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Revise Research Paper
Thank you so much<3 You revise alot of my papers! Thank you for that!
Saturday, December 10, 2011 at 9:36pm by Bryce

english-please revise
Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by rose- Ms. sue

Com/155
A lot depends upon the time I'd have -- 5 days or 5 weeks. I'd work backward from the due date (DD). DD - 2 = Complete final draft and prepare to submit the paper. DD - 3 = Do final editing and proofreading. DD - 6 - 4 = Write the paper, edit, proofread, and revise. DD...
Wednesday, October 6, 2010 at 9:22pm by Ms. Sue

English
The only to get your essay written is to follow my directions above. Then just start writing. You may have to revise several times -- but at least if you have words on paper, you have something to revise. The best cure for writer's block is to jump in and WRITE!
Tuesday, October 2, 2012 at 11:27am by Ms. Sue

please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 9:52pm by rose -Ms. Sue

social studies
origin of man efik believe christian believe islamic believe yoruba believe igbo believe hausa believe tiv believe badagry believe
Sunday, October 10, 2010 at 8:43am by sade

ETH/125
Sorry, our posts crossed each other. Yes -- that's your thesis. Good one! Now you will need to revise your entire paper so that everything in the paper is there to prove your thesis statement is true. Let me know what you come up with.
Thursday, September 2, 2010 at 11:50am by Writeacher

english/please revise
What is the purpose of this paper? Is it for an English class or a social studies class? What are your teacher's expectations for this paper?
Monday, April 21, 2008 at 11:47am by Ms. Sue

Research Writing
How do you do this? I am lost. My topic I chose is Homeless. Summary of the Research Process I. Begin the project. A. Think about the assignment. B. Analyze your audience and the purpose for which you are writing. C. Select an appropriate topic. D. Formulate a viable argument...
Tuesday, August 26, 2008 at 6:45pm by Doris

To Writeacher
I see three things in your paper. 1. I don't believe the paragraphs are clearly defined or well developed. What have you been taught about developing a paragraph from a topic sentence. A paper like this should have an introduction, two or three paragraphs to demonstrate ...
Tuesday, October 5, 2010 at 7:25pm by Writeacher

Please Revise(short paper)
Thanks again!
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 6:18pm by Bryce

Political Science
I wonder what "help" means. If I asked, will anyone help me defraud a bank, help means jail time. It is odd to me that cheating is not regarded by all as criminal. Some think it is "normal", but then again, amongst felons, normal is to defraud banks, or ...
Tuesday, October 6, 2009 at 7:13pm by bobpursley

business
You revise a paper after you've written a first draft.
Tuesday, February 7, 2012 at 10:26pm by Ms. Sue

please revise eng paper thanx
You can omit the last three words.
Friday, November 30, 2007 at 1:33pm by Ms. Sue

Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
Wednesday, May 30, 2012 at 4:07pm by John

Grammar and Composition
I think it is better, but could be better. Go on, but think on revising. I assume you read the Twain essay I gave you. Aim for that language. You can do it, but after you take a break, come back, read it aloud, and revise. You want to be just as vivid as Twain, or Thoreau. I ...
Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 2:13pm by bobpursley

Tips
Be sure you have unique ideas. Work, work, work! Write every day. Let your writing sit for a day or more. Revise, revise, revise!
Wednesday, May 11, 2011 at 11:14am by Ms. Sue

english
write two paragraph explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper.
Thursday, December 2, 2010 at 5:06pm by susan

philosophy
I have to write a 1 page paper "presenting what i believe the world is made of and explain why i believe that to be the case" and he said it doesn't deal with like water and land, so im not sure what he means, any help would be great.
Wednesday, January 21, 2009 at 1:33pm by Jake

com220
Did you notice the word YOU in each of those questions? Obviously, strangers can't tell how YOU revise a paper.
Sunday, August 16, 2009 at 4:48pm by Ms. Sue

English 102
actually i am in my 2nd year of college. and yes my teahcer is. I guess you don't believe in God. Well Shame on you. Here's what the sybullos says. since u want to be misjudgemetel. 2. CheckPoint: Introduction and Conclusion • Consider the components of an ...
Monday, April 4, 2011 at 9:16pm by Jennifer

English/ please revise
My reading of the paragraph is that the rest of the paper will be not much substance, mainly silly propaganda. You can do better.
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by bobpursley

psy - revise
Industry Research Completion  Resource: Appendix A  Due Date: Day 7 [Individual] forum  Write a 1,750- to 2,450-word paper in APA format that provides an economic profile of the industry you have researched. In your paper, discuss how the ...
Thursday, May 29, 2008 at 9:21pm by shaner

life science
thank so much i will revise my paper thanks again amy
Friday, October 10, 2008 at 9:07am by amy

english help revise:Guru Blue
can u help revise the above?
Wednesday, February 27, 2008 at 12:38pm by Christi

englishe- please revise
Was the entire course just about the research paper? Do you have advice for new students about other aspects of the class too? A few comments and suggestions: Paragraph 1: Your first sentence is awkward and wordy. I suggest you rewrite it something like this: My advice to ...
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:10pm by Ms. Sue

math
Aimi is making Valentine's Day cards for everyone in her class. She plans to use a whole sheet of paper for each of her 5 closest friends. She will use 1/2 of a sheet of paper for everyone else in the class. She has 15 sheets of paper. How many cards can she make? The ...
Tuesday, December 13, 2011 at 11:10am by Jane

American Government
How did people vote during colonial times? A. by machine B. by punch cards C. by voice D. by paper ballot I believe its either by paper ballot or voice
Tuesday, July 24, 2012 at 3:42am by Ruqiyah

English
HOW DO I REVISE IT...IM ABOUT TO GO CRAZY like seriously im trying to ask for your help and you just keep saying revise it revise it...im so confused im so stressed and im going to go crazy in a minute..!
Thursday, November 19, 2009 at 12:45pm by Jake

English Improving writing
Think of the rough draft, revised copy, and final copy as the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd drafts of your paper. You can have more than that if you want, but according to your assignment, you cannot have fewer. Did you revise your 1st draft to make your 2nd draft? Then did you revise ...
Friday, June 20, 2008 at 6:12pm by Writeacher

english-please revise
This is pretty good, Rose. But these two sentences need some work. In addition to the CWE, I have learned the following writing tools that are: how to conduct, planning and developing my research paper. This part needs parallel construction -- ". . . how to conduct, ...
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue

ENG COMP
List the sources you have found that you believe will be most helpful to you in preparing your final research paper. Identify the types of sources you believe will be most useful and where you intend to search for these sources.
Sunday, October 23, 2011 at 8:26pm by KESHIA

psy - revise
Your paper covers the first three approaches, but I don't see anything about the behavioral or cognitive approaches.
Thursday, May 29, 2008 at 9:21pm by Ms. Sue

english
I was trying to copy and paste a paper that I an writing,so it can be revise,but when I "post message" nothing comes up. What should I do? Or how can I post the papar?
Friday, February 22, 2008 at 5:50pm by ?

Science Paper
DON'T start any paper's first draft by writing the introduction! How can you introduce a paper that you haven't written yet. Follow the writing process, whether you're writing for science, history, English, or whatever: Prewriting: brainstorm, research, plan, ...
Saturday, May 30, 2009 at 12:02pm by Writeacher

US history- forming governments
I believe that Federalists opposed factions more than Anti-federalists because in Federalist Paper No.#10, Federalists were extremely against factions. They feared factions because they believed that factions would destroy the government. The Anti-Federalists on the other had ...
Wednesday, October 22, 2008 at 2:58pm by Ashley

com 220
When I revise a paper, I let it sit unseen for a day or two. Then I read it slowly aloud to see if it makes sense. I accept feedback from another source if it seems rational and intelligent.
Tuesday, September 8, 2009 at 10:28pm by Ms. Sue

English/ please revise
First, you should realize that Boladai is a paid representative of Baluchistan (Balochistan). Your introduction is definitely biased toward this region. What is your paper about? What is your thesis sentence?
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Ms. Sue

English - question
Ms. Sue, What kind of strategies can I use to revise my paper?
Wednesday, May 28, 2008 at 9:26pm by rose- Ms. sue

spell
Ok, Thank You. I will revise and post again. One question though. Do you think that this is a 8th grade level paper? Thank You Again, Walker
Tuesday, March 18, 2008 at 12:27pm by Walker

Writing
Philip Malloy was very devious <~~and yet nowhere else in your writing do you define "devious" nor tell the reader in what way the boy exhibited such a characteristic. For example, when he said, "Girls go for guys that win" (pg.3). <~~First of...
Monday, May 16, 2011 at 8:50pm by Writeacher

Please Revise(short paper)
"some justice" = what does that mean? "payed" = paid "one time a week" = once a week Good for you! Keeping in shape is definitely important as you age. Sra
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 6:18pm by SraJMcGin

Junior high: art paper help needed
http://www.goshen.edu/art/ed/critique-page-2.html This webpage tells about how to write about a piece of art. http://www.dartmouth.edu/~writing/materials/student/humanities/arthistory.shtml This webpage discusses how to write an art history paper. http://grammar.ccc.commnet....
Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 6:56pm by Writeacher

com156
• Write two paragraphs explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper. The minimum word count for these two paragraphs is 400 words.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010 at 10:46am by anna

Macbeth
Hi there. I have to write a paper on why some people believe that Lady Macbeth could be Duncan's daughter. I don't need help in writing it, I just want to know reasons why that could be true. I believe one of them is because Lady Macbeth knew that she could not be ...
Friday, April 3, 2009 at 5:26pm by Jenny

proofread
Did you read what she said to do in your final paragraph? Your concentration should be on your potential students, no on any number of hours or other non-human element. Please go back, and reread all of GuruBlue's comments -- then revise your paper and repost. Thanks. =)
Monday, February 4, 2008 at 7:25pm by Writeacher

Ethics125
I've been asked to write the same paper for Ethnic 125. I do not know where to begin. This paper has to be a reasearch paper. How do I start my approach to this paper?
Saturday, October 3, 2009 at 1:47pm by Janet

English
You revise after writing your first (and maybe later) draft. Revision is making sure the CONTENT of your paper is good -- organization and sequence of ideas; wording; etc. Proofreading is when you take care of the grammar and usage issues -- spelling, capitals, punctuation, etc.
Wednesday, October 20, 2010 at 11:08am by Writeacher

History Thesis....
This is far too long to be a thesis statement. For one thing, it's a run-on. In addition, there are details here that belong in the paper itself, not in the thesis statement. http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html Read through these (the poor and the ...
Thursday, November 5, 2009 at 12:02am by Writeacher

English
They're gathering information, right? That's a type of research. Where does research fit in this process? Prewriting: Brainstorm, research, plan, outline, thesis statement Writing: Write first draft by starting with section II of your outline; write the introduction ...
Thursday, September 22, 2011 at 11:40am by Writeacher

English
Can somesome read this for me and give me any feedback that's necessary. The first paper that I wrote was a narration paper this paper deals with joining a series of events within the first paper that I wrote I walk you through how you really cant trust in a professional ...
Friday, November 23, 2007 at 11:09pm by DD

science
Flexible paper is used for printing and wrapping things. Almost all paper is flexible. Absorbent paper is used for thingw like paper towels. Paper is used for starting fires but does not burn well in bulk and is not generally used for power production or heating. Recycling is ...
Sunday, May 30, 2010 at 2:04am by drwls

Medical Billing and Coding
How in the world do you plan to effectively write an introduction and conclusion for a paper you haven't written yet?? Here are the steps in the writing process. Are you following them? Prewriting -- brainstorming ideas, planning or outlining your ideas, drafting your ...
Monday, August 11, 2008 at 7:23am by Writeacher

eng091
revise thesis statement Thesis sentence: When I order the liquors for my business I believe it is a useless expense of using the online service, because I have to order certain quantities from the liquor commission, but when parties are given for our clientele, I find out that...
Thursday, May 16, 2013 at 8:10pm by toni

business
By paper, do you mean essay? If so, then I would say when I revise a paper, I read it four (minimum) times through. The first time, I read it for style, and word choice. I see if I can make any points more clear, add more detail, or use better vocabulary. The second time, I ...
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 8:46pm by Narasaq

English
Do not start with the introduction! You can't introduce something you don't know. Follow these steps: 1. Do your research. 2. Devise a tentative thesis statement. 3. Outline the supports for your thesis. 4. Write the body of your paper. 5. Write the introduction and ...
Monday, November 26, 2012 at 11:19am by Ms. Sue

Math
Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2/28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? Why or why not?
Thursday, January 26, 2012 at 9:00pm by Maya

Math
Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2.28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? Why or why not?
Thursday, January 26, 2012 at 9:00pm by Maya

math
glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday,1/14 of her paper on tuesday,and 2/28 of her paper on wednesday.she said she wrote more than half of her paper,is she correct?why or why not?
Wednesday, January 18, 2012 at 8:11pm by bebe

please revise
It is hard to comment on the content without knowing where the paper is heading. If this is an introduction, so full of details, it is hard to see this case developed into more detailed substance. But for an introduction, your second paragraph is surprisingly detailed.
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 1:05pm by bobpursley

6th Grade English
Some uses of "paper" consider it a non-count noun. Consider these examples. Please put more paper in the printer. I like to use paper and pencil for math problems. Wrap the gift in the gold paper. Most families use napkins made of paper.
Sunday, October 3, 2010 at 4:30pm by Ms. Sue

English expression
I will distribute a piece of paper to each of you. Hand down the pieces of paper (In a line composed of two people in each row.). Pass them to the students back. Do you have a piece of paper? OK. Write down your name on the paper. Then take the paper attached to the double-...
Monday, March 10, 2008 at 5:21pm by John

algebra
last month mayfield paper comapny sold 58 more than 3 times as many reams of paper a superior comapany if the two companies sold a total of 870 reams of paper how many reams of paper did mayfield paper company sell
Saturday, April 6, 2013 at 1:03am by ee

AED 200
Well I believe that fundraising has gone too, however, I believe that with todays economy it is needed to help schools gain supplies or even support events. This is my first paragraph: Everyday schools from Elementary to High School students use fundraising for funding school ...
Sunday, June 6, 2010 at 6:00pm by Jessica

English
I've never seen that movie, so the content is up to you. All your answers start out with a clumsy repetition of the question, and need to be revised so that it doesn't sound as if a 3rd grader is writing this! I'll revise #1, and then you revise the rest. #1. The ...
Tuesday, January 24, 2012 at 6:48am by Writeacher

ENGLISH
What can they do to help prevent global warming? I believe you already made a list of strategies. Now incorporate them into your paper.
Tuesday, January 26, 2010 at 8:02pm by Ms. Sue

COM 155
I have been asked to explain if it is a good idea to write a summary before writing the paper. Will someone please look over my work. I feel it is always a good idea to draft anything that you are writing. This will give you an opportunity to revise, add more information, take...
Tuesday, August 31, 2010 at 1:29pm by confused by adverbs and adjectives

englishe- please revise
Now that you have finished your research paper, what advice would you give to students starting this course? What would you do differently if you were just starting the course? On what would you focus more? On what would you focus less? Explain your answers. My answer: As I ...
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:10pm by rose - Ms. Sue

Revise Research Paper
so much information; so many pieces of information perfect body," that's when, etc. "if they can just 15 pounds," = they can just lose? life, including... "cosmetic industries standards." = industry's standards "task seemingly seems ...
Saturday, December 10, 2011 at 9:36pm by SraJMcGin

English
First you must decide which you believe: is it helpful or is it harmful? Once you have decided that, you need to follow the writing process: Prewriting: brainstorm, research, plan, outline, thesis statement Writing: write first draft by starting with section II of your outline...
Sunday, February 14, 2010 at 9:29am by Writeacher

Behavioral Science
I have a assignment du and kind of confused after reading the text the assignment is write 700- to 1,050-word essay in which you compare and contrast the influence of heredity and hormones on human behavior. I am not sure exactily how to start this paper to me I believe that ...
Monday, March 3, 2008 at 12:19pm by TINA

law
Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized ...
Saturday, January 14, 2012 at 2:37pm by Andy

envirn. please revise
This is good so far, Rose. But I think you need to expand what YOU are going to do to help the environment. What are you going to use to carry your groceries and other purchases home from the stores? What plans do you have for recycling cans, bottles, plastics, and paper? What...
Monday, June 9, 2008 at 10:15pm by Ms. Sue

word problem(algebra)
on monday,Linus made 5k paper cranes&gave 2k paper cranes to his friends.on tuesday,he made another 4k paper cranes.his friend gave him 5 paper cranes.how many paper cranes does he have now in terms of k? Help me please !
Friday, September 23, 2011 at 2:21am by kimi

Business Communication
Here is what I've posted before about the steps in the writing process. Please read it through and let us know what you think. -------------------------------- Follow the writing process, whether you're writing for science, history, English, or whatever: Prewriting: ...
Wednesday, November 24, 2010 at 1:56pm by Writeacher

Reseach paper
I believe putting a wrist band on there wrist with there name and medication that they can not take will also help.
Thursday, July 17, 2008 at 7:05pm by kathy

Chemistry
Frankly, I wouldn't use either; however, you NEVER use filter paper as weighing paper because the filter paper is rough and the sample can't be transferred off the paper quantitatively,
Monday, March 14, 2011 at 11:20pm by DrBob222

Physics
Two pieces of paper are on a DVD movie disk. Paper A is farther from the center of the disk than Paper "B". The DVD disk starts to play and then starts to spin. Which statement is true? a. Paper "A" experiences a greater tangential acceleration than Paper &...
Wednesday, April 15, 2009 at 3:19pm by Sandy

English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in ...
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Christi

English Comp.
I think I know what you're getting at with this idea. I think you believe there's a problem with communication between pharmacists (as they are now trained) and patients who are not culturally compatible (for lack of a better word) with those pharmacists. Think about ...
Sunday, January 30, 2011 at 3:09pm by Writeacher

English
1. What is the person doing in Picture 1? He is cutting out a flower on the light green paper with a pair of scissors. 2. A person is joining the red paper to the purple paper. 2-1. A person is joining the red paper and the purple paper with a paper fastener. 3. A person is ...
Friday, April 1, 2011 at 9:07pm by rfvv

Can you please revise this?
"especially your story of the Holocaust" -- did he write only one story of the Holocaust? "inspired me to not complain" -- awkward phrasing; how else can you write this? Go through your paper, one sentence at a time, from the end to the beginning. This will...
Tuesday, January 1, 2013 at 11:13pm by Writeacher

English-writeacher
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I got the grade back for that english paper you helped me write a few weeks back...the movie analysis on A Walk to Remember. I got a B! : ) But I have a chance to revise it according to the teachers comments and turn it in for a better ...
Tuesday, March 15, 2011 at 8:29pm by y912f

TO: MS SUE SCIENCE HELP
I think a is incorrect. I think B is a better choice. I believe b is A. I believe c is correct as you have it. I believe d is C.
Friday, December 14, 2012 at 9:45pm by DrBob222

ETH/125
I should clarify this, I think. Your thesis statement is in what you just posted. It's there. You have written your entire introduction, which should INCLUDE your thesis -- and it does. I just want to make sure you recognize which one sentence is the thesis. Then you will ...
Thursday, September 2, 2010 at 11:50am by Writeacher

history
Before you develop a thesis, you need to: 1. decide on a time period 2. research consumer culture in that period 3. come up with a tentative thesis statement 4. take notes on details that support that statement 5. make an outline 6. write the paper 7. revise and finalize your ...
Sunday, September 19, 2010 at 4:28pm by Ms. Sue

essay
Here's a post made by a student tonight. business - Narasaq, Monday, June 1, 2009 at 8:51pm By paper, do you mean essay? If so, then I would say when I revise a paper, I read it four (minimum) times through. The first time, I read it for style, and word choice. I see if I ...
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 8:42pm by Ms. Sue

paper
They are the same size, but construction paper is heavier than copy paper.
Monday, August 6, 2012 at 12:22pm by Ms. Sue

maths
The way you put it, there's no multiplication... so I don't know where you get 3p and 2p... maybe you want to revise your original problem by addiing in the parentheses. Anyway, by the way you put it... it should be: p-p-1/2-2/3=1 (combine like-terms) 0-3/6-4/6=1 (...
Wednesday, April 16, 2008 at 9:39am by Jake1214

English
I urgently need you to revise this paragraph on dinosaurs. I need to simplify it using synonyms. 1) Whatever killed off (synonym??) the dinosaurs almost certainly had a bearing (I need a proper synonym) on the rest of the mass extinction, which was on a global scale and ...
Saturday, December 10, 2011 at 4:56pm by Henry2

to ms.sue project
so if i use construction paper, its the same length as the copy paper? but if i use construction paper, wont it be hard to write on?construction paper is kinda rough.
Monday, August 6, 2012 at 1:19pm by Celest

chromatography
It will appear as an orange/brown stain across the WIDTH of the paper because it moves with the solvent front up the paper. It appears across the WIDTH of the paper because it is present in the mobile phase. It tends to be more obvious than you might expect because of the ...
Sunday, April 26, 2009 at 10:17pm by Dr Russ

ethn- please revise
Your first two paragraphs are unnecessary to answer this question. I suggest you start with these sentences from your third paragraph: I do not believe that applications from any countries or groups should be given priority. The best system will be to randomly raffle off every...
Thursday, June 26, 2008 at 9:05pm by Ms. Sue

Math
John is passing out RED, WHITE, and BLUE construction paper for an art project. There are (12) people in his group. John, who likes to show off, tells everyone to watch closely as he hands out the paper. The first person gets a RED paper. John puts the second paper at the ...
Sunday, January 30, 2011 at 7:40pm by Amy

HIT 105 research paper
Haven't had to write a paper in many years. Don't quite understand the citing. Do I cite in the paper or list at the end?
Monday, November 1, 2010 at 5:50pm by Theresa

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
Wednesday, February 27, 2008 at 7:01pm by jenny

chemistry
Are you talking about M&M candy when placed on a piece of paper and using paper chromatography? If so, the dye has a tendency to stick to the paper but it also wants to dissolve in the water. The different dyes have different solubilities in the solvent and different ...
Monday, April 7, 2008 at 12:51pm by DrBob222

paper!!final help plz
im doing a paper on anceiant agriculture i have wtiiten the paper but i need an into sentence just a good first sentencee
Sunday, November 6, 2011 at 4:51pm by student

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