ms. sue can you answer my question
Yes, the links that Writeacher posted are other similar projects.
does it matter that both of them deal with bikes?
also can you check my action plan if its good
Please copy and paste your action plan here.
And remember to use the same name.
i know i had it but i changed it to anonymous anyway
its not finished because i don't know if its right but
The air we breathe in is very important, it keeps us alive. But we are hurting the environment and making it hard to breath in “healthy air”. How? Well, by using transportation that contains gas, substances may leak and send harmful chemicals and gases into the air. How can we stop it? Easy you just need to learn how to take care of the environment. Here are some easy tips to improve the environment.
Grow trees and plants they are helpful in providing good air for us to breathe. Save electricity, not only does it help the environment it also helps reduce your electric bills. Carpool, it helps the environment by less cars on the road which in terms mean better air quality. Recycle it reduces air pollution, and saves money. Don’t smoke by smoking you release many chemicals in the air “Approximately 4000 chemicals are present in cigarettes, … [and] released in the atmosphere.”
Simple tips like these can help us improve our environment but it'll take more that. Some other ways to reduce air pollution would be to ride bikes or walk to and from work/school. Use Wind, solar and geothermal energy. You can also turn off the car engine when not in use for example if your in traffic it would be best for the economy if the engine is turned off so no substances can go to the air.
What part of the project is this?
my action plan
a type written action plan.
OK.
How are you going to get this message to people in your community?
umm a poster so the paragraph is wrong right?
It's not wrong, but you must have a way to publish that to your community.
Mailings? Flyers delivered door-to-door? Letter to the editor of your newspaper? Facebook? Twitter?
And of course posters.
so what i have write now in the paragraph is ok because what basically what we're doing is an essay so that's my written action plan
Yes.
However, I'm sure part of your action plan must be how you'll get this information to other people. If you don't do that, then you haven't fulfilled the requirements.
ok so how can i explain that cause what i've written is the only thing i can think of
You can write a paragraph at the beginning telling how you intend to distribute this message.
so i can say
to help stop air pollution i will make posters and talk to people in my neighborhood about the effect humans have on the ecosystem. I will participate in activities where they plant trees and other plants and get more people involved in this activity.
it has to be 5-7 paragraphs what else can i say. also can i write it in the end of my paragraphs.
I already made some suggestions.
to help stop air pollution i will make posters and talk to people in my neighborhood about the effect humans have on the ecosystem. I will participate in activities where they plant trees and other plants and get more people involved in this activity. i could also deliver flyers door-to-door and make a campaign. i could also make a website online via twitter, facebook, and any other social sites so people can see it and get interested in it. and lastly i can do some community services and go to different locations where they contribute to the environment and help out.
about the sites that writeacher gave me does it matter that both of them deal with bikes.
I don't think it matters. Bikes are big these days.
You can include the paragraphs you wrote earlier to show what you'd say in the flyers.
i made a poster that say "avoid air pollution by going going green and using few cars"
so is this good
The air we breathe in is very important, it keeps us alive. But we are hurting the environment and making it hard to breath in “healthy air”. How? Well, by using transportation that contains gas, substances may leak and send harmful chemicals and gases into the air. How can we stop it? Easy you just need to learn how to take care of the environment. Here are some easy tips to improve the environment.
Grow trees and plants they are helpful in providing good air for us to breathe. Save electricity, not only does it help the environment it also helps reduce your electric bills. Carpool, it helps the environment by less cars on the road which in terms mean better air quality. Recycle it reduces air pollution, and saves money. Don’t smoke by smoking you release many chemicals in the air “Approximately 4000 chemicals are present in cigarettes, … [and] released in the atmosphere.”
Simple tips like these can help us improve our environment but it’ll take more that. Some other ways to reduce air pollution would be to ride bikes or walk to and from work/school. Use Wind, solar and geothermal energy instead. Turn off car engines when not in use for example if your stuck in traffic it would be best for the economy if the engine is turned off so no substances can go to the air. The best way will be to go GREEN!
To help stop air pollution I will make posters and talk to people in my neighborhood about the effect humans have on the ecosystem. I will participate in activities where they plant trees and other plants and get more people involved in this activity. I could also deliver flyers door-to-door and make a campaign. And make a website online via twitter, facebook, and any other social sites so people can see it and get interested in it. and lastly I can participate in community services and go to different locations where they contribute to the environment and help out.
about the websites how does that have anything to do with air pollution?
Bikes don't give off any gases to pollute the air. Many people ride their bikes to work and on errands instead of driving their cars.
You've done a good job.
thank you about the websites i have
Houston Bikeway Program: is a program that offers over "300 miles of interconnected bikeway networks," which includes bike lanes, hike-and-bike trails, and so much more. The city of Houston uses bikes as a major part of their transportation. This program is not only helping the environment by "reducing carbon footprint, and traffic congestion" but it is also helping people to be healthier. this project is similar to mine because i want more people to use bikes rather than cars. since Bikes don't give off any gases to pollute the air, Many people ride their bikes to work and on errands instead of driving their cars and that's what i want to contribute in my community so more people will try it out.