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October 1, 2014

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civics
Google is a wonderful thing!! Quick History: The Battle of Gettysburg - The Complete Idiot's Guides http://idiotsguides.com/static/quickguides/history/quick-history-the-battle-of-gettysburg.html Reynolds's troops began to arrive by 10:30, but by this time the ...
February 20, 2014

social studies
Right
February 20, 2014

social studies
And you think ... ?
February 20, 2014

social studies
And you think it's ... ?
February 20, 2014

Art
This is an opinion question. YOU have to write about what YOU SEE and THINK. The question seems clear to me, and I think you can make a case for whatever angle you choose. ...the omission of Native American women by the white artist and their inclusion by the Native artist. Do...
February 20, 2014

Social studies
You need to give more detail. Where? When? By whom?
February 20, 2014

English
Please reread what you posted ... and figure out why no one here can help you. YOU read the poems. YOU need to choose 3 ... Once you have written up your response to the assignment, feel free to post it here if you'd like someone to give you feedback.
February 20, 2014

English
http://www.google.com/search?q=romanticism+poetry&oq=romanticism+poetry&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.3855j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8 Read, read, read ... and let us know what you come up with.
February 20, 2014

English
The subject is "Selina Sanchez." If you omit the words between the commas, which verb do you use?
February 19, 2014

English
Who are "they"?
February 19, 2014

reading
The content is up to you, as bobpursely said. If you need help figuring out how to plan and write a comparison/contrast paper, let us know.
February 19, 2014

ENGLISH
http://www.answers.com/banish If someone was banished, he or she had to get out of Rome and never come back. For a Roman citizen, that was a terrible punishment.
February 18, 2014

Ethics
How many times are you going to ask this same question, even after you've gotten an answer? Read Related Questions below.
February 18, 2014

Government?
Are you supposed to guess? Or are you given a choice of answers?
February 18, 2014

shurley english
http://www.google.com/search?q=shurley+english+third+grade%2C+direct+object%2C+pattern+2&oq=shurley+english+third+grade%2C+direct+object%2C+pattern+2&aqs=chrome..69i57.5618j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 The first link here looks most helpful.
February 18, 2014

Medical Coding
There are no tutors here who have expertise in this subject area. Please use your textbook, study materials, and a good search engine or two to find your answers. 1. Go to http://www.google.com or http://www.bing.com 2. Type in icd codes (or whatever search terms you need). ...
February 18, 2014

Reading & Math
I agree with Ms. Sue. I also have witnessed what can happen for a child who is not reading at grade level -- but a book that's fascinating is put in his/her hands. Here's an example: My younger grandson barely passed from grade 3 to 4. His school had an Accelerated ...
February 18, 2014

math
You'd have better luck getting help if you follow directions and put your SCHOOL SUBJECT in the right place.
February 18, 2014

No question here
???
February 18, 2014

business,accounting,maths lit,economic
Be sure to read through Related Questions below.
February 18, 2014

ss --- pls check my work!!!
I'm not sure about 2, but the others are correct. The answer for 2 is either A or D, but you'll need to recheck your text to be sure.
February 18, 2014

Literature--Please, help me!
Both questions are asking for YOUR opinion and observation. No one else can answer these but you!
February 18, 2014

English 11
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/clauses.htm#adverb_clauses
February 18, 2014

English 11
And you think ... ?
February 18, 2014

Personal Finance
I found this by means of www.google.com: http://www.kiplinger.com/tool/investing/T041-S001-top-performing-mutual-funds/index.php You can find the others by entering each set of words at http://www.google.com Read and think.
February 18, 2014

English
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/753/02/
February 18, 2014

English
These should help: http://daviddouglasford.com/writing-tips/how-to-write-an-autobiography.html AND (not "or"!) https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/753/02/
February 18, 2014

Thesis statement
It is NOT a thesis statement at all! Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and ...
February 18, 2014

ethics
Right.
February 17, 2014

ethics
No. Read carefully: http://www.iep.utm.edu/epictetu/
February 17, 2014

Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Hmmm! I'm remembering this part of the book a bit. Maybe I'll remember more as you write your paper. Anyway, please post your revised thesis statement and your outline, and I'll be able to give you some feedback.
February 17, 2014

Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Remember: Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what...
February 17, 2014

Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
This is NOT a thesis: My thesis: "Both Waverly, the young chess prodigy, and her mother, a traditional Chinese woman, contribute to the conflict that is impacting their relationship." That's all factual ... no one would dispute this. There's nothing to prove...
February 17, 2014

Language arts
http://www.k12reader.com/indefinite-pronouns/
February 17, 2014

ART/101
The way this site works is that YOU write up what YOU THINK, and someone here will be happy to critique your thinking and writing.
February 17, 2014

English
None, apparently.
February 17, 2014

Editorial (Writeacher)
You're very welcome!
February 17, 2014

Editorial (Writeacher)
Now that you have added -- and revised -- the counterargument element, it's fine.
February 17, 2014

Grammar Answer Check
2. Coordinating; coordinating. The first coordinating conj connects the two independent clauses; the second coordinating conj joins two compound verbs. The word "and" is nowhere to be found in the list of subordinating conjunctions!!
February 17, 2014

Grammar Answer Check
Incorrect: 2. Coordinating; correlative? [Correlative conjunctions come in pairs. Did you read through the linked page Ms. Sue gave you?] No, I didn't mean to do it that way? [Why the question mark?] I agree with all your other answers.
February 17, 2014

speech
Same with Hershey ... and his incredible success with chocolate! http://www.google.com/#q=hershey+failures+before+chocolate+
February 17, 2014

speech
Whenever the story of how Edison invented the light bulb is told in history books, it's always very short and sweet. The back story is nearly never told!! Read, read, read ... http://www.google.com/search?q=the+story+behind+edison%27s+light+bulb&oq=the+story+behind+edison%...
February 17, 2014

help
Only a few tutors can post links here.
February 17, 2014

English
This word has many meanings. Which one are you searching for? http://www.answers.com/topic/scan
February 17, 2014

A Opinion From Ms. Sue
Your revision of the first sentence of the second paragraph is really good. Nice job. As long as you are addressing students in the '60s, this is fine.
February 16, 2014

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
See above. Nice job revising the first sentence of the second paragraph.
February 16, 2014

English
Since no one has answered you before now, it's pretty clear no one here has read this work. Use this -- http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/ -- and read and think. Your assignment is an opinion question, and you need to be able to back up your opinion with events from the book ...
February 16, 2014

Grammar Answer Check
1. Coordinating; subordinating; correlative. yes, yes, no 2. Correlative; correlative. yes, yes 3. Subordinating; coordinating. no, no 4. Subordinating. yes Combine these sentence pairs, using the tupe of conjunction specified. 1. I'm going to the bookstore. I need ...
February 16, 2014

English
My best suggestion is that you go through this and cut out all repetitive and unnecessary words. Here's an example: I arrived at London in 1588 and planned to become an actor and playwright.
February 16, 2014

Spamming the board!
STOP! You need to indicate what YOU THINK the answers are for each of these question you posted ... then someone here will be able to help you. Also, if you are going into the field of education, this kind of thing should be absolutely under control by now. Study this: http://...
February 16, 2014

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
Although society insists otherwise, What?? You need to explain this!! Our whole society thinks it's OK to treat one group of people differently and more cruelly than others??
February 15, 2014

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
Whether an assignment says "persuade" or "convince" or "argue," the point is the same: 1. State your proposition ... and make sure it's an arguable premise. If no one would disagree with you, then there's nothing to convince others about. ...
February 15, 2014

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
Read through those steps and follow them. Each step doesn't have to result in a complete paragraph, but all the steps need to be addressed and dealt with.
February 15, 2014

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
"[w]rite a 3-paragraph editorial that tries to persuade students at the University of Georgia to accept African-American students." <~~???
February 15, 2014

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
I don't find it persuasive, although I don't disagree with your premises. These three paragraphs are basically saying this is what you believe and everyone should agree with you. It's not persuasive! http://www.powa.org/index.php/convince Read through the steps ...
February 15, 2014

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
You need to clarify this: "...I believe we should treat African Americans differently..." This seems contradictory to the whole rest of the paper.
February 15, 2014

Health/Writing
I know a young man who is going through brain cancer for the second time in his life. The tumors are removed by surgery and then he's treated with radiation and chemotherapy to try to remove any cancer cells that surgery didn't get. No one knows what causes the tumors ...
February 15, 2014

business study,accounting,economics,mathematicaly
Read through the related questions and replies below.
February 15, 2014

English
He was seen watching TV. All else is correct.
February 15, 2014

ENGLISH
"graph" means what? "scope" means what? Which one can you DO?
February 14, 2014

ENGLISH
Two good places to look up roots and meanings: http://www.dictionary.com and http://www.etymonline.com
February 14, 2014

ENGLISH
"dark 1" needs to do some thinking! 1. B 2. not A!! What are the roots of these four words, and what does each root mean? 18. Yes, C.
February 14, 2014

CIS/105
Here's a whole collection for you to choose from: http://www.webenglishteacher.com/tech.html
February 13, 2014

CIS/105
The first thing you must do is decide what you'll focus on: "...multimedia tools that aid classroom instruction. Include details about how each might influence learning." Until you decide on those, none of the rest matters. The rest of the instructions are just ...
February 13, 2014

Literature (Writeacher!)
I doubt it, but if another tutor can help, he/she will respond. #1 - Your questions mainly have to do with works that I'm not familiar with at all. #2 - Many of the questions are opinion questions, for which there are no wrong answers as long as you can explain why you ...
February 13, 2014

Literature (Writeacher!)
I have no idea.
February 13, 2014

Literature (Writeacher!)
No idea.
February 13, 2014

Literature (Writeacher!)
I have no idea.
February 13, 2014

English 3
How is your text defining "linguistic change"?
February 13, 2014

Social Studies
Someone here will be happy to check your answers.
February 13, 2014

LA 12
Have you read the play?? It's very clear in there what the ghost says. http://nfs.sparknotes.com/hamlet/page_2.html
February 13, 2014

english
http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/fallacies/ Scroll down to read about the different fallacies. This is probably Post Hoc or False Dichotomy, but you'll need to read through all of these to determine the answer for yourself.
February 13, 2014

english
Summarizing means that you include only the most important ideas and leave out the details. You should end up with 5 or 6 sentences. You give it a try, and someone here will be happy to check it for you.
February 13, 2014

English
One you write your summary, post it here if you'd like feedback from someone. No one here will write your paper for you, though.
February 13, 2014

Health
Are you supposed to guess?
February 13, 2014

Physical Education
In addition to searching on the Internet, you also need to make best friends with the reference librarian(s) in your local or college library. Libraries these days subscribe to enormous research databases, and they are often usually more useful than Internet searches. Ask your...
February 12, 2014

Fine Art
http://www.google.com/search?q=cubism&oq=cubism&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.2252j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 You'll need to read, read, read. This particular type of art has never appealed to me. Sorry.
February 12, 2014

English
You'll need to make an artificial break. Just go into the webaddress and put one space after a / or a ? or whatever non-letter (symbol) there may be.
February 12, 2014

language
I agree.
February 12, 2014

language
Can you remove/erase any of these things?
February 12, 2014

language
http://www.answers.com/indelible What do you think?
February 12, 2014

Literature
None, apparently.
February 12, 2014

Eng1511
Do you mean one of these? http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/apostrophe.htm http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm#single_quotes
February 12, 2014

Eng1511
What in the world is an inverted comma??
February 12, 2014

English
Whenever you are writing a comparison/contrast paper (paragraph, essay, research paper), you need to plan it out very carefully on paper first. Try this: 1. Write all the information about one of your topics on one page. 2. Write all the information about the other topic on ...
February 12, 2014

poem the voice by pat mora
It's right there, in the first line.
February 12, 2014

Fine Art
OK, here are some ideas then. Take two sheets of paper, one for each of the paintings. Focus just on one painting, and on one of the sheets of paper brainstorm for 1, 2, and 3 in the list. Then on the other sheet of paper, do the same for the other painting. When you have &...
February 11, 2014

Fine Art
What is "the critique method"?
February 11, 2014

Not enough info
??
February 11, 2014

BUSINESS
I find it hard to choose among those 3. All are drawbacks, in my opinion. If I had to put them in order, I guess I could see how D would be the worst of them.
February 11, 2014

BUSINESS
A, B, and D!!!
February 11, 2014

BUSINESS
I agree.
February 11, 2014

ENGLISH HISTORY
None, apparently!
February 11, 2014

Health
http://www.google.com/search?q=diseases%2Fillnesses+caused+by+bacteria&oq=diseases%2Fillnesses+caused+by+bacteria&aqs=chrome..69i57j69i58.1749j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8#q=diseases+and+illnesses+caused+by+bacteria
February 11, 2014

LA-check my answers
Both are correct.
February 11, 2014

Digital Footprint Safety ~CHECK MY ANSWERS~
No, sorry. In which answer do YOU do NOTHING, but stuff happens anyway. Passive, remember?
February 11, 2014

Digital Footprint Safety ~CHECK MY ANSWERS~
Your first answer is correct. The second answer is not. http://www.answers.com/passive
February 11, 2014

courtesy
You're welcome!
February 11, 2014

courtesy
In writing? On the phone? In person??? Thank you for helping me ________.
February 11, 2014

Art-help.
You're very welcome. =)
February 11, 2014

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