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Question about college application
I had submitted a college application essay three days ago, but after I submitted it, I felt so uncomfortable with that one, because the essay was so bad, but I had to do that, it was the last day for priority application. Since I could not change anything for my application ...
December 3, 2006 by Jenni

Eng. Essay - Writeacher
Writeacher or Bobpursley, or anyone who could help me with my essay. I don't know why I cannot find the post that I needed help on, my essay was on traditional families versus TV show families. I included more information. I wish I could include the link here to my post. :\
February 20, 2012 by Farrell

College Application
I am filling out a college application to a university in ohio that has a few thousand students enrolled. On the application there is a page for optional information like family, ethnicity, gender, etc. There is also an optional essay where you choose a topic to help the ...
November 23, 2007 by Christian

application essay, plz help Writeacher, SarJMcgin
Below is a draft of my daughter's college scholarship application essay. I would appreciate if a few of the Jiskha gang could review and critique. Many thanks in advance. Scholarship Essay “What do you want to be when you grow up?” This is one of those questions every child ...
August 4, 2009 by economyst

Writing - application essay
I am writing an application essay to try and get accepted into Haywood Early College. I am writing four paragraphs and I already have 2 paragraph topics. I guess what I am trying to ask is could I possibly get help with 2 more topics?
April 22, 2012 by May-May

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.
January 10, 2014 by Victoria

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.
January 11, 2014 by Victoria

Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)
How should I begin this assigned essay? Write an essay in what ways today people are more fearful than people in past generations. You may use examples from real life, the selection you just read, books, movies, music, or television.
January 8, 2014 by Victoria

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I'm not quite certain I understand what you meant in your latest reply in the last "Literature Essay" post.
January 10, 2014 by Anonymous

Exposition: How-to Essay (Writeacher)
I have been assigned to write a 3-paragraph how-to essay. Should I number each paragraph? If not, why?
March 23, 2014 by Anonymous

English essay
I have to write an essay on " Human beings have unlimited desires but limited resources.Is it possible to reconcile the two?" Can you help me plz. I have no idea what to write in the intro. Thx :-) Your title reminds me of the Band leader in the production of Music Man. Big ...
April 9, 2007 by Shym

writeacher
i writing essay on what true love be and this be one sentence in my essay you please able to change it to positive? i have negative word which be unable in essay. In the short story, "The Painted Door", by Sinclair Ross, the main characters John and Ann were unable to ...
February 11, 2012 by Mohammad

plz anyone?
I have to write a comparison and contrast essay. can you give me ideas on what to compare and contrast plz anyone.
November 3, 2015 by regan

English
I'm writing a (mock) college application essay for English. It's about what I learned from a bad experienced and the impact it had in the future. If the entire essay is supposed to be around 500 words, it is appropriate to have a paragraph describing the bad experience?
January 8, 2016 by Anonymous

To: Writeacher
I corrected my Romeo and Juliet essay below.
April 23, 2009 by Hugs n kisses

Response Essay (Writeacher!)
How should I begin this? This response essay regards "Rules of the Game" by Amy Tan. The prompt: In Amy Tan's "Rules of the Game," we read about a generational tug of war. Write 3-paragraph essay in which you discuss the motivation of each generation. My thesis: Both Waverly, ...
February 10, 2014 by Anonymous

LIVING ENVIRONMENT
the ability to grow in size is a characteristic of living organism .Although an icicle may grow in size over time,it is considered nonliving because there is 1)an incerase in matter ,but no increase in the number of icicle. 2)an interaction between the icicle and the ...
February 12, 2013 by tania sharmin

Theology (religion) HELP!!!! (plz read ASAP!)
Nae one or two experiences or situations that reflect an 'unredeemed' world. What reasons can you identify for this. 300 words Please help me. I'm NOT asking you to do this essay for me .... I just don't know what to write for this essay.
February 27, 2015 by Sam

Business Managment
Which of the following statements most effectively applies you-attitude? A."We began processing your application today." B."Your application is now being processed." C."We will have your application processed by next Thursday." D."Your application will be processed by next ...
August 12, 2010 by Kimberly

Business English
Which of the following statements most effectively applies you-attitude? "We began processing your application today." "Your application is now being processed." "We will have your application processed by next Thursday." "Your application will be processed by next Thursday."
January 25, 2012 by Jdub

Alg2
For a college application, Macawi must select one of five topics on which to write a short essay. She must also select a different topic from the list for a longer essay. How many ways can she choose the topics for the two essays?
December 4, 2011 by Rock

math
identify the value of x that makes each pair of the ratios equivalent x:4 and 45:20 A.8 B.9 C.10 plz plz plz plz help me!!!!!!!! PLZ!!!!!
November 2, 2015 by pankakes

Writeacher please read
I posted something below after my essay.
April 7, 2009 by Terrie

essay
what are some good topic to do a personal statment on for an college application?
November 7, 2009 by kate

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I apologize, Writeacher, if I haven't reached your expectations yet but I am truly struggling to write this essay. "I feel as though there is a far greater number of people today who are more fearful than those of past generations. Reasons for this can be drawn from multiple ...
January 9, 2014 by Victoria

English IV-writeacher
Thank you for your help! I even was able to use essential in my essay a couple of times =D! You're very welcome. Go get A's!!! =)
June 28, 2007 by Melissa

To Writeacher
Are you still on here. I just posted my "fixed" critical analysis essay. Thanks again!
November 25, 2009 by Crystal

college internship application
The internship that I am applying for requires a recent writing sample to be sent along with my application but the sample I want to use doesen't exactly scream professional. I recently did a persuasive essay that I am really proud of on the existance of the Loch Ness Monster ...
January 23, 2012 by Harley

I NEED HELP!!:(!!!! HELP ME PLZ!!
I GOT A FEW QUESTIONS SO what is a cell part that has the funcion of a gel-like material inside cells... and what releases energy into the cell.?? plz plz plz plz HELP!!!
October 20, 2009 by i really need help!!

math plz plz plz plz help plz .....thank you
mark bought a notebook for $1.45 and some pencils that cost $0.42 each if the total cost was 6.91,how many pencils did he buy A.12 B.13 C.14 D.15 is 14 the answer plz help thank you
November 23, 2015 by random rainbow

transfer
I am appealing for alate application review to UCD i was wondering if anyone could read over my essay and give me feedback?
December 18, 2008 by tina

To:Writeacher
Can you write you real name when you go to POST A NEW QUESTON IN THIS WEBSITE? Like I mean I click on POST A NEW QUESTION I put my name and the subject. I COME TO THIS WEBSITE FOR HOMEWORK HELP. WHO IS WRITEACHER? IS WRITEACHER A TEACHER? I JUST READ HER "TO ALL STUDENTS" ...
December 25, 2006 by Sanjana

social studies? i think idk
what new ideas came from the automobile? plz help plz plz plz ASAP
December 5, 2015 by Geena

SS plz help me plzzzzzzz
What are the two major forces that reshape earth? Describe how itworks. plz plz plz help me there are no answer choices hope u can still help
November 18, 2015 by #AriannaGirl :)

Math ....urgent help
i just dont get this elimination method ..... plz help me plz.....teach me how to keep the x and y in a parallel line. and which number to multiply.....plz help -5x-4y=-11 10x=-6-y help me plz......
January 7, 2009 by vero

SS PLZ HELP ME ASAP
What are the two major forces that shape and reshape earth? Describe how each one works. plz plz plz help me there are no answer choices hope u can still help
November 18, 2015 by #AriannaGirl :)

application
sir I m applying for a jab n there i have to submit a note "why i m interested in this job"so plz help me out to draft a note as above
April 20, 2010 by richa

biology
a boy inherits genes for tallness,but his growth is limited as a result of poor nitrition. this is an example of 1)an inherited disorder. 2)environmental influence on gene expression . 3)expression of a hidden trait 4)a characterstic controlled by more than one pair of genes. ...
February 8, 2013 by tania sharmin

College Admission essay
Hi everyone, I have just written an essay about how I grew up into an adult and realized the type of person I would like to be. BUT I seriously have no idea for the title. I need an IMPLICIT title for it. The application deadline is getting really close and I would really ...
January 24, 2016 by Anonymous

writeacher help
so i'm still stuck with my essay on "The most dangerous game" i have information for irony, a bit of setting but what does chronological text structure mean?
December 30, 2013 by Reina B. V

college algebra
find a real-life application of a quadratic function. State the application, give the equation of the quadratic function, and state what the x and y in the application represent. Choose at least two values of x to input into your function and find the corresponding y for each...
October 19, 2008 by Renee

computers
I need some help with creating a simple, but automatic site status (uptime/downtime) monitor script in ColdFusion. Basically I would like the script to check if an application on my site is accessible or not every 60 minutes. If the application is down at 60 minutes, then I am...
March 26, 2012 by Mike

democratic politics
plz help in writing an essay on challenges faced by democracy
September 5, 2009 by plz help me for essay on challenges to democracy

Writing
Someone plz give me interesting topics for argumentative essay
November 6, 2009 by Salman

For writeacher:
I'm sorry but is it OK if I email you this essay that I have written on the poem The Tide Rises, The Tide Falls by Longfellow? It's a bit long to type here... Thanks -MC
December 17, 2008 by mysterychicken

To Writeacher
Writeacher, I did a composition on this movie, and I would appreciate it if u could check it over, thanks a lot.
October 21, 2010 by Sara

Geometry i need hlp urgently plz plz plz
The lenght of a line segement is of 10units and the co-ordinate of one end point are (2,-3) if the abscissa of the other end is 10 find the ordinate of the other end?? Working plz plz
October 18, 2015 by Collins

Essay writing
how do u go about writing essays that are questions like "why do u want to go to this college" or "why did you decide to major in this" or "what is the reason for you application/clariy your interest in this event" help please!!! Thank you!
October 27, 2008 by Jordaiah

English
I wonder why writeacher hasn't been writing and correcting my queries for a few days. Is writeacher well? Thank you.
January 15, 2012 by Henry2

To Writeacher
Writeacher, can you please have a moment to look at my previous English post. Thank you very much in advance:-)
May 3, 2010 by Sara

English
Need a essay on Boo Radley from to Kill a mockingbird Help meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plz
February 2, 2008 by Anonymous

English
1. I'll look over your application and call you in a few days. 2. I'll look thoroughly your application and call you in a few days. (Is 'look thoroughly' the opposite of 'look over'?) 3. I will look closely at your application. 4. I will take a close look at your application...
June 14, 2016 by rfvv

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
How much more of the wordiness should I eliminate from my essay? I desperately want to recieve an excellent grade for this assignment, but I can't if you refuse to read any more of my revisions. I don't want to bother you or make you upset, but I still need your help. Should I...
April 7, 2014 by Victoria

Statistics
The president of a bank selected a sample of 1500 applications to check if the approval or rejection of an application depends on which one of the two loan officers handles the application. The information obtained from the sample is summarized in the following 2 way table. ...
April 16, 2013 by Bettie

english
Im writing a argument essay about PETA and I cant seem to come up with a thesis…..I need help plz.
October 26, 2011 by v

English
Writeacher,i can't understand these lines!These lines are of julius caeser and it seems very difficult to understand!plz make me clear! Go bid the priest do present sacrifice and bring me their opinions of success,
October 1, 2013 by help()!!!!!

math
the volume of a rectangular solid is given by expressions given below.in each case find the dimentions of the solid. a)15x^2-51x+18. b)x^3+13x^2+32x+20. c)x^2-5x/2-3/2. d)x^4+x^3-x-1 plz everyone help me out.till 2 o'clock...plz plz plz
May 30, 2012 by parul

math
the volume of a rectangular solid is given by expressions given below.in each case find the dimentions of the solid. a)15x^2-51x+18. b)x^3+13x^2+32x+20. c)x^2-5x/2-3/2. d)x^4+x^3-x-1 plz everyone help me out.till 2 o'clock...plz plz plz
May 30, 2012 by PLZ HELP ME NOW...

World History(Writeacher don't answer)
What is Christendom? How? Why? And please some information on it :) Writeacher you don't think I already tried google? Stop answering my questions!!
October 26, 2012 by Corrie

business communications
3. To assist in evaluating written communications skills in the employment process, many managers include as a requirement: (Points : 5) handwritten applications. essay-type questions. application forms. portfolios.
October 8, 2011 by Anonymous

pscychology
Could someone pretty plz plz plz help me...What are the 2 biggest parts of the human brain??
March 11, 2009 by Logan:)

SCIENCE!!--ANONYMOUS PLEASE ANSWER MY QUESTION!
plz answer the question we were talking about plz plz. Go back to the problem. I got 184 but the worksheet answer says 136 which is correct?? plz help!! thx
September 13, 2010 by Happy Face

L.A. PLEASE HELP!
During her time in the secret annex, Anne demonstrates that she is a unique and remarkable young person with many dimensions to her character. In an essay, explain what makes Anne a complex character. Include details from The Diary of Anne Frank, Act I and Act II, in your ...
May 17, 2016 by Gracious Human

Maths plz help
X^x+y^y=31 x+y=5 plz help i was told to use newton litrate method plz help
December 18, 2015 by Collins

social studies idk
how did the automobile negatively impact society???!!!?!?! PLZ help me I have been on it since morning plz pretty plz cherry on top help me
December 4, 2015 by suzzie

essay writing
What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.
October 8, 2009 by larry

physics!! plz answer me!
A 0.15 kg baseball moving at +26 m/s is slowed to a stop by a catcher who exerts a constant force of -390 N. How long does it take this force to stop the ball? How far does the ball travel before stopping? plz plz plz help!!
December 10, 2007 by julia

Writeacher
Writeacher, Do you specialize in any particular subject? I've seen you answer to math, english, physics, etc. I'm just curious. I don't believe I've answered to any physics questions -- poor student to depend on me for that!! Mostly I respond to English questions (grammar, ...
February 24, 2007 by Danny

To Writeacher
Writeacher I have a post on my English assignment, and I have it addressed to you, may you please take a look at it, cause I really need help, thanks.
October 5, 2010 by Sara

maths
plz i cerious need help i posted dis qustion bt due 2 my wrong typing it was nt anser plz here it is:x^4+3x-2/(x^2+1)=Ax+B/(x^2+1)+Cx+D/(x^2+1)^2+(Ex+F)/(x^2+1)^3+G/(x-4)+(Hx+1)/(x-4)^2.find ABCDEFGH? plz it a partial fraction thank yo u and Godbless u
July 29, 2015 by anthony

Editorial (Writeacher)
Thank you, Writeacher, for responding to my post. I truly appreciate your it. However, do you think the editorial that I have written requires any other improvements?
February 17, 2014 by Anonymous

english
i neeed help putting my thesis together for my essay reflecting on two books: "the poisonwood bible", and "fall on you knees" plz help asap
June 6, 2012 by celina

writeacher in need of help
Writeacher I did all my homework but I need help with some things. Could you please look at my posts?
May 10, 2011 by Emma

Algebra II
Given the function k(x) = x2, compare and contrast how the application of a constant, c, affects the graph. The application of the constant must be discussed in the following manners: k(x + c) k(x) + c k(cx) c • k(x)
September 24, 2013 by Nicole

math
Given the function k(x) = x2, compare and contrast how the application of a constant, c, affects the graph. The application of the constant must be discussed in the following manners: k(x + c) k(x) + c k(cx) c • k(x)
October 17, 2013 by de3100

visual basic net
Formula F=1.8 * C + 32 Create an application that displays a table of the Celsius temperature 0 through 20 and their fahrenheit equivalents. The application should use a loop to display the temperatures in a list box.
July 6, 2012 by alisa

chem
stilll didnt get it .. .. can u plz explain in detail ... how did u get the answer.. plz plz plz plz plzp l zp thnks Bond enthalpy is the energy required to break a mole of a certain type of bond. O=O = 495 kj/mol S-F = 327 kj/mol S=O = 523 kj/mol Use average bond enthalpies ...
November 12, 2008 by DR BOOBB Plz HELP

Writeacher
writeacher you havent told me how my paragraph is. can you please tell me fast. i almost have to sleep. im sorry if im being so impatient but i need that paragraph revised quick
March 1, 2010 by Anonymous

Three Posts Below
The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...
November 21, 2006 by Anonymous

To Writeacher
Writeacher, you are the only Jiskha tutor I see on here right now, which can help me with my English. Can you please have a look at my previous English-Poetry post. Thank you very much in return:-)
April 22, 2010 by Sara

English
Where can I go to check about my essay when your are finished? I have not seen any essay from you for help with proofreading. If you post the entire essay in a message, someone will respond directly to that message. =) I need your help to write that essay,"A way to decrease ...
November 30, 2006 by louise

Ms.Sue (ONLY)
can you plz help me in science? PLZ HELP ME! YOU HELP ALL THE TIME! *begs* plz help! i am my knees!!!!! (really i am!) its called "science 8th grade"
March 7, 2012 by sammie doodles :-)

grade 10 history
I have a SUPER HUGE project due called National History day and need lots of help with it, plz plz plz help!!!!!
January 20, 2013 by Macy

Writing------PLZ HELP--I'M DESPERATE!!
In writing an essay,what are some factors that have influenced your life? What are some hereditary and enviromental factors that have influenced how you have developed? Please tell us what has influenced YOUR life, and we'll be glad to critique your essay.
November 7, 2006 by Mandy

English
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. 1) I'm pleased to read that English is and will remain the lingua franca of the project. For this reason, we'd like to vary a few sentences in your application form. In particular, this sentence: 2) "By executing the ...
February 8, 2012 by Henry2

Plz,plz help!
Can you help me write: real-world scenario in which you would write an inequality rather than an equation? Plz, I really need help! :D
January 21, 2014 by Princess Anna

7th grade grammar
Writeacher: Juliana looked at the powerpoint on the clauses and she said it was really good, thank you writeacher. She said it helped her a lot. She thinks she might have it now. Thank you SOOOO much!
February 8, 2010 by Juliana's mom

math
describe an application for the use of ratios or portions. And describe how an application problem could be useful in daily life? Lok at the post directly below yours. I think it will serve as an example.
May 22, 2007 by Tammy

Calculus i need help plz plz
Integrate:Sinxcosx/a^2cos^2(x)+b^2sin^2(x))dx??? plz i need the full working too hard for me
October 21, 2015 by Collins

math plz help ;-;
What is the y-coordinate of the y-intercept of the linear equation 2x - 3y = 12? Plz help I don't understand how to do this can you show me step by step plz, sorry ;-;
May 31, 2016 by leo

Calculus i need help plz plz
If y=ws^3/d^4 find the % increase in 'y' when 'w' increases by 2% and 's' decreases by 3% and 'd' increasee by 1%...... There a little error in the first question i post here it is plz i need the working and explanation
October 18, 2015 by Collins

Job Application
What are some good strenghts, and weaknesses to place on a job application. I'm feeling out a job application for papa johns pizza If you have weaknesses, put them...There are no good weaknesses, so don't search for them. But if you have one, such as stuttering, or anxiety ...
April 10, 2007 by Anonymous

english
i have do do a persuasive essay on a book that i think should be in the high school curriculum but i cant think of one to do plz help im desperate
September 25, 2007 by anonymous

To Writeacher-Thanks
I'd like to thank you for helping me with my poem writeacher, thank you very, very much. :-)
April 26, 2010 by Sara

Texas Colleges
I would like to apply for scholarships. Is the site which was recently posted regarding college for all texans an online application site or did I misunderstand? I looked into it but could not find an application link.
August 2, 2008 by jules

MATH SINUSOIDAL APPLICATION
Would pulling a roll of thread create a sinusoidal function? please suggest some real life application of sinusoidal wave that i can experiment with...
October 4, 2013 by Anonymous

English
Rules of writing an essay?, And what are the main factors of an essay?, How to properly write an essay without an errors?
April 4, 2009 by Aaron

SS7R - DBQ Essay (plz read!)
Sectionalism – The Civil War From the 1820’s to the 1860’s the North and South had different thoughts over slavery. It expanded through different sections of America. The North and South started to develop new ways in which to make money and lifestyles. The Abolitionist ...
May 31, 2012 by Laruen

biology
Biotechnology allows us to use living organisms or their processes for human needs or purposes. Currently, this topic includes such general examples as cloning, stem cells (adult, umbilical cord, and embryonic), DNA fingerprinting, biological warfare, bioremediation, ...
November 30, 2008 by Tammy

biology/science
Biotechnology allows us to use living organisms or their processes for human needs or purposes. Currently, this topic includes such general examples as cloning, stem cells (adult, umbilical cord, and embryonic), DNA fingerprinting, biological warfare, bioremediation, ...
February 22, 2010 by Anonymous

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