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Essay- Added a bit more
If you could just change my conclusion a bit, I would really appreciate that.
Monday, March 28, 2011 at 10:15pm by Sara

Essay- Added a bit more
I don't have time to rewrite all this as it is due tomorrow. I'll just stick with what I have.
Monday, March 28, 2011 at 10:15pm by Sara

Creative Writing
assignment: essay topic: Being an only child has more advantages than being one of several children in a family i just need a little bit help getting started (introduction). i have all my freewriting, and the information for the body points. jus a little help starting the ...
Monday, November 16, 2009 at 6:10pm by y912f

Discrete Math
What is the probability that a fair coin lands Heads 4 times out of 5 flips? Out of bit strings of length ten, what is the probability that the bit string begins and ends with 0? What if the bit string has more 0s than 1s? and, what if the bit string has the sum of its digits ...
Sunday, October 30, 2011 at 10:40pm by Tommy

English
For our homework we had to draw and label an imaginary creature, then write an essay on it . I'm completely stuck on the essay bit please he
Thursday, October 27, 2011 at 6:04am by Zoe

English
I have to plan for an essay. The essay is to do with Arcadia. I'm having a bit of difficulty. Why is Arcadia an artificial play? Please help
Thursday, January 8, 2009 at 3:41pm by Anonymous

MATH - INFINITY
Can you explain that a bit more? I'm still a bit confused...
Friday, September 28, 2007 at 12:42am by Anonymous

essay
From the way you've described your essay, it looks more like an expository essay.
Thursday, October 1, 2009 at 8:14pm by Ms. Sue

Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Hmmm! I'm remembering this part of the book a bit. Maybe I'll remember more as you write your paper. Anyway, please post your revised thesis statement and your outline, and I'll be able to give you some feedback.
Monday, February 17, 2014 at 8:26pm by Writeacher

Chemistry
Supersaturated solutions are unstable because they are holding more solute than is normally possible. All it takes is for a tiny bit to be added and it begins to crystallize. If you think of a normal salt/water solution. You can get just so much salt to dissolve in water at a ...
Friday, February 22, 2013 at 6:29am by JJ

English Essay
Hi I am a teacher at a middle school and I think that your essay is definitely an essay better than my students but it sure could use a little more work.
Monday, March 7, 2011 at 5:51pm by mrs. warrow

Chemistry
im still a bit confused about part c i calculated: n(C6H5COOH)initial= .006 mol but when i calculate the KOH do i do the initial or with the added 15mL? im a bit confused about that
Wednesday, November 3, 2010 at 4:59pm by araz

Chemistry
N2(g)+3H2(g) -> 2NH3(g)+ 22000 cal Consider the reaction is at equilibrium. Explain how the equilibrium is shifted when a. more N is added b. more H is added c. ammonia is removed
Monday, November 12, 2012 at 10:48am by Liz

math
If the first bit (left most bit) is a 0, then it can be filled in only each of the bit string can be filled in one way and when bit strings of length eight end with the two bits 00. Each of the remaining five position is represent in the bit string can be filled in 2 ways (i.e...
Friday, September 7, 2007 at 12:59pm by Touseef Ahmed

SAT Essay
Hi Bob, thank you so much for your very useful and honest feedback. Can you give me more pointers on how I could have developed a stronger essay? How do you think I should have approached the essay?
Friday, September 10, 2010 at 11:03am by Jessie

English Essay
Ill post my initial draft in a bit then. thanks
Monday, October 24, 2011 at 4:56am by HM

Sra
Are you going to be on for a lil bit more? Around 1-2 hours now from this post? I really need help with some french, but I have to do some other homework first. I'll check on your reply in a bit. Merci beacoupe.
Monday, March 30, 2009 at 10:47pm by Chopsticks

English
Illustration essay: Succesful student In order to be succesful college student must be punctual to class and dedicated to his work. For instance if a student is punctual and comes to class daily : He will be constantly reminded of the upcoming assignments If a student is ...
Sunday, September 25, 2011 at 8:50am by HM

Proofreading
I love your beginning :). When you say "These reasons make it vital..." it sounds a bit awkward. Take that out and keep "It is vital for parents to help..." You could even begin it "For this reason..." You really were only giving one whole statement for a reason, though I know...
Wednesday, April 9, 2008 at 10:35pm by Molly

chemistry
The enzyme Y catalyzes the elementary reaction AB-->A + B An enzyme concentration of 1.0M Y can convert a maximum of 0.5M AB to the products A and B per second. What will happen when each of the following is added to a solution that contains 1.0M Y and 0.8M AB? I have to ...
Sunday, March 22, 2009 at 11:31pm by tomi

Chemistry
Sorry, one more question. For .........RNH2 + HCl ==> RNH3^+ + Cl^- initial...0....................... added...........0 added..........2.0 added..........4.0 etc change..................... the initial RNH2 is 0? Shouldn't it be the initial moles in the problem (.004moles ...
Saturday, November 26, 2011 at 8:14pm by Jessica

Computer science
a 64-bit bus means that 64 bits of data can be moved between memory and the cpu at one time. a 64-bit processor means that 64-bits of data can be handled in a single instruction, making for fast computations of precise results, or processing of shifts, logical operations, etc...
Sunday, February 3, 2013 at 10:17pm by Anonymous

math
Principal plus interest after four months is: $2000 + (4/12)*(0.1025)*(2000) = $2068.33 It could be a bit more if monthly interest was being added to prinipal due. There could also have been late payment penalties. A loan that requires no payment for 4 months is unusual.
Monday, February 1, 2010 at 9:51am by drwls

Essay
I think your whole essay didn't post, right? There are more than three sentences in your essay, correct? I have lived in the Poquoson <~~if that's the name of the town, then delete the word "the" for fifteen years. The small town<~~hyphenate so it reads "small-town" life...
Sunday, September 16, 2007 at 2:53pm by Writeacher

essay writing
then the next answer should be A because your essay can have more then 5 paragraphs.
Tuesday, October 20, 2009 at 7:01pm by larry

chemistry
If 15.0 g of KCl is added to 100.0 g of water at 30.0 °C, how much more must be added to saturate the solution?
Tuesday, October 19, 2010 at 6:32pm by pinky

writing
Six more what? Do you need eight paragraphs for your essay on "your surroundings create who you are persuasive essay"?
Wednesday, August 15, 2012 at 4:45pm by Ms. Sue

Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)
How should I begin this assigned essay? Write an essay in what ways today people are more fearful than people in past generations. You may use examples from real life, the selection you just read, books, movies, music, or television.
Wednesday, January 8, 2014 at 4:52pm by Victoria

chemistry
If 50g NaNO(3) is added to 100g water at 10 degrees C, how much more must be added to saturate the solution?
Tuesday, October 28, 2008 at 6:57pm by Monica

essay
just tell and teach the english language u learned to them and there is your essay it may be more time consuming but it will be worth wile and you are likly to get a relly good grade on the esay, cause that is what i do and i allways get a good grde so i hope my tactics will ...
Saturday, November 15, 2008 at 6:17pm by blup

science
please any more explaination. can u elaborate it a bit more?
Monday, November 17, 2008 at 9:05am by shery

essay
I am writing an essay for school and I need some more ideas about why do we need healthcare? can you give me some ideas how to start it off to make a very good essay
Saturday, September 19, 2009 at 2:11pm by chris

Eng. Essay - Writeacher
Writeacher or Bobpursley, or anyone who could help me with my essay. I don't know why I cannot find the post that I needed help on, my essay was on traditional families versus TV show families. I included more information. I wish I could include the link here to my post. :\
Monday, February 20, 2012 at 3:26pm by Farrell

Essay title
Hi. I'm trying to think of an essay title for an "I believe" essay. The essay is supposed to talk about how I defy the 'single story'. I talked about defying the single story of a teenage girl because I play the drums. My "I believe" statement is that 'I believe in seeing more...
Monday, September 9, 2013 at 9:55pm by Serena

SAT Essay
Thank you! What else should be in my essay to get the 6? Once I know exactly what I lack, I'll watch out for those errors when I write more essays.
Wednesday, August 27, 2008 at 2:19pm by Sahil

Pre-Calculus 11
two If DF=4 we have a right triangle, with EF=4√3 = 6.92 Moving F a bit toward D will enable us to make EF a bit longer (7.00) Moving F a bit away from D will allow for EF a bit longer (7.00)
Thursday, May 16, 2013 at 7:11pm by Steve

Science
Without reading your essay, that is a bit difficult to do. Try some of the following links for ideas: http://search.yahoo.com/search?fr=mcafee&p=title+for+essay+about+water+resources Sra
Thursday, October 6, 2011 at 5:21am by SraJMcGin

Chemistry-Experiment
I did an experiment where I had 5 ml of MgCl2, then 5 ml NH4 solution (NH4OH (aq)) was added and it was observed that a precipitate formed; cloudy solution. After I added 1g of NH4Cl(s), the solution clears up (transparent). 2nd experiment: There was 5ml Lead (II) Nitrate in a...
Friday, March 30, 2012 at 6:50pm by Fresca

English (Essay)
Well I think this essay is meant to be somewhat biased. We've just finished reading a book called Tke Kite Runner and it's based in Afghanistan. The teacher wanted us to choose from a list of topics and my group chose this subject. I guess I was trying to make the essay more ...
Wednesday, August 24, 2011 at 7:22pm by CP

chemistry
Energy must be removed because particles in liquid move more slowly. Energy must be added because particles in liquid move more quickly. Energy is neither added nor removed in this phase transition. Energy is either removed or added, depending on the type of particles
Thursday, February 7, 2013 at 9:57am by Fatima

Computer
You have an empty 64 bit PCI slot in your computer. What can you install in it? A. A single 64 bit adapter card B. A single 32 or 64 bit adapter card C. A single 64 bit adapter card or two 32 bit adapter cards D. A single 64 bit adapter and an 8 bit adapter
Friday, January 18, 2013 at 9:35pm by Nikki

essay
i'm writing a persuasive essay about teachers giving students too much homework. i need 2 more supporting topics 1. interfering with activities 2. 3. please help and thank you
Thursday, March 25, 2010 at 7:17pm by larry

Word
Ms. Sue Im almost done with my essay I got about 3 more paragraphs to write. I hope you like it I worked very hard on this essay.
Sunday, November 13, 2011 at 10:44am by Laruen

English
1 and 2 mean about the same thing. 1 is more casual (no subject stated), and 2 is a bit more formal. 3 ... just awakened. 4 is correct, yes.
Wednesday, November 2, 2011 at 9:38am by Writeacher

Writing
this is my own essay. they helped me with it eariler but i added to it
Tuesday, January 13, 2009 at 6:43pm by Bryan

Essay Writing
OK It's not letting me post the list... so I'll ignore that. Here's the last part to the essay: Living with a schizophrenic person can be difficult because the affected person will be unable to communicate in a regular manner and will be in his/her own world. They will have ...
Monday, June 15, 2009 at 10:34pm by mysterychicken

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
How much more of the wordiness should I eliminate from my essay? I desperately want to recieve an excellent grade for this assignment, but I can't if you refuse to read any more of my revisions. I don't want to bother you or make you upset, but I still need your help. Should I...
Monday, April 7, 2014 at 11:40am by Victoria

SAT Essay
Nice Vocabs for ur age, was expecting more disadvantages of using technology...like radiation from gamma rays, side effects from staring at the computer screen for long hours, all the bad things that children are exposed too while on the internet...remeber the more information...
Wednesday, October 7, 2009 at 9:19pm by PEX-TUIKE

Essay
This essay does not show that you're ready for NJHS. usually always?? someone doesn't treat me write? I am “in charge” of all the little kids.? Where? When? You need to be more specific.
Thursday, February 20, 2014 at 4:27pm by Ms. Sue

Science
Ms Sue is right. A mixture of ice and water will have a temperature of zero Celsius. If heat is added all of it will melt but the temperature will not rise above zero C until the last bit of ice has melted. If heat is extracted all of it will freeze but the temperature of the ...
Tuesday, March 4, 2008 at 10:22pm by DrBob222

Essay
Ok, Anon... one BIG suggestion... there is a lot of repetition and no real specifics. See if you can think of one exact time, something someone said, something someone did....tell that story. That will make your essay much more meaningful and much more interesting.
Tuesday, May 20, 2008 at 4:51pm by GuruBlue

math
the airthmetic mean of a set of nine numbers is 5. when one more number is added to s,the new means is5.5 .what number was added ?_? help
Tuesday, December 9, 2008 at 8:21pm by rayray

Chemistry
If 15.0g of KCL is added to 100.0g of water at 30.0 C, how much more must be added to saturate the solution
Sunday, September 23, 2012 at 4:25pm by Jessica

CHEMISTY!!!!!!!!
If 15.0g of KCL is added to 100.0g of water at 30.0 C, how much more must be added to saturate the solution
Sunday, September 23, 2012 at 5:25pm by JOHN

media analysis
Just some sources of info, maybe ideas, i have to do an in-class essay and im having a bit of trouble locating information
Thursday, November 15, 2007 at 4:49am by marcus

writeacher help
so i'm still stuck with my essay on "The most dangerous game" i have information for irony, a bit of setting but what does chronological text structure mean?
Monday, December 30, 2013 at 11:48am by Reina B. V

Essay Check
Ok you dont need anything added
Monday, February 27, 2012 at 11:07pm by Ms.sue

persuasive essay
Thank you for all of your help on this essay. I will make all the corrections this time. Does this essay sound more persuasive this time?
Sunday, June 12, 2011 at 10:42pm by Debbie

Literature Essay (Writeacher)
My assigned essay is to be about ways people today are more fearful than people in past generations, though.
Friday, January 10, 2014 at 6:23pm by Victoria

american history Lexington and Concord Essay
Who was telling the truth? Which source was more believable? Is only one version true or could parts of each source be close to the truth? It is time for you to decide. You will write a persuasive essay explaining what you think really happened on April 19, 1775. [Lexington ...
Monday, August 15, 2011 at 6:33pm by maria

physics (the algebra bit)
I don't know what to do with the m2 a I know I have to do somehthing with that but what I'm not sure adding it to both sides and dividing by m2 gives me a + a or more simply 2a but then I would have to divide by 2 which isn't in the answer my text book gives me
Thursday, July 30, 2009 at 4:21pm by physics (the algebra bit)

Chemistry
Two beakers were used in an experiment each with 100g of water at 30 degrees C. To the first beaker, 90g of NaNO3 was added. To the second beaker, 90g of KNO3 was added. (a)Which beaker had the salt precipitate out (settle to the bottom) and how much? (b) Which beaker could ...
Monday, April 28, 2008 at 6:30pm by Toni Jones

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
I'm sorry, but I am trying. In fact, I recently researched different means to eliminate wordiness. Thus, I am revising my essay now. If I sumbitted it to you once more, will you still evaluate it?
Monday, April 7, 2014 at 11:40am by Victoria

intro to computers
which of the statements below is false? a.you can install a 64-bit operating system on a 64- bit machine. b. you can install a 64-bit operating system on a 32-bit machine. c.you can install a 32-bit operating system on a 64-bit machine. d.you can install a 32-bit operating ...
Wednesday, October 30, 2013 at 5:34pm by mary

Chemistry --Help 2! :)
After that long discussion below, I won't go into much detail here. Actually, with what I answered below on the HCN = H2O problem, these should go well for you (a) water is added --> dissolve Fe(OH)2(s) + H2O ==> Fe^+2 + 2OH^- So adding water moves the reaction to the ...
Tuesday, March 9, 2010 at 11:26am by DrBob222

To: SraJMcGin
He might be a bit more positive than Ty balt (at least at first) Can you find a more "choleric" character? Sra
Monday, April 20, 2009 at 7:59pm by SraJMcGin

Literature
'When you finish with this section, you will write an observational essay. This essay will be a description of a person, place, or thing you can observe. You'll write using sensory details and perhaps a bit of narrative. Some key elements will be sharp, clear sensory details ...
Friday, December 18, 2009 at 5:26pm by mysterychicken

Chemistry
That reallly cleared some things up, but I do still have a few questions. Umm im not completely clear on the hyrogen peroxide subject. its added to a solution containing aluminum chloride and iron chloride, and you said it is ther eto make sure the ion is Al3+, can you please ...
Sunday, February 28, 2010 at 12:38pm by Joe

Writing Skills Writing Assignment
I am trying to complete a 750 to 1000 word essay but I completely have no clue what to write about and my writing skills is a bit lacking. It needs to be about a personal experience. I have more info if needed.This is the final paper result. Your final paper should be at least...
Friday, March 14, 2014 at 12:42am by Jen

essay writing
What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.
Thursday, October 8, 2009 at 7:47pm by larry

Math
A 1/2 inch drill bit is too large for a job, while a 3/8 inch bit is too small. What size bit should be tried next? 7/16 *** 5/16 **** 3/16 9/16 is this correct
Wednesday, February 13, 2008 at 5:49pm by Mike

essay
im including Sonny Bono in the essay im going to write... i googled him and read his wiki page but could you tell me more about what he did in what you said earlier ms.sue
Monday, September 22, 2008 at 8:32pm by qwerty

Thesis statement help?
The thesis statement is the sentence or two in your text that contains the focus of your essay and tells your reader what the essay is going to be about. The thesis statement usually appears near the beginning of a paper. It can be the first sentence of an essay, but that ...
Wednesday, January 8, 2014 at 11:23am by Kailee

For writeacher:
I'm sorry but is it OK if I email you this essay that I have written on the poem The Tide Rises, The Tide Falls by Longfellow? It's a bit long to type here... Thanks -MC
Wednesday, December 17, 2008 at 10:46am by mysterychicken

Question on essay ( Please respond?)
Is there anyway I could email a tutor and send them a picture I scanned of my homework, because it's a bit hard to explain over words? Thanks. -Allyson
Wednesday, October 27, 2010 at 4:14pm by Allyson

Chemistry(Please respond, thank you)
If you add H^+ to the CrO4^2- it shifts to the right (to get rid of the extra acid you've added). The darker color is due to the dichromate that is forming as more acid is added. It should go from yellow to orange.
Tuesday, March 20, 2012 at 5:36pm by DrBob222

To Ms. Sue
here is the hypothesis: If farmers could own more plots of land, then they could grow more agricultural products. Sorry if I posted this a bit late. Can you tell me if this is correct, this is all I could come up with ,thanks
Friday, October 9, 2009 at 10:12pm by sara

English-Ms. Sue
my other question; What is the purpose of this essay? How can you tell? The purpose of this essay is to give us a better understanding of puns. how can I tell? - In this essay it gives selections of puns, that are all different. Please add any more info, thanks. How would I ...
Monday, February 1, 2010 at 8:34pm by Sara

Chemistry
Sorry, I posted the above before I got to see your answer, bobpursley. I think I get it a little more but could you clarify a bit more based on what I asked above?
Wednesday, February 6, 2013 at 4:39pm by A Canadian

CHEMISTRY
In a study of the reaction of magnesium with hydrochloric acid, two experiments were carried out. Each uses 1 g of magnesium ribbon, and 50 mL of hydrochloric acid was added to each reaction flask. One of the hydrochloric acid solutions added was more concentrated than the ...
Sunday, November 17, 2013 at 3:47pm by Anonymous

essay topic
i have to write about a time that i've broken a promise or a time that somebody has broken a promise to me. can anybody help me think of something? it can be made up. i can think of a few things but nothing that i would be able to write a whole essay over. Don't make it up. ...
Friday, November 17, 2006 at 10:54am by Anonymous

English expression
#1 = It looks like a type where "he" is meant to be "her." You might take several of the simple sentences and combine them into a complex sentence. That would seem a bit more sophisticated. #2. Again, how about shortening it by having more complex sentences? If you can, always...
Tuesday, March 25, 2008 at 5:02pm by SraJMcGin

GMAT Essay
This was a 30 min essay? I'd give it a 4 -- organization is good; content includes some repetitive phrases; syntax is OK, but would probably be better (polished) if you had had more time.
Friday, April 15, 2011 at 4:31pm by Writeacher

English
Hey guys I have an essay i need to write next week, and my english teacher is giving us 5 classes to do it in. Needs to be 900-1200 words, and we are allowed to bring in a sheet with some points and ideas about the topic, so we can expand on them in the essay. The prompt for ...
Friday, May 8, 2009 at 8:46am by Melih

Intro to Computers
You are setting up a desktop computer for an AutoCad specialist who needs a minimum of 125 GB of RAM. Which operating system below would be best-suited for his needs? A. Windows 8 Home 64-Bit Edition B. Windows XP 32-Bit Professional Edition C. Windows Millennium 64-Bit ...
Monday, January 13, 2014 at 4:19pm by Nicole

chemistry
Ca^2+(aq) + CO3^2-(aq) ==> CaCO3(s) The net ionic equation is shown above. As the Ca^2+ is increased it reacts with carbonate ion and the CaCO3 is increased. At some point, the last of the carbonate is gone (since none is being added); therefore, no matter how much more Ca^...
Tuesday, April 12, 2011 at 9:23pm by DrBob222

Chemistry
This is a bit more complicated that it appears. First you must realize that at -79 C, the H2O is in the form of ice. So heat must be added to raise T to zero C, heat added to melt the ice, and finally heat added to raise T from zero C to 57 C. heat to raise T from -79 C to ...
Monday, March 4, 2013 at 6:57pm by DrBob222

Essay
I'm trying to start an essay paragraph with the topic " Contributing to the community" and I was wondering if this is a good starting sentence.If not, please give me some ideas or suggestions for one.Thanks -Everyone in life had made significant contributions to the community ...
Wednesday, September 15, 2010 at 7:10pm by Shadow

11th grade [URGENT]
Help with my research essay!? I have this assignment I have to do and its a research essay. I was wondering if this was a good topic (not too broad or not too specific) for my essay: Behind fast food, or like does fast food take effect on obesity? I've chosen to do something ...
Friday, November 20, 2009 at 4:19pm by Hiro

math
A bit more information than that?
Thursday, October 18, 2007 at 3:17pm by Devon

writing
I need a bit more help than this.
Friday, May 20, 2011 at 3:26pm by Brenda

vocab.
One sentence is not an essay. If your teacher wants just one sentence, then your answer is o.k. You'll need to write a lot more for this to be an essay.
Monday, January 25, 2010 at 5:09pm by Ms. Sue

Speech vs Essay
One difference is that the essay is typically transmitted in written form, while the speech is transmitted orally. I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.
Saturday, June 13, 2009 at 1:56pm by PsyDAG

english1A- Gender Myths Essay
I actually think tattoos could be added also, as they are a part of fashion, and come and go.
Wednesday, October 7, 2009 at 4:33pm by bobpursley

Technology
A milling machine has a rotating tool bit. The table moves in the x and y directions, linear. Your answer is correct. Note that they carefully said WOOD lathe where you can move the bit all kinds of ways with your hand. With a metal lathe the bit is usually constrained to move...
Tuesday, January 19, 2010 at 4:29pm by Damon

Producing
well ya i have a question I left my notes @ school I need to know what quality is most pleasing to the ear when recording audio. I'm using a half decent studio here were I have to following options 2 channel, 16 bit, 44100 Hz (CD Quality) 2 Channel, 16 bit, 48000 Hz (DVD ...
Monday, December 29, 2008 at 4:07pm by Producing

goverment
The federal government has become stronger as more and more amendments have been added to the Constitution.
Sunday, September 28, 2008 at 6:23pm by Ms. Sue

Question about college application
I had submitted a college application essay three days ago, but after I submitted it, I felt so uncomfortable with that one, because the essay was so bad, but I had to do that, it was the last day for priority application. Since I could not change anything for my application ...
Sunday, December 3, 2006 at 7:21pm by Jenni

Statistics
It is known that the amount of time needed to change the oil in a car is normally distributed. A random sample of 100 oil changes yielded a sample mean of 22 minutes and a standard deviation of 5 minutes. Then compared to the interval estimate for the previous question. This ...
Monday, February 26, 2007 at 3:50pm by Jason L

Sociology
can you elaborate little bit more. Thanks
Tuesday, June 10, 2008 at 9:38am by Mike

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