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English
HOW DO I REVISE IT...IM ABOUT TO GO CRAZY like seriously im trying to ask for your help and you just keep saying revise it revise it...im so confused im so stressed and im going to go crazy in a minute..!
Thursday, November 19, 2009 at 12:45pm by Jake
english/please revise
how about this? It wasn't after the dismissal that Baloch tribal chief, Bakhsh Marri anounced his support for the guerrillas.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Christi
english/ please help revise
Here are some suggestions and corrections: <<...that what the president wants is (what) is in their own interest.>> (The second "what is unnecessary) <<Neustadt's behaviorist approach..> (add appostrophe-s and correct ...
Tuesday, February 26, 2008 at 10:50am by drwls
Logic
Can someone please help me solve these problems? I have to use the 17 rules of inference to prove the arguments valid: 1) 1. T = R 2. (~R > ~T) > (P . ~S) / ~S v T 2) 1. C > F 2. A > B 3. ~F . A 4. ~C > (B > D) / B . D 3) 1. (S v Q...
Tuesday, August 16, 2011 at 1:52pm by Brayden
PHYSICS
The masses and coordinates of four particles are as follows: 40 g, x = -4.0 cm, y = 5.0 cm; 30 g, x = 5, y = 0.0 cm; 40 g, x = –5.0 cm, y = 3.0 cm; 20 g, x = 3.0 cm, y = 2.0 cm. What are the rotational inertias of this collection about the (a) x, (b) y, and (c) z axes? &...
Thursday, March 22, 2007 at 5:15pm by wolfpak
english help revise:Guru Blue
can u help revise the above?
Wednesday, February 27, 2008 at 12:38pm by Christi
English/ please revise
First, you should realize that Boladai is a paid representative of Baluchistan (Balochistan). Your introduction is definitely biased toward this region. What is your paper about? What is your thesis sentence?
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Ms. Sue
English
I agree with Matt about these: >>>the metal detector >>>practicing archery =)
Thursday, April 21, 2011 at 9:02am by Writeacher
English/please revise
I looked up Balochistan, because I've never heard of it as a nation before, and this is what I found: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Balochistan Please read carefully, and then revise your paragraph. Then repost.
Saturday, April 12, 2008 at 11:43am by Writeacher
math
Solve this : (8x^3 ) - (168x^2) + ( 864x) = 1120 please >>>>>>>>>> I need it >>> please
Monday, January 21, 2008 at 2:14pm by Robert
english-please revise
You're welcome.
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue
english/please revise
That's good! :-)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Ms. Sue
english/please revise
I forgot "until"
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Christi
Math
help please anyone? i'm having a hard time solvig these problems LOGIC CONDITIONAL PROOF. HOMEWORK HELP PLEASE!? A. 1. A -> (B -> C) 2. (C ^ D) -> E 3. -F ->(D ^ -E) / :. A -> (B -> F) B. 1. (A v B) -> -(C ^ D) 2. (-C v -D...
Thursday, January 17, 2013 at 1:56am by Moses
english please/help revise
Lords Renissance Army
Tuesday, February 19, 2008 at 7:39pm by Anonymous
English- please revise
my topic is school violence
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by ann
english/please revise
Yes. That would work.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:59pm by Ms. Sue
English- please revise
My topic Anti- Abortion I need your help
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by Frances
english/please revise
And don't forget the comma after "Marri" =)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Writeacher
english/please revise
can I use "fueled" instead of discharge?
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:59pm by Christi
english-please revise
This is pretty good, Rose. But these two sentences need some work. In addition to the CWE, I have learned the following writing tools that are: how to conduct, planning and developing my research paper. This part needs parallel construction -- ". . . how to conduct, ...
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue
writting skills
Please revise this with correct capitalization, spacing, etc. I have no idea what this is about.
Saturday, January 28, 2012 at 11:54am by Writeacher
Geometry
Given circle A with circumference 20 pi and the length of arc KD equal to 10/3 pi. Find the area of the shaded region. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>&...
Sunday, March 6, 2011 at 4:55pm by Gemma
english/language
what is the contraction in the following sentances? >>>A mud hole is his favorite place, ???is it place? OR >>>They say he's as smart as a dog, ???is it he's? OR Am I way off? if so please give me an example
Friday, September 7, 2007 at 1:19am by meowphfsst
English
I needed to write a good thesis statement for my english class about how people consume the news. This is what i have tell me if its good, if not please help me revise Back in the day people of a particular age would consume news by reading the newspaper, watching the news, or...
Wednesday, January 18, 2012 at 6:35pm by Blaze
math
Which shows the proper coordinate notation for a rotation that is 180 degrees clockwise about the origin A. (3,6)->(6,3) B. (3,6)->(-3,6) c. (3,6)->(6,-3) D. (3,6)->(-3,-6) HELP please? Thanks
Thursday, February 24, 2011 at 11:34pm by Justine
English/ please revise
Please note these corrections: statues = statutes (laws) Constitution (capitalized) Aircraft Piracy Statute, (sp. + comma) principle, which provides (omit in)
Wednesday, April 9, 2008 at 5:20pm by Ms. Sue
English
Please revise with correct capitalization and punctuation. Then someone will check your sentences for you.
Tuesday, September 6, 2011 at 6:54pm by Writeacher
American history
Please post your assignment here and be specific about how you'd like us to help you revise it.
Friday, February 24, 2012 at 4:11pm by Ms. Sue
English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in ...
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Christi
Maths
Can someone give me the checkpoint exam topics that are required for a student to revise Please give us more and clearer context for your question. It is not clear what you want to know. What exam topics? Why do you need to revise them? Please repost with the additional ...
Tuesday, April 17, 2007 at 12:56pm by Fahad
ENGLISH PLEASE HELP!!! URGENT!!!
Revise your main idea sentence so it includes your opinion. Re-post when you're ready.
Saturday, December 29, 2012 at 7:43pm by Writeacher
english/please revise
Looks good, except you need a comma after activities.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:40pm by Ms. Sue
Broadcast writing-Revised
This is better. Incomplete sentence >> "NAOMI BUSH SAYS BECAUSE SHE DID NOT FINISH HER SPANISH PROJECT LAST WEEK WHEN IT WAS DUE." This is too wordy. Please simplify it. >> "BUSH HAS AN ENGLISH CLASS IN THE SAME BUILDING—BROWN ...
Wednesday, February 6, 2013 at 9:23pm by Ms. Sue
English
Please reread and revise your question. It doesn't make any sense. Capital letters and correct punctuation would help, too.
Wednesday, January 18, 2012 at 3:41pm by Writeacher
English- please revise
I suggest you change "uprise" to "rise." Your thesis statement doesn't support your topic. Your topic states that the price of food is one of the main causes of inflation. Your topic says nothing about starvation. Have you actually found research ...
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by Ms. Sue
Grammar and Composition
I think it is better, but could be better. Go on, but think on revising. I assume you read the Twain essay I gave you. Aim for that language. You can do it, but after you take a break, come back, read it aloud, and revise. You want to be just as vivid as Twain, or Thoreau. I ...
Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 2:13pm by bobpursley
Tips
Be sure you have unique ideas. Work, work, work! Write every day. Let your writing sit for a day or more. Revise, revise, revise!
Wednesday, May 11, 2011 at 11:14am by Ms. Sue
english - revise please
I assume you've chosen C for the first question and B for the second. I agree -- those are the best choices. :-)
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 8:20pm by Ms. Sue
English/ please revise
My reading of the paragraph is that the rest of the paper will be not much substance, mainly silly propaganda. You can do better.
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by bobpursley
english/please revise
What is the purpose of this paper? Is it for an English class or a social studies class? What are your teacher's expectations for this paper?
Monday, April 21, 2008 at 11:47am by Ms. Sue
English
The only to get your essay written is to follow my directions above. Then just start writing. You may have to revise several times -- but at least if you have words on paper, you have something to revise. The best cure for writer's block is to jump in and WRITE!
Tuesday, October 2, 2012 at 11:27am by Ms. Sue
Algebra
I'm having trouble with inequalities. Basically my problem is about which way the sign goes. Here's an example.. X(X+1)>2 so then it becomes X^2 + X>2 Correct? Then X^2 + X - 2>0 then factor so it becomes (X+2)(X-1)>0 And so I end up with X&...
Tuesday, September 9, 2008 at 8:41pm by Samantha
communication styles
The first two "sentences" are actually sentence fragments. You need to revise these and make them one smooth sentence. The third "sentence" is really a run-on -- revise and make it into two complete sentences. Are you sure you should be using the word "...
Sunday, February 10, 2008 at 1:05pm by Writeacher
Please help
Jan >> 31 - 13 = 18 Feb >> 28 Mar >> 31 Apr >> 30 May >> 31 June >> 16 Add the days.
Thursday, June 16, 2011 at 5:54pm by Ms. Sue
English
There's still too much repetition in that intro. Please revise. Once you have that fixed, then we'll work on the transition to the next paragraph.
Sunday, May 3, 2009 at 2:09pm by Writeacher
child day care mgmt
'ur'? You're going to work with young children who need the best role models possible, and you aren't using correct English? Please revise... and please indicate what YOU THINK the correct response is as well.
Wednesday, October 19, 2011 at 12:29am by Writeacher
English Improving writing
Think of the rough draft, revised copy, and final copy as the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd drafts of your paper. You can have more than that if you want, but according to your assignment, you cannot have fewer. Did you revise your 1st draft to make your 2nd draft? Then did you revise ...
Friday, June 20, 2008 at 6:12pm by Writeacher
please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 9:52pm by rose -Ms. Sue
Calc Please Help
Are these correct? lim x->0 (x)/(sqrt(x^2+4) - 2) I get 4/0= +/- infinity so lim x->0+ = + infinity? and lim x->0- = + infinity? lim x->1 (x^2 - 5x + 6)/(x^2 - 3x + 2) I get 2/0, so lim x-> 1+ = - infinity? and lim x->1- = + infinity? ...
Thursday, October 14, 2010 at 4:46am by Chelsea
chemistry
i have to write chemical formulas and balance them: nitrogen and oxyen---> nitrogen monoxide N2+02---->2NO nitrogen monoxide and oxygen----> nitrogen dioxide gas. NO2+O---->NO2 (i'm not sure about this, please check) nitrogen dioxide and water...
Sunday, January 13, 2008 at 2:08am by Anonymous
english/please revise
is this ok? In 2001, Musharraf, declared himself president. In 2002, he amended the Pakistan constitution without the participation of parliament.
Friday, April 18, 2008 at 5:23am by christi
English
Read about sequence of tenses and any other aspects of verb tenses in English here: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/verbs.htm Then revise your sentences and post them -- but post them only once please!
Monday, February 8, 2010 at 9:50am by Writeacher
psychology please revise
Some thoughts -- Self-esteem and self-concept are always subjective. They describe how a person feels about him/herself. The question is asking whether these exercises accurately evaluated how YOU feel about YOURself. Also -- in the last paragraph, you may want to replace ...
Tuesday, May 6, 2008 at 7:21pm by Ms. Sue
english - Please revise
thanks a lot Miss Sue.
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 7:19pm by rose- Ms. Sue
English
Could you please revise this sentence? Thank you. 1) By moblity we mean the transer of every single teacher or student to the partners' country within the two years of the project.
Wednesday, January 25, 2012 at 2:00pm by Henry2
english- Please revise
You should also include what field you're going into. Then tell what classes you're planning to take that will meet that career's requirements.
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 4:51pm by Ms. Sue
geometry
We are learning about proofs. We drew lines between noncollinear points. Our table showed 2 points >> 1 line segment, 3 point >> 3 line segments, 4 points >> 6 line segments, 5 points >> 10 line seg, 6 points >&...
Wednesday, October 8, 2008 at 1:18am by Zack
English
Please revise this sentance: That we the Australian people are becoming to excessively like the United States of America Thanks Minerva
Friday, April 18, 2008 at 10:06pm by Minerva
english /please revise
Moreover, although (omit comma) the current rise of Baloch nationalism is not completely centered on ethnicity per se, one cannot help but recognize the ethnic differences that are persistent among the Pakistani government structure. The rest of the paragraph has nothing to do...
Friday, April 18, 2008 at 10:59am by GuruBlue
Revise Research Paper
Thank you so much<3 You revise alot of my papers! Thank you for that!
Saturday, December 10, 2011 at 9:36pm by Bryce
French
Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. I'm not clear is you want French--->English/English--->French or French--->French. Please clarify. Mme
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:49pm by SraJMcGin
Foreign languages
Writeacher, thank you very much! Can you please check these sentences, too? 1) They left for the supermarket a few minutes ago.My child is with them. They need to buy food for lunch and won't be back until noon. We'll spend the afternoon at home because it's ...
Sunday, July 1, 2012 at 6:12am by John
logic
I need help proving these arguments using rules of inference, please. (S>B) > (SvK) (Kv~D) ~ (H>S) ~S.W / ~H ~A > (B>~C) ~D > (~C >A) D v ~A ~D
Wednesday, May 18, 2011 at 3:42pm by Elaine
English 7 - Journal Entry Assignment Check
I found six errors in your first paragraph. Please revise just that paragraph and repost it.
Thursday, January 12, 2012 at 5:25pm by Ms. Sue
English
I took two exams and iffy about my results. Exam one:32/46.8 A >= 46.8 B >= 41.6 C >= 38.5 D >= 33.0 Exam two: 54/100 (curve (Bonus)6%. Thank you!
Tuesday, March 19, 2013 at 8:24pm by Amy
english
I have to write these sentence with the same meaning. Can anybody look them up, please? 1. We will refund your booking fee, provided you cancel 48 hours in advance. -> We will only refund your booking fee, if you cancel 48 hours in advance. 2. I wish you told me about ...
Tuesday, November 6, 2012 at 12:22pm by Minnie
BAA App. Essay Help! (please read!)
One of my personal achievements has to do with artistic. >> Artistic what? You can't just leave this adjective hanging. When I was in the 7th grade I participate in the 2012 Reflections Competition. >> You need the past tense of "...
Wednesday, December 5, 2012 at 9:03pm by Ms. Sue
Physics
A thin rod, of length L and negligible mass, that can pivot about one end to rotate in a vertical circle. A heavy ball of mass m is attached to the other end. The rod is pulled aside through an angle and released. What is the speed of the ball at the lowest point if L = 2.20 m...
Friday, March 9, 2007 at 10:48pm by Technoboi11
Economics
I am on the chapter for International Trade in the book. I neew to calculate the producer surplus after a trade and I am not sure if I am doing it right. Graph: Price of Pencil Sharpeners $16__________________________World Price >>>>>>...
Saturday, May 10, 2008 at 10:16am by G
FRENCH
The 22 French regions Alsace >> Aquitaine >> Auvergne >> Bourgogne >> Bretagne >> Centre Val de Loire >> Champagne - Ardenne >> Corse >> Franche-Comté >...
Monday, May 9, 2011 at 8:27pm by Frenchy
English
Could you please revise the following sentences, please? 1) As a matter of fact, two among our science teachers are willing to partake in the project where English would be the lingua franca. 2) Translate the following words into English, then choose two adjectives describing ...
Monday, October 31, 2011 at 3:44pm by Henry2
english - Please revise
Comma problems here: ... course of study such as, psychology, social skills, English etc. Should be this: ... course of study, such as psychology, social skills, English, etc.
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 7:19pm by Writeacher
English
Use your turning signal >>> ?? Don’t blow your horn in anger >>> ?? Everything else looks good.
Saturday, August 6, 2011 at 4:56pm by Writeacher
Algebra
When I asked you about the following problem:Solve 4sqrt(6x-2)>4 The first 4 is outside the square root sign and then (6x-2) is under the square root sign >4. You said to do the following. Divide by 4 to get sqrt(6x-2)>1 For this to happen, 6x-2>1 ...
Tuesday, October 19, 2010 at 12:20pm by JayLynne-Mathmate please recheck
Abstract Algebra
If 2^n>n^2 and n>5, then 2^n+1>(n+1)^2 Proof: Assuming that 2^n>n^2 then I can say that 2*2^2>2*n^2 = 2^n+1>2n^2 If I can show that 2n^2>(n+1)^2 then I will be done by transitivity. So 2n^2>(n+1)^2? then 2n^2>n^2+...
Friday, September 21, 2007 at 2:00pm by Dina
BAA App. Essay Help! (please read!)
My favorites activities >> favorite a club when we help the people, >> in which we help One my ideas is to help the >> was We come with an idea >>came up with an idea celebrate their thanksgiving >> ...
Wednesday, December 5, 2012 at 9:03pm by Ms. Sue
Sabian
If air resistance offered to the motion of a projectile by the surrounding air is taken in account i,is time of flight increase or decrease?why? ii,hmax >> >> >> iii,the range >> >> >> iv,the ...
Tuesday, January 8, 2013 at 1:20am by Tsedeke
Writing
Philip Malloy was very devious <~~and yet nowhere else in your writing do you define "devious" nor tell the reader in what way the boy exhibited such a characteristic. For example, when he said, "Girls go for guys that win" (pg.3). <~~First of...
Monday, May 16, 2011 at 8:50pm by Writeacher
English
I need help writing a lead sentence, it has to answer the who, what, why, when and how The Director of Budget and Accounting, Patsy Moore, shared a presentation about the 2013 Capital Improvement Plan on Monday during the City Commission Meeting in Kalamazoo. Does that work, ...
Wednesday, January 23, 2013 at 11:13pm by Blaze
English
I've been given 20 sentences which I must revise so that the nominalizations are verbs and characters the subjects of those verbs, but can't quite figure it out. [nominalizations] and <characters> 1. [Attempts] were made on the part of <President ...
Tuesday, August 30, 2011 at 3:36am by Tucker
MATH QUIZ
Round each number to the underlined place value. 1.) 15.6571 -->5 is underlined 2.) 0.8914 -->1 is underlined 3.) 7,022.56 -->3 is underlined 4.) 345.678 -->6 is underlined Estimate. 5.) 3.7 · 8.06 about 32 about 27 about 12 about 24 6.) 17....
Wednesday, October 5, 2011 at 10:49am by Brooke
english - Ms. Sue - Please revise
This looks very good, Rose. :-)
Thursday, April 3, 2008 at 9:09pm by Ms. Sue
calc
Are these correct? lim x->0 (x)/(sqrt(x^2+4) - 2) I get 4/0= +/- infinity so lim x->0+ = + infinity? and lim x->0- = + infinity? lim x->1 (x^2 - 5x + 6)/(x^2 - 3x + 2) I get 2/0, so lim x-> 1+ = - infinity? and lim x->1- = + infinity? ...
Wednesday, October 13, 2010 at 5:39pm by Chelsea
Calc. Limits
Are these correct? lim x->0 (x)/(sqrt(x^2+4) - 2) I get 4/0= +/- infinity so lim x->0+ = + infinity? and lim x->0- = + infinity? lim x->1 (x^2 - 5x + 6)/(x^2 - 3x + 2) I get 2/0, so lim x-> 1+ = - infinity? and lim x->1- = + infinity? ...
Wednesday, October 13, 2010 at 1:47pm by Chelsea
English
1) Another important theme is that of equivocation. The witches confuse good and evil. They are unable to distinguish between good and evil. 2) Closely connected to the theme of equivocation is that of false appearances. 3) OK 4) Shakespeare's Macbeth contains four main ...
Thursday, April 14, 2011 at 11:28am by Writeacher
english
Here's where a good dictionary can be invaluable. An inexpensive paper-back, English, or even English--->French--->English. 1 : having a bent or twisted shape or condition <a wry smile>; especially : turned abnormally to one side <a wry ...
Thursday, February 14, 2008 at 2:24pm by SraJMcGin
please/revise english
The last link seems to be dead. http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/589/01/ By the way, using 1515 as a citation doesn't mean a thing.
Wednesday, April 23, 2008 at 10:06pm by Ms. Sue
math- check this please
1. 3t<-9=t<-3 2.4m>8=m>2 3.10<-2w 5<w 4.-20>-5c 4>c 5.-27>3z -9>z 6.-7b>42 b>6
Monday, November 19, 2007 at 6:09pm by james
English
What is the best way to revise this sentence " Make your decisions about what features are important to you." A. Make decisions about what features are important to you. C. Decide what features are important to you.
Tuesday, January 4, 2011 at 9:59pm by Marie
english/please revise
This sentence doesn't make much sense. Please rewrite it so that you clarify what you mean. It wasn’t after the dismissal, in particular Baloch sardar (chief) Bakhsh Marri, who responded to the dismissal of the Pakistani government by announcing his and Baloch support...
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Ms. Sue
English
Revise the following sentences to remove all pronoun errors. 41. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork. 42. When a teacher writes an exam, they think about what aspects of student learning they want to test.
Thursday, July 28, 2011 at 1:07am by bill
english - Please revise
You're very welcome, Rose. :-) MS. SUE
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 7:19pm by Ms. Sue
Pre-Cal.
Describe the end behavior of f(x)=2x^4-5x+1: A. x-->‡, f(x)-->‡; x-->-‡, f(x)-->-‡ B. x-->‡, f(x)-->‡; x-->-‡, f(x)-->‡ C. x-->...
Tuesday, March 17, 2009 at 2:35pm by Mia
psy- revise please
I've already made corrections on this essay. Please go back and look.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008 at 6:37pm by Ms. Sue
English
Everyone have <has> Sometimes, <delete comma> as serious<ly> is a correction. But the thing I wonder about, is this all of your essay? The essay is, I think, supposed to be about My Biggest Regret, and you only have one sentence ...
Tuesday, November 10, 2009 at 3:20pm by bobpursley
math
reflection about x=3 takes (x,y) -> (3-x,y) reflection about x=k takes (x,y) -> (k-x,y) So, both reflections take (x,y)->(3-x,y)->(k-(3-x),y) = (k-3+x,y) So, since (7,6)->(5,6) k-3+7 = 5 k=1
Thursday, May 30, 2013 at 10:06pm by Steve
English
I'll revise the sentences and then I'll post them back to you. Can you please suggest a site where all reporting verbs (to be used in indirect speech, especially when giving instructions or advice) are listed? I don't want to use "tell, ask" all the time...
Thursday, September 8, 2011 at 7:00am by Henry2
English/please revise
Hello, this is my intro for a paper on Balochistan. I am concern about not being the clear. Can you please make suggestions. Thanx. Iran and Pakistan are not a single nation state but a multi-national state composed of many nations. Both are governed with a doctorial political...
Saturday, April 12, 2008 at 11:43am by Christi
Quantum Physics
In Problems 1 to 5 we will work through example of QFTM for M = 6. Problem 1: What is w? You can use e, pi, and M in your response. Please do not subtitute 6 for M. Specify the probability amplitudes. You should use w to denote w, but please fully simplify your answer such ...
Wednesday, March 20, 2013 at 1:22am by Hal
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