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application essay, plz help Writeacher, SarJMcgin
Thank-you!!
Tuesday, August 4, 2009 at 9:35am by economyst

Question about college application
I had submitted a college application essay three days ago, but after I submitted it, I felt so uncomfortable with that one, because the essay was so bad, but I had to do that, it was the last day for priority application. Since I could not change anything for my application ...
Sunday, December 3, 2006 at 7:21pm by Jenni

College Application
I am filling out a college application to a university in ohio that has a few thousand students enrolled. On the application there is a page for optional information like family, ethnicity, gender, etc. There is also an optional essay where you choose a topic to help the ...
Friday, November 23, 2007 at 2:41pm by Christian

Eng. Essay - Writeacher
Writeacher or Bobpursley, or anyone who could help me with my essay. I don't know why I cannot find the post that I needed help on, my essay was on traditional families versus TV show families. I included more information. I wish I could include the link here to my post. :\
Monday, February 20, 2012 at 3:26pm by Farrell

Writing - application essay
I am writing an application essay to try and get accepted into Haywood Early College. I am writing four paragraphs and I already have 2 paragraph topics. I guess what I am trying to ask is could I possibly get help with 2 more topics?
Sunday, April 22, 2012 at 1:42pm by May-May

application essay, plz help Writeacher, SarJMcgin
Here are some grammar points to consider: second grade teacher = hyphenated = second-grade teacher after school program = after-school program (twice) peer helping program. = peer-helping program Speaking personally, teaching is certainly a worthy aim. It IS rewarding, ...
Tuesday, August 4, 2009 at 9:35am by SraJMcGin

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.
Friday, January 10, 2014 at 6:23pm by Victoria

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.
Saturday, January 11, 2014 at 7:39pm by Victoria

SS7R - DBQ Essay (plz read!)
The introduction is the last thing you write in an essay!! You can't introduce an essay until after you've written it and know what it says.
Thursday, May 31, 2012 at 7:16pm by Ms. Sue

college essay
How long should an application essay be? (max and min)
Sunday, November 25, 2007 at 4:59pm by Rebekah

Literature Essay (Writeacher and/or Ms.Sue)
Yes, I know it isn't even remotely similar but I listened to Writeacher's advice and "started from scratch." I created an outline and followed it.
Sunday, January 12, 2014 at 9:25pm by Victoria

How-To Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Writeacher, are you able to help me?
Tuesday, March 25, 2014 at 4:20pm by Anonymous

Literature Essay (Writeacher and/or Ms.Sue)
What do I think? I think you've plagiarized this essay, but I haven't found the source yet. It's not remotely like anything you've posted on this essay for the last few days.
Sunday, January 12, 2014 at 9:25pm by Ms. Sue

Thesis Statement
Read the linked page Writeacher provided for me in the post titled "Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)" below. It most certainly should be able to help you.
Monday, February 17, 2014 at 11:32pm by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
What? No, I can't if this essay is as wordy and strangely structured as you say.
Friday, April 4, 2014 at 5:18pm by Anonymous

How-To Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
No, I have only been assigned to write a 3-paragraph ho-to essay.
Tuesday, March 25, 2014 at 4:20pm by Anonymous

English
Writeacher's corrections have nothing to do with whether the essay is argumentative or not. She is correcting the grammar and proper essay form.
Saturday, January 2, 2010 at 1:12pm by GuruBlue

English essay
I have to write an essay on " Human beings have unlimited desires but limited resources.Is it possible to reconcile the two?" Can you help me plz. I have no idea what to write in the intro. Thx :-) Your title reminds me of the Band leader in the production of Music Man. Big ...
Monday, April 9, 2007 at 3:37am by Shym

Writeacher please read
Did you think it sounded good though? And could you give me a letter grade. I fixed all the problems that needed to be done in the essay on my final draft. Thanks for all your help writeacher.
Tuesday, April 7, 2009 at 3:50pm by Terrie

application essay, plz help Writeacher, SarJMcgin
Honestly, I have read hundreds of these and rated for scholarship or other awards probably a quarter of those. This just doesn't sound as if a HS student wrote it. It is highly polished, and speaks from an "adult" perspective. But more importantly, it is very high on the ...
Tuesday, August 4, 2009 at 9:35am by bobpursley

Essay Contest (plz read)
I found this essay contest, Partiot Pen Essay contest but I'm looking for a entry form for 2012, I can't enter 2011 because the deadline for it was november 1 which pass.
Sunday, December 4, 2011 at 1:31pm by Laruen

Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)
How should I begin this assigned essay? Write an essay in what ways today people are more fearful than people in past generations. You may use examples from real life, the selection you just read, books, movies, music, or television.
Wednesday, January 8, 2014 at 4:52pm by Victoria

English 9R - Civil Disobedience Essay Check (PLZ!)
What were the instructions for this essay?
Wednesday, April 9, 2014 at 6:38pm by Ms. Sue

English 9R - Civil Disobedience Essay Check (PLZ!)
i cant use we or I in my essay
Wednesday, April 9, 2014 at 6:38pm by Lauren

finitemath.application. help me plz!
thank youu so much!!
Tuesday, June 22, 2010 at 9:14pm by shasha

Essay
Yes, I know what they mean. I'm writing a essay for my NJHS (National's Juniors Honors Society) application. I thought about that but that didn't exactly feel write because I have to persuade the school why I would be great in the NJHS.
Thursday, February 20, 2014 at 4:27pm by Navpreet

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Yes, but she gave me ideas I would only be able to use if I was writing an essay about ways people are less fearful than those of past generations.
Saturday, January 11, 2014 at 7:39pm by Victoria

English 12: Research Essay
Writeacher has already read and commented on this essay. Until you follow her instructions about a thesis statement and outline, I doubt if any tutors here will be able to help you.
Saturday, December 3, 2011 at 7:05pm by Ms. Sue

application
Writing essays in college classes? Or writing an essay for your college application?
Thursday, May 3, 2012 at 6:14pm by Writeacher

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I'm not quite certain I understand what you meant in your latest reply in the last "Literature Essay" post.
Friday, January 10, 2014 at 11:20am by Anonymous

Exposition: How-to Essay (Writeacher)
I have been assigned to write a 3-paragraph how-to essay. Should I number each paragraph? If not, why?
Sunday, March 23, 2014 at 8:22am by Anonymous

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
My assigned essay is to be about ways people today are more fearful than people in past generations, though.
Friday, January 10, 2014 at 6:23pm by Victoria

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Victoria -- I told you the reasons you listed should be used as an outline for your essay. Some of them included bullying, walking alone at night, economics, losing a job, rape.
Saturday, January 11, 2014 at 7:39pm by Ms. Sue

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
O.K. There you have an outline for your essay. Now write a paragraph about each of these. You may want to combine some of these so that you have three substantial body paragraphs.
Friday, January 10, 2014 at 6:23pm by Ms. Sue

word unscramble
plz plz plz plz help me have to give it tommorow. it has to school items only. the four words are that need to be unscramble. 1. EEFILNPPTT 2. AEHIRSSTTW 3.EEHKOSSUY 4. CEGHLMOSTY SO PLZ HELP I REAlly wannt to know what it is plz help.
Thursday, September 28, 2006 at 3:34pm by shruti

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
I'm sorry, but I am trying. In fact, I recently researched different means to eliminate wordiness. Thus, I am revising my essay now. If I sumbitted it to you once more, will you still evaluate it?
Monday, April 7, 2014 at 11:40am by Victoria

Grammar
Thank you! May I ask for your opinion on my Biographical Essay? Writeacher already evlauated the essay several times, claiming that I had made no significant improvement, but I'd still like your opinion.
Monday, April 7, 2014 at 10:30pm by Victoria

writeacher
i writing essay on what true love be and this be one sentence in my essay you please able to change it to positive? i have negative word which be unable in essay. In the short story, "The Painted Door", by Sinclair Ross, the main characters John and Ann were unable to ...
Saturday, February 11, 2012 at 10:40am by Mohammad

Writing - application essay
Thank you this will help me a bunch!
Sunday, April 22, 2012 at 1:42pm by May-May

College Essay
http://www.google.com/search?rlz=1C1GGGE_enUS379US379&sugexp=chrome,mod=17&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8&q=what+not+to+do+on+college+application+essay You might want to read through the first three or four of the links in these search results -- not particularly to change the basis...
Monday, June 18, 2012 at 5:31pm by Writeacher

college essay
Your essay may make the difference then. All applicants must apply through the Common Application. Due to the number of applications received, interviews are not part of the admissions process. Students are welcome to share additional information with us through the Common ...
Saturday, November 9, 2013 at 5:05pm by Writeacher

LIVING ENVIRONMENT
the ability to grow in size is a characteristic of living organism .Although an icicle may grow in size over time,it is considered nonliving because there is 1)an incerase in matter ,but no increase in the number of icicle. 2)an interaction between the icicle and the ...
Tuesday, February 12, 2013 at 9:14pm by tania sharmin

College Application
You need to take advantage of this. Here's your chance to let them see YOU as a person, not just as numbers and words on a transcript or application form. Here's an excellent webpage from the College Board website: http://www.collegeboard.com/student/apply/essay-skills/9406....
Friday, November 23, 2007 at 2:41pm by Writeacher

Writing - application essay
You're welcome. Good luck!
Sunday, April 22, 2012 at 1:42pm by Ms. Sue

Business Managment
Which of the following statements most effectively applies you-attitude? A."We began processing your application today." B."Your application is now being processed." C."We will have your application processed by next Thursday." D."Your application will be processed by next ...
Thursday, August 12, 2010 at 4:42pm by Kimberly

Business English
Which of the following statements most effectively applies you-attitude? "We began processing your application today." "Your application is now being processed." "We will have your application processed by next Thursday." "Your application will be processed by next Thursday."
Wednesday, January 25, 2012 at 10:07pm by Jdub

English
Here are some excellent websites with ideas and how-to information for writing college application essays: http://www.collegeboard.com/student/apply/essay-skills/9406.html (Broken Link Removed) http://www.princetonreview.com/grad/apply/articles/application/purpose.asp =)
Wednesday, October 3, 2007 at 8:10pm by Writeacher

English (Writeacher/Ms Sue/bobpursley plz help)
Me too!
Monday, July 5, 2010 at 3:35pm by GuruBlue

NJHS Essay Check
You're is essay is good and cool! i love it! Hope you enter the NJHS with that perfect paper! P.S. Check you're grammar before you hand the application over. :)good luck
Tuesday, May 15, 2012 at 10:50pm by Losa

English (Writeacher/Ms Sue/bobpursley plz help)
You're very welcome.
Monday, July 5, 2010 at 3:35pm by Ms. Sue

English (Writeacher/Ms Sue/bobpursley plz help)
Thank You so much! :-)
Monday, July 5, 2010 at 3:35pm by Priscilla

Alg2
For a college application, Macawi must select one of five topics on which to write a short essay. She must also select a different topic from the list for a longer essay. How many ways can she choose the topics for the two essays?
Sunday, December 4, 2011 at 2:23pm by Rock

essay
what are some good topic to do a personal statment on for an college application?
Saturday, November 7, 2009 at 6:36pm by kate

application
just curious where can i find info on college essay writing
Thursday, May 3, 2012 at 6:14pm by joee

I NEED HELP!!:(!!!! HELP ME PLZ!!
I GOT A FEW QUESTIONS SO what is a cell part that has the funcion of a gel-like material inside cells... and what releases energy into the cell.?? plz plz plz plz HELP!!!
Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 8:48pm by i really need help!!

English (Writeacher/Ms Sue/bobpursley plz help)
I agree with your answers.
Monday, July 5, 2010 at 3:35pm by Ms. Sue

Social Studies
I am doing an ABC book to for Florida and i need a word for the letter X to. IT is due MAY 26 , 2010!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need HELP PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ THANKS :)
Friday, May 7, 2010 at 3:55pm by angel

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Here's your thesis statement from Writeacher's post last night. "THIS is your thesis statement: People fear more now because there is more to be afraid of. " Refer to the outline I suggested in your first thread on this subject. What is your first point?
Friday, January 10, 2014 at 6:23pm by Ms. Sue

college internship application
The internship that I am applying for requires a recent writing sample to be sent along with my application but the sample I want to use doesen't exactly scream professional. I recently did a persuasive essay that I am really proud of on the existance of the Loch Ness Monster ...
Monday, January 23, 2012 at 10:37pm by Harley

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
May I ask for your opinion?
Thursday, January 9, 2014 at 8:36pm by Victoria

Writing - application essay
How do you intended to use your education to make the world a better place?
Sunday, April 22, 2012 at 1:42pm by bobpursley

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I'll check in the morning.
Thursday, January 9, 2014 at 8:36pm by Writeacher

Response Essay (Writeacher!)
How should I begin this? This response essay regards "Rules of the Game" by Amy Tan. The prompt: In Amy Tan's "Rules of the Game," we read about a generational tug of war. Write 3-paragraph essay in which you discuss the motivation of each generation. My thesis: Both Waverly, ...
Monday, February 10, 2014 at 6:29pm by Anonymous

English 7 - Extra Credit Project (PLZ READ!)
Um... Writeacher, I don't I'll be aloud to e-mail people.
Sunday, January 1, 2012 at 1:31pm by Lauren

application
For college app essays: http://www.collegeboard.org/ Go into the section marked STUDENTS and find their information about writing college application essays http://www.college-admission-essay.com/admissionessayresources.html Another good one.
Thursday, May 3, 2012 at 6:14pm by Writeacher

(Writeacher)Writing Skills--Essay
This is the revise version.
Friday, July 25, 2008 at 8:27am by precious

To: Writeacher
I corrected my Romeo and Juliet essay below.
Thursday, April 23, 2009 at 7:03pm by Hugs n kisses

Literature Essay (Writeacher and/or Ms.Sue)
What do you think?
Sunday, January 12, 2014 at 9:25pm by Victoria

Literature Essay (Writeacher and/or Ms.Sue)
May I ask for your opinion?
Sunday, January 12, 2014 at 9:25pm by Victoria

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
What else must I edit?
Friday, April 4, 2014 at 5:18pm by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
What if I replaced the adjointing "of" with an "and"?
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 12:54pm by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
incomplete unfinished
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 12:54pm by Writeacher

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Then you approve of this paragraph?
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 12:54pm by Anonymous

college essay
Check these sites. http://www.englishclub.com/writing/college-application-essays/lfi_introductions.html http://www.usnews.com/education/blogs/professors-guide/2010/09/15/10-tips-for-writing-the-college-application-essay http://www.infoplease.com/edu/collegebound/applying/...
Saturday, November 9, 2013 at 5:05pm by Ms. Sue

application essay, plz help Writeacher, SarJMcgin
Below is a draft of my daughter's college scholarship application essay. I would appreciate if a few of the Jiskha gang could review and critique. Many thanks in advance. Scholarship Essay “What do you want to be when you grow up?” This is one of those questions every child ...
Tuesday, August 4, 2009 at 9:35am by economyst

social studies
plz plz plz plz i NEED help! awnser this question plz! my poster is do tomorrow! i NEED help!
Sunday, March 30, 2008 at 8:15pm by mia

transfer
I am appealing for alate application review to UCD i was wondering if anyone could read over my essay and give me feedback?
Thursday, December 18, 2008 at 3:21pm by tina

Math ....urgent help
i just dont get this elimination method ..... plz help me plz.....teach me how to keep the x and y in a parallel line. and which number to multiply.....plz help -5x-4y=-11 10x=-6-y help me plz......
Wednesday, January 7, 2009 at 5:01pm by vero

essay please check writeacher
pleace make corrections thank you
Thursday, November 29, 2007 at 12:57am by ace

SAT Essay
Thank you. Ms.Sue? Writeacher? Bobpursley? Gurublue? anyone?
Tuesday, September 30, 2008 at 12:41pm by Sahil

English Essay Topic
Thank you Writeacher and Ms. Sue!! <3
Saturday, December 3, 2011 at 2:56pm by Sam

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Keep it and move on to the next.
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 12:54pm by Writeacher

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)(All)
See below.
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 3:55pm by Writeacher

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
What do you suggest that I should revise?
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 3:26pm by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
What do you mean by "more specific"?
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 3:26pm by Anonymous

biology
a boy inherits genes for tallness,but his growth is limited as a result of poor nitrition. this is an example of 1)an inherited disorder. 2)environmental influence on gene expression . 3)expression of a hidden trait 4)a characterstic controlled by more than one pair of genes. ...
Friday, February 8, 2013 at 12:44pm by tania sharmin

essay
http://www.collegeboard.com/student/apply/essay-skills/9406.html http://www.college-admission-essay.com/admissionessayresources.html http://www.goodessaytopics.com/college-application-essay-topics.html
Saturday, November 7, 2009 at 6:36pm by Writeacher

application
sir I m applying for a jab n there i have to submit a note "why i m interested in this job"so plz help me out to draft a note as above
Tuesday, April 20, 2010 at 2:31am by richa

Plz help me.
Fyi Miss Writeacher, don't take this personally, but i only asked u to check them. no need to be rude. thank you very much.
Thursday, March 13, 2014 at 11:18am by anonymous

English (Summer Reading Essay)
Email me at writeacher@hotmail.com
Wednesday, July 16, 2008 at 10:54am by Writeacher

Writeacher please read
I posted something below after my essay.
Tuesday, April 7, 2009 at 7:31pm by Terrie

ART paper
To Writeacher: my prof. doesn't want me to break it down in paragraphs. it is not an essay.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009 at 5:29pm by Jasmine

Eng. Essay - Writeacher
Click on your name above and you'll see your posts.
Monday, February 20, 2012 at 3:26pm by Ms. Sue

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
Then post your original outline, and I'll see what I can suggest.
Saturday, January 11, 2014 at 7:39pm by Writeacher

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
I don't how to begin my first body paragraph, though.
Saturday, January 11, 2014 at 7:39pm by Victoria

Literature/Social Studies (Ms. Sue!)
Let's wait for Writeacher for your how-to essay.
Tuesday, March 25, 2014 at 4:27pm by Ms. Sue

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
I don't know. How should I revise this sentence so that there is no repetition?
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 12:54pm by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
"It protects me from the pressure of uncompleted schoolwork."
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 12:54pm by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
What else do you think I should revise in this paragraph?
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 12:54pm by Anonymous

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Fix the 2nd one first.
Saturday, April 5, 2014 at 3:54pm by Writeacher

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