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September 23, 2014

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English
Uncertain about what? Whether it would be published? Whether people would like it? Whether people would buy it? Your question needs to be clearer than it is.
August 10, 2014

English
You've written the same idea twice, but you have explained nothing. Choose either the first sentence or the second. Then give real reasons why he wrote that particular story in this way.
August 9, 2014

AP Government and Politics
One very specific result of a "culture war" can be found in the data regarding movie viewership, and I don't just mean the declining numbers. Read several articles here and see what you think: http://www.google.com/search?q=movie+viewership+demographics&oq=movie+...
August 9, 2014

Eng1511
What in the world do these mean? "a language practitioner" "one has to have a drive" "that will obstinately motivate one" And this is a downright cliché: "to succeed against all odds" Simplify, simplify, simplify ... and then re-...
August 9, 2014

English
What don't you understand about Sheeny's answer? http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1407555441 http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm See especially #s 2 and 3.
August 9, 2014

writing (and other)
No one can help you unless you post specific questions.
August 9, 2014

English
Please re-read the directions and follow the directions. 1. Explain why the setting depicted in the V for Vendetta trailer is a dystopia. I see little reference to the setting at all. Are you clear on what is included in a setting? And the word "Explain" means to ...
August 9, 2014

English
Make sure you're clear about the meaning of "dystopia." http://www.dictionary.com Once you've written your assignment, post it here if you'd like someone to critique it for you.
August 8, 2014

history business studies tourism maths literacy
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1407186483
August 8, 2014

ENG1511
Are you supposed to guess at the word that goes into the blank?
August 8, 2014

ENG1511 - incomplete
You haven't corrected the first set of sentences you posted. You haven't given the directions for the second set of sentences.
August 8, 2014

ENG1511
I'll be happy to check the sentences after you make the corrections needed. Be sure to read the sentences aloud. You'll hear some of the errors that way.
August 8, 2014

worls history
Bobpursley is right ... you MUST narrow down that topic, first of all. Then ... DON'T start any paper's first draft by writing the introduction! How can you introduce a paper that you haven't written yet? Follow the writing process, whether you're writing a ...
August 7, 2014

Math
100.00 Plus 50.00 Plus 50.00 Plus 50.00 What total do you get?
August 6, 2014

Interpersonal Communication
No one here has your text. Sorry.
August 6, 2014

reading - incomplete
What "following"?
August 6, 2014

English
You write it and someone here will critique it for you.
August 6, 2014

English/ Help
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/kerfuffle?s=t
August 5, 2014

English
These are the coordinating conjunctions: For And Nor But Or Yet So Remember them with the mnemonic FANBOYS. Now ... Which sentence, do you think?
July 28, 2014

Commerce
Yes, I think so. It's a number that can be used to compare or contrast with other numbers in a variety of ways. If it's a school that has capacity for 1,500 students, but there are 2,000 students, what conclusions can you draw? If it's a school that has capacity ...
July 10, 2014

For Camilla -- essay
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1404946047
July 10, 2014

English Essay REDONE
MUCH better, but still needs work. Did you really learn medical assistant skills while you were going through labor? That's how it reads, so pay attention to what I've put in bold. Also compare the following carefully with yours above. Notice EVERY change. It would be ...
July 9, 2014

English
1. "has taken" means it happened in the past and is still happening now. (Also, you need to change "fightings" to "fighting" -- there is no plural form for that word.) 2. "took" means it happened in the past and does not continue into ...
July 9, 2014

English
I would simply define "something" as "a topic." So I guess it's #1.
July 9, 2014

English
This is that same impersonal "it" I wrote about yesterday. Please see that other post and read the Wikipedia article that gives more information.
July 9, 2014

English
Sentences 1 - 6 are fine as long as you remember to capitalize the first letter of each one. I'd rephrase #7 a bit, though: Some are blue, some are yellow, and one is white.
July 8, 2014

English
Both sentences are referring to past jobs. Both can also mean that the person's current job is included in his/her total number of jobs.
July 8, 2014

English
In this sentence, it's an impersonal pronoun that doesn't refer to any particular noun. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/It_(pronoun)
July 8, 2014

sentence fragment
You've added too many details for this to be a topic sentence for one paragraph. Just write this: Ancient Egypt and Mesopotamia had very different types of governments. The details belong in the supporting sentences, not the topic sentence.
July 8, 2014

geography
Clearly, you need to list how YOU use fossil fuels daily, not any of us here. Once you write your list, be sure to post it if you'd like someone to give you feedback about it.
July 8, 2014

English
Yes, and yes!!
July 8, 2014

PHI208: Ethics and Moral Reasoning
What are "these"?
July 8, 2014

PHI208: Ethics and Moral Reasoning
Other than what?
July 8, 2014

POL Week 4. Answer check
Please go back and stud tall this. Google information if you have to. Then repost.
July 7, 2014

American Literature
The third link, redone: http://www.princeton.edu/~achaney/tmve/wiki100k/docs/Sinners_in_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_God.html
July 7, 2014

American Literature
Make sure you read it several times, AND read the following, too: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sinners_in_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_God http://www.sparknotes.com/testprep/books/sat2/history/chapter5section6.rhtml https://www.princeton.edu/~achaney/tmve/wiki100k/docs/...
July 7, 2014

American Literature
"Discuss" means you need to write an essay on this topic. What don't you understand about this assignment? Once you write your paper, you may post it here (but NOT the rough draft!) if you'd like feedback from one of our tutors.
July 7, 2014

Environmental Science
See your other post.
July 7, 2014

Environmental Science
If you're expecting someone here to do your entire assignment for you, you've come to the wrong place. But if you have an actual question about your assignment, please post it, and someone here may be able to help.
July 7, 2014

investing
What does Table 11-1 say??
July 6, 2014

Homework Dumping
Homework dumping Wow ... 12 posts in under 4 minutes! You must be taking a test or something. Please understand that tutors won't do your work for you. You need to indicate exactly what you have done to solve each problem and where you're running into trouble.
July 6, 2014

English - incomplete
In what book/story?
July 6, 2014

computer
http://www.yale.edu/ynhti/curriculum/units/2003/4/03.04.07.x.html Read all very carefully. Then write your paragraph.
July 6, 2014

English
What is your question?
July 6, 2014

english
What does ... ? How about all of the above?
July 5, 2014

Literatue- Ms. Sue help me plz
If the answer would be the same for both titles, then A is correct.
July 5, 2014

vocabulary
What are images? Do you think they are related to imagery? Did you look up the words at www.dictionary.com as I suggested above?
July 5, 2014

vocabulary
No, not C. Have you looked these terms up at www.dictionary.com?
July 5, 2014

To Ranna re SAT essay
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1404295688 If you decide to rewrite this or practice on a new topic, be sure to repost for more feedback.
July 5, 2014

English Essay
Another problem I see is that you seem to be quoting or copying/pasting from some promo publications or maybe even your textbook/study materials. All this should be in your own words.
July 5, 2014

English Essay
Please re-read the directions, especially section 3. You are writing as if you've already been hired.
July 5, 2014

social studies
http://www.google.com/search?q=how+does+appeal+system+work&oq=how+does+appeal+system+work&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l2j69i64.4814j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read, read, read.
July 4, 2014

english
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/compounds.htm On this webpage, scroll down to the sections called Compounds with Prefixes and Spelling. Let us know if you have questions.
July 3, 2014

english
When I am preparing meals, I often use a garlic press, a valued tool of many professional chefs.
July 3, 2014

Education/College
One major court decision to research along these lines is Lau vs Nichols: http://www.google.com/search?q=lau+vs+nichols&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8&hl=en&client=safari
July 2, 2014

English 11
There is only one in there that is not a negative. Have you looked them all up? http://www.dictionary.com or http://www.onelook.com
July 2, 2014

English?
What is your question?
July 2, 2014

sat essay
You're very welcome!
July 2, 2014

sat essay
http://sat.collegeboard.org/scores/sat-essay-scoring-guide I would give this essay a 4. Please read the qualities of a 4, a 5, a and a 6 so you'll know what to work on.
July 2, 2014

Career choices
Read through the different Related Questions below.
July 2, 2014

Definitely not "spelling"!
These websites should help you: http://www.mathisfun.com/ http://www.aaamath.com/ http://www.purplemath.com/modules/index.htm
July 1, 2014

English
Have you read it? There are several ideas in here to get you started. http://www.nextext.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=books.resource&target=multicultural&file=multicultural_lsn_20.cfm&type=student
July 1, 2014

Sounds more like physics
???
June 30, 2014

grammar
I don't think "land of liberty" is a compound noun either. Please point this out to your teacher ... the study guide is incorrect. I can find more websites from universities to prove it if you need the proof!
June 30, 2014

grammar
Mr. Adams' face = not a compound noun game of football = not a compound noun http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/compounds.htm
June 30, 2014

Literature-Help me Ms. Sue
Sorry ... the D I agreed with you about was the answer for Dylan Thomas's poem, not Carl Sandburg's.
June 30, 2014

Literature-Help me Ms. Sue
I agree with you on D.
June 30, 2014

Literature-Help me Ms. Sue
He was Christian. What do Christians believe?
June 30, 2014

Literature-Help me Ms. Sue
John Donne was a cleric in the English church. C is definitely not the answer! https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Donne
June 30, 2014

What?
???
June 30, 2014

social studies
Someone here will be happy to check your answer.
June 30, 2014

Psychology
Read, read, read ... http://www.google.com/search?q=Classical+Hierarchial+Classification&oq=Classical+Hierarchial+Classification&aqs=chrome..69i57.1008j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
June 30, 2014

English
Both sentences are fine, yes. You can substitute many kinds of food for 'Popsicle' - pretzel, hot dog, doughnut, and lots of others!
June 29, 2014

In text citations
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
June 29, 2014

In text citations
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/ Read here to understand the difference between in-text citations and the works cited list. Use the list at the left as the table of contents. Read carefully and follow the directions.
June 29, 2014

In text citations
No, all that detail goes into the Works Cited. In the in-text citation, put only the first word or two of the title of the webpage.
June 29, 2014

english
No one here will write your conclusion for you, as Ms. Sue had said. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/endings.htm Read this carefully and follow directions.
June 28, 2014

English
an uncrowded ... an empty ... a vacant ... a nearly vacant ... a nearly empty...
June 28, 2014

English
Guess what? ~~> 2. Can you guess what I am going to say? Guess what! <~~When this is said in great excitement, the speaker doesn't really expect an answer. He/She will just jump right into the next sentence!
June 28, 2014

English
Both are acceptable, but 2 is exactly correct.
June 28, 2014

English
1, 2, and 4 seem fine to me, but I'd omit 3.
June 28, 2014

English
Do you mean they put the food (in this case, waffles) in the pockets of their clothing?? What is meant here by "pockets"?
June 28, 2014

English
In questions 1 and 3, I'd do a bit of correcting: How much is fast food, such as hotdogs and pretzels? How would you correct question 1? In question 2, I wouldn't want to find any food on the street!! Here's how I'd revise this: What kind of food can we find [...
June 28, 2014

English
2 is correct; 3 isn't. In 5, I'd use "get" or "buy" instead of "eat" (since we usually don't eat drinks!!!).
June 28, 2014

English
What is your question about this sentence?
June 27, 2014

Law
1. If it's not clear in your textbook, try reading these search results: http://www.google.com/search?q=typical+parole+length+of+time&oq=typical+parole+length+of+time&aqs=chrome..69i57.5810j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 2. If it's not clear in your textbook, ...
June 26, 2014

Law
If your textbook is not clear about all this, check out the various search results here: http://www.google.com/?gws_rd=ssl#q=us+supreme+court+position+on+parole
June 26, 2014

english 2
No question here!
June 26, 2014

english 2
What is your question?
June 26, 2014

english
"I want" -- you mean you want someone to write it for you? That won't happen here, but if you use www.google.com and search for any of these terms, you might find something: dialogue believe in ghosts or not interview believe in ghosts or not
June 26, 2014

writing
I disagree. A is out -- this is dealing with the sense of smell, and you're after a vivid scene (sense of sight). B is out -- passive image here. How will you analyze C and D?
June 26, 2014

Literature-Help me Ms. Sue
Right
June 25, 2014

English
Why didn't you think it would be A? Have you studied parallel construction?
June 24, 2014

Literature-Help me Ms. Sue
http://www.humanitiesweb.org/spa/ltd/ID/102
June 24, 2014

Criminal Justice - Policing
http://www.google.com/search?q=homeland+security&oq=homeland+security&aqs=chrome..69i57j69i65j0l4.3387j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
June 24, 2014

Psy/405
Start by searching here: http://scholar.google.com
June 24, 2014

English
What are your directions? Are you supposed to revise the sentence or just stick some commas in there somewhere?
June 24, 2014

English
I guess "so" works OK here, but I'd be inclined to use "and" -- your comma placement is correct.
June 24, 2014

Incomplete
What words? Do you know what affixes are? Have you been given a list to choose from?
June 24, 2014

MATH
17.1 (Does the 0.1 matter much?)
June 24, 2014

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