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Please proofread my essay
Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis. Here is my prompt: 1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a ...
October 29, 2006 by Soly
proofread my essay?
If I post my rough draft of an essay on here, can someone proofread it please? I would REALLY appreciate if someone did because I'm doing horrible on it and it would be really helpful if I had someone else's input :) thanks so SO much!!!
November 13, 2008 by Emily
COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY-Please Proofread
1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and proof and ...
July 27, 2013 by Anonymous
Can someone please proofread my history essay?
Hi, I have a history essay and I think it's done but I'd like someone to proofread it and suggest corrections first, can someone here please do that? Thanks! :-) P.S. It's due tomorrow Here's the essay: John Musbach History 02/14/07 My thesis statement is: Through the power of...
February 15, 2007 by John
help please :)
What is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the secong draft. B.proofread the essay to make it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit,changing and rearranging the content. D.All of the above. i got D what do you think ?
September 29, 2011 by ciara
Corey wrote the first draft of his essay. What is the next step before he revises it? A.Proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material. C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. .I chose A.
October 19, 2009 by larry
Three Posts Below
The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...
November 21, 2006 by Anonymous
what is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the second draft. B.Proofread the essay to make sure it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit changing and rearranging the contect. D. All of the above .I CHOSE D.
October 8, 2009 by larry
Research paper for photography
Hi! This is an essay I wrote on Duane Michals for my photography class. Can someone please proofread - I'm rusty on writing essays. Also, can you give my comments and critiques, especially conclusion...I think it's a little weak... THANKS! p.s. I started it off with a poem by ...
March 11, 2007 by michelle
please tell me what you think/ proofread my essay
This is the prompt: Write about a time when you had to show respect for authority, even though it was difficult to do so.
October 13, 2006 by Anonymous
I am writing an literary essay about The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro with the topic of "self-deception as self-destruction". Could someone proofread my introduction so far and help me fix any grammatical errors?
September 28, 2006 by Chris
Corey wrote first draft of his eassy. What is the next step before he revises it? A.proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. i got A what do you think ?
September 28, 2011 by ciara
Can someone please proofread my Spanish? Thank you. it will not let me post my HW because it says that I have posted a link but I haven't. Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. We'd be glad to proofread it if you can post it! Please try again. You can not copy ...
January 18, 2007 by JYD
FIXED Essay. Please proofread.
I went back made the suggest changes. I will go back and add more specfic examples of traditions before I turn my final paper in. I need this asap (before Sunday) Thanxs for your help! Who Is An American?
September 15, 2006 by Soly
According to CCMS, the small size of this school helps the downtown urban community meet their needs, in particular at-risk students from low-income households because the students are given more individual attention by faculty members. As a small charter school, CCMS promotes...
March 24, 2008 by Bizzy
Could you please help me form an introduction paragraph for my essay? It's a comparison and contrast essay, where I am comparing two songs. I need help! Thank you.
April 13, 2016 by Mariana W.
Romeo and Juliet (proofread essay )
This question goes with the essay: Describe the reactions of Juliet's father and mother when Pais proposes marriage to their daughter. How are their opinions the same and how are they different? Essay: Lord Capulet, and Lady Capulet had the same reactions to Paris's proposal ...
April 23, 2009 by Hugs n kisses
For my English class, I had to write an essay comparing two short stories. I wrote it but I am not at all confident with the quality of it. Can I post it here to have it proofread? It's 3 pages double-spaced.
March 2, 2008 by Emily
Please proofread my Essay
Could you please check for fragments, pronoun agreement, and tell me if I use first person all the way through. Thanks! Here is the format I am suppose to be following: a. Have an Introduction: Your introduction will tell readers what you knew about the topic before starting ...
November 17, 2006 by Soly
please rate my essay
I had asked earlier if anyone had any ideas for an essay over the importance of accepting others as they are, and now I am finished with my essay so I am curious to see what you think. It will be given a rating of 1-4.
December 11, 2006 by Anonymous
I MUST A DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY OF 350 WORDS AND MY TOPIC IS A YOUR DREAM HOUSE IN RUBRIC FORMAT, I DO NOT KNOW WHERE TO START AND HOW TO GO ABOUT WRITING THIS ESSAY, PLEASE HELP, PLEASE HELP.
February 11, 2014 by PETER
2nd attempt Essay for Photography
I posted this before, but failed to paste the essay! oops.. haha. So here's the essay. Please proofread and critique and comment. I'm not so sure about the conclusion. It feels a little weak to me..thanks!!! People seek the answers of their own questions about their lives. ...
March 11, 2007 by michelle
Can someone please proofread this before i email it to school metro's director Mr. Thomas LeMera Hey LeMera, my name is Bryan Martin and I’m email you to require more information on your school. I am a senior in high school in temple hills MD. I'm interested in becoming a ...
October 23, 2007 by Bryan
Can someone help me please I have to write a essay on if you won a million dollars and cannot spend it on yourself or family what would you do with it. I need help to start it just the opening line please
July 12, 2013 by Mark
Choose an essay or a short story to read. Then answer the following questions in the space provided. 10.What is the title of the story essay? 11.Who wrote it? 12.Whom is the story about? (Identify the main characters [or, if an essay, the subject discussed].) 13.hat happens in...
March 25, 2013 by Carlos
Proofread 6-page Essay Due Tomorrow?
I realize this is very last minute. I wrote a 6-page history paper on the topic of civil rights and I want someone to read it over before 3pm tomorrow, if that's possible. thanks!
February 11, 2009 by JJ
hi. Can someoene please help me with an essay. I have to write an essay comparing John Mayer's song belief and the Crucible by Arthur miller. I know the crucible but I just don't understand the meaning behind belief. can someone please help me find a website about the meaning ...
October 18, 2008 by adam
i have an essay to write about: if i would be given the liberty to be someone else that day, who would i be??? and how would i spend my time?" this is the question. i will be glad if i get the composition written by someone Well, that's not going to happen at this website. We ...
September 26, 2006 by adwitiya
Hi, Can someone proofread this for me and let me know if I followed the directions for this assignment. Directions: Detailed information about the agency, an evaluation of the site and comparison of the site with experiences in the practicum setting should be reported.
February 19, 2008 by Bizzy
I am trying to figure out titles for my essay. I want the essay about family, being brave when things are going down, having faith when things are a blurr, or about being courageous when things are very tough. It's all the same, but please help me pick a title of all this ...
November 4, 2012 by Losa
Please help me proofread my spanish essay (so far). Thanks sooo much!! El sueño americano no existe solo para los pobres. No existe solo para los emigrantes. No existe solo para la joven. La idea del sueño americano es una que es conocida por todo el mundo. Cualquier persona ...
September 15, 2008 by Corin
11th grade [URGENT]
Help with my research essay!? I have this assignment I have to do and its a research essay. I was wondering if this was a good topic (not too broad or not too specific) for my essay: Behind fast food, or like does fast food take effect on obesity? I've chosen to do something ...
November 20, 2009 by Hiro
Grammar and Composition
can someone please help me by giving me suggestions for a topic,for my Descriptive Essay it can be about anything; that can be described please give me some suggestions. because i'm not sure what to write on, and i'm going to be asking for help a lot in the essay too.
October 20, 2009 by y912f
English comparative essay
Okay well i have to do a comparative essay of A.E poe "The Raven" but the simpson version and the origional version the poem... i decited to compares "moods " of the both version.. like the caracters moods... Can you please find me a comparative essay Example...not an ...
January 12, 2008 by chanel
In the text box provided below, type the research report according to the guidelines below. You must submit both your first draft and final versions. Remember that an adult must review your first draft and provide constructive criticism. Assignment: A formal outline and a ...
May 8, 2013 by lewis
peer reviewing essay
Hi, I have two assignments I have to submit to my AP US History teacher for next year by June 2nd. The first part is to explain why I should be in the class in a one page essay with size 11 font and 1.5 spacing. Could someone please read through my essay and see if it's ok? ...
May 10, 2008 by phil
What is the number one eassy writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay B.Always write five paragraphs C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. i got A what do you think?
September 28, 2011 by ciara
I'm writing an essay for To Kill A Mockingbird and the claim I came up for my essay is "Children are never too young to understand the realities of life." I'm writing the extended paragraph right now where I have to come up with a good example from the story that relates to ...
April 27, 2014 by Emma
com -- To b-more-nappy
I deleted your last post in which you expect us to proofread an essay you copied verbatim from an internet site. Bobpursley and I both showed you that that is not your work and is indeed, plagiarized. If you post it or any other plagiarized work again, you will be banned from ...
August 30, 2011 by Ms. Sue
Hi. I'm trying to think of an essay title for an "I believe" essay. The essay is supposed to talk about how I defy the 'single story'. I talked about defying the single story of a teenage girl because I play the drums. My "I believe" statement is that 'I believe in seeing more...
September 9, 2013 by Serena
I am writing and essay for social studies and i only have a conclusion left please help!!!! The essay is about the war of England and Spain in the 1500's their war about cultures and i want to finish this essay so i need help with the conclusion!
September 26, 2012 by Aisha
What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.
October 8, 2009 by larry
can some proofread my paragraph it is for a persuasive essay? Please,Thank You!! Is Education system taking the risk for students learning? Is the capital that we have been giving helping students to improve their performance in schools ? What can be done to futher advance ...
April 21, 2012 by Stressed
writing please someone help!!!
which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence, fluency, or conversation? provide textual evidence from your essay to support your answer. Please can someone help I'm having trouble figuring this one out!!!!
October 28, 2015 by Anonymous
has anyone read the essay called "texting is stupid" by gene weingarten? I need help finding the thesis and the tone of the essay! please help asap! thanks in advance!
September 10, 2014 by Tina
I am doing a essay, and I need help to start me off on this. Please help me. Give me examples, ideas anything. This what I doing my essay on Political System, subsistence strategy Bands.
February 7, 2015 by jimmy
i writing essay on what true love be and this be one sentence in my essay you please able to change it to positive? i have negative word which be unable in essay. In the short story, "The Painted Door", by Sinclair Ross, the main characters John and Ann were unable to ...
February 11, 2012 by Mohammad
English essay yr9.
Um can any body help me with this. LOl :( It's uhh.. to do with an essay comparing and contrasting the use of language, form, structure and the content of texts. I have to identify australian cultural elements in the following 2 poems; "The Shearer's Wife" by Louis Esson and "...
August 29, 2008 by 789ML.
i'm writing a persuasive essay about teachers giving students too much homework. i need 2 more supporting topics 1. interfering with activities 2. 3. please help and thank you
March 25, 2010 by larry
proofread french 3 line
Can you proofread these to make sure they make sense? Sur le sable chaud Whispering Waves calmement aux sirènes jolies le soleil brille contre ma peau bronzée chaud il chatouillant L'eau de mer salée touche ma langue et ma peau et pique mes yeux
January 9, 2013 by Bryce
Where can I go to check about my essay when your are finished? I have not seen any essay from you for help with proofreading. If you post the entire essay in a message, someone will respond directly to that message. =) I need your help to write that essay,"A way to decrease ...
November 30, 2006 by louise
I woul like to review my essay please? Post it. Can you please help me write that essay" A way to decrease your chance of becoming a victim of random ciolence". Hmmm. You have an assignment to write an essay, a teacher offers to review your essay, and you respond asking the ...
November 30, 2006 by louise
I need help in history. I have to write a 4-5 paragraph essay on world war one, but I need information. Could someone please summarize the main things that happened in world war one? Please don't write an essay, I just need someone to tell me the very important things that ...
December 12, 2010 by Joan
Using evidence from Orwell’s essay, respond to current events, and draw from personal experience in order to write a well-organized paragraph in which you persuade your reader that the English language either is, or is not, improving over time? Can someone please help me with ...
July 5, 2015 by bb97
Please do Civics Essay thanks so much
Please Help with essay question. thanks!! In a federal system of government (also known as a federation), the local and state governments share power with the central government, though the central government has final authority. Eplain how this is different from a confederation.
May 1, 2014 by Roy
i be having test soon in english and we be writing synthesis essay and narrative essay, i not know what synthesis mean, can you please give me examples of narrative essays online i know narrative be story telling type essay but examples be helpful for me to study.
June 11, 2012 by Mohammad
Which of the following is a complex sentence? A. After Henry submitted his essay, he realized that he hadn't proofread the last page. B. identity theft is a growing problem, especially among seniors. C. Jim tried to watch a video on a device connected to a crowded wireless ...
April 25, 2016 by Anonymous
I'm writing an essay on Substance Abuse. Its an informative essay and I am having trouble coming up with a topic. Can you please give me some suggestions? I am leaning towards something to do with marijuana possibly...
June 15, 2012 by Julie
English - Hamlet Essay
I've been asked to write an Essay for english class on Hamlet. It sais to : Select one speech from Act IV of Hamlet and write a cause and effect essay for how it targets its audience. You may choose a target audience of any context or production of the play - the original ...
November 20, 2009 by Aly
Eng. Comp III
I'm not sure what I am supposed to do here I am to write a Bibliographic essay on my sources for my final research essay - what does this entail? I don't want you to do my homework for me,just give me a couple of examples please, Thank You, Sara
October 3, 2013 by Sara
my other question; What is the purpose of this essay? How can you tell? The purpose of this essay is to give us a better understanding of puns. how can I tell? - In this essay it gives selections of puns, that are all different. Please add any more info, thanks. How would I ...
February 1, 2010 by Sara
Theology (religion) HELP!!!! (plz read ASAP!)
Nae one or two experiences or situations that reflect an 'unredeemed' world. What reasons can you identify for this. 300 words Please help me. I'm NOT asking you to do this essay for me .... I just don't know what to write for this essay.
February 27, 2015 by Sam
Hi! Can somebody help me? I'm an austrian student, and i have a big problem! We have to write a definition essay with the title : tourism/ travel. and we have to write it until tomorrow, but i'm very busy, i have a mathe test tomorrow too, and i am not able to write my essay. ...
September 22, 2009 by Lulu
I have to do an essay on the poem "The mirror"- the essay must include what literary Techniques are used to characterize the mirror, the lady and the relationship between them -Can i gat help please
January 19, 2011 by Sally
Hey, I have to write an essay tommorow on the high and low points of George Washington and John Adams? I have a ton of other homework and dont have time to think. PLEASE dont write the essay just give me the main points. PPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEE!! if i do bad on ...
January 20, 2008 by kinz
Language Arts Project/Essay HELP!
Ok, so i need some help on this project: GOAL: Analyze a magazine essay for a thesis statement and organization. DETAILS: Find a short, formal essay in a magazine. Then find the thesis statement of that essay and show how it was proved (reasons, examples, or incidents). My ...
December 18, 2015 by Scarlett
I need to do an essay in a language arts package titled noggin. I lost the essay part of it. I'm not asking for you to do an essay for me, but if you could put up the page so I know how to make the Picture look that the essay goes in. I need to have it in by Monday
May 18, 2012 by Michael
What is the number one essay writing rule? A.Always write five paragraphs B.Always brainstorm before writing the essay C.start the writing essay the day it is assigned i got B
October 6, 2011 by ciara
Eng. Proofread Please
Can you profread this for me please? Overall the essay is very well developed and has some good concepts. After reading the entire essay I found the statement of conflict paragraph to be the weakest. The topic sentence that use really grabs the readers attention. The concepts ...
February 24, 2009 by Monica
Catherine received a 70 on her essay because the vocabulary was basic and there was a lack if clear and active voice. Which of the following areas of her essay were weak? A. Organization B. Mechanics C. Content D. Style
June 21, 2012 by Clueless
A body paragraph in an essay is one that: A. expounds upon the thesis of the essay. B. brings closure to the piece. C. features footnoted information. D. introduces the ideas that will be covered in the essay. A
April 14, 2014 by Angela