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Question about college application
I had submitted a college application essay three days ago, but after I submitted it, I felt so uncomfortable with that one, because the essay was so bad, but I had to do that, it was the last day for priority application. Since I could not change anything for my application ...

Eng. Essay - Writeacher
Writeacher or Bobpursley, or anyone who could help me with my essay. I don't know why I cannot find the post that I needed help on, my essay was on traditional families versus TV show families. I included more information. I wish I could include the link here to my post. :\

College Application
I am filling out a college application to a university in ohio that has a few thousand students enrolled. On the application there is a page for optional information like family, ethnicity, gender, etc. There is also an optional essay where you choose a topic to help the ...

application essay, plz help Writeacher, SarJMcgin
Below is a draft of my daughter's college scholarship application essay. I would appreciate if a few of the Jiskha gang could review and critique. Many thanks in advance. Scholarship Essay “What do you want to be when you grow up?” This is one of those questions every ...

Writing - application essay
I am writing an application essay to try and get accepted into Haywood Early College. I am writing four paragraphs and I already have 2 paragraph topics. I guess what I am trying to ask is could I possibly get help with 2 more topics?

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.

Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)
How should I begin this assigned essay? Write an essay in what ways today people are more fearful than people in past generations. You may use examples from real life, the selection you just read, books, movies, music, or television.

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I'm not quite certain I understand what you meant in your latest reply in the last "Literature Essay" post.

Exposition: How-to Essay (Writeacher)
I have been assigned to write a 3-paragraph how-to essay. Should I number each paragraph? If not, why?

English essay
I have to write an essay on " Human beings have unlimited desires but limited resources.Is it possible to reconcile the two?" Can you help me plz. I have no idea what to write in the intro. Thx :-) Your title reminds me of the Band leader in the production of Music Man. Big ...

writeacher
i writing essay on what true love be and this be one sentence in my essay you please able to change it to positive? i have negative word which be unable in essay. In the short story, "The Painted Door", by Sinclair Ross, the main characters John and Ann were unable to ...

plz anyone?
I have to write a comparison and contrast essay. can you give me ideas on what to compare and contrast plz anyone.

History help plz not ms.sure or writeacher
What was George Washington asking the continental congress to do?

English
I'm writing a (mock) college application essay for English. It's about what I learned from a bad experienced and the impact it had in the future. If the entire essay is supposed to be around 500 words, it is appropriate to have a paragraph describing the bad experience?

To: Writeacher
I corrected my Romeo and Juliet essay below.

Response Essay (Writeacher!)
How should I begin this? This response essay regards "Rules of the Game" by Amy Tan. The prompt: In Amy Tan's "Rules of the Game," we read about a generational tug of war. Write 3-paragraph essay in which you discuss the motivation of each generation. My thesis: Both Waverly, ...

Theology (religion) HELP!!!! (plz read ASAP!)
Nae one or two experiences or situations that reflect an 'unredeemed' world. What reasons can you identify for this. 300 words Please help me. I'm NOT asking you to do this essay for me .... I just don't know what to write for this essay.

Business Managment
Which of the following statements most effectively applies you-attitude? A."We began processing your application today." B."Your application is now being processed." C."We will have your application processed by next Thursday." D."Your application will be processed by next ...

Business English
Which of the following statements most effectively applies you-attitude? "We began processing your application today." "Your application is now being processed." "We will have your application processed by next Thursday." "Your application will be processed by next Thursday."

Alg2
For a college application, Macawi must select one of five topics on which to write a short essay. She must also select a different topic from the list for a longer essay. How many ways can she choose the topics for the two essays?

LIVING ENVIRONMENT
the ability to grow in size is a characteristic of living organism .Although an icicle may grow in size over time,it is considered nonliving because there is 1)an incerase in matter ,but no increase in the number of icicle. 2)an interaction between the icicle and the ...

Writeacher please read
I posted something below after my essay.

essay
what are some good topic to do a personal statment on for an college application?

math
identify the value of x that makes each pair of the ratios equivalent x:4 and 45:20 A.8 B.9 C.10 plz plz plz plz help me!!!!!!!! PLZ!!!!!

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I apologize, Writeacher, if I haven't reached your expectations yet but I am truly struggling to write this essay. "I feel as though there is a far greater number of people today who are more fearful than those of past generations. Reasons for this can be drawn from multiple ...

English IV-writeacher
Thank you for your help! I even was able to use essential in my essay a couple of times =D! You're very welcome. Go get A's!!! =)

To Writeacher
Are you still on here. I just posted my "fixed" critical analysis essay. Thanks again!

college internship application
The internship that I am applying for requires a recent writing sample to be sent along with my application but the sample I want to use doesen't exactly scream professional. I recently did a persuasive essay that I am really proud of on the existance of the Loch Ness Monster ...

I NEED HELP!!:(!!!! HELP ME PLZ!!
I GOT A FEW QUESTIONS SO what is a cell part that has the funcion of a gel-like material inside cells... and what releases energy into the cell.?? plz plz plz plz HELP!!!

math plz plz plz plz help plz .....thank you
mark bought a notebook for $1.45 and some pencils that cost $0.42 each if the total cost was 6.91,how many pencils did he buy A.12 B.13 C.14 D.15 is 14 the answer plz help thank you

transfer
I am appealing for alate application review to UCD i was wondering if anyone could read over my essay and give me feedback?

To:Writeacher
Can you write you real name when you go to POST A NEW QUESTON IN THIS WEBSITE? Like I mean I click on POST A NEW QUESTION I put my name and the subject. I COME TO THIS WEBSITE FOR HOMEWORK HELP. WHO IS WRITEACHER? IS WRITEACHER A TEACHER? I JUST READ HER "TO ALL STUDENTS" ...

social studies? i think idk
what new ideas came from the automobile? plz help plz plz plz ASAP

Math ....urgent help
i just don't get this elimination method ..... plz help me plz.....teach me how to keep the x and y in a parallel line. and which number to multiply.....plz help -5x-4y=-11 10x=-6-y help me plz......

SS plz help me plzzzzzzz
What are the two major forces that reshape earth? Describe how itworks. plz plz plz help me there are no answer choices hope u can still help

SS PLZ HELP ME ASAP
What are the two major forces that shape and reshape earth? Describe how each one works. plz plz plz help me there are no answer choices hope u can still help

College Admission essay
Hi everyone, I have just written an essay about how I grew up into an adult and realized the type of person I would like to be. BUT I seriously have no idea for the title. I need an IMPLICIT title for it. The application deadline is getting really close and I would really ...

writeacher help
so i'm still stuck with my essay on "The most dangerous game" i have information for irony, a bit of setting but what does chronological text structure mean?

application
sir I m applying for a jab n there i have to submit a note "why i m interested in this job"so plz help me out to draft a note as above

biology
a boy inherits genes for tallness,but his growth is limited as a result of poor nitrition. this is an example of 1)an inherited disorder. 2)environmental influence on gene expression . 3)expression of a hidden trait 4)a characterstic controlled by more than one pair of genes. ...

college algebra
find a real-life application of a quadratic function. State the application, give the equation of the quadratic function, and state what the x and y in the application represent. Choose at least two values of x to input into your function and find the corresponding y for each...

computers
I need some help with creating a simple, but automatic site status (uptime/downtime) monitor script in ColdFusion. Basically I would like the script to check if an application on my site is accessible or not every 60 minutes. If the application is down at 60 minutes, then I am...

plz plz help me belive me have tried
cosx+cosy=a and sinx+siny=b show that sin2x+sin2y=2ab(1-(2/(a^2+b^2)) plz plz show step

For writeacher:
I'm sorry but is it OK if I email you this essay that I have written on the poem The Tide Rises, The Tide Falls by Longfellow? It's a bit long to type here... Thanks -MC

To Writeacher
Writeacher, I did a composition on this movie, and I would appreciate it if u could check it over, thanks a lot.

English
I wonder why writeacher hasn't been writing and correcting my queries for a few days. Is writeacher well? Thank you.

Essay writing
how do u go about writing essays that are questions like "why do u want to go to this college" or "why did you decide to major in this" or "what is the reason for you application/clariy your interest in this event" help please!!! Thank you!

democratic politics
plz help in writing an essay on challenges faced by democracy

Writing
Someone plz give me interesting topics for argumentative essay

To Writeacher
Writeacher, can you please have a moment to look at my previous English post. Thank you very much in advance:-)

English
Need a essay on Boo Radley from to Kill a mockingbird Help meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plz

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
How much more of the wordiness should I eliminate from my essay? I desperately want to receive an excellent grade for this assignment, but I can't if you refuse to read any more of my revisions. I don't want to bother you or make you upset, but I still need your help. Should I...

Language Arts
1.What other types of writing is similar to the autobiographical essay? Select all that apply. A. An email to a friend that tells about an event in your life B. a book report you wrote for school C. a postcard sent to your family while you are traveling D. a multiple choice ...

Language Arts, please check anyone!
One. What other types of writing is similar to the autobiographical essay? Select 2. ---> an email to a friend that tells about an event in your life a book report you wrote for school ---> a postcard sent to your family while you are traveling a multiply choice ...

Geometry i need help urgently plz plz plz
The lenght of a line segement is of 10units and the co-ordinate of one end point are (2,-3) if the abscissa of the other end is 10 find the ordinate of the other end?? Working plz plz

English
1. I'll look over your application and call you in a few days. 2. I'll look thoroughly your application and call you in a few days. (Is 'look thoroughly' the opposite of 'look over'?) 3. I will look closely at your application. 4. I will take a close look at your application...

To: Writeacher or any other english helper
I had posted a question earlier about my essay but have received no help? is there no one who can help me? If you haven't seen the movie or read the book then i understand but please help if you can, really appreciated:)

English
Hi.. I need a help will any one suggest me a "TITLE" for an essay about Mother Teresa...plz

Statistics
The president of a bank selected a sample of 1500 applications to check if the approval or rejection of an application depends on which one of the two loan officers handles the application. The information obtained from the sample is summarized in the following 2 way table. ...

calculus help me plz too hard show step
charge Q coulombs at time t seconds is given by the differential equation RdQ/dt+Q/C=0, where c is the capacitance in farafd and R the resistance in ohms.solve the equation for Q given that Q=Qo where t=0 plz show step plz plz plz

World History(Writeacher don't answer)
What is Christendom? How? Why? And please some information on it :) Writeacher you don't think I already tried google? Stop answering my questions!!

ANUENUE
1.What other types of writing is similar to the autobiographical essay? select all that apply. A. an email to a friend that tells about an event in your life B. a book report you wrote for school C. a postcard sent to your family while you are traveling B. a multiple choice ...

English
Writeacher,i can't understand these lines!These lines are of julius caeser and it seems very difficult to understand!plz make me clear! Go bid the priest do present sacrifice and bring me their opinions of success,

english
Im writing a argument essay about PETA and I cant seem to come up with a thesis…..I need help plz.

business communications
3. To assist in evaluating written communications skills in the employment process, many managers include as a requirement: (Points : 5) handwritten applications. essay-type questions. application forms. portfolios.

ASAP PLZ I NEED HELP I BEEN IN A TEST FOR 5 HOURS
Write an essay in which you analyze the importance of plot events and characters’ actions to the development of a story’s theme. Review and evaluate a story from the unit that has a clearly identifiable theme. You might choose “Raymond’s Run” by Toni Cade Bambara...

math
the volume of a rectangular solid is given by expressions given below.in each case find the dimentions of the solid. a)15x^2-51x+18. b)x^3+13x^2+32x+20. c)x^2-5x/2-3/2. d)x^4+x^3-x-1 plz everyone help me out.till 2 o'clock...plz plz plz

math
the volume of a rectangular solid is given by expressions given below.in each case find the dimentions of the solid. a)15x^2-51x+18. b)x^3+13x^2+32x+20. c)x^2-5x/2-3/2. d)x^4+x^3-x-1 plz everyone help me out.till 2 o'clock...plz plz plz

maths plz
∫√(x²+1)/(x+1)dx plz show step i know it messy plz i really need it

L.A. PLEASE HELP!
During her time in the secret annex, Anne demonstrates that she is a unique and remarkable young person with many dimensions to her character. In an essay, explain what makes Anne a complex character. Include details from The Diary of Anne Frank, Act I and Act II, in your ...

pscychology
Could someone pretty plz plz plz help me...What are the 2 biggest parts of the human brain??

essay writing
What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.

SCIENCE!!--ANONYMOUS PLEASE ANSWER MY QUESTION!
plz answer the question we were talking about plz plz. Go back to the problem. I got 184 but the worksheet answer says 136 which is correct?? plz help!! thx

Maths plz help
X^x+y^y=31 x+y=5 plz help i was told to use newton litrate method plz help

Writeacher
Writeacher, Do you specialize in any particular subject? I've seen you answer to math, english, physics, etc. I'm just curious. I don't believe I've answered to any physics questions -- poor student to depend on me for that!! Mostly I respond to English questions (grammar, ...

To Writeacher
Writeacher I have a post on my English assignment, and I have it addressed to you, may you please take a look at it, cause I really need help, thanks.

social studies idk
how did the automobile negatively impact society???!!!?!?! PLZ help me I have been on it since morning plz pretty plz cherry on top help me

Editorial (Writeacher)
Thank you, Writeacher, for responding to my post. I truly appreciate your it. However, do you think the editorial that I have written requires any other improvements?

writeacher in need of help
Writeacher I did all my homework but I need help with some things. Could you please look at my posts?

English L.A.
Which of the following best describes an expository essay? a. An essay that uses casual, conversational language. b. An essay that tells a story about a real-life experience. c. An essay that explains an idea by breaking it down. d. An essay that uses humor to achieve the ...

physics!! plz answer me!
A 0.15 kg baseball moving at +26 m/s is slowed to a stop by a catcher who exerts a constant force of -390 N. How long does it take this force to stop the ball? How far does the ball travel before stopping? plz plz plz help!!

english
i neeed help putting my thesis together for my essay reflecting on two books: "the poisonwood bible", and "fall on you knees" plz help asap

Algebra II
Given the function k(x) = x2, compare and contrast how the application of a constant, c, affects the graph. The application of the constant must be discussed in the following manners: k(x + c) k(x) + c k(cx) c • k(x)

math
Given the function k(x) = x2, compare and contrast how the application of a constant, c, affects the graph. The application of the constant must be discussed in the following manners: k(x + c) k(x) + c k(cx) c • k(x)

visual basic net
Formula F=1.8 * C + 32 Create an application that displays a table of the Celsius temperature 0 through 20 and their fahrenheit equivalents. The application should use a loop to display the temperatures in a list box.

maths
plz i cerious need help i posted dis qustion bt due 2 my wrong typing it was nt anser plz here it is:x^4+3x-2/(x^2+1)=Ax+B/(x^2+1)+Cx+D/(x^2+1)^2+(Ex+F)/(x^2+1)^3+G/(x-4)+(Hx+1)/(x-4)^2.find ABCDEFGH? plz it a partial fraction thank yo u and Godbless u

Writeacher
writeacher you havent told me how my paragraph is. can you please tell me fast. i almost have to sleep. im sorry if im being so impatient but i need that paragraph revised quick

Three Posts Below
The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...

chem
stilll didn't get it .. .. can u plz explain in detail ... how did u get the answer.. plz plz plz plz plzp l zp thnks Bond enthalpy is the energy required to break a mole of a certain type of bond. O=O = 495 kj/mol S-F = 327 kj/mol S=O = 523 kj/mol Use average bond enthalpies ...

To Writeacher
Writeacher, you are the only Jiskha tutor I see on here right now, which can help me with my English. Can you please have a look at my previous English-Poetry post. Thank you very much in return:-)

English
Where can I go to check about my essay when your are finished? I have not seen any essay from you for help with proofreading. If you post the entire essay in a message, someone will respond directly to that message. =) I need your help to write that essay,"A way to decrease ...

maths
sir steve plz am a little confuse (x-y)³=A(x+y) prove that (2x+y)dy/dx=x+2y if y is a function of x and x=e^t/(e^t+1) show that dy/dt=x(1-x)dy/dx plz explain to me very well sir damon answered that but i still dont get it If u want me to show my work i will do it sir plz plz ...

7th grade grammar
Writeacher: Juliana looked at the powerpoint on the clauses and she said it was really good, thank you writeacher. She said it helped her a lot. She thinks she might have it now. Thank you SOOOO much!

English
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. 1) I'm pleased to read that English is and will remain the lingua franca of the project. For this reason, we'd like to vary a few sentences in your application form. In particular, this sentence: 2) "By executing the ...

math
describe an application for the use of ratios or portions. And describe how an application problem could be useful in daily life? Lok at the post directly below yours. I think it will serve as an example.

Writing------PLZ HELP--I'M DESPERATE!!
In writing an essay,what are some factors that have influenced your life? What are some hereditary and enviromental factors that have influenced how you have developed? Please tell us what has influenced YOUR life, and we'll be glad to critique your essay.

To Writeacher-Thanks
I'd like to thank you for helping me with my poem writeacher, thank you very, very much. :-)

Job Application
What are some good strenghts, and weaknesses to place on a job application. I'm feeling out a job application for papa johns pizza If you have weaknesses, put them...There are no good weaknesses, so don't search for them. But if you have one, such as stuttering, or anxiety ...

Ms.Sue (ONLY)
can you plz help me in science? PLZ HELP ME! YOU HELP ALL THE TIME! *begs* plz help! i am my knees!!!!! (really i am!) its called "science 8th grade"

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