraphs (all except the intro and concl) has between 6 and 8 or 9 sentences. Believe me, in an academic paper, that is not too many if you expect to fully explain ...
Sunday, May 31, 2009 at 7:22pm by Writeacher

History
My instructor requested that I write a reflective prep paper for my final essay. Will I use words like (I, me, myself or personally) when referring to myself in a reflective essay? What words do I start the thesis statment with in a reflective essay? My instructor wants me to ...
Monday, March 21, 2011 at 12:03pm by David

english
my Topic & Thesis Statement is this... Topic: How Do You Know If Your Nail Salon is Clean and Safe? Thesis: The best solution as to not getting a toe or nail fungus, is to avoid unclean nail salons. But my teacher says "how do you persuade people that nail fungus is a real ...
Friday, June 20, 2008 at 12:06am by gee gee

English
Mrs Sue, I have to write perssavie essay on fear and destruction in which some common street drug has created among gang violence , schools , families, workforce and institutions with in our community . I am having a hard time developing a thesis statement and a topic for this...
Wednesday, January 20, 2010 at 3:18pm by April

english1A- Gender Myths Essay
so what this means is that I need more evidence to support my thesis?
Wednesday, October 7, 2009 at 4:33pm by Kuromi

Grammar and Composition
Drafting-Organization Sheet 1. ____________________________________ (Broad Subject) 2. ____________________________________ (Limited Topic for Thesis Statement 3. ____________________________________ (Main Idea about This Topic) ((how do you feel about this topic)) ((what is ...
Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 12:30pm by y912f

English
Thesis: The destruction of Thebes is caused by Creon’s disregard of prophecy when he becomes too arrogant; this results in the Antigone’s rebellion which causes in a broader civil war. This is not a thesis statement yet. You are simply telling the overall plot line. Your ...
Friday, February 28, 2014 at 11:50pm by Writeacher

Thesis statement
It is NOT a thesis statement at all! Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what ...
Tuesday, February 18, 2014 at 12:15am by Writeacher

research writing as a process
6.What's the next step to choosing a topic once you've identified a general subject? narrowing the topic formulating a thesis thinking about the nature of writing finding a general topic Question 7 What question should you consider when narrowing the topic? Where is my ...
Wednesday, April 28, 2010 at 12:39pm by christopher

writing thesis
You have stated a fact, not a thesis. Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to ...
Thursday, September 6, 2012 at 10:47am by Writeacher

Magic Thesis Statement
Which ONE sentence is your thesis statement? Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and...
Thursday, November 7, 2013 at 6:15pm by Writeacher

writing
Do you mean a topic sentence (for one paragraph)? Or do you mean a thesis statement (for an entire paper or essay)? As a topic sentence, this is fine. (It wouldn't be for a thesis statement, though.)
Monday, July 19, 2010 at 3:59pm by Writeacher

english (theses writing)
hello! :) I am a freshman college student and I am looking for a thesis topic about civil engineering.Can you give me a topic on my thesis about civil engineering? thanks :)
Friday, February 8, 2013 at 7:39am by Anonymous

english1A- Gender Myths Essay
I agree with Writeacher. Also -- what is your thesis statement, Kuromi?
Wednesday, October 7, 2009 at 4:33pm by Ms. Sue

English
http://www.answers.com/topic/essay Read noun definition 1a in here. How will you transform this into YOUR OPINIONS or YOUR IDEAS or YOUR THOUGHTS about this topic? Start with a true thesis statement. Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/...
Wednesday, December 22, 2010 at 11:54am by Writeacher

english (theses writing)
Wouldn't it depend on what and why you are writing? IT seems to me, if you are writing a short essay, you ought to greatly narrow the topic. I am reminded of Thoreau's Walden Pond. The thesis of each essay was written so that its meaning could be discerned by inference: it ...
Friday, February 8, 2013 at 7:39am by bobpursley

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
This looks good. Now you need to support your thesis sentence.
Sunday, October 18, 2009 at 6:13pm by Ms. Sue

English
"There are many high school students who are unccessful in their school performances due to not getting much adivce of how to better their learning skills." This is not a thesis statement. It is factual, but YOUR OPINION about this topic is not stated...
Tuesday, November 30, 2010 at 7:50pm by Writeacher

English
For thesis statements: http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into a real thesis...
Monday, June 27, 2011 at 3:02pm by Writeacher

english
what is a thesis http://www.onelook.com/?w=thesis&ls=a The word has several meanings. Please check this site for explanations. http://www.answers.com/topic/thesis If you still need help, please post another question.
Tuesday, January 16, 2007 at 4:07pm by jillian

com 220
I have to write a thesis statement on a topic I am going to write on my topic is Racism this is my thesis statement. How can I improve it? Why did racism start, as we are all the same? The first step is to identify how racism started and why people are that way.
Wednesday, March 10, 2010 at 12:47pm by Tracie

English(literature)
For writing a thesis: http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis ...
Thursday, March 4, 2010 at 1:01pm by Writeacher

English - to JJ
If my thesis is Social networking is a powerfull force in modern society. It helps us stay connected with friends, even if we don't show them the 'real' us and it has shaped current events and our views on these events... will my topic be about facebook or myspace. topic ...
Friday, April 1, 2011 at 11:14pm by Anna

Research Writing Com 220
First you need to write a full sentence outline of your topic: you thesis statement main points and then sub points introduction of your topic and a conclusion of your topic.
Monday, May 18, 2009 at 12:31am by Squirrel

English
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Thursday, March 18, 2010 at 3:23pm by Writeacher

Essay
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Wednesday, March 24, 2010 at 9:44pm by Writeacher

grammar
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Tuesday, October 19, 2010 at 12:51pm by Writeacher

English
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Wednesday, December 1, 2010 at 10:49am by Writeacher

English
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Monday, December 6, 2010 at 7:04pm by Writeacher

English
You can use a parallel structure format. You state an attention getter, then introuduce what you're talking about, then a thesis statement. Then the next paragraph start with a topic sentence the write a body paragraph describing the topic sentence. then the last paragraph re-...
Sunday, January 27, 2008 at 2:46pm by Miley

English 12
Please use correct grammar, punctuation, capitalization, spelling, etc., for us to be able to understand what you are asking and what you have written. Please help us help you. Question: How have you phrased your topic into a thesis statement? Once we know that, we can help ...
Saturday, November 20, 2010 at 9:16pm by Writeacher

English
You have not written a thesis statement. You have written a statement of fact, and they are not the same. Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of...
Sunday, November 7, 2010 at 8:34pm by Writeacher

Social Studies
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Saturday, March 20, 2010 at 6:33pm by Writeacher

buddhism pilgrimage
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Monday, November 15, 2010 at 9:32am by Writeacher

social studies
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Tuesday, November 23, 2010 at 3:46pm by Writeacher

English 12
Yesterday, i posted a question about writing a thesis for Life of Pi. However i'm not sure how to develop a thesis from my topic. The topic of my essay is "Yann Martel's depiction on the role of setting in India and Canada". If anyone can kindly help me to develop a thesis ...
Sunday, November 21, 2010 at 2:37pm by Andy

English, Scarlet Letter
You have not written a thesis statement. You have written a statement of fact, and they are not the same. Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of...
Friday, November 5, 2010 at 5:58am by Writeacher

Research Report
That is not a thesis statement because no one would dispute you about any of that. A thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of ...
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 at 12:20am by Writeacher

English?
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Thursday, September 30, 2010 at 12:29pm by Writeacher

English
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Sunday, April 7, 2013 at 3:49pm by Writeacher

English 3
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Monday, January 13, 2014 at 3:59pm by Writeacher

communication 110
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Wednesday, June 9, 2010 at 10:34am by Writeacher

English
No one here will write your thesis for you, but you can check and double check your work by reviewing this: Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think ...
Thursday, May 16, 2013 at 8:27pm by Writeacher

English
It's pretty weak. How many people do you know who would agree with this statement? Probably almost everyone, right? Then it's not much of a thesis statement. Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the ...
Tuesday, September 25, 2012 at 1:31am by Writeacher

History
PS -- I don't see a true thesis statement here. Aren't you supposed to have one? http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't ...
Wednesday, March 3, 2010 at 2:04pm by Writeacher

English
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements. Just ...
Thursday, March 11, 2010 at 2:31pm by Writeacher

AP English Literature
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Sunday, October 3, 2010 at 4:50pm by Writeacher

English
Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to ...
Thursday, March 7, 2013 at 11:37pm by Writeacher

World History Please Help ASAP Ms. Sue?
I was talking about thesis for the topic not really how to write a thesis statement.
Friday, October 19, 2012 at 5:32pm by Joey

writing thesis statments
I am stuck on what would be a good thesis statement for my topic of, " How does drug addiction affect America as a whole?
Saturday, January 11, 2014 at 7:34pm by ashley

English III
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into a real thesis statement. Just ...
Saturday, February 20, 2010 at 1:09pm by Writeacher

english
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into a real thesis statement. Just ...
Wednesday, February 24, 2010 at 10:05am by Writeacher

English 2
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Friday, November 26, 2010 at 1:30pm by Writeacher

English 122
Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to ...
Sunday, May 26, 2013 at 10:18pm by Writeacher

History- Martin Luther King
Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your ...
Friday, December 13, 2013 at 3:59pm by Writeacher

Research Report
I'm doing a research report about the Stonehenge. My thesis is that even though the Stonehenge is so mysterious, it is still a wonderful piece of history. Currently, I'm writing the outline, and this asks me to write topic sentences for each of my three paragraphs. I don't ...
Monday, February 3, 2014 at 6:09pm by Anonymous

History
Remember: Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the ...
Thursday, March 4, 2010 at 2:46pm by Writeacher

general studies
What do you have written so far? Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you ...
Monday, June 14, 2010 at 5:52am by Writeacher

english
Your thesis statement (one sentence) must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by ...
Saturday, March 23, 2013 at 4:03am by Writeacher

LA 101-STUDY SKILLS
Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to ...
Saturday, April 6, 2013 at 2:15am by Writeacher

english - revision
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the rise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in inflaion in developing...
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:43pm by rose- Ms. Sue

English12
I don't think you're clear on what a thesis statement actually is. For one thing it's a statement (ONE sentence), not a paragraph. Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have, for the most part) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your...
Thursday, May 30, 2013 at 1:16pm by Writeacher

English
I having a hard time developing a complete thesis for an research paper. I need ideas for a thesis on the topic Why do you enjoy reading/watching television?
Saturday, August 23, 2008 at 3:31pm by Crane

Biology Research Paper
So far you have just stated already known facts -- that is, you have written a report. To remedy this, you need to draft a thesis statement. A thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a ...
Tuesday, March 16, 2010 at 6:42pm by Writeacher

English- please revise
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the uprise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in starvation in ...
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by rose- Ms. Sue

US history
What are your three main points to prove your thesis? The last sentence of your introductory paragraph is your thesis statement. I am assuming that it will be something to the effect that salutary neglect was a major cause of the American Revolution. As you do your research on...
Thursday, August 21, 2008 at 7:42am by GuruBlue

english
Please help me with my thesis. i have to write a thesis statement in the topic topic "Poverty in USA". like i had lots but my teacher didnt agree with those. can anyone please give me idea what to write. by starting the sentence with " Poverty in USA ....." please give me some...
Tuesday, March 31, 2009 at 9:00pm by Anonymous

english
A thesis statement usually includes factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your...
Sunday, November 14, 2010 at 11:17am by Writeacher

english
I have no idea. What do YOU want to say about gay marriage? Have you written the outline for your paper yet? In drafting your outline, you should come up with your thesis statement. Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. ...
Wednesday, January 29, 2014 at 5:03am by Writeacher

English
I'm tryna think of my thesis sentence but its taking me longer than I expected. My Research paper topic is on Teen Pregnancies and I want a Thesis that would make a good argument.........................................PLEASE HELP!!!!
Tuesday, January 25, 2011 at 8:09pm by Susan B.

English
need help with thesis and topic sentences. Is this a good thesis? Social networking help change the we speak it is daily journals,send invitation to events, and meet new friends.
Thursday, March 31, 2011 at 12:20am by Anna

English
I have to make a thesis statement about a book and a movie. I need help creating the thesis. I am doing the hobbit. This is a comparative essay with the topic of human development. Thanks..Please help me out..
Wednesday, July 17, 2013 at 2:42pm by Kristen

English- please revise
I suggest you change "uprise" to "rise." Your thesis statement doesn't support your topic. Your topic states that the price of food is one of the main causes of inflation. Your topic says nothing about starvation. Have you actually found research results from the U.N. and ...
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by Ms. Sue

English
Only YOU know what your thesis can say because ONLY YOU know what YOUR opinion about this topic is. Read this about thesis statements, and then post what YOU THINK: Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you might already have) plus your own position/...
Tuesday, December 25, 2012 at 3:44pm by Writeacher

essay check please
Maybe you ought to say what your topic is: is it opportunity and social acceptance on an equal basis? If so, get a quote that says that. I have no idea what your topic is, or thesis is.
Sunday, May 20, 2012 at 12:55pm by bobpursley

english1A- Need help with my argument/thesis
You may be able to post the rest of your introduction now -- after "Gender Myths." You may also need to type it here.
Friday, October 2, 2009 at 9:52pm by Ms. Sue

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