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Grammatical Corrections in my Essay...?
Hi i have nanna called doreen stimpson!
Friday, November 10, 2006 at 12:14pm by Hannah

Grammatical Corrections in my Essay...?
You can explore a swamp in Florida, but cannot climb a mountain in that state.
Friday, November 10, 2006 at 12:14pm by Jill

college-essay
Just by glancing over the essay I found several grammatical errors. Be sure to proofread carefully.
Tuesday, September 22, 2009 at 10:55pm by CM

sat essay
I would grade your essay 5 for style, 4 for logic and 3 for grammar, for an average of 4. There are too many grammatical errors. See if you can find them.
Saturday, November 21, 2009 at 9:00am by drwls

writing essay
Jack was told the overall content of his paper was weak. What does this mean? A. The tone of his paper was not original B. He had to many grammatical errors C. The overall ideas in his essay were not fully developed D. The flow of his essay was inconsistent
Thursday, June 21, 2012 at 4:42pm by Clueless

Schindler's List Essay
Have you proofed this essay? It is full of grammatical errors. If it were turned in to me, I would return it with a red rewrite on top.
Saturday, May 8, 2010 at 3:07pm by bobpursley

writing
A. The tone of his paper was not original. B. He had too many grammatical errors. C. The overall ideas in his essay were not fully developed. D. The flow of his essay was inconsistent. I chose C, what do you think?
Thursday, March 6, 2014 at 1:13am by Alex

English
Writeacher's corrections have nothing to do with whether the essay is argumentative or not. She is correcting the grammar and proper essay form.
Saturday, January 2, 2010 at 1:12pm by GuruBlue

Lahore Garamer School
When you have written this essay, please repost and one of the teachers will be happy to make corrections or suggestions. For essay writing help, look at this site. http://lklivingston.tripod.com/essay/
Wednesday, July 22, 2009 at 12:34pm by GuruBlue

7th Grade English Essay - Diversity Means
I'm reading your essay now and will post my comments/corrections within the next hour.
Sunday, November 13, 2011 at 12:21pm by Ms. Sue

7th Grade English Essay - Diversity Means
After you are done reading my essay and posting your comments/corrections, reply the Black Advievement Award.
Sunday, November 13, 2011 at 12:21pm by Laruen

essay writing
We do not do your homework for you. This is a great guide to writing an essay. http://lklivingston.tripod.com/essay/ Please repost after you have written your first draft and a teacher will be happy to make suggestions/corrections.
Saturday, July 11, 2009 at 3:17pm by GuruBlue

National Junior Honor Society Essay Check
Your essay is good, despite many grammatical errors. I suggest you have someone else read it slowly aloud to you to catch these errors.
Tuesday, May 15, 2012 at 10:50pm by Ms. Sue

please revise and edit my essay
If your copy/ paste didn't work, please type your essay into the space and we will be happy to give you suggestions or corrections.
Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 6:37pm by GuruBlue

English Essay
I am writing an literary essay about The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro with the topic of "self-deception as self-destruction". Could someone proofread my introduction so far and help me fix any grammatical errors?
Thursday, September 28, 2006 at 6:01pm by Chris

English
#1 is grammatical. #3 is grammatical #6 and 7 are both grammatical but #7 is better usage.
Wednesday, July 8, 2009 at 6:45am by GuruBlue

persuasive essay
Thank you for all of your help on this essay. I will make all the corrections this time. Does this essay sound more persuasive this time?
Sunday, June 12, 2011 at 10:42pm by Debbie

SAT Essay
There are enough grammatical and structural errors to give this a 4?
Monday, August 25, 2008 at 1:41pm by Sahil

lit( essay)
This is terrible. Have you proofed it? It is full of grammatical errors, and if one could ignore them, the flow of this piece is a juggernaut: it goes from one thought to another, and one wonders if it is going anywhere at all. Have you read it? Perhaps the title of the piece...
Monday, January 28, 2008 at 12:09am by bobpursley

Schindler's List Essay
I would probably give it a 20 out of 50. This essay has a few good ideas, but overall contains much spelling and grammatical errors, and is overall poorly structured. By this I mean there are no links or comparisons between ideas, instead they are just tossed in randomly over ...
Saturday, May 8, 2010 at 3:07pm by Mark

essay please check writeacher
pleace make corrections thank you
Thursday, November 29, 2007 at 12:57am by ace

criminal justice
Describe the history of European corrections philosophies and how it shaped today's American corrections practices. Compare the similarities and differences of today's corrections practices with American corrections practices in the 1800s.
Sunday, July 14, 2013 at 3:14pm by kary

English 7 (Ms. Sue)
A person's characteristics are shaped by the setting and beliefs of society during a specific time period affects on individuals actions and lifestyle. This is a run-on sentence. Rose Parks a former civil rights leader was influence by the time period which she live. Comma ...
Wednesday, November 30, 2011 at 7:19pm by Ms. Sue

Medical billing and coding
PS -- PLEASE go back over the corrected paragraphs I gave you in that https:// webpage above and make corrections. I am still seeing the same grammatical errors that are in your original at the beginning of this post's thread.
Wednesday, November 3, 2010 at 9:56am by Writeacher

SAT Essay
I think your first sentence is erroneous. There are many acts of courage every day. Perhaps not as "dramatic" as 9/11, but just as courageous. You are correct in saying that the person my face, admit the fear but determine to overcome it. This is not just an mental task but ...
Wednesday, August 27, 2008 at 2:19pm by GuruBlue

Spanish Essay: Looking for Corrections
I recommend the following website. Type spanishessays in google
Saturday, March 17, 2007 at 7:09pm by Santiago

Spanish
Did you understand the corrections I made for you? I see the same errors on this one. Go back to the other post, make the corrections. There are NO corrections on this copy. The English is fine, but not the Spanish! Sra exhausted = vas a sentirte agotado
Tuesday, December 2, 2008 at 9:27pm by SraJMcGin

english
I woul like to review my essay please? Post it. Can you please help me write that essay" A way to decrease your chance of becoming a victim of random ciolence". Hmmm. You have an assignment to write an essay, a teacher offers to review your essay, and you respond asking the ...
Thursday, November 30, 2006 at 8:06pm by louise

English
This looks like a pre-write for your composition, which is an excellent idea. This looks like you have done a good job of thinking through the topic. I would now organize your ideas in order of importance. Below is a great site for essay writing. http://members.tripod.com/~...
Monday, June 1, 2009 at 1:47pm by GuruBlue

English
1,2,3 are all grammatical. 4 & 5 are the same. 7. is not grammatical. Last month, Inho and I had a big ( fight, disagreement, dispute).
Wednesday, February 3, 2010 at 8:06am by GuruBlue

SAT Practice Essay
I'll accept that the above sentence may be awkward, but is the third paragraph really that bad? And should the few grammatical errors I made impact my grade as much as they did?
Saturday, September 20, 2008 at 3:42pm by Sahil

SAT Essay
YOUR POINTS ARE FINE BUT THE ESSAY CAN DO WITH MORE ORGANIZATION;IT IS TOO "CHOPPY" BECAUSE YOU BOUNCE AROUND FROM ONE THING TO ANOTHER AND THEN BACK AND FORTH.iT IS DIFFICULT TO FOLLOW YOUR THOUGHTS. I suggest you rearrange the paragraphs by putting all the info of the ...
Thursday, November 29, 2012 at 10:13pm by frank

com 150
This is a question only you can answer. We do not have that book. We can't choose the essay for you. We will be happy to read what YOU write and make corrections and suggestions for improvement.
Tuesday, August 19, 2008 at 2:00pm by GuruBlue

psy- revise please
I've already made corrections on this essay. Please go back and look.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008 at 6:37pm by Ms. Sue

Spanish Essay: Looking for Corrections
you need to substitute bananas in the sentence "Costa Rica produce el café y las bananas." with platanos.
Saturday, March 17, 2007 at 7:09pm by Priyanka

SAT Essay
Please understand that no one here will do your work for you. However, we will be happy to read over whatever you come up with and make suggestions and/or corrections. Please post what you write. Here are a couple of webpages that will explain what the SAT people are looking ...
Saturday, November 28, 2009 at 6:05am by Writeacher

english
nedd some help.i am writing an imortant essay and my theme is maori english.i can't find some good sites on the internet about grammatical features.can somebody help?
Saturday, July 12, 2008 at 12:07pm by bill

English
1 Nd 2 are both grammatical. 3 and 4 are also grammatical. 1 and 3 are identical; 2 and 4 are identical, EXCEPT for the punctuation. Sra
Monday, August 29, 2011 at 12:18am by SraJMcGin

medical coding and billing
Congratulations! You've answered the questions completely and clearly! A few minor grammatical corrections in your first paragraph: "The HIPAA allows a patient to either view or get a copy of their medical . . ." >> Change "their" to "his/her" for pronoun agreement. Or, ...
Monday, May 25, 2009 at 4:39pm by Ms. Sue

English
1. I suggest you try it. 2. I demand you try it. (Are both all grammatical?) 3. How many floors is the second floor from ground? (Is it grammatical? What will be the answer to this question?)
Sunday, November 11, 2012 at 9:28pm by rfvv

essay
Please understand that no one here will do your work for you. However, we will be happy to read over whatever you come up with and make suggestions and/or corrections. Please post what you think.
Tuesday, January 18, 2011 at 1:15am by Writeacher

Essay Writing
He should write the first draft when he has plenty of time to let it sit one day. Then he will be able to see what he has written more objectively. Then he will be better able to look not only at grammatical errors but also organization.
Monday, October 19, 2009 at 6:58pm by GuruBlue

Proofread my Critical Analyis essay
If you want your paper re-read after you make corrections, please feel free to do so. Just make sure you use Post a New Question.
Wednesday, November 25, 2009 at 1:42pm by Writeacher

Grammar
Good job! A few grammatical corrections: "Although my writing skills were never the <best>,</b? the two years I took off from school did not help." "By being able to memorize the grammar (move comma to after rules rules writing in a formal setting will less (scary) ...
Tuesday, May 24, 2011 at 10:17pm by Ms. Sue

essay writing
What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.
Thursday, October 8, 2009 at 7:47pm by larry

English
1. Don't eat too much apples before going to bed. 2. Don't eat too many apples before going to bed. (Which one is grammatical?) 3. His hobby is riding a horse. 4. His hobby is to ride a horse. 5. His hobby is riding on a horse. (Are all grammatical?) 6. His job is selling cars...
Wednesday, July 8, 2009 at 9:26am by John

Scarlet Letter - essay - Thesis help
I'd do the following: -- replace "He" with "Hawthorne" -- clarify "the idea" and "it" (in all places) -- replace "like" with "as if" Once you make these corrections, please repost, and then someone here will be able to tell you more.
Saturday, October 9, 2010 at 4:54pm by Writeacher

English
1. I made Harry Porter interesting by adding more stories. (is this sentence grammatical?) 2. We shook the building, and it fell dowm. (Is this grammatical?) 3. I will give some hints to you? (What does 'hints' refer to? What are other similiar expressions?)
Saturday, June 18, 2011 at 6:16am by rfvv

SOC - 321
Patricia -- you have some great ideas in your answer. However, it's hard to read because of numerous typos and grammatical mistakes. Please read your answer slowly out loud to make these corrections. Examples: know that is probably was other people Do you mean "was" or "what...
Saturday, August 16, 2008 at 5:33pm by Ms. Sue

English
#2 is not grammatical 3,4, 5, ... are all correct but they do not mean the same thing at all. 6,7 ...are grammatical, but again they do not have the same meaning
Friday, July 4, 2008 at 4:42pm by GuruBlue

chemistry
That isn't the emf of the cell. You didn't follow my instructions. Those "corrections" I told you to make are separate corrections. You've tried to do it all together and you appear to be confusing this with the equilibrium constant.
Thursday, October 21, 2010 at 8:59pm by DrBob222

health
Write a 350- to 700-word paper in which you discuss corrections accreditation and privatization. Address the following questions: • What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can ...
Sunday, October 2, 2011 at 4:24pm by nikki

Three Posts Below
The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...
Tuesday, November 21, 2006 at 1:49pm by Anonymous

language arts
All of those sentences are incorrect. After you have made the corrections that you believe are needed, please repost and a teacher will be happy to make corrections and further suggestions.
Sunday, December 20, 2009 at 6:56pm by GuruBlue

Can someone please proofread my history essay?
Hi, I have a history essay and I think it's done but I'd like someone to proofread it and suggest corrections first, can someone here please do that? Thanks! :-) P.S. It's due tomorrow Here's the essay: John Musbach History 02/14/07 My thesis statement is: Through the power of...
Thursday, February 15, 2007 at 1:14pm by John

English
Where can I go to check about my essay when your are finished? I have not seen any essay from you for help with proofreading. If you post the entire essay in a message, someone will respond directly to that message. =) I need your help to write that essay,"A way to decrease ...
Thursday, November 30, 2006 at 12:02am by louise

English
1. She killed her. 2. She killed herself. 3. She looked at herself in the mirror. 4. She looked at her in the mirror. 5. You should take care of you. 6. You should take care of yourself. 7. He is very proud of himself. 8. He is very proud of him. (Are they all grammatical? ...
Sunday, February 2, 2014 at 11:56pm by rfvv

IT/210
So if I submit my work that I already turned in, could I have help with corrections? I even have the feedback just don't know how to make the right corrections to it. Doing horribly in this class.
Tuesday, March 1, 2011 at 12:06pm by denny

English
Example essay is an essay composed of many examples i guess. I know it can be written on anything but i want my essay to be interesting.
Wednesday, February 17, 2010 at 7:42pm by layla

Essay Help
I have to do an 2-page essay on "Carbohydrates". I need help on outlining the essay. Anyone can give me assistance on that? Thanks.
Saturday, December 8, 2007 at 12:53am by Wenmar

essay
From the way you've described your essay, it looks more like an expository essay.
Thursday, October 1, 2009 at 8:14pm by Ms. Sue

English
Rules of writing an essay?, And what are the main factors of an essay?, How to properly write an essay without an errors?
Saturday, April 4, 2009 at 5:26pm by Aaron

Immigration Essay Help?
A topic setence for beginning my first paragraph, in my essay. She said that I didn't need a thesis, not for this essay.
Friday, October 28, 2011 at 9:42am by Allyson

essay
An essay can be written about almost anything. What are your instructions for this essay?
Friday, July 18, 2008 at 9:27am by Ms. Sue

Essay
The body of your essay contains which of the following? A. The longest section of the essay B. The supporting details. C. A Conciluding sentence D. All of the above
Thursday, June 21, 2012 at 4:35pm by Clueless

English
1. I was moved enough to want to help her. ( Is this grammatical?) 2. I was all wet after I washed only the first dog. (Does 'all' mean 'completely' here?) 3. Today was best. 4. Today was the best. (Which one is grammatical?)
Monday, October 11, 2010 at 7:24am by rfvv

Essay Writing
now y will corey let his essay sit for a few days when maybe his essay is do so he should probebly proff read it and write another draft.
Monday, October 19, 2009 at 6:58pm by larry

SS7R - DBQ Essay (plz read!)
The introduction is the last thing you write in an essay!! You can't introduce an essay until after you've written it and know what it says.
Thursday, May 31, 2012 at 7:16pm by Ms. Sue

English
1. His age is 14. 2. His height is 158cm tall. 3. His weight is 48kg. (Are the sentences all grammatical?) 4. What is the negative sentence of the declarative sentence? When you make a negative sentence, you should put 'don't' before a base verb. (Is this one grammatical? ...
Thursday, June 24, 2010 at 4:50am by rfvv

English Essay
Hi I am a teacher at a middle school and I think that your essay is definitely an essay better than my students but it sure could use a little more work.
Monday, March 7, 2011 at 5:51pm by mrs. warrow

writing essay
What is the number one essay writing rule? A.Always write five paragraphs B.Always brainstorm before writing the essay C.start the writing essay the day it is assigned i got B
Thursday, October 6, 2011 at 5:42pm by ciara

language arts
I need to do an essay in a language arts package titled noggin. I lost the essay part of it. I'm not asking for you to do an essay for me, but if you could put up the page so I know how to make the Picture look that the essay goes in. I need to have it in by Monday
Friday, May 18, 2012 at 9:37pm by Michael

Please proofread my essay and make corrections
Private and public schools education differs in many ways, there are many differences of both types of schools such as their academic programs, class sizes and admissions requirements that makes a private school better than a public school. Run-on sentence schools' among (not ...
Thursday, November 10, 2011 at 10:20pm by Ms. Sue

History
I live in The United Kingdom. And we do not do grades we do Year. I am in Year 8 in United Kingdom. What is that in the United States? No it is an essay. I have been completing it because it is due for tomorrow. If you can please read it and make corrections that will be Fab. ...
Thursday, March 4, 2010 at 3:11pm by Ruth

History
I live in The United Kingdom. And we do not do grades we do Year. I am in Year 8 in United Kingdom. What is that in the United States? No it is an essay. I have been completing it because it is due for tomorrow. If you can please read it and make corrections that will be Fab. ...
Thursday, March 4, 2010 at 3:23pm by Ruth

grammar
Hello, I need a grammatical correction in the following excerpt from my essay, "We can see the benefits of having a husband for a woman in the following excerpt..." My teacher circled the phrase "having a husband for a woman" (which means that there is something wrong with it...
Sunday, March 22, 2009 at 5:58pm by Tom

Please proofread my essay and make corrections
Please proofread for run on sentences, subject-verb agreement, possessive punctuation, and pronoun-antecedent agreement. What connection do you see between the selective enrollment of private schools and their higher standards?
Thursday, November 10, 2011 at 10:20pm by Ms. Sue

English
1. He is dumb, so he uses the finger language. 2. He is dumb, so he uses the sign language. (Which one is grammatical? Are both grammatical?)
Saturday, May 8, 2010 at 4:19am by rfvv

Conversational Essay
Has everyone heard of a conversational essay that mentions the following: how lying is sometimes god for humanity and sometimes its good for ourselves ignorance is bliss sometimes there are no greater swindles than self swindlers if u know the title of such essay it would be ...
Wednesday, July 22, 2009 at 8:29pm by Me

Reading
Please re-read Ms. Sue's corrections and instructions. You didn't make all the corrections she indicated, nor did you make that 2nd sentence any clearer. Please re-do.
Friday, June 24, 2011 at 11:33am by Writeacher

French - To Anna
Mme Sra is either not available or she is working on your text. You write very well, despite a few grammatical and syntax errors many of which you could probably avoid. To get you started, I enclose a few to help you with self corrections. Do look for other similar ones, in ...
Wednesday, December 16, 2009 at 12:15am by MathMate

writing essay
Catherine received a 70 on her essay because the vocabulary was basic and there was a lack if clear and active voice. Which of the following areas of her essay were weak? A. Organization B. Mechanics C. Content D. Style
Thursday, June 21, 2012 at 4:39pm by Clueless

English
1. Delete the last instance of "you" and the sentence will be fine. 2. Because December 8th and January 5th were holidays ... <~~Note corrections made. I don't understand what you mean in the main clause, though. 3. You will probably help them catch up with the IIE class on...
Saturday, January 9, 2010 at 12:11pm by Writeacher

CJS/230
Will someone please help me find a website to find the answer to the following questions? What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can industry leaders plan for better correctional ...
Sunday, July 8, 2012 at 10:22am by Picaboo

Business English
is my corrections not enough? I have to make more? We have to turn the first e-mail into Routine inquiry I made the second e-mail is not right? corrections needed?
Friday, November 11, 2011 at 2:30pm by lisa

Essay Pointers
Here is an essay i wrote about A Separate Peace. If someone can tell me what needs to be fixed and stuff. By the way, should I use heck in this essay? My friend said it was too... informal
Sunday, July 24, 2005 at 11:16pm by Hanna

CJS/230
Will someone please hwlp me find a wesite to find the answer to the follwing questions? What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can industry leaders plan for better correctional ...
Saturday, July 7, 2012 at 9:11pm by Picaboo

English
1. He is one of the best players on the team. 2. He is one of the good players on the team. (Which one is grammatical? Are both grammatical? Which one is better of the two? Thank you... Have a great weekend.)
Saturday, December 24, 2011 at 3:12am by rfvv

writing a formal essay
Why would you want to use those terms in a formal essay? What is the topic of your essay? What is your thesis sentence?
Wednesday, September 23, 2009 at 10:52pm by Ms. Sue

COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY-Please Proofread
1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and proof and ...
Saturday, July 27, 2013 at 12:59pm by Anonymous

English
Can anyone check my essay? I could send the rubric for scoring. Thanks You have to include the essay itself, so we can check it. Respond to this post with the essay. Thanks for asking. Whats your question..?
Friday, November 3, 2006 at 7:25pm by Antonio

english/l.a
Can someone give me some persuasuve essay topics? Persuasive essay- a essay that persuades someone into thinking your opinion.
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 5:07pm by Smart Kid

essay Amanuensis Essay
Please i need help, how to start a essay using Amanuensis about my teacher but dont know how to begin.
Wednesday, July 3, 2013 at 6:10pm by luz

english essay
This is an essay you have to write, developing a thesis, and making your arguments. The point of the essay is for you to think it out, and develope it. Why do you think corruption is a curse?
Friday, October 17, 2008 at 5:44am by bobpursley

English Essay Title
What would a good essay title be if I'm writing an essay about a character in a book who is torn between two conflicting forces?
Saturday, August 28, 2010 at 2:49pm by Ethan

7th Grade English Essay - Diversity Means
So is the essay good. Is there any mistakes if there is let me know. I need a catchy titlemthat have something to do with diversity (in my essay), I can't think of any.
Sunday, November 13, 2011 at 12:21pm by Laruen

Essay Writing
Corey wrote the first draft of his essay. What is the next step before he revises it? A.Proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material. C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. .I chose A.
Monday, October 19, 2009 at 6:58pm by larry

English
1. I went to the video arcade 'yesterday night'. (Is this expression right?) 2. He went to his academy after school to learn English and math. 3. From her first diary, what can we know? Summarize her first diary. 4. Of whomself did she feel proud? (Is this sentence grammatical...
Wednesday, August 27, 2008 at 7:21am by John

english - essay specifically
i am currently writing my essay and i am about to put an example from the book Julius Caesar. what is the "protocol" how do i put a set of quotes into the essay?
Monday, April 13, 2009 at 8:02pm by ton

college essay
In the essay, make sure you emphasize the steady rise of your GPA and what it took for you to achieve that. Spend most of the essay telling how you achieved that GPA increase.
Saturday, November 9, 2013 at 5:05pm by Writeacher

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