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english help revise:Guru Blue
can u help revise the above?
Wednesday, February 27, 2008 at 12:38pm by Christi

English/please revise
I looked up Balochistan, because I've never heard of it as a nation before, and this is what I found: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Balochistan Please read carefully, and then revise your paragraph. Then repost.
Saturday, April 12, 2008 at 11:43am by Writeacher

english-please revise
You're welcome.
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue

English
HOW DO I REVISE IT...IM ABOUT TO GO CRAZY like seriously im trying to ask for your help and you just keep saying revise it revise it...im so confused im so stressed and im going to go crazy in a minute..!
Thursday, November 19, 2009 at 12:45pm by Jake

english/please revise
That's good! :-)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Ms. Sue

english/please revise
Yes. That would work.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:59pm by Ms. Sue

english/please revise
I forgot "until"
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Christi

english-please revise
Thanks Ms. sue
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by rose- Ms. sue

english - Please revise
thanks a lot Miss Sue.
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 7:19pm by rose- Ms. Sue

English- please revise
my topic is school violence
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by ann

english please/help revise
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Tuesday, February 19, 2008 at 7:39pm by Anonymous

english - Please revise
You're very welcome, Rose. :-) MS. SUE
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 7:19pm by Ms. Sue

english/please revise
can I use "fueled" instead of discharge?
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:59pm by Christi

english/please revise
And don't forget the comma after "Marri" =)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Writeacher

English- please revise
My topic Anti- Abortion I need your help
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by Frances

english-please revise
This is pretty good, Rose. But these two sentences need some work. In addition to the CWE, I have learned the following writing tools that are: how to conduct, planning and developing my research paper. This part needs parallel construction -- ". . . how to conduct, planning ...
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue

please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 9:52pm by rose -Ms. Sue

English/ please revise
Please note these corrections: statues = statutes (laws) Constitution (capitalized) Aircraft Piracy Statute, (sp. + comma) principle, which provides (omit in)
Wednesday, April 9, 2008 at 5:20pm by Ms. Sue

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Apparently, according to Word, my grammar is correct. Could you possibly show me exactly what I must revise? I cannot tell you how many times I tried to revise and edit this essay, but no matter what I do, you still insist that it is far too wordy and oddly structured. Also, ...
Friday, April 4, 2014 at 5:18pm by Anonymous

english - Ms. Sue - Please revise
This looks very good, Rose. :-)
Thursday, April 3, 2008 at 9:09pm by Ms. Sue

English
Please revise with correct capitalization and punctuation. Then someone will check your sentences for you.
Tuesday, September 6, 2011 at 6:54pm by Writeacher

english/please revise
Looks good, except you need a comma after activities.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:40pm by Ms. Sue

ENGLISH PLEASE HELP!!! URGENT!!!
Revise your main idea sentence so it includes your opinion. Re-post when you're ready.
Saturday, December 29, 2012 at 7:43pm by Writeacher

english - revise please
I assume you've chosen C for the first question and B for the second. I agree -- those are the best choices. :-)
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 8:20pm by Ms. Sue

English
Please reread and revise your question. It doesn't make any sense. Capital letters and correct punctuation would help, too.
Wednesday, January 18, 2012 at 3:41pm by Writeacher

Grammar and Composition
I think it is better, but could be better. Go on, but think on revising. I assume you read the Twain essay I gave you. Aim for that language. You can do it, but after you take a break, come back, read it aloud, and revise. You want to be just as vivid as Twain, or Thoreau. I ...
Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 2:13pm by bobpursley

English/ please revise
My reading of the paragraph is that the rest of the paper will be not much substance, mainly silly propaganda. You can do better.
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by bobpursley

English
Please revise this sentance: That we the Australian people are becoming to excessively like the United States of America Thanks Minerva
Friday, April 18, 2008 at 10:06pm by Minerva

English
The only to get your essay written is to follow my directions above. Then just start writing. You may have to revise several times -- but at least if you have words on paper, you have something to revise. The best cure for writer's block is to jump in and WRITE!
Tuesday, October 2, 2012 at 11:27am by Ms. Sue

english/please revise
how about this? It wasn't after the dismissal that Baloch tribal chief, Bakhsh Marri anounced his support for the guerrillas.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Christi

English
There's still too much repetition in that intro. Please revise. Once you have that fixed, then we'll work on the transition to the next paragraph.
Sunday, May 3, 2009 at 2:09pm by Writeacher

Tips
Be sure you have unique ideas. Work, work, work! Write every day. Let your writing sit for a day or more. Revise, revise, revise!
Wednesday, May 11, 2011 at 11:14am by Ms. Sue

child day care mgmt
'ur'? You're going to work with young children who need the best role models possible, and you aren't using correct English? Please revise... and please indicate what YOU THINK the correct response is as well.
Wednesday, October 19, 2011 at 12:29am by Writeacher

english/please revise
What is the purpose of this paper? Is it for an English class or a social studies class? What are your teacher's expectations for this paper?
Monday, April 21, 2008 at 11:47am by Ms. Sue

english/please revise
is this ok? In 2001, Musharraf, declared himself president. In 2002, he amended the Pakistan constitution without the participation of parliament.
Friday, April 18, 2008 at 5:23am by christi

english- Please revise
You should also include what field you're going into. Then tell what classes you're planning to take that will meet that career's requirements.
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 4:51pm by Ms. Sue

please/revise english
Here's the second link: (Broken Link Removed)
Wednesday, April 23, 2008 at 10:06pm by Writeacher

English
Could you please revise this sentence? Thank you. 1) By moblity we mean the transer of every single teacher or student to the partners' country within the two years of the project.
Wednesday, January 25, 2012 at 2:00pm by Henry2

Revise Research Paper
Thank you so much<3 You revise alot of my papers! Thank you for that!
Saturday, December 10, 2011 at 9:36pm by Bryce

English 7 - Journal Entry Assignment Check
I found six errors in your first paragraph. Please revise just that paragraph and repost it.
Thursday, January 12, 2012 at 5:25pm by Ms. Sue

English/ please revise
First, you should realize that Boladai is a paid representative of Baluchistan (Balochistan). Your introduction is definitely biased toward this region. What is your paper about? What is your thesis sentence?
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Ms. Sue

English
Could you please revise the following sentences, please? 1) As a matter of fact, two among our science teachers are willing to partake in the project where English would be the lingua franca. 2) Translate the following words into English, then choose two adjectives describing ...
Monday, October 31, 2011 at 3:44pm by Henry2

english - Please revise
Comma problems here: ... course of study such as, psychology, social skills, English etc. Should be this: ... course of study, such as psychology, social skills, English, etc.
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 7:19pm by Writeacher

english - Ms. Sue - Please revise
thanks a lot Ms. Sue. Have a great evening. Rose
Thursday, April 3, 2008 at 9:09pm by rose

english/please revise
This sentence doesn't make much sense. Please rewrite it so that you clarify what you mean. It wasn’t after the dismissal, in particular Baloch sardar (chief) Bakhsh Marri, who responded to the dismissal of the Pakistani government by announcing his and Baloch support for the ...
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Ms. Sue

psy- please revise
Ms. Sue check my second post please.
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:58pm by rose - Ms. Sue

psy- revise please
I've already made corrections on this essay. Please go back and look.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008 at 6:37pm by Ms. Sue

journ please revise
Ms. Sue, You did not get everything that I had sent to you. Is there another way I could attached it to you. Please let me know
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 10:00pm by rose -Ms. Sue

please/revise english
The last link seems to be dead. http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/589/01/ By the way, using 1515 as a citation doesn't mean a thing.
Wednesday, April 23, 2008 at 10:06pm by Ms. Sue

English
I'll revise the sentences and then I'll post them back to you. Can you please suggest a site where all reporting verbs (to be used in indirect speech, especially when giving instructions or advice) are listed? I don't want to use "tell, ask" all the time. Thank you.
Thursday, September 8, 2011 at 7:00am by Henry2

What?
This makes no sense. Please proofread and revise. Please post YOUR QUESTION, not some gibberish out of a textbook or something.
Monday, September 3, 2012 at 8:58am by Writeacher

english
Ok, so here is what I've got for three first paragraphs. I need to write last one( conclusion) but before I do that, I would like you to revise what I have written and please help me. It is really important that I get good grade on this. Thank you for all of your suggestions, ...
Wednesday, July 8, 2009 at 6:30pm by Yana

English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Christi

English
Thank you. I'll revise and repost.
Tuesday, June 3, 2008 at 10:16am by Mel

english
how can i revise this sentence using more formal word choices. I spend tons of my time on my English class because writing and researching stuff is hard.
Tuesday, January 3, 2012 at 12:49am by aran

business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
Thursday, February 9, 2012 at 7:28pm by sososola2012

psychology please revise
thank you..
Tuesday, May 6, 2008 at 7:21pm by rose- Ms. sue

english/revise
See below.
Friday, February 22, 2008 at 5:56pm by Writeacher

jounier english revise
squaw?
Friday, September 12, 2008 at 7:52am by bobpursley

English
I won't revise it. But if you post it, someone may help you.
Tuesday, November 5, 2013 at 6:33pm by Ms. Sue

english/please revise
Your first "sentence" is a fragment. Where do you intend the paragraph break to be? You need to hit Enter twice to show a new paragraph on this board. I'd also appreciate it if you gave us the complete authors and titles of your reference sources
Monday, April 21, 2008 at 11:47am by Ms. Sue

English
I agree with Writeacher's comments. This is too rough to edit. YOu need to revise, revise, revise. But one thing puzzles me, the essay seems to not have a clear thread, but easily could have a clear moral. Work on that, making clear what you want the essay to say. Thoreau ...
Tuesday, July 7, 2009 at 9:38am by bobpursley

Com 220
These sites will be useful to you. http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/revision.html http://academic.brooklyn.cuny.edu/english/melani/cs6/revise.html http://www.dartmouth.edu/~writing/materials/student/ac_paper/revise.shtml
Tuesday, October 21, 2008 at 11:05am by Ms. Sue

English
I needed to write a good thesis statement for my english class about how people consume the news. This is what i have tell me if its good, if not please help me revise Back in the day people of a particular age would consume news by reading the newspaper, watching the news, or...
Wednesday, January 18, 2012 at 6:35pm by Blaze

Maths
Can someone give me the checkpoint exam topics that are required for a student to revise Please give us more and clearer context for your question. It is not clear what you want to know. What exam topics? Why do you need to revise them? Please repost with the additional ...
Tuesday, April 17, 2007 at 12:56pm by Fahad

please revise my essay
I'd indennt....
Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 10:22pm by Sam

psy - please revise
You're welcome, Rose.
Thursday, April 24, 2008 at 7:44pm by Ms. Sue

definition- please revise
right
Thursday, June 12, 2008 at 10:57pm by todd

english/please revise
In 2001, Musharraf, declared himself president. In 2002, he amended the Pakistan constitution without the participation of parliament. Delete the comma after Musharraf and add the article, "the," before "parliament." I hope this helps. Thanks for asking.
Friday, April 18, 2008 at 5:23am by PsyDAG

English/please revise
It is clear. However, unless your source uses the term, "nation," you might want to use another term for the subunits. Consult your thesaurus. The situation reminds me of the struggle over states' rights that was part of the American Civil War. I hope this helps. Thanks for ...
Saturday, April 12, 2008 at 11:43am by PsyDAG

English
Would anyone mind looking over this persuasive essay? I need to pass in a sample of writing for my petition to move into an advanced English class, and I've decided to revise this one. The writing is sort of mechanical, but I suppose that's how English teachers want it. It'll ...
Monday, February 11, 2008 at 7:41pm by Anonymous

psy - revise please
Yay! You're right! :-)
Sunday, April 20, 2008 at 9:58pm by Ms. Sue

please revise my essay
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Saturday, November 3, 2007 at 11:30pm by michelle

please revise my essay
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Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 10:22pm by Anonymous

Please Revise(short paper)
Thanks again!
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 6:18pm by Bryce

English
PLEASE either read this aloud to someone (not just to yourself) or ask someone else to read it aloud to you. Then revise.
Monday, May 9, 2011 at 6:59pm by Writeacher

psy - please revise
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue.
Thursday, April 24, 2008 at 7:44pm by rose-

psy- please revise
Nothing shows up. :-(
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:58pm by Ms. Sue

psy- please revise
I just tried again.
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:58pm by rose - Ms. Sue

environ. probl-please revise
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Friday, June 13, 2008 at 8:43pm by rose -Ms. Sue

environ. probl-please revise
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Friday, June 13, 2008 at 8:43pm by SANDY

please help revise and edit my essay
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Please proofread and revise to make your question clear.
Sunday, December 16, 2012 at 11:14pm by Writeacher

jounier english revise
what IS A RED INDIAN WOMAN CALLED
Friday, September 12, 2008 at 7:52am by mali

English
Then, you need to revise your thesis statement to reflect his survival.
Sunday, August 7, 2011 at 5:35pm by Ms. Sue

English
Get rid of all instances of "you" and its forms. Revise, and then repost.
Friday, January 18, 2013 at 11:06am by Writeacher

Please revise my essay
I am reviewing your essay and will have a response up soon. Please be patient. Thanks. =)
Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 6:19pm by Writeacher

please revise and edit my essay
If your copy/ paste didn't work, please type your essay into the space and we will be happy to give you suggestions or corrections.
Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 6:37pm by GuruBlue

English
1. I'd have the student revise this sentence because "gets speaking" is not standard phrasing. I'd also want the student to check all spelling. And finally, I'd have the student tell me what kind of sentence this is (simple, compound, complex, or what?) and what punctuation it...
Saturday, December 3, 2011 at 6:45pm by Writeacher

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