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english - final revision
Thanks.
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:38pm by rose - Ms. Sue
english - final revision
Good job! :-)
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:38pm by Ms. Sue
English
What is the relationship between revision and content? A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content with sources. C. Revision makes sure all content is relevant. D. Content connects revised sentences together. Is it hmmmm wow well is it C Ms. Sue or...
Friday, April 26, 2013 at 4:59pm by Ms. Sue Please Help (Sandy)
english-final revision
You're very welcome, Rose! Thanks -- and have a great Easter, also.
Saturday, March 22, 2008 at 5:18pm by Ms. Sue
business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...
Thursday, February 9, 2012 at 7:53pm by sososola2012
English
what is meant by revision and what are the important steps in the revision process?
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 11:54pm by Anonymous
english -final revision
This looks good, Rose. The only correction is to omit "that are" in the second paragraph.
Wednesday, April 2, 2008 at 10:32pm by Ms. Sue
english-final revision
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great easter. Rose
Saturday, March 22, 2008 at 5:18pm by rose
Grammar and Composition
Hi, I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i ...
Wednesday, November 4, 2009 at 10:22am by y912f
English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 9:02pm by rose- revision-
psy - final revision
You're welcome. :-)
Tuesday, May 20, 2008 at 10:13pm by Ms. Sue
psy-final revision
You are right. Thanks for asking.
Sunday, April 20, 2008 at 10:51pm by PsyDAG
final revision
How could you deal with new sources of stress?
Tuesday, April 22, 2008 at 8:59pm by josh
English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Great!
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 9:02pm by Ms. Sue
business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
Thursday, February 9, 2012 at 7:28pm by sososola2012
Maths Revision
Does anyone know of any websites where I might be able to find a set of GCSE maths revision notes or anywhere I could purchase some revision notes? It would be a big help if someone could help me! Thank you Sam
Tuesday, November 6, 2007 at 8:08am by sam
BUSINESS
I agree, c is the least important during the revision, you do it after revision.
Sunday, May 30, 2010 at 9:05pm by bobpursley
English
2) Which of the following is the best revision of sentence 5? A) The predictable fallout from the move may well have been the final nail in Carter’s political coffin. B) The predictable reaction against the move may well have driven the final nail into Carter’s ...
Thursday, June 19, 2008 at 7:02pm by Rose
Writing
I just took the test, and the answers are Revision, and Tone. I'm 100% positive. I got the revision one wrong... I thought it was organization. :S Oh well.
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 10:12pm by Holly
psy - final revision
Rose -- this is 98% better! :-) The only problem is that you still have a sentence fragment in the fourth paragraph.
Tuesday, May 20, 2008 at 10:13pm by Ms. Sue
English
Study these definitions. http://definitions.dictionary.net/revision
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Ms. Sue
Business communication
I have to revise these sentences as if speaking to a 10th grade level in education. Can you tell me if these are correct: 1. We must terminate all deficit financing. Revision: We need to end all debts. 2. We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. ...
Monday, March 5, 2012 at 8:00pm by Sue
science
does anyone know any science revision games about mr mcluthon i need to use it for my revision but can`t find them . thanks
Friday, May 16, 2008 at 8:02am by ANON
com220
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?
Thursday, November 20, 2008 at 7:29pm by anonymoys
English
revision
Saturday, July 11, 2009 at 9:08am by Anonymous
english
revision is??
Wednesday, October 20, 2010 at 11:08am by danny
English
I agree with Writeacher's comments. This is too rough to edit. YOu need to revise, revise, revise. But one thing puzzles me, the essay seems to not have a clear thread, but easily could have a clear moral. Work on that, making clear what you want the essay to say. Thoreau...
Tuesday, July 7, 2009 at 9:38am by bobpursley
English
We'll be happy to check your revision.
Wednesday, April 4, 2012 at 10:04am by Writeacher
english revision, editing
Thank you so much :)
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Anonymous
English
We'll be glad to check your revision.
Monday, February 1, 2010 at 5:15pm by Ms. Sue
english - revision
This is much better. :-)
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:43pm by Ms. Sue
english - third revision
You're welcome, Rose.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Ms. Sue
english - third revision
Good. :-)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Ms. Sue
english - revision
Sorry, but what is your question here?
Sunday, March 30, 2008 at 9:23pm by SraJMcGin
english
Are you asking if the sentence has correct grammar? If so, no revision is required.
Friday, May 17, 2013 at 9:18am by Kate
English
In one to two sentences, define revision
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Anonymous
english - revision
Good work, to the point, and on target.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by bobpursley
english - after revision
Great, Rose! :-)
Monday, April 14, 2008 at 10:32pm by Ms. Sue
Geog tectonics
please could someone give me a link for tectonic activity revision. Is this what you're looking for? http://geobytesgcse.blogspot.com/2007/01/plate-tectonics-revision.html yes. thank you for your help!
Tuesday, March 20, 2007 at 3:35pm by sam
English
No problem! I'm pleased with the corrections/revision you made. That is GREAT!!
Saturday, September 3, 2011 at 1:31pm by Writeacher
english
The subject is plural, but the verb is singular. What is your correction and revision?
Tuesday, January 17, 2012 at 10:33pm by Ms. Sue
English revision, editing
You're welcome! If you don't understand why I made the corrections/revisions I did, be sure to ask.
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Writeacher
English
Now it's your turn. We'll be glad to check your revision of this sentence.
Thursday, April 29, 2010 at 12:34pm by Ms. Sue
Science-English
Yes, your revision of that sentence is correct. Now ... how will you fix "alot"??
Monday, April 6, 2009 at 5:56pm by Writeacher
research and paper revision
Feedback is the information you receive from your instructor and your peers. You should use the feedback that you feel is right and important. If the feedback seems irrelevant, do not incorporate it in your final paper.
Saturday, September 13, 2008 at 8:01pm by Ms. Sue
Social Studies
http://www.revision-notes.co.uk/revision/836.html http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/League_of_Nations
Tuesday, October 21, 2008 at 1:16pm by Ms. Sue
English revision, editing
Also don't use a hyphen for the term "fairy tales."
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Writeacher
English
Revision is the changing and organizing of the contents in order to communicate the writers topic.
Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 6:59pm by Anonymous
English
Excellent!!! Now how will you alter your outline to support that statement. What a good revision!! =)
Sunday, February 6, 2011 at 6:07pm by Writeacher
english - revision
I am of the race Caucasian, and for ethnic group: WASP, with the P meaning Evangelical.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by bobpursley
Language Arts
Here is a site on peer revision: http://www.madison.k12.ky.us/district/projects/webquest/Emily/revision.htm Sra
Tuesday, May 5, 2009 at 7:26pm by SraJMcGin
English
Select the answer that does NOT make the following sentence true. The editing process: A. does not apply the practices of standard English B. follows revision of your draft C. includes the accuracy of grammar, mechanics, and spelling. D. puts the finishing touching on your ...
Friday, April 8, 2011 at 7:18pm by anthony
English
GuruBlue is correct that it's better if you rephrase it. As you wrote it, it's a run-on, but it isn't smoothly fixed without revision.
Monday, March 24, 2008 at 3:03pm by Writeacher
english revision, editing
Another kind of story people pass on are fairytales. <-Your subject and verb do not agree.
Tuesday, December 27, 2011 at 7:38am by Anonymous
Parable revision
It's just one brother. I meant to say "while taking over her home"
Friday, November 20, 2009 at 2:30pm by English Lit
English Improving writing
Think of the rough draft, revised copy, and final copy as the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd drafts of your paper. You can have more than that if you want, but according to your assignment, you cannot have fewer. Did you revise your 1st draft to make your 2nd draft? Then did you revise ...
Friday, June 20, 2008 at 6:12pm by Writeacher
writing
These two sites should get you started. http://www.revision-notes.co.uk/revision/961.html http://zenpundit.blogspot.com/2005/04/understanding-cognition-part-ii.html
Monday, February 4, 2008 at 9:17pm by Ms. Sue
literature
Here are some sites which may be of help. However, before I can give you specific ideas, I would need to know what kind of project. Look at the themes and motifs section of this site. Setting is extremely important to the message of this play. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/...
Friday, March 13, 2009 at 12:33pm by GuruBlue
psy - final revision
Thanks a lot ms. sue. Rose
Tuesday, May 20, 2008 at 10:13pm by rose- Ms. sue
Grammar
What revision will correct the sentence? "Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the should be capitalized. B. The period after began should be changed to a comma. C. The word to should be capitalized. D. No revision ...
Wednesday, May 1, 2013 at 4:01pm by bubbie
English
When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _____phase. a)organization b)revision c)writing d)outline
Saturday, July 11, 2009 at 9:08am by Anonymous
psy # 5- final revision
Are you sure his heart problems are caused by stress? Shouldn't he see a medical doctor first to determine the cause of the heart problems? Then, if the cause is stress, then the rest of your advice is good. You could also suggest some stress-relieving ideas for him to try.
Saturday, June 7, 2008 at 4:58pm by Ms. Sue
English
What are all your choices for the second question? The one you chose sounds OK, but without seeing the others, it's impossible to tell if it's "the best revision."
Thursday, June 19, 2008 at 7:02pm by Writeacher
Engineering
use fomular P*v=n*R*T cause temperature and volumn not change: n(initial)=(P(initial)*V)/(R*T) n(final)=(P(final)*V)/(R*T) we want the final n, therefore: n(final)=P(final)*n(initial)/P(initial) =5.3*1.2/28.5=0.223
Friday, November 5, 2010 at 7:16pm by Calypso
English
Your revision is good -- you've changed that last one so you have "parallel" verbs: learn, adapt, be Your sentence will be better if you put a comma after "circumstances."
Wednesday, June 30, 2010 at 7:01am by Writeacher
statistics
Danny or Yadira, I enjoy answering your questions, and I understand that you need help when you have complex problems. It is perhaps time to do some revision and work out some of the fundamental definitions. The work will pay off at exam time. I suggest you show us your ...
Tuesday, August 18, 2009 at 3:08pm by MathMate
psy # 5- final revision
You have not indicated what other symptoms beside "chest pains" Micheal is exhibiting to diagnose him as having an anxiety disorder. This might allow you to determine whether consulting a physician is needed (as suggested by Ms.Sue). Usually medical consultation is ...
Saturday, June 7, 2008 at 4:58pm by PsyDAG
eng4u
Check these sites for ideas. Then, if you want to post your dialogue, we'll be happy to critique it for you. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/salesman/ http://www.revision-notes.co.uk/revision/16.html http://www.gradesaver.com/classicnotes/titles/salesman/
Saturday, January 12, 2008 at 11:13am by Ms. Sue
working with data
josephs final averages in science class are shown in the table below. homework % toward final grade-20% average-93 quizzes % toward final grade-20% average-92 tests % toward final grade-40% average-85 final exam % toward final grade-20% average-? what is the minimum score ...
Sunday, February 24, 2008 at 4:45pm by mike
sociology
Michael the final is in combination with the eth class, which is also a hard final, that's the final I need help with. The com 215 final is a power point presentation. I can't wait to get to an accounting class.
Thursday, July 20, 2006 at 7:06am by chrislm
English
When preparing a formal business presentation the phase that can make or break your report is the ----phase. A. writing B. outline C. revision D. organization Answer (c )
Sunday, March 25, 2012 at 8:06pm by Brenna
psy-final revision
match -Psychodynamic Theory -Trait Theory -Learning Theory -Humanistic Theory -Sociocultural k. consists of five major personality factors which are reasonably stable elements of personality. These factors include extraversion, agreeableness, conscientiousness, neuroticism, ...
Sunday, April 20, 2008 at 10:51pm by rose - Ms. Sue
Literature (revision)
yes that looks about right..I hate my English III teacher lol... Mine puts on too much MAKEUP!!! Also she makes us use twitter like wtf.
Friday, December 7, 2007 at 9:42pm by ______
essay
Here are some excellent sites for ideas on essay revision. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=ISO-8859-1&q=Essay+Revision&btnG=Google+Search&aq=f&oq=&aqi=
Tuesday, July 14, 2009 at 7:06am by GuruBlue
English
I left out the following sentences. Thank you. - Documentation of the activities taking place in France - Publication on websites - Preparation of the final report/film Participation: local environmental days Final meeting - Presenting final report and film - Press conference...
Thursday, February 9, 2012 at 12:38pm by Henry2
English J.B.
Here a huge number of sites that will help you with J.B. http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=UTF-8&q=j.b.+macleish&revid=1888846220&sa=X&oi=revisions_inline&resnum=0&ct=revision&cd=1 A metaphor is a comparison. After you go through some of ...
Thursday, February 21, 2008 at 5:58pm by GuruBlue
English
Thank you:)I don't have to teach them both at the same time.Next week I have to teach them the alphabet.It is actually a revision.
Saturday, March 28, 2009 at 8:47am by mir
English
Please check my answer thsnks :) When preparing a formal business presentaion, the phase that can make or break your report is the _________ phase. 1 2 revision outline 3 4 organization writing I picked 3
Sunday, November 11, 2007 at 1:33am by Anonymous
physics!!!! Monkey & hunter
http://waowen.screaming.net/revision/force&motion/mandh.htm Do it virtually. My experience is that this cannot be easily done without an electromagnet
Friday, September 12, 2008 at 5:35pm by bobpursley
Physics please check
Three moles of an ideal monatomic gas are at a temperature of 345 K. Then, 2531 J of heat are added to the gas, and 1101 J of work are done on it. What is the final temperature of the gas? delta U= 3/2nR(T final -T initial) (2531J - 1101J) = 3/2(3.0mol)(8.31)(T final - 345K) ...
Sunday, April 15, 2007 at 10:19pm by Mary
English
Here is a good place to begin: http://www.google.com/search?q=revision+process&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a Sra
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 11:54pm by SraJMcGin
second revision - English
You apparently misunderstood my italicized comments at the end of the first paragraph. Why do you consider the "Wikipedia" article unreliable? Citing data from different sources does not make it unreliable.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:20pm by Ms. Sue
Physics please check repost
Three moles of an ideal monatomic gas are at a temperature of 345 K. Then, 2531 J of heat are added to the gas, and 1101 J of work are done on it. What is the final temperature of the gas? delta U= 3/2nR(T final -T initial) (2531J - 1101J) = 3/2(3.0mol)(8.31)(T final - 345K) ...
Sunday, April 15, 2007 at 2:04pm by Mary
physics
Final K.E. = (spring potential energy) + (gravitational P.E. loss) - (friction work done) Get the final velocity from the final K.E.
Tuesday, June 12, 2012 at 2:53pm by drwls
English
All are fine except the last sentence. Only YOU can regret something that you did. People don't "regret" what other people do. Here's a revision: She was disappointed that I had missed...
Monday, December 12, 2011 at 11:40am by Writeacher
English
(1) When Congress passed the Federal Reserve Act of 1913, it gave the Federal Reserve Board a free hand in steering the economy. (2) The President, while charged with appointing the chair and board members, has no direct role to play in the Board’s policy decisions. (3) ...
Thursday, June 19, 2008 at 7:02pm by Rose
English - Ms. Sue
You're welcome. A final thought -- After the final death of Eurydice, Orpheus turned away from the company of people and eventually was killed.
Monday, February 20, 2012 at 7:35pm by Ms. Sue
Business
Actually, you'd need four rows and five columns! See if this opens for you: http://docs.google.com/View?docID=0ASgCKUJJfasKZGZ2cmcyOGpfOTRjdDl2c2JoYg&revision=_latest&hgd=1
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 12:15pm by Writeacher
chem
You shouldn't have any trouble. Final molarity = final moles/final liters of solution. Post your work or detailed questions if you get stuck.
Sunday, April 26, 2009 at 4:05pm by DrBob222
English
13. When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _______ phase. A. outline B. revision C. organization D. writing I selected (D) for the answer, is this the correct answer?
Monday, December 19, 2011 at 6:03pm by Sis
English
I would delete "in" in #8. In #12, the word in the blank would be "speak" not "speaking." If you wanted all the answers to be -ing verb forms, this sentence needs revision. All else is fine.
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 7:48pm by Writeacher
Writing
I'm stuck on 2 questions and could use a little help please! First question is When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the_______ phase. A. organization B. revision C. writing D. outline I think it is revision but I&#...
Thursday, August 13, 2009 at 10:12pm by Shaenna
English
You revise after writing your first (and maybe later) draft. Revision is making sure the CONTENT of your paper is good -- organization and sequence of ideas; wording; etc. Proofreading is when you take care of the grammar and usage issues -- spelling, capitals, punctuation, etc.
Wednesday, October 20, 2010 at 11:08am by Writeacher
English
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language...
Wednesday, February 3, 2010 at 2:45pm by Robin
english - revision
Ms. Sue, I am lost.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 7:48pm by rose -Ms. Sue
english - third revision
thank you Ms. Sue.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:39pm by Rose- Ms. Sue
english - after revision
Thank you! Ms. Sue.
Monday, April 14, 2008 at 10:32pm by rose - Ms. Sue
English
Hello all. I speak very little of english. My teacher emailed me this and I wan't to make sure I understand correctly. [The final exam will only cover material since the midterm.] this means that final exam will ONLY cover what we learned after midterm?? so i should be ony...
Tuesday, December 4, 2012 at 2:06pm by Shabihi
Physics
a) Work(total)= Final KE = (50*4+20*2) J = 240J b)Ek = 1/2 mv(final)^2 - 1/2 mv(initial)^2 v(final)^2 = Ek / 1/2 x 2 = 240 J / 1 = 240 V(final)= 15.5 m/s
Thursday, December 3, 2009 at 3:10pm by Madhawa
Physics
I have just recently had to answer a very similar question. My prof. has given me the two general eqns to use: Y(final)=Y(initial)+V(initial)((T(final)-T(initial))+1/2a(T(final)-T(initial))^2 and V(final)=V(initial)+a(T(final)-T(initial)) From there, write down your knowns and...
Monday, September 13, 2010 at 11:33pm by Alura
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