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# Posts by john

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Art
Thank you very much, Writeacher. I'm posting the first part of my paraprase again because I failed to include the reference to the stanzas. 1) Dickinson’s poetic universe is characterized by personal deprivation. In particular, in poem 579, “I had been hungry, ...
June 10, 2012

Art
I left out these last sentences. I really hope you can have a look at it. It is very urgent! 1) She is the one outside the window, always watching other people indulging themselves on the pleasures of life. 2) When given the chance herself in this meal, however, she is tempted...
June 10, 2012

Art
Writeacher, I'm finding it difficult to rephrase the poem "I had been hungry all the Years" by Emily Dickinson. I wonder if you could help me. 1) Dickinson’s poetic universe is characterized by personal deprivation. In particular, in poem 579, “I had ...
June 10, 2012

Foreign languages
I really hope you are there, Writeacher. Can you suggest an internet site where I can find a comment on Emily Dickinson's "I had been hungry all the years"? Thank you veru much.
June 10, 2012

Foreign languages
I urgently need to find a very simple and concise summary (intermediate level of English) on the Lost Generation and Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby. Thank you.
June 10, 2012

chemistry
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June 9, 2012

chemistry
Mercury(Hg) has a density of 13.5 g/cm cubed. How much space would 50.0 g of mercury occupy? Calculate the mass in grams, of a 3 cubic inch cube of aluminum(Al). The density of aluminum(Al) is 2.5 g/cm cubed. NOTE:(1inch cubed =16.4 cm cubed
June 9, 2012

chemistry
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June 9, 2012

chemistry
Mercury(Hg) has a density of 13.5 g/cm cubed. How much space would 50.0 g of mercury occupy?
June 9, 2012

Finance
Often in personal finance we want to know what our \$1 investment today will be worth in 20 years. In business however, there is more concern with answering the question, “If I receive \$100 in 5 years, what is that worth today?” To answer this question, modify the ...
June 9, 2012

Finance
An annuity is developed and used based on the concept of time value of money. Please solve for the principle required when one retires so that a payment of \$1500.00 is received each month for 30 years (360 months). Assume that the interest rate for the payout is 5% and the ...
June 9, 2012

Physics
An electron travelling in the same direction that an electric field points initially has a speed of 4.21 ×107 meters per second. If the electric field has a magnitude of 2.28 ×104 N/C, how far does the electron travel before stopping?
June 7, 2012

Art
Here are the last sentences on the same theme. 1) This important feature makes power lines able to transport electric energy without any problem connected with dissipation of energy. They are useful in aerospace industry because they can keep a big amount of electric energy ...
June 4, 2012

Foreign languages
Thank you very much for checking this part on scientific English. Here is the last part. 1) The superconductors are also characterized by the so called Meissner-Ochsenfeld Effect. When a superconductor is put in (into) a magnetic field, it produces a magnetic field which ...
June 4, 2012

Foreign languages
Could you please check if this paragraph is possible in scientific English? Thank you, Writeacher. 1) Superconduction consists of a particular physical phenomenon which characterizes only superconductors. 2) These materials become superconductors when they are brought to the ...
June 4, 2012

Foreign languages
Thank you very much, Writeacher for checking my paragraph. Here is the last part. 1) Six months after being diagnosed with cancer, she was dead. HeLa cells have had a fundamental importance in scientific research. 2) Her living cells, which survive to this day have contributed...
June 4, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences. Thank you, Writeacher. 1)He writes to his mum about the incident. 2) He is critical of the war and turns against those who think that it is glorious and fitting to die for one's country. 3) His friend dies because he is not fast enough ...
June 4, 2012

Foreign languages
Writeacher, could you please tell me if 5 and 6 are possible? Thank you. 1) In 1951 an Afro-american woman was admitted to Johns Hopkins Hospital in Baltimore. 2) In those years scientists had been unsuccessfully trying to grow malignant human cells outside the body to ...
June 4, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) He feels tenfold more evil than Hyde but also more free. 2) He realizes a potion capable to split up his soul, to separate the good side from the evil one. 3) The image of his friend returns to the memory ...
June 3, 2012

math
what is 1.5% of \$2,ooo ,ooo.oo
June 2, 2012

Physics
A ball of mass 1.74 kg is dropped from a height y1 = 1.47 m and then bounces back up to a height of y2 = 0.83 m. How much mechanical energy is lost in the bounce? The effect of air resistance has been experimentally found to be negligible in this case, and you can ignore it.
June 2, 2012

Physics
Thank you!
June 1, 2012

Physics
A 69-kg skier moving horizontally at 4.1 m/s encounters a 21° incline. (a) How far up the incline will the skier move before she momentarily stops, ignoring friction? (b) How far up the incline will the skier move if the coefficient of kinetic friction between the skies ...
June 1, 2012

Physics
A man who is 6 ft tall is standing in front of a plane mirror that is 2 ft in length. If the mirror is placed lengthwise with its bottom edge 4 ft above the floor on a wall that is 5 ft away, how much of his image (i.e. what length of himself) can the man see? (Assume that his...
May 30, 2012

Science
Could you please check these sentences on LSD? Thank you, Writeacher. 1) LSD is a psychoactive substance capable of generating perceptual alterations. It was synthesized for the first time in 1938 by Albert Hoffman of Sandoz laboratories in Basel. 2) The full name of that ...
May 30, 2012

Art
I left out these last sentences. Thank you very much. 1) I was having dinner / I had been having dinner when the telephone rang. (If the two actions happen at the same time only the past continuous is possible) 2)I'm going to go on a scout camp for two weeks. I'm going...
May 30, 2012

Art
Can you please check these statements, Writeacher. Thank you. 1) If I hadn't been waiting for you, I wouldn't have arrived late. I was having dinner (not: I had been having dinner) when the telephone rang. 2) He told me he had lost the keys of his car (or his car keys...
May 30, 2012

Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
May 30, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences. Thank you very much for your invaluable help, Writeacher. 1) On my summer holiday(s) I’m competing in a chess tournament in the first week of July. It will probably be difficult because the best players will participate. 2) Where will ...
May 29, 2012

Art
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you, Writeacher. By the way, have you found anything on Henrietta Lacks? 1) When his wife puts his arms around him and kisses him, he faints. He explains this by saying that he has not been used to be touched by such a ...
May 29, 2012

Art
Could you please check the following corrections? Thank you, Writeacher 1) He offers her to let her remain in the country house. Correction: he offers to let her remain in the... 2) She invites her to remain... 3) He offers her to return to her parents. He offers to let her ...
May 29, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences, Writeacher. Thank you. 1) After that we’re having dinner (better we’ll have dinner) and after that we’ll go for a walk in the city centre. 2) On the next day we’ll first go on a sightseeing tour of (in ) the historic ...
May 29, 2012

Art
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you very much. 1)After that we are going (we'll go?which form would you use to describe your summer holiday?) on a guided tour of the science museum. 2) We'll spend some time in the city centre doing ...
May 28, 2012

Science
Thank you very much for your help. I will check major grammar mistakes tomorrow morning. Can you please have a quick look at the second part and tell me which sentences need to be revised? 1) However, their most striking feature was that these cells were able to reproduce and ...
May 28, 2012

Science
Writeacher, I urgently need to check this part regarding a scientific topic. I hope you can help me. Here is the first part. 1) In 1951 an American woman descended from African slaves freed named Henrietta Lacks, was admitted to Johns Hopkins Hospital in Baltimore. In those ...
May 28, 2012

HR
•Describe the difference between diversity and affirmative action?
May 28, 2012

Art
Could you please tell me which alternatives are possible? Thank you, Writeacher. 1) You usually ....... be at the airport two hours before your flight leaves. (have to; not must or should). 2) At most schools students can go on .... (a trip/on trips) (are both possible?) with ...
May 28, 2012

Art
Could you please check these sentences, Writeacher? Thank you. 1) I shouldn't leave money on the desk during the beak. 2) I have to call home if I'm feeling sick (I feel sick): 3) I have to bring all my school equipment to school. 4) I can get/take (both?) a snack from...
May 28, 2012

Math
You have aloan for 150,000 at 5% on a 30 yr mortgage. You plan to pay off your loan in 10 yrs. Do you want your loan to be figured using the Rule of 78 or the Unpaid Principle Balance Rule or something else.
May 27, 2012

art
I left out these very last sentences, Writeacher. Tahnk you very much. 1) Interactive advertising is an advertising technique which tries to make (better: create) contact with its clients. 2) In Sweden there is a law according to which (not for which) children cannot appear in...
May 27, 2012

Art
I left out a few other things. Could you please check them, too? 1) The difference about advertising today is that…..(or What is different about advertising today is….) 2) Children cannot oppose their appearance in ads. They cannot do anything against the appearance ...
May 27, 2012

Foreign languages
Thank you very much for helping me. Here are the very last sentences on the same theme. Thank you very much. 1) Over the years people have started watching ads more and more. 2) The way in which ads are made (?) has changed. The latest ads don’t just sell brands, they ...
May 27, 2012

Foreign languages
I left out the following doubts. I really hope you can consider them, too. 1) He has grown out of his shoes, so we'll need to buy him new ones. Hold the line is the same as hold on the line? 2) It wasn't necessary you bought the milk (wrong?). You needn't have ...
May 27, 2012

Art
I have tried to rephrase the sentences as you told me. Can you please have a look at them? 1)Finally, in my opinion, the way to solve the problem is very simple and consists in treating people in the same way. 2) People’s attitude to ads has changed. Instead of switching ...
May 27, 2012

Art
I still have a few sentences to check. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1)When an ad tries to create direct contact with people, we can talk about interactive advertising. 2) For example, an important chain of supermarkets in the UK divides (has divided) its customers into ...
May 27, 2012

Art
This is the other paragraph I urgently need you to check. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1)I hope that in the future the consumerist societies will be defeated and that with the money, or better, with the resources that we put away we will help people who are more unlucky ...
May 26, 2012

Art
I still have four more paragraphs to check on the same theme. Thank you very much in advance. 1) The use of children in ads is an exploitation of the children's image. It's a way to earn audience as well as to sell a major number of products. 2) It is also a way to ...
May 26, 2012

Art
Thank you, Writeacher. I still have a few more paragraphs to check. 1)I think that ads can be very dangerous for children because they often show children happy for a kind of product, like a toy and so they want to be like them. 2) I think that parents should pay attention and...
May 26, 2012

Art
Writeacher, I urgently need to revise these sentences. I really hope you can help me. 1) Ads can change and can wash the minds of children. Some years ago people used to switch channels to avoid ads, but we do it less and less 2) Nowadays most people switch channels to avoid ...
May 26, 2012

Geometry
in circle p below the lengths of the parallel chords are 20,16, and 12. Find measure of arc AB..... the chord with a length of 20 is the diameter. the chords with lengths 16 and 12 are below the diameter torwards the bottom of the circle. arc AB is the arc made up of the ...
May 25, 2012

Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you very much. 1) In the past when adverts came on TV the majority of people used to turn down the volume or to switch channels (or switch over to another channel). However, they don’t do this now. 2) In the past ...
May 24, 2012

science
How many kilograms of NH3 are needed to produce 1.00 x 10^5 kg of (NH4)2SO4?
May 23, 2012

science
How many kilograms of NH3 are needed to produce 2.90 x 10^5 kg of (NH4)2SO4?
May 23, 2012

math
a particle is moving along the graph of y=x^(1/3) when x=8 the y component of its position is increasing at the rate of 1 centimeter per second how fast is the x component changing at this moment
May 23, 2012

math
Tia has 24 black or white buttons. She has 10 more white buttons than black buttons. How many white buttons does Tia have?
May 22, 2012

Art
Could you please have a look at these sentences? Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1)We'll go on a bus sightseeing tour on which we'll admire the most famous attractions. 2) We are given a lunch box (by the hotel). 3) In the afternoon we'll go to the newly opened ...
May 22, 2012

Foreign languages
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) We are leaving for Rome tomorrow morning at 7.30 am. 2) We are meeting at the entrance of the bypass (ring road/orbital road) at 7.15 3) The bus journey will last about six hours. Two stops are ...
May 22, 2012

Art
Could you please check these sentences, too? Thank you very much. 1) The Augustan were interested in real life. As for politics/as far as politics is concerned, the two main political parties were teh Tories and the Whigs. 2) The poor used to live in terrible conditions. 3) ...
May 22, 2012

Foreign languages
I hope you can check these two long-winded sentences.Thank you 1) Pamela is writing to her family to tell her mum what happened to her, by accusing her master of hsi behaviour. 2) While they were in the summer house, Mr B kissed her but she had never talked about it to anybody...
May 22, 2012

Art
Can you please help me check a few things, Writeacher? Thank you. 1)The two political parties which alternated in government were the Whigs and the Tories. 2) The Whig ministers' meetings developed into the cabinet led by the Prime Minister. 3) It is composed of four books...
May 22, 2012

Math
7p-7/p divided by 10p-10/3p squared
May 21, 2012

Foreign languages
Can you please help me check these sentences, Writeacher? Thank you. 1) In the Augustan Age there were two parties: the Whigs supported by the wealthy commerical classes which pressed for undstrial and econmical development and religious toleration. 2) The Tories were ...
May 21, 2012

Art
Could you please check these few sentences? Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) The old man passed away (is "out" possible though the meaning is different) during the night. 2) The tests have to be handed in to the teacher before the end of the week. 3) I should do ...
May 21, 2012

Art
Writeacher, could you please check this sentence? Thank you. 1) He dropped me off at the post office. How would you rephrase it? He let me get (out of the car) at the post office. He made me get off the bus at the post office. within the end of the week is not the same as by/...
May 21, 2012

Art
Could you please help me to check these last sentences. Thank you, Writeacher. 1) The subtitle is referred (refers) to the reward given by Mr B to P. He tries to seduce her but she resists (better: his advances) and for this reason she receives from him a proposal of marriage...
May 20, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) My son has grown out of his shoes (not "frew out of.."), so we'll have to buy him new shoes (a new pair of shoes, a pair of new shoes .. are all possible?). We'll have to buy him a new ...
May 20, 2012

Art
Thank you very much. I still need you to check a few urgent things, Writeacher. 1)The line is engaged. Would you hold? Would you like to hold the line? Would you like to hang on/hold on? Which are possible? 2)You needn't have bought the milk; there was some already/there ...
May 20, 2012

Modern languages
Thank you very much again. Here are a number of sentences I would like you to check. 1) The Sundance film festival was launched by Robert Redford to promote first time film makers as well as low-budget independent (independently produced) films. 2) Redford says that the films ...
May 20, 2012

Art
Thank you very much, Writeacher. I left out the following statements. 1) The poem successfully expresses the modern artist’s disillusion with the modern world and, at the same time, the desperate need and search for a new tradition. 2) It also represents the culmination ...
May 20, 2012

Calculus
A Baseball Diamond has the shape of a square with sides 90 feet long. a player is running from 1st to 2nd base at a speed of 25 feet per second. find the rate at which his distance s is from home plate is changing when the player is 20 feet from 2nd base.
May 20, 2012

Calculus
A cone-shaped coffee filter is draining at a rate of 20 in^3 /min. The filter has a diameter of 8 inches. the radius of the filter is 2/3 the height. how fast is the coffee level falling when the coffee is 3 inches deep?
May 20, 2012

Art
Could you please check these sentences, too? Thank you very much. 1) The Waste Land is a complex long poem of 433 lines about a “waste land” which seems both personal and external. It is divided into five sections and is dedicated to Eliot’s friend and poet, ...
May 20, 2012

Art
Thank you for asking me about the earthquake which struck this morning near Bologna and has already killed 4 people. Luckily, we haven't felt it since we live further north! I find it difficult to check the following paragraphs in which tenses are mixed and the word choice...
May 20, 2012

Foreign languages
I forgot to add these sentences. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) He spends more on train tickets than he actually earns by working as a support teacher. 2) Pamela is an epistolary novel made up of 32 letter in which the girl tells her parents about her life as a noble ...
May 20, 2012

Art
Thank you, Writeacher. I checked the sentece you couldn't understand and I added a few other things. 1) He was responsible to the king for the governement's policy. 2) The horses, which Gulliver meets in his fourth voyage, are described as beautiful, strong, fast and ...
May 20, 2012

Foreign languages
I left out a few sentences. Thank you veru much. I need to make sentence 5 shorter. 1) In 1766 William Pitt the Elder was elected Prime Minister and he made England a strong and flourishing commercial country. 2) During the 18th century the middle class gained more and more ...
May 19, 2012

Foreign languages
I would like you, Writeacher to help me check a few sentences. Thank you. 1) English Parliament was divided into two parties: the Whigs and the Tories. The former descended from the Parlamentarians. 2) They encouraged commercial and trade (?) progress and were supported by the...
May 19, 2012

Econ
Suppose the government wants to reduce the total pollution emitted by three firms in its area. Currently, each firm is creating 4 units of pollution in the area, for a total of 12 pollution units. The government wants to reduce total pollution in the area to 6 units. In order ...
May 19, 2012

Art
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you. 1) They got him to give back the animal: He was persuaded to give back the animal. They had him give back the animal: He was requested (kindly invited) to give back the animal. 2) He forgot closing the door...
May 19, 2012

Art
I still have a few things I'd like you to consider, Writeacher. Thank you very much. 1) She refused to go to the dentist's We are planning to move into a new house. 2) They offered me to go for a week in Egypt: They offered to let me go to Egypt for a week. They ...
May 17, 2012

Health
I left out this part. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) Have you received any news about our common project? How are things getting on in England? When do school holidays start in England? 2) When do you think we will know if the Commission has approved our project? Please ...
May 17, 2012

Art
I left out these sentences. Could you please check them, too? Thank you. Is punctuation OK? 1) People suppose that he worked for Fiat. He is supposed to have worked... 2) Someone asked her about the weather. 3) My parents let me go on holiday on my own. 4)I’m terribly ...
May 17, 2012

Art
Can you please check these sentences, Writeacher? Thank you very much. 1) “I have been to Greece twice," he said. (He said that he had been to Greece twice) 2) It was the first time I had spent my vacation without my parents. Mary had done all the cleaning before/by ...
May 17, 2012

calculus
a rectagular sheet of metal has perimeter 36 meters. maximize the volume if the sheet is rolled into a cylinder
May 16, 2012

algebra
Determine which pair(s) of function(s)represent inverses of each other. 1. f(x)= 8x+1 g(x)= 8x-8 2. f(x)= 3x+2 g(x)= x-2/3 3. f(x)= 5x+2 g(x)= x/5-2
May 16, 2012

algebra
Given f(x)= x^2-4 and g(x)= x^1/2, what is the domain of (g 0 f)(x)?
May 16, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences. Thank you Writeacher. 1) The objective correlative is a phrase coined by Eliot himself, who maintained that poetry must be objective, impersonal, and images are the objective correlative of the emotions they aim to suggest (they evoke?). 2) ...
May 16, 2012

Art
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you. 1) Focus on Richardson’s Pamela and answer briefly the following questions. 2) What does Pamela recount to her mum in letter XV? 3) What does Mr B accuse her of and how does she apologize herself to him? 4) What ...
May 16, 2012

Art
Thank you, Writeacher. Could you please check if everything is possible? 1) What does Pamela recount to her mum in letter XV? What does Mr B accuse her of and how does she apologize herself to him (or justify her behaviour)?
May 16, 2012

Foreign languages
I left out the following sentence. Thank you. 1) I think you should show the text message to your teacher and ask his advice about what to do. (ask him for advice.... is it possible?)
May 16, 2012

Foreign languages
Writeacher, could you please check these sentences on school rules? Thank you very much for your invaluable help. 1) You must be respectful of your classmates and of your teachers. You should stand up when teachers (or your teachers?) enter the classroom. 2) You mustn't ...
May 16, 2012

Art
I left out the following sentences on school rules. I really hope you can have a look at them, Writeacher! 1) I'm writing this letter because I would like to tell you some of the rules at my school. I hope you'll do the same. 2) You mustn't change or modify marks ...
May 15, 2012

algebra
Given f(x)= 5x^3-9, find the inverse of f, f^-1(x)=?
May 14, 2012

algebra
If f(x)= x^2-2, then f(x+h)=?
May 14, 2012

Art
Could you please check these examples and tell me if the sentences in brakets are possible? Thank you , Writeacher 1)Her boss is going to ask her out for dinner next Saturday. 2) The line is engaged. Would you like to hold? (Not: would you hold?) 3.Our coach told us that the ...
May 14, 2012

Art
Could you please check these few examples? Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) It is likely that he will pass his driving test. He is likely to pass his driving test. He should pass it. 2) I'm unsure that (if) I will pass it. I might pass it. It is possible that I will ...
May 14, 2012

Art
Have I fixed the run-on? Thank you very much, Writeacher. I added a few more sentences. 1) John doesn't have to take the car. We can walk to school. 2) Have you received any new emails from my students? How many have you got so far? 3) What are you students learning in ...
May 14, 2012

Foreign languages
Thank you, Writeacher. I left out the following sentences. Thank you very much. 1) Who has called the wrong number? His team has always been (or have always been?) worse than the others. 2) Have you read that book yet? No, I haven't finished it yet. 3) I've never flown...
May 14, 2012

Art
Writeacher, could you please check these sentences? Thanks. 3) It takes him half an hour to drive to school. 4)He has called the wrong number. 5) He paid 300 Euros for his wedding’s suit. 6) I phoned Mary yesterday morning. He started reading his new his new book three ...
May 14, 2012

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