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September 22, 2014

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writing essay
Jack was told the overall content of his paper was weak. What does this mean? A. The tone of his paper was not original B. He had to many grammatical errors C. The overall ideas in his essay were not fully developed D. The flow of his essay was inconsistent
June 21, 2012 by Clueless

writing
A. The tone of his paper was not original. B. He had too many grammatical errors. C. The overall ideas in his essay were not fully developed. D. The flow of his essay was inconsistent. I chose C, what do you think?
March 6, 2014 by Alex

Spanish 102, P,P&F Tense Essay
Please look over my short Essay. Past Present and Future tenses must all be used; topic is on activities of a week/ days surrounding I need to score well. Any corrections or advice is very much appreciated.
August 9, 2014 by Shell

criminal justice
Describe the history of European corrections philosophies and how it shaped today's American corrections practices. Compare the similarities and differences of today's corrections practices with American corrections practices in the 1800s.
July 14, 2013 by kary

English Essay
I am writing an literary essay about The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro with the topic of "self-deception as self-destruction". Could someone proofread my introduction so far and help me fix any grammatical errors?
September 28, 2006 by Chris

english
I woul like to review my essay please? Post it. Can you please help me write that essay" A way to decrease your chance of becoming a victim of random ciolence". Hmmm. You have an assignment to write an essay, a teacher offers to review your essay, and you respond asking the ...
November 30, 2006 by louise

health
Write a 350- to 700-word paper in which you discuss corrections accreditation and privatization. Address the following questions: • What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can ...
October 2, 2011 by nikki

Can someone please proofread my history essay?
Hi, I have a history essay and I think it's done but I'd like someone to proofread it and suggest corrections first, can someone here please do that? Thanks! :-) P.S. It's due tomorrow Here's the essay: John Musbach History 02/14/07 My thesis statement is: Through the power of...
February 15, 2007 by John

essay writing
What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.
October 8, 2009 by larry

CJS/230
Will someone please help me find a website to find the answer to the following questions? What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can industry leaders plan for better correctional ...
July 8, 2012 by Picaboo

CJS/230
Will someone please hwlp me find a wesite to find the answer to the follwing questions? What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can industry leaders plan for better correctional ...
July 7, 2012 by Picaboo

english
nedd some help.i am writing an imortant essay and my theme is maori english.i can't find some good sites on the internet about grammatical features.can somebody help?
July 12, 2008 by bill

French - To Anna
Mme Sra is either not available or she is working on your text. You write very well, despite a few grammatical and syntax errors many of which you could probably avoid. To get you started, I enclose a few to help you with self corrections. Do look for other similar ones, in ...
December 16, 2009 by MathMate

Three Posts Below
The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...
November 21, 2006 by Anonymous

History
I live in The United Kingdom. And we do not do grades we do Year. I am in Year 8 in United Kingdom. What is that in the United States? No it is an essay. I have been completing it because it is due for tomorrow. If you can please read it and make corrections that will be Fab. ...
March 4, 2010 by Ruth

English
Where can I go to check about my essay when your are finished? I have not seen any essay from you for help with proofreading. If you post the entire essay in a message, someone will respond directly to that message. =) I need your help to write that essay,"A way to decrease ...
November 30, 2006 by louise

Ethics
What are the goals of punishment and corrections? Explain the rationale behind those goals. How does the concept of community corrections relate to these goals and rationale?
February 18, 2008 by Kish

English
Rules of writing an essay?, And what are the main factors of an essay?, How to properly write an essay without an errors?
April 4, 2009 by Aaron

English
1. I suggest you try it. 2. I demand you try it. (Are both all grammatical?) 3. How many floors is the second floor from ground? (Is it grammatical? What will be the answer to this question?)
November 11, 2012 by rfvv

English
1. He was born in 63 BC. 2. He was born in the 63 BC. (Which one is grammatical?) 3. He had lived by 63 BC. 4. He has gone to Brazil in 2000 AD. 5. He died in the 21st century. (Are they all grammatical?)
July 13, 2014 by rfvv

CJS/230
Will someone please help me find a webite to answer the following questions? What are community corrections? How do community corrections affect the society in which they are practiced? What hypothesis can you make about community corrections and their overall effectiveness ...
July 23, 2012 by Sade C

CJS/230
Will someone please help me find a webite to answer the following questions? What are community corrections? How do community corrections affect the society in which they are practiced? What hypothesis can you make about community corrections and their overall effectiveness ...
July 24, 2012 by Sade C

Essay Help
I have to do an 2-page essay on "Carbohydrates". I need help on outlining the essay. Anyone can give me assistance on that? Thanks.
December 8, 2007 by Wenmar

Essay
The body of your essay contains which of the following? A. The longest section of the essay B. The supporting details. C. A Conciluding sentence D. All of the above
June 21, 2012 by Clueless

Spanish Essay Needs Corrections
En muchas obras de litereatura, el tema de amor es muy comun. Pero, hay un tipo de amor que es mas fuerte de todas otras—el amor de un amigo. El poema << Versos Sencillos >> tiene la mas fuerte representacion de amor.
April 12, 2007 by Sarah

language arts
I need to do an essay in a language arts package titled noggin. I lost the essay part of it. I'm not asking for you to do an essay for me, but if you could put up the page so I know how to make the Picture look that the essay goes in. I need to have it in by Monday
May 18, 2012 by Michael

writing essay
What is the number one essay writing rule? A.Always write five paragraphs B.Always brainstorm before writing the essay C.start the writing essay the day it is assigned i got B
October 6, 2011 by ciara

writing essay
Catherine received a 70 on her essay because the vocabulary was basic and there was a lack if clear and active voice. Which of the following areas of her essay were weak? A. Organization B. Mechanics C. Content D. Style
June 21, 2012 by Clueless

English
A body paragraph in an essay is one that: A. expounds upon the thesis of the essay. B. brings closure to the piece. C. features footnoted information. D. introduces the ideas that will be covered in the essay. A
April 14, 2014 by Angela

corrections
Prison management has had two very distinct styles during its evolution: autocratic and bureaucratic.what do you think are the most important aspect of each style?which style do you consider the most effective? how has the role of the corrections officer changed with the ...
November 2, 2009 by Dolores

Conversational Essay
Has everyone heard of a conversational essay that mentions the following: how lying is sometimes god for humanity and sometimes its good for ourselves ignorance is bliss sometimes there are no greater swindles than self swindlers if u know the title of such essay it would be ...
July 22, 2009 by Me

English
1. I made Harry Porter interesting by adding more stories. (is this sentence grammatical?) 2. We shook the building, and it fell dowm. (Is this grammatical?) 3. I will give some hints to you? (What does 'hints' refer to? What are other similiar expressions?)
June 18, 2011 by rfvv

Essay Pointers
Here is an essay i wrote about A Separate Peace. If someone can tell me what needs to be fixed and stuff. By the way, should I use heck in this essay? My friend said it was too... informal
July 24, 2005 by Hanna

English
1. Don't eat too much apples before going to bed. 2. Don't eat too many apples before going to bed. (Which one is grammatical?) 3. His hobby is riding a horse. 4. His hobby is to ride a horse. 5. His hobby is riding on a horse. (Are all grammatical?) 6. His job is selling cars...
July 8, 2009 by John

Essay Writing
Corey wrote the first draft of his essay. What is the next step before he revises it? A.Proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material. C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. .I chose A.
October 19, 2009 by larry

english
Choose an essay or a short story to read. Then answer the following questions in the space provided. 10.What is the title of the story essay? 11.Who wrote it? 12.Whom is the story about? (Identify the main characters [or, if an essay, the subject discussed].) 13.hat happens in...
March 25, 2013 by Carlos

COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY-Please Proofread
1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and proof and ...
July 27, 2013 by Anonymous

english/l.a
Can someone give me some persuasuve essay topics? Persuasive essay- a essay that persuades someone into thinking your opinion.
April 28, 2008 by Smart Kid

English
Can anyone check my essay? I could send the rubric for scoring. Thanks You have to include the essay itself, so we can check it. Respond to this post with the essay. Thanks for asking. Whats your question..?
November 3, 2006 by Antonio

English
1. I love Tom who lives there. 2. I love Tom, who lives there. Which sentence is grammatical? Are both OK? ------------------ 3. This is the place where he was born. 4. This is the place he was born. #3 is grammatical. What about #4? In Sentence 4, 'where' is missing. Is #4 ...
May 16, 2014 by rfvv

English Essay Title
What would a good essay title be if I'm writing an essay about a character in a book who is torn between two conflicting forces?
August 28, 2010 by Ethan

English
People use pockets when they eat Brussels waffles. ---------- Is this sentence grammatical? Is the use of 'pockets' here grammatical?
June 28, 2014 by rfvv

english - essay specifically
i am currently writing my essay and i am about to put an example from the book Julius Caesar. what is the "protocol" how do i put a set of quotes into the essay?
April 13, 2009 by ton

Quotes in essays
I want to put a quote at the very beginning of my essay. How do I go about doing that? Should it be the same or a smaller font than the rest of my essay? I'm planning on putting the quote, then starting a new paragraph to begin the actual essay. Should I center it? Skip how ...
January 25, 2009 by Anonymous

essay Amanuensis Essay
Please i need help, how to start a essay using Amanuensis about my teacher but dont know how to begin.
July 3, 2013 by luz

essay writing
what is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the second draft. B.Proofread the essay to make sure it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit changing and rearranging the contect. D. All of the above .I CHOSE D.
October 8, 2009 by larry

english-essay
i have to write a critical analysis of "The Trial" by franz kafka. and i wanted to know what points i should cover in my essay. also how many paragraphs should my essay consist of.
March 6, 2008 by sasha

please rate my essay
I had asked earlier if anyone had any ideas for an essay over the importance of accepting others as they are, and now I am finished with my essay so I am curious to see what you think. It will be given a rating of 1-4.
December 11, 2006 by Anonymous

essay writing
1.Which of the following can dramatically improve your grade on an essay? A.Providing an outline. B.Choosing an effective thesis sentence. C.Setting aside time to rewrite your essay. D.Writing on an interesting topic. .I chose d.
October 8, 2009 by larry

essay writing
which of the following can dramatically improve your grade on an essay? A. Providing an outline B. Choosing an effective thesis sentence C. Setting aside time to rewrite your essay. D. Writing on an interesting topic. .I choses c.
October 20, 2009 by larry

grammar
Hello, I need a grammatical correction in the following excerpt from my essay, "We can see the benefits of having a husband for a woman in the following excerpt..." My teacher circled the phrase "having a husband for a woman" (which means that there is something wrong with it...
March 22, 2009 by Tom

Essay
I'm writing a essay on Hurricanes where can I find credible sources for my essay with intext citation or citation.
November 11, 2009 by Tim

Essay
What main points do you think I should include in my essay ("Why I should be in this advanced class")? I've written most of it. The topic was so general that I am not sure that I've hit all the points I should have. Could you provide some points that you find should be ...
February 24, 2008 by Anonymous

eng composition
Amy and carl are discussing the essay by tardiff and brizee. Army argue that her essay on how the cocoa bean is processed into chocolate should becconsidered an explanatory essay. Carl remaks that her essay might be called an explository essay. Who is correct? A. Amy is ...
August 29, 2014 by Tony

English - ms. sue
ms. sue i writing an essay on : is it possible to live a peaceful/happy life in times of today? I going to write yes it be for this essay, but teacher say that write essay by saying WE, so what be other forms of that I use, I think she said dont use they, people, etc. Also I ...
December 9, 2012 by Mohammad

English
I am writing an essay about James Baldwin's Go Tell It on the Mountain, but the essay prompt asks me to disagree or agree with the interpretation of an critical essay we read about this book. For my essay, do I state whether I agree with the article and then use other evidence...
August 31, 2012 by Laura

8th grade Language Arts
I am writing a persuasive essay and I need some tips on making it persuasive. It is turning out to be just an essay, not a persuasive essay. Help!
December 18, 2012 by Destiny

algebra 1
an essay contest requires that essay entries consist of 500 words with an absolute deviation of at most 30 words. what are the possible numbers of words that the essay can have?
December 4, 2013 by anonymous

English
1. She killed her. 2. She killed herself. 3. She looked at herself in the mirror. 4. She looked at her in the mirror. 5. You should take care of you. 6. You should take care of yourself. 7. He is very proud of himself. 8. He is very proud of him. (Are they all grammatical? ...
February 2, 2014 by rfvv

Essay Outline
I need an outline for my schizophrenic essay and I found one online; since I don't have to turn the outline in can I use that to write my essay? -MC
June 16, 2009 by mysterychicken

English-Ms.Sue
Thank you for all of your help on guiding me through on my war as a social disease essay. I really appreciate it. We got assigned a new essay and it's an arugumentive essay and it's on cloning. I need three sub-categories for cloning. I don't know what he means by that!
February 25, 2009 by Michele

Eng
When assembling a writing plan for an essay, which of the following should come first? A. The first section of the body of your essay. B. The general idea of your essay C. Material that catches the reader's interest. D. A brief Summary of your conclusion Answer is B.
June 28, 2013 by Jen

English
1. I was moved enough to want to help her. ( Is this grammatical?) 2. I was all wet after I washed only the first dog. (Does 'all' mean 'completely' here?) 3. Today was best. 4. Today was the best. (Which one is grammatical?)
October 11, 2010 by rfvv

10th grade english
Write an essay comparing Baldwin's account of the Titanic with Rosenthal's account of his visit to Auschwitz.In your paragraph, explain how the tone and purpose of each essay is different. Support your argument with at least one example from each essay.
December 21, 2009 by brad

English
1. His age is 14. 2. His height is 158cm tall. 3. His weight is 48kg. (Are the sentences all grammatical?) 4. What is the negative sentence of the declarative sentence? When you make a negative sentence, you should put 'don't' before a base verb. (Is this one grammatical? ...
June 24, 2010 by rfvv

business law
What do you feel about community corrections? Do you feel a community-based punishment is justifiable in today’s society? Explain why or why not. Provide an example of a community-based punishment. How do community corrections affect American society?
February 21, 2010 by k

english
Hi, I posted my essay earlier for punctuation, corrections, and I really need help correcting the following from the essay: -I read the Quran everyday of my life to learn and get inspired from. -The book had this amazing story about a Woman that was cured from breast cancer by...
July 16, 2012 by zee

English
Is this thesis statement too long for a four page essay? Also, are there any major grammatical errors? Although a cursory glance at Odysseus on his long journey home may lead to a conclusion that he is motivated by an overwhelming desire to see his wife and family again, a ...
September 19, 2010 by Anonymous

English comparative essay
Okay well i have to do a comparative essay of A.E poe "The Raven" but the simpson version and the origional version the poem... i decited to compares "moods " of the both version.. like the caracters moods... Can you please find me a comparative essay Example...not an ...
January 12, 2008 by chanel

Essay help?
Could somebody help me start off this essay? CD= Concrete detail ( Facts) Commentary, ( Opinnion, but since this is a essay on religion, facts can go here) I don't know how to start.. :) Heres what I've done so far: oi55.tinypic( DOT) com/11azxnk.jpg
October 28, 2010 by Allyson

Essay title
Hi. I'm trying to think of an essay title for an "I believe" essay. The essay is supposed to talk about how I defy the 'single story'. I talked about defying the single story of a teenage girl because I play the drums. My "I believe" statement is that 'I believe in seeing more...
September 9, 2013 by Serena

Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)
How should I begin this assigned essay? Write an essay in what ways today people are more fearful than people in past generations. You may use examples from real life, the selection you just read, books, movies, music, or television.
January 8, 2014 by Victoria

science/chemistry
The van der waals equation incorperates corrections for the ideal gas laws in order to account for the properties of real gases. one of the corrections accounts for 1:The kinetic energy being inversly proportional to the temperature 2:The possibility of chemical reactions ...
May 10, 2010 by Puzzled

Check my Book Report
Check for any corrections i should make... Heres the Instructions: -An Intro Paragraph that includes a clear thesis statement that adresses the prompt -At least 3 clear and detailed body paragraphs which cite specific examples from the novel and support your thesis statement -...
December 18, 2006 by Vad3r

english
I am writing an oppossing view essay. For this part of the essay we are not supposed to take a stance. The teacher has broken the assignment into 2 parts. The 1st part is actually just to help us learn how to write our final essay. I have pulled alot of research together, just...
November 14, 2010 by Lynne

English
1. He is dumb, so he uses the finger language. 2. He is dumb, so he uses the sign language. (Which one is grammatical? Are both grammatical?)
May 8, 2010 by rfvv

essay help
so i've decided to write an essay using lord of the flies, the scarlet letter, and brave new world for my topic (qualifying that ones' morals are either strengthened or weakened). we have to use some type of statistic and image for our essay but i can't think of anything ...
October 9, 2007 by lily

peer reviewing essay
Hi, I have two assignments I have to submit to my AP US History teacher for next year by June 2nd. The first part is to explain why I should be in the class in a one page essay with size 11 font and 1.5 spacing. Could someone please read through my essay and see if it's ok? ...
May 10, 2008 by phil

Creative Writing
ok,so for my essay , I have to 'extend' the definition of 'wisdom'. bobpursley gave me a link yesterday that had several quotes, all of which give a meaning. how can i use this to write my essay? I mean, I don't even understand how the essay is going to be written. How should ...
November 20, 2009 by y912f

help please:)
What is the number one eassy writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay B.Always write five paragraphs C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. i got A what do you think?
September 28, 2011 by ciara

English Essay
I'm writing an essay for To Kill A Mockingbird and the claim I came up for my essay is "Children are never too young to understand the realities of life." I'm writing the extended paragraph right now where I have to come up with a good example from the story that relates to ...
April 27, 2014 by Emma

English
1. I stayed there for two weeks. 2. I stayed there two weeks. Are both grammatical? -------------------------- 3. This is the way how he solved the problem. 4. This is the way that he solved the problem. 5. This is the way he solved the problem. 6. This is the way in which he ...
May 16, 2014 by rfvv

English+Essay
I have to write an essay, but I have no idea how to start it. It says that my essay has to be MLA formatted, and only 3/4 to 1 page long. 2 page is the longest it can be and must be double placed. Using MLA format, there's is no way for me a write a proper essay with that ...
October 4, 2009 by Dan

English
1. He is one of the best players on the team. 2. He is one of the good players on the team. (Which one is grammatical? Are both grammatical? Which one is better of the two? Thank you... Have a great weekend.)
December 24, 2011 by rfvv

HELP
I am writing and essay for social studies and i only have a conclusion left please help!!!! The essay is about the war of England and Spain in the 1500's their war about cultures and i want to finish this essay so i need help with the conclusion!
September 26, 2012 by Aisha

Eng. Essay - Writeacher
Writeacher or Bobpursley, or anyone who could help me with my essay. I don't know why I cannot find the post that I needed help on, my essay was on traditional families versus TV show families. I included more information. I wish I could include the link here to my post. :\
February 20, 2012 by Farrell

essay
I am writing an essay for school and I need some more ideas about why do we need healthcare? can you give me some ideas how to start it off to make a very good essay
September 19, 2009 by chris

English
1. I went to the video arcade 'yesterday night'. (Is this expression right?) 2. He went to his academy after school to learn English and math. 3. From her first diary, what can we know? Summarize her first diary. 4. Of whomself did she feel proud? (Is this sentence grammatical...
August 27, 2008 by John

college essay topic
what can be my topic for this college essay? Write an essay about yourself and the events in your life which have made a difference in the way you view yourself and others.
December 31, 2009 by kim

Research essay
I'm supposed to write a research essay on dark matter. I'm supposed to use in-text citations, but I'm not sure how to. My teacher said that I have to cite anything that's not mine. I know this, but I'm just really confused as to how to write a science research essay as oppsed ...
May 19, 2009 by Sam

english 101
which of the above topics are appropriate for an expository essay? why do you think so? which of the above topics are appropriate for a persuasive essay? explain. what differentiates an expository essay from a persuasive essay?
August 22, 2013 by Rose

books (A thankless experience)
Explain whether Lautens' essay is written formally or informally, referring to examples from the essay for support. The short essay is on the internet called A thankless experience by Stephen Lautens. I can not post the url because jiskha does not allow it.
September 24, 2013 by Andy

English
1. I think the gymnastics club is more popular than the dancing club. 2. I think the horse racing club is more popular than the archery club. 3. I think the figure skating club is the most popular club in my school. (Are they all grammatical?) 4. I think the bowling club is ...
November 26, 2012 by rfvv

Writing
Need some suggestions on how to create a argumentive rough draft apa style. Just need some examples. Here is what my assignemtn reads: Post the rough draft of your Research Topic and Source Evaluation Essay. In this essay you will present the topic you have selected from the ...
December 11, 2012 by Donna

English
On the various types of patterns of development, choose a pattern to plan, organize, and write an essay. I have chosen Youth Violence as a cause and effect for my pattern development. In writing your essay, base your writing on your own experiences and general knowledge about ...
September 6, 2008 by Success

Question about college application
I had submitted a college application essay three days ago, but after I submitted it, I felt so uncomfortable with that one, because the essay was so bad, but I had to do that, it was the last day for priority application. Since I could not change anything for my application ...
December 3, 2006 by Jenni

english
1. An essay which is informative and tells how something happened is a(n) __________ essay. causal analysis process analysis exemplification comparison/contrast is it A 2. An essay that answers the question “What is the current situation on campus after the recent tornadoes?” ...
August 15, 2013 by amy

English
1. I got up early getting ready for the game. 2. I got up early while I was getting ready for the game. (Is #1 grammatical? Does #2 mean #1?) 3. I helped my friends with teaching them math. (What about this one? Is this also grammatical?) 4. Eating vegetables is good for you. ...
June 17, 2009 by John

Essay titles
If you are writing an essay, and in the title of your essay, you have the title of a novel, does the title of the novel have to be italicized? For example, if you were writing an essay (MLA format)titled A New Perspective on The Scarlet Letter, would The Scarlet Letter need to...
April 13, 2011 by Megan

writeacher
i writing essay on what true love be and this be one sentence in my essay you please able to change it to positive? i have negative word which be unable in essay. In the short story, "The Painted Door", by Sinclair Ross, the main characters John and Ann were unable to ...
February 11, 2012 by Mohammad

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