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April 19, 2014

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Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Apparently, according to Word, my grammar is correct. Could you possibly show me exactly what I must revise? I cannot tell you how many times I tried to revise and edit this essay, but no matter what I do, you still insist that it is far too wordy and oddly structured. Also, ...
Friday, April 4, 2014 at 5:18pm by Anonymous

Grammar and Composition
I think it is better, but could be better. Go on, but think on revising. I assume you read the Twain essay I gave you. Aim for that language. You can do it, but after you take a break, come back, read it aloud, and revise. You want to be just as vivid as Twain, or Thoreau. I ...
Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 2:13pm by bobpursley

Tips
Be sure you have unique ideas. Work, work, work! Write every day. Let your writing sit for a day or more. Revise, revise, revise!
Wednesday, May 11, 2011 at 11:14am by Ms. Sue

please revise journ
Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 9:52pm by rose -Ms. Sue

English/please revise
I looked up Balochistan, because I've never heard of it as a nation before, and this is what I found: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Balochistan Please read carefully, and then revise your paragraph. Then repost.
Saturday, April 12, 2008 at 11:43am by Writeacher

Revise Research Paper
Thank you so much<3 You revise alot of my papers! Thank you for that!
Saturday, December 10, 2011 at 9:36pm by Bryce

english help revise:Guru Blue
can u help revise the above?
Wednesday, February 27, 2008 at 12:38pm by Christi

English
HOW DO I REVISE IT...IM ABOUT TO GO CRAZY like seriously im trying to ask for your help and you just keep saying revise it revise it...im so confused im so stressed and im going to go crazy in a minute..!
Thursday, November 19, 2009 at 12:45pm by Jake

english-please revise
This is pretty good, Rose. But these two sentences need some work. In addition to the CWE, I have learned the following writing tools that are: how to conduct, planning and developing my research paper. This part needs parallel construction -- ". . . how to conduct, planning ...
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue

psy- revise please
I've already made corrections on this essay. Please go back and look.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008 at 6:37pm by Ms. Sue

What?
This makes no sense. Please proofread and revise. Please post YOUR QUESTION, not some gibberish out of a textbook or something.
Monday, September 3, 2012 at 8:58am by Writeacher

Maths
Can someone give me the checkpoint exam topics that are required for a student to revise Please give us more and clearer context for your question. It is not clear what you want to know. What exam topics? Why do you need to revise them? Please repost with the additional ...
Tuesday, April 17, 2007 at 12:56pm by Fahad

please revise my essay
I'd indennt....
Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 10:22pm by Sam

english-please revise
You're welcome.
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 7:32pm by Ms. Sue

definition- please revise
right
Thursday, June 12, 2008 at 10:57pm by todd

english/please revise
I forgot "until"
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Christi

english/please revise
That's good! :-)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Ms. Sue

psy - please revise
You're welcome, Rose.
Thursday, April 24, 2008 at 7:44pm by Ms. Sue

psychology please revise
thank you..
Tuesday, May 6, 2008 at 7:21pm by rose- Ms. sue

please revise my essay
gud n nice
Saturday, November 3, 2007 at 11:30pm by michelle

please revise my essay
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Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 10:22pm by Anonymous

Please Revise(short paper)
Thanks again!
Sunday, December 11, 2011 at 6:18pm by Bryce

Please revise my essay
I am reviewing your essay and will have a response up soon. Please be patient. Thanks. =)
Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 6:19pm by Writeacher

English/ please revise
Please note these corrections: statues = statutes (laws) Constitution (capitalized) Aircraft Piracy Statute, (sp. + comma) principle, which provides (omit in)
Wednesday, April 9, 2008 at 5:20pm by Ms. Sue

english/please revise
Yes. That would work.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:59pm by Ms. Sue

psy - revise please
Yay! You're right! :-)
Sunday, April 20, 2008 at 9:58pm by Ms. Sue

psy - please revise
Thanks a lot Ms. Sue.
Thursday, April 24, 2008 at 7:44pm by rose-

environ. probl-please revise
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Friday, June 13, 2008 at 8:43pm by SANDY

English- please revise
my topic is school violence
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by ann

english please/help revise
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Tuesday, February 19, 2008 at 7:39pm by Anonymous

please help revise and edit my essay
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???
Please proofread and revise to make your question clear.
Sunday, December 16, 2012 at 11:14pm by Writeacher

please revise and edit my essay
If your copy/ paste didn't work, please type your essay into the space and we will be happy to give you suggestions or corrections.
Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 6:37pm by GuruBlue

eth- please revise
Ms Sue, I have to do this for tonight.
Wednesday, June 25, 2008 at 10:50pm by rose-

english/please revise
can I use "fueled" instead of discharge?
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:59pm by Christi

english/please revise
And don't forget the comma after "Marri" =)
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Writeacher

psy- please revise
Nothing shows up. :-(
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:58pm by Ms. Sue

English- please revise
My topic Anti- Abortion I need your help
Wednesday, April 30, 2008 at 9:13pm by Frances

please revise my essay
it was horrible i am a fifth grade teacher
Saturday, November 3, 2007 at 11:30pm by jimmy

spanish
how do you say please revise all the verb tenses
Thursday, May 6, 2010 at 1:43pm by Arleen

communication styles
The first two "sentences" are actually sentence fragments. You need to revise these and make them one smooth sentence. The third "sentence" is really a run-on -- revise and make it into two complete sentences. Are you sure you should be using the word "you" in your write-up. ...
Sunday, February 10, 2008 at 1:05pm by Writeacher

psy- please revise
Please try again, Rose, to post the questions and your answers. If you have a PC, you probably need to use the CTRL C and CTRL V keys to do this.
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:58pm by Ms. Sue

eth- please revise
Check my answer to your question beneath this one.
Wednesday, June 25, 2008 at 11:14pm by Anonymous

please revise eng paper thanx
You can omit the last three words.
Friday, November 30, 2007 at 1:33pm by Ms. Sue

psychology please revise
I'll post your answer in a few minutes.
Tuesday, May 6, 2008 at 7:21pm by Ms. Sue

psy- please revise
I just tried again.
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:58pm by rose - Ms. Sue

environ. probl-please revise
Miami, fl
Friday, June 13, 2008 at 8:43pm by rose -Ms. Sue

art
This makes no sense. Please revise and write in the form of a question.
Monday, December 6, 2010 at 7:50pm by Writeacher

definition- please revise
How many atoms of hydrogen are there for each atom of oxygen in seawater?
Thursday, June 12, 2008 at 10:57pm by Anonymous

Political Science
I wonder what "help" means. If I asked, will anyone help me defraud a bank, help means jail time. It is odd to me that cheating is not regarded by all as criminal. Some think it is "normal", but then again, amongst felons, normal is to defraud banks, or worse. Help indeed is a...
Tuesday, October 6, 2009 at 7:13pm by bobpursley

English
The only to get your essay written is to follow my directions above. Then just start writing. You may have to revise several times -- but at least if you have words on paper, you have something to revise. The best cure for writer's block is to jump in and WRITE!
Tuesday, October 2, 2012 at 11:27am by Ms. Sue

please help revise and edit my essay
I'll work on this over the next couple of hours. =)
Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 10:40pm by Writeacher

English
Please revise with correct capitalization and punctuation. Then someone will check your sentences for you.
Tuesday, September 6, 2011 at 6:54pm by Writeacher

social study
This makes no sense. Please proofread and revise ... then re-post when it's understandable.
Wednesday, August 22, 2012 at 11:24pm by Writeacher

please revise my two paragraphs of my essay
If this is a debate where your opponent can't heckle, don't use questions
Tuesday, October 30, 2007 at 11:30pm by Jim

definition- please revise
I'm signing off now. But I'll check your answers in the morning.
Thursday, June 12, 2008 at 10:57pm by Ms. Sue

writting skills
Please revise this with correct capitalization, spacing, etc. I have no idea what this is about.
Saturday, January 28, 2012 at 11:54am by Writeacher

journ please revise
Ms. Sue, You did not get everything that I had sent to you. Is there another way I could attached it to you. Please let me know
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 10:00pm by rose -Ms. Sue

child day care mgmt
'ur'? You're going to work with young children who need the best role models possible, and you aren't using correct English? Please revise... and please indicate what YOU THINK the correct response is as well.
Wednesday, October 19, 2011 at 12:29am by Writeacher

english/please revise
Looks good, except you need a comma after activities.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 8:40pm by Ms. Sue

psy- please revise
Rose -- you may need to type those characteristics and the rest of your assignment.
Thursday, May 29, 2008 at 9:06pm by Ms. Sue

ENGLISH PLEASE HELP!!! URGENT!!!
Revise your main idea sentence so it includes your opinion. Re-post when you're ready.
Saturday, December 29, 2012 at 7:43pm by Writeacher

What?
Please type your subject in the School Subject box. Any other words, including obscure abbreviations, are likely to delay responses from a teacher who knows that subject well. You also need an understandable question. Please revise and repost.
Sunday, September 19, 2010 at 4:13pm by Writeacher

psy- please revise
Ms. Sue check my second post please.
Thursday, June 5, 2008 at 8:58pm by rose - Ms. Sue

English
Please reread and revise your question. It doesn't make any sense. Capital letters and correct punctuation would help, too.
Wednesday, January 18, 2012 at 3:41pm by Writeacher

American history
Please post your assignment here and be specific about how you'd like us to help you revise it.
Friday, February 24, 2012 at 4:11pm by Ms. Sue

Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)
How can you revise this so it's 3 words, not 5 (and badly phrased)? "due to many different reasons" How can you revise this so it's 4 words, not 7? "from any source of this present day" Go through the entire paragraph and cut, cut, cut. It's still far too wordy.
Thursday, January 9, 2014 at 3:17pm by Writeacher

English/ please revise
My reading of the paragraph is that the rest of the paper will be not much substance, mainly silly propaganda. You can do better.
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by bobpursley

psy - revise please
E is definitely the psychodynamic theory with Freud, Jung and Erikson. I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.
Sunday, April 20, 2008 at 9:58pm by PsyDAG

english - revise please
I assume you've chosen C for the first question and B for the second. I agree -- those are the best choices. :-)
Tuesday, May 27, 2008 at 8:20pm by Ms. Sue

definition- please revise
Sorry this is too late. All of your answers are correct, except that # 4 is probably gender group.
Thursday, June 12, 2008 at 10:57pm by Ms. Sue

Writing
Philip Malloy was very devious <~~and yet nowhere else in your writing do you define "devious" nor tell the reader in what way the boy exhibited such a characteristic. For example, when he said, "Girls go for guys that win" (pg.3). <~~First of all, that's not a complete ...
Monday, May 16, 2011 at 8:50pm by Writeacher

maths
The way you put it, there's no multiplication... so I don't know where you get 3p and 2p... maybe you want to revise your original problem by addiing in the parentheses. Anyway, by the way you put it... it should be: p-p-1/2-2/3=1 (combine like-terms) 0-3/6-4/6=1 (common ...
Wednesday, April 16, 2008 at 9:39am by Jake1214

english/please revise
how about this? It wasn't after the dismissal that Baloch tribal chief, Bakhsh Marri anounced his support for the guerrillas.
Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 10:04pm by Christi

psy - please revise
This looks good. You might add that type A personalities have a lot of energy and get things done.
Thursday, April 24, 2008 at 7:44pm by Ms. Sue

English
There's still too much repetition in that intro. Please revise. Once you have that fixed, then we'll work on the transition to the next paragraph.
Sunday, May 3, 2009 at 2:09pm by Writeacher

poetry
i need to write a question poem with 10 lines and that asks a lot of questions i have no ideas please help! Pick a theme, then the questions, then put them in verse. Example: Theme Love questions.. What is how it began where will it lead how will it end and so on... the verse...
Monday, May 14, 2007 at 8:05pm by christina

english/please revise
is this ok? In 2001, Musharraf, declared himself president. In 2002, he amended the Pakistan constitution without the participation of parliament.
Friday, April 18, 2008 at 5:23am by christi

Science question
True. Revise-to come to different conclusions about somebody or something after thinking again. OR to change a previous estimate in order to make it more accurate or realistic. So, I agree with revise because, basically revising is strengthening and proving something while ...
Thursday, October 31, 2013 at 5:27pm by Gabby

please revise my essay
The title looks just fine. Where is the essay?
Saturday, November 3, 2007 at 11:30pm by drwls

english - Please revise
thanks a lot Miss Sue.
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 7:19pm by rose- Ms. Sue

Business Communication
We will not do your work for you, please put what you think it is and we will help you revise it. ~Allyson
Wednesday, November 2, 2011 at 12:44pm by Allyson

please/revise english
Here's the second link: (Broken Link Removed)
Wednesday, April 23, 2008 at 10:06pm by Writeacher

definition- please revise
The most commen definition of this term is a social ranking by socail wealth?
Thursday, June 12, 2008 at 10:57pm by Am

English/ please revise
this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm by Christi

psy - revise please
Human beings in general, encounter stress throughout their life. Other than that sentence, your answer looks good. :-)
Monday, April 21, 2008 at 11:04pm by Ms. Sue

english- Please revise
You should also include what field you're going into. Then tell what classes you're planning to take that will meet that career's requirements.
Thursday, April 10, 2008 at 4:51pm by Ms. Sue

please revise journ
Rose, I suggest you sign off, reboot your computer, and then try again. If that doesn't work, you may need to type your journal here.
Sunday, June 15, 2008 at 9:52pm by Ms. Sue

English
Could you please revise this sentence? Thank you. 1) By moblity we mean the transer of every single teacher or student to the partners' country within the two years of the project.
Wednesday, January 25, 2012 at 2:00pm by Henry2

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