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Please Revise(short paper)
Thanks again!
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 6:18pm by Bryce

Please Revise(short paper)
"some justice" = what does that mean? "payed" = paid "one time a week" = once a week Good for you! Keeping in shape is definitely important as you age. Sra
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 6:18pm by SraJMcGin

please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 9:52pm by rose -Ms. Sue

Revise Research Paper
Thank you so much<3 You revise alot of my papers! Thank you for that!
Saturday, December 10, 2011 at 9:36pm by Bryce

please revise eng paper thanx
You can omit the last three words.
Friday, November 30, 2007 at 1:33pm by Ms. Sue

english/please revise
What is the purpose of this paper? Is it for an English class or a social studies class? What are your teacher's expectations for this paper?
Monday, April 21, 2008 at 11:47am by Ms. Sue

English/ please revise
My reading of the paragraph is that the rest of the paper will be not much substance, mainly silly propaganda. You can do better.
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by bobpursley

english-please revise
This is pretty good, Rose. But these two sentences need some work. In addition to the CWE, I have learned the following writing tools that are: how to conduct, planning and developing my research paper. This part needs parallel construction -- ". . . how to conduct, planning ...
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue

Com/155
A lot depends upon the time I'd have -- 5 days or 5 weeks. I'd work backward from the due date (DD). DD - 2 = Complete final draft and prepare to submit the paper. DD - 3 = Do final editing and proofreading. DD - 6 - 4 = Write the paper, edit, proofread, and revise. DD - 7 - 8...
Wednesday, October 6, 2010 at 9:22pm by Ms. Sue

English
The only to get your essay written is to follow my directions above. Then just start writing. You may have to revise several times -- but at least if you have words on paper, you have something to revise. The best cure for writer's block is to jump in and WRITE!
Tuesday, October 2, 2012 at 11:27am by Ms. Sue

writing
We'll be glad to help you. Please type your paper here, using simple words and short sentences. Be sure to proofread it for capital letters, punctuation, and correct spelling. After you have posted your paper, we'll be glad to help you improve it.
Monday, May 21, 2012 at 12:05pm by Ms. Sue

Reseach paper
Just a short note on the Penn Foster research paper on Opinion 5.07. Seems the simpler the better. I used one reference, AMA web sight on Opinion 5.07, wrote short concise answers the the questions and sent it in. I received a grade of 98%. I made 2 small errors - misspelled a...
Saturday, June 21, 2008 at 7:52am by Lois

English
I agree. How can you possibly do any conclusions (research based) on this in a short paper. You could do an opinion paper, but that is not a research paper.
Thursday, March 1, 2012 at 8:27pm by bobpursley

English/ please revise
First, you should realize that Boladai is a paid representative of Baluchistan (Balochistan). Your introduction is definitely biased toward this region. What is your paper about? What is your thesis sentence?
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Ms. Sue

englishe- please revise
Was the entire course just about the research paper? Do you have advice for new students about other aspects of the class too? A few comments and suggestions: Paragraph 1: Your first sentence is awkward and wordy. I suggest you rewrite it something like this: My advice to ...
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:10pm by Ms. Sue

ETH/125
Sorry, our posts crossed each other. Yes -- that's your thesis. Good one! Now you will need to revise your entire paper so that everything in the paper is there to prove your thesis statement is true. Let me know what you come up with.
Thursday, September 2, 2010 at 11:50am by Writeacher

Research Writing
How do you do this? I am lost. My topic I chose is Homeless. Summary of the Research Process I. Begin the project. A. Think about the assignment. B. Analyze your audience and the purpose for which you are writing. C. Select an appropriate topic. D. Formulate a viable argument...
Tuesday, August 26, 2008 at 6:45pm by Doris

English
In this context, "paper" is referring to an essay or a research paper -- a short or long writing assignment that a student has completed.
Thursday, December 2, 2010 at 3:46am by Writeacher

english-please revise
Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by rose- Ms. sue

short story
Yes, it is a very good beginning for a short story. With a twist is right! Nice one. As you revise and edit, be sure to post if you want more feedback. You can even post sections of it for more specific feedback, if you wish.
Monday, January 28, 2008 at 1:16pm by Writeacher

proofread
Did you read what she said to do in your final paragraph? Your concentration should be on your potential students, no on any number of hours or other non-human element. Please go back, and reread all of GuruBlue's comments -- then revise your paper and repost. Thanks. =)
Monday, February 4, 2008 at 7:25pm by Writeacher

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Apparently, according to Word, my grammar is correct. Could you possibly show me exactly what I must revise? I cannot tell you how many times I tried to revise and edit this essay, but no matter what I do, you still insist that it is far too wordy and oddly structured. Also, ...
Friday, April 4, 2014 at 5:18pm by Anonymous

eth- please revise
Rose, When they say favor certain kinds of immigrants, this could mean illegal, refugees, working, educated, etc. Do you think any of these groups deserve a better chance to get in? Start with yes, or no, and go from there. You will have your body and ending sentences. Then ...
Wednesday, June 25, 2008 at 10:50pm by Anonymous

life science
thank so much i will revise my paper thanks again amy
Friday, October 10, 2008 at 9:07am by amy

business
You revise a paper after you've written a first draft.
Tuesday, February 7, 2012 at 10:26pm by Ms. Sue

Science Paper
I am writing a paper on wind power. In this one paragraph I have to write about How wind power works. Well all the websites I have been confuse me so much. Can someone please give me a short summery of How wind power works? Thank you!
Saturday, May 30, 2009 at 4:01pm by Amy

English 2
'When you finish the final section of this lesson, you'll write a short research paper. You can choose any subject to research and write about, but you'll want to keep some guidelines in mind. Your subject should be interesting. It should be complex enough that you can do ...
Thursday, September 23, 2010 at 4:29pm by mysterychicken

Political Science
I wonder what "help" means. If I asked, will anyone help me defraud a bank, help means jail time. It is odd to me that cheating is not regarded by all as criminal. Some think it is "normal", but then again, amongst felons, normal is to defraud banks, or worse. Help indeed is a...
Tuesday, October 6, 2009 at 7:13pm by bobpursley

Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
Wednesday, May 30, 2012 at 4:07pm by John

English - question
Ms. Sue, What kind of strategies can I use to revise my paper?
Wednesday, May 28, 2008 at 9:26pm by rose- Ms. sue

com220
Did you notice the word YOU in each of those questions? Obviously, strangers can't tell how YOU revise a paper.
Sunday, August 16, 2009 at 4:48pm by Ms. Sue

english
write two paragraph explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper.
Thursday, December 2, 2010 at 5:06pm by susan

Grammar and Composition
I think it is better, but could be better. Go on, but think on revising. I assume you read the Twain essay I gave you. Aim for that language. You can do it, but after you take a break, come back, read it aloud, and revise. You want to be just as vivid as Twain, or Thoreau. I ...
Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 2:13pm by bobpursley

english
I have to write a short paper on Shakespeare Twelfth Night-Act 5 scene 1 lines 248-262. But what we have to do is to translate those lines into a different "lingo" dialect but I don't even know how to get started. Can someone please help? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Friday, November 4, 2011 at 8:55pm by christy

Reseach paper
I am doing the same class through Penn Foster. I submitted my paper and got a 43 "OUCH". I cant find the E-5.07 article they talk about and my paragraphs were too short. I'm glad I'm not the only one with this problem
Saturday, June 21, 2008 at 7:52am by Valleri

Writing
Philip Malloy was very devious <~~and yet nowhere else in your writing do you define "devious" nor tell the reader in what way the boy exhibited such a characteristic. For example, when he said, "Girls go for guys that win" (pg.3). <~~First of all, that's not a complete ...
Monday, May 16, 2011 at 8:50pm by Writeacher

English
I responded to this earlier and I told you to narrow the focus of your paper. This is an impossible topic -- it's WAAAAYYYY to global to do it justice in a short research paper. Find your earlier post and follow directions.
Thursday, March 1, 2012 at 8:27pm by Writeacher

please revise
It is hard to comment on the content without knowing where the paper is heading. If this is an introduction, so full of details, it is hard to see this case developed into more detailed substance. But for an introduction, your second paragraph is surprisingly detailed.
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 1:05pm by bobpursley

Tips
Be sure you have unique ideas. Work, work, work! Write every day. Let your writing sit for a day or more. Revise, revise, revise!
Wednesday, May 11, 2011 at 11:14am by Ms. Sue

English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Christi

6th Grade English
Some uses of "paper" consider it a non-count noun. Consider these examples. Please put more paper in the printer. I like to use paper and pencil for math problems. Wrap the gift in the gold paper. Most families use napkins made of paper.
Sunday, October 3, 2010 at 4:30pm by Ms. Sue

Health Care Management
Have you made an outline of the points you need to cover? Please post your outline and we'll be glad to help you work it into a short paper.
Wednesday, October 13, 2010 at 2:56pm by Ms. Sue

envirn. please revise
This is good so far, Rose. But I think you need to expand what YOU are going to do to help the environment. What are you going to use to carry your groceries and other purchases home from the stores? What plans do you have for recycling cans, bottles, plastics, and paper? What...
Monday, June 9, 2008 at 10:15pm by Ms. Sue

law
Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business ...
Saturday, January 14, 2012 at 2:37pm by Andy

psy - revise
Industry Research Completion  Resource: Appendix A  Due Date: Day 7 [Individual] forum_search_20140419  Write a 1,750- to 2,450-word paper in APA format that provides an economic profile of the industry you have researched. In your paper, discuss how ...
Thursday, May 29, 2008 at 9:21pm by shaner

English/please revise
I looked up Balochistan, because I've never heard of it as a nation before, and this is what I found: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Balochistan Please read carefully, and then revise your paragraph. Then repost.
Saturday, April 12, 2008 at 11:43am by Writeacher

economics
Why do long-run elasticities of demand differ from short-run elasticities? Consider two goods: paper towels and televisions. Which is a durable good? Would you expect the price elasticity of demand for paper towels to be larger in the short run or in the long run? Why? What ...
Friday, September 16, 2011 at 7:43am by aaniya gill

Healthcare
I need some help with answering the differences between accounts payable and trade credit in healthcare. The opportunity costs involved with some types of trade credit. How do short-term bank notes provide what amounts to permanent financing at short-term rates? What are some ...
Thursday, June 4, 2009 at 5:25pm by Nikia walker

word problem(algebra)
on monday,Linus made 5k paper cranes&gave 2k paper cranes to his friends.on tuesday,he made another 4k paper cranes.his friend gave him 5 paper cranes.how many paper cranes does he have now in terms of k? Help me please !
Friday, September 23, 2011 at 2:21am by kimi

Can you please revise this?
"especially your story of the Holocaust" -- did he write only one story of the Holocaust? "inspired me to not complain" -- awkward phrasing; how else can you write this? Go through your paper, one sentence at a time, from the end to the beginning. This will help you isolate ...
Tuesday, January 1, 2013 at 11:13pm by Writeacher

English Improving writing
Think of the rough draft, revised copy, and final copy as the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd drafts of your paper. You can have more than that if you want, but according to your assignment, you cannot have fewer. Did you revise your 1st draft to make your 2nd draft? Then did you revise ...
Friday, June 20, 2008 at 6:12pm by Writeacher

COM 155
I have been asked to explain if it is a good idea to write a summary before writing the paper. Will someone please look over my work. I feel it is always a good idea to draft anything that you are writing. This will give you an opportunity to revise, add more information, take...
Tuesday, August 31, 2010 at 1:29pm by confused by adverbs and adjectives

short story paper
You're welcome. :-)
Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:54pm by Ms. Sue

English
HOW DO I REVISE IT...IM ABOUT TO GO CRAZY like seriously im trying to ask for your help and you just keep saying revise it revise it...im so confused im so stressed and im going to go crazy in a minute..!
Thursday, November 19, 2009 at 12:45pm by Jake

11th grade English
Can someone please help me with the topics for a research paper. It needs to be based on some medical issues. This is the first time I am writing a research paper. please help me with a topic. Please!!!!
Friday, April 3, 2009 at 10:54am by Anonymous

english help revise:Guru Blue
can u help revise the above?
Wednesday, February 27, 2008 at 12:38pm by Christi

psy - revise
Your paper covers the first three approaches, but I don't see anything about the behavioral or cognitive approaches.
Thursday, May 29, 2008 at 9:21pm by Ms. Sue

chemistry
How can we help you short of writing your paper for you?
Wednesday, May 15, 2013 at 9:38am by DrBob222

spell
Ok, Thank You. I will revise and post again. One question though. Do you think that this is a 8th grade level paper? Thank You Again, Walker
Tuesday, March 18, 2008 at 12:27pm by Walker

Science Paper
DON'T start any paper's first draft by writing the introduction! How can you introduce a paper that you haven't written yet. Follow the writing process, whether you're writing for science, history, English, or whatever: Prewriting: brainstorm, research, plan, outline, thesis ...
Saturday, May 30, 2009 at 12:02pm by Writeacher

Business Communication
Here is what I've posted before about the steps in the writing process. Please read it through and let us know what you think. -------------------------------- Follow the writing process, whether you're writing for science, history, English, or whatever: Prewriting: Brainstorm...
Wednesday, November 24, 2010 at 1:56pm by Writeacher

english
I was trying to copy and paste a paper that I an writing,so it can be revise,but when I "post message" nothing comes up. What should I do? Or how can I post the papar?
Friday, February 22, 2008 at 5:50pm by ?

short story paper
or does it sound dumb//?
Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:54pm by laura

short story paper
guess dumb
Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:54pm by laura

Chemistry-help
I think the answer is yes and no. For a short exposure time AND for small amounts of SO2 generated, moistened litmus paper and SO2 will give the acid test (meaning the litmus paper will turn color); however, with large amounts of SO2 and exposure times long enough,I think ...
Monday, February 2, 2009 at 5:16pm by DrBob222

Business COMMUNICATION 340
I need help I am not sure how to revise these sentences without leaving out or leaving in to much information if someone would please help me. Revising Messages: Directness and Conciseness Revise the following short e-mail messages so that they are more direct and concise; ...
Sunday, September 1, 2013 at 3:37pm by Anonymous

HIT 105 research paper
I am doing a paper on HIPAA and I need to cite my work. Have the paper finished but I am having problems citing my work. Could someone help me please?
Monday, November 1, 2010 at 5:50pm by Theresa

English
1. What is the person doing in Picture 1? He is cutting out a flower on the light green paper with a pair of scissors. 2. A person is joining the red paper to the purple paper. 2-1. A person is joining the red paper and the purple paper with a paper fastener. 3. A person is ...
Friday, April 1, 2011 at 9:07pm by rfvv

com 220
When I revise a paper, I let it sit unseen for a day or two. Then I read it slowly aloud to see if it makes sense. I accept feedback from another source if it seems rational and intelligent.
Tuesday, September 8, 2009 at 10:28pm by Ms. Sue

English/Please revise
To clarify the focus of the paper, I would add to the first sentence. In the Federal Court case, United States vs. Fawaz Yunis, five men.....etc. Third sentence.. later , not latter. Fourth sentence, "The appellant, Fawaz Yunis, ....etc. Where does the quote beginning "court ...
Wednesday, April 9, 2008 at 11:49am by GuruBlue

English Speech Paper (can some1 revise it)PLZ&TY
all I need to do is add a conclusion but wanted to know if this sounded ok first. NONE of this is plagiarized I put everything but statistics in my own words :)
Friday, February 14, 2014 at 5:10pm by dark1

psy- please revise
Ms. Sue check my second post please.
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:58pm by rose - Ms. Sue

short story paper
I'm here. What topic do you want to try out?
Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:54pm by Ms. Sue

short story paper
oh sory i didnt see your response
Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:54pm by laura

short story paper
LOL! No, I only tutor in this forum_search_20140419.
Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:54pm by Ms. Sue

englishe- please revise
Now that you have finished your research paper, what advice would you give to students starting this course? What would you do differently if you were just starting the course? On what would you focus more? On what would you focus less? Explain your answers. My answer: As I ...
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 9:10pm by rose - Ms. Sue

Need many responses
I have a history teacher that wants a paper over my article explaining who , what , when, where, why and how. The fact is these articles are short and two students turn in 3 paragraphs for a summary. . . long summary. and was given another page worth of info needed to add in ...
Thursday, November 20, 2008 at 11:06pm by Alan

psy- revise please
I've already made corrections on this essay. Please go back and look.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008 at 6:37pm by Ms. Sue

journ please revise
Ms. Sue, You did not get everything that I had sent to you. Is there another way I could attached it to you. Please let me know
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 10:00pm by rose -Ms. Sue

Sociology
Your paper didn't show up. You may need to type it here. However, does your question make sense to you? Read it slowly out loud. i had to write this paper can I don't if it make sense or have spelling and grammar errors can someone look at it for me please and check my paper ...
Tuesday, July 7, 2009 at 2:54pm by Ms. Sue

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
Wednesday, February 27, 2008 at 6:57pm by jenny

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
Wednesday, February 27, 2008 at 7:01pm by jenny

business
Which of the following is a situation in which you should use fully justified text? You do not have proportional typefaces. You are using very short line lengths. You want to achieve a rather formal look. You want to be able to revise an individual page without reprinting the ...
Monday, May 31, 2010 at 12:09am by Anonymous

short story paper
hi is anyone here? Wanted to try out a topic
Friday, December 2, 2011 at 5:54pm by laura

What?
This makes no sense. Please proofread and revise. Please post YOUR QUESTION, not some gibberish out of a textbook or something.
Monday, September 3, 2012 at 8:58am by Writeacher

Science (6th grade, but actual 7th grade paper)
We are learning about potential and kinetic energy. There are two ramps. One is short and the other is long. The long one is labeled A, and the short one is labeled B. On which one would a marble go the farthest after touching the ground?
Tuesday, November 30, 2010 at 6:37pm by Needs Help

research paper
Please clarify -- and check your spelling. Are you working on a career research paper? A research paper on evaluating websites? Or what?
Sunday, December 28, 2008 at 8:36pm by Writeacher

Ethics
That wasn't even my writing. That was the topic given to me for my short paper. I'm pretty lost.. Can anyone help?
Monday, July 5, 2010 at 2:42am by Brittany

Precalculus
I was the one that answered you before when you had the typo (you had S instead of A for the short-tailed mice) and I actually found my scrap piece of paper where I made my Venn diagram. so.... My Venns agree with your data, and n(M' union S) = n(non male) + n(short tailed) - ...
Sunday, February 23, 2014 at 8:28pm by Reiny

Junior high: art paper help needed
http://www.goshen.edu/art/ed/critique-page-2.html This webpage tells about how to write about a piece of art. http://www.dartmouth.edu/~writing/materials/student/humanities/arthistory.shtml This webpage discusses how to write an art history paper. http://grammar.ccc.commnet....
Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 6:56pm by Writeacher

com156
Write two paragraphs explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper. The minimum word count for these two paragraphs is 400 words.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010 at 10:46am by anna

Lit
I have to write a short story based on the themes Shakespeare explored in Macbeth. I have what I want to write about but I need help turning it into a short story. I don't need any links about short stories please, I know how to look up how to write short stories. I'm not ...
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 at 11:54am by Anonymous

psychology please revise
thank you..
Tuesday, May 6, 2008 at 7:21pm by rose- Ms. sue

english-please revise
You're welcome.
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue

T.V Prod
Anyone know where i can find a short story(treatment). Like a one page movie story about anything Are you looking for a short story? If so -- this is one of my favorites, "The Most Dangerous Game," by Richard Connell. http://www.classicreader.com/read.php/sid.6/bookid.1317/ ...
Wednesday, January 10, 2007 at 4:04pm by Bryan

business
2. Scaling Study Develop a short questionnaire (five to ten questions) and distribute it to at least ten people. Use at least two different types of questions in the survey. Analyze the responses and comment on the validity and reliability of your questionnaire. Prepare a 1,...
Friday, March 14, 2008 at 9:45pm by JAMES

Trigonometry Paper Urgent!!!
I am writing a paper on the 8 trigonometric identites but can't find any information on them. Please does anyone know of any websites that would have things like their history, development, applications in ancient times, origins, etc. Please help. Urgent!!!!
Friday, March 9, 2007 at 12:03pm by kate 316

English read my paper please
I have done the paper. can you please read if for me. How can i close it? i need a ending paragraph.
Thursday, October 23, 2008 at 11:10am by Bryan

medical billing and coding from Penn Foster
I am writing a research paper for HIPAA, I beleive I have most of the information to do the paper. I do not understand what it means by writing it in proper MLA/APA citation style? Could someone please explain this to me and show me a small example of what a paper should look ...
Saturday, June 20, 2009 at 4:12pm by Shannon

English
That's pretty broad. It would be good for a first sentence in your introduction, but your thesis (which should be the LAST sentence in the introduction) should be more specific so that it leads directly into your paper. Please read over the examples and corrections in the leo....
Sunday, September 2, 2007 at 11:31am by Writeacher

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