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August 29, 2014

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occupational therapy
Do you have a question about all this? Remember that no one here will DO your assignment for you.
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)(All)
See below.
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Fix the 2nd one first.
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Find the duplicate ideas, and cut, cut, cut!
April 5, 2014

English help
Lots of guessing going on. =( http://www.answers.com Look the words up and make sure you don't put verbs where nouns belong (and vice versa).
April 5, 2014

reading
Montresor knows that Fortunato is very vain about his knowledge about wines. M knows F will not go back willingly unless/until he pronounces the wine in question good or bad ... but of course, we readers know that will never happen.
April 5, 2014

English
I agree. Diurnal and nocturnal are opposites. If C were Day: night, that would be correct, but as C is written, they are in the wrong order. Warm and hot are not opposites. B and D are opposites, but I think B is the better choice since daytime is usually warmer (sometimes hot...
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Keep it and move on to the next.
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Keep working on getting rid of wordiness in that last sentence.
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
You should find ways to shorten this sentence: Therefore, to be free of homework, potentially poor grades, and disappointment is not only a relief but a wondrous joy, if only for a short period of time.
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
incomplete unfinished
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
No. The point is to SHORTEN that sentence. Choose one ... pressure or backlog.
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
... the pressure of incomplete homework. or ... the backlog of incomplete homework. Two "of" prepositional phrases in succession in one sentence is a big signal that one of them needs to GO!!
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Also, please note that "uncompleted" is not a standard word listed in many dictionaries: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/uncompleted?s=t
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Good idea. Here is an example of wordiness for you to work on. How will you get rid of the repetition? ... the pressure of the backlog of uncompleted school work.
April 5, 2014

reading
Did you read the sparknotes.com link I gave you above? Carefully?
April 5, 2014

reading
That's a good answer. He's certainly not making jokes at the end, is he?
April 5, 2014

reading
Oh, sorry ... I always picture Montresor in the jester's costume. Best read up on what a jester's job is, then ... the answer has to be in there. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jester Who at the party would question where a jester would go or how he would act or even if ...
April 5, 2014

reading
You're getting close, yes. The jester is supposed to make people laugh ... but this guy in the jester costume is going to kill someone, which is definitely not funny.
April 5, 2014

reading
Do you understand what irony is? http://www.enotes.com/homework-help/when-dramatic-irony-shown-cask-amontillado-3558
April 5, 2014

reading
http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/poestories/section11.rhtml 11 is correct. 9 and 10 need more detail. 12 = ?
April 5, 2014

drama
What? Act 3, scene 1, of what??
April 5, 2014

English
1. No 2. Yes
April 5, 2014

reading
DO NOT put any tutor's name in place of yours. You'll be banned for impersonating a tutor. Yes, I agree with your answers for 3 and 4
April 5, 2014

reading
Yes ... "precluded the idea of risk." Perfect.
April 5, 2014

reading
I disagree with your answer for #1. I agree with your answer for #2.
April 5, 2014

Grammar
I've seen it both ways. When you spell it as one word, it's understood as a synonym for homework or classwork. http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/school+work?s=t
April 5, 2014

Adult education - incomplete
No answer choices? No ideas on your part?
April 5, 2014

english writing
Some of the best papers of this type I've seen have used the in medias res technique. That is, the writer starts the story in the middle of things and then flashes back to write about what led up to it all. Here are some other ideas: http://www.google.com/#q=how+to+write+a...
April 5, 2014

English
http://www.google.com/search?q=orwell+1984&oq=orwell&aqs=chrome.2.69i57j0l5.5062j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8#q=orwell+1984+text&revid=587948639 One of these should work for you.
April 5, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
How disappointing to open Jiskha this morning and find that you haven't tried to simplify your writing. Here's one sentence to get you started: Yours: "It rids me of the stress and worry of assigned and uncompleted schoolwork, of poor grades and disappointing my ...
April 4, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
If I revise/rewrite this, it becomes my paper, not yours. Then when you're given a writing assignment to be completed on the spot, you'll revert to your normal writing patterns. Did you read and understand what Bob Pursley wrote earlier today? Did you think about and ...
April 4, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
One example: It rids me of the stress and worry of assigned and uncompleted schoolwork, of poor grades and disappointing my teacher. Not only is this clumsy; there's also a non-parallel series in the sentence. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm Do you ...
April 4, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Just turn it in. It's clear that wordiness and strangely structured sentences are your "style."
April 4, 2014

English
Probably. Check here to be sure: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Point_of_view_(literature)#Third-person_voices
April 4, 2014

English
There might be a few full-service stations left in Korea! http://www.arirang.co.kr/News/News_View.asp?nseq=152490
April 4, 2014

English
#s 1, 3, 4, 5, and 7 are correct and commonly used. #6 is used in a slangy way in some parts of the US! If you use #2, people will understand you, but it's not used much at all.
April 4, 2014

health
If you got 100% on your own, then you didn't need "help," right?
April 4, 2014

helath
No one's being rude. You know from being here before that you need to say what you think each answer is ... if you really want help, that is.
April 4, 2014

English
Why the repeat??
April 4, 2014

English
Yes
April 4, 2014

English
Third person, yes. What makes it limited?
April 4, 2014

English
Whose THOUGHTS and FEELINGS are clear in here besides Harold's?
April 4, 2014

English
Partly right. What makes it omniscient?
April 4, 2014

English
Right
April 4, 2014

GrammAr
What is your question?
April 4, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Here are some places where I find the wording awkward (and even incorrect grammatically): Along with my stress and worry also leaves the reason why ... ... it is almost a joy ... [so ... not really joy of any kind?] ... or even a lake— all of which ... [read up on why an ...
April 4, 2014

Persuasive Speech
The primary reason for shelters at bus stops is bad weather. Is your college in an area where there is ... ... LOTS of rain? ... LOTS of snow? ... LOTS of wind? etc ... what else can you think of? If you want factual information to start off with, go to Google and search for ...
April 4, 2014

Terribly incomplete!
That's not a question, no matter what punctuation you put at the end. If you are trying to copy/paste something, it didn't work. What is your real question? And if you are going to post a test question, be sure to type in the answer choices AND indicate what YOU THINK.
April 4, 2014

Social Studies
If you're expecting someone here to do your entire assignment for you, you've come to the wrong place. But if you have an actual question about your assignment, please post it, and someone here may be able to help.
April 4, 2014

math lit,business studies,accounting and computer
Certainly.
April 4, 2014

ADVANCED WORD PROCESSING
Both are correct. This is what appears when I type "set tabs" in the Help search box in Word: Do any of the following: Set a tab stop using the ruler Set a tab stop by using the dialog box Remove a tab stop Each of those choices is a link, and you can find more ...
April 4, 2014

Math? Science?
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April 4, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
I also suggest reading this aloud to someone (or having someone read it aloud to you) so you can catch the too-wordy and too-complex sentences. Here's an example: Setting in only once the school year has come to an end, this feeling rids me of the stress and worry of ...
April 4, 2014

Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)
Go through and cut out all unnecessary words. (Which words can be cut out without changing the meaning.) http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm Then repost.
April 4, 2014

English II B
I'd choose C.
April 3, 2014

Works Cited alphabetize
After the author's name(s), then you have to move to the first word of the title (not counting "a" or "an" or "the").
April 3, 2014

Incomplete
What?
April 3, 2014

Spamming the board!
Wow ... 6 posts in under 2 minutes! I think you've set a record for non-thinking and spamming. Please understand that tutors won't do your work for you. You need to indicate exactly what you have done to solve each problem and where you're running into trouble.
April 3, 2014

English
Use only #1 -- 2 and 3 aren't correct, as is.
April 3, 2014

english
Be sure to learn proper capitalization and punctuation, too! Are you learning English? Yes, I am learning English.
April 2, 2014

economics
Google is a wonderful place to start! http://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+derive+marginal+utility+of+income&oq=how+to+derive+marginal+utility+of+income&aqs=chrome..69i57j0.3163j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
April 2, 2014

computer science
I have no idea what the gobbledegook letters mean, but here are some websites that may help you re teaching children and teenagers how to write good essays. http://www.angelfire.com/wi/writingprocess/ http://www.kimskorner4teachertalk.com/writing/menu.html http://www....
April 2, 2014

English
How to Write a Poem (with 3 Sample Poems) - wikiHow http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Poem‎ wikiHow How to Write a Poem. Writing a poem is all about observing the world within or around you. A poem can be about anything, from love to the rusty gate at the old ... ‎...
April 2, 2014

English
Around here, we use "weight room" -- a room where there are all kinds of work-out equipment including weights to lift. I've never heard the term "paps room."
April 2, 2014

Common Core State Exam
You're welcome. Do well, and remember to breathe!
April 1, 2014

Common Core State Exam
There are lots of good ideas in here, no matter what test you're taking: http://www.testtakingtips.com/
April 1, 2014

English
Is that a tite? Or is it an incomplete sentence?
April 1, 2014

Criminal justice
Since judge, jury, and police are supposed to be following the law, I'd go with D.
April 1, 2014

Be specific
If you were to use "Canadian history" in the School Subject box, you'd be more likely to get a response from someone who knows Canadian history.
April 1, 2014

LA pls help!!!!!
1 and 2 are correct. What do you think about 3? Remember that "parenthetical" comes from the word "parentheses." ( )
April 1, 2014

life sciences business studies geography maths lit
Please read through the Related Questions below.
April 1, 2014

history
Let us know what YOU THINK.
March 31, 2014

history
And you think it's ... ?
March 31, 2014

English
Only #1 is correct.
March 31, 2014

English
1 and 2 are very close in meaning, and they'd be closer if you use "into" instead of "in" in 2. 3, 4, and 5 mean the same thing.
March 31, 2014

English
1 and 2 are fine and mean about the same thing. I'd use 1 more than 2. These are fine: 3, 4, 7 These are either incorrect or never used: 5, 6, 8
March 31, 2014

What?
Please tell me you don't expect someone here to take this test (or do this homework) for you!! However, if you post what YOU THINK, someone here will check it all for you.
March 31, 2014

English??
What excerpt??
March 31, 2014

Advance PC Applications
We have no idea what you're referring to. If you want someone to take a test for you or do your assignment for you, this is NOT the place!!
March 31, 2014

social studies
Did you discover that you're right? =)
March 31, 2014

social studies
http://www.google.com/#q=disappearing+land+louisiana Read several of these, and then let us know if you change your mind. Remember, it's asking which contributes least?
March 31, 2014

social studies
And you think it's ... ?
March 31, 2014

ENGLISH 9R - HELP!!!!
Google it. http://www.google.com create acrostic poem
March 30, 2014

ENGLISH 9R - HELP!!!!
P A G A N http://www.answers.com/topic/pagan Read carefully and let us know what you write.
March 30, 2014

more proofreading.
1. Print out two copies. 2. Give one copy to another person who is willing to help you. Keep one copy for yourself. 3. Ask the other person to read your paragraph aloud to you. 4. Make corrections. Re-do this process. THEN repost here for someone to check for you.
March 30, 2014

law/jrnalism
You're welcome. =)
March 30, 2014

law/jrnalism
http://www.google.com/search?q=define%3A+loss+of+face&oq=define%3A+loss+of+face&aqs=chrome..69i57j69i58.5934j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
March 30, 2014

english
Gertrude/Kassie/whoever ~ Again ... you write it, and someone here will check it for you.
March 30, 2014

US government
I agree with Damon ... D seems to be the answer your text/test is looking for.
March 30, 2014

English
Get rid of the extra spaces before the colon and after the opening parenthesis. This is terribly skimpy, though. If I were to grade this, I'd give it a C- or something similar. Surely, you can write a full paragraph and include the quotation more artfully. Did you even ...
March 30, 2014

English
Only you can figure this out. Write your paper and where this quotation fits is where you embed and cite it. If you get this written up, post the entire paragraph, and someone here will check it for you.
March 30, 2014

English
http://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+embed+quotations+correctly+in+your+writing&oq=how+to+embed+quotations&aqs=chrome.2.69i57j0l5.6683j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
March 30, 2014

Government?
And you think it's ... ?
March 30, 2014

health
http://www.google.com/search?q=how+many+teenage+alcoholics+are+there+in+the+us&oq=how+many+teens+are+alcoh&aqs=chrome.1.69i57j0l2.18956j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 Read, read, read ...
March 30, 2014

health care
http://www.google.com/search?q=determinants+of+respiration&oq=determinants+of+respiration&aqs=chrome..69i57.1637j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8
March 30, 2014

educational technology
Jackie has given you answers, but now it's time that you indicate what YOU THINK. Post what YOU THINK, and someone here may be able to help you.
March 30, 2014

educational technology
Post what YOU THINK, and someone here may be able to help you.
March 30, 2014

educational technology
Jackie has given you answers, but now it's time that you indicate what YOU THINK.
March 30, 2014

research help/ law
When you are hunting for reliable websites for academic purposes, start here: http://scholar.google.com
March 29, 2014

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