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English
What is the relationship between revision and content? A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content with sources. C. Revision makes sure all content is relevant. D. Content connects revised sentences together. Is it hmmmm wow well is it C Ms. Sue or...

English
what is meant by revision and what are the important steps in the revision process?

Maths Revision
Does anyone know of any websites where I might be able to find a set of GCSE maths revision notes or anywhere I could purchase some revision notes? It would be a big help if someone could help me! Thank you Sam

REVISION
what good websites are there that help with science and maths revision? I have tried Google but there is nothing that has interested me. Also the websites, which are a good source of revision i.e. Bite size etc. Are already what I am using. I have asked around but there no one...

Business communication
I have to revise these sentences as if speaking to a 10th grade level in education. Can you tell me if these are correct: 1. We must terminate all deficit financing. Revision: We need to end all debts. 2. We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. ...

business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...

com220
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?

english
revision is??

science
does anyone know any science revision games about mr mcluthon i need to use it for my revision but can`t find them . thanks

English
In one to two sentences, define revision

Geog tectonics
please could someone give me a link for tectonic activity revision. Is this what you're looking for? http://geobytesgcse.blogspot.com/2007/01/plate-tectonics-revision.html yes. thank you for your help!

Grammar and Composition
Hi, I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i ...

english-final revision
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great easter. Rose

Revision
Can you please give me advice and tips on revising for a formal English essay?

English
Select the answer that does NOT make the following sentence true. The editing process: A. does not apply the practices of standard English B. follows revision of your draft C. includes the accuracy of grammar, mechanics, and spelling. D. puts the finishing touching on your ...

business english
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company. What would be best revision of this sentence?

English
When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _____phase. a)organization b)revision c)writing d)outline

Business English
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company. Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?

English
A word closely associated with altercation is ? A. revision B. Adherent C. Sensible D. Argument I think it is letter B is that right ? Please answer me

Grammar
What revision will correct the sentence? "Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the should be capitalized. B. The period after began should be changed to a comma. C. The word to should be capitalized. D. No revision is needed. i think it...

English
When preparing a formal business presentation the phase that can make or break your report is the ----phase. A. writing B. outline C. revision D. organization Answer (c )

English
During revision, you should scan your paper for _______ words and replace them with concrete words or phrases. A. figurative B. general C. formal D. informal my answer is b.

English
During revision, you should scan your paper for _______ words and replace them with concrete words or phrases. A. figurative B. general C. formal D. informal my answer is b.

English
Please check my answer thsnks :) When preparing a formal business presentaion, the phase that can make or break your report is the _________ phase. 1 2 revision outline 3 4 organization writing I picked 3

English
Reading your draft aloud, using peer review, and using a typed and printed copy are all examples of A. points of view. B. useful techniques for revision. C. patterns of development. D. graphic organizers. my answer is b.

English
13. When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _______ phase. A. outline B. revision C. organization D. writing I selected (D) for the answer, is this the correct answer?

English
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language ...

business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer

Writing
I'm stuck on 2 questions and could use a little help please! First question is When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the_______ phase. A. organization B. revision C. writing D. outline I think it is revision but I'am not...

english
4. In both the Gettysburg Address and “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” the writers (1 point) comment on the tribulations faced by a nation at war. honor those who have fought for freedom. demand the revision of the nation’s unjust laws. expound on the notion of tolerance ...

english
which sentence is the best revision? a. My niece is a ballet dancer. b. My niece is a ballet dancer who performs both solo ballets and as a member of the ballet corps. c. My niece is a ballet dancer and I always enjoy attending performances.

enlgish
not a question, just want you to check my revision of a draft with an action lead in. this is just the revision of the beginning, i may post more revisions of my draft for the middle and end, and will probably ask questions in the answer section. Revision For Beginning Opening...

biology
i just need this for revision: the formula for photosynthesis and chemosynthesis

science
Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision?

English
Thank you very much for your revision! I just wanted to know if I can use indirect speech in this rephrase: Then the poet has doubts about the fate of a fair youth. Will he also undergo the ravages of time since sweet and beautiful creatures don't stay that way forever; they ...

English
In both the Gettysburg Address and “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” the writers comment on the tribulations faced by a nation at war. honor those who have fought for freedom. demand the revision of the nation’s unjust laws. expound on the notion of tolerance for others my ...

business communication
which of the following is not something to check during a thorough revision?

English 10th Grade
Choose the answer that shows a correct revision to the following sentence: Why if you did not want to hear it did you ask me what I thought a) Why, if you did not want to hear it, did you ask me what I thought? b) Why, if you did not want to hear it did you ask me what I ...

public law N6
The manner in which cases are brought from the lower court for revision purposes

Reading
I need help with a assignment on a 150 to 300 words that summarizes the steps to be taken in the revision process.

english
In the website I was able to learn about the English language very well, because in the website there are a lot of menus that english grammar, english vocabulary, english basics, english lesson, english pronunciation, english fun and games, english test, english quizzes, ...

English
Can you help me determine if I chose the correct/incorrect sentences appropriately. It’s really urgent. 1)Jenny, 13, says “My favourite subject is English. We all have to learn English in my country because it is very difficult to find a job if you don’t know it. Jenny ...

english - revision
What do the terms race and ethnicity mean to you? The term race defines what we are and where we come from. In essence, race is a classification between different groups of people; where each race looks different, speaks a different language and has totally different culture. ...

business communication
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company." Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?

BUSINESS
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity

business
which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision. style and tone organization punctuation and spelling content and clarity

spell
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity

English 4 help
1. both George Orwell and Stevie Smith employed irony in their writing. True or False 2. Alfred, Lord Tennyson's poem "Crossing the Bar" and Dylan Thomas's poem "Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night" convey a similar view point about death. True or False 3. the revision phase...

Greeks
Do you know any webs for Greek famous landscapes? We need one or some right away please. The most famous Greek landscape is the Acropolis in Athens. Also, some of the Greek islands are famous for their landscapes. Check this site for thousands of pictures of Greek landscapes. ...

math,help
I did the revision for this one i posted before but i don't seem to find my error... Multiply. (x-8)^2 this is what i did to solve. (x-8)(x-8) then I foiled x^2-8x-8x+64 then i combined like terms x^2-16x+64 correct

research and paper revision
what does it mean to incorporate feed back and what feedback you will not incorporate

English
Here is the second exercise. Thank you very much for the revision. 1) John ……………………… buy the dictionary for the exam: he can take mine. 2) You ………………………stand on the left on the escalators. 3) I ……………………… buy any butter, mum...

English-Ms Sue
This is my revision to my earlier question, please proofread. Often, the dictionaries are wrong about this, in fact by putting one word first; they are supporting a self fulfilling prophecy. Consider the entry, "ax or axe", which appears with the two words in that order, in ...

English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...

English
Can you check if these sentences are OK please? I forgot to include them before. 1) The first three questions are questions on the revision and must be answered by all those students with low marks. 2)The British Museum is such a fantastic place to visit. 3) She is giving a ...

psy - please help
What relationship factors or considerations might be influencing Michael’s problems? Need some informations to help me answer this question. I just send a post which is revision 6, check it out for me. Thanks

science (revision)
I have a test on electricity on Friday and I wandering if I could get a basic summary of what I should know. I'm British so I don know what grade I am but I'm 11 so aound that sort of basic level please!!! Thanks.

English
Please check my correction. Punctuation within Sentences—Hyphen You will need to write both short and long- term goals. The president-elect of the Rotary Club had the winning lottery ticket. Please buy three half gallon containers of ice -cream for the party. The ill defined...

Spanish
can't you do actual revision ; instead of just words. it would make it a whole lot easier, because what if we didn't need to revise on those particular words and needed RESEARCH?

english - revision
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the rise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in inflaion in developing...

science
I have been trying to write a research paper, that poses questions as my focus. Rather then a general topic. Is there somewhere online; I can submit my paper for revision suggestions before i turn it in.

English
Can you please check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much. 1) There are other teenagers who like wearing baggy jeans. You'll listen to the test twice. 2) You are asked either to cross the correct alternative (among three) or to fill in the blanks with a suitable...

to writeacher
The following sentence illustrate several kinds of nonparallel constuction. Rewrite the sentence to achieve parallelism. If you insist on reading the Old Testament all the way through and to do the same with the New Testament, you are in for some big surprises. Would you write...

English
3. Which of the following is the best revision for strong verbs in the sentence below? Mrs. Benoit is the events organizer for a nonprofit organization. a. Mrs. Benoit does events for a nonprofit organization. b. Mrs. Benoit organizes events for a nonprofit organization. c. ...

Grammar (Writeacher)
Rewrite the sentences below, inserting commas where they are needed. If no comma is needed, write "correct." 1. You won't be disappointed nor will you ever forget your visit. My revision of this sentence is the following: 1. Correct.

chemistry
REVISION TO PREVIOUS POST: What is the pH of the solution created by combining 1.90 mL of the 0.10 M NaOH(aq) with 8.00 mL of the 0.10 M HCl(aq)? with 8.00 ml of the 0.10 M HC2H3O2(aq)? I understood how to do the HC2H3O2, but I can't do the HCl. I am trying to do the same ...

English
Can you please check these sentences on phrasal verbs? Thank you in advance. 1) Can I have two chops of lamb (or lamb chops?) and a roast chicken (or a chicken roast?)? 2)Our teacher will go over our mistakes during our afternoon’s revision course. 3)You’ll have to hand in...

english - after revision
In order to find information for topics that interest me, I will go to the University library. When using different sources such as website, library and articles, it is very important to know that each source has an author and which one is the most valuable and trustworthy. ...

English
Why do you study English? 1. I study English to chat with foreigners. 2. I study English to get 100 points on the English test in the final exam. 3. I study English to read technical English books. 4.I study English to enter Cambridge University in the future. (Would you check...

science
Hi i have a science exam soon and we got given a revision sheet and i don't get this question.... Please help! Q1. What is the name of the mineral (ore) in which the following metals are found: a)silver b)aluminium c)copper d)iron e)manganese f)nikle g)lead h)tin i)titanium j)...

English
Writeacher, I urgently need to email the our partner the following things, to make sure he will make the changes. 1) As there are several pages to check , I won't be able to revise everything by this evening. 2) I made just a few changes in the linguistic objectives, the ...

English
1. Reviewing word choice is a good strategy for the Proofreading phase of the Writing Process. True or False? I think it is False as reviewing word choice should be in the revision phase, right? 2. It is easier to determine the form of one's writing if the purpose of writing ...

Sciences
Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision. What are the hard-and-fast rules of science? Are there any? With so few firm rules, how does science avoid becoming fiction? What might make science and its constant revising work even better?

Business Communications
which of the following would be the best revision of these sentence ? Our present receivables are in line with last year’s. However they exceed the budget. The reason they exceed the budget is that our goal for receivable investment was very conservative.

second revision - English
When evaluating online sources, one of the points to remember is that, all information listed on the internet is not reliable. In essence, when reading this blog titled "The Nation," I can not determine that the information is reliable because the source, author and ...

PED 212
In what way is a lesson that is designed to promote an autonomy supportive environment different from a teacher directed lesson? the introduction is longer more focus is placed on the revision of the activities the teacher is more of a manager the organization of the students

English
I left out a few more things and a short translation. Can you please check them, too? 1) Four of your students have sent email so far. Can you please send me the individual email addresses of your partecipating students so that we can start the email partnership? My students ...

7th grade language arts Ms. Sue
1. If the following sentence was rewritten to be more specific, which would be the best revision? "It was a privilege and not a right, and you messed it up." (1 point) "It was a privilege and not a right, and you don't have it now." "It was a privilege and not a right, and you...

British Lit.
Inverted word order, unclear pronouns, and variable spellings are characteristics of what type of English a. old english b. elizabethan english c. gothic english d. middle english

college english
I have to revise sentences to eliminate illogical or overused coordination. Are the following sentences correct? Thanks! The object of fencing is to be the first to touch the opponent five times, and a "president," who is sometimes assisted by a number of judges, officiates at...

english - revision
My instructor suggested that I simplify the essay, so I can easily get my point across. Meanwhile, the feedback received from my peer reviewer was valid and will help me better my expository essay. The things that I will put in practice are the following: A statistic that will...

english -final revision
According to my experience, the easiest part of the writing process was the brainstorming, which allows me to outline a large numbers of ideas in order to find the best solution before starting the process. The most difficult part was finding the thesis statement, which is the...

GRAMMAR HELP plz check ;-;
"You have the answers in the back of the book," he said, "so you should check every answer." A.The period belongs outside of the quotation marks. B. (So) should be capitalized. C. Delete the comma after the word book. D. No revision is necessary. Im guessing that my answer ...

science
Using what you learned about science in your coursework thus far, discuss: 1. Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision. 2. What are the hard-and-fast rules of science? Are there any? 3. With so few firm rules, how does science avoid ...

English redo
Ok, for my first question Flying over the oak tree,the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised to: The farmer saw the flock of birds, flying over the oak tree that had damaged his crops. Second sentence: Ironing out all wrinkles, the pants looked ...

psy-final revision
match -Psychodynamic Theory -Trait Theory -Learning Theory -Humanistic Theory -Sociocultural k. consists of five major personality factors which are reasonably stable elements of personality. These factors include extraversion, agreeableness, conscientiousness, neuroticism, ...

Business Communications
Choose the best revision of this sentence: "I want an interview with you." (Points: 5) I anxiously await a phone call from you so that we can meet to discuss job opportunities. I can't wait to hear from you. Any time at all that you want to call and have me for an interview, I...

Language Arts
Which revision to sentence 4 contains an example of vivid description? Sentence 4: The map was confusing A)The number of colorful crisscrossing paths on the map made Sal's eyes glaze over B)The map looked completely baffling*** C)Even when she turned the map around, it was ...

English
Read the sentence. Philadelphia has many historic buildings, beautiful parks, and is home to many excellent restaurants. Which revision corrects the faulty parallelism? A) Philadelphia, not only home to many excellent restaurants, but it also has historic buildings and ...

English
Is this a strong thesis statement: Ms Gilman captures the struggle of the narrator as she provides evidence of the journey of the narrator’s changing mental state that is not just about a woman losing her sanity but of a woman who is suffering from a feeling of entrapment ...

english - third revision
When evaluating online sources, one of the points to remember is that all information listed on the internet is not reliable. In essence, when reading this blog titled "The Nation," I cannot determine that the information is reliable because the source, author and credentials ...

English
You are perfectly right. I wanted to add these sentences, too. I really need your revision. 1) We must remember past atrocities but at the same time we must do something against them. It is for this reason that our school has decided to embark on a European project involving a...

Science
What is the best explanation for why scientific theories are modified? A)Theories more than ten years old are usually out of date. B)Scientists want to prove that the work of other scientists is wrong. C)New evidence that supports a revision prompts scientists to modify the ...

com220
In seeking to improve written documents, writers revise, edit and proofread. In revising, writers look at the big picture, whereas in editing and proofreading, they target to the mechanical aspects of the writing. In writing, what might the "big picture" entail? 2. Why might ...

chemistry - structure and properties (help)
I have a revision question which i do not understand please help me out: 45. Explain the following observations: motor oil pours from a can more slowly than water; however, in a jar, the meniscus of motor oil is flatter than the meniscus of water. The answer sheet talks about ...

British Lit
Inverted word order, unclear pronouns, and variable spellings are characteristics of what type of English? A.Old English B.Elizabethan English C. Middle English

Chemistry (Check)
Completion 1)Metric 2)Five 3)Meter 4) 5)Weight The International System of Units (SI) is a revision of the ___1____ system. There are __2____ SI base units. In SI, the base unit of length is the ___3____. The Space taken up by a cube that is 10cm on each edge is one __4___. A ...

English Expressions
ex) She is an English teacher. English teacher is a compound noun. When we stress the first noun, 'English', it means that she teaches English as a teacher. However, when we stress 'teacher', 'English' is used as an adjective. In this case, 'English teacher' means a teacher ...

English
I left out a few more sentences I wrote on castles. I need a synonym for "ways, way" and a revision of sentence 2. Thank you very much. 1) Castles came to Britain with the Norman-French invaders. Indeed, castles were a key part of their way of controlling new territories. 2) ...

sentence revision
As I was looking at the map on the screen and realized my destination of my new home was REACHING closer, the flight attendant’s announcement CAME on, “Ladies and gentlemen, we ask that you remain seated and fasten your seatbelt. We will be landing shortly at the San ...

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