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English
What is the relationship between revision and content? A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content with sources. C. Revision makes sure all content is relevant. D. Content connects revised sentences together. Is it hmmmm wow well is it C Ms. Sue or...
Friday, April 26, 2013 at 4:59pm by Ms. Sue Please Help (Sandy)

English
what is meant by revision and what are the important steps in the revision process?
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 11:54pm by Anonymous

Maths Revision
Does anyone know of any websites where I might be able to find a set of GCSE maths revision notes or anywhere I could purchase some revision notes? It would be a big help if someone could help me! Thank you Sam
Tuesday, November 6, 2007 at 8:08am by sam

REVISION
what good websites are there that help with science and maths revision? I have tried Google but there is nothing that has interested me. Also the websites, which are a good source of revision i.e. Bite size etc. Are already what I am using. I have asked around but there no one...
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 at 3:37pm by Anonymous

BUSINESS
I agree, c is the least important during the revision, you do it after revision.
Sunday, May 30, 2010 at 9:05pm by bobpursley

Writing
I just took the test, and the answers are Revision, and Tone. I'm 100% positive. I got the revision one wrong... I thought it was organization. :S Oh well.
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 10:12pm by Holly

English
Study these definitions. http://definitions.dictionary.net/revision
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Ms. Sue

Business communication
I have to revise these sentences as if speaking to a 10th grade level in education. Can you tell me if these are correct: 1. We must terminate all deficit financing. Revision: We need to end all debts. 2. We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. ...
Monday, March 5, 2012 at 8:00pm by Sue

science
does anyone know any science revision games about mr mcluthon i need to use it for my revision but can`t find them . thanks
Friday, May 16, 2008 at 8:02am by ANON

REVISION
any revision websites that you know of???
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 at 3:37pm by Anonymous

REVISION
any revision websites that you know of???
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 at 3:37pm by Anonymous

com220
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?
Thursday, November 20, 2008 at 7:29pm by anonymoys

business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...
Thursday, February 9, 2012 at 7:53pm by sososola2012

english
revision is??
Wednesday, October 20, 2010 at 11:08am by danny

English
revision
Saturday, July 11, 2009 at 9:08am by Anonymous

English
I agree with Writeacher's comments. This is too rough to edit. YOu need to revise, revise, revise. But one thing puzzles me, the essay seems to not have a clear thread, but easily could have a clear moral. Work on that, making clear what you want the essay to say. Thoreau ...
Tuesday, July 7, 2009 at 9:38am by bobpursley

english revision, editing
Thank you so much :)
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Anonymous

English
We'll be happy to check your revision.
Wednesday, April 4, 2012 at 10:04am by Writeacher

english - revision
Sorry, but what is your question here?
Sunday, March 30, 2008 at 9:23pm by SraJMcGin

english - third revision
Good. :-)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Ms. Sue

english - third revision
You're welcome, Rose.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Ms. Sue

english - revision
This is much better. :-)
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:43pm by Ms. Sue

english - final revision
Thanks.
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:38pm by rose - Ms. Sue

English
We'll be glad to check your revision.
Monday, February 1, 2010 at 5:15pm by Ms. Sue

Grammar and Composition
Hi, I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i ...
Wednesday, November 4, 2009 at 10:22am by y912f

english - after revision
Great, Rose! :-)
Monday, April 14, 2008 at 10:32pm by Ms. Sue

english - final revision
Good job! :-)
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:38pm by Ms. Sue

english - revision
Good work, to the point, and on target.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by bobpursley

English
In one to two sentences, define revision
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Anonymous

english
Are you asking if the sentence has correct grammar? If so, no revision is required.
Friday, May 17, 2013 at 9:18am by Kate

REVISION
You might find what you need here. http://www.google.com/webhp?source=search_app#q=uk+revision+guides
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 at 3:37pm by Ms. Sue

Geog tectonics
please could someone give me a link for tectonic activity revision. Is this what you're looking for? http://geobytesgcse.blogspot.com/2007/01/plate-tectonics-revision.html yes. thank you for your help!
Tuesday, March 20, 2007 at 3:35pm by sam

English
No problem! I'm pleased with the corrections/revision you made. That is GREAT!!
Saturday, September 3, 2011 at 1:31pm by Writeacher

English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 9:02pm by rose- revision-

Science-English
Yes, your revision of that sentence is correct. Now ... how will you fix "alot"??
Monday, April 6, 2009 at 5:56pm by Writeacher

English
Now it's your turn. We'll be glad to check your revision of this sentence.
Thursday, April 29, 2010 at 12:34pm by Ms. Sue

English revision, editing
You're welcome! If you don't understand why I made the corrections/revisions I did, be sure to ask.
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Writeacher

english
The subject is plural, but the verb is singular. What is your correction and revision?
Tuesday, January 17, 2012 at 10:33pm by Ms. Sue

english - revision
I am of the race Caucasian, and for ethnic group: WASP, with the P meaning Evangelical.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by bobpursley

English
Excellent!!! Now how will you alter your outline to support that statement. What a good revision!! =)
Sunday, February 6, 2011 at 6:07pm by Writeacher

English
Revision is the changing and organizing of the contents in order to communicate the writers topic.
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Anonymous

English revision, editing
Also don't use a hyphen for the term "fairy tales."
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Writeacher

Revision
Can you please give me advice and tips on revising for a formal English essay?
Thursday, November 7, 2013 at 2:33pm by Anonymous

english-final revision
You're very welcome, Rose! Thanks -- and have a great Easter, also.
Saturday, March 22, 2008 at 5:18pm by Ms. Sue

English
Select the answer that does NOT make the following sentence true. The editing process: A. does not apply the practices of standard English B. follows revision of your draft C. includes the accuracy of grammar, mechanics, and spelling. D. puts the finishing touching on your ...
Friday, April 8, 2011 at 7:18pm by anthony

English
GuruBlue is correct that it's better if you rephrase it. As you wrote it, it's a run-on, but it isn't smoothly fixed without revision.
Monday, March 24, 2008 at 3:03pm by Writeacher

english -final revision
This looks good, Rose. The only correction is to omit "that are" in the second paragraph.
Wednesday, April 2, 2008 at 10:32pm by Ms. Sue

Parable revision
It's just one brother. I meant to say "while taking over her home"
Friday, November 20, 2009 at 2:30pm by English Lit

english revision, editing
Another kind of story people pass on are fairytales. <-Your subject and verb do not agree.
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Anonymous

English
When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _____phase. a)organization b)revision c)writing d)outline
Saturday, July 11, 2009 at 9:08am by Anonymous

Business English
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company. Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
Thursday, October 17, 2013 at 7:42pm by Michelle

Grammar
What revision will correct the sentence? "Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the should be capitalized. B. The period after began should be changed to a comma. C. The word to should be capitalized. D. No revision is needed. i think it...
Wednesday, May 1, 2013 at 4:01pm by bubbie

English
What are all your choices for the second question? The one you chose sounds OK, but without seeing the others, it's impossible to tell if it's "the best revision."
Thursday, June 19, 2008 at 7:02pm by Writeacher

english-final revision
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great easter. Rose
Saturday, March 22, 2008 at 5:18pm by rose

English
Your revision is good -- you've changed that last one so you have "parallel" verbs: learn, adapt, be Your sentence will be better if you put a comma after "circumstances."
Wednesday, June 30, 2010 at 7:01am by Writeacher

statistics
Danny or Yadira, I enjoy answering your questions, and I understand that you need help when you have complex problems. It is perhaps time to do some revision and work out some of the fundamental definitions. The work will pay off at exam time. I suggest you show us your ...
Tuesday, August 18, 2009 at 3:08pm by MathMate

English
It's stilted and filled with technical jargon that the normal person will not understand. It's also very convoluted in wording, as we can see by the whole sentences that need complete revision.
Tuesday, September 24, 2013 at 10:01am by Writeacher

English
When preparing a formal business presentation the phase that can make or break your report is the ----phase. A. writing B. outline C. revision D. organization Answer (c )
Sunday, March 25, 2012 at 8:06pm by Brenna

Literature (revision)
yes that looks about right..I hate my English III teacher lol... Mine puts on too much MAKEUP!!! Also she makes us use twitter like wtf.
Friday, December 7, 2007 at 9:42pm by ______

essay
Here are some excellent sites for ideas on essay revision. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=ISO-8859-1&q=Essay+Revision&btnG=Google+Search&aq=f&oq=&aqi=
Tuesday, July 14, 2009 at 7:06am by GuruBlue

English J.B.
Here a huge number of sites that will help you with J.B. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=UTF-8&q=j.b.+macleish&revid=1888846220&sa=X&oi=revisions_inline&resnum=0&ct=revision&cd=1 A metaphor is a comparison. After you go through some of these, if you have further ...
Thursday, February 21, 2008 at 5:58pm by GuruBlue

English
Thank you:)I don't have to teach them both at the same time.Next week I have to teach them the alphabet.It is actually a revision.
Saturday, March 28, 2009 at 8:47am by mir

English
Please check my answer thsnks :) When preparing a formal business presentaion, the phase that can make or break your report is the _________ phase. 1 2 revision outline 3 4 organization writing I picked 3
Sunday, November 11, 2007 at 1:33am by Anonymous

physics!!!! Monkey & hunter
http://waowen.screaming.net/revision/force&motion/mandh.htm Do it virtually. My experience is that this cannot be easily done without an electromagnet
Friday, September 12, 2008 at 5:35pm by bobpursley

English
Here is a good place to begin: http://www.google.com/search?q=revision+process&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a Sra
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 11:54pm by SraJMcGin

second revision - English
You apparently misunderstood my italicized comments at the end of the first paragraph. Why do you consider the "Wikipedia" article unreliable? Citing data from different sources does not make it unreliable.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:20pm by Ms. Sue

English
All are fine except the last sentence. Only YOU can regret something that you did. People don't "regret" what other people do. Here's a revision: She was disappointed that I had missed...
Monday, December 12, 2011 at 11:40am by Writeacher

Business
Actually, you'd need four rows and five columns! See if this opens for you: http://docs.google.com/View?docID=0ASgCKUJJfasKZGZ2cmcyOGpfOTRjdDl2c2JoYg&revision=_latest&hgd=1
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 12:15pm by Writeacher

English
I would delete "in" in #8. In #12, the word in the blank would be "speak" not "speaking." If you wanted all the answers to be -ing verb forms, this sentence needs revision. All else is fine.
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 7:48pm by Writeacher

English
13. When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _______ phase. A. outline B. revision C. organization D. writing I selected (D) for the answer, is this the correct answer?
Monday, December 19, 2011 at 6:03pm by Sis

Writing
I'm stuck on 2 questions and could use a little help please! First question is When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the_______ phase. A. organization B. revision C. writing D. outline I think it is revision but I'am not...
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 10:12pm by Shaenna

English
You revise after writing your first (and maybe later) draft. Revision is making sure the CONTENT of your paper is good -- organization and sequence of ideas; wording; etc. Proofreading is when you take care of the grammar and usage issues -- spelling, capitals, punctuation, etc.
Wednesday, October 20, 2010 at 11:08am by Writeacher

English
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language ...
Wednesday, February 3, 2010 at 2:45pm by Robin

science
Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. Sorry, but your post is not clear. If the Mr Mcluthon is the name of your teacher, NEVER give any personal names, information, etc. online as it is not safe. If, however you are asking for science revision games, try the ...
Friday, May 16, 2008 at 8:02am by SraJMcGin

english - after revision
Thank you! Ms. Sue.
Monday, April 14, 2008 at 10:32pm by rose - Ms. Sue

english - third revision
thank you Ms. Sue.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Rose- Ms. Sue

English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Great!
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 9:02pm by Ms. Sue

english - revision
Ms. Sue, I am lost.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by rose -Ms. Sue

business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
Thursday, February 9, 2012 at 7:28pm by sososola2012

Micro Economics
You will find tha correct answer by reading http://tutor2u.net/economics/revision-notes/as-markets-scarcity-and-choice.html
Saturday, February 14, 2009 at 12:43pm by drwls

ENGLISH : Types of business writing
All looks good in your latest revision except for one word -- it should read "in room 200" -- and one comma that needs to be removed -- the one after "would you" -- nice job.
Tuesday, April 3, 2012 at 7:51am by Writeacher

Com 220
These sites will be useful to you. http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/revision.html http://academic.brooklyn.cuny.edu/english/melani/cs6/revise.html http://www.dartmouth.edu/~writing/materials/student/ac_paper/revise.shtml
Tuesday, October 21, 2008 at 11:05am by Ms. Sue

English
1. Storm damage to water filtration plant #3 caused it to shut down. This revision eliminates "minimal" and "temporarily," which are undefined. It would be better if these words were used more precisely. 2. All customers qualify for a discount. You try the others. I'll be glad...
Friday, January 13, 2012 at 12:20pm by Ms. Sue

English Research Project Information - Sadako
Also, try some of these sites. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=UTF-8&q=sadako+sasaki&revid=266513091&ei=RFimS6DlIYaVtgf_oPnfAw&sa=X&oi=revisions_inline&resnum=0&ct=broad-revision&cd=3&ved=0CC0Q1QIoAg
Sunday, March 21, 2010 at 12:33pm by Ms. Sue

Revision
it's ok
Thursday, November 7, 2013 at 2:33pm by Anonymous

In Science Plant Quiz
I don't know if this is the site you want. http://www.woodlands-junior.kent.sch.uk/revision/Science/plants.html
Wednesday, October 22, 2008 at 6:09pm by Ms. Sue

English
Only #1 is correct. All the others are run-ons. Read each one aloud (or ask someone else to read each one aloud to you) until the first sentence clearly ends. That should indicate to you where you need to make a division and/or revision.
Friday, April 29, 2011 at 9:22pm by Writeacher

com220
Here are a couple of sites with excellent suggestions on how to go about revising a paper. http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/revision.html http://academic.brooklyn.cuny.edu/english/melani/cs6/revise.html A couple of suggestions I give my students a) Have someone read it ...
Sunday, August 16, 2009 at 4:48pm by GuruBlue

English
This site may give you some ideas. http://images.google.com/images?gbv=2&hl=en&ie=UTF-8&q=perfume+ads&revid=376634661&ei=qEEVS_vfMdCRlAfo7PijBQ&sa=X&oi=revisions_inline&resnum=0&ct=broad-revision&cd=4 You'll want to keep your poster simple, but dramatic. I also suggest you ...
Tuesday, December 1, 2009 at 11:15am by Ms. Sue

Science
http://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/ks3/science/energy_electricity_forces/energy_transfer_storage/revision/1/
Wednesday, September 11, 2013 at 3:09pm by Ms. Sue

Revision
thank you so much!!!
Thursday, November 7, 2013 at 2:33pm by Anonymous

REVISION.anyone????
please help
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 at 3:37pm by Anonymous

English
Here's a revision. One thing you can do to make your writing better is to start combining ideas so there aren't so many short sentences. During summer vacation, I went by car to Spo1 Park. I enjoyed swimming in the pool there and learned how to do the backstroke. It is not ...
Saturday, August 28, 2010 at 6:04am by Writeacher

english
#1 is correct as it's originally written; you don't need to do anything. If you plan to keep your revision, though, be sure to delete that comma. #2 looks fine. #3 looks fine except you should delete the comma before "because."
Friday, November 30, 2007 at 10:35pm by Writeacher

english
AllyKat's quote from Wikipedia is correct. Your sentence: Some organisms aren't trying to be mean, they're just doing what needs to be done to survive. Your comma splice is is an incorrect comma between the two independent clauses. How do you think you can correct this ...
Wednesday, October 17, 2007 at 9:55pm by Ms. Sue

BUSINESS
I agree, revision.
Sunday, May 30, 2010 at 9:01pm by bobpursley

psy-final revision
You are right. Thanks for asking.
Sunday, April 20, 2008 at 10:51pm by PsyDAG

psy - final revision
You're welcome. :-)
Tuesday, May 20, 2008 at 10:13pm by Ms. Sue

language please check my work
Your revision is ok.
Wednesday, April 14, 2010 at 6:19pm by bobpursley

6th grade spelling
would #5 be revision?
Monday, November 7, 2011 at 5:49pm by Mickey

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