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November 21, 2014

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Incomplete
Are you supposed to guess?
August 18, 2014

English
This webpage explains and demonstrates how to integrate different length quotations in your writing: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/03/
August 18, 2014

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August 17, 2014

History
What??
August 15, 2014

English - help
1 and 3 are correct. 2 is partially correct.
August 15, 2014

Language
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plot_(narrative) Read carefully and pay attention to the graphics on the right side. Let me know what you decide.
August 15, 2014

math
James, Adam, uo, Bladimir, Beatrice, Kalifire, Demi, Brandon, Troy ... Are you having and identity crisis there in Brooklyn? There is no need to keep switching names here. There is a need, though, for you to let the math tutors know what you don't understand. You've ...
August 15, 2014

Math
James, Adam, uo, Bladimir, Beatrice, Kalifire, Demi, Brandon ... Are you having and identity crisis there in Brooklyn? There is no need to keep switching names here. There is a need, though, for you to let the math tutors know what you don't understand. You've been ...
August 15, 2014

compose
Steve -- nothing! That's why they're gone!!
August 15, 2014

medical coding
There are no tutors here who have expertise in this subject area. Please use your textbook, study materials, and a good search engine or two to find your answers. 1. Go to http://www.google.com or http://www.bing.com 2. Type in cpt codes (or whatever search terms you need). ...
August 14, 2014

english
Sorry ... Ms. Sue is right, and I'm not.
August 14, 2014

english
If you mean "cause and effect" (I see no letters for the answer choices), then you're correct.
August 14, 2014

Language
In addition to being terribly wordy, your correction includes a run-on. Ms. Sue's sentence avoids the run-on AND the wordiness!
August 14, 2014

Language
"have the opportunity to come in contact with and meet" That's redundant. How can you express the identical idea in far fewer words?
August 14, 2014

Language
Yes.
August 14, 2014

Language
Yes, it's correct.
August 14, 2014

Language
Yes, correct.
August 14, 2014

math
Mona is now banned.
August 14, 2014

TIme zones
Mona, DO NOT post a message using a tutor's name. That's a good way to get yourself banned, by impersonating a tutor, no matter how innocent your intentions were.
August 14, 2014

history
You should learn how to use www.google.com or www.bing.com efficiently. 1. Go to http://www.google.com or http://www.bing.com 2. Type in hartford convention 1814 (or whatever search terms you need). Press Enter. 3. Read different search results until you find what you need. 4...
August 14, 2014

history
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erie_Canal
August 14, 2014

history
http://www.lsjunction.com/events/events.htm Scroll down and read the 1836 events. Which one was a final victory?
August 14, 2014

history
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1408030827
August 14, 2014

History
Did you read the search results I gave you earlier? Read everything carefully, including the causes that led up to all this. Let us know what you decide to write.
August 14, 2014

history
http://www.google.com/?gws_rd=ssl#q=%22the+fall+line%22 Read lots and et us know what you decide.
August 14, 2014

History
http://www.google.com/search?q=survival+tactics+1933+ukraine&oq=survival+tactics+1933+ukraine&aqs=chrome..69i57.8533j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read LOTS, and take good notes.
August 14, 2014

Studying Skills
No matter what age a student is or what he/she is studying, these steps to better study habits and methods are the best ever: http://www.pinkmonkey.com/electricdesk/elec-desk.asp Make sure you read through these in their sequence, not out of order.
August 14, 2014

french
"I want ... " What you need is a good French-English dictionary. Best would be a real dictionary -- a book -- in print! http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_ss_c_0_14?url=search-alias%3Dstripbooks&field-keywords=french%20english%20dictionary&sprefix=french+english%2Caps...
August 14, 2014

Business law
http://www.google.com/search?q=false+advertising+laws&oq=false+advertising&aqs=chrome.2.69i57j0l5.11794j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read, read, read ... and focus on the laws in your state regarding false advertising.
August 14, 2014

english
Why are you guessing? Read and reread the first two paragraphs as many times as it takes. Then decide, but don't guess.
August 14, 2014

English- Help Ms. Sue
I disagree.
August 13, 2014

Check these ASAP please!!!
1 and 5 are correct; the rest are not ... and I don't see any #6. You really need to go back and STUDY (=learn) the parts of speech: http://www.chompchomp.com/terms.htm
August 13, 2014

Check these ASAP please!!!
1. Correct 3. Incorrect I can't tell about the others because I don't know what is underlined.
August 13, 2014

ENG1511
You're expecting someone to do your assignment for you? YOU need to give this a try, and then someone here will be able to help you.
August 13, 2014

English
What's in italics??
August 12, 2014

english
Compartmentalization - ??
August 12, 2014

Question
You're very welcome.
August 11, 2014

Question
Good. This means that you have a good start if you ever decided to fully develop this or any other proposal! =)
August 11, 2014

Question
"... solution which was to help people understand the dangers of the cognitive distraction to the brain, to promote safe driving and lessen the number of accidents caused by distracted driving," I know this is just a journal entry and that a real proposal would be ...
August 11, 2014

Question
The facts (what is) are what lead up to your objective. Your goal is the outcome you expect to accomplish ... the long-range goal. Your objectives are the steps you plan in sequence to reach your goal. http://www.google.com/search?q=difference+between+goals+and+objectives&oq=...
August 11, 2014

Question
Be sure to state the problem you are trying to address. That statement needs to be "just the facts" -- just a statement of what is. The "what should be" comes later. Also be sure to include clearly who this project is intended to benefit. You need to go ...
August 11, 2014

Question
Read, read, read ... and let us know what you find out. http://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+write+proposal+volunteer+project&oq=how+to+write+proposal+volunteer+project&aqs=chrome..69i57j69i64.9486j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
August 11, 2014

life orientetion
Check out the Related Questions below.
August 11, 2014

English
Someone here will be happy to check what YOU THINK, but no one will do your assignment for you.
August 10, 2014

English 1511
I redid one of the sentences in your first post. Now it's your turn.
August 10, 2014

english 1511
I'll do the first one for you. My car is beautiful. Now, you try the others, and someone will check them for you.
August 10, 2014

English / Grammar
What's the difference between "out of work" and "completely out of work"? And how can you avoid having "work" appear so soon after two instances of "workers"? You could write this: At the zenith of the Great Depression, nearly 25 ...
August 10, 2014

Economy Essay Outline/Structure Help
Make sure you're clear on all your terminology. Read several definitions of each so you are more likely to get the whole picture. http://www.google.com/search?q=trickle+down+theory+definition&oq=trickle+down&aqs=chrome.3.69i57j0l5.7036j0j7&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-...
August 10, 2014

Geography
"... and back ... " You'd end up exactly where you started.
August 10, 2014

English
Uncertain about what? Whether it would be published? Whether people would like it? Whether people would buy it? Your question needs to be clearer than it is.
August 10, 2014

English
You've written the same idea twice, but you have explained nothing. Choose either the first sentence or the second. Then give real reasons why he wrote that particular story in this way.
August 9, 2014

AP Government and Politics
One very specific result of a "culture war" can be found in the data regarding movie viewership, and I don't just mean the declining numbers. Read several articles here and see what you think: http://www.google.com/search?q=movie+viewership+demographics&oq=movie+...
August 9, 2014

Eng1511
What in the world do these mean? "a language practitioner" "one has to have a drive" "that will obstinately motivate one" And this is a downright cliché: "to succeed against all odds" Simplify, simplify, simplify ... and then re-...
August 9, 2014

English
What don't you understand about Sheeny's answer? http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1407555441 http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm See especially #s 2 and 3.
August 9, 2014

writing (and other)
No one can help you unless you post specific questions.
August 9, 2014

English
Please re-read the directions and follow the directions. 1. Explain why the setting depicted in the V for Vendetta trailer is a dystopia. I see little reference to the setting at all. Are you clear on what is included in a setting? And the word "Explain" means to ...
August 9, 2014

English
Make sure you're clear about the meaning of "dystopia." http://www.dictionary.com Once you've written your assignment, post it here if you'd like someone to critique it for you.
August 8, 2014

history business studies tourism maths literacy
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1407186483
August 8, 2014

ENG1511
Are you supposed to guess at the word that goes into the blank?
August 8, 2014

ENG1511 - incomplete
You haven't corrected the first set of sentences you posted. You haven't given the directions for the second set of sentences.
August 8, 2014

ENG1511
I'll be happy to check the sentences after you make the corrections needed. Be sure to read the sentences aloud. You'll hear some of the errors that way.
August 8, 2014

worls history
Bobpursley is right ... you MUST narrow down that topic, first of all. Then ... DON'T start any paper's first draft by writing the introduction! How can you introduce a paper that you haven't written yet? Follow the writing process, whether you're writing a ...
August 7, 2014

Math
100.00 Plus 50.00 Plus 50.00 Plus 50.00 What total do you get?
August 6, 2014

Interpersonal Communication
No one here has your text. Sorry.
August 6, 2014

reading - incomplete
What "following"?
August 6, 2014

English
You write it and someone here will critique it for you.
August 6, 2014

English/ Help
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/kerfuffle?s=t
August 5, 2014

English
These are the coordinating conjunctions: For And Nor But Or Yet So Remember them with the mnemonic FANBOYS. Now ... Which sentence, do you think?
July 28, 2014

Commerce
Yes, I think so. It's a number that can be used to compare or contrast with other numbers in a variety of ways. If it's a school that has capacity for 1,500 students, but there are 2,000 students, what conclusions can you draw? If it's a school that has capacity ...
July 10, 2014

For Camilla -- essay
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1404946047
July 10, 2014

English Essay REDONE
MUCH better, but still needs work. Did you really learn medical assistant skills while you were going through labor? That's how it reads, so pay attention to what I've put in bold. Also compare the following carefully with yours above. Notice EVERY change. It would be ...
July 9, 2014

English
1. "has taken" means it happened in the past and is still happening now. (Also, you need to change "fightings" to "fighting" -- there is no plural form for that word.) 2. "took" means it happened in the past and does not continue into ...
July 9, 2014

English
I would simply define "something" as "a topic." So I guess it's #1.
July 9, 2014

English
This is that same impersonal "it" I wrote about yesterday. Please see that other post and read the Wikipedia article that gives more information.
July 9, 2014

English
Sentences 1 - 6 are fine as long as you remember to capitalize the first letter of each one. I'd rephrase #7 a bit, though: Some are blue, some are yellow, and one is white.
July 8, 2014

English
Both sentences are referring to past jobs. Both can also mean that the person's current job is included in his/her total number of jobs.
July 8, 2014

English
In this sentence, it's an impersonal pronoun that doesn't refer to any particular noun. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/It_(pronoun)
July 8, 2014

sentence fragment
You've added too many details for this to be a topic sentence for one paragraph. Just write this: Ancient Egypt and Mesopotamia had very different types of governments. The details belong in the supporting sentences, not the topic sentence.
July 8, 2014

geography
Clearly, you need to list how YOU use fossil fuels daily, not any of us here. Once you write your list, be sure to post it if you'd like someone to give you feedback about it.
July 8, 2014

English
Yes, and yes!!
July 8, 2014

PHI208: Ethics and Moral Reasoning
What are "these"?
July 8, 2014

PHI208: Ethics and Moral Reasoning
Other than what?
July 8, 2014

POL Week 4. Answer check
Please go back and stud tall this. Google information if you have to. Then repost.
July 7, 2014

American Literature
The third link, redone: http://www.princeton.edu/~achaney/tmve/wiki100k/docs/Sinners_in_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_God.html
July 7, 2014

American Literature
Make sure you read it several times, AND read the following, too: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sinners_in_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_God http://www.sparknotes.com/testprep/books/sat2/history/chapter5section6.rhtml https://www.princeton.edu/~achaney/tmve/wiki100k/docs/...
July 7, 2014

American Literature
"Discuss" means you need to write an essay on this topic. What don't you understand about this assignment? Once you write your paper, you may post it here (but NOT the rough draft!) if you'd like feedback from one of our tutors.
July 7, 2014

Environmental Science
See your other post.
July 7, 2014

Environmental Science
If you're expecting someone here to do your entire assignment for you, you've come to the wrong place. But if you have an actual question about your assignment, please post it, and someone here may be able to help.
July 7, 2014

investing
What does Table 11-1 say??
July 6, 2014

Homework Dumping
Homework dumping Wow ... 12 posts in under 4 minutes! You must be taking a test or something. Please understand that tutors won't do your work for you. You need to indicate exactly what you have done to solve each problem and where you're running into trouble.
July 6, 2014

English - incomplete
In what book/story?
July 6, 2014

computer
http://www.yale.edu/ynhti/curriculum/units/2003/4/03.04.07.x.html Read all very carefully. Then write your paragraph.
July 6, 2014

English
What is your question?
July 6, 2014

english
What does ... ? How about all of the above?
July 5, 2014

Literatue- Ms. Sue help me plz
If the answer would be the same for both titles, then A is correct.
July 5, 2014

vocabulary
What are images? Do you think they are related to imagery? Did you look up the words at www.dictionary.com as I suggested above?
July 5, 2014

vocabulary
No, not C. Have you looked these terms up at www.dictionary.com?
July 5, 2014

To Ranna re SAT essay
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1404295688 If you decide to rewrite this or practice on a new topic, be sure to repost for more feedback.
July 5, 2014

English Essay
Another problem I see is that you seem to be quoting or copying/pasting from some promo publications or maybe even your textbook/study materials. All this should be in your own words.
July 5, 2014

English Essay
Please re-read the directions, especially section 3. You are writing as if you've already been hired.
July 5, 2014

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