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Question about college application
I had submitted a college application essay three days ago, but after I submitted it, I felt so uncomfortable with that one, because the essay was so bad, but I had to do that, it was the last day for priority application. Since I could not change anything for my application ...
December 3, 2006 by Jenni

Eng. Essay - Writeacher
Writeacher or Bobpursley, or anyone who could help me with my essay. I don't know why I cannot find the post that I needed help on, my essay was on traditional families versus TV show families. I included more information. I wish I could include the link here to my post. :\
February 20, 2012 by Farrell

College Application
I am filling out a college application to a university in ohio that has a few thousand students enrolled. On the application there is a page for optional information like family, ethnicity, gender, etc. There is also an optional essay where you choose a topic to help the ...
November 23, 2007 by Christian

application essay, plz help Writeacher, SarJMcgin
Below is a draft of my daughter's college scholarship application essay. I would appreciate if a few of the Jiskha gang could review and critique. Many thanks in advance. Scholarship Essay “What do you want to be when you grow up?” This is one of those questions every child ...
August 4, 2009 by economyst

Writing - application essay
I am writing an application essay to try and get accepted into Haywood Early College. I am writing four paragraphs and I already have 2 paragraph topics. I guess what I am trying to ask is could I possibly get help with 2 more topics?
April 22, 2012 by May-May

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.
January 10, 2014 by Victoria

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.
January 11, 2014 by Victoria

Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)
How should I begin this assigned essay? Write an essay in what ways today people are more fearful than people in past generations. You may use examples from real life, the selection you just read, books, movies, music, or television.
January 8, 2014 by Victoria

English essay
I have to write an essay on " Human beings have unlimited desires but limited resources.Is it possible to reconcile the two?" Can you help me plz. I have no idea what to write in the intro. Thx :-) Your title reminds me of the Band leader in the production of Music Man. Big ...
April 9, 2007 by Shym

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I'm not quite certain I understand what you meant in your latest reply in the last "Literature Essay" post.
January 10, 2014 by Anonymous

Exposition: How-to Essay (Writeacher)
I have been assigned to write a 3-paragraph how-to essay. Should I number each paragraph? If not, why?
March 23, 2014 by Anonymous

writeacher
i writing essay on what true love be and this be one sentence in my essay you please able to change it to positive? i have negative word which be unable in essay. In the short story, "The Painted Door", by Sinclair Ross, the main characters John and Ann were unable to ...
February 11, 2012 by Mohammad

LIVING ENVIRONMENT
the ability to grow in size is a characteristic of living organism .Although an icicle may grow in size over time,it is considered nonliving because there is 1)an incerase in matter ,but no increase in the number of icicle. 2)an interaction between the icicle and the ...
February 12, 2013 by tania sharmin

To: Writeacher
I corrected my Romeo and Juliet essay below.
April 23, 2009 by Hugs n kisses

I NEED HELP!!:(!!!! HELP ME PLZ!!
I GOT A FEW QUESTIONS SO what is a cell part that has the funcion of a gel-like material inside cells... and what releases energy into the cell.?? plz plz plz plz HELP!!!
October 20, 2009 by i really need help!!

Response Essay (Writeacher!)
How should I begin this? This response essay regards "Rules of the Game" by Amy Tan. The prompt: In Amy Tan's "Rules of the Game," we read about a generational tug of war. Write 3-paragraph essay in which you discuss the motivation of each generation. My thesis: Both Waverly, ...
February 10, 2014 by Anonymous

Business Managment
Which of the following statements most effectively applies you-attitude? A."We began processing your application today." B."Your application is now being processed." C."We will have your application processed by next Thursday." D."Your application will be processed by next ...
August 12, 2010 by Kimberly

Business English
Which of the following statements most effectively applies you-attitude? "We began processing your application today." "Your application is now being processed." "We will have your application processed by next Thursday." "Your application will be processed by next Thursday."
January 25, 2012 by Jdub

Alg2
For a college application, Macawi must select one of five topics on which to write a short essay. She must also select a different topic from the list for a longer essay. How many ways can she choose the topics for the two essays?
December 4, 2011 by Rock

essay
what are some good topic to do a personal statment on for an college application?
November 7, 2009 by kate

Writeacher please read
I posted something below after my essay.
April 7, 2009 by Terrie

Math ....urgent help
i just dont get this elimination method ..... plz help me plz.....teach me how to keep the x and y in a parallel line. and which number to multiply.....plz help -5x-4y=-11 10x=-6-y help me plz......
January 7, 2009 by vero

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I apologize, Writeacher, if I haven't reached your expectations yet but I am truly struggling to write this essay. "I feel as though there is a far greater number of people today who are more fearful than those of past generations. Reasons for this can be drawn from multiple ...
January 9, 2014 by Victoria

college internship application
The internship that I am applying for requires a recent writing sample to be sent along with my application but the sample I want to use doesen't exactly scream professional. I recently did a persuasive essay that I am really proud of on the existance of the Loch Ness Monster ...
January 23, 2012 by Harley

English IV-writeacher
Thank you for your help! I even was able to use essential in my essay a couple of times =D! You're very welcome. Go get A's!!! =)
June 28, 2007 by Melissa

To Writeacher
Are you still on here. I just posted my "fixed" critical analysis essay. Thanks again!
November 25, 2009 by Crystal

biology
a boy inherits genes for tallness,but his growth is limited as a result of poor nitrition. this is an example of 1)an inherited disorder. 2)environmental influence on gene expression . 3)expression of a hidden trait 4)a characterstic controlled by more than one pair of genes. ...
February 8, 2013 by tania sharmin

transfer
I am appealing for alate application review to UCD i was wondering if anyone could read over my essay and give me feedback?
December 18, 2008 by tina

To:Writeacher
Can you write you real name when you go to POST A NEW QUESTON IN THIS WEBSITE? Like I mean I click on POST A NEW QUESTION I put my name and the subject. I COME TO THIS WEBSITE FOR HOMEWORK HELP. WHO IS WRITEACHER? IS WRITEACHER A TEACHER? I JUST READ HER "TO ALL STUDENTS" ...
December 25, 2006 by Sanjana

application
sir I m applying for a jab n there i have to submit a note "why i m interested in this job"so plz help me out to draft a note as above
April 20, 2010 by richa

writeacher help
so i'm still stuck with my essay on "The most dangerous game" i have information for irony, a bit of setting but what does chronological text structure mean?
December 30, 2013 by Reina B. V

college algebra
find a real-life application of a quadratic function. State the application, give the equation of the quadratic function, and state what the x and y in the application represent. Choose at least two values of x to input into your function and find the corresponding y for each...
October 19, 2008 by Renee

democratic politics
plz help in writing an essay on challenges faced by democracy
September 5, 2009 by plz help me for essay on challenges to democracy

Writing
Someone plz give me interesting topics for argumentative essay
November 6, 2009 by Salman

English
Need a essay on Boo Radley from to Kill a mockingbird Help meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plz
February 2, 2008 by Anonymous

math
the volume of a rectangular solid is given by expressions given below.in each case find the dimentions of the solid. a)15x^2-51x+18. b)x^3+13x^2+32x+20. c)x^2-5x/2-3/2. d)x^4+x^3-x-1 plz everyone help me out.till 2 o'clock...plz plz plz
May 30, 2012 by parul

math
the volume of a rectangular solid is given by expressions given below.in each case find the dimentions of the solid. a)15x^2-51x+18. b)x^3+13x^2+32x+20. c)x^2-5x/2-3/2. d)x^4+x^3-x-1 plz everyone help me out.till 2 o'clock...plz plz plz
May 30, 2012 by PLZ HELP ME NOW...

computers
I need some help with creating a simple, but automatic site status (uptime/downtime) monitor script in ColdFusion. Basically I would like the script to check if an application on my site is accessible or not every 60 minutes. If the application is down at 60 minutes, then I am...
March 26, 2012 by Mike

pscychology
Could someone pretty plz plz plz help me...What are the 2 biggest parts of the human brain??
March 11, 2009 by Logan:)

Essay writing
how do u go about writing essays that are questions like "why do u want to go to this college" or "why did you decide to major in this" or "what is the reason for you application/clariy your interest in this event" help please!!! Thank you!
October 27, 2008 by Jordaiah

For writeacher:
I'm sorry but is it OK if I email you this essay that I have written on the poem The Tide Rises, The Tide Falls by Longfellow? It's a bit long to type here... Thanks -MC
December 17, 2008 by mysterychicken

To Writeacher
Writeacher, I did a composition on this movie, and I would appreciate it if u could check it over, thanks a lot.
October 21, 2010 by Sara

SCIENCE!!--ANONYMOUS PLEASE ANSWER MY QUESTION!
plz answer the question we were talking about plz plz. Go back to the problem. I got 184 but the worksheet answer says 136 which is correct?? plz help!! thx
September 13, 2010 by Happy Face

english
Im writing a argument essay about PETA and I cant seem to come up with a thesis…..I need help plz.
October 26, 2011 by v

English
I wonder why writeacher hasn't been writing and correcting my queries for a few days. Is writeacher well? Thank you.
January 15, 2012 by Henry2

To Writeacher
Writeacher, can you please have a moment to look at my previous English post. Thank you very much in advance:-)
May 3, 2010 by Sara

English
Writeacher,i can't understand these lines!These lines are of julius caeser and it seems very difficult to understand!plz make me clear! Go bid the priest do present sacrifice and bring me their opinions of success,
October 1, 2013 by help()!!!!!

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
How much more of the wordiness should I eliminate from my essay? I desperately want to recieve an excellent grade for this assignment, but I can't if you refuse to read any more of my revisions. I don't want to bother you or make you upset, but I still need your help. Should I...
April 7, 2014 by Victoria

physics!! plz answer me!
A 0.15 kg baseball moving at +26 m/s is slowed to a stop by a catcher who exerts a constant force of -390 N. How long does it take this force to stop the ball? How far does the ball travel before stopping? plz plz plz help!!
December 10, 2007 by julia

Statistics
The president of a bank selected a sample of 1500 applications to check if the approval or rejection of an application depends on which one of the two loan officers handles the application. The information obtained from the sample is summarized in the following 2 way table. ...
April 16, 2013 by Bettie

chem
stilll didnt get it .. .. can u plz explain in detail ... how did u get the answer.. plz plz plz plz plzp l zp thnks Bond enthalpy is the energy required to break a mole of a certain type of bond. O=O = 495 kj/mol S-F = 327 kj/mol S=O = 523 kj/mol Use average bond enthalpies ...
November 12, 2008 by DR BOOBB Plz HELP

World History(Writeacher don't answer)
What is Christendom? How? Why? And please some information on it :) Writeacher you don't think I already tried google? Stop answering my questions!!
October 26, 2012 by Corrie

business communications
3. To assist in evaluating written communications skills in the employment process, many managers include as a requirement: (Points : 5) handwritten applications. essay-type questions. application forms. portfolios.
October 8, 2011 by Anonymous

english
i neeed help putting my thesis together for my essay reflecting on two books: "the poisonwood bible", and "fall on you knees" plz help asap
June 6, 2012 by celina

Ms.Sue (ONLY)
can you plz help me in science? PLZ HELP ME! YOU HELP ALL THE TIME! *begs* plz help! i am my knees!!!!! (really i am!) its called "science 8th grade"
March 7, 2012 by sammie doodles :-)

grade 10 history
I have a SUPER HUGE project due called National History day and need lots of help with it, plz plz plz help!!!!!
January 20, 2013 by Macy

Plz,plz help!
Can you help me write: real-world scenario in which you would write an inequality rather than an equation? Plz, I really need help! :D
January 21, 2014 by Princess Anna

essay writing
What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.
October 8, 2009 by larry

Writeacher
Writeacher, Do you specialize in any particular subject? I've seen you answer to math, english, physics, etc. I'm just curious. I don't believe I've answered to any physics questions -- poor student to depend on me for that!! Mostly I respond to English questions (grammar, ...
February 24, 2007 by Danny

To Writeacher
Writeacher I have a post on my English assignment, and I have it addressed to you, may you please take a look at it, cause I really need help, thanks.
October 5, 2010 by Sara

Algebra II
Given the function k(x) = x2, compare and contrast how the application of a constant, c, affects the graph. The application of the constant must be discussed in the following manners: k(x + c) k(x) + c k(cx) c • k(x)
September 24, 2013 by Nicole

math
Given the function k(x) = x2, compare and contrast how the application of a constant, c, affects the graph. The application of the constant must be discussed in the following manners: k(x + c) k(x) + c k(cx) c • k(x)
October 17, 2013 by de3100

visual basic net
Formula F=1.8 * C + 32 Create an application that displays a table of the Celsius temperature 0 through 20 and their fahrenheit equivalents. The application should use a loop to display the temperatures in a list box.
July 6, 2012 by alisa

Editorial (Writeacher)
Thank you, Writeacher, for responding to my post. I truly appreciate your it. However, do you think the editorial that I have written requires any other improvements?
February 17, 2014 by Anonymous

writeacher in need of help
Writeacher I did all my homework but I need help with some things. Could you please look at my posts?
May 10, 2011 by Emma

Writing------PLZ HELP--I'M DESPERATE!!
In writing an essay,what are some factors that have influenced your life? What are some hereditary and enviromental factors that have influenced how you have developed? Please tell us what has influenced YOUR life, and we'll be glad to critique your essay.
November 7, 2006 by Mandy

english
i have do do a persuasive essay on a book that i think should be in the high school curriculum but i cant think of one to do plz help im desperate
September 25, 2007 by anonymous

Writeacher
writeacher you havent told me how my paragraph is. can you please tell me fast. i almost have to sleep. im sorry if im being so impatient but i need that paragraph revised quick
March 1, 2010 by Anonymous

Three Posts Below
The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...
November 21, 2006 by Anonymous

math
A water balloon is shot into the air so that its height h, in metres, after t seconds is h = —4.9t^2 + 27t + 2.4 a)How high is the balloon after 1 s? b)For how long is the balloon more than 30 m high? c)What is the maximum height reached by the balloon? d)When will the balloon...
January 23, 2009 by gagan

English
Where can I go to check about my essay when your are finished? I have not seen any essay from you for help with proofreading. If you post the entire essay in a message, someone will respond directly to that message. =) I need your help to write that essay,"A way to decrease ...
November 30, 2006 by louise

math
describe an application for the use of ratios or portions. And describe how an application problem could be useful in daily life? Lok at the post directly below yours. I think it will serve as an example.
May 22, 2007 by Tammy

To Writeacher
Writeacher, you are the only Jiskha tutor I see on here right now, which can help me with my English. Can you please have a look at my previous English-Poetry post. Thank you very much in return:-)
April 22, 2010 by Sara

English
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. 1) I'm pleased to read that English is and will remain the lingua franca of the project. For this reason, we'd like to vary a few sentences in your application form. In particular, this sentence: 2) "By executing the ...
February 8, 2012 by Henry2

Physics plz
Do any teacher here have an email plz becouse I want to send some pictures for question ,,, physics plz or how can I attach picture here ????
June 12, 2013 by Maryam

SS7R - DBQ Essay (plz read!)
Sectionalism – The Civil War From the 1820’s to the 1860’s the North and South had different thoughts over slavery. It expanded through different sections of America. The North and South started to develop new ways in which to make money and lifestyles. The Abolitionist ...
May 31, 2012 by Laruen

Job Application
What are some good strenghts, and weaknesses to place on a job application. I'm feeling out a job application for papa johns pizza If you have weaknesses, put them...There are no good weaknesses, so don't search for them. But if you have one, such as stuttering, or anxiety ...
April 10, 2007 by Anonymous

7th grade grammar
Writeacher: Juliana looked at the powerpoint on the clauses and she said it was really good, thank you writeacher. She said it helped her a lot. She thinks she might have it now. Thank you SOOOO much!
February 8, 2010 by Juliana's mom

Texas Colleges
I would like to apply for scholarships. Is the site which was recently posted regarding college for all texans an online application site or did I misunderstand? I looked into it but could not find an application link.
August 2, 2008 by jules

MATH SINUSOIDAL APPLICATION
Would pulling a roll of thread create a sinusoidal function? please suggest some real life application of sinusoidal wave that i can experiment with...
October 4, 2013 by Anonymous

To Writeacher-Thanks
I'd like to thank you for helping me with my poem writeacher, thank you very, very much. :-)
April 26, 2010 by Sara

biology
Biotechnology allows us to use living organisms or their processes for human needs or purposes. Currently, this topic includes such general examples as cloning, stem cells (adult, umbilical cord, and embryonic), DNA fingerprinting, biological warfare, bioremediation, ...
November 30, 2008 by Tammy

English
Rules of writing an essay?, And what are the main factors of an essay?, How to properly write an essay without an errors?
April 4, 2009 by Aaron

biology/science
Biotechnology allows us to use living organisms or their processes for human needs or purposes. Currently, this topic includes such general examples as cloning, stem cells (adult, umbilical cord, and embryonic), DNA fingerprinting, biological warfare, bioremediation, ...
February 22, 2010 by Anonymous

computer programming
. Design an application that displays the number of square feet in a house. Declare and initialize the length and width of the house to 37 and 22, respectively. Go into your source code and change the initialization values. Rerun the application
September 12, 2013 by james love

Essay Help
I have to do an 2-page essay on "Carbohydrates". I need help on outlining the essay. Anyone can give me assistance on that? Thanks.
December 8, 2007 by Wenmar

Essay
The body of your essay contains which of the following? A. The longest section of the essay B. The supporting details. C. A Conciluding sentence D. All of the above
June 21, 2012 by Clueless

Compare two college essays, everyone please come!!
I come back... and bring an new college application essay, please help me to revise the new one(the first one), and more important... to compare which one is better for my college application. If you are not good at writing, it doesn't matter, just tell me your opinions. Thank...
December 3, 2006 by Jenni

Statistics
How is the statistical application of Pearson r used for hypothesis testing. Through application of the Spearman Correlation what type of data is the Pearson formula used for.
October 17, 2009 by John

FORMAL ESSAY - PLEASE HELP!!
Tomorrow I am to write a formal persuasive essay of up to 500 words ONLY, within ONE hr ONLY, as a written portion of an application. We are to be given a passage & then are to respond with a formal persuasive essay in response to a following given proposition arguing for or ...
March 15, 2008 by K

English
I wrote this poem but i'm not sure if it's any good...PLZ comment Especially writeacher. :-) Your eyes burn with rage Like the ball of fire in the sky Time passes by, and I never got to say goodbye Like an Eagle in The sky You soar away from Home. Never to return... run like a...
October 18, 2011 by Jahnay

math
Describe an application for the use of ratios or proportions that is not mentioned in your text, or describe how an application problem in the text could be useful in your daily life
October 16, 2008 by Gertrude Sanders

math
Describe an application for the use of ratios or proportions that is not mentioned in your text, or describe how an application problem in the text could be useful in your daily life.
November 6, 2008 by scooby91320002

BAA App. Essay Help! (please read!)
Black Achievement Award I was nominate for BAA, so I have to complete the application and in the application is says that I have to describe my accomplishments (i have to choose two of the five personal achievements; community, artistic, athletic, leadership, or personal ...
December 5, 2012 by Laruen

justice system
1. “Substantive due process” refers to: A. the content of a law. B. the application of law. C. the application of penalties. D. criminal procedure. is it A 2. __________ is the act of taking a person into custody. A. Search and seizure B. Arrest C. Detention D. Booking is it B
May 6, 2013 by Amy

To Writeacher
Writeacher, I tried to change some sentences, and tried to add conjunctions in some, but I don't know if they seem to make sense.
May 2, 2010 by Sara

english essay
Thanx alot again. Writeacher, Jenna, jk1115, for all your help thank you so much. Introduction: Topic: male/female communication Comparison of two articles (state article names) state thesis... i need help on this... What are the titles of the two articles? What main ideas are...
February 25, 2007 by san

language arts
I need to do an essay in a language arts package titled noggin. I lost the essay part of it. I'm not asking for you to do an essay for me, but if you could put up the page so I know how to make the Picture look that the essay goes in. I need to have it in by Monday
May 18, 2012 by Michael

can you help me???
actually i got to make a web page realted to books (could be anything .. story, essay or school books)any shot of book... what can be the name of the web. help me plz...
November 4, 2008 by Anonymous

writing essay
What is the number one essay writing rule? A.Always write five paragraphs B.Always brainstorm before writing the essay C.start the writing essay the day it is assigned i got B
October 6, 2011 by ciara

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