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April 23, 2014

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Grammar (Writeacher)
Much better. Those details are excellent to include!

Grammar (Writeacher)
Ahhh, but you deleted some good details! How can you keep those details in, but not all in one sentence?

Grammar (Writeacher)
I haven't read this, so I can't comment on content. 1. This is FAR too long for one sentence. How can you revise so no meaning is lost, but it's divided into 3 or so sentences? This is certainly not the sort of wife I would have imagined for Mr. Johnson as Mrs. Joh...

English
A hyphen looks like this: - A dash looks like this: --

English
The fourth sentence is correct. Study this carefully and re-think the other sentences. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/dash.htm

English
Between acts, the theater was completely dark, but the orchestra continued to play anyway. I see no need for any hyphens in that sentence. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/hyphen.htm

English
The first two and the fourth are fine. Re-think the third sentence.

English
Put a space after the semicolon in the first sentence. Then all will be correct.

English
Sentence 2 reads funny without quotation marks. The colon after "Sir" is correct IF you're writing a formal business letter, but to include this phrasing in a regular sentence, there should be quotation marks. I guess you should go with what you have, but I still...

English
Sentences 1, 3, and 4 are correct. In the original of sentence 2, are there any quotation marks, too?

English
Correct.

English Answer Check (Writeacher)
Much better!

English Answer Check (Writeacher)
How can you rephrase without using the word "your"? Surely, you don't mean ME!!

English
No ... read carefully ... Each year, she selects vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside. That's why I enjoy gardening," Fay said.

English
No comma needed here ~~> "but, the... Two errors are in here: one comma is missing; one comma should be a period. Each year she selects her best vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I ...

Math? Science?
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Social Studies
Sounds right. =)

Social Studies
Read, read, read ... and let us know what you decide. http://www.google.com/#q=Treaty+of+Guadalupe+Hidalgo

computers
Someone here will be happy to check your answers.

English
Right.

English
All correct, yes.

English
All are right.

English
Commas are all correct. Be sure there are closing quotation marks for the 4th sentence.

English
Do you mean "to see"? If so, the commas are all correct.

English
Correct ... all of them! =)

English
2 and 3 are correct. There's one comma missing from the first one.

English
All are correct.

life orientation
http://www.diabetes.org/diabetes-basics/symptoms/

English
Angels is right.

english
No one will write your assignment for you. If you want to post what you write, though, someone here will check it for you.

College Cultural Geography
Make sure you are clear on the meanings of "universalism" and "colonialism." http://www.answers.com ~~~~~~~~~ It is not possible to proclaim global human rights, on the one hand, and to have a Muslim, African, Jewish, Christian, or Asian charter of human ri...

English
Isn't fire fast? The flames move very quickly. Fires can consume all kinds of things very fast. What else can you think of?

Math??
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English Answer Check
I see no change after my comments here: http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1393784330 ...answer repeats too much of the question and then you don't explain what you mean by "facing your own demons."

Reading skills
Have you looked each word or phrase up? http://www.answers.com

history
I'd choose F.

English
No answer! Well, the directions here will help you, too. http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/poetry-explications/

English
First of all, study (memorize if you have to!) the definitions here: http://www.answers.com/topic/prosody and http://www.uncg.edu/~htkirbys/meters.htm When you are ready for the next step, let me know.

English Answer Check
Your second answer makes sense. Your first answer repeats too much of the question and then you don't explain what you mean by "facing your own demons."

english
Both are correct, but the first is smoother.

Maths Literacy,Life Sciences,History,Geography
Be sure to read through Related Questions below ... and the responses.

poetry part 2
http://www.cummingsstudyguides.net/Guides3/Grass.html#Themes Let us know what you decide.

Literature
You're welcome.

Literature
I haven't, but this may help: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/invisibleman/

Literature
Have you read the book?

philosophy (john dewey)
I really don't know, but perhaps you'll find what you're looking for in one or more of the websites linked here: http://www.google.com/search?q=expected+outcome+or+pattern+of+Developed+Standards+of+%22Rules+of+Conduct%22&oq=expected+outcome+or+pattern+of+Developed+...

us history
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_Gospel Read very carefully.

ela
The answer will be "none of the above" for one very clear reason. Do you see it?

ela -- ??
No opinion yet??

ela
So now you need to find the poem called "Another Mountain" ... not Miley Cyrus's song!! I entered another mountain poem in Google and found this: http://www.lauhead.com/sarahspage.htm Read it all, and let us know what you think the answer is.

ela
OK, be sure to learn how to look these things up on Google or Bing. I looked up just the quoted section on Google, and this is one of the links that came up: http://www.phillipsprep.com/Common/Assignments/PrintAssignment.asp?StaffID=3802&AssignmentID=571851&SchoolID=45

Poetry?
What is the title and who is the author of this? Out of context, it's very hard to tell.

Business Law II
You're very welcome! =)

Business Law II
I think the Gramm-Leach... choice is the correct one, but I'm not an econ teacher. From everything I read in the link I gave you above, it seems to fit what this question is asking.

Business Law II
In addition to your textbook, be sure to look up information about all the choices online. Here's one: http://www.google.com/search?q=Gramm-Leach-Bliley+Privacy+Act&oq=Gramm-Leach-Bliley+Privacy+Act&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.4525j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8...

Business Law II
And what do you think?

Math-5th grade.HELP!
5/6 = 10/12 <~~right? 1/4 gallon in 5 seconds = 1 gallon in 20 seconds <~~right? (Do you see why?) How long will it take to fill the tank to the 10-gallon mark?

English
Thesis: The destruction of Thebes is caused by Creon’s disregard of prophecy when he becomes too arrogant; this results in the Antigone’s rebellion which causes in a broader civil war. This is not a thesis statement yet. You are simply telling the overall plot line. ...

Educational Technology and Online Learning
... spreadsheet or database ...

Educational Technology and Online Learning
Field names go across the top of a spreadsheet. Under each field name is a column or category of information.

English
All are right, yes.

English
All are correct.

English
I agree with you on all of them.

English
All correct.

English
All are correct, yes.

English
Correct.

Social Studies
I agree with you about 1 and 4. I have no idea about 2 and 3, but you might find some help here: http://www.google.com/#q=texas+history

English
All your choices are correct.

English
I agree.

English
No idea! What is underlined?

phi208 Ethics and moral reasoning
Please read carefully what you posted. Do you understand why ONLY YOU can answer these questions?

Current World History
Read, read, read -- http://www.google.com/search?q=ukraine&oq=ukraine&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.1298j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8#q=ukraine&tbm=nws

English
And you think it's ... ?

grammar
LV S Or are you using some specific type of sentence pattern identification?

drawing
Please do not type in all-caps. It's considered rude (shouting) on the Internet. Thanks. 24 divided by 6 = ?

hardware
Look up terms here: http://www.webopedia.com/

English
http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/villanelle.html Here's an example of a very famous villanelle: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15377

english
What do you think it is? in MEDIAS res

English
Correct

English
Right

language arts
Right

English
You have the prepositions right. Not all the prep phrases, though.

Englilsh
... study both ...

Englilsh
There are 3 prep phrases in #1, two in #2 ... Why are you finding the prepositions without also finding each prep phrase? Go back to chompchomp and study boy he preps AND prep phrases.

English
http://www.chompchomp.com/terms.htm Find the topics you need, and read and study well.

English
1. Correct 2. "at the mall" is the prepositional phrase. There are errors all through the rest. Please study prepositions and their phrases more, and try again.

English
"Sing like no one is listening, dance like no one is watching..." Isn't that a quotation from someone? Mark Twain maybe? DO NOT PLAGIARIZE!

English
Ms Sue is right. Your answers are correct.

English
Yes

English
Be sure you go back over the link Ms. Sue gave you very carefully. Then go back over all these to find and correct your errors.

English Grade 11
Anonymous is partly right, but not completely. Look up both words in these websites: http://www.etymonline.com/ and http://www.dictionary.com

Social Studies
Are you clear on what an Internet Cafe is? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Internet_caf%C3%A9 Are you clear on what a "capital good" is? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Capital_good Which of those four would you find in use in an Internet Cafe?

Business,history,geography and maths lit
Just about anything you want! Read through the Related Questions below.

Year 9 English
http://www.google.com/#q=story+ideas+gothic

English
The first one will be correct if you put hyphens in the right places. You need 3 hyphens here. Do you know where to put them?

English
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm Scroll down and read #5 carefully. Then let us know whether you think A or C is correct.

grammar
It all depends on context. What is the whole paragraph?

Social Studies
You're very welcome. =)

Social Studies
Yes, true. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/France_in_the_American_Revolutionary_War

language
http://writeacherhelps.blogspot.com/search/label/Sentence%20type Scroll down. Read about types of sentences (simple, compound, etc.), and let us know what you think.

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