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i need a good thesis statement for a history paper i have to write. the topic is changes that took place in the U.S. from 1776-1870 im not good at thinking up thesis statements please help
September 9, 2013 by john
English 10 A
I am doing the Character Analysis Portfolio, and need to make a thesis statement, answering the following questions: Why is this character significant to the plot of the story? How does this character contribute to the development of a central theme? Could someone help me? I ...
November 4, 2016 by Trixie
Can you give an example of a thesis statement, then re-write it so that it's preserving what's at the heart of your thesis. Re-write it so that it captures the heart of your readers. Finally, identify whether your thesis is a claim of fact, definiton, value, cause, or policy. ...
March 30, 2007 by GIGI
Of the following, which is the most important to consider when analyzing and revising an academic paper? A. That the paper will be entertaining for the instructor to read B. That the thesis is clear and that the main points support that thesis C. That the opinion is clearly ...
July 27, 2015 by Daniela
I have to write a paper on vases from Geometric to Orientalizing periods.(from ancient Greece). So these are my Thesis Statements: "My paper is about the representations of animals and humans form on the vases from the Geometric to Orieltalizing periods." or "My paper is about...
November 20, 2009 by Jasmine/to Ms. Sue
I Would like someone to proofread what I have wrote as a double check I did not miss anything and that it makes sence. Thanks in advance... Here is the question I had to answer. Review the information about thesis statements in the Center for Writing Excellence. Identify your ...
March 16, 2011 by Jim
What is your thesis? My thesis is The obesity prevention programs and their guidelines that inspire health centers, and weight centers to concentrate on the physically, mentally and social part of the whole child. How do you plan to support this thesis? Suggest ways to avoid ...
September 15, 2008 by Gwen
How do I write a thesis statement about why I choose Medical Billing and Coding as a career. I have read what a thesis statement is, but my writing is terrible and I just can't get the understanding of what to include in my thesis statement
February 18, 2010 by Fannie
Which of the following is a common error in composing a thesis statement? A. You offer an original perspective on a familiar theme. B. Your thesis statement is specific as opposed to general. C. Your thesis statement contains two or more central points. D. You focus your ...
March 23, 2015 by Jesica
The topic sentence of a body paragraph provides a thesis link by ________. A. revising the thesis to fit the body paragraph B. introducing the thesis of the essay C. mentioning the general subject of the essay D. providing an example that underscores the thesis
January 23, 2015 by Jay
These webpages on thesis statements should help you write a good one. http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/gl_thesis.html http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/thesis.htm http://nutsandbolts....
June 27, 2007 by Writeacher
reading and writing
Which of the following is a common error in composing a thesis statement? A. Your thesis statement is specific as opposed to general. B. You offer an original perspective on a familiar theme. C. You focus your thesis statement after you begin writing. D. Your thesis statement ...
March 16, 2015 by Eva
I read all about thesis and i made my thesis about child labor At what age is it appropriate for a child to have a job and a child should have a right to freedom. That is my thesis is it correct yes or no THANKS
April 26, 2011 by macy
could this be a thesis for this topic When Bullying Turns Deadly: Can It Be Stopped Thesis" Bullying causes many problems in teenager's lives such as stress, depression and suicide
September 12, 2015 by Ann
Both Ada and Phil are evaluating their thesis statements, topic sentences, and evidence. If Ada finds that her essay doesn't have a thesis statement identifying the topic of the essay, Ada will reread the essay and decide what the main point of the essay. If Phil finds that ...
April 9, 2015 by Diana
can anyone please help me? I am having to write an essay on Protecting Freedom of Expression by Derek Bok ,I have come up with a thesis but my teacher says no can some one help me with a arguemental thesis. new thesis how does this sound? Thesis: Using confederate flags and ...
January 31, 2012 by sharon
I did help with my thesis statement? I writing an essay from the play trifles by susan Glaspell. Thesis: Minnie Wright loses her mind which relates to isolation,the gender differneces and the canary death. I need a very strong thesis
September 15, 2010 by terri
Can someone help with com 220 wk6 day 6-subject-Global warming: Write a 350 word paragraph that uses one of your arguments and counterarguments to support your thesis. Be sure to include the evidence that supports your thesis and that may support or refute the counterargument...
July 24, 2010 by jay 2
ok im still confused about the thesis tho my thesis was Without getting in trouble, life would be more fun. Then we have to do a Division of Labor (DOL), A, support your thesis B. Major division fo top key words, spoken in sentences
March 31, 2009 by jerson
I writing a compare/contrast essay on movie i watched that be smke signals. i got my thematic statement done, and i have to do thesis now, this is what teacher say Thesis: introduce the story and tag it. I not get how to start thesis? do i say In the story....
September 26, 2012 by Mohammad
I am not sure if my my original post, posted? lol o Age, understanding the concept of death, and the changes in family structure all depict the type of grieving a child will experience after to the death of a sibling. that is my thesis, but I want to know if anybody has ...
December 12, 2011 by Dawn
So, thanks for the help to those who answered my last question. My book is Murder on The Orient Express by Agatha Christie, and I need a thesis for it. In the book, a man is murdered by a grieving family, because he killed their daughter. I want to do my research paper on how ...
September 6, 2012 by Chelsea
Prewriting can be helpful when trying to narrow a topic because it A. can reveal an interesting angle that may become your thesis. B. can usually be submitted as the final essay. C. helps you eliminate ideas that would support your thesis. D. raises a lot of issues related to ...
November 30, 2016 by anonymous
research writing as a process
Question 14 How does a thesis function? A.it points out the inadequacies of the opposing views B.it states your position Cit summarizes the information D.it asks a question Question 17 5 points Save Which of the following is not a debatable thesis statement? A.The United ...
April 28, 2010 by Christopher
What are Hegel's, Fukuyama's, Marx's and St.Augustine's dialectics and how do they differ from each other. What are their views on the progression of humanity? I know that Hegel's view said that an thesis gave rise to an antithesis which was resolved by a thesis which then ...
October 9, 2008 by Jamie
Formulate a workable thesis statement for each of the following general subjects and topics. a. The importance of your family. Thesis: The success of a child depends on the support of his or her family. b. The difficulty of adjusting to college. Thesis: Despite the difficulty ...
September 15, 2015 by Anonymous
I have difficulty restating my thesis in a different way in my conclusion. my thesis: Ruby's sense of responsibility becomes her weaknesses as it makes her blind to the fact that her decision to stay with a man that maltreats her is wrong. For this, she develops a habit of ...
December 19, 2012 by Ted
I have an essay to write. The topic is What are the chief causes of shoplifting? Are these topics strong thesis statements? 1 People shoplift for immoral reasons. 2 The influence of the social society contributes to shoplifting.
June 30, 2008 by Ingle
For the Unit 1 Discussion Board assignment, you will: (1) select a topic from the list below, (2) develop a thesis statement from your topic selection and post your writing strategies for developing your thesis, (3) explore the features of the MyCompLab and summarize your ...
March 21, 2010 by Anonymous
Discuss in 200 to 300 words, each of the four financial statements. Explain the different components of the statements as well as what the statements tell about a business.
March 16, 2012 by Mary
Hi i have to write an essay about The Sun Also Rises by Ernest Hemingway..i was wondering what some thesis statements would be.....is In this book the lost generation was a term that described how the main characters lived their lives? im not sure thanks
November 19, 2009 by Jake
K im not trying to cheat or nothing but im doing this exam im not asking for the answer i just need to understand the first part of the question more it asks me to give a thesis statement for no gumtion and barrio boy, but what im trying to figure out is does it want a thesis ...
January 11, 2011 by someone :D
English Thesis Paper
I'm writing my thesis paper on bullying and I need help writing a thesis statement about how to overcome and prevent the different types of bullying (school and cyber bullying mainly).
January 6, 2011 by JD
Alice and Andrew are discussing thesis development. Alice argues that a topic becomes a thesis if we want to write about the topic. Andrew, on the other hand, maintains that a topic is not a thesis but that a thesis is the foundation of a topic. Who is correct? A. Alice is ...
March 24, 2014 by phia
I'm doing a paper about Usher Syndrome and am having a hard time thinking about a thesis statement. I already have my paper typed up but can't think what to write as my thesis statement. Any examples would help to get my mind going. The source online about thesis statement ...
December 7, 2016 by Anonymous
In my concluding paragraph of my essay I was thinking of doing this: In conclusion, it is evident that THESIS. I don't really know what to say after I've restated my thesis.
May 4, 2009 by Lena
When Bullying Turns Deadly: Can It Be Stopped? Thesis: To me, it was normal because that's what I was used to. This was in an article was wondering if the thesis is good
September 9, 2015 by Ann
need a hook + thesis statement for a paper on psychoanalysis Psychoanalysis is a really broad subject. Narrow the subject considerably, and then worry about thesis. As it is, you could write a very, very large book and not finish the subject.
October 26, 2006 by erik
what is a thesis http://www.onelook.com/?w=thesis&ls=a The word has several meanings. Please check this site for explanations. http://www.answers.com/topic/thesis If you still need help, please post another question.
January 16, 2007 by jillian
Formulate a workable thesis statement for each of the following general subjects and topics. Please give me some feedbacks on my thesis statements. Thank you! a. The importance of your family. Thesis: The success of a child depends on the support of his or her family. * I ...
September 15, 2015 by Anonymous
Hi, I need help with making a stronger thesis statement that I'm going to use on my midterm assignment for Pre-Modern World History. Here's the thesis statement that I've come up with: The book 'The Natural and the Supernatural in the Middle Ages' portrays that the Middle Ages...
September 25, 2016 by Alex
I'm writing a paper on comparing and contrasting the emotional characteristics of Elizabeth from Pride and Prejudice and Jane from Jane Eyre, and need help with my thesis. My working thesis is: Elizabeth Bennett and Jane Eyre tend to let subconscious feelings rule their ...
November 7, 2007 by Angela
Hi need help with need thesis. My thesis before was "Justice is not being severed in the case of the Somali pirates. Truth is being hindered from others about the Somali pirates and how the Somali pirates emerged in the beginning. How can I come up with another thesis that ...
December 8, 2010 by Mariae
I am doing argument essay on learning in the traditional classroom is better than online. I cannot figure out how to do my thesiS.my teacher wants it fits the is/not thesis/antithesis formula.
April 1, 2015 by m
Jiskha Support Team, I am supposed to do a written assignment however I am having a problem with understanding instruction number #1 and #3 #1 through #4 is part of the requirement for my written paper #1). Must include an introductory paragraph with a succinct thesis. X #2...
January 29, 2012 by Sharon
Ms. Sue I understand, but what the professor requested was the following: NOTE: In the “Sample: Outline,” it states that the thesis statement is the last one to three sentences of the introduction. However, the thesis statement must be one sentence in length and the last ...
June 17, 2012 by BJ
I've got to compose a thesis for my modern history paper on Hitler or Stalin. We are looking at studies of power, in particular the abuse thereof. I'm normally an A grade student but both thesis' I've proposed were either just a statement or too broad. I would like to do ...
March 31, 2011 by Hayley
Yesterday, i posted a question about writing a thesis for Life of Pi. However i'm not sure how to develop a thesis from my topic. The topic of my essay is "Yann Martel's depiction on the role of setting in India and Canada". If anyone can kindly help me to develop a thesis ...
November 21, 2010 by Andy
I am having diffucties with an introductiory paragraph with a given thesis statement. How do i write a thesis for the subject on Americans eat junk food daily?
September 25, 2008 by Fayna
English: Children's Literature
I have to write an 8 page essay about Picture Books in Children's Literature. My thesis is: "Children can learn reading and writing from picture books, because it helps the child develop cognitive skills." Can you give me your input on this thesis? And I need suggestions of ...
September 25, 2010 by Kassi
I am not sure how to start the paragraph on explaining balance sheets, income statements, retained earning statements and statements of cash flows...I need a good opening paragraph that will capture the attention of the readers.
January 4, 2010 by Cricket
Any ideas on how to make my thesis stronger or how to change it. My paper is going to be on jacksonian democracy principles, election of 1824, election of 1828, Peggy Eaton Affair, Indian Policy (Worcester vs. Georgia, Trail of tears, Nullification Crisis/Force Act), and the ...
November 5, 2009 by Unknown
Which statement is true? A. Once you write a thesis statement don't change it. B. A theisi statement is the first thing you should write before drafting an essay. C. Feel free to change a thesis statement if you feel you can improve it. D. If you change your thesis statement ...
August 29, 2014 by Tony
My instructor requested that I write a reflective prep paper for my final essay. Will I use words like (I, me, myself or personally) when referring to myself in a reflective essay? What words do I start the thesis statment with in a reflective essay? My instructor wants me to ...
March 21, 2011 by David
I'm tryna think of my thesis sentence but its taking me longer than I expected. My Research paper topic is on Teen Pregnancies and I want a Thesis that would make a good argument.........................................PLEASE HELP!!!!
January 25, 2011 by Susan B.
need help with thesis and topic sentences. Is this a good thesis? Social networking help change the we speak it is daily journals,send invitation to events, and meet new friends.
March 31, 2011 by Anna
can anyone please help me? I am having to write an essay on Protecting Freedom of Expression by Derek Bok ,I have come up with a thesis but my teacher says no can some one help me with a arguemental thesis.
January 30, 2012 by sharon
I have to make a thesis statement about a book and a movie. I need help creating the thesis. I am doing the hobbit. This is a comparative essay with the topic of human development. Thanks..Please help me out..
July 17, 2013 by Kristen
The topic sentence of a body paragraph: A. introduces the thesis statement. B. outlines one thesis point. C. is developed during the proofreading step. D. summarizes the essay’s main points. C
April 14, 2014 by Angela
Please check this thesis statement. Thesis: While some college students want to be completely independent by leaving home, it is worthy to note that dependence is necessary at times.
September 16, 2015 by Anonymous
for my research paper on Diet and Diabetes, i need to write a thesis statement. "Your thesis statement should include a strong argument that can be proven" i picked my topic, but i'm not sure what 'strong argument' i'm going to try to prove. can i please get some ideas of what...
July 15, 2009 by y912f
Thesis statements:People are born innocent and human nature is to be good. @. A strong belief in GOd helps people to overcome many difficult moments in life. 3.Innocence,once lost can never be returned. The need to Survive is basic to all people regardless of their race or ...
September 2, 2007 by ko
Please select one of the following thesis statements: 1. America's top corporations are successful for a variety of reasons. 2. Scientists have discovered human remains thought to be more than 2 million years older than Lucy, a skeleton found in Ethiopia. 3. A healthful diet ...
May 4, 2010 by mark
Thesis Statement for Research Paper
I need a thesis statement for my research paper on The Place de la concorde.How can I do that? http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html Above are two very good sites on how to write a thesis statement. In ...
April 14, 2007 by margie
english - thesis
I have to write the introduction to literary essay on The Remains of the Day with the topic "self-deception as self-destruction". our teacher gave us a packet with things we need to include in our introduction, and for our thesis it says "the thesis statement is the topic/...
September 27, 2006 by Chris
The topic sentence of a body paragraph: A. introduces the thesis statement. B. outlines one thesis point. C. is developed during the proofreading step. D. summarizes the essay’s main points. D
April 14, 2014 by Angela
my Topic & Thesis Statement is this... Topic: How Do You Know If Your Nail Salon is Clean and Safe? Thesis: The best solution as to not getting a toe or nail fungus, is to avoid unclean nail salons. But my teacher says "how do you persuade people that nail fungus is a real ...
June 20, 2008 by gee gee
Thesis help, please? for a research paper, the assignment is to write about the portrayal of injustice in "how the garcia girls lost their accents". ....i have made up a horrible thesis. lol. Can anybody either help me fix it, or if you know the book well, come up with another...
May 24, 2008 by Anonymous
for my research paper on Diet and Diabetes, i have to think of a thesis statement thesis: Diet and Diabetes are two things that go side by side and highly impact each other is that ok. i don't think it's detailed enough. it's mostly my opinion, and not really an argument. can ...
July 16, 2009 by y912f
English College composition I
I need help on writing a thesis statement about child abuse/my story. so far this is what i have THESIS #1 "While other children were beaten to death or were abused in so many ways. I was one of the few who survived child abuse and became an adult trapped in a small body." ...
January 15, 2012 by Samantha
Please give an example of how you would use each of the financial reports (income statements, balance sheets, CVP income statements, statement of cash flows, and retained earnings statements) in order to make a business decision.
October 27, 2009 by Stacy
I'm working on creating a Thesis statement for my social studies fair project. The topic I originally picked out was "Why is female gendercide taking place in India?. However, I don't know how to turn it into a debatable thesis statement. Can a debatable thesis statement be ...
August 16, 2014 by Brandi
Check English Answers
Please check my answers: 1)pathos 2)thesis statements 3)Lincoln promises retribution for war 4)Ethos 5)Theme 1)"On the occasion corresponding to this four years ago all thoughts were anxiously directed to an impending civil war. All dreaded it, all sought to avert it. While ...
April 14, 2014 by AMK
Which of the sentences below is the best option for a thesis statement? A. An after-school program at the community center might involve classes, sports, and other activities in which children can take part. B. I think young children should have a club or activity to go to ...
February 1, 2013 by Ashley J.
I am horrible at writing and I need to write a thesis statement and show how I plan to support my thesis with compelling arguments and counter arguments. please help
October 3, 2008 by crystal
So, I need a thesis statement for a research paper for Murder on the Orient Express. (Sorry to keep posting a new question each time) But I've thought about the answers you guys have given me and I'm thinking something along the lines of: "In certain situations, murder can be ...
September 6, 2012 by Chelsea
Thesis statement: Networking is the most effective way in making your business grow faster. is it a good thesis statement? if not pls. can you make me another one.. thanks
May 4, 2008 by james
Thesis Statement Although, the first admendment protects freedom of speech in many ways, the boundaries are so complex. Please Help is this a good thesis statement?
April 2, 2009 by Free
hi there, I have given too much trouble to mind but could not get the answer as how to write down thesis statement on the " exercise is good for health that prevent the depression. thanks
April 9, 2010 by kisu
English to Writeacher
Yes, I know how to write a thesis statement and how a comparison essay goes.. But I already have my info: This is a comparison essay exploring to what degree an inherent film is discussed and how it relates to an aspect of the HUMAN CONDITION. So my theme is revenge and the ...
July 21, 2013 by Kristen
Punishment, perspective, and silence/isolation provide the greatest relief. This is my thesis given to me by my teacher for an english paper. Yet, I find it hard to understand...
February 26, 2009 by Cassidy
I've decided to do my american history paper on consumer culture but i need to narrow it down to a specific time period and develop a thesis- is there a good thesis anyone can think of
September 19, 2010 by kelli