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November 24, 2014

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please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
June 15, 2008 by rose -Ms. Sue

Research Writing
How do you do this? I am lost. My topic I chose is Homeless. Summary of the Research Process I. Begin the project. A. Think about the assignment. B. Analyze your audience and the purpose for which you are writing. C. Select an appropriate topic. D. Formulate a viable argument...
August 26, 2008 by Doris

english-please revise
Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...
May 27, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue

English - question
Ms. Sue, What kind of strategies can I use to revise my paper?
May 28, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue

Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
May 30, 2012 by John

english
write two paragraph explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper.
December 2, 2010 by susan

English 2
'When you finish the final section of this lesson, you'll write a short research paper. You can choose any subject to research and write about, but you'll want to keep some guidelines in mind. Your subject should be interesting. It should be complex enough that you can do ...
September 23, 2010 by mysterychicken

Science Paper
I am writing a paper on wind power. In this one paragraph I have to write about How wind power works. Well all the websites I have been confuse me so much. Can someone please give me a short summery of How wind power works? Thank you!
May 30, 2009 by Amy

English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
April 15, 2008 by Christi

law
Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business ...
January 14, 2012 by Andy

english
I have to write a short paper on Shakespeare Twelfth Night-Act 5 scene 1 lines 248-262. But what we have to do is to translate those lines into a different "lingo" dialect but I don't even know how to get started. Can someone please help? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
November 4, 2011 by christy

economics
Why do long-run elasticities of demand differ from short-run elasticities? Consider two goods: paper towels and televisions. Which is a durable good? Would you expect the price elasticity of demand for paper towels to be larger in the short run or in the long run? Why? What ...
September 16, 2011 by aaniya gill

Healthcare
I need some help with answering the differences between accounts payable and trade credit in healthcare. The opportunity costs involved with some types of trade credit. How do short-term bank notes provide what amounts to permanent financing at short-term rates? What are some ...
June 4, 2009 by Nikia walker

COM 155
I have been asked to explain if it is a good idea to write a summary before writing the paper. Will someone please look over my work. I feel it is always a good idea to draft anything that you are writing. This will give you an opportunity to revise, add more information, take...
August 31, 2010 by confused by adverbs and adjectives

Business COMMUNICATION 340
I need help I am not sure how to revise these sentences without leaving out or leaving in to much information if someone would please help me. Revising Messages: Directness and Conciseness Revise the following short e-mail messages so that they are more direct and concise; ...
September 1, 2013 by Anonymous

word problem(algebra)
on monday,Linus made 5k paper cranes&gave 2k paper cranes to his friends.on tuesday,he made another 4k paper cranes.his friend gave him 5 paper cranes.how many paper cranes does he have now in terms of k? Help me please !
September 23, 2011 by kimi

business
Which of the following is a situation in which you should use fully justified text? You do not have proportional typefaces. You are using very short line lengths. You want to achieve a rather formal look. You want to be able to revise an individual page without reprinting the ...
May 31, 2010 by Anonymous

English
1. What is the person doing in Picture 1? He is cutting out a flower on the light green paper with a pair of scissors. 2. A person is joining the red paper to the purple paper. 2-1. A person is joining the red paper and the purple paper with a paper fastener. 3. A person is ...
April 1, 2011 by rfvv

englishe- please revise
Now that you have finished your research paper, what advice would you give to students starting this course? What would you do differently if you were just starting the course? On what would you focus more? On what would you focus less? Explain your answers. My answer: As I ...
June 3, 2008 by rose - Ms. Sue

HIT 105 research paper
I am doing a paper on HIPAA and I need to cite my work. Have the paper finished but I am having problems citing my work. Could someone help me please?
November 1, 2010 by Theresa

11th grade English
Can someone please help me with the topics for a research paper. It needs to be based on some medical issues. This is the first time I am writing a research paper. please help me with a topic. Please!!!!
April 3, 2009 by Anonymous

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
February 27, 2008 by jenny

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
February 27, 2008 by jenny

Need many responses
I have a history teacher that wants a paper over my article explaining who , what , when, where, why and how. The fact is these articles are short and two students turn in 3 paragraphs for a summary. . . long summary. and was given another page worth of info needed to add in ...
November 20, 2008 by Alan

short story paper
hi is anyone here? Wanted to try out a topic
December 2, 2011 by laura

Science (6th grade, but actual 7th grade paper)
We are learning about potential and kinetic energy. There are two ramps. One is short and the other is long. The long one is labeled A, and the short one is labeled B. On which one would a marble go the farthest after touching the ground?
November 30, 2010 by Needs Help

Maths
Can someone give me the checkpoint exam topics that are required for a student to revise Please give us more and clearer context for your question. It is not clear what you want to know. What exam topics? Why do you need to revise them? Please repost with the additional ...
April 17, 2007 by Fahad

business
2. Scaling Study Develop a short questionnaire (five to ten questions) and distribute it to at least ten people. Use at least two different types of questions in the survey. Analyze the responses and comment on the validity and reliability of your questionnaire. Prepare a 1,...
March 14, 2008 by JAMES

English
Valmy gets a paper from the safe - a paper with a drawing on it. ------------------- What is the meaning of 'paper' in the sentence? Do we have to use 'a' before 'paper' or not?
December 18, 2013 by rfvv

Introduction to Psychology
Okay I have to do short paper on my results for a survey that I did to determine which branch of psychology I would be best suited for. My results were Behavioral: 20, Humanistic: 20, and Psychoanalytical: 17. I think my main problem is getting all of the information I need ...
January 30, 2009 by Lauren

math
how do you find out the perimeter and the area of a parollelogram in a short cu way in a centimeter grid paper?
January 26, 2011 by Joe

please revise my intro
Hello, I am writing a paper for international law course can someone please revise my intro? thank you. It is ordinarily accepted among all nations that territorial jurisdiction is based on the fact that a crime is committed within their territory. However, sometimes they also...
April 28, 2008 by christy

Lit
I have to write a short story based on the themes Shakespeare explored in Macbeth. I have what I want to write about but I need help turning it into a short story. I don't need any links about short stories please, I know how to look up how to write short stories. I'm not ...
August 19, 2008 by Anonymous

Physics(Please help)
What characteristic of water would you be investigating when you place a small drop of water on wax paper and when you try to float a paper clip in water? I know that the paper clip does not float and that the drop of water rolls around on the paper.
March 4, 2010 by Janet

medical billing and coding from Penn Foster
I am writing a research paper for HIPAA, I beleive I have most of the information to do the paper. I do not understand what it means by writing it in proper MLA/APA citation style? Could someone please explain this to me and show me a small example of what a paper should look ...
June 20, 2009 by Shannon

English
Can you check these few sentences, please? 1) Wait! I'll help you with your shopping. I'll take the shopping for you. 2) Do you know what will happen if you don't pay the bill? 3) As soon as he finishes school, he'll look for job. The station is too far from here, I'll take ...
June 29, 2011 by Henry2

English/please revise
Hello, this is my intro for a paper on Balochistan. I am concern about not being the clear. Can you please make suggestions. Thanx. Iran and Pakistan are not a single nation state but a multi-national state composed of many nations. Both are governed with a doctorial political...
April 12, 2008 by Christi

college writing
ok. so i found out that there is also an artistic scholarship program in the private college that i applied to. ONe of the helpers told me that if I send in a written portfolio, one of my best works, to the counselor, then they will decide if I can qualify for the artistic ...
November 25, 2009 by y912f

English
Could you please check these sentences? Thank you. 1) Humanism spread in the whole country. 2) The English Renaissance developed (spread is possible?) later than its European equivalents. 3)Puritans wanted a balance of power between the king and (the?) Parliament. 4) Charles I...
December 4, 2011 by Henry2

T.V Prod
Anyone know where i can find a short story(treatment). Like a one page movie story about anything Are you looking for a short story? If so -- this is one of my favorites, "The Most Dangerous Game," by Richard Connell. http://www.classicreader.com/read.php/sid.6/bookid.1317/ ...
January 10, 2007 by Bryan

Trigonometry Paper Urgent!!!
I am writing a paper on the 8 trigonometric identites but can't find any information on them. Please does anyone know of any websites that would have things like their history, development, applications in ancient times, origins, etc. Please help. Urgent!!!!
March 9, 2007 by kate 316

English read my paper please
I have done the paper. can you please read if for me. How can i close it? i need a ending paragraph.
October 23, 2008 by Bryan

spanish
how do you say please revise all the verb tenses
May 6, 2010 by Arleen

relative velocity please help exam tom.
the paper delivery boy tires to throw the paper ubti your narrow driveway without slowing down. his pickup truck travels at 10 mph and he throws the paper at 20 mph just as the truck passes the drive way. a) in what direction should he throw the paper in order for it to land ...
October 18, 2007 by candance

criminology
Hello, I am writing a term paper on Ted Bundy and Danny Rolling and I not sure of some of the answers for the paper. One of the questions is what did the Police do in both case to protect the students during the time of the murder and another question is what motived them to ...
April 5, 2012 by rainy

Precalculus
Please!! I know I posted this already but there is a typo. There are 49 mice in a pet shop. 30 mice are white. 27 mice are male. 18 mice have short tails. 8 mice are white and have short tails. 11 mice are male and have short tails. 7 mice are male but neither white nor short-...
February 23, 2014 by Anonymous

financial Matters
I need help in understanding this question given by my instructor. I have posted this question to her, three days ago and not getting any response. Please help!! What is meant by short-term bank notes and how does it apply for permanent financing at short-term rates? Can you ...
May 6, 2010 by Wanda

financial Matters
I need help in understanding this question given by my instructor. I have posted this question to her, three days ago and not getting any response. Please help!! What is meant by short-term bank notes and how does it apply for permanent financing at short-term rates? Can you ...
May 6, 2010 by Wanda

science
I am doing a project on paper planes, and I don't know what they mean by indepent and dependent variable, I know I want to see what flies further, a light weight paper plane or a plane made of heavier paper, but then they ask about the dependent and independent variable can ...
March 14, 2010 by kristjan

Management 330
Please can you help me put an Organizing Paper together: 1050 Word paper - Evaluate the function of management at Delta Airlines as it relates to Physical assets, Human resources and Knowledge. Please cite at least two references
March 10, 2008 by Maria

english check answer plz !
i think its A. but i also got C. As you are reading your research paper aloud,you notice that all your sentences start the same way. What should you do A.revise some of the sentence so there is variety. B.read the sentences with a more engaging voice C.add definitons of ...
May 12, 2014 by matt

to divide Monomials
Please help me with my paper algebra with Pizzazz! Page 76, objective 3-a. Name of paper is Why are babies like hinges?
April 16, 2009 by Jon

help asap please
GUIDELINE: Set achievable goals for your work unit. If I were going to set achievable goals they would be meet the deadline. Have the work be the best it can be. An example: Writing a research paper and the goals for it could be the following. To beat the deadline, to have the...
October 28, 2008 by dawn

English
Hi, I have to write a short reaction paper (2 pages) about the book America is in the Hearth by Carlos Bulosan. I have to discuss an important theme and provide examples. I was thinking about comparing his life in the Philippines and his life in America. Even though he had ...
September 21, 2011 by Jake

English expression
I will distribute a piece of paper to each of you. Hand down the pieces of paper (In a line composed of two people in each row.). Pass them to the students back. Do you have a piece of paper? OK. Write down your name on the paper. Then take the paper attached to the double-...
March 10, 2008 by John

math
glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday,1/14 of her paper on tuesday,and 2/28 of her paper on wednesday.she said she wrote more than half of her paper,is she correct?why or why not?
January 18, 2012 by bebe

Math
Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2.28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? Why or why not?
January 26, 2012 by Maya

Math
Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2/28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? Why or why not?
January 26, 2012 by Maya

math
Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2/28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? why or why not?
January 22, 2014 by Anonymous

english
I need help writing a paper. It's on the short story "the blind man" by Kate Chopin. It supposed to be on either theme or character. I don't even know how to start. Thanks!
May 31, 2010 by Anonymous

English Essay Writing
Here is my intro paragraph to my AP English 12 FINAL paper. I feel like it's really weak and short for a paper thats supposed to be 10 pages long. Please help! Salman Rushdie, the author of Midnight’s Children, and Arundhati Roy, the author of The God of Small Things, both ...
April 5, 2008 by I need ENGLISH help

Health
For this Assignment, imagine that you are a policy analyst for your state human services department. You have been asked to write a short memorandum for the department director on a policy paper entitled Rising Health Care Costs: State Health Cost Containment Approaches. In ...
April 12, 2011 by Ashley

Physics, asap please
If a sphere and paper are dropped from 10 meters and the sphere hit the ground in 1.4 seconds and the paper hit in 2 seconds, why did the impact time in case of the piece of paper change in comparison to the sphere? A. a=(Wt-R)/m;a=g B. a=(Wt-R)/m;a>g C. a=(Wt-R);a<g D. ...
December 10, 2012 by Katie

algebra
last month mayfield paper comapny sold 58 more than 3 times as many reams of paper a superior comapany if the two companies sold a total of 870 reams of paper how many reams of paper did mayfield paper company sell
April 6, 2013 by ee

English
A: Would you like to anything to drink? B: Diet cola, please. A: How many would you like? B: Three paper cups of diet cola. A: Here you go. B: Thank you. (Is the short dialogue grammatical? Would yoiu check the errors in the dialogue?)
December 19, 2009 by rfvv

Finance
Suppose Preun Inc. issues $200 million in 60 day maturity commercial paper at a price of 99.35 par. (commercial paper is like a zero coupon bond. You buy it at a price of less than its par value and it pays the investor par value at the maturity date.) It then uses this money ...
October 7, 2013 by Kay

Math
Huong covered a box with sticky-backed decorating paper. The paper costs $.03 per square inch. How much money will Huong need to spend on paper if the height of the box is 9 inches, width is 3 inches, and the length is 7 inches? Please show full work. Thank you.
October 9, 2013 by Monica

English
My teacher gave us a paper today about word orders on subjects and verbs.the paper is telling me to underline natural or inverted.I don't know what that mean.Will you please help me.
October 3, 2007 by De'Asia Jones

Chemistry
Why is it suggested you use weighing paper or a watch glass instead of filter paper on which to allow a sample to dry? Please give two examples.
September 18, 2013 by Maria

English-writeacher
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I got the grade back for that english paper you helped me write a few weeks back...the movie analysis on A Walk to Remember. I got a B! : ) But I have a chance to revise it according to the teachers comments and turn it in for a better ...
March 15, 2011 by y912f

English
Could you please check these sentences, please? Thank you I've got short, wavy, dyed blond hair. I've got a round face, heavy eyebrows, oval eyes, a large mouth and a small nose. I'm friendly and sensitive. I'm quite serious and clever. I'ma bit shy but I'm generous. I'm pale-...
September 22, 2011 by Henry2

med term
need help on writing a short paper on why i chose medical coding but i need 2 works cited. i'm so confused and don't know where to start!
November 11, 2009 by iliana

Math
Oh my gosh this is driving me nuts, I just started 6th grade last week, please help...A piece of paper is 280 millimeters long and 200 millimeters wide. you want to draw a grid on the paper so that there is a whole number of squares on the paper. What are the possible sizes of...
September 11, 2008 by K. B.

English- please revise
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the uprise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in starvation in ...
April 30, 2008 by rose- Ms. Sue

algebra
^ = exponent **show work please A sheet of 67-pound paper has a thickness of 100^-1 inch. a. write and evaluate an expression for the total thickness of 5 sheets of 67-pound paper b. write and evaluate an expression for the total thickness of 2^3 sheets of 67-pound paper. I've...
April 20, 2011 by SoccerStar

History
1) Give a short explanation about mining industry in the 1800s and the effect it had. 2) give a short explanation about Transcontinental railroad construction in the 1800s and the effect it had. 3) give a short explanation about Transcontinental railroad in the 1800s and the ...
October 8, 2013 by Kesha

algebra
the office manager of a small office ordered 120 packs of printer paper.based on average daily use, she knows that the paper will last about 40 days. what graph represents this situation? how many packs of printer paper should the manager expect to have after 10 days? paper [ ...
September 17, 2012 by kevin

short story
I apologize I meant to say short story not essay! Its suppose to be a short story that is descriptive, it has subtext, twist, and dialogue
January 28, 2008 by Kim

poetry
i need to write a question poem with 10 lines and that asks a lot of questions i have no ideas please help! Pick a theme, then the questions, then put them in verse. Example: Theme Love questions.. What is how it began where will it lead how will it end and so on... the verse...
May 14, 2007 by christina

English
Please revise this sentance: That we the Australian people are becoming to excessively like the United States of America Thanks Minerva
April 18, 2008 by Minerva

business
Optional Assignment Search the internet for an example of the power or politics in an organization, identify how it has been used and relate it to the theory we have studied this week. Your APA formatted MS Word paper should be a minimum of one page in length. (Make sure to ...
September 4, 2011 by beth

Physics
Two pieces of paper are on a DVD movie disk. Paper A is farther from the center of the disk than Paper "B". The DVD disk starts to play and then starts to spin. Which statement is true? a. Paper "A" experiences a greater tangential acceleration than Paper "B" b. Paper "A" ...
April 15, 2009 by Sandy

Physics
Two pieces of paper are on a DVD movie disk. Paper A is farther from the center of the disk than Paper "B". The DVD disk starts to play and then starts to spin. Which statement is true? a. Paper "A" experiences a greater tangential acceleration than Paper "B" b. Paper "A" ...
April 15, 2009 by Sandy

Math
Huong covered a box with sticky-backed decorating paper. The paper costs $.03 per square inch. How much money will Huong need to spend on paper if the length is 7 inches, width is 3 inches, and the height is 9 inches? I thought Huong needed to spend $3.42 because I multiplied ...
October 9, 2013 by Monica

Finance
Write a 200- to 300-word paper comparing long- and short-term financing. Describe situations in which each type of financing would be used
November 28, 2009 by Henry

Calculus Help Please Urgent!!!
A cone-shaped paper drinking cup is to be made to hold 30 cm^3 of water. Find the height and radius of the cup that will use the smallest amount of paper. (Round your answers to two decimal places.) Height = ? Radius = ? Show work please!!!
April 15, 2014 by Patrick

Language Art (Please Check)
1.B 2.A 3.B 1.which of the following is an example of a primary source? A.article written by an expert on the event B.letter from the time of the event C.website 2.When gathering information for a research paper,why is making a source card a good idea? A.so when you write your...
March 18, 2014 by matt

Math
6. Vangie had 0.75 ream of bond paper. She used 0.25 of it in her project. What part of the ream of paper did she use? Please answer this question.\
October 15, 2006 by Ayra

English 3
I need help writing a good strong thesis statement for my research paper. Im doing my paper over the different conspiracy theories people have on the "sandy hook" school shooting...please help me
January 13, 2014 by Ivory Wright

English
Hi, I need to cite a source for a paper but I cant tell whether its a paper or an article or an article from a journal or book. Can you please help. "title of work" author from jump cut, no 27, July 1981, pp 27-32 copyright Jump Cut: A review of Contemporary Media, 1982, 2005 ...
December 11, 2007 by English Urgent Help

English expression
1. Paying attention to punctation marks, write the following sentences in short words. 2. After you read the following passage, mark appropriate punctuation marks. After that write them again. 3. After you read the following passage, using short words, answer the question...
March 19, 2008 by John

social studies
Hi I have to write a short paper connecting The United States Declaration of Independence and how it plays a role in todays world. What are some connections that I could write about? Thanks!
February 1, 2012 by jon

surgical technology
Please help!! I had posted a question on how to write an essay paper, ie how to start off a paper on preoperative procedure for indirect Indirect inguinal hernia?
November 25, 2012 by philomenah njoroge

English
This is the title of my ESSAY paper: United States vs. Denmark: Which health system works better for the citizens of the nations? I need to put this into a title for my paper (<12 words), in the form of a question. But, I can figure out how to shorten this questions. Please...
June 6, 2011 by rosa

Math
John is passing out RED, WHITE, and BLUE construction paper for an art project. There are (12) people in his group. John, who likes to show off, tells everyone to watch closely as he hands out the paper. The first person gets a RED paper. John puts the second paper at the ...
January 30, 2011 by Amy

paper!!final help plz
im doing a paper on anceiant agriculture i have wtiiten the paper but i need an into sentence just a good first sentencee
November 6, 2011 by student

Literature
Can someone please help with this? I have to give an example of an internal foe that General Zaroff, from the short story The Most Dangerous Game and Nat Hocken, from the short story The Birds face and how they resolved their conflict. I can think of external foes for these ...
October 29, 2009 by mysterychicken

AP English 11
I have to write a paper for english, i keep getting bad grades and i use the paper rater sight always to make sure i do my best. it shows i get a 95 and my teacher gives me 30-20 points less and i dont under stand what im doing wrong. i need help on my next paper which is ...
February 17, 2013 by Stephanie

AP English 11
I have to write a paper for english, i keep getting bad grades and i use the paper rater sight always to make sure i do my best. it shows i get a 95 and my teacher gives me 30-20 points less and i dont under stand what im doing wrong. i need help on my next paper which is ...
February 18, 2013 by Stephanie

GCC
I need to summerize a research paper that is mainly made up of quotes. How do I summerize it when is consist of quoting a quote. How do I structure my paper when the person that wrote the paper has so many quote. I hope this makes sense? Is there a way to summerize a quote ...
October 5, 2011 by jesse

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