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please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
June 15, 2008 by rose -Ms. Sue
Can someone give me the checkpoint exam topics that are required for a student to revise Please give us more and clearer context for your question. It is not clear what you want to know. What exam topics? Why do you need to revise them? Please repost with the additional ...
April 17, 2007 by Fahad
i need to write a question poem with 10 lines and that asks a lot of questions i have no ideas please help! Pick a theme, then the questions, then put them in verse. Example: Theme Love questions.. What is how it began where will it lead how will it end and so on... the verse...
May 14, 2007 by christina
English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
April 15, 2008 by Christi
Could you please revise this sentence? Thank you. 1) By moblity we mean the transer of every single teacher or student to the partners' country within the two years of the project.
January 25, 2012 by Henry2
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
May 30, 2012 by John
Grammar - Improving Tone
Revise this paragraph to eliminate negative attitude and focus on postive ideas. "We are sorry to inform you that the Travel-Lite suitcase, Model X4457, you asked about is temporarily out of stock in our warehouse, just as Ms. Cummings of our Hilldale store infromed you. We ...
October 18, 2006 by Euridice
I'll revise the sentences and then I'll post them back to you. Can you please suggest a site where all reporting verbs (to be used in indirect speech, especially when giving instructions or advice) are listed? I don't want to use "tell, ask" all the time. Thank you.
September 8, 2011 by Henry2
help please :)
What is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the secong draft. B.proofread the essay to make it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit,changing and rearranging the content. D.All of the above. i got D what do you think ?
September 29, 2011 by ciara
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
February 9, 2012 by sososola2012
please revise my intro
Hello, I am writing a paper for international law course can someone please revise my intro? thank you. It is ordinarily accepted among all nations that territorial jurisdiction is based on the fact that a crime is committed within their territory. However, sometimes they also...
April 28, 2008 by christy
Indeed, the environment ignores state borders, and environmental pollution is not restrained within boundaries. When pollution originates in one country and crosses the frontier, leading to negative impact on the environment of other countries, it constitutes transboundary ...
April 23, 2008 by Crystal
Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business ...
January 14, 2012 by Andy
What is the number one eassy writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay B.Always write five paragraphs C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. i got A what do you think?
September 28, 2011 by ciara
Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...
May 27, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue
Can you please check these sentences for me? Thank you very much. 1)Another important theme is that of equivocation.The witches confuse good and bad (better evil). They are unable to distinguish between good and evil. 2) Closely connected to the theme of equivocation is that ...
April 14, 2011 by Mike1
Revise the sentences. (1) Revise the following sentence so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions: Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight. African American ...
July 17, 2014 by Susan
8. Which of the following options accurately represents the steps involved in the writing process? A. Write first draft, edit, revise, write final draft B. Write first draft, revise, proofread, write final draft C. Plan, write first draft, edit, write final draft D. Plan, ...
May 1, 2013 by selena
Can you please revise this for me? Tears: Easily coming, easily going. Effortless work for salty streams flowing. Might come when you're here, might come when you go. But tears are definitely good work's foe ---Does the last line make sense?--- thanks
October 26, 2008 by mysterychicken
how can i revise this or what should i look for to revise this: To begin with, I know that the designer for this freelance job would need to consider a dimensional look. As I have a Web design and interactive media associate degree, I do have experience in basic Web design ...
October 30, 2011 by aran
language please check my work
-revise the sentence for a clear meaning here is the sentence Surgeons moved around the operating room, skillfully using tools wearing slippers. -the revised sentence Surgeons,wearing slippers,moved around the operating room skillfully using their tools. please if there is a ...
April 14, 2010 by me
I still have more sentences to check. I really hope you can revise them, too. 1) Revise all your sentences orally. 2) Bring the government down (and bring down the government) 3) He stopped to take on the students (to take the students on is possible?) 4) Mark took over the ...
April 12, 2012 by Matthew
I still have the following doubts. I included the various alternatives. Thank you 1) Prospero calls Caliban a lying slave instead Miranda calls him a horrible slave. Is "instead" correct? I would have used "while, whereas" or I would have started a new sentence with "Miranda, ...
April 30, 2011 by Henry 1
A study was conducted to examine the peer review process. The investigators hypothesized that reviewers suggested by authors would give more favorable reviews than reviewers picked by journal editors. They obtained data on 40 manuscripts that had been reviewed by 1 author-...
August 6, 2013 by Susie
Could you please revise the following sentences, please? 1) As a matter of fact, two among our science teachers are willing to partake in the project where English would be the lingua franca. 2) Translate the following words into English, then choose two adjectives describing ...
October 31, 2011 by Henry2
COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY-Please Proofread
1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and proof and ...
July 27, 2013 by Anonymous
Eglish/ grammar revise please
How can I make this sentence better? I am trying to paraphrase, but the last part of the sentence does not sound good. In the case of Yunis, the United States contended jurisdiction found in section 1203 of the Hostage Taking Statue and section 32 of the Aircraft Piracy ...
April 9, 2008 by Christi
Evidence clearly demonstrates Latin America’s transition to democracy. Though unstable, it’s long democratic history reveals progression from oligarchy, to semi-democracy, to an electoral democracy. Thus, with these three cycles of democratization trace the political changes ...
May 1, 2008 by Christi
31. I had hoped the police would blame Bruce, not ___. __ me __ myself __ mineself __I 32. Some interviewers ____ have a clear sense of what they want in an employee, ask very tough questions. __ who __, who __ which __ that 33. A venture capitalist has to be willing to take ...
March 14, 2010 by Lorie
Is any one can help me to revise my college application? Thank you. Question: Please describe which of these activities ( extracurricular or personal activities or work experience) has had the most meaning for you, and why. I was used to be a President of class in high school...
January 8, 2007 by Kate
I need to revise these sentences. Can you please help me? 1) What music instrument do you play? Which music instrument do you play? 2) When does their show start? What time does the show start? 3) Do you have a lot of fun? You always talk around. (What does "talk around" mean...
January 12, 2012 by Henry2
I needed to write a good thesis statement for my english class about how people consume the news. This is what i have tell me if its good, if not please help me revise Back in the day people of a particular age would consume news by reading the newspaper, watching the news, or...
January 18, 2012 by Blaze
Hello, this is my intro for a paper on Balochistan. I am concern about not being the clear. Can you please make suggestions. Thanx. Iran and Pakistan are not a single nation state but a multi-national state composed of many nations. Both are governed with a doctorial political...
April 12, 2008 by Christi
I urgenlty need you to revise this sentence. 1) I'm pleased to hear that your school is willing to undertake the task of coordination. (to act as a coordinator of the whole project).
November 24, 2011 by Henry2
Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problems: " While repelling from the cliff, my backpack slipped and fell to the canyon floor."
August 7, 2013 by james
Revise sentence and put commas in where necessary. Some scientists in San Francisco California filmed skateboarders in action. My answer was: Some scientists in San Francisco, California, filmed skateboarders in action. I was wrong - please help by correcting
March 7, 2013 by Cassie
How do you do this? I am lost. My topic I chose is Homeless. Summary of the Research Process I. Begin the project. A. Think about the assignment. B. Analyze your audience and the purpose for which you are writing. C. Select an appropriate topic. D. Formulate a viable argument...
August 26, 2008 by Doris
In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.) Revise the following word groups to ...
January 27, 2014 by Michael
Revising Messages: Conciseness Revise the following sentences, using shorter, simpler words. 9. The antiquated calculator is ineffectual for solving sophisticated problems
January 13, 2014 by joyce
I am working on a test review for Gov't and I cant find any information whatsoever in the text book. The question is... Identify and explain why the following is important... 2. Events leading to the American Revolution: French & Indian War, Albany Plan, Stamp Act Congress, ...
February 17, 2009 by Carly
1) Why is "at university" wrong? Does this word always be followed by "a" or "the"? Thank you. 2) Can you help me express this? You found it difficult to express your personal opinions as well as to revise your topics critically.
July 4, 2011 by Henry2
Revise the folloing sentences to create parallel constructions. (Question) Some students hate math; some students dislike math, and math is liked by other students. (my answer) Some students hate math, some dislike math, and some like math. every way I have tried it just doesn...
June 30, 2010 by Rita
The city of Miami located on the southeastern part of Florida is characterized as a subtropical city situated on flatlands. During the wet season, the biggest environmental problem that I feel is significant to the city is the sanitary sewer overflow, caused by the city’s low ...
June 13, 2008 by rose- Ms. sue
4. Identify what is wrong with the following sentence: “Not realizing that there was a hole in the tire”. Then, revise the sentence in order to correct the problem and discuss the changes you have made.
April 12, 2013 by Shorty
revise the following sentences to eliminate shifts in tense, mood, voice or person. 7. The flight attendant said, "please turn off all electronic devices," but that we could use them again after takeoff. 8. The real estate market was was softer than it has been for a decade, ...
May 19, 2013 by dani
can't you do actual revision ; instead of just words. it would make it a whole lot easier, because what if we didn't need to revise on those particular words and needed RESEARCH?
November 6, 2008 by Grace
Hello, I have to revise these sentences for dangling modifiers and I wanted to see if I did it correctly. First sentence: Flying over the oak tree, the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised it to: Damagins his crops, the farmer saw the flock of ...
July 10, 2006 by Clark
The orginal purpose of the 1787 convention in Philadelphia was to: a. discard Articles of confederation b. revise the articles c. draft a new consitution d. discuss the future of the northwest territory
March 25, 2010 by Jodi
Compare two college essays, everyone please come!!
I come back... and bring an new college application essay, please help me to revise the new one(the first one), and more important... to compare which one is better for my college application. If you are not good at writing, it doesn't matter, just tell me your opinions. Thank...
December 3, 2006 by Jenni
I has to revise the following sentence naomi winned, why d you leave me like this! naomi soon began to cry.naomi lucas yelled Its okay youwill be just fine
November 27, 2007 by Roseliandystarajestarahjaesracritreah
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?
November 20, 2008 by anonymoys
I urgently need to revise these sentences. Could you please help me? 1) In my family we are six of us: my father, my mother etc. 2) I like very much playing instruments. I don't like doing shopping. I like lots of sports. 3) My mum usually cooks breakfast for me. At 10.30 pm I...
November 11, 2011 by Henry2
HI I'm in year 10 and I would like to have some websites on business Studies to revise for a test on Monday Especailly on the topic of Sectors of Economy thnnx
October 27, 2007 by Boy
Writeacher, I'd like you to revise these sentences, please. Thank you. 1) Our history teacher has included a new email address for the students participating in the project:...... All the post your 17 students have sent so far has been transferred to the new email address. 2) ...
March 29, 2012 by Matthew
How should I revise this sentence? "Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the inhabitants of the peculiar island."
May 5, 2014 by Victoria
Revise the following sentences to remove all pronoun errors. 41. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork. 42. When a teacher writes an exam, they think about what aspects of student learning they want to test.
July 28, 2011 by bill
I need help writing a lead sentence, it has to answer the who, what, why, when and how The Director of Budget and Accounting, Patsy Moore, shared a presentation about the 2013 Capital Improvement Plan on Monday during the City Commission Meeting in Kalamazoo. Does that work, ...
January 23, 2013 by Blaze
English- please revise
Create a thesis statement for your research paper: My topic is: The price of food is leading the uprise of inflation in today's economy. My thesis statement: The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in starvation in ...
April 30, 2008 by rose- Ms. Sue
what is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the second draft. B.Proofread the essay to make sure it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit changing and rearranging the contect. D. All of the above .I CHOSE D.
October 8, 2009 by larry
English Sentence correction
Please help me revise this sentence. The following sentence has many problems in grammar, sentence structure, and words. Correct the sentence: BEFORE: Cindy met this cool guy last night who helped her when she dropped her cellphone walking through the mall; She defiantly wants...
October 21, 2011 by Anonymous
Which of the following is a situation in which you should use fully justified text? You do not have proportional typefaces. You are using very short line lengths. You want to achieve a rather formal look. You want to be able to revise an individual page without reprinting the ...
May 31, 2010 by Anonymous
english please revise
In this study I will argue that prolonged exposure of social oppression and subjugation is the basis is for the African- American women limited participation in society’s political system. I will support my argument by providing a detailed analysis of the impact of social ...
April 28, 2008 by Christi
revise the following paragraph, improving it without changing its overall meaning. pay particular attention to any subject- verb agreement errors. You ever felt sleep deprived? college students often complains that they are not getting enough sleep.
August 19, 2013 by JOHN
To make this a pronoun case the orginal sentence is Pedro Martinez signed a baseball for Chad that he had used in a game. correction would be Pedro Martinez signed a baseball for Chad that he had previsouly used in another game. Please enter the "before" and "after" sentences ...
November 21, 2006 by patti
Please check my work. I have no one here to help thank you. 9. Explain what techniques you would use to present your ideas on this topic and persuade others effectively. If I were to represent any ideas in the argument, I would consider using persuasiveness consistently. I ...
September 22, 2011 by iceloc
I forgot to include the following sentences. Could you please check these other sentences, too. 1) Rewrite the exercise three times after learning the use of reporting verbs. 2) Revise carefully the verbs followed by the infinitive and the gerund in your book and then do the ...
January 7, 2012 by Henry2
Resources and references
When conducting research on the Internet. What is starting point for determining how to start the research? A: How many times I will need to revise a report? B: Do you want to use a search engine or search directory? C: Do I want an opinion about this topic or factual ...
June 26, 2013 by Sofiya
I have been asked to explain if it is a good idea to write a summary before writing the paper. Will someone please look over my work. I feel it is always a good idea to draft anything that you are writing. This will give you an opportunity to revise, add more information, take...
August 31, 2010 by confused by adverbs and adjectives
Please look over these sentences for me. Revise each of the following items to clarify pronoun reference. 1. All scholarship applicants must fill out a financial aid form, meet with the dean, and write a letter to the committee members. The deadline is October 24, so the ...
May 28, 2012 by Toya
Could you please revise these sentences. I have two doubts concerning my previous post. 1) When I arrived at/on the farm (which preposition is best??) 2) A rabbit was thumping (its paw??) in the rabbit hutch 3) The theme of reversal of values is best embodied by the thee ...
November 13, 2011 by Henry2
revise thesis statement Thesis sentence: When I order the liquors for my business I believe it is a useless expense of using the online service, because I have to order certain quantities from the liquor commission, but when parties are given for our clientele, I find out that...
May 16, 2013 by toni
Business COMMUNICATION 340
I need help I am not sure how to revise these sentences without leaving out or leaving in to much information if someone would please help me. Revising Messages: Directness and Conciseness Revise the following short e-mail messages so that they are more direct and concise; ...
September 1, 2013 by Anonymous
Would anyone mind looking over this persuasive essay? I need to pass in a sample of writing for my petition to move into an advanced English class, and I've decided to revise this one. The writing is sort of mechanical, but I suppose that's how English teachers want it. It'll ...
February 11, 2008 by Anonymous