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April 20, 2014

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writing
I have no idea. What's the question???

SS
Again I ask: Have you read Exodus? There is a clear connection between the events in Exodus and the formation of the country of Israel after WWII.

SS
Have you read the book of Exodus in the Old Testament? http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/oldtestament/section4.rhtml

history - incomplete
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English
... and you think it's ... ??

Health Ethics
I'd start with what the basic HIPAA laws include and don't include. You also will need to decide if you are more pro or more con (and state so in your thesis statement. Start here: http://scholar.google.com/scholar?hl=en&q=hipaa+laws&btnG=&as_sdt=1%2C44&as_sdtp= and ht...

English Question
No, that would be fine. Be sure to include the edition of the dictionary, too.

English
1. He is trying to hit a ball. It seems that he is holding a bat. What does he like to do? He likes to play baseball. All OK. 2. She is mimicking playing the guitar. What is she good at? She is good at playing the guitar. 3. He is jumping with his mouth open, shouting. Look at...

Science
No one will take your test or do your homework for you. If you post what YOU THINK the answers are, though, a science tutor may be able to check them for you.

English
All are grammatically correct, but only 2 and 3 are commonly used. 4 doesn't mean the same thing as the others; this last question is asking what does Ted consider to be special, probably in someone else, not himself.

Civics
Who is "the U.S."? All the people in the country? Or just some of the elected/appointed people in DC? Are you sure it's democracy that's being encouraged? Or is it more like self-determined government rather than a monarchy or dictatorship or tyranny?

Social Studies
No one here will do your assignments for you, but if you post what YOU WRITE, someone here will check your work for you. Look up the terms here, if you are not clear on their meanings and uses: http://www.answers.com/index http://www.answers.com/scale

psychology
1. Go to http://www.google.com 2. Type in psychological theories of crime (or whatever search terms you need). Press Enter. 3. Read different search results until you find what you need. 4. Re-search with different search terms if you don't find all you need.

social studies
Read, read, read, and let us know what you decide to write: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Akhenaten and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ramses_II

History
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zbigniew_Brzezinski Read carefully.

AED
Read, read, read, and then let us know what you think. http://www.google.com/#q=south+dakota+school+choice

English
Yes, it should.

ESL
http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/micemen/quotes.html Scroll down to #5 and read carefully.

ESl
Not "like"!! The exact sentence. What is it?

ESL
What is the last sentence of the book? Please type it here.

Language
You're welcome!

Language
Present participles and gerunds all end in -ing, as you no doubt know. Participles, since they are adjectives, will be describing someone or something. Gerunds, since they serve as nouns, will not describe anything, but will be recognizably in one of the primary noun spots in ...

English: Please Help
List the corrections you have made ... type them out. Clearly copying/pasting is not working on your computer!

English
Right

please check(Social studies)
#13 is now correct.

please check(Social studies)
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1393899525

african american studies
No one here will do your assignments for you, but if you post what YOU THINK for each of these questions, someone here will check over your answers. Use these sites to search for answers: http://www.google.com http://en.wikipedia.org

PRACTICAL ENGLISH PROCTORED EXAM
In which sentence is the subject DOING the action of the verb? The subjects are ... ~ bill ~ mother ~ boy ~ We

art
http://www.google.com/#q=mixing+colors+with+crayons

LITERACY
APA guidelines: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/01/

english
http://www.chompchomp.com/terms.htm I see 2 verbs and 3 nouns in here. Check out the Verb and Noun links here, and let us know what you decide.

Chemistry?

Spelling
There are no repeated letters of either type in that word.

Mrs.Sue i have the CORRECT ANSWERS !
Oh, I see what Ms. Sue means. I agree with her about #12.

Mrs.Sue i have the CORRECT ANSWERS !
#s 12 and 14 are correct now. But how could you get #12 correct and miss #13? Think about how they are related.

history (presidents)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Us_presidents Scroll down to see the whole list and their dates in office. Let us know what you decide.

English/Literature/Poetry (Writeacher)
No problem. Good thing you answered them. I've never read this!!

Grammar
You don't need the comma after "awareness" because that "and" isn't joining two clauses. The other comma is correct.

world history
Read, read, read ... and let us know what you decide to write. http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/571673/Suez-Canal http://geography.about.com/od/specificplacesofinterest/a/suezcanal.htm http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Suez_Canal

Definitely not English!
Damon's right!

English
Not quite. Try this: It was part of the play -- imagine that! -- meant to add suspense.

English
The first two are fine. The third one reads funny; I think the second dash needs to be moved. Do you see where? Read the sentence out loud. I don't know if your text addresses this, but I'd also add an exclamation point in each one. Here's how: There was a loud boo...

Grammar (Writeacher)
You're welcome!

Grammar (Writeacher)
Very good. I think you're done! =)

Grammar (Writeacher)
One more thing ... ... I never would have imagined a person such as her to be his wife. (Since the subject of that sentence is "I," it's incorrect to use the reflexive form of a different pronoun. Reflexives are used to refer to the subject of a sentence.)

Grammar (Writeacher)
Much better. Those details are excellent to include!

Grammar (Writeacher)
Ahhh, but you deleted some good details! How can you keep those details in, but not all in one sentence?

Grammar (Writeacher)
I haven't read this, so I can't comment on content. 1. This is FAR too long for one sentence. How can you revise so no meaning is lost, but it's divided into 3 or so sentences? This is certainly not the sort of wife I would have imagined for Mr. Johnson as Mrs. Joh...

English
A hyphen looks like this: - A dash looks like this: --

English
The fourth sentence is correct. Study this carefully and re-think the other sentences. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/dash.htm

English
Between acts, the theater was completely dark, but the orchestra continued to play anyway. I see no need for any hyphens in that sentence. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/hyphen.htm

English
The first two and the fourth are fine. Re-think the third sentence.

English
Put a space after the semicolon in the first sentence. Then all will be correct.

English
Sentence 2 reads funny without quotation marks. The colon after "Sir" is correct IF you're writing a formal business letter, but to include this phrasing in a regular sentence, there should be quotation marks. I guess you should go with what you have, but I still...

English
Sentences 1, 3, and 4 are correct. In the original of sentence 2, are there any quotation marks, too?

English
Correct.

English Answer Check (Writeacher)
Much better!

English Answer Check (Writeacher)
How can you rephrase without using the word "your"? Surely, you don't mean ME!!

English
No ... read carefully ... Each year, she selects vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside. That's why I enjoy gardening," Fay said.

English
No comma needed here ~~> "but, the... Two errors are in here: one comma is missing; one comma should be a period. Each year she selects her best vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I ...

Math? Science?
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Social Studies
Sounds right. =)

Social Studies
Read, read, read ... and let us know what you decide. http://www.google.com/#q=Treaty+of+Guadalupe+Hidalgo

computers
Someone here will be happy to check your answers.

English
Right.

English
All correct, yes.

English
All are right.

English
Commas are all correct. Be sure there are closing quotation marks for the 4th sentence.

English
Do you mean "to see"? If so, the commas are all correct.

English
Correct ... all of them! =)

English
2 and 3 are correct. There's one comma missing from the first one.

English
All are correct.

life orientation
http://www.diabetes.org/diabetes-basics/symptoms/

English
Angels is right.

english
No one will write your assignment for you. If you want to post what you write, though, someone here will check it for you.

College Cultural Geography
Make sure you are clear on the meanings of "universalism" and "colonialism." http://www.answers.com ~~~~~~~~~ It is not possible to proclaim global human rights, on the one hand, and to have a Muslim, African, Jewish, Christian, or Asian charter of human ri...

English
Isn't fire fast? The flames move very quickly. Fires can consume all kinds of things very fast. What else can you think of?

Math??
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English Answer Check
I see no change after my comments here: http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1393784330 ...answer repeats too much of the question and then you don't explain what you mean by "facing your own demons."

Reading skills
Have you looked each word or phrase up? http://www.answers.com

history
I'd choose F.

English
No answer! Well, the directions here will help you, too. http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/poetry-explications/

English
First of all, study (memorize if you have to!) the definitions here: http://www.answers.com/topic/prosody and http://www.uncg.edu/~htkirbys/meters.htm When you are ready for the next step, let me know.

English Answer Check
Your second answer makes sense. Your first answer repeats too much of the question and then you don't explain what you mean by "facing your own demons."

english
Both are correct, but the first is smoother.

Maths Literacy,Life Sciences,History,Geography
Be sure to read through Related Questions below ... and the responses.

poetry part 2
http://www.cummingsstudyguides.net/Guides3/Grass.html#Themes Let us know what you decide.

Literature
You're welcome.

Literature
I haven't, but this may help: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/invisibleman/

Literature
Have you read the book?

philosophy (john dewey)
I really don't know, but perhaps you'll find what you're looking for in one or more of the websites linked here: http://www.google.com/search?q=expected+outcome+or+pattern+of+Developed+Standards+of+%22Rules+of+Conduct%22&oq=expected+outcome+or+pattern+of+Developed+...

us history
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_Gospel Read very carefully.

ela
The answer will be "none of the above" for one very clear reason. Do you see it?

ela -- ??
No opinion yet??

ela
So now you need to find the poem called "Another Mountain" ... not Miley Cyrus's song!! I entered another mountain poem in Google and found this: http://www.lauhead.com/sarahspage.htm Read it all, and let us know what you think the answer is.

ela
OK, be sure to learn how to look these things up on Google or Bing. I looked up just the quoted section on Google, and this is one of the links that came up: http://www.phillipsprep.com/Common/Assignments/PrintAssignment.asp?StaffID=3802&AssignmentID=571851&SchoolID=45

Poetry?
What is the title and who is the author of this? Out of context, it's very hard to tell.

Business Law II
You're very welcome! =)

Business Law II
I think the Gramm-Leach... choice is the correct one, but I'm not an econ teacher. From everything I read in the link I gave you above, it seems to fit what this question is asking.

Business Law II
In addition to your textbook, be sure to look up information about all the choices online. Here's one: http://www.google.com/search?q=Gramm-Leach-Bliley+Privacy+Act&oq=Gramm-Leach-Bliley+Privacy+Act&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.4525j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8...

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