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Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
Please revise this sentance: That we the Australian people are becoming to excessively like the United States of America Thanks Minerva
Could you please revise this sentence? Thank you. 1) By moblity we mean the transer of every single teacher or student to the partners' country within the two years of the project.
Could you please revise the following sentences, please? 1) As a matter of fact, two among our science teachers are willing to partake in the project where English would be the lingua franca. 2) Translate the following words into English, then choose two adjectives describing ...
how can i revise this sentence using more formal word choices. I spend tons of my time on my English class because writing and researching stuff is hard.
I'll revise the sentences and then I'll post them back to you. Can you please suggest a site where all reporting verbs (to be used in indirect speech, especially when giving instructions or advice) are listed? I don't want to use "tell, ask" all the time. Thank you.
Would anyone mind looking over this persuasive essay? I need to pass in a sample of writing for my petition to move into an advanced English class, and I've decided to revise this one. The writing is sort of mechanical, but I suppose that's how English teachers want it. It'll ...
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
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this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethnic conflict and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
I needed to write a good thesis statement for my english class about how people consume the news. This is what i have tell me if its good, if not please help me revise Back in the day people of a particular age would consume news by reading the newspaper, watching the news, or...
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Ms. Sue, What kind of strategies can I use to revise my paper?
Can someone give me the checkpoint exam topics that are required for a student to revise Please give us more and clearer context for your question. It is not clear what you want to know. What exam topics? Why do you need to revise them? Please repost with the additional ...
write two paragraph explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper.
i need your help How to revise this question "The book I took on vacation was exciting reading" like specific
Revise the following sentence so that ACTIONS name KEY VERBS. 1. Our discussion was lively and fun
Indeed, the environment ignores state borders, and environmental pollution is not restrained within boundaries. When pollution originates in one country and crosses the frontier, leading to negative impact on the environment of other countries, it constitutes transboundary ...
. Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “A glove and ball is the required gear.”
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To assure the Writing Process is complete, the author must A. revise B. project C. compile I would say it's A, right? Thanks for checking.
how can i revise this haiku poem? lunch bell rings change clinking in our pockets striving for food
. Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “Swimming at the lake, a rock cut Sue’s foot.”
Revise the following sentence to omit personal pronouns. I think it is important for you to evaluate information before it in a paper. It's important to evaluate information before including in your paper. Please check my work.
I urgenlty need you to revise this sentence. 1) I'm pleased to hear that your school is willing to undertake the task of coordination. (to act as a coordinator of the whole project).
Revise the sentence below to make it more formal: 'You're going to get really fat if you eat at fast foods restaurants all the time. My version: If you continue eating at fast food restaurants all the time, the possibility of becoming obese will be very high. Please check my ...
revise the following sentence to remove all pronoun errors. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork.
Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “I saw mountains of uncollected trash walking along the city streets.”
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I got the grade back for that english paper you helped me write a few weeks back...the movie analysis on A Walk to Remember. I got a B! : ) But I have a chance to revise it according to the teachers comments and turn it in for a better ...
1) Why is "at university" wrong? Does this word always be followed by "a" or "the"? Thank you. 2) Can you help me express this? You found it difficult to express your personal opinions as well as to revise your topics critically.
I have to revise each statement to eliminate the unethical aspects. - Factory- trained technicians respond to all our calls. - “The service contract… on the whole… applied to upgrades .”
Hi, I have to revise for an upcoming test and I was a little bit confused about selective breeding. Please help Jiskha :)
i need to write a question poem with 10 lines and that asks a lot of questions i have no ideas please help! Pick a theme, then the questions, then put them in verse. Example: Theme Love questions.. What is how it began where will it lead how will it end and so on... the verse...
4. Identify what is wrong with the following sentence: “Not realizing that there was a hole in the tire”. Then, revise the sentence in order to correct the problem and discuss the changes you have made.
Revise the sentences. (1) Revise the following sentence so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions: Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight. African American ...
Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate the other? The hurricane destroyed some oil rigs. Fuel prices rose.
I need to revise these sentences. Can you please help me? 1) What music instrument do you play? Which music instrument do you play? 2) When does their show start? What time does the show start? 3) Do you have a lot of fun? You always talk around. (What does "talk around" mean...
how can i revise this or what should i look for to revise this: To begin with, I know that the designer for this freelance job would need to consider a dimensional look. As I have a Web design and interactive media associate degree, I do have experience in basic Web design ...
I still have more sentences to check. I really hope you can revise them, too. 1) Revise all your sentences orally. 2) Bring the government down (and bring down the government) 3) He stopped to take on the students (to take the students on is possible?) 4) Mark took over the ...
Can someone please help me urgent. I need to rewrite theses two sentences and eliminate unethical aspects. The service contract...on the whole...applied to upgrades. 2. All our costs were within fair-use guidelines. 1. Upgrades were applied to the service contract. 2.Factory ...
Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...
Can you please check these sentences for me? Thank you very much. 1)Another important theme is that of equivocation.The witches confuse good and bad (better evil). They are unable to distinguish between good and evil. 2) Closely connected to the theme of equivocation is that ...
Revise the following sentence to include gender neutral pronouns. Change any words necessary. A writer must include research to ensure the reader understands his point. I need help with this one.
Which option was used to revise this sentence? I am so glad to see you! Am I ever glad to see you!
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
I've got loads of GCSE exams coming up this month and I don't know the best way to revise for them all. Please help!
How should I revise this sentence? "Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the inhabitants of the peculiar island."
Hello, this is my intro for a paper on Balochistan. I am concern about not being the clear. Can you please make suggestions. Thanx. Iran and Pakistan are not a single nation state but a multi-national state composed of many nations. Both are governed with a doctorial political...
Revise the following sentences to remove all pronoun errors. 41. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork. 42. When a teacher writes an exam, they think about what aspects of student learning they want to test.
I need help writing a lead sentence, it has to answer the who, what, why, when and how The Director of Budget and Accounting, Patsy Moore, shared a presentation about the 2013 Capital Improvement Plan on Monday during the City Commission Meeting in Kalamazoo. Does that work, ...
I still have the following doubts. I included the various alternatives. Thank you 1) Prospero calls Caliban a lying slave instead Miranda calls him a horrible slave. Is "instead" correct? I would have used "while, whereas" or I would have started a new sentence with "Miranda, ...
I urgently need you to revise the following sentences I have to include in an email. 1) Thank you for answering my last email and letting me know you are going to find another theme for our Comenius project with your French partner. 2) As I'm holding a meeting with my ...
Grammar - Improving Tone
Revise this paragraph to eliminate negative attitude and focus on postive ideas. "We are sorry to inform you that the Travel-Lite suitcase, Model X4457, you asked about is temporarily out of stock in our warehouse, just as Ms. Cummings of our Hilldale store infromed you. We ...
Revise the folloing sentences to create parallel constructions. (Question) Some students hate math; some students dislike math, and math is liked by other students. (my answer) Some students hate math, some dislike math, and some like math. every way I have tried it just doesn...
revise the following sentences to eliminate shifts in tense, mood, voice or person. 7. The flight attendant said, "please turn off all electronic devices," but that we could use them again after takeoff. 8. The real estate market was was softer than it has been for a decade, ...
revise the following paragraph, improving it without changing its overall meaning. pay particular attention to any subject- verb agreement errors. You ever felt sleep deprived? college students often complains that they are not getting enough sleep.
I just wanted to ask you why you think the statement in 2 (with reference to paragraph 1 is "correct", I mean true). Thank you. 1)Lorenzo says:” I’m not very fond of French and English. I think learning foreign languages takes a lot of time and you have to revise too often...
english - Please revise
As a psychology major, when choosing my classes my main emphasis and focus is on my course of study such as, psychology, social skills, English etc. However, there are other subjects that might not be a requirement, therefore, the skills might come in handy in the future. ...
Thank you very much. I just wanted to know if the statement in 2 is correct or incorrect. 1)Lorenzo says:” I’m not very fond of French and English. I think learning foreign languages takes a lot of time and you have to revise too often. If you don’t, it’s very easy to ...
I urgently need your to revise these statements. Thank you. 1) Our science teachers are enthusiastic about the idea of carrying out a common science project in English with both your and the French school. 2) However, the head of our science department would like to discuss ...
what was the purpose of the constitutional convention held in philadelphia in 1787? A.To sign the treaty of paris B.To select the nation's new president. C. to revise the Articles of Confederation D.to draft a declaration of independence My answer is c @Ms.Sue can you please ...
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What is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the secong draft. B.proofread the essay to make it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit,changing and rearranging the content. D.All of the above. i got D what do you think ?
I urgently need to revise these sentences. Could you please help me? 1) In my family we are six of us: my father, my mother etc. 2) I like very much playing instruments. I don't like doing shopping. I like lots of sports. 3) My mum usually cooks breakfast for me. At 10.30 pm I...
Writeacher, I'd like you to revise these sentences, please. Thank you. 1) Our history teacher has included a new email address for the students participating in the project:...... All the post your 17 students have sent so far has been transferred to the new email address. 2) ...
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i think its A. but i also got C. As you are reading your research paper aloud,you notice that all your sentences start the same way. What should you do A.revise some of the sentence so there is variety. B.read the sentences with a more engaging voice C.add definitons of ...
Can you check these few sentences, please? 1) Wait! I'll help you with your shopping. I'll take the shopping for you. 2) Do you know what will happen if you don't pay the bill? 3) As soon as he finishes school, he'll look for job. The station is too far from here, I'll take ...
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Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the uprise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in starvation in ...
English Sentence correction
Please help me revise this sentence. The following sentence has many problems in grammar, sentence structure, and words. Correct the sentence: BEFORE: Cindy met this cool guy last night who helped her when she dropped her cellphone walking through the mall; She defiantly wants...
In the website I was able to learn about the English language very well, because in the website there are a lot of menus that english grammar, english vocabulary, english basics, english lesson, english pronunciation, english fun and games, english test, english quizzes, ...
The following items are run-on sentences. Revise each item either by making two complete sentences, or by adding a conjunctive adverb or semicolon. Change the punctuation and capitalization as necessary. Make all corrections on the sentences below. I was angry when Jonah ...
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In this study I will argue that prolonged exposure of social oppression and subjugation is the basis is for the African- American women limited participation in society’s political system. I will support my argument by providing a detailed analysis of the impact of social ...
Writacher, I didn't revise these questions. Though they can be improved, I can't see anything wrong with grammar. 1) Provide a description of Friday as given in Chapter 16 of Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe. 3) Outline the main features of 18th-century novels. Refer to the kind of ...
Hello, I'm a English Literature student. I'm going to make a Project on William Shakespeare and John Milton. As I said, it's an English project, So please suggest me some good topics/title for both the projects. Also please give me some general tips and ideas. Please help, its...
I urgently need you to revise this email. Thank you very much in advance. 1) My science colleague is willing to work on a project in English concerning ecology with some of her students in the years 10-11. 2) Though we haven't got a bilingual branch at the moment, she has ...
I'm still doubting about the true/false activity you corrected yesterday. I need to motivate my choice. 1) Lorenzo says: "I’m not very fond of French and English. I think learning foreign languages takes a lot of time and you have to revise too often. If you don’t, it’s ...
What is the infinitive phrase in this sentence? To revise your writing carefully will improve your presentation and provide you with success. A. To revise you writing carefully B. Will improve C. Your presentation D. And provide you with success Matt hiked the trail yesterday...
I forgot to include the following sentences. Could you please check these other sentences, too. 1) Rewrite the exercise three times after learning the use of reporting verbs. 2) Revise carefully the verbs followed by the infinitive and the gerund in your book and then do the ...
revise the following sentence so it uses a pronoun in the objective case I took the book from Ian. a. Ian handed the book to me b. He handed the book over c. I took his book d. We exchanged books
How would I revise this sentence to eliminate unnecessary shifts in tense, mood, voice, or person? The freezing weather is threatening crops such as citrus fruits which were sensitive to cold. The freezing weather threatened the crops, which were sensitive to cold.
Please look over these sentences for me. Revise each of the following items to clarify pronoun reference. 1. All scholarship applicants must fill out a financial aid form, meet with the dean, and write a letter to the committee members. The deadline is October 24, so the ...
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I forgot to include the following four sentences. 1)In my village there isn't a market. There is one in the next village called "Piave" and it is held on Monday mornings. 2)My parents always complain about my untidiness 3)I do the washing-up using a washing-up liquid. 4) Do ...
Could you please revise these sentences. I have two doubts concerning my previous post. 1) When I arrived at/on the farm (which preposition is best??) 2) A rabbit was thumping (its paw??) in the rabbit hutch 3) The theme of reversal of values is best embodied by the thee ...
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Hello, I am writing a paper for international law course can someone please revise my intro? thank you. It is ordinarily accepted among all nations that territorial jurisdiction is based on the fact that a crime is committed within their territory. However, sometimes they also...
Can some help me revise this sentence to eliminate jargon and use short familiar words? I just need to see how one is done so I can complete the rest of the questions myself. With regard to the aforementioned letter of July the 15th we expect to expedite your order to ship no ...
How can I revise this sentence? with the addition of a lexical and skills syllabus on biology. (therminology used in biology to describe biodiversity) 1) Do you think that the following should be included into the objectives or the results of students' analyses on water? 2) ...
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. 1) I'm pleased to read that English is and will remain the lingua franca of the project. For this reason, we'd like to vary a few sentences in your application form. In particular, this sentence: 2) "By executing the ...
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the word forte has been borrowed from the french word fort, meaning "strong". in which sentence is the word forte used correctly? a)It is not in your best interests to have a particular forte.** b)Writing is my forte. c)My history teacher has no forte in past events. d)His ...
Explain how the European desire for profit affected the people of the Congo. i cant figure this out! please please help me its for english but its more of a hostory question
Revise the following word groups to remove all fragments and/or parallelism errors. I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport. My Answer I like baseball, it teaches me about the sport and it’s also fun.
In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.) Revise the following word groups to ...
Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business ...
What is the number one eassy writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay B.Always write five paragraphs C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. i got A what do you think?
Please help me on this homework cause am lost and this coming moday I must present it;"English is the language of opportunity.Why bother to teach indigenous languages?"....please..I don't know how or where to start writting (introduction and body)...
Can you help me determine if I chose the correct/incorrect sentences appropriately. It’s really urgent. 1)Jenny, 13, says “My favourite subject is English. We all have to learn English in my country because it is very difficult to find a job if you don’t know it. Jenny ...
Hello, I have to revise these sentences for dangling modifiers and I wanted to see if I did it correctly. First sentence: Flying over the oak tree, the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised it to: Damagins his crops, the farmer saw the flock of ...
I'm pleased you are helping us again! I need you to revise a few sentences on my project since I varied them a little. Thank you very much for helping me again! 1) I wonder if you could help us find a school which is willing to join our partnership with both a French and a ...
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Dan Kidega, a member of the Uganda parliament, whom speaks on behalf of the children in northern Uganda, further explains the origins of this conflict. Dan traces the conflict back to a woman named Alice Lakwena. He explains that during 1980’s, Alice Lakwena believed that ...
revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively. *= revised sentence 1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain. * A chain of food service system operates the student cafeteria. Thank you
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. 1) Do you intend to start the project before Christmas? 2) I need to know which and how many students you are going to involve. 3) What do you think of our proposal of including 20 students from year 11? 4) I would be grateful to ...