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English
What is the relationship between revision and content? A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content with sources. C. Revision makes sure all content is relevant. D. Content connects revised sentences together. Is it hmmmm wow well is it C Ms. Sue or...
April 26, 2013 by Ms. Sue Please Help (Sandy)

English
what is meant by revision and what are the important steps in the revision process?
June 1, 2009 by Anonymous

Maths Revision
Does anyone know of any websites where I might be able to find a set of GCSE maths revision notes or anywhere I could purchase some revision notes? It would be a big help if someone could help me! Thank you Sam
November 6, 2007 by sam

REVISION
what good websites are there that help with science and maths revision? I have tried Google but there is nothing that has interested me. Also the websites, which are a good source of revision i.e. Bite size etc. Are already what I am using. I have asked around but there no one...
February 4, 2014 by Anonymous

Business communication
I have to revise these sentences as if speaking to a 10th grade level in education. Can you tell me if these are correct: 1. We must terminate all deficit financing. Revision: We need to end all debts. 2. We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. ...
March 5, 2012 by Sue

business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012

com220
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?
November 20, 2008 by anonymoys

english
revision is??
October 20, 2010 by danny

science
does anyone know any science revision games about mr mcluthon i need to use it for my revision but can`t find them . thanks
May 16, 2008 by ANON

English
In one to two sentences, define revision
October 11, 2011 by Anonymous

Geog tectonics
please could someone give me a link for tectonic activity revision. Is this what you're looking for? http://geobytesgcse.blogspot.com/2007/01/plate-tectonics-revision.html yes. thank you for your help!
March 20, 2007 by sam

Grammar and Composition
Hi, I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i ...
November 4, 2009 by y912f

english-final revision
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great easter. Rose
March 22, 2008 by rose

Revision
Can you please give me advice and tips on revising for a formal English essay?
November 7, 2013 by Anonymous

English
Select the answer that does NOT make the following sentence true. The editing process: A. does not apply the practices of standard English B. follows revision of your draft C. includes the accuracy of grammar, mechanics, and spelling. D. puts the finishing touching on your ...
April 8, 2011 by anthony

English
When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _____phase. a)organization b)revision c)writing d)outline
July 11, 2009 by Anonymous

Business English
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company. Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
October 17, 2013 by Michelle

English
A word closely associated with altercation is ? A. revision B. Adherent C. Sensible D. Argument I think it is letter B is that right ? Please answer me
April 16, 2014 by Alex

Grammar
What revision will correct the sentence? "Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the should be capitalized. B. The period after began should be changed to a comma. C. The word to should be capitalized. D. No revision is needed. i think it...
May 1, 2013 by bubbie

English
When preparing a formal business presentation the phase that can make or break your report is the ----phase. A. writing B. outline C. revision D. organization Answer (c )
March 25, 2012 by Brenna

English
Please check my answer thsnks :) When preparing a formal business presentaion, the phase that can make or break your report is the _________ phase. 1 2 revision outline 3 4 organization writing I picked 3
November 11, 2007 by Anonymous

English
13. When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _______ phase. A. outline B. revision C. organization D. writing I selected (D) for the answer, is this the correct answer?
December 19, 2011 by Sis

English
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language ...
February 3, 2010 by Robin

business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012

Writing
I'm stuck on 2 questions and could use a little help please! First question is When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the_______ phase. A. organization B. revision C. writing D. outline I think it is revision but I'am not...
August 13, 2009 by Shaenna

biology
i just need this for revision: the formula for photosynthesis and chemosynthesis
September 30, 2007 by Jessica

science
Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision?
March 19, 2011 by Edward

English
Thank you very much for your revision! I just wanted to know if I can use indirect speech in this rephrase: Then the poet has doubts about the fate of a fair youth. Will he also undergo the ravages of time since sweet and beautiful creatures don't stay that way forever; they ...
February 21, 2012 by Henry2

business communication
which of the following is not something to check during a thorough revision?
September 25, 2011 by Anonymous

Reading
I need help with a assignment on a 150 to 300 words that summarizes the steps to be taken in the revision process.
June 15, 2012 by Jessica

English
Can you help me determine if I chose the correct/incorrect sentences appropriately. It’s really urgent. 1)Jenny, 13, says “My favourite subject is English. We all have to learn English in my country because it is very difficult to find a job if you don’t know it. Jenny thinks ...
September 19, 2011 by Henry2

english - revision
What do the terms race and ethnicity mean to you? The term race defines what we are and where we come from. In essence, race is a classification between different groups of people; where each race looks different, speaks a different language and has totally different culture. ...
June 10, 2008 by rose -Ms. Sue

business communication
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company." Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
May 26, 2010 by Anonymous

BUSINESS
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity
May 30, 2010 by Anonymous

business
which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision. style and tone organization punctuation and spelling content and clarity
November 24, 2010 by terrie

spell
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity
January 23, 2012 by Anonymous

English 4 help
1. both George Orwell and Stevie Smith employed irony in their writing. True or False 2. Alfred, Lord Tennyson's poem "Crossing the Bar" and Dylan Thomas's poem "Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night" convey a similar view point about death. True or False 3. the revision phase...
May 23, 2014 by Karen

Greeks
Do you know any webs for Greek famous landscapes? We need one or some right away please. The most famous Greek landscape is the Acropolis in Athens. Also, some of the Greek islands are famous for their landscapes. Check this site for thousands of pictures of Greek landscapes. ...
May 17, 2007 by LG

math,help
I did the revision for this one i posted before but i don't seem to find my error... Multiply. (x-8)^2 this is what i did to solve. (x-8)(x-8) then I foiled x^2-8x-8x+64 then i combined like terms x^2-16x+64 correct
March 2, 2007 by jas20

English
Here is the second exercise. Thank you very much for the revision. 1) John ……………………… buy the dictionary for the exam: he can take mine. 2) You ………………………stand on the left on the escalators. 3) I ……………………… buy any butter, mum has just bought some. 4) I think you ………………………cycle ...
April 16, 2012 by Matthew

research and paper revision
what does it mean to incorporate feed back and what feedback you will not incorporate
September 13, 2008 by Anonymous

English-Ms Sue
This is my revision to my earlier question, please proofread. Often, the dictionaries are wrong about this, in fact by putting one word first; they are supporting a self fulfilling prophecy. Consider the entry, "ax or axe", which appears with the two words in that order, in ...
February 1, 2010 by Robin

English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...
April 28, 2008 by rose- revision-

English
Can you check if these sentences are OK please? I forgot to include them before. 1) The first three questions are questions on the revision and must be answered by all those students with low marks. 2)The British Museum is such a fantastic place to visit. 3) She is giving a ...
February 10, 2011 by nco

psy - please help
What relationship factors or considerations might be influencing Michael’s problems? Need some informations to help me answer this question. I just send a post which is revision 6, check it out for me. Thanks
June 8, 2008 by rose -psydag

science (revision)
I have a test on electricity on Friday and I wandering if I could get a basic summary of what I should know. I'm British so I don know what grade I am but I'm 11 so aound that sort of basic level please!!! Thanks.
January 9, 2013 by Zoe

English
Please check my correction. Punctuation within Sentences—Hyphen You will need to write both short and long- term goals. The president-elect of the Rotary Club had the winning lottery ticket. Please buy three half gallon containers of ice -cream for the party. The ill defined ...
December 14, 2007 by Mckenzie

Spanish
can't you do actual revision ; instead of just words. it would make it a whole lot easier, because what if we didn't need to revise on those particular words and needed RESEARCH?
November 6, 2008 by Grace

english - revision
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the rise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in inflaion in developing...
April 30, 2008 by rose- Ms. Sue

English
Can you please check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much. 1) There are other teenagers who like wearing baggy jeans. You'll listen to the test twice. 2) You are asked either to cross the correct alternative (among three) or to fill in the blanks with a suitable...
May 17, 2011 by Henry1

science
I have been trying to write a research paper, that poses questions as my focus. Rather then a general topic. Is there somewhere online; I can submit my paper for revision suggestions before i turn it in.
March 24, 2009 by chasity

to writeacher
The following sentence illustrate several kinds of nonparallel constuction. Rewrite the sentence to achieve parallelism. If you insist on reading the Old Testament all the way through and to do the same with the New Testament, you are in for some big surprises. Would you write...
October 19, 2006 by anonymous

Grammar (Writeacher)
Rewrite the sentences below, inserting commas where they are needed. If no comma is needed, write "correct." 1. You won't be disappointed nor will you ever forget your visit. My revision of this sentence is the following: 1. Correct.
June 7, 2013 by Anonymous

chemistry
REVISION TO PREVIOUS POST: What is the pH of the solution created by combining 1.90 mL of the 0.10 M NaOH(aq) with 8.00 mL of the 0.10 M HCl(aq)? with 8.00 ml of the 0.10 M HC2H3O2(aq)? I understood how to do the HC2H3O2, but I can't do the HCl. I am trying to do the same ...
July 11, 2010 by Sara

English
Can you please check these sentences on phrasal verbs? Thank you in advance. 1) Can I have two chops of lamb (or lamb chops?) and a roast chicken (or a chicken roast?)? 2)Our teacher will go over our mistakes during our afternoon’s revision course. 3)You’ll have to hand in ...
July 25, 2011 by Henry2

english - after revision
In order to find information for topics that interest me, I will go to the University library. When using different sources such as website, library and articles, it is very important to know that each source has an author and which one is the most valuable and trustworthy. ...
April 14, 2008 by rose - Ms. Sue

English
Writeacher, I urgently need to email the our partner the following things, to make sure he will make the changes. 1) As there are several pages to check , I won't be able to revise everything by this evening. 2) I made just a few changes in the linguistic objectives, the ...
February 8, 2012 by Henry2

English
1. Reviewing word choice is a good strategy for the Proofreading phase of the Writing Process. True or False? I think it is False as reviewing word choice should be in the revision phase, right? 2. It is easier to determine the form of one's writing if the purpose of writing ...
June 27, 2010 by Anna

second revision - English
When evaluating online sources, one of the points to remember is that, all information listed on the internet is not reliable. In essence, when reading this blog titled "The Nation," I can not determine that the information is reliable because the source, author and ...
April 17, 2008 by Rose- Ms. Sue

Sciences
Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision. What are the hard-and-fast rules of science? Are there any? With so few firm rules, how does science avoid becoming fiction? What might make science and its constant revising work even better?
October 10, 2010 by Jackie

Business Communications
which of the following would be the best revision of these sentence ? Our present receivables are in line with last year’s. However they exceed the budget. The reason they exceed the budget is that our goal for receivable investment was very conservative.
June 6, 2011 by Anthony

science
Hi i have a science exam soon and we got given a revision sheet and i dont get this question.... Please help! Q1. What is the name of the mineral (ore) in which the following metals are found: a)silver b)aluminium c)copper d)iron e)manganese f)nikle g)lead h)tin i)titanium j)...
November 13, 2008 by JESS

English
I left out a few more things and a short translation. Can you please check them, too? 1) Four of your students have sent email so far. Can you please send me the individual email addresses of your partecipating students so that we can start the email partnership? My students ...
March 20, 2012 by Matthew

PED 212
In what way is a lesson that is designed to promote an autonomy supportive environment different from a teacher directed lesson? the introduction is longer more focus is placed on the revision of the activities the teacher is more of a manager the organization of the students
August 28, 2013 by Mary

British Lit.
Inverted word order, unclear pronouns, and variable spellings are characteristics of what type of English a. old english b. elizabethan english c. gothic english d. middle english
October 21, 2008 by Cori

7th grade language arts Ms. Sue
1. If the following sentence was rewritten to be more specific, which would be the best revision? "It was a privilege and not a right, and you messed it up." (1 point) "It was a privilege and not a right, and you don't have it now." "It was a privilege and not a right, and you...
November 30, 2012 by Delilah

college english
I have to revise sentences to eliminate illogical or overused coordination. Are the following sentences correct? Thanks! The object of fencing is to be the first to touch the opponent five times, and a "president," who is sometimes assisted by a number of judges, officiates at...
September 26, 2010 by Jennifer

english - revision
My instructor suggested that I simplify the essay, so I can easily get my point across. Meanwhile, the feedback received from my peer reviewer was valid and will help me better my expository essay. The things that I will put in practice are the following: A statistic that will...
March 30, 2008 by rose

english -final revision
According to my experience, the easiest part of the writing process was the brainstorming, which allows me to outline a large numbers of ideas in order to find the best solution before starting the process. The most difficult part was finding the thesis statement, which is the...
April 2, 2008 by rose

science
Using what you learned about science in your coursework thus far, discuss: 1. Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision. 2. What are the hard-and-fast rules of science? Are there any? 3. With so few firm rules, how does science avoid ...
October 30, 2010 by ca

English redo
Ok, for my first question Flying over the oak tree,the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised to: The farmer saw the flock of birds, flying over the oak tree that had damaged his crops. Second sentence: Ironing out all wrinkles, the pants looked ...
July 10, 2006 by Clark

psy-final revision
match -Psychodynamic Theory -Trait Theory -Learning Theory -Humanistic Theory -Sociocultural k. consists of five major personality factors which are reasonably stable elements of personality. These factors include extraversion, agreeableness, conscientiousness, neuroticism, ...
April 20, 2008 by rose - Ms. Sue

British Lit
Inverted word order, unclear pronouns, and variable spellings are characteristics of what type of English? A.Old English B.Elizabethan English C. Middle English
December 1, 2009 by Maggie May

English
Is this a strong thesis statement: Ms Gilman captures the struggle of the narrator as she provides evidence of the journey of the narrator’s changing mental state that is not just about a woman losing her sanity but of a woman who is suffering from a feeling of entrapment ...
February 18, 2007 by Laura

Business Communications
Choose the best revision of this sentence: "I want an interview with you." (Points: 5) I anxiously await a phone call from you so that we can meet to discuss job opportunities. I can't wait to hear from you. Any time at all that you want to call and have me for an interview, I...
December 4, 2010 by lisa

english - third revision
When evaluating online sources, one of the points to remember is that all information listed on the internet is not reliable. In essence, when reading this blog titled "The Nation," I cannot determine that the information is reliable because the source, author and credentials ...
April 17, 2008 by Rose- Ms. Sue

English
You are perfectly right. I wanted to add these sentences, too. I really need your revision. 1) We must remember past atrocities but at the same time we must do something against them. It is for this reason that our school has decided to embark on a European project involving a...
January 26, 2012 by Henry2

English Expressions
ex) She is an English teacher. English teacher is a compound noun. When we stress the first noun, 'English', it means that she teaches English as a teacher. However, when we stress 'teacher', 'English' is used as an adjective. In this case, 'English teacher' means a teacher ...
April 12, 2008 by John

com220
In seeking to improve written documents, writers revise, edit and proofread. In revising, writers look at the big picture, whereas in editing and proofreading, they target to the mechanical aspects of the writing. In writing, what might the "big picture" entail? 2. Why might ...
November 19, 2008 by anonymoys

chemistry - structure and properties (help)
I have a revision question which i do not understand please help me out: 45. Explain the following observations: motor oil pours from a can more slowly than water; however, in a jar, the meniscus of motor oil is flatter than the meniscus of water. The answer sheet talks about ...
June 8, 2011 by Farah

Chemistry (Check)
Completion 1)Metric 2)Five 3)Meter 4) 5)Weight The International System of Units (SI) is a revision of the ___1____ system. There are __2____ SI base units. In SI, the base unit of length is the ___3____. The Space taken up by a cube that is 10cm on each edge is one __4___. A ...
January 18, 2007 by Bryan

English
I left out a few more sentences I wrote on castles. I need a synonym for "ways, way" and a revision of sentence 2. Thank you very much. 1) Castles came to Britain with the Norman-French invaders. Indeed, castles were a key part of their way of controlling new territories. 2) ...
September 5, 2011 by Henry2

sentence revision
As I was looking at the map on the screen and realized my destination of my new home was REACHING closer, the flight attendant’s announcement CAME on, “Ladies and gentlemen, we ask that you remain seated and fasten your seatbelt. We will be landing shortly at the San Francisco...
October 1, 2007 by Anonymous

Resources and references
You've been asked to help with the revision of your organization's policy manual. As you edit the document, you're wondering whether or not several word choices are correct. For example, you don't know whether you should you use "alright" or "all right," "theater" or "theatre...
June 26, 2013 by Sofiya

English
I really need your help to find a very simple science book in English which helps non-native English speakers to talk about biodiversity in water and water ways in English. Thank you.
January 5, 2012 by Henry2

eth-revision
What differentiates the act of grouping people from the act of stereotyping? Grouping people is the process of uniting them into a group in terms of similarities. Therefore, stereotypes are usually based on assumption or generalization that someone makes on the characteristics...
June 16, 2008 by rose -Ms. Sue

english
Identify the problems in the following paragraph and revise. Keep in mind that in revision, you don’t necessarily use or keep only the sentences there. You may have to add words, phrases, and even a sentence or two. The Gateway Arch in St. Louis is a 630-foot stainless steel ...
June 25, 2007 by Jess

english
I wrote an essay for English but now we are doing revision techniques to fix it up. The first thing was to take a sentence and make it parallel. I took this sentence: Focusing on the next point, I hit the ball powerfully over the net over and over again in an attempt to ...
November 10, 2006 by Anonymous

psy -revision
match -Psychodynamic Theory -Trait Theory -Learning Theory -Humanistic Theory -Sociocultural k. consists of five major personality factors which are reasonably stable elements of personality. These factors include extraversion, agreeableness, conscientiousness, neuroticism, ...
April 20, 2008 by rose - Ms. Sue

Essay(online banking) Revision Please
Online banking apply computer technology for us to avoid time-consuming, paper-based features of usual banks to take care of finances more quickly and efficiently. Banks consider online banking is prevailing tool to attract and maintain new consumers, and reducing costly paper...
November 25, 2006 by Gurv

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Revision of the second paragraph: "Leisure time is another one of my favorite things about summer. It brings me happiness beyond belief. It enables me to spend time with my family, to take part in the things they wish to do. It enables me to live life without the worry of ...
April 5, 2014 by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Revision of second paragraph: "Liesure time is another one of my favorite things about summer. It brings me happiness beyond belief. It enables me to spend time with my family, to take part in the things they wish to do. It enables me to live life without the worry of ...
April 6, 2014 by Victoria

English
He is a good English speaker. He speaks English well. He is good at speaking English. (Are they all the same?)
May 24, 2009 by John

English grammar
Thank you. Would you let me know good websites where we can learn English with videos? Are there any sites where we can study English with subtitles?
December 10, 2007 by John

english
Can someone check my english essay. 700 words. I have English as 2nd language
September 20, 2013 by Jon

english
what does this old english mean in modern english goldsele gumena, gearwost wisse,
October 26, 2009 by kate

English
Does anyone know of a website that translates english into the shakespearean language? I can only find websites that translate shakespeare to modern english.
January 11, 2010 by Morgan

English
Writeacher, I used one of the website you suggested to me. I made a few changes and I need your revision. In particular question 2 1) What is Siem Reap like and why do most people visit Siem Reap? (It is a small town near the world famous... People visit it because it is a ...
April 2, 2012 by Matthew

6th grade
I want help in english grammer & to write some letter, dairynotes, comprehension or I can say the basic english sentences . Can u help me up to improve my english?
October 1, 2010 by Shourya

English
1) Minimize versus minimise. Which is UK English & which is US English? 2) After cleaning, all waste must be properly disposed of. Is this sentence acceptable?
October 16, 2010 by ann

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