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July 26, 2014

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social studies
http://www.google.com/search?q=jerusalem+daily+life&oq=jerusalem+daily+life+&aqs=chrome.1.69i57j0l2.9265j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read through many of these, and let us know what you decide to write.

grammar
Use "they" -- yes.

grammar - conjunction
All are correct except for #4. How will you change that?

grammar - conjunction
1) Though poor himself, he tried to help others. Now ... you try the rest, and someone here will check your answers.

physiology and health
Someone here will be happy to check what YOU THINK.

A.P English
It is NOT in actions or events. It's in the wording. Have you heard or read any of JFK's or Martin Luther King's speeches? Look them up, especially JFK's inaugural speech and MLK's I Have a Dream speech.

A.P English
Did you read the examples in the linked article that Ms Sue gave you yesterday? http://literarydevices.net/parallelism/ Also there's this: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm Parallelism is in the phrasing, not in the repeated actions in a story or poem ...

home economics
http://www.google.com/search?q=costs+and+consequences+of+subsidies+welfare&oq=costs+and+consequences+of+subsidies+welfare&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.14610j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read lots of these articles. Who gets taxed? Who decides who gets help? Etc.

modern wrld history
1. Go to http://www.google.com 2. Type in rain forest importance 3. Press the Enter key. 4. Read, read, read, and take good notes.

English help please
You're welcome!

English help please
Is this for the works cited list? Or for the in-text citation. If for the latter, there are none correct. If for the former, A is correct.

english
Lack of seat belts Lack of airbags Possible lack of vehicle safety checks before each use What else can you think of?

history
None, apparently.

grammAr
Get rid of these words: "and I share a three year age gap as she"

grammAr
I fixed the other sentence. Now you try this one, and I'll check it for you. The main thing is to get rid of repeated, unnecessary words.

h school -- ?
None, apparently.

math
"fizz" has also posted as "bella twins" and "amy" below. Sounds like a DIFM game-player to me!

reading
Just forget the first clause. Begin the sentence with "We need a ... "

History
#2 is also incorrect. Have you actually read Locke's work? And Rousseau's? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Locke http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jean-Jacques_Rousseau

environmental science
Read, read, read ... http://www.google.com/search?q=Blue+Plains+Water+Advanced+Wastewater+Treatment+Plant+standards&oq=Blue+Plains+Water+Advanced+Wastewater+Treatment+Plant+standards&aqs=chrome..69i57.1879j0j8&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8

Social Studies/History
PS: This is not a social network website. Please use Twitter or Facebook or Chacha or whatever else to ask personal questions and/or post nonsense on other people's posts.

Social Studies/History
Read lots: http://www.ipu.org/dem-e/guide/guide-2.htm http://www.answers.com/topic/democracy http://www.answers.com/topic/representative-democracy

Social Studies/History
Early = ?? 500 BC ? 1100 AD ? 1791 AD ? or ... ?? Where?

GOVERNMENT
You're welcome.

GOVERNMENT
Go to http://www.google.com Enter your search terms. Press the Enter key. Read, read, read. http://www.google.com/search?q=TOP+5+PERFORMING+MUTUAL+FUNDS+in+us&oq=TOP+5+PERFORMING+MUTUAL+FUNDS+in+us&aqs=chrome..69i57j0.9180j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8

ENGLISH
My suggestion is that you write as you normally do, and make sure you are following the writing process. Once you have the rough draft of your paper done ... NOT including the introduction and conclusion ... you can edit for content AND double-check all the verb tenses. http:/...

Grammar
The first. "Nor" is usually used as a correlative conjunction, in company with "Neither."

English check answers !
Your revised answers 2, 3, and 4 are correct. 1 is incorrect. Exactly WHAT is in parentheses?

English 1
You should also read about Proposition Statement and Refutation here. http://powa.org/index.php/convince/form-tradition-and-innovation

English 1
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/03/ Claim: The overall thesis the writer will argue for. Counterclaim: A claim that negates or disagrees with the thesis/claim. So far, there seems to be something missing between the claim and your sentence that's supposed t...

English 1
To be sure, we'd have to know what the claim is. Let us know.

sitcom analysis
Sitcoms are not known for their subtlety or deep thinking. I have no idea what you're referring to, but if you have watched whatever show this is, you should not have trouble answering these questions!!

multiplying fractions
If you have 3 cats and you feed them 1/4 cup of dry food each evening, how much food does each cat get? 1/3 x 1/4 = __ cup per cat How can you draw this so it makes sense?

English
I've never read it, but if it's a novel that's based on a real occurrence, then it's referred to as an historical novel.

Language Check
You're welcome ... be sure to check below for your other posts.

Language Check
Yes, the rest of your new list are correct.

Language Check
Your original 8 was correct. 10 is incorrect. ("None" is singular, not plural.)

Language Check
1 is incorrect. The subject is "everybody" (singular), so choose the SINGULAR verb. 2. is correct. 3. is incorrect. The subject is "Pictures" (plural), so choose the PLURAL verb. You check the rest and repost, and I'll take another look for you.

English
http://www.google.com/search?q=dalai+lama+acceptance+speech+nobel+peace+prize&oq=dalai+lama+acceptan&aqs=chrome.3.69i57j0l5.7659j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read through several of these search results and let us know what YOU THINK. Someone here will check your wor...

English
Where? When?

Language HELP
1. Oridnary houses or a public building <~~subject sometimes present problems for people with disabilities. Since the subject closer to the verb is singular, use the SINGULAR verb form. "presents" 2. For example, a person<~~subject using a wheelchair or crutche...

History
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cincinnatus

English Help Please!!! Check!!
a. Your explanation regarding your comatose state was not accepted because you failed to apply on time. b. To deal with patients that have life threatening illness, the critical-care nurses should not lack medical and interpersonal skills, essential factors in the improvement ...

internet
http://www.webopedia.com/

internet
http://www.google.com/search?q=packet+jitter&oq=packet+jitter&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.2987j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read everything you can in these search results; you should find answers to your questions somewhere in here. And here's another place for search...

internet
http://www.google.com/search?q=packet+jitter&oq=packet+jitter&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.2987j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read everything you can in these search results; you should find answers to your questions somewhere in here. And here's another place for search...

internet
http://www.google.com/search?q=packet+jitter&oq=packet+jitter&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.2987j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read everything you can in these search results; you should find answers to your questions somewhere in here. And here's another place for search...

letter
Read lots in these search results to get some ideas: http://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+write+a+get+well+letter&oq=how+to+write+a+get&aqs=chrome.2.69i57j0l5.6504j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8

Language Arts
Anonymous is correct.

English
Be sure to read through Related Questions below.

History
http://www.google.com/search?q=how+World+War+II+changed+the+roles+of+women&oq=how+World+War+II+changed+the+roles+of+women&aqs=chrome..69i57.6086j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Feel free to change the search terms after you've gotten everything you can from these se...

English
Jerome is right except for #5, in my opinion! "in the field" works as well as "on the field" does.

us history
You write it up, and someone here will be happy to critique your thinking and writing.

shakespeare
Read some good biographies about Shakespeare. Here are some: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shakespeare http://www.bardweb.net/

IT
"most important" indicates an opinion is needed. Whose opinion?

tech
Machine to human: Alarm clock on phone or tablet Machine to machine: faxing Yes, the others are fine.

tech
Yes, to your questions about Twitter. Alarm clock on phone or tablet Faxing process

Social Studies
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1398192411

Social Studies
Read, read, read ... http://www.google.com/search?q=india+in+1858&oq=india+in+1858&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.8853j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8

Language arts Mrs.Sue check Plz
http://www.answers.com/pollution http://www.answers.com/smokestacks http://www.answers.com/resources Be clear on definitions. Don't guess.

English
This is an example of using correct correlative conjunctions: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/conjunctions.htm#correlative_conjunctions

Elizabethan England
http://www.bardweb.net/ The table of contents is the list at the left. Read lots.

hsm 220
No one will do all your work for you, but here are some ideas: First of all, you need to know what your drop-out prevention plan is: how many people are needed (employees), where will the employees work; what equipment and supplies will be needed; and so forth. 1st priority .....

English
Lead off with the positives. End with the rent increase.

English
All mean about the same thing, but 4 and 6 aren't used very often. For #7, another word for a professional cook is a "chef."

english
All are fine, yes. =)

writing
Wrong verb! The subject is "one" (singular) so what verb do you need?

english
http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/giver/

english
I have no idea, but you might find out in the book ... or here: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/giver/

english
http://www.google.com/search?q=characteristics+of+an+effective+television+newscaster&oq=effective+television+newsc&aqs=chrome.2.69i57j0l2.7767j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8

Grammar
Make sure you don't use the movie's title as your whole title. It's already taken, and probably copyrighted. Use the movie's title in your own title.

6th grade Lang Arts
Study this page and let us know what you think: http://flang1.kendall.mdc.edu/4/414/L414lecture2/essentialClauses.htm

Language Arts
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1395441094

<3
Your amazing bro, your my inspiration <3

mw2 jailbreak?
Thanks Jiskha do you mod, mw2 jailbreak?

Computer Literacy
How old are you? are you a Student, I'm 32 years old. You sound very inappropriate, thanks for the number, I will keep it and phone your parents. Very naughty girl! what school are you in? TELL ME ALL!

Computer Literacy
what's telephone number?

Computer Literacy
I agree with you about these.

Computer Literacy
Incorrect: 2, 4, 10. I don't know about 5, 7, 8.

English
And a capital A.

English
Neither ... You should use a colon after "Hammurabi."

Social Studies (History)
http://www.google.com/search?q=Fred+Korematsu&oq=Fred+Korematsu&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.3076j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 http://www.google.com/#q=Homer+Plessy Let us know what you decide.

social studies
Good grief! http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1398115769 Please develop some patience!

English
How about "Where is the Bermuda Triangle?" And "What are the statistics about disappearances?" (how many people have disappeared over what period of time? where? when?)

social studies
I agree with you on c. " ... the court denied Scott's request" -- so it can't be d. If it had been d, it wouldn't have reached the court in the first place.

social studies
Are these your answer choices? a. Dred Scott should be considered free since he had lived in many states where slavery was banned. b. Dred Scott could be free if he paid a fee. c. Dred Scott was still a slave and not a citizen. d. The case never reached the Supreme Court. Plea...

social studies
Now, you're just guessing. Reread and rethink ... and then let me know which one you choose AND WHY? What words in what I quoted above are the basis of your choice?

social studies
" ... in which the Court held that African Americans, whether slave or free, could not be American citizens and therefore had no standing to sue in federal court, and that the federal government had no power to regulate slavery in the federal territories acquired after th...

social studies
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dred_Scott_v._Sandford

Criminal Justice - Ethics
I agree with your first answer, but not the second.

parallel structures
This is the problem area in that sentence: ... it was both surprising and a revolution in its special effects. surprising = participle, serving as an adjective revolution = noun You'll need to make them both adjectives or both nouns. There is no one right answer! Give it a...

BIOLOGY
Since Jiskha doesn't have a biology expert at this time, please try posting your question at this site. http://www.biology-online.org/biology-forum/

English
Right

GEOGRAPHY 9
So ... none of the answers is correct. But I guess "d" comes closest. You really need to complain to your teacher about this. Tang = Chinese name Shogunate = Japanese term All "Edit" forms should read "Edict" There is no Edict of Japan, but there ...

GEOGRAPHY 9
You need to look up each of those terms here: http://www.google.com Let us know what you think.

English
In which country or culture? Africa is a BIG continent?

English Help Please!!! Check!!
1. I'd go with your second revised sentence. 2. Looks good, but you needs to use "groups" instead of "group." 3. and 4. ~ Try these things: ~ draw lines through any unneeded or repetitive words or phrases. ~ locate any passive verbs and figure out how t...

Penn Foster
http://www.answers.com/topic/dramatic-irony

English
#1 is correct. #2 is somewhat OK, but not commonly used. #3 is incorrect word order.

US history
All are incorrect. Go back and study instead of guessing. PS -- He was Dr. Martin Luther King, jr.

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