I still have afew more doubts 1) The Whigs were in power (and not "in charge") from 1714 and 1760. 2) Avoid writing long-winded sentences linked by the conjuction "and". 3) The ministers' meetings were called Cabinet (better: they developed into the Cabinet) 4) Robert Walpole ...
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Dreams Are Taken Away It was a tough day on September 30, 2002 with a crowd of high school students carrying posters and signs marching in the middle of the street. None of them were happy at all. "Governor Davis id throwing awat our future with his unfair High School Exit ...