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May 21, 2013

Posts by zahra


Total # Posts: 41

English :reposting
Hi, I need help seeing if I corrected the following correctly. #1-Incorrect: This is getting boring. I killed Hook no pirates, no adventures, and no one to boss around. I need to find a new adventure, but away from Neverland." Peter said. #1-My correction: This is getting...

English
Hi, I need help seeing if I corrected the following correctly. Incorrect: This is getting boring. I killed Hook no pirates, no adventures, and no one to boss around. I need to find a new adventure, but away from Neverland." Peter said. My correction: This is getting borin...

english
Hi, I was wondering if I answered the questions bellow correctly(after the story)and I really need help in fixing my grammar :| thank you :) "The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race," #38 Swapping Stories Bel Abbey, Elton, Louisiana I'm going to tell you about the s...

english Rewriting Folktales
hey this is the original question my work is at the end i really need help in grammar and checking my work thanxx In this lesson, you are going to rewrite the story "The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race" to make it more clear, and to correct the grammar. Go through t...

english grammar checking
thank you sooooooooooo much :)) thanx for all the help

english grammar checking
Hi; Just wondering if my grammar looks good.:) Some people find fables to be a negative thing because they are clearer then what they would actually be in reality. Like they teach children that the good always win or gain the good thing. I disagree with this view point because...

English grammar checking
Hi; Just wondering if my grammar looks good.:) Some people find fables to be a negative thing because they are clearer then what they would actually be in reality. Like they teach children that the good always win or gain the good thing. I disagree with this view point because...

checking if grammar is proper
thank you so so much :))))

checking if grammar is proper
Hi; I was wondering if my grammar looks good. Thank you I think teaching fables to children is a positive thing because fables teach children valuable lessons that will stay, and frame to the child’s characteristic. Like “The Three Little Pigs” fable teaches us ...

checking if i paraphrased correctly
I was wondering if I paraphrased correctly. The original article is:(my work is at the end ) Known as the "Napoleon of the women's rights movement," Susan B. Anthony was the co-founder (with Elizabeth Cady Stanton) of the National Woman Suffrage Association. When...

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