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April 18, 2014

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Unintelligible
To me, this is completely unintelligible. If you just write out the paragraph with the words in the places you need (get rid of all the numbers and spaces), someone will more likely be able to help you.

English
All the variations are fine.

English
I bought this dress at/from a market ... (but not "in") Have you been studying ... Her mum has been talking ... They haven't visited her for two weeks. There's so much to do ... (All the rest are fine. I'm doing this on my phone, so not many details here!)

supply chain
Re b -- How many US workers would lose their jobs if option b is chosen?

English
The sentences without "should" are fine. Adding the word "should" is unneeded since these sentences include subjunctive clauses anyway.

art
If you're expecting someone here to do your entire assignment for you, you've come to the wrong place. But if you have an actual question about your assignment, please post it, and someone here may be able to help.

Introduction to computers
BYOD = ???

Huckleberry Finn
Make sure you do what Ms Sue tells you to do ... rewrite all this in YOUR OWN WORDS. Make sure you don't plagiarize! http://www.cliffsnotes.com/literature/a/the-adventures-of-huckleberry-finn/critical-essays/freedom-versus-civilization

English
I think sentences 1 and 2 are the best. The others sound contrived and unnatural.

Magic Thesis Statement
You'll also have to define the term "gender context." It makes no sense to me.

Magic Thesis Statement
How are you going to indicate who's weak and who's strong? How will you put your idea into ONE sentence that follows the instructions I gave you above and one of the examples in the webpage I linked?

Magic Thesis Statement
Which ONE sentence is your thesis statement? Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topi...

Social Studies (History)
http://www.bing.com/search?q=What+Is+a+Labor+Strike&FORM=R5FD and http://www.bing.com/search?setmkt=en-US&q=labor+strike+gilded+age Read widely and take good notes. Let us know what you write.

Incomplete
Please re-read what you posted; then re-post, with the entire question AND what you think the answer is.

home economics
http://www.answers.com/rights http://www.answers.com/responsibility Let us know what you decide.

English (PLEASE I NEED HELP)
Look up each of those four words at this site: http://www.dictionary.com Then let us know what you decide.

English (Ms.Sue)
You're welcome!

English (Ms.Sue)
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1383849965

English (Ms.Sue)
Why did you post this twice??

Revision
I know nothing about the study of law. Sorry.

Revision
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/editing.htm Read and study all the ideas on this page. Then apply these ideas to your own essay. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Also, when you get past the editing phase and start proofreading, here ares some excellent ideas from PsyDAG: I...

Grammar
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm Read #1.

English (Ms.Sue)
You're welcome!

English (Ms.Sue)
Whenever you are writing a comparison/contrast paper (paragraph, essay, research paper), you need to plan it out very carefully on paper first. Try this: 1. Write all the information about one of your topics on one page. 2. Write all the information about the other topic on an...

travel and meeting planning
Incorrect Are you clear on what the word "agenda" means?? http://www.answers.com/agenda

travel and meeting planning
Correct

travel and meeting planning
What do you think?

child development - what?
You need to rewrite this with proper capitals and punctuation. It makes no sense to me.

travel and meeting planning
I'd be choosing between c and d ... leaning toward d. Shouldn't you know what the whole program will be about before you start dealing with specifics??

geometry
You can upload your image to this website: http://imageshack.us/ Then when you get the URL for your image, post it here by separating the elements ... example: imageshack (dot) us (slash) ...

english
IIf you're expecting someone here to do your entire assignment for you, you've come to the wrong place. But if you have an actual question about your assignment, please post it, and someone here may be able to help.

world history
http://www.historyforkids.org/learn/government/polis.htm http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/City-state http://www.bing.com/search?q=City+States+in+Mesopotamia&FORM=R5FD

world history
They lived pretty much in a desert. How do people successfully farm in a desert? What else can you think of? Apparently everyone and his uncle has asked this very question all over the Internet!! http://www.bing.com/search?q=ancient+mesopotamia+environmental+challenges&FORM=AWRE1

English
It can be either, depending on the context. Here, though, it's intransitive. And you're right ... because there's no direct object.

English
Read, read, read. Do NOT copy anything, but take notes. http://www.bing.com/search?setmkt=en-US&q=john+donne+catholicism+attitudes

English Grammar
I agree with Steve. It's a childish sentence. But you should never use "of" after "bored" ... even better is to remember that people who say they are bored are usually pretty boring themselves!!

Taking a test??
Wow ... 6 posts in under 4 minutes! You must be taking a test or something. Please understand that tutors won't do your work for you. You need to indicate exactly what you have done to solve each problem and where you're running into trouble.

What??
physics??

English
You can keep "that" or omit it ... either way works fine. All mean approximately the same thing, yes.

English
All sentences 2-5 mean the same as sentence 1. =)

English
All mean the same thing, yes.

English
All are correct except #13 (you've missed the adverb there) and #15 ("chimney sweep" is a compound noun in open form: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/compounds.htm ).

English
Sounds as if your teacher needs to go back to school. =( http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/not?s=t

Civics
Have you read the book? It's not very long. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/animalfarm/

reading/language arts
Which native Americans? Some are thought to have come across the Bering Land Bridge. Is that what you mean? http://archaeology.about.com/od/bcthroughbl/qt/beringia.htm

English
That prepositional phrase modifies the noun, "information." Since it modifies a noun, what is it? "note" is a noun, serving here as the object of the preposition "on" "Ms. Kim's" is in possessive form, therefore serving as an adjecti...

Computers (internet)
You can also use the information here to help you judge whether a particular website's information is worth your time: http://hanlib.sou.edu/searchtools/evaluate.html

Computers (internet)
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1383687364 What didn't you understand about Ms. Sue's reply here? You make the list, and someone here will check it for you.

social studies
It looks as if you need to write your own answers. If no one is replying to your demands, then no one here knows.

college resume
Go through it all and cut as much excess wording as possible. As it is right now, it's far too long, whether formatted and printed or sent electronically. The best resumes can be printed on one side of one page ... mostly because the people reading them don't have time...

college resume
This is one: Psychology Won first place in final Psychology project competition. The winning 11 Project project included writing a 5 pg essay on the cognitive affects of Award genetic algorithm on intellectual performance, producing a well developed poster board and presentati...

college resume
I think it's wordy in places. Capitalization and some punctuation need work, too. I have no experience with electronically submitted resumes, though, so the missing capital letters and punctuation may not matter.

college resume
Here are many websites that have good ideas in them: http://www.bing.com/search?setmkt=en-US&q=how+to+write+resume Be sure to read through many of these to see what format you want to use, etc. One thing you NEED to do, however, is not use any abbreviations or acronyms. Assumi...

college resume
Is this resume for getting into college? or for finding a job after college graduation? Is it to be in a printable format so that it all fits on one page? Or is it to be acceptable as an electronic resume? Or both?

Mathematics and Health
Add up the percentages in the second sentence. What's the total?

Government
Interpreting any quotation is going to be different for each person -- maybe a lot different or maybe just a little different or somewhere in between; but don't be afraid to think for yourself. These are my thoughts from the life I've led so far: ~ abuses of liberty = ...

Incomplete
Please complete your question.

socialstudies(2Qs)
Both are incorrect. Do you know where most car manufacturing facilities are located? Do you know which parts of our country are warmer than the others? Are you clear on what nineteenth century families did for a living? Where would doing that be most logical?

medicine
There are no tutors here who have expertise in this subject area. Please use your textbook, study materials, and a good search engine or two to find your answers. 1. Go to http://www.google.com or http://www.bing.com 2. Type in icd codes (or whatever search terms you need). P...

English
The word "sick" is an adjective, usually used to describe people or animals that are ill. In this sentence, it sounds as if it's a note written to explain someone's absence because of illness.

English
1-3 -- yes, they're all fine. 4 is fine; and you'd read the number as in 5.

Social studies
http://www.google.com/search?q=jacques+cartier+in+search+of+when+he+sailed+to+the+new+world+in+1534&oq=jacques+cartier+in+search+of+when+he+sailed+to+the+new+world+in+1534&aqs=chrome..69i57.1316j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8

social studies
Search engines are wonderful things! 1. Go to http://www.google.com or http://www.bing.com 2. Type in cornwallis lost a battle with americans (or whatever search terms you need). Press Enter. 3. Read different search results until you find what you need. 4. Re-search with diff...

English
http://www.answers.com/comprehension

Google
You need to read about the development of search engines, from their beginnings to now. Then you should be able to clearly see how Google is not only different from other search engines, but WHY. It's the WHY that indicates their innovativeness. http://www.answers.com/inno...

Google
http://www.bing.com/search?pc=AMAZ&form=AMAZWB&setmkt=en-US&q=history+of+search+engines

social studies
Read widely and let us know what you think. http://www.google.com/search?q=george+washington+whiskey+rebellion&oq=george+washington+whiskey+re&aqs=chrome.2.69i57j0l5.12360j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8

ancient history
What does this mean? "searching the agricultural revolution" You need to write about WHY they felt the need to move around so often. ------------ The concerns of those three seem to revolve around religion, but keep in mind that the "high priest" in those d...

ancient history
Please note that no one here will do your work for you. However, we will be happy to read over what YOU THINK and make suggestions and/or corrections. Please post what you think.

socialstudies(5Qs)
It looks as if only #5 is correct. You need to go back and re-read everything in your text and familiarize yourself with a map of the US, including where north, south, east, and west are.

English
Sorry ... #5 is correct as is.

English
It would be SOOO much easier to read all this if you'd hit the Enter key twice after each one! ----------- *Cross out any prepositional phrase. Underline the subject once and the verb/verb phrase twice. Write Adv. above adverbs. Put infinitives in parenthesis. 1. In the ea...

music history
Only you can write your thesis. What are you interested in proving about any composer or type of music or ... ?? Once you have that figured out and have a rough outline written, you'll be ready to deal with a thesis.

Arithmetic
2 x 3.25 = ?

Math
3/4 = x/300

English
"give me a hand" = help me One way to interpret it is this: If you could help me, I would appreciate it.

English
1. It's better to use "That would" or "That's" rather than "That will" -- the reason is because "would" indicates a possibility, not a fact or a future fact. 2. You don't need to use "to" in that sentence.

US History/Literature
http://www.westga.edu/~mmcfar/AMERICAN%20ROMANTICISM%20overview.htm What terms in the very left-hand column that are reflected in the painting?

Social (ms.sue or writeteacher)
http://www.google.com/search?q=men+are+from+mars+women+are+from+venus+pdf&oq=men+are+from+mars&aqs=chrome.3.69i57j0l5.5752j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read, read, read, and take good notes. No one is going to write all this up for you, but one of us will be...

science
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/02/

science
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/02/

science
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/02/

science
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/02/

science
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/02/

science
Start by reading this, and using the list of what to do as a checklist: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/05/ Let me know what you find in this entry that needs correcting, and I'll check your work.

science
Start by reading this, and using the list of what to do as a checklist: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/05/ Let me know what you find in this entry that needs correcting, and I'll check your work.

science
Start by reading this, and using the list of what to do as a checklist: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/05/ Let me know what you find in this entry that needs correcting, and I'll check your work.

science
Slight correction needed: Fisher, G., Brady, A., & Lees, J. (2011). "A study of on-line learning styles." The Journal of Psychology, 12, 85-114. The directions and examples in here will help, too. Be sure to click on the image to zoom in and see everything clearly. h...

science
The directions and examples in here will help, too. Be sure to click on the image to zoom in and see everything clearly. https://owl.english.purdue.edu/media/jpeg/APAPoster09.jpg

science
Start by reading this, and using the list of what to do as a checklist: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/05/ Let me know what you find in this entry that needs correcting, and I'll check your work.

Child Develpoment
Age 3? Yes, finger painting, but expect a mess! A few will be able to draw something recognizable, but not many. If they are to make puppets, it's really the teacher and aide who will be doing the work. Finger painting is probably best.

Child Develpoment
"do on children" <~~??? face painting temporary tattoos ...

PRINTING ASAP
You've already posted this ... twice! If you haven't received replies, it's because no one here knows!! I have Dell and Epson printers ... have no clue about Kodak anything. Sorry.

sew
If you use the link I posted, you'll find there are three possibilities!! Which did Jada choose??

sew
Try http://www.unscramble.net

English
On the playground, there are two fathers and three kids. There is a slide at the playground on which a boy is sliding upside down, and his father is catching him. The other father is holding a girl by her left hand. The other girl is on his back, and the father is holding her ...

English
Yes, both pairs have the same meaning.

English
The verb in sentence 2 is in the subjunctive mood. http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/verbs-subjunctive.htm So even though it seems to be in the past tense, it isn't. The "what if" makes it something imagined, not real. Therefore, it's in the subjunctive. A p...

Social Studies
Look at the map in this article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/California_Trail The California trail covers half of our country! So read through several of these articles and list a few. There's no way you'll be able to list them all, but you should have many. http://ww...

English
will = something that will definitely happen can = the person has the ability to be a good writer (but nothing is said about whether he/she wants to be!) would and could = possibilities (nothing said about ability or certainty)

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