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please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
June 15, 2008 by rose -Ms. Sue

english-please revise
Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...
May 27, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue

social studies
origin of man efik believe christian believe islamic believe yoruba believe igbo believe hausa believe tiv believe badagry believe
October 10, 2010 by sade

Research Writing
How do you do this? I am lost. My topic I chose is Homeless. Summary of the Research Process I. Begin the project. A. Think about the assignment. B. Analyze your audience and the purpose for which you are writing. C. Select an appropriate topic. D. Formulate a viable argument...
August 26, 2008 by Doris

English - question
Ms. Sue, What kind of strategies can I use to revise my paper?
May 28, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue

Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
May 30, 2012 by John

english
write two paragraph explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper.
December 2, 2010 by susan

philosophy
I have to write a 1 page paper "presenting what i believe the world is made of and explain why i believe that to be the case" and he said it doesn't deal with like water and land, so im not sure what he means, any help would be great.
January 21, 2009 by Jake

math
Aimi is making Valentine's Day cards for everyone in her class. She plans to use a whole sheet of paper for each of her 5 closest friends. She will use 1/2 of a sheet of paper for everyone else in the class. She has 15 sheets of paper. How many cards can she make? The choices ...
December 13, 2011 by Jane

American Government
How did people vote during colonial times? A. by machine B. by punch cards C. by voice D. by paper ballot I believe its either by paper ballot or voice
July 24, 2012 by Ruqiyah

ENG COMP
List the sources you have found that you believe will be most helpful to you in preparing your final research paper. Identify the types of sources you believe will be most useful and where you intend to search for these sources.
October 23, 2011 by KESHIA

Macbeth
Hi there. I have to write a paper on why some people believe that Lady Macbeth could be Duncan's daughter. I don't need help in writing it, I just want to know reasons why that could be true. I believe one of them is because Lady Macbeth knew that she could not be queen since ...
April 3, 2009 by Jenny

English
Valmy gets a paper from the safe - a paper with a drawing on it. ------------------- What is the meaning of 'paper' in the sentence? Do we have to use 'a' before 'paper' or not?
December 18, 2013 by rfvv

eng091
revise thesis statement Thesis sentence: When I order the liquors for my business I believe it is a useless expense of using the online service, because I have to order certain quantities from the liquor commission, but when parties are given for our clientele, I find out that...
May 16, 2013 by toni

English
Can somesome read this for me and give me any feedback that's necessary. The first paper that I wrote was a narration paper this paper deals with joining a series of events within the first paper that I wrote I walk you through how you really cant trust in a professional ...
November 23, 2007 by DD

english check answer plz !
i think its A. but i also got C. As you are reading your research paper aloud,you notice that all your sentences start the same way. What should you do A.revise some of the sentence so there is variety. B.read the sentences with a more engaging voice C.add definitons of ...
May 12, 2014 by matt

COM 155
I have been asked to explain if it is a good idea to write a summary before writing the paper. Will someone please look over my work. I feel it is always a good idea to draft anything that you are writing. This will give you an opportunity to revise, add more information, take...
August 31, 2010 by confused by adverbs and adjectives

English expression
I will distribute a piece of paper to each of you. Hand down the pieces of paper (In a line composed of two people in each row.). Pass them to the students back. Do you have a piece of paper? OK. Write down your name on the paper. Then take the paper attached to the double-...
March 10, 2008 by John

law
Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business ...
January 14, 2012 by Andy

math
glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday,1/14 of her paper on tuesday,and 2/28 of her paper on wednesday.she said she wrote more than half of her paper,is she correct?why or why not?
January 18, 2012 by bebe

Math
Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2.28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? Why or why not?
January 26, 2012 by Maya

Math
Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2/28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? Why or why not?
January 26, 2012 by Maya

math
Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2/28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? why or why not?
January 22, 2014 by Anonymous

englishe- please revise
Now that you have finished your research paper, what advice would you give to students starting this course? What would you do differently if you were just starting the course? On what would you focus more? On what would you focus less? Explain your answers. My answer: As I ...
June 3, 2008 by rose - Ms. Sue

Behavioral Science
I have a assignment du and kind of confused after reading the text the assignment is write 700- to 1,050-word essay in which you compare and contrast the influence of heredity and hormones on human behavior. I am not sure exactily how to start this paper to me I believe that ...
March 3, 2008 by TINA

English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
April 15, 2008 by Christi

algebra
last month mayfield paper comapny sold 58 more than 3 times as many reams of paper a superior comapany if the two companies sold a total of 870 reams of paper how many reams of paper did mayfield paper company sell
April 6, 2013 by ee

English-writeacher
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I got the grade back for that english paper you helped me write a few weeks back...the movie analysis on A Walk to Remember. I got a B! : ) But I have a chance to revise it according to the teachers comments and turn it in for a better ...
March 15, 2011 by y912f

English
I urgently need you to revise this paragraph on dinosaurs. I need to simplify it using synonyms. 1) Whatever killed off (synonym??) the dinosaurs almost certainly had a bearing (I need a proper synonym) on the rest of the mass extinction, which was on a global scale and ...
December 10, 2011 by Henry2

Physics
Two pieces of paper are on a DVD movie disk. Paper A is farther from the center of the disk than Paper "B". The DVD disk starts to play and then starts to spin. Which statement is true? a. Paper "A" experiences a greater tangential acceleration than Paper "B" b. Paper "A" ...
April 15, 2009 by Sandy

Physics
Two pieces of paper are on a DVD movie disk. Paper A is farther from the center of the disk than Paper "B". The DVD disk starts to play and then starts to spin. Which statement is true? a. Paper "A" experiences a greater tangential acceleration than Paper "B" b. Paper "A" ...
April 15, 2009 by Sandy

English
1. What is the person doing in Picture 1? He is cutting out a flower on the light green paper with a pair of scissors. 2. A person is joining the red paper to the purple paper. 2-1. A person is joining the red paper and the purple paper with a paper fastener. 3. A person is ...
April 1, 2011 by rfvv

word problem(algebra)
on monday,Linus made 5k paper cranes&gave 2k paper cranes to his friends.on tuesday,he made another 4k paper cranes.his friend gave him 5 paper cranes.how many paper cranes does he have now in terms of k? Help me please !
September 23, 2011 by kimi

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
February 27, 2008 by jenny

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
February 27, 2008 by jenny

english report
i have to do a persuasive paper on a canidate for president, im not asking for who you think should be president im asking if you think this is a good introduction. please if you can help me. Obama said this before, Im you to believe. Not just in my ability to bring about ...
September 6, 2008 by stacy :]

psychology paper
Hello I have to write a paper and part of the paper is asking for information I am not sure which way to go if some one can please help me with this I would appreciate it the section I am having a problem with is Explain the criticism of artificiality in the discipline of ...
March 23, 2010 by Ann

english - Ms. Sue - Please revise
o In the future, how will thinking critically influence the ways that you: Read? Write? Process information? o Why and how could you apply critical thinking when evaluating each of the following: Articles Advertising Media Conversations Here is my answer: In the ...
April 3, 2008 by rose

Math
John is passing out RED, WHITE, and BLUE construction paper for an art project. There are (12) people in his group. John, who likes to show off, tells everyone to watch closely as he hands out the paper. The first person gets a RED paper. John puts the second paper at the ...
January 30, 2011 by Amy

paper!!final help plz
im doing a paper on anceiant agriculture i have wtiiten the paper but i need an into sentence just a good first sentencee
November 6, 2011 by student

to ms.sue project
so if i use construction paper, its the same length as the copy paper? but if i use construction paper, wont it be hard to write on?construction paper is kinda rough.
August 6, 2012 by Celest

to ms.sue project
this is what it says for the paper: You will create a trait flipbook based on a character from the book Holes. You will need two sheets of 8 1/2 by 11 inch white construction paper, scissors, a stapler, and colored pencils or crayons for this assignment. can i just use copy ...
August 6, 2012 by Celest

Science
A boxer punches a sheet of paper in midair, bringing it from rest to a speed of 25m/s^2 in 0.05 secind. The mass of the paper is 0.003 kg. Show the force of the punch on the paper is only 1.5 N.
November 7, 2008 by Madison

physics
a boxer punches a sheet of paper in mid air, bringing it from rest up to a speed of 25 m/s in 0.05 second. The mass of the paper is 0.003 kg. Show that the force of the punch on the paper is only 1.5 N.
October 1, 2009 by Aimee N. Help

hirsch funnel filter paper
I used a filter paper that was too large for the Hirsch funnel and had to fold it up around the edges. Why is it bad to fold the edges of the paper? One reason is that it is difficult to "seal" the paper for a proper vacuum to be pulled. Another is that solid may creep onto ...
October 10, 2006 by Cecilia

English
Do you believe in love at first sight? Romeo and Juliet evidently did. The play covers the time-span of only a few days. In this short period of time, Romeo and Juliet fall in love so passionately that they are willing to die if they cannot be together. craft a thesis about ...
March 5, 2012 by Teri

popular american culture
hi i had to write a paper on print media and i sent my paper though writepoint and it said that this phrase of my paper was to wordiness and consider revising nothing inappropriate so what else could i say thank you
February 3, 2010 by KATRINA

XCOMM 285
Assignment: Tuition Reimbursement Implementation Report Review the following scenario: Your company has had a very profitable year and is looking to expand their employee benefits. As an employee in the benefits department, you have been asked to prepare a report to persuade...
April 9, 2011 by ELI2111

Introduction to Psychology
Okay I have to do short paper on my results for a survey that I did to determine which branch of psychology I would be best suited for. My results were Behavioral: 20, Humanistic: 20, and Psychoanalytical: 17. I think my main problem is getting all of the information I need ...
January 30, 2009 by Lauren

HUM 130
Christians, I am referring to denominations, not individual people. 1. Do all Christians believe in baptism? Explain. 2. Do all Christians honor their spiritual heroes as saints (formally)? Explain. 3. How many religions believe in or have a pope? Explain. 4. Do all Christian...
December 18, 2007 by dawn

Reading
can you help me thank you: 2.Detecting bias is one of the major keys to effective critical thinking and reading. True or False, I believe True 3.Deductively valid arguments can guarantee their conclusions. True or False, I believe it is false 4.A fallacy is an unreliable and ...
August 6, 2011 by Naomi

English
Can you check these few sentences, please? 1) Wait! I'll help you with your shopping. I'll take the shopping for you. 2) Do you know what will happen if you don't pay the bill? 3) As soon as he finishes school, he'll look for job. The station is too far from here, I'll take ...
June 29, 2011 by Henry2

maths
what is the volume of box if volume of cylinder is 48.125 cubic cm, which formed by rolling a rectangular paper sheet along the length of the paper. if a cuboidal box (open lid) made from the same sheet of paper by cutting out the four square of the side 0.5 cm from each of ...
December 21, 2012 by omkar gangwar

Math
What Would Be The Coordinates Of The Center Of The Hole In The Paper For The Following? If a piece of paper is a plane in the X & Y axes & the Z axis is a pencil that is stabbed straight down through the paper at the point where the X & Y axes meet, then the coordinates of the...
September 30, 2008 by Jen

research writing as a process
Question 20 What does a thesis statement do? explains how you came up with your topic announces what you plan to do in your paper introduces the controlling idea of your paper lays out the process of your paper my answer introduces the controlling idea of your paper
April 28, 2010 by Christopher

english
I need help writing a paper for my written analysis course. It is a paper to be written on, "How I solved a problem." I have to incorporate critical and creative thinking with this paper.
September 17, 2011 by Keri Ann

English Paper
We're currently writing a paper this week , so I need help writing my paper . I just want to know how to start it . Like how to get a good "Pop culture" in the introductory paragraph ?
April 7, 2009 by Leyla

HRM 240
Final Project paper. how do i go about setting up my paper to make sure i discuss all of the things that are being asked of me for my final paper.
February 11, 2011 by Whitney

math
There are 3 red paper clips, 5 yellow paper clips, and 6 silver paper clips in a jar. What is the ratio of the total number of paper clips to the number of red paper clips? 14:3 11:3 3:14 or 3:11
February 14, 2014 by Angel

HIT 105 research paper
I am doing a paper on HIPAA and I need to cite my work. Have the paper finished but I am having problems citing my work. Could someone help me please?
November 1, 2010 by Theresa

science
What are the uses of various papers? How can flexible paper and absorbent paper- be used? How can paper be used for writing and burning?
May 30, 2010 by zstar

maths --plse help me..
THE VOLUME OF A CYLINDER IS 48.125cm cube , WHICH IS FORMED BY ROLLING A RECTANGULAR PAPER SHEET ALONG THE LENTH OF THE PAPER . IF A CUBOIDAL BOX ( WITHOUT ANY LID i.e , OPEN AT THE TOP ) IS MADE FROM THE SAME SHEET OF PAPER BY CUTTING OUT THE SQURE OF SIDE 0.5 cm FROM EACH OF...
December 15, 2012 by Anonymous

Math
The printer in Nate and Beth's office was out of paper. So, they put a ream of paper in the printer, 500 sheets. Nate then printed 72 sheets. Beth then added 30 sheets of paper to the printer. What was the net change in the number of pieces of paper in the printer from after ...
January 7, 2013 by Sumare

english question
i think its A. or C. Which among the following sentences is the most effective opening line (hook)? A.I hope that if you will read my paper, you will believe me when I tell you that John F. Kennedy was not assassinated as the result of a plot but by a single assailant. B. "...
May 21, 2014 by matt

maths-urgently needed
The volume of a cylinder is 48.125 cm3, which is formed by rolling a rectangular paper sheet along the length of the paper. If cuboidal box (without any lid i.e., open at the top) is made from the same sheet of paper by cutting out the square of side 0.5 cm from each of the ...
January 16, 2013 by Anonymous

Term Paper question
I've started writing a term paper and wondering if there is anyone or any place that I could submit my paper and get feedback before it's graded? It's worth a large portion of my grade & I'd like someone to review it when I'm done.
March 18, 2014 by FI2014

Revise This, I believe paper
Would you please revise this paper and tell me what I should or need to change? I want to make it sound as professional and correct as possible. Its a column for my journalism class. Thanks! This, I believe. By: Bryce People everywhere are protesting same-sex marriage in harsh...
January 10, 2012 by bryce

childhood education
Which factors seem to be most important for development of make-believe play. A. children's readiness to engage in make- believe play and social experiences that promote it. B.opportunities for peer interaction in settings that inspire make-believe play.
March 15, 2012 by sarah

Chemistry
If performing a gravimetric sulfate experiment and you use ordinary filter paper instead of ashless filter paper, would results be too high or too low? If I'm trying to calculate percentage of sulfate in a sample and I used ordinary filter paper, the paper will turn to ash ...
October 8, 2011 by Kenji

English- Shakespeare
Some people believe Shakespeare's plays were not really written by him. Soem people believe the real authors are anywhere from Francis Bacon to Queen Elizabeth while others support Edward de Vere. Who do you belive is the literary and historical Shakespeare. I believe the real...
January 4, 2008 by Christian

relative velocity please help exam tom.
the paper delivery boy tires to throw the paper ubti your narrow driveway without slowing down. his pickup truck travels at 10 mph and he throws the paper at 20 mph just as the truck passes the drive way. a) in what direction should he throw the paper in order for it to land ...
October 18, 2007 by candance

Maths
a rectangular piece of paper has length=14cm and breadth=12cm. A square piece of paper of perimeter 24 cm is cut off from it. what is the area of the piece of paper left
February 11, 2014 by Swetha

College Final Project
I need to write a paper that stems from me interviewing another...so in sorts it is a Interview Profile Report that also compares and contrasts with me answering the same questions asked. What kind of paper is this for me to format my writing with...I am not sure how to ...
May 17, 2009 by Mary K

AED 200
The assignment is: Final project is to write an Educational Debate Persuasive Paper on a current educational debate. I chose "Does Prepping for High-Stakes Tests Interfere with Teaching?" Read the "yes" and "no" opinions in the related chapter in the textbook. The paper will ...
April 19, 2009 by Ashley

Term Paper help
Hey guys. I'm wondering if you can help me with my Term Paper, if you can help me outline it. My term paper is about Marijuana. Basically an expository. There is no other instructions.
January 23, 2008 by Chris

english
hi can someone help me I am having trouble understanding the meaning of this quote I believe that imagination is stronger than knowledge That myth is more potent than history. I believe that dreams are more powerful than facts That hope always triumphs over experience ...
May 24, 2009 by fred

Physics(Please help)
What characteristic of water would you be investigating when you place a small drop of water on wax paper and when you try to float a paper clip in water? I know that the paper clip does not float and that the drop of water rolls around on the paper.
March 4, 2010 by Janet

business
Prepare a 700- to 1,050-word paper in which you define the four functions of management (planning, organizing, leading, and controlling). In your paper, include an explanation of how each function relates to your own organization. Cite at least two sources. If you used an ...
December 7, 2009 by Anonymous

Physics
What characteristic of water would you be investigating when you place a small drop of water on wax paper and when you try to float a paper clip in water? I know that the paper clip does not float and that the drop of water rolls around on the paper.
March 4, 2010 by Janet

Microeconomics
Producing paper creates pollution. The efficient quantity of paper is when the A. marginal social benefit of paper is equal to zero. B. marginal social cost of the pollution from making paper is equal to zero. C. marginal social of paper is equal to the marginal social cost of...
August 5, 2013 by Nat

Statistics
Suppose that you visit Shire, and find that 28% of Hobbits believe in the existence of Elves, 16% believe in the existence of Ents, and 9% believe in the existence of both Elves and Ents. You come across a Hobbit: i) What is the probability that he will believe in Ents given ...
December 8, 2013 by Emma

To think about and anwer
Do you believe what you believe is really real? Explain.
September 8, 2007 by Food4thought...

English
I have to do a research paper about something that has to do with my career field which is medical. My paper is on premature babies. My question is how do I do an outline before doing my research paper, how much information do I need to put in the outline?
April 16, 2008 by Casey

MATH
Im not sure the formula for this- John bought 200 yards of paper for $1.95. Jack needs 40 yards of paper how much will it cost Jack for the paper ?
December 27, 2007 by Tiffany Johnson

Probability
Suppose that you visit Shire, and find that 28% of Hobbits believe in the existence of Elves, 16% believe in the existence of Ents, and 9% believe in the existence of both Elves and Ents. You come across a Hobbit: i) What is the probability that he will believe in Ents given ...
December 7, 2013 by Emma

Illegal Drugs
2. CheckPoint: Introduction and Conclusion Resource: Drafting Your Research Paper Consider the components of an effective introduction and an effective conclusion outlined in Drafting Your Research Paper. Write an introduction for your research paper that draws in ...
March 23, 2010 by Valentina Miozza

Ethics
I'm writing a research paper regarding HIPAA. There are 4 questions to answer, I've never written a paper before and I would like to see an example of a paper with questions and what it should look like with references and citations. Thanks!
August 2, 2010 by Anonymous

medical billing and coding from Penn Foster
When writing a research paper and writing a reference page, should you include in the paper that you are writing the refence number after the sentence, or can you just list the references on a seperate sheet of paper and call it done?
June 22, 2009 by Shannon

please revise my intro
Hello, I am writing a paper for international law course can someone please revise my intro? thank you. It is ordinarily accepted among all nations that territorial jurisdiction is based on the fact that a crime is committed within their territory. However, sometimes they also...
April 28, 2008 by christy

English
1. Cut out a paper triangle with scissors. 2. Cut off a paper triangle with scissors. 3. Cut away a paper triangle with scissors. 4. Make a cut of a paper triangle with scissors. (Would you let me know the difference among the four expressions? Are they all interchangeable ...
March 31, 2014 by rfvv

AED
i need help please with this 2. Assignment: Information Processing Theory Due Date: Day 7 [Individual] forum Compose a 1,400- to 1,700-word paper analyzing the information processing theory: Identify the components of the information processing theory described in the text. ...
June 26, 2008 by dawn

business
2. Individual Assignment: Functions of Management Paper Prepare a 700- to 1,050-word paper in which you define the four functions of management (planning, organizing, leading, and controlling). In your paper, include an explanation of how each function relates to your own ...
May 17, 2011 by Marie

English
1. Cats are various colors. 2. Cats are of various colors. (Which one is correct?) 3. This paper is not clean. Give me another piece. 4. This paper is not clean. Give me another piece of paper. 5. This piece of paper is not clean. Give me another piece of paper. (Does #3 mean...
July 15, 2014 by rfvv

poetry
i need to write a question poem with 10 lines and that asks a lot of questions i have no ideas please help! Pick a theme, then the questions, then put them in verse. Example: Theme Love questions.. What is how it began where will it lead how will it end and so on... the verse...
May 14, 2007 by christina

Psychology
Hello I to write a paper and part of the paper is asking for information I am not sure which way to go if some one can please help me with this I would appreciate it the section I am having a problem with is Explain the criticism of artificiality in the discipline of ...
March 22, 2010 by Ann

English
1. Fold the paper in half. 2. Fold the paper in two. 3. Fold the paper into three pieces. (Are all grammatical? Do we have to use 'in' or 'into' in this case?)
April 26, 2012 by rfvv

Grammer
It's hard to believe that a woman her age could accomplish so much. My answer: no change Why not this? It's hard to believe that she could accomplish so much. I believe this is a sentence in a "non-sexist, non-agist" type of assignment, so you need to get rid of references to ...
August 3, 2007 by Laurie

criminology
Hello, I am writing a term paper on Ted Bundy and Danny Rolling and I not sure of some of the answers for the paper. One of the questions is what did the Police do in both case to protect the students during the time of the murder and another question is what motived them to ...
April 5, 2012 by rainy

math
each player is given a rectangular piece of graph paper that is 56cm long and 84 cm wide. The horizontal and vertical lines are spaced 1 cm apart. The paper is to be cut along the grid (graph) lines into square pieces that are all the same size without having any paper left ...
September 22, 2008 by Jayson

Chemistry- HELP
Can someone please help me? Are these questions correct...if not any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! 1. What salt forms as the result of a mixture of calcium hydroxide and hydrochloric acid? a. CaCl b. CaHCl c. CaCl2 d. CaOH e. Cl(OH)2 I believe this is C- CaCl2, is ...
October 7, 2009 by Adam

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