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Grammar ( Need help Ms. Sue )
What did you learn from this paragraph?
Thursday, June 21, 2012 at 11:42pm by Ms. Sue
This has nothing to do with agreement. As Ms. Sue said, this has to do with parallel construction, and "b" is the only sentence that's correctly written. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm Where are these questions coming from?
Thursday, May 12, 2011 at 9:07pm by Writeacher
grammar please help!
Thank you Ms.Sue you save my life because I really need this to be a good grade!
Wednesday, April 3, 2013 at 8:21pm by Billy C.
Ms. Sue is right. In a short sentence like that you don't need any commas. If the sentence were longer, though, you'd put a comma before the "as well as" -- and you might put a comma after the whole phrase if the sentence continues past the phrase. Mostly, this depends on ...
Saturday, November 8, 2008 at 6:43pm by Writeacher
Grammar Check Ms. Sue
What do you mean by the phrases being formulated. How do I change the tense or where does it need to be changed at
Tuesday, October 13, 2009 at 6:03pm by Unknown
Grammar (Ms. Sue)
It's impossible to tell out of context if all of these sentences need exclamation marks.
Friday, June 7, 2013 at 2:40pm by Ms. Sue
English Grade 11 College
The content of what you have written looks fine. However, if you need to be paying attention to mechanical things, such as spelling, grammar, usage, there's lots of clean-up work to do. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/...
Thursday, April 26, 2012 at 8:54pm by Writeacher
You're very welcome. This is an excellent website: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/ It's easy to navigate by clicking on Index and finding what you need in the alphabetical listings.
Wednesday, November 10, 2010 at 5:48pm by Writeacher
Yes, good connection you made! This index is a terrific place to look up grammar and usage terms that you need explanations for: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm This is, to me, the best grammar website out there! And... you're very welcome.
Saturday, August 13, 2011 at 10:02pm by Writeacher
Grammatically, you need the "of" in 1 and 2 because "he" is not a height! In 3, 4, and 5, you need commas for the coordinating adjectives: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm Scroll down and read #5. Where will you put commas in those three sentences?
Monday, April 27, 2009 at 9:15am by Writeacher
language arts Ms. Sue please
Monday, March 25, 2013 at 7:14pm by Writeacher
You're welcome. Good luck! This site on various phrases should help you. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/phrases.htm
Sunday, February 7, 2010 at 1:49pm by Ms. Sue
Writing (Writeacher and/or Ms. Sue)
"I, personally" = redundant. Does "I" refer to anyone except you??? Go through the rest of what you've written, get rid of any repetition (redundancy) and wordiness, and make sure there are no more contradictions. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm http://...
Friday, January 17, 2014 at 7:35pm by Writeacher
adj or verb?
Ms. Sue is right. Almost all the time, it'll be a verb ... with its own subject. If it's used as an adjective, though, it's known as a participle. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/verbs.htm =)
Tuesday, September 11, 2007 at 4:36pm by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm I agree with Ms. Sue that no commas are needed here, but you may want to bookmark the above linked webpage for future reference. Be sure to read the whole thing... don't miss the ones at the very bottom!!
Wednesday, January 22, 2014 at 4:43pm by Writeacher
Grammar (Writeacher)(or Ms. Sue)
You're right. Both sentences have singular subjects and thus need singular verbs.
Wednesday, May 15, 2013 at 12:47pm by Ms. Sue
I'm not used to the system here, could Ms. Sue check my 10:03 grammar question when she gets a chance? I would be so grateful. I am going to be up late anyway!
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 10:25pm by Lisa
Jahnay -- it's a contraction, not a conjunction. All of you REALLY need to study up!! http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm
Tuesday, October 18, 2011 at 8:50pm by Writeacher
Here are the subjects and verbs. What do you think? 1. copy (and) magazine ~ has disappeared 2. Peggy (or) Phyllis ~ drive 3. Les (and) Miranda ~ is 4. muffler (but also) spark plugs ~ need http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sv_agr.htm
Tuesday, February 3, 2009 at 1:37pm by Writeacher
I agree with Ms. Sue. Be sure to look for subject-verb agreement problems, run-on sentences, missing conjunctions, etc. Use these proofreading checklists to help: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/proofing.htm (Broken Link Removed)
Sunday, July 20, 2008 at 8:53pm by Writeacher
Cody, were you asking , "Why do you need good grammar after you leave college?" If so, that is easy. If you want a good job in any industry where you use words to communicate, whether in writing or orally, then you need to have good grammar in order for people to understand ...
Tuesday, January 22, 2008 at 2:15pm by GuruBlue
please revise my essay
Here are some webpages you can use whenever you need to proof your paper yourself: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/proofing.htm (Broken Link Removed) They're both VERY good, and both have links to explanations if you need them. =)
Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 10:22pm by Writeacher
This page should be of help. If you need further help,http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/objects.htm please repost.
Friday, March 28, 2008 at 1:14pm by GuruBlue
English - Writing Sentences and Paragraphs 1
This is MUCH better!! Only one thing: You need to learn where NOT to put capital letters! Study this: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/capitals.htm Then tell me which words in your paragraph need to have the capital letters changed to lower-case letters.
Friday, October 19, 2012 at 11:51am by Writeacher
You need sentence variety. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sentences.htm You need to fix any run-ons. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
Monday, October 3, 2011 at 11:18am by Writeacher
First of all, you need to write all sentences with proper capitalization and end punctuation, too. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm Scroll down and read #5 carefully. Then re-think your answers. I'll wait for you.
Monday, April 4, 2011 at 8:53am by Writeacher
Ms.writeacher, I'm sorry i was just trying to ask to verify in the grammar if that was what you were referring to. My apologies to you. thank you for your responce . No problem. I just wanted to make sure you found my other responses. =)
Friday, November 17, 2006 at 12:32am by jasmine82
Medical Billing and Coding
Fragment; make it into a COMPLETE sentences: Having the experience watching the care the hospital gave to my father-in-law during his stay was inspiring. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/fragments.htm Watch capitalization -- when you do and when you don't need capital ...
Tuesday, December 10, 2013 at 9:39am by Writeacher
Differential diagnoses include: Diabetes, adult-onset Cholelithiasis, acute You don't use a colon after a verb. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/colon.htm Endocarditis, subacuteTerry Brazelton, MD is an expert in pediatrics. What? If you need help with your ...
Monday, October 19, 2009 at 12:27pm by Writeacher
Here are the kinds of things that need fixing: - fragments instead of complete sentences: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/fragments.htm - unnecessary repetition (redundancy): http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm#redundancy and http://grammar.ccc.commnet....
Sunday, February 19, 2012 at 11:57am by Writeacher
Types of business writing
"with a 15-minute break that will provide refreshments." -- please rephrase! I doubt the break will be providing refreshments! "The topics I would need to be covered" It would be better to say this: The topics we need to be covered ... "ways to prevent, cope and report such ...
Thursday, March 22, 2012 at 7:23pm by Writeacher
@Ms. Sue my answer was not wrong Ms. sue. I said she was right. it was follow up. if I was wrong then so were you. @Marie Ms. sue deleted my answer to you and I just wanted to know why bc I didn't do or say anything wrong or inappropriate.
Wednesday, December 12, 2012 at 4:40pm by BaileyBubble
Ok, sorry Ms.Sue, i didn't read you're sentence completely. Thanks Ms.Sue! :)
Tuesday, July 3, 2012 at 9:20pm by Losa
Go through the entire paper and double-check every single comma -- is it needed or not? Read this entire page ... all the way to the bottom: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm Re your use of "Asian" to describe Amy Tan -- Ms. Sue: "Asia is a vast continent made ...
Friday, January 27, 2012 at 11:46pm by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/ Click on the Word & Sentence Level menu and scroll until you find the section on Punctuation. Then it'll depend on which marks of punctuation you need help with. Commas are the most tricky, but there's help here for everything. =)
Sunday, May 4, 2008 at 9:47pm by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm Use this index to look up the explanations you need. Look up these things: verb tenses and uses different pronoun and antecedent topics
Monday, January 9, 2012 at 12:28pm by Writeacher
English application letter
You need to check for all of the following: *spelling *correct choice of words (example: your, not you) *correct use of capitals and lower-case letters *correct use of commas *correct use of end punctuation for sentences Choose the topics you need from this index: http://...
Friday, June 6, 2008 at 3:05pm by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm Here's one. Choose the grammar or usage element you need to study, and at the bottom of each webpage are exercises and quizzes. For example, see this one on comma usage: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
Wednesday, August 31, 2011 at 3:17pm by Writeacher
Ms. Sue is correct and she's given you some excellent websites. Remember that almost all subjects are either nouns or pronouns, but once in a great while a gerund phrase or an infinitive phrase or a relative clause can serve as a subject. Those are rare, but they do happen. ...
Tuesday, February 12, 2008 at 10:18am by Writeacher
The first thing you need to do is choose a poem. If you need to brush up on these parts of speech, check out these sites. http://eslus.com/LESSONS/GRAMMAR/POS/pos.htm http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/GRAMMAR/definitions.htm
Tuesday, June 30, 2009 at 11:27am by Ms. Sue
Your thesis is good, but you need to be more analytic and less movie-summarizing overall. Here are my ideas: 1. Don't delete anything, but ADD more specific details to the analysis in the second and third paragraphs. 2. Go through and fix mechanical problems: http://grammar....
Wednesday, July 13, 2011 at 1:55pm by Writeacher
Here's a good place to start: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sentences.htm#sentence_types This is one of the best grammar/usage/writing websites I've found. The Index is the best way to find what you need. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm
Tuesday, October 4, 2011 at 8:03am by Writeacher
Last night, Ms. Sue gave you FOUR main categories of special needs students: http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1216690100 You can use each one of these as a major section of your outline and then provide information about each one: what students in these categories are like...
Monday, July 21, 2008 at 11:57pm by Writeacher
There are these types of grammar/usage issues: subject-verb agreement: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sv_agr.htm point of view problem: Get rid of all first and second person references. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/subject_object.htm Run-ons, ...
Monday, February 22, 2010 at 10:00am by Writeacher
Dear Ms. Sue, I am extermely sorry, my intension was not to bug you up. I am an immature student ,who thought posting many questions by me would be discouring as i am very poor in Grammar. Once again i am sorry,pls forgive me.
Wednesday, June 15, 2011 at 8:35pm by Troy LaBruce
Is this supposed to be one paragraph? Why the separation after "injured"? You need to pay attention to comma uses: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm See especially #4 and #10 ... and to uses of the hyphen: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/hyphen.htm...
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 12:30am by Writeacher
English (Follow up From Yesterday)
I like your improved essay! Fantastic!! I'd use the word "writing" instead of "writings," though. Start in by learning the basic comma uses -- and apply them to this paragraph! http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm [The Index at this website is fantastic; you ...
Sunday, January 18, 2009 at 7:29pm by Writeacher
The direct object answers "what" or "whom" after the verb. Examples: Emily brought cookies to the party. Ms. S. taught history. The indirect object tells "to whom" or "to what" after the verb. An indirect object comes between the verb and the direct object. Examples: Emily ...
Sunday, February 19, 2012 at 6:43pm by Ms. Sue
SS7R Question/Help! (plz read)
You need to pay attention to what Ms. Sue told you. This is a conclusion that a much younger student would write. Read and study: Here is a brief list of things that you might accomplish in your concluding paragraph(s).* There are certainly other things that you can do, and ...
Sunday, February 12, 2012 at 3:44pm by Writeacher
English - Ms. Sue
So the rule that stands in my grammar book is not totally right. I can say The Amaricans are good at football even if there isn't one of the suffix that stands in my grammar book.
Sunday, December 16, 2012 at 8:14am by Minnie
Get rid of all instances of "you" and its forms. Get your comma usage under control (where you need them and where you don't): http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm Revise and re-post.
Friday, November 16, 2012 at 1:41pm by Writeacher
No need for "the" in this sentence. Sunlight is one of those non-count nouns, so "the" is not correct here. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/noncount.htm
Thursday, November 18, 2010 at 4:29am by Writeacher
Here are some grammar/usage topics you need to review: Subject-verb agreement: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sv_agr.htm Indirect questions (how the verbs should be phrased): http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/question.htm#indirect Then repost. =)
Wednesday, February 13, 2008 at 8:12am by Writeacher
Business Communications - English 101
You're very welcome! I usually start with their index and then look up whatever I need to learn or explain: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm
Friday, July 12, 2013 at 10:25am by Writeacher
Your introductory paragraph needs to contain more than two sentences. Check this site and if you still need help, please repost. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/five_par.htm
Sunday, February 21, 2010 at 12:40pm by GuruBlue
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm Be sure to read that carefully, especially the five different ways to do this. I'd go for the "surprising statement" but you'll need to decide what you want to use.
Wednesday, November 21, 2012 at 2:04pm by Writeacher
You're comparing TWO things; therefore, you need to use "more" not "most." http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/adjectives.htm#comparative "compared to paragraph one" is redundant (repetitive); delete it. Several commas are missing. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/...
Friday, April 22, 2011 at 4:33pm by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm Read carefully. Let us know if you need specific help.
Friday, September 30, 2011 at 8:56pm by Writeacher
It's a compound-complex sentence, and it needs one comma added. Can you see where? http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sentences.htm#sentence_types "...has a need to feel accepted and being cared about..." This part needs to have parallel form. How will you fix it? http://...
Friday, January 13, 2012 at 10:13am by Writeacher
You're pretty much on the right track. How formal does this assignment response need to be? If I were you, I'd go through it, sentence-by-sentence, from the bottom up -- and make sure you have no run-ons or fragments. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm http://...
Sunday, November 29, 2009 at 1:36pm by Writeacher
You need a comma after "site" -- http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm See #3.
Sunday, November 28, 2010 at 2:06am by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm Look up what you need help with -- alphabetically.
Tuesday, May 10, 2011 at 7:24pm by Writeacher
C is right. You really need to study what "active" and "passive" mean. You're incorrect in trying to determine this concept. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/passive.htm
Thursday, April 14, 2011 at 9:59pm by Writeacher
In 3, "Rime of the Ancient Mariner" <~~poem titles, song titles, article titles, editorial titles, etc., need to be in quotation marks. Titles of books, films, artworks, plays, etc., need to be italicized. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/italics.htm Something that is...
Thursday, June 27, 2013 at 3:41pm by Writeacher
Not usually, but if the specific medical center or hospital capitalizes the P and D, then you would. Since you don't know, then leave them uncapitalized. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/capitals.htm See #4 here. You also need commas after both instances of "bronchoscopy...
Thursday, September 22, 2011 at 9:13am by Writeacher
Subject and verb agreement means that the subject must agree with the verb in terms of number. Basic Principle: Singular subjects need singular verbs; plural subjects need plural verbs. My brother is a nutritionist. My sisters are mathematicians. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu...
Sunday, August 24, 2008 at 8:03pm by Ms. Sue
Tina, did you even look at the list of prepositions that Ms. Sue posted for you? Here's a webpage about conjunctions. http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/conjunctions.htm Let us know what you THINK. Don't guess!
Sunday, July 5, 2009 at 9:04pm by Writeacher
For each electron in a ground-state Be atom, select the set of quantum numbers that represents it. Check all that apply. ( ) n=2, l=0, ml=0, ms=+1/2 ( ) n=1, l=0, ml=0, ms=+1/2 ( ) n=2, l=1, ml=0, ms=-1/2 ( ) n=2, l=1, ml=1, ms=+1/2 ( ) n=2, l=0, ml=0, ms=-1 ( ) n=2, l=0, ml=0...
Sunday, November 11, 2012 at 2:29am by Garcia
English - Ms. Sue
Right. Here's another explanation about using articles (the, a, an): http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/determiners/determiners.htm In the first paragraph here, you can tell that it's not an easy or consistent "rule" in English. This is what I meant by "fuzzy" above. ...
Sunday, December 16, 2012 at 8:14am by Writeacher
English answer check
16 and 19 are now correct. You need to read up on the terms in #17 so you don't guess. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/verbs.htm#mood
Wednesday, May 2, 2012 at 9:52pm by Writeacher
Incorrect: #s 3, 7, 10 #s 6 and 8 don't make any sense. Non-essential clauses need two commas each (unless the clause comes at the end of the sentence). See #4 in the linked webpage below: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
Thursday, May 6, 2010 at 4:53pm by Writeacher
1 and 3 are correct, as long as you put a space after those commas. They NEED the commas (so 2 and 4 are incorrect). This construction is called coordinate adjectives. See #5 here: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
Thursday, June 6, 2013 at 3:59am by Writeacher
Between acts, the theater was completely dark, but the orchestra continued to play anyway. I see no need for any hyphens in that sentence. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/hyphen.htm
Monday, March 3, 2014 at 12:17pm by Writeacher
If you want to use a comma, then you need the complete correlative conjunction set: ... not only ... but also ... http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/conjunctions.htm#correlative_conjunctions
Friday, June 3, 2011 at 4:43pm by Writeacher
No, Rylee. You need BOTH commas if "Sue" and "neighbor" were referring to the same person. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/phrases.htm#appositive
Wednesday, November 14, 2012 at 8:55pm by Writeacher
English (Grade 6)
Here is another: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm Use this Index to find the sections you need to study and then read each webpage carefully. There is at least one quiz at the bottom of each webpage.
Monday, November 29, 2010 at 8:50am by Writeacher
Tina's examples are good. Try writing your own, Amor, and then post what you come up with. Here's an excellent webpage with explanations and examples if you need them. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
Saturday, May 7, 2011 at 9:57pm by Writeacher
Yes, you need a comma after "book." That's an introductory clause up to that point. See #3 here: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm The sentence sounds fine except for "one's" -- who is that "one"?
Thursday, December 1, 2011 at 12:07am by Writeacher
Another grammar question from me... I need help understanding gerund phrases. I know the meaning and everything there is just no easy way for me to spot them..any help for me? Thanks -MC
Wednesday, February 18, 2009 at 8:35pm by mysterychicken
You mean punctuation and capitalization and correctly indicating the name of a piece of art? "Have you seen Brian Forbes's painting called The Olympic Runner?" asked Rosita. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/index2.htm Find the webpages in here for which you need help.
Friday, February 5, 2010 at 10:58am by Writeacher
to affect a safe, satisfactory water system. You need the word effect here. Note the different meanings as verbs: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/notorious.htm << See #95.
Sunday, February 27, 2011 at 11:07pm by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/transitions.htm Scroll down a bit to find the chart of transitional words and phrases. I have no idea which ones (if any) are considered "5th grade" but you can choose what you need from this chart.
Wednesday, September 12, 2012 at 11:48pm by Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/transitions.htm I see 8 here. You'd need to check your text to see what your teacher expects.
Wednesday, September 29, 2010 at 10:09pm by Writeacher
Not bad! Make sure the two paragraphs are clearly separated. Rephrase so that there are no instances of "you" or any of its forms anywhere in the write-up. There are places where you need to add specific examples. Remember that when you write about poetry, you need to give ...
Friday, December 4, 2009 at 6:58am by Writeacher
The first one is correct, but the others need work. Study these webpages and try again. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm (Pay special attention to commas and other punctuation near/next to the quotation marks.) http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/...
Friday, June 1, 2012 at 9:05am by Writeacher
Spamming the board!
STOP! You need to indicate what YOU THINK the answers are for each of these question you posted ... then someone here will be able to help you. Also, if you are going into the field of education, this kind of thing should be absolutely under control by now. Study this: http://...
Sunday, February 16, 2014 at 9:04am by Writeacher
My question is to correct the faulty parallelism.How can we do that. "The streets were not only too steep but also were too narrow for anything other than pedestrian traffic." The structure is parallel. Perhaps the second were isn't needed. Please check back here because ...
Monday, June 11, 2007 at 8:36pm by Niraj
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm You still need to work on commas that fall into uses #3 1 - keep "of" 2 - OK 3 - OK 4 - OK 5 - delete became 6 - Delete "The" - ideas, not ideals
Wednesday, December 8, 2010 at 11:33am by Writeacher
An antecedent is a word to which a pronoun refers. Examples (with the antecedent in bold and the pronoun underlined): Ms. Martin told her class to study for the test. Terry didn't want to give up his motorcycle. Check this site for more information. http://leo.stcloudstate.edu...
Monday, March 10, 2008 at 4:47pm by Ms. Sue
The names of ships need to be in italics, not in quotation marks. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/italics.htm Scroll down to Names of Vehicles; notice Titanic.
Tuesday, August 11, 2009 at 10:59pm by Writeacher
Grammar (Writeacher)(or Ms. Sue)
I'll be glad to check your answers. http://www.grammar-monster.com/lessons/either_or_plural_or_singular_verb.htm
Wednesday, May 15, 2013 at 12:47pm by Ms. Sue
Grammar (Ms. Sue)
He is studying. http://www.englishbaby.com/lessons/grammar/present_progressive_tense
Thursday, March 28, 2013 at 8:22pm by Ms. Sue
10th grade English
The content looks fine. If you want mechanical errors pointed out, you need to focus on correcting these: Comma errors Example: "I know what I'm doing Arthur and it is for our own good." 2 commas needed in that sentence. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm Run-...
Thursday, March 26, 2009 at 6:21am by Writeacher
Please do these things and then re-post when you've made corrections ~ 1. Get rid of all instances of "you" and any of its forms. Rephrase these sentences. 2. Read each sentence in reverse order (from the last sentence to the first). Fix any problems you discover. 3. Think ...
Wednesday, January 16, 2013 at 10:46am by Writeacher
Neither of the above is correct. You are writing a "conditional" sentence, so you need to use the conditional form of the verb. If she had not gone late, she would have gotten a ticket. Check out this site on conditional usage. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/GRAMMAR/...
Tuesday, February 24, 2009 at 1:02pm by GuruBlue
English Improving writing
You're on the right track, yes. Now keep going over the second draft to catch things that need correcting, such as spacing, periods, spelling, etc. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/proofing.htm (Broken Link Removed)
Friday, June 20, 2008 at 12:56pm by Writeacher
Thanks Ms. Sue!
Wednesday, November 14, 2007 at 9:24pm by Lisa
Thank you, Ms. Sue.
Monday, September 27, 2010 at 7:45pm by Sarah
Thank you Ms. Sue!
Monday, March 19, 2012 at 1:19pm by Jenny
Thank you Ms. Sue!
Wednesday, June 27, 2012 at 10:05pm by Losa: Flame Girl