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please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
June 15, 2008 by rose -Ms. Sue

English
Please revise this sentance: That we the Australian people are becoming to excessively like the United States of America Thanks Minerva
April 18, 2008 by Minerva

English
Could you please revise this sentence? Thank you. 1) By moblity we mean the transer of every single teacher or student to the partners' country within the two years of the project.
January 25, 2012 by Henry2

English
Could you please revise the following sentences, please? 1) As a matter of fact, two among our science teachers are willing to partake in the project where English would be the lingua franca. 2) Translate the following words into English, then choose two adjectives describing ...
October 31, 2011 by Henry2

english
how can i revise this sentence using more formal word choices. I spend tons of my time on my English class because writing and researching stuff is hard.
January 3, 2012 by aran

English
Would anyone mind looking over this persuasive essay? I need to pass in a sample of writing for my petition to move into an advanced English class, and I've decided to revise this one. The writing is sort of mechanical, but I suppose that's how English teachers want it. It'll ...
February 11, 2008 by Anonymous

English
I'll revise the sentences and then I'll post them back to you. Can you please suggest a site where all reporting verbs (to be used in indirect speech, especially when giving instructions or advice) are listed? I don't want to use "tell, ask" all the time. Thank you.
September 8, 2011 by Henry2

business english
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012

English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
April 15, 2008 by Christi

English
I needed to write a good thesis statement for my english class about how people consume the news. This is what i have tell me if its good, if not please help me revise Back in the day people of a particular age would consume news by reading the newspaper, watching the news, or...
January 18, 2012 by Blaze

jounier english revise
what IS A RED INDIAN WOMAN CALLED
September 12, 2008 by mali

English - question
Ms. Sue, What kind of strategies can I use to revise my paper?
May 28, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue

Maths
Can someone give me the checkpoint exam topics that are required for a student to revise Please give us more and clearer context for your question. It is not clear what you want to know. What exam topics? Why do you need to revise them? Please repost with the additional ...
April 17, 2007 by Fahad

english
write two paragraph explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper.
December 2, 2010 by susan

English
i need your help How to revise this question "The book I took on vacation was exciting reading" like specific
September 9, 2014 by Saiata

please/revise english
Indeed, the environment ignores state borders, and environmental pollution is not restrained within boundaries. When pollution originates in one country and crosses the frontier, leading to negative impact on the environment of other countries, it constitutes transboundary ...
April 23, 2008 by Crystal

english
. Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “A glove and ball is the required gear.”
January 17, 2012 by aran

spanish
how do you say please revise all the verb tenses
May 6, 2010 by Arleen

English
To assure the Writing Process is complete, the author must A. revise B. project C. compile I would say it's A, right? Thanks for checking.
July 8, 2010 by Daisy

english-poetry
how can i revise this haiku poem? lunch bell rings change clinking in our pockets striving for food
April 3, 2014 by anonymous

english
. Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “Swimming at the lake, a rock cut Sue’s foot.”
January 17, 2012 by aran

English
I urgenlty need you to revise this sentence. 1) I'm pleased to hear that your school is willing to undertake the task of coordination. (to act as a coordinator of the whole project).
November 24, 2011 by Henry2

english
revise the following sentence to remove all pronoun errors. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork.
September 30, 2009 by dee

english
Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “I saw mountains of uncollected trash walking along the city streets.”
October 13, 2012 by cathy

English-writeacher
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I got the grade back for that english paper you helped me write a few weeks back...the movie analysis on A Walk to Remember. I got a B! : ) But I have a chance to revise it according to the teachers comments and turn it in for a better ...
March 15, 2011 by y912f

English
1) Why is "at university" wrong? Does this word always be followed by "a" or "the"? Thank you. 2) Can you help me express this? You found it difficult to express your personal opinions as well as to revise your topics critically.
July 4, 2011 by Henry2

poetry
i need to write a question poem with 10 lines and that asks a lot of questions i have no ideas please help! Pick a theme, then the questions, then put them in verse. Example: Theme Love questions.. What is how it began where will it lead how will it end and so on... the verse...
May 14, 2007 by christina

english
4. Identify what is wrong with the following sentence: “Not realizing that there was a hole in the tire”. Then, revise the sentence in order to correct the problem and discuss the changes you have made.
April 12, 2013 by Shorty

Help english
Revise the sentences. (1) Revise the following sentence so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions: Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight. African American ...
July 17, 2014 by Susan

english
Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate the other? The hurricane destroyed some oil rigs. Fuel prices rose.
October 5, 2009 by Brandy White

English
I need to revise these sentences. Can you please help me? 1) What music instrument do you play? Which music instrument do you play? 2) When does their show start? What time does the show start? 3) Do you have a lot of fun? You always talk around. (What does "talk around" mean...
January 12, 2012 by Henry2

english
how can i revise this or what should i look for to revise this: To begin with, I know that the designer for this freelance job would need to consider a dimensional look. As I have a Web design and interactive media associate degree, I do have experience in basic Web design ...
October 30, 2011 by aran

English
I still have more sentences to check. I really hope you can revise them, too. 1) Revise all your sentences orally. 2) Bring the government down (and bring down the government) 3) He stopped to take on the students (to take the students on is possible?) 4) Mark took over the ...
April 12, 2012 by Matthew

english-please revise
Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...
May 27, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue

English
Can you please check these sentences for me? Thank you very much. 1)Another important theme is that of equivocation.The witches confuse good and bad (better evil). They are unable to distinguish between good and evil. 2) Closely connected to the theme of equivocation is that ...
April 14, 2011 by Mike1

English
Which option was used to revise this sentence? I am so glad to see you! Am I ever glad to see you!
October 1, 2014 by Anonymous

Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
May 30, 2012 by John

All Subjects
I've got loads of GCSE exams coming up this month and I don't know the best way to revise for them all. Please help!
May 5, 2013 by Need Help ASAP

English
How should I revise this sentence? "Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the inhabitants of the peculiar island."
May 5, 2014 by Victoria

English
Revise the following sentences to remove all pronoun errors. 41. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork. 42. When a teacher writes an exam, they think about what aspects of student learning they want to test.
July 28, 2011 by bill

English
I need help writing a lead sentence, it has to answer the who, what, why, when and how The Director of Budget and Accounting, Patsy Moore, shared a presentation about the 2013 Capital Improvement Plan on Monday during the City Commission Meeting in Kalamazoo. Does that work, ...
January 23, 2013 by Blaze

English/please revise
Hello, this is my intro for a paper on Balochistan. I am concern about not being the clear. Can you please make suggestions. Thanx. Iran and Pakistan are not a single nation state but a multi-national state composed of many nations. Both are governed with a doctorial political...
April 12, 2008 by Christi

English
I urgently need you to revise the following sentences I have to include in an email. 1) Thank you for answering my last email and letting me know you are going to find another theme for our Comenius project with your French partner. 2) As I'm holding a meeting with my ...
November 14, 2011 by Henry2

English
I still have the following doubts. I included the various alternatives. Thank you 1) Prospero calls Caliban a lying slave instead Miranda calls him a horrible slave. Is "instead" correct? I would have used "while, whereas" or I would have started a new sentence with "Miranda, ...
April 30, 2011 by Henry 1

English
Revise the folloing sentences to create parallel constructions. (Question) Some students hate math; some students dislike math, and math is liked by other students. (my answer) Some students hate math, some dislike math, and some like math. every way I have tried it just doesn...
June 30, 2010 by Rita

Grammar - Improving Tone
Revise this paragraph to eliminate negative attitude and focus on postive ideas. "We are sorry to inform you that the Travel-Lite suitcase, Model X4457, you asked about is temporarily out of stock in our warehouse, just as Ms. Cummings of our Hilldale store infromed you. We ...
October 18, 2006 by Euridice

english
revise the following sentences to eliminate shifts in tense, mood, voice or person. 7. The flight attendant said, "please turn off all electronic devices," but that we could use them again after takeoff. 8. The real estate market was was softer than it has been for a decade, ...
May 19, 2013 by dani

ENGLISH
revise the following paragraph, improving it without changing its overall meaning. pay particular attention to any subject- verb agreement errors. You ever felt sleep deprived? college students often complains that they are not getting enough sleep.
August 19, 2013 by JOHN

English
I just wanted to ask you why you think the statement in 2 (with reference to paragraph 1 is "correct", I mean true). Thank you. 1)Lorenzo says:” I’m not very fond of French and English. I think learning foreign languages takes a lot of time and you have to revise too often. If...
September 20, 2011 by Henry2

english - Please revise
As a psychology major, when choosing my classes my main emphasis and focus is on my course of study such as, psychology, social skills, English etc. However, there are other subjects that might not be a requirement, therefore, the skills might come in handy in the future. ...
April 10, 2008 by rose- Ms. Sue

English
Thank you very much. I just wanted to know if the statement in 2 is correct or incorrect. 1)Lorenzo says:” I’m not very fond of French and English. I think learning foreign languages takes a lot of time and you have to revise too often. If you don’t, it’s very easy to forget ...
September 19, 2011 by Henry2

English
I urgently need your to revise these statements. Thank you. 1) Our science teachers are enthusiastic about the idea of carrying out a common science project in English with both your and the French school. 2) However, the head of our science department would like to discuss ...
November 21, 2011 by Henry2

English
I urgently need to revise these sentences. Could you please help me? 1) In my family we are six of us: my father, my mother etc. 2) I like very much playing instruments. I don't like doing shopping. I like lots of sports. 3) My mum usually cooks breakfast for me. At 10.30 pm I...
November 11, 2011 by Henry2

English
Writeacher, I'd like you to revise these sentences, please. Thank you. 1) Our history teacher has included a new email address for the students participating in the project:...... All the post your 17 students have sent so far has been transferred to the new email address. 2) ...
March 29, 2012 by Matthew

help please :)
What is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the secong draft. B.proofread the essay to make it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit,changing and rearranging the content. D.All of the above. i got D what do you think ?
September 29, 2011 by ciara

english check answer plz !
i think its A. but i also got C. As you are reading your research paper aloud,you notice that all your sentences start the same way. What should you do A.revise some of the sentence so there is variety. B.read the sentences with a more engaging voice C.add definitons of ...
May 12, 2014 by matt

English
Can you check these few sentences, please? 1) Wait! I'll help you with your shopping. I'll take the shopping for you. 2) Do you know what will happen if you don't pay the bill? 3) As soon as he finishes school, he'll look for job. The station is too far from here, I'll take ...
June 29, 2011 by Henry2

English- please revise
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the uprise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in starvation in ...
April 30, 2008 by rose- Ms. Sue

English Sentence correction
Please help me revise this sentence. The following sentence has many problems in grammar, sentence structure, and words. Correct the sentence: BEFORE: Cindy met this cool guy last night who helped her when she dropped her cellphone walking through the mall; She defiantly wants...
October 21, 2011 by Anonymous

English
The following items are run-on sentences. Revise each item either by making two complete sentences, or by adding a conjunctive adverb or semicolon. Change the punctuation and capitalization as necessary. Make all corrections on the sentences below. I was angry when Jonah ...
December 16, 2012 by April

english please revise
In this study I will argue that prolonged exposure of social oppression and subjugation is the basis is for the African- American women limited participation in society’s political system. I will support my argument by providing a detailed analysis of the impact of social ...
April 28, 2008 by Christi

English
Writacher, I didn't revise these questions. Though they can be improved, I can't see anything wrong with grammar. 1) Provide a description of Friday as given in Chapter 16 of Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe. 3) Outline the main features of 18th-century novels. Refer to the kind of ...
March 20, 2012 by Matthew

English
I'm still doubting about the true/false activity you corrected yesterday. I need to motivate my choice. 1) Lorenzo says: "I’m not very fond of French and English. I think learning foreign languages takes a lot of time and you have to revise too often. If you don’t, it’s very ...
September 20, 2011 by Henry2

English
I urgently need you to revise this email. Thank you very much in advance. 1) My science colleague is willing to work on a project in English concerning ecology with some of her students in the years 10-11. 2) Though we haven't got a bilingual branch at the moment, she has ...
November 16, 2011 by Henry2

English
I forgot to include the following sentences. Could you please check these other sentences, too. 1) Rewrite the exercise three times after learning the use of reporting verbs. 2) Revise carefully the verbs followed by the infinitive and the gerund in your book and then do the ...
January 7, 2012 by Henry2

English
How would I revise this sentence to eliminate unnecessary shifts in tense, mood, voice, or person? The freezing weather is threatening crops such as citrus fruits which were sensitive to cold. The freezing weather threatened the crops, which were sensitive to cold.
October 5, 2013 by Edwin

English
Please look over these sentences for me. Revise each of the following items to clarify pronoun reference. 1. All scholarship applicants must fill out a financial aid form, meet with the dean, and write a letter to the committee members. The deadline is October 24, so the ...
May 28, 2012 by Toya

English
I forgot to include the following four sentences. 1)In my village there isn't a market. There is one in the next village called "Piave" and it is held on Monday mornings. 2)My parents always complain about my untidiness 3)I do the washing-up using a washing-up liquid. 4) Do ...
December 21, 2010 by Franco

A.P. Lit
Anyone want to revise? Brains vs. Brawn
April 9, 2007 by Taylor

business communication
How do i revise a memo?
April 15, 2012 by Diane

English
Could you please revise these sentences. I have two doubts concerning my previous post. 1) When I arrived at/on the farm (which preposition is best??) 2) A rabbit was thumping (its paw??) in the rabbit hutch 3) The theme of reversal of values is best embodied by the thee ...
November 13, 2011 by Henry2

English
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. 1) I'm pleased to read that English is and will remain the lingua franca of the project. For this reason, we'd like to vary a few sentences in your application form. In particular, this sentence: 2) "By executing the ...
February 8, 2012 by Henry2

English
How can I revise this sentence? with the addition of a lexical and skills syllabus on biology. (therminology used in biology to describe biodiversity) 1) Do you think that the following should be included into the objectives or the results of students' analyses on water? 2) ...
January 28, 2012 by Henry2

please revise my intro
Hello, I am writing a paper for international law course can someone please revise my intro? thank you. It is ordinarily accepted among all nations that territorial jurisdiction is based on the fact that a crime is committed within their territory. However, sometimes they also...
April 28, 2008 by christy

history/english
Explain how the European desire for profit affected the people of the Congo. i cant figure this out! please please help me its for english but its more of a hostory question
October 7, 2007 by Jeni

English
In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.) Revise the following word groups to ...
January 27, 2014 by Michael

English
Can you help me determine if I chose the correct/incorrect sentences appropriately. It’s really urgent. 1)Jenny, 13, says “My favourite subject is English. We all have to learn English in my country because it is very difficult to find a job if you don’t know it. Jenny thinks ...
September 19, 2011 by Henry2

law
Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business ...
January 14, 2012 by Andy

help please:)
What is the number one eassy writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay B.Always write five paragraphs C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. i got A what do you think?
September 28, 2011 by ciara

English
I'm pleased you are helping us again! I need you to revise a few sentences on my project since I varied them a little. Thank you very much for helping me again! 1) I wonder if you could help us find a school which is willing to join our partnership with both a French and a ...
January 17, 2012 by Henry2

English
Hello, I have to revise these sentences for dangling modifiers and I wanted to see if I did it correctly. First sentence: Flying over the oak tree, the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised it to: Damagins his crops, the farmer saw the flock of ...
July 10, 2006 by Clark

english please/help revise
Dan Kidega, a member of the Uganda parliament, whom speaks on behalf of the children in northern Uganda, further explains the origins of this conflict. Dan traces the conflict back to a woman named Alice Lakwena. He explains that during 1980’s, Alice Lakwena believed that ...
February 19, 2008 by christi

English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. 1) Do you intend to start the project before Christmas? 2) I need to know which and how many students you are going to involve. 3) What do you think of our proposal of including 20 students from year 11? 4) I would be grateful to ...
November 18, 2011 by Henry2

business english
If you have time to do only a light revision, you should ask yourself all of the following questions, EXCEPT: Are the first and last paragraphs effective? Are numbers correct? (*) Does the design of the document make it easy for readers to get the information they need? Is ...
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012

English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences (instructions), please. 1)Explain to a friend of yours who has never flown what he/she should do before boarding a plane. 2) Talk about the place where you live using the following grid: . – What is your town like – How long have ...
November 14, 2011 by Henry2

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
February 27, 2008 by jenny

english
please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...
February 27, 2008 by jenny

english
Hey, I have to wright a SA on what I want to learn in English language arts this year. It's a full page SA and I'm in 7th grade. Please help me, Ive ben working on it bacicaly ever since I got home. I need help, PLEASE!!!
September 8, 2010 by Taylor

English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) Some pupils haven't received any emails from their partners yet. Could you spur them to answer? 2) As you suggested, I've asked my students, who haven't got a partner yet, to forward their emails to your personal ...
May 3, 2012 by Frank

English-For Jiskha Tutors
Can some of you please take a look at my previous English posts. They are all on this page, and I need all of them to be checked. Please and thank you:-)
May 3, 2010 by Sara

Business English
Exercise Guideline:Assume that your readers are at about the 10th grade level in education. Revise these sentences for easy communication to this audience. 1. we must terminate all deficit financing. 2.we must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting delivery. 3. A ...
October 18, 2011 by efi

englis
8. Which of the following options accurately represents the steps involved in the writing process? A. Write first draft, edit, revise, write final draft B. Write first draft, revise, proofread, write final draft C. Plan, write first draft, edit, write final draft D. Plan, ...
May 1, 2013 by selena

literature
Can you please revise this for me? Tears: Easily coming, easily going. Effortless work for salty streams flowing. Might come when you're here, might come when you go. But tears are definitely good work's foe ---Does the last line make sense?--- thanks
October 26, 2008 by mysterychicken

English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences, please. 1) The ghost of Hamlet’s father appears in front of him and Horatio because he wants to explain how he was killed and who killed him. 2) The play ends with the deaths of Laertes , the King, Queen Gertrude and Hamlet who ...
January 5, 2012 by Henry2

language please check my work
-revise the sentence for a clear meaning here is the sentence Surgeons moved around the operating room, skillfully using tools wearing slippers. -the revised sentence Surgeons,wearing slippers,moved around the operating room skillfully using their tools. please if there is a ...
April 14, 2010 by me

English-help please
Could someone please take a moment to take a look at my previous post on English. Thank you very much:-)
March 30, 2010 by Sara

English
What is the best way to revise this sentence " Make your decisions about what features are important to you." A. Make decisions about what features are important to you. C. Decide what features are important to you.
January 4, 2011 by Marie

English
Thank you very much! Can I divide my work into summary, narrative structure, and main themes? This is the very first part of the summary. I don't know if it is correct to use the present. Could you please revise it? 1) At the beginning of the novel we get to know that Robinson...
February 11, 2012 by Henry2

English
How do you spell Narrativeter is this is how you spell it please reply the other one about the english thing please Thank You
October 9, 2011 by Laruen

English
Please help revise. Today most nations in particular those in the Western hemisphere do not consider Cuba to be a democracy. However there is some level of democracy in Cuba. Participation is an essential principle of democracy, one that no section of a country’s population is...
April 1, 2008 by Crystal

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