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May 26, 2013

Posts by luis


Total # Posts: 159

ENGLISH
I need to make sure I understand this. I need to rewrite each sentence twice, once as a periodic sentence and once as a cumulative sentence. To me, both look like cumulative sentences though, so I am a little confused. If someone could check my work I will be very grateful. 1)...

ENGLISH
Would someone please check my work. Thank you. Rewrite each sentence in an active voice 1) Mistakes were made. A)He made mistakes. 2) Musical legends such as Ray Charles, Billie Holiday, and Johnny Cash have all influenced Norah Jones A)Norah Jones was influenced by musical le...

English
Okay, I will keep that in mind. I appreciate the advice.

English
Honestly I feel like I did something wrong if I do not change the sentence in someway. I also thought it sounded better this way. How would have you written it?

English
Would someone please check my work. I need to combine the following sentences into one by using a semicolon. 1)Abalone fishing in California is strictly regulated. A person is allowed to harvest only twenty-four of these large mollusks per year. A)Abalone fishing in California...

English
Can anyone help me check my work please. I need to revise the paragraph to establish a clear antecedent for every pronoun that needs one. Original: In the summer of 2005, the NCAA banned the use of mascots that could be considered offensive to American Indians at any of their ...

English
I need to double check my work please. Revise to create pronoun-antecedent agreement and eliminate the generic he and any awkward pronoun reference. 1) While shopping for a new computer for school, I noticed that a laptop costs much less then they use to. A) While shopping for...

English
Can anyone help me with these. I need to eliminate unnecessary shifts in tense, mood, voice, or person. 1)The greed of the 1980’s gave way to the occupational insecurity of the 1990’s, which in turn gave way to reinforced family ties in the early 2000’s. A) Gree...

English
Hello, I am asking for these to be reviewed. I do not want answers; I just want to know if these answers look good. If you would just tell me which ones are wrong and why? Thank you for any help. Eliminate unnecessary shifts in tense, mood, voice, or person 1Q)The greed of the...

3rd grade math
how many packages of ribbon will sarah buy?

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