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October 2, 2014

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Art
This is the other paragraph I urgently need you to check. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1)I hope that in the future the consumerist societies will be defeated and that with the money, or better, with the resources that we put away we will help people who are more unlucky ...
May 26, 2012

Art
I still have four more paragraphs to check on the same theme. Thank you very much in advance. 1) The use of children in ads is an exploitation of the children's image. It's a way to earn audience as well as to sell a major number of products. 2) It is also a way to ...
May 26, 2012

Art
Thank you, Writeacher. I still have a few more paragraphs to check. 1)I think that ads can be very dangerous for children because they often show children happy for a kind of product, like a toy and so they want to be like them. 2) I think that parents should pay attention and...
May 26, 2012

Art
Writeacher, I urgently need to revise these sentences. I really hope you can help me. 1) Ads can change and can wash the minds of children. Some years ago people used to switch channels to avoid ads, but we do it less and less 2) Nowadays most people switch channels to avoid ...
May 26, 2012

Geometry
in circle p below the lengths of the parallel chords are 20,16, and 12. Find measure of arc AB..... the chord with a length of 20 is the diameter. the chords with lengths 16 and 12 are below the diameter torwards the bottom of the circle. arc AB is the arc made up of the ...
May 25, 2012

Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you very much. 1) In the past when adverts came on TV the majority of people used to turn down the volume or to switch channels (or switch over to another channel). However, they don’t do this now. 2) In the past ...
May 24, 2012

calculus
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May 24, 2012

science
How many kilograms of NH3 are needed to produce 1.00 x 10^5 kg of (NH4)2SO4?
May 23, 2012

science
How many kilograms of NH3 are needed to produce 2.90 x 10^5 kg of (NH4)2SO4?
May 23, 2012

math
a particle is moving along the graph of y=x^(1/3) when x=8 the y component of its position is increasing at the rate of 1 centimeter per second how fast is the x component changing at this moment
May 23, 2012

math
Tia has 24 black or white buttons. She has 10 more white buttons than black buttons. How many white buttons does Tia have?
May 22, 2012

Art
Could you please have a look at these sentences? Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1)We'll go on a bus sightseeing tour on which we'll admire the most famous attractions. 2) We are given a lunch box (by the hotel). 3) In the afternoon we'll go to the newly opened ...
May 22, 2012

Foreign languages
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) We are leaving for Rome tomorrow morning at 7.30 am. 2) We are meeting at the entrance of the bypass (ring road/orbital road) at 7.15 3) The bus journey will last about six hours. Two stops are ...
May 22, 2012

Art
Could you please check these sentences, too? Thank you very much. 1) The Augustan were interested in real life. As for politics/as far as politics is concerned, the two main political parties were teh Tories and the Whigs. 2) The poor used to live in terrible conditions. 3) ...
May 22, 2012

Foreign languages
I hope you can check these two long-winded sentences.Thank you 1) Pamela is writing to her family to tell her mum what happened to her, by accusing her master of hsi behaviour. 2) While they were in the summer house, Mr B kissed her but she had never talked about it to anybody...
May 22, 2012

Art
Can you please help me check a few things, Writeacher? Thank you. 1)The two political parties which alternated in government were the Whigs and the Tories. 2) The Whig ministers' meetings developed into the cabinet led by the Prime Minister. 3) It is composed of four books...
May 22, 2012

Math
7p-7/p divided by 10p-10/3p squared
May 21, 2012

Foreign languages
Can you please help me check these sentences, Writeacher? Thank you. 1) In the Augustan Age there were two parties: the Whigs supported by the wealthy commerical classes which pressed for undstrial and econmical development and religious toleration. 2) The Tories were ...
May 21, 2012

Art
Could you please check these few sentences? Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) The old man passed away (is "out" possible though the meaning is different) during the night. 2) The tests have to be handed in to the teacher before the end of the week. 3) I should do ...
May 21, 2012

Art
Writeacher, could you please check this sentence? Thank you. 1) He dropped me off at the post office. How would you rephrase it? He let me get (out of the car) at the post office. He made me get off the bus at the post office. within the end of the week is not the same as by/...
May 21, 2012

Art
Could you please help me to check these last sentences. Thank you, Writeacher. 1) The subtitle is referred (refers) to the reward given by Mr B to P. He tries to seduce her but she resists (better: his advances) and for this reason she receives from him a proposal of marriage...
May 20, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) My son has grown out of his shoes (not "frew out of.."), so we'll have to buy him new shoes (a new pair of shoes, a pair of new shoes .. are all possible?). We'll have to buy him a new ...
May 20, 2012

Art
Thank you very much. I still need you to check a few urgent things, Writeacher. 1)The line is engaged. Would you hold? Would you like to hold the line? Would you like to hang on/hold on? Which are possible? 2)You needn't have bought the milk; there was some already/there ...
May 20, 2012

Modern languages
Thank you very much again. Here are a number of sentences I would like you to check. 1) The Sundance film festival was launched by Robert Redford to promote first time film makers as well as low-budget independent (independently produced) films. 2) Redford says that the films ...
May 20, 2012

Art
Thank you very much, Writeacher. I left out the following statements. 1) The poem successfully expresses the modern artist’s disillusion with the modern world and, at the same time, the desperate need and search for a new tradition. 2) It also represents the culmination ...
May 20, 2012

Calculus
A Baseball Diamond has the shape of a square with sides 90 feet long. a player is running from 1st to 2nd base at a speed of 25 feet per second. find the rate at which his distance s is from home plate is changing when the player is 20 feet from 2nd base.
May 20, 2012

Calculus
A cone-shaped coffee filter is draining at a rate of 20 in^3 /min. The filter has a diameter of 8 inches. the radius of the filter is 2/3 the height. how fast is the coffee level falling when the coffee is 3 inches deep?
May 20, 2012

Art
Could you please check these sentences, too? Thank you very much. 1) The Waste Land is a complex long poem of 433 lines about a “waste land” which seems both personal and external. It is divided into five sections and is dedicated to Eliot’s friend and poet, ...
May 20, 2012

Art
Thank you for asking me about the earthquake which struck this morning near Bologna and has already killed 4 people. Luckily, we haven't felt it since we live further north! I find it difficult to check the following paragraphs in which tenses are mixed and the word choice...
May 20, 2012

Foreign languages
I forgot to add these sentences. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) He spends more on train tickets than he actually earns by working as a support teacher. 2) Pamela is an epistolary novel made up of 32 letter in which the girl tells her parents about her life as a noble ...
May 20, 2012

Art
Thank you, Writeacher. I checked the sentece you couldn't understand and I added a few other things. 1) He was responsible to the king for the governement's policy. 2) The horses, which Gulliver meets in his fourth voyage, are described as beautiful, strong, fast and ...
May 20, 2012

Foreign languages
I left out a few sentences. Thank you veru much. I need to make sentence 5 shorter. 1) In 1766 William Pitt the Elder was elected Prime Minister and he made England a strong and flourishing commercial country. 2) During the 18th century the middle class gained more and more ...
May 19, 2012

Foreign languages
I would like you, Writeacher to help me check a few sentences. Thank you. 1) English Parliament was divided into two parties: the Whigs and the Tories. The former descended from the Parlamentarians. 2) They encouraged commercial and trade (?) progress and were supported by the...
May 19, 2012

Econ
Suppose the government wants to reduce the total pollution emitted by three firms in its area. Currently, each firm is creating 4 units of pollution in the area, for a total of 12 pollution units. The government wants to reduce total pollution in the area to 6 units. In order ...
May 19, 2012

Art
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you. 1) They got him to give back the animal: He was persuaded to give back the animal. They had him give back the animal: He was requested (kindly invited) to give back the animal. 2) He forgot closing the door...
May 19, 2012

Art
I still have a few things I'd like you to consider, Writeacher. Thank you very much. 1) She refused to go to the dentist's We are planning to move into a new house. 2) They offered me to go for a week in Egypt: They offered to let me go to Egypt for a week. They ...
May 17, 2012

Health
I left out this part. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) Have you received any news about our common project? How are things getting on in England? When do school holidays start in England? 2) When do you think we will know if the Commission has approved our project? Please ...
May 17, 2012

Art
I left out these sentences. Could you please check them, too? Thank you. Is punctuation OK? 1) People suppose that he worked for Fiat. He is supposed to have worked... 2) Someone asked her about the weather. 3) My parents let me go on holiday on my own. 4)I’m terribly ...
May 17, 2012

Art
Can you please check these sentences, Writeacher? Thank you very much. 1) “I have been to Greece twice," he said. (He said that he had been to Greece twice) 2) It was the first time I had spent my vacation without my parents. Mary had done all the cleaning before/by ...
May 17, 2012

calculus
a rectagular sheet of metal has perimeter 36 meters. maximize the volume if the sheet is rolled into a cylinder
May 16, 2012

algebra
Determine which pair(s) of function(s)represent inverses of each other. 1. f(x)= 8x+1 g(x)= 8x-8 2. f(x)= 3x+2 g(x)= x-2/3 3. f(x)= 5x+2 g(x)= x/5-2
May 16, 2012

algebra
Given f(x)= x^2-4 and g(x)= x^1/2, what is the domain of (g 0 f)(x)?
May 16, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences. Thank you Writeacher. 1) The objective correlative is a phrase coined by Eliot himself, who maintained that poetry must be objective, impersonal, and images are the objective correlative of the emotions they aim to suggest (they evoke?). 2) ...
May 16, 2012

Art
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you. 1) Focus on Richardson’s Pamela and answer briefly the following questions. 2) What does Pamela recount to her mum in letter XV? 3) What does Mr B accuse her of and how does she apologize herself to him? 4) What ...
May 16, 2012

Art
Thank you, Writeacher. Could you please check if everything is possible? 1) What does Pamela recount to her mum in letter XV? What does Mr B accuse her of and how does she apologize herself to him (or justify her behaviour)?
May 16, 2012

Foreign languages
I left out the following sentence. Thank you. 1) I think you should show the text message to your teacher and ask his advice about what to do. (ask him for advice.... is it possible?)
May 16, 2012

Foreign languages
Writeacher, could you please check these sentences on school rules? Thank you very much for your invaluable help. 1) You must be respectful of your classmates and of your teachers. You should stand up when teachers (or your teachers?) enter the classroom. 2) You mustn't ...
May 16, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences on school rules. I really hope you can have a look at them, Writeacher! 1) I'm writing this letter because I would like to tell you some of the rules at my school. I hope you'll do the same. 2) You mustn't change or modify marks ...
May 15, 2012

algebra
Given f(x)= 5x^3-9, find the inverse of f, f^-1(x)=?
May 14, 2012

algebra
If f(x)= x^2-2, then f(x+h)=?
May 14, 2012

Art
Could you please check these examples and tell me if the sentences in brakets are possible? Thank you , Writeacher 1)Her boss is going to ask her out for dinner next Saturday. 2) The line is engaged. Would you like to hold? (Not: would you hold?) 3.Our coach told us that the ...
May 14, 2012

Art
Could you please check these few examples? Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) It is likely that he will pass his driving test. He is likely to pass his driving test. He should pass it. 2) I'm unsure that (if) I will pass it. I might pass it. It is possible that I will ...
May 14, 2012

Art
Have I fixed the run-on? Thank you very much, Writeacher. I added a few more sentences. 1) John doesn't have to take the car. We can walk to school. 2) Have you received any new emails from my students? How many have you got so far? 3) What are you students learning in ...
May 14, 2012

Foreign languages
Thank you, Writeacher. I left out the following sentences. Thank you very much. 1) Who has called the wrong number? His team has always been (or have always been?) worse than the others. 2) Have you read that book yet? No, I haven't finished it yet. 3) I've never flown...
May 14, 2012

Art
Writeacher, could you please check these sentences? Thanks. 3) It takes him half an hour to drive to school. 4)He has called the wrong number. 5) He paid 300 Euros for his wedding’s suit. 6) I phoned Mary yesterday morning. He started reading his new his new book three ...
May 14, 2012

algebra
how do i round 2/15 to the nearest tenth, hundreth and thousanth?
May 13, 2012

Health
I left out two last sentences, Writeacher. Could you please check them? 1) I have no credit on my phone. I need to top it up. 3) They are trying out a new vaccine against cancer.
May 13, 2012

Art
I would like you to check these last sentences? Thank you very much Writeacher. 1) They had an argument but they made it up. 2)They held up a bank but they managed to get away with it. 3) He needn't have bought a new map. 4) It wasn’t necessary for her to follow her ...
May 13, 2012

Foreign languages
Writeacher, could you please check these other sentences. Thank you. Fill in the blanks with a suitable preposition. 1) I regret ….. inform you that you didn’t pass your FCE test. 2) Lucy dreams of………(go) to live in Australia. The fire officer warned ...
May 13, 2012

Math
The cars in a car service use a total of gallons of gasoline per week. If each of the cars uses the same amount of gasoline, then, at this rate, which of the following represents the number of gallons used by 5 of the cars in 2 weeks? A. 10CG B. 2G/5C C. 5G/2C D. G/10C E. 10G/...
May 12, 2012

math
ok, let's make 6 equal to a number over 5. x/5=6. Since 5/5 is equal to one, to get 6 ones over 5, we multiply the numerator of 5 by 6. 5x6=30 so 6 equals 30/5. now let us ADD 1/5 to both sides to make: a/5=31/5 multiply by 5 to cancel out the denominators. we get a=31 so ...
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
CaC2 (s) + 2 H20 (g) -> Ca(OH)2 (s) + C2H2 (g) The complete reaction of 22.7 g of CaC2 requires consumption of ________g of H2O. I did 22.7 g CaC2* (2/64 mols CaC2) = .709 Right?!?!
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY!
Thankyou!
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY!
Pure copper has a density of 8.933 g/cm^3. What is the volume of a 5 g block of copper? I did D=M/v Flipped the formula to V=M/D V= 5g/8.933 (g/cm^3) so that equals .56 cm^3 Right?!?
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
Are these listed in the correct order of increasing average molecular speed? NH3<N2<CO2<SO2<Cl2 ???
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
A Sample of gas originally at 25 degrees C and 1 atm pressure in a 2.5 L container is allowed to expand until the pressure is .85 atm and the temperature is 15 degrees C. What is the final volume of gas? Did anyone get 2.6 L
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
I must have miss entered something! Thanks.
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
A Sample of gas originally at 25 degrees C and 1 atm pressure in a 2.5 L container is allowed to expand until the pressure is .85 atm and the temperature is 15 degrees C. What is the final volume of gas? Did anyone get 2.6 L
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
Is CF4 an example of a central atom with an expanded octet?
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
I get 61. But after that then what?
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
Determine the pressure in atm for a 10 g of CO2 sample contained in a sealed 10 L tank at 50degrees C? Did anyone get 26.5 atm?
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
Thats what I did! THANK YOU!
May 12, 2012

CHEMISTRY
A mixture of Xe, Kr, and Ar has a total pressure of 6.7 atm. What is the mole fraction of Kr if the partial pressures of XE and Ar are 1.6 atm and 2.8 atm? Did anyone get .343 ?
May 12, 2012

composition(paraphrase this paragraph)
Much of the gap between the schooling of orphans and non-orphans is explained by the greater tendency of orphans to live with more distant relatives or unrelated caregivers.
May 11, 2012

statistics
Suppose that 98% of your customers in your market have internet access and you select a random sample of 500 customers. What is the standard error of the proportion of customers who don’t have internet access? I seem to be struggling with no standard deviation listed
May 10, 2012

english
Please read the following excerpt from an essay, and answer the question that follows. Biologically, adolescence is marked by hormonal changes that produce secondary sexual characteristics. These include breast development in females and beard growth in males. (Psychologically...
May 10, 2012

Statistics
Compute a one-way ANOVA - Give the source table, test null hypothesis at .05 level. Please explain the steps to solving this. Group 1: 26, 34, 46, 48, 42, 49, 74, 61, 51, 53 EX 1 : 484 Ex 1^2 : 25,024 n = 10 Group 2: 51, 50, 33, 28, 47, 50, 48, 60, 71, 42 EX 2 : 480 EX 2^2 : ...
May 9, 2012

math
which equation = (1,1)and(0,-1)and (-2,-5) A.y=2x-1 orB.y=x-1 0r C.y=2x+1 or D. y=x+1
May 9, 2012

Chestry
Yes chemistry
May 8, 2012

Chestry
If there are 8.8 moles of h2 and co2 in a 500 ml container at equilibrium how many moles of co and h2o would be present?
May 8, 2012

english
i have to do an english presentaion for my grade 12 class about a book that i was assigned, how can i involve the class in my presentation?, the book i had to read is called "fall on your knees"
May 8, 2012

math
oh didnt see the the last sentence
May 7, 2012

math
7 hours
May 7, 2012

math
A telephone pole casts a shadow 16 feet long at the same time that a man 6 feet tall casts a shadow of 2.4 feet. How tall is the pole?
May 7, 2012

Algebra
120 meters of fencing is used to fence 3 sides of a dog park against an existing wall. if the width of the park is w, find the length of the field in terms of w
May 6, 2012

physics
during a process, 21.6 MJ of heat is added to closed system. if the internal energy is increased by 59.6 MJ, how much work in Btu was done? is the work done on ro by the system?
May 5, 2012

algebra 2
by gruoping...!!
May 5, 2012

phi 103
I brought a pair of shoes from that store that immediately fell apart. their shoes are no good. Does this falls under Begging the question fallacy?
May 5, 2012

Chemistry!!
1) Write balanced chemical equation for the oxidation of Fe^2+(aq) by S2O6^2-(aq)? 2)Write balanced chemical equation for the oxidation of Fe^2+ by N2O 3)Write balanced chemical equation for the oxidation of Fe^2+ by VO2+
May 4, 2012

math
Solve this system using elimination. If a single solution exists, write the solution as an ordered pair. Your answer will be an ordered pair, no solution, or infinitely many solutions 3a+5b=-19 5a-27b=145
May 3, 2012

English II - Animal Farm
My assignment is to find the human vice that each of the seven commandments intended to prevent in the novel, Animal Farm. First, I do not know what human vice the following two are supposed to prevent: Whatever goes upon two legs is an enemy. Whatever goes upon four legs, or ...
May 3, 2012

math
how long will $600K last, assuming it earns 6% a year with a withdrawl of 4% annually and inflation rate of 2%
May 2, 2012

math
Name the point of intersection for the following system, if it exists. Your answer will be an ordered pair, no solution, or infinitely many solutions. 4x-3y=-3 3x-y=-6
May 2, 2012

PHYSICS
a uniform stick weighing 50Newton is suspended from the ceiling while the other end of it rests on the floor and making an angle 60degree along with horizontal. the string makes a 15 degree angle with the vertical. find the minimum value of the coefficient of static friction ...
May 1, 2012

physics
a person 0f mass m = 60 kg walks along the radius from the periphery to the center of a circular platform of moment of inertia= 200kgm square and radius r = 3m. the disk is a rotating frictionless with angular velocity= 0.3 rad\s.find the angular velocity of the system when ...
May 1, 2012

Chem
If 20.0 L of a gas is cooled from 373 K to 273K, what is the new volume?
April 30, 2012

english
hey I'm a 9th grader and my english teacher give me a summative homework about rumors. He need us to write a problem that happen in school and also want us to answer or solve the problem about rumors.. I need help with it because I know nothing about rumors..
April 30, 2012

math
Name the point of intersection for the following system, if it exists. 4x – 3y = -3 3x – y = -6
April 30, 2012

@elena
nvm, i did it wrong. i already got the answer its 79% thanks
April 29, 2012

@elena
thank you so much help with the problem. i have trouble solving part b of the problem you helped me with. it told me to give it as a percentage, I got 10% but it is wrong. can you please help me Superman must stop a 190-km/h train in 180m to keep it from hitting a stalled car ...
April 29, 2012

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