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November 27, 2014

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English
What is the relationship between revision and content? A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content with sources. C. Revision makes sure all content is relevant. D. Content connects revised sentences together. Is it hmmmm wow well is it C Ms. Sue or...
April 26, 2013 by Ms. Sue Please Help (Sandy)

English
what is meant by revision and what are the important steps in the revision process?
June 1, 2009 by Anonymous

Maths Revision
Does anyone know of any websites where I might be able to find a set of GCSE maths revision notes or anywhere I could purchase some revision notes? It would be a big help if someone could help me! Thank you Sam
November 6, 2007 by sam

REVISION
what good websites are there that help with science and maths revision? I have tried Google but there is nothing that has interested me. Also the websites, which are a good source of revision i.e. Bite size etc. Are already what I am using. I have asked around but there no one...
February 4, 2014 by Anonymous

Grammar
What revision will correct the sentence? "Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the should be capitalized. B. The period after began should be changed to a comma. C. The word to should be capitalized. D. No revision is needed. i think it...
May 1, 2013 by bubbie

Business communication
I have to revise these sentences as if speaking to a 10th grade level in education. Can you tell me if these are correct: 1. We must terminate all deficit financing. Revision: We need to end all debts. 2. We must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. ...
March 5, 2012 by Sue

business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012

com220
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?
November 20, 2008 by anonymoys

english
revision is??
October 20, 2010 by danny

science
does anyone know any science revision games about mr mcluthon i need to use it for my revision but can`t find them . thanks
May 16, 2008 by ANON

English
In one to two sentences, define revision
October 11, 2011 by Anonymous

Geog tectonics
please could someone give me a link for tectonic activity revision. Is this what you're looking for? http://geobytesgcse.blogspot.com/2007/01/plate-tectonics-revision.html yes. thank you for your help!
March 20, 2007 by sam

Grammar and Composition
Hi, I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i ...
November 4, 2009 by y912f

english-final revision
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great easter. Rose
March 22, 2008 by rose

Revision
Can you please give me advice and tips on revising for a formal English essay?
November 7, 2013 by Anonymous

English
Select the answer that does NOT make the following sentence true. The editing process: A. does not apply the practices of standard English B. follows revision of your draft C. includes the accuracy of grammar, mechanics, and spelling. D. puts the finishing touching on your ...
April 8, 2011 by anthony

English
When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _____phase. a)organization b)revision c)writing d)outline
July 11, 2009 by Anonymous

Business English
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company. Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
October 17, 2013 by Michelle

English
A word closely associated with altercation is ? A. revision B. Adherent C. Sensible D. Argument I think it is letter B is that right ? Please answer me
April 16, 2014 by Alex

English
When preparing a formal business presentation the phase that can make or break your report is the ----phase. A. writing B. outline C. revision D. organization Answer (c )
March 25, 2012 by Brenna

English
Please check my answer thsnks :) When preparing a formal business presentaion, the phase that can make or break your report is the _________ phase. 1 2 revision outline 3 4 organization writing I picked 3
November 11, 2007 by Anonymous

English
13. When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the _______ phase. A. outline B. revision C. organization D. writing I selected (D) for the answer, is this the correct answer?
December 19, 2011 by Sis

English
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language ...
February 3, 2010 by Robin

business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012

Writing
I'm stuck on 2 questions and could use a little help please! First question is When preparing a formal business presentation, the phase that can make or break your report is the_______ phase. A. organization B. revision C. writing D. outline I think it is revision but I'am not...
August 13, 2009 by Shaenna

english
4. In both the Gettysburg Address and “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” the writers (1 point) comment on the tribulations faced by a nation at war. honor those who have fought for freedom. demand the revision of the nation’s unjust laws. expound on the notion of tolerance for ...
August 13, 2014 by kate

english - after revision
In order to find information for topics that interest me, I will go to the University library. When using different sources such as website, library and articles, it is very important to know that each source has an author and which one is the most valuable and trustworthy. ...
April 14, 2008 by rose - Ms. Sue

biology
i just need this for revision: the formula for photosynthesis and chemosynthesis
September 30, 2007 by Jessica

science
Why you think scientists probably want to leave what they do open to revision?
March 19, 2011 by Edward

English
1) Minimize versus minimise. Which is UK English & which is US English? 2) After cleaning, all waste must be properly disposed of. Is this sentence acceptable?
October 16, 2010 by ann

English
Thank you very much for your revision! I just wanted to know if I can use indirect speech in this rephrase: Then the poet has doubts about the fate of a fair youth. Will he also undergo the ravages of time since sweet and beautiful creatures don't stay that way forever; they ...
February 21, 2012 by Henry2

English redo
Ok, for my first question Flying over the oak tree,the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised to: The farmer saw the flock of birds, flying over the oak tree that had damaged his crops. Second sentence: Ironing out all wrinkles, the pants looked ...
July 10, 2006 by Clark

English: Showing Possession
In my English composition, I wrote the phrase "... my sister and I's favorite CD ..." According to my word processor's spell check there should not be an 's after I. Can 's be used after I? If not how would I show possession in the above phrase?
August 28, 2014 by Anonymous

business communication
which of the following is not something to check during a thorough revision?
September 25, 2011 by Anonymous

English
Read each sentence. Put the word in () that should be followed by a comma. Then add the comma After school today we'll go to the mall today in () and a comma after it Oh what a mess I've made! Oh in () and a comma after it Jordan can you help me with the clean-up? Jordan in...
November 27, 2012 by Jerald

Reading
I need help with a assignment on a 150 to 300 words that summarizes the steps to be taken in the revision process.
June 15, 2012 by Jessica

English
Can you help me determine if I chose the correct/incorrect sentences appropriately. It’s really urgent. 1)Jenny, 13, says “My favourite subject is English. We all have to learn English in my country because it is very difficult to find a job if you don’t know it. Jenny thinks ...
September 19, 2011 by Henry2

english - revision
What do the terms race and ethnicity mean to you? The term race defines what we are and where we come from. In essence, race is a classification between different groups of people; where each race looks different, speaks a different language and has totally different culture. ...
June 10, 2008 by rose -Ms. Sue

English
In the sentence: After school, we ran to the playground. is After a preposition?
October 6, 2008 by Nick

business communication
It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company." Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
May 26, 2010 by Anonymous

BUSINESS
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity
May 30, 2010 by Anonymous

business
which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision. style and tone organization punctuation and spelling content and clarity
November 24, 2010 by terrie

spell
Which of the following is NOT something to check during a thorough revision? Style and tone Organization Punctuation and spelling Content and clarity
January 23, 2012 by Anonymous

English
Read the sentenced Add commas when they are needed. I don't know how to skate but I can learn. Comma after skate Mom and Dad fixed dinner and my sister and I washed the dishes. Comma after dinner I wanted to go yet something held me back. Comma after go I had a sandwich milk ...
December 5, 2012 by Jerald

English 4 help
1. both George Orwell and Stevie Smith employed irony in their writing. True or False 2. Alfred, Lord Tennyson's poem "Crossing the Bar" and Dylan Thomas's poem "Do Not Go Gently into That Good Night" convey a similar view point about death. True or False 3. the revision phase...
May 23, 2014 by Karen

Greeks
Do you know any webs for Greek famous landscapes? We need one or some right away please. The most famous Greek landscape is the Acropolis in Athens. Also, some of the Greek islands are famous for their landscapes. Check this site for thousands of pictures of Greek landscapes. ...
May 17, 2007 by LG

English
Read the sentenced Add commas when they are needed. This wet rich land is good for growing rice Comma after wet and land The sunset offered bright beautiful colors Comma after bright No I do not think we have any left Comma after No Whether or not he is here we are leaving ...
December 5, 2012 by Jerald

English
Here is the second exercise. Thank you very much for the revision. 1) John ……………………… buy the dictionary for the exam: he can take mine. 2) You ………………………stand on the left on the escalators. 3) I ……………………… buy any butter, mum has just bought some. 4) I think you ………………………cycle ...
April 16, 2012 by Matthew

math,help
I did the revision for this one i posted before but i don't seem to find my error... Multiply. (x-8)^2 this is what i did to solve. (x-8)(x-8) then I foiled x^2-8x-8x+64 then i combined like terms x^2-16x+64 correct
March 2, 2007 by jas20

English
What do you do after school? 1. I go back home directly and do my homework in my room, and then I watch TV for two hours. 2. I go to an academy to learn math, Korean and English. After that I go back home as soon as possible to do my homework. 3. I often play soccer on the ...
March 21, 2011 by rfvv

research and paper revision
what does it mean to incorporate feed back and what feedback you will not incorporate
September 13, 2008 by Anonymous

English-Ms Sue
This is my revision to my earlier question, please proofread. Often, the dictionaries are wrong about this, in fact by putting one word first; they are supporting a self fulfilling prophecy. Consider the entry, "ax or axe", which appears with the two words in that order, in ...
February 1, 2010 by Robin

English: final revision - Ms. Sue
Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...
April 28, 2008 by rose- revision-

english and languge arts
HURRY I NEED HELP!!!!! where should you insert a colon in this sentence? Interview the following people Dave, barb, Jose, and Mary Ann 1.after following 2. after people 3.after Jose 4. no where i said no where but i dont know
May 20, 2014 by Unknown

college English
Also, had they of done research on wills and added fact based information, than this would have made a crucial impact. Is the writing after "Also" a restritive or nonrestrictive phrase? I think that what is after "also" is restrictive but what is after the comma is ...
October 15, 2010 by Anonymous

English
1. When you talk about the purpose of a thing, what expressions do you use? 2. What expressions do you use when you talk about what you do well? 3. Have a conversation about your classmates' specialties with your partner. 4. After thinking about yourself, fill in the blanks. 5...
May 23, 2009 by John

English
Can you check if these sentences are OK please? I forgot to include them before. 1) The first three questions are questions on the revision and must be answered by all those students with low marks. 2)The British Museum is such a fantastic place to visit. 3) She is giving a ...
February 10, 2011 by nco

English/Writing
According to the authorities; only 35% of the criminals go to jail. a:use a period after "authorities" b:use a comma after "authorities" c:use a colon after "authorities" d:there are no errors ---- My answer is "d" Is that correct?
August 3, 2011 by Sarah

English
Read the sentenced Add commas when they are needed. I wrote the letter folded it and mailed it. Comma after "letter" and a comma after the first it Justin prepared the soil planted the seeds and watered the garden Comma after soil and seeds Our dog ran across the lawn through ...
December 5, 2012 by Jerald

english
Then, the doctor pumps the rubber ball does the comma go after ball or pumps or after then with a semi colin after ball
February 13, 2013 by jj

psy - please help
What relationship factors or considerations might be influencing Michael’s problems? Need some informations to help me answer this question. I just send a post which is revision 6, check it out for me. Thanks
June 8, 2008 by rose -psydag

English
Read the sentences Add the necessary semicolons I watched television last night consequently, I did not do well on today's test ; after night My dad is a great cook I really like his food ; after cook We were sorry to lose the tree on the other hand, the garden gets more s un...
December 5, 2012 by Jerald

English
1. Take this medicine after 30 minutes after meals. 2. Take this medicine 30 minutes after meals. (Which one is correct? Do you have other expressions?) 3. In the UK, what kinds of noblemen were there? For example,baron, knight, etc.(This is a question.)
November 18, 2009 by rfvv

science (revision)
I have a test on electricity on Friday and I wandering if I could get a basic summary of what I should know. I'm British so I don know what grade I am but I'm 11 so aound that sort of basic level please!!! Thanks.
January 9, 2013 by Zoe

English
Please check my correction. Punctuation within Sentences—Hyphen You will need to write both short and long- term goals. The president-elect of the Rotary Club had the winning lottery ticket. Please buy three half gallon containers of ice -cream for the party. The ill defined ...
December 14, 2007 by Mckenzie

English
Hello all. I speak very little of english. My teacher emailed me this and I wan't to make sure I understand correctly. [The final exam will only cover material since the midterm.] this means that final exam will ONLY cover what we learned after midterm?? so i should be ony ...
December 4, 2012 by Shabihi

Spanish
can't you do actual revision ; instead of just words. it would make it a whole lot easier, because what if we didn't need to revise on those particular words and needed RESEARCH?
November 6, 2008 by Grace

english - revision
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the rise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in inflaion in developing...
April 30, 2008 by rose- Ms. Sue

English-Native speakers
Can someone please make this sentence more "English"? THE ROLE OF ILLUSTRATIONS IN CHILDREN'S BOOKS WRITTEN BY GERMAN WRITERS AND RELEASED AFTER 1950. This is supposed to be the title
January 8, 2013 by mark

English
Which of the following is a compound sentence? A. After it began to rain, he could not find his umbrella. B. They met after work for a game of tennis. C. She liked her neighbors, but she rarely saw them. D. The afternoon meeting extended into the evening hours. A
April 14, 2014 by Angela

English
Can you please check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much. 1) There are other teenagers who like wearing baggy jeans. You'll listen to the test twice. 2) You are asked either to cross the correct alternative (among three) or to fill in the blanks with a suitable...
May 17, 2011 by Henry1

statistics
During the first 13 weeks of the television season, the Saturday evening 8:00 P.M. to 9:00 P.M. audience proportions were recorded as ABC 29%, CBS 28%, NBC 25%, and independents 18%. A sample of 300 homes two weeks after a Saturday night schedule revision yielded the following...
October 9, 2014 by ANAHI

statistics
During the first 13 weeks of the television season, the Saturday evening 8:00 P.M. to 9:00 P.M. audience proportions were recorded as ABC 29%, CBS 28%, NBC 25%, and independents 18%. A sample of 300 homes two weeks after a Saturday night schedule revision yielded the following...
October 9, 2014 by ANAHI

science
I have been trying to write a research paper, that poses questions as my focus. Rather then a general topic. Is there somewhere online; I can submit my paper for revision suggestions before i turn it in.
March 24, 2009 by chasity

economics 2
During the first 13 weeks of the television season, the Saturday evening 8:00 P.M. to 9:00 P.M. audience proportions were recorded as ABC 29%, CBS 28%, NBC 25%, and independents 18%. A sample of 300 homes two weeks after a Saturday night schedule revision yielded the following...
October 8, 2014 by ANAHI

Statistics
During the first 13 weeks of the television season, the Saturday evening 8:00 P.M. to 9:00 P.M. audience proportions were recorded as ABC 29%, CBS 28%, NBC 25%, and independents 18%. A sample of 300 homes two weeks after a Saturday night schedule revision yielded the following...
October 9, 2014 by Vanessa

to writeacher
The following sentence illustrate several kinds of nonparallel constuction. Rewrite the sentence to achieve parallelism. If you insist on reading the Old Testament all the way through and to do the same with the New Testament, you are in for some big surprises. Would you write...
October 19, 2006 by anonymous

statistics
I need to find the chi square distribution. Thanks During the first 13 weeks of the television season, the Saturday evening 8:00 P.M. to 9:00 P.M. audience proportions were recorded as ABC 29%, CBS 28%, NBC 25%, and independents 18%. A sample of 300 homes two weeks after a ...
October 9, 2014 by ANGELA

statistics
I need to find the chi square distribution. Thanks During the first 13 weeks of the television season, the Saturday evening 8:00 P.M. to 9:00 P.M. audience proportions were recorded as ABC 29%, CBS 28%, NBC 25%, and independents 18%. A sample of 300 homes two weeks after a ...
October 10, 2014 by ANGGY

statistics; emergency please help me
During the first 13 weeks of the television season, the Saturday evening 8:00 P.M. to 9:00 P.M. audience proportions were recorded as ABC 29%, CBS 28%, NBC 25%, and independents 18%. A sample of 300 homes two weeks after a Saturday night schedule revision yielded the following...
October 8, 2014 by ANAHI

English
Prepare for going out. Prepare going out. Prepare to go out. (Which one is correct? Are all correct?) Give me three garlics. Give me three pieces of garlics. (Which one is correct?) Did you Unplug the electric cord from the socket after cooking? Don't do that. You should keep ...
January 31, 2009 by John

English
The detective bought drink after drink. Finally he went to sleep at the table. -------------------------- What is the meaning of 'drink after drink' here?
October 6, 2014 by rfvv

English
Mary Shelley says she conceived the idea of "Frankenstein": A. while watching a frightening storm B. after listening to a discussion about the nature of the creative process. C. after visiting a morgue. D. when she thought of a better ending to Polidori's story. I'm stuck ...
March 21, 2011 by anthony

Grammar (Writeacher)
Rewrite the sentences below, inserting commas where they are needed. If no comma is needed, write "correct." 1. You won't be disappointed nor will you ever forget your visit. My revision of this sentence is the following: 1. Correct.
June 7, 2013 by Anonymous

English
Identify the subordinate clause in the sentence below. We will go on a run after dinner is over. a. We will go b. will go on a run c. on a run after dinner d. after dinner is over. D?
October 15, 2013 by Anonymous

chemistry
REVISION TO PREVIOUS POST: What is the pH of the solution created by combining 1.90 mL of the 0.10 M NaOH(aq) with 8.00 mL of the 0.10 M HCl(aq)? with 8.00 ml of the 0.10 M HC2H3O2(aq)? I understood how to do the HC2H3O2, but I can't do the HCl. I am trying to do the same ...
July 11, 2010 by Sara

English
Can you please check these sentences on phrasal verbs? Thank you in advance. 1) Can I have two chops of lamb (or lamb chops?) and a roast chicken (or a chicken roast?)? 2)Our teacher will go over our mistakes during our afternoon’s revision course. 3)You’ll have to hand in ...
July 25, 2011 by Henry2

Grammar and Composition
1. After the blizzard subsided. a. sentence structure is correct b. fragment--put a comma after "subsided" and finish the sentence c. fragment--eliminate the word "after" and you have a complete sentence d. both B & C D 2. This English project requires several hours of work ...
October 16, 2009 by y912f

Punctuation Question
Which is right... After someone says something, yell "liar". After someone says something, yell "liar." After someone says something, yell "liar." See the part at this site on quotation marks for words. http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_quote.html Okay, thanks!
February 18, 2007 by Sarah

English
Mr. And Mrs. Sanchez were married On Nov 12 1988 Comma after 12 We met on Tuesday Nov 5 in Austin Texas Comma after Tuesday and Austin It is almost two thousand miles from Atlanta Georgia to Los Angeles California Comma after Atlanta and Angeles All of them were correct?
December 5, 2012 by Jerald

English
Why do you study English? 1. I study English to chat with foreigners. 2. I study English to get 100 points on the English test in the final exam. 3. I study English to read technical English books. 4.I study English to enter Cambridge University in the future. (Would you check...
November 18, 2014 by rfvv

English, please help
I'm having a brain freeze. Is this sentence right: "Dad, you promise to come watch me in the play, right" said Ryan? I forget does the ? go after right and a period after Ryan. Thanks
September 18, 2008 by Sue

algebra 1
Natalie performs a chemistry experiment where she records the tenperture of an ongoing reaction.The solution is 93.5 C after 3 minutes;90 C after 5 minutes,84.8 C after 9 minutes; 70.2 C after 18 minute; 54.4 C after 30 minutes;42.5 C after 37 minutes; and 24.9 C after 48 ...
October 24, 2012 by Janet

English
When you do an internal citation, following a direct quote, do you put a period after the quote and another after the citation, or just one at the end of the citation?
December 7, 2009 by marcie

English
The only error I can see is that there needs to be a comma after "Press" not a period. (Broken Link Removed) http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/557/01/ =)
April 17, 2007 by Writeacher

English/Grammer
I have a comma question! When using the phrase "as well as" do i put the comma before, after, or before AND after the phrase. An example sentince is: At the store i bought milk as well as bread.
November 8, 2008 by Abby

English
Writeacher, I urgently need to email the our partner the following things, to make sure he will make the changes. 1) As there are several pages to check , I won't be able to revise everything by this evening. 2) I made just a few changes in the linguistic objectives, the ...
February 8, 2012 by Henry2

English
Questionnaire a. Interest in English class b. Interest according to each skill c. The most difficult part among 4 skills d. Interest in the most important part among 4 skills e. Studying English after school f. Understanding in the classroom g. Study materials (all) h. The ...
June 2, 2008 by John

English
Questionnaire a. Interest in English class b. Interest according to each skill c. The most difficult part among 4 skills d. Interest in the most important part among 4 skills e. Studying English after school f. Understanding in the classroom g. Study materials (all) h. The use...
June 2, 2008 by John

English
1. Reviewing word choice is a good strategy for the Proofreading phase of the Writing Process. True or False? I think it is False as reviewing word choice should be in the revision phase, right? 2. It is easier to determine the form of one's writing if the purpose of writing ...
June 27, 2010 by Anna

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