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April 24, 2014

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Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
See above. Nice job revising the first sentence of the second paragraph.

English
Since no one has answered you before now, it's pretty clear no one here has read this work. Use this -- http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/ -- and read and think. Your assignment is an opinion question, and you need to be able to back up your opinion with events from the book a...

Grammar Answer Check
1. Coordinating; subordinating; correlative. yes, yes, no 2. Correlative; correlative. yes, yes 3. Subordinating; coordinating. no, no 4. Subordinating. yes Combine these sentence pairs, using the tupe of conjunction specified. 1. I'm going to the bookstore. I need somethi...

English
My best suggestion is that you go through this and cut out all repetitive and unnecessary words. Here's an example: I arrived at London in 1588 and planned to become an actor and playwright.

Spamming the board!
STOP! You need to indicate what YOU THINK the answers are for each of these question you posted ... then someone here will be able to help you. Also, if you are going into the field of education, this kind of thing should be absolutely under control by now. Study this: http://...

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
Although society insists otherwise, What?? You need to explain this!! Our whole society thinks it's OK to treat one group of people differently and more cruelly than others??

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
Whether an assignment says "persuade" or "convince" or "argue," the point is the same: 1. State your proposition ... and make sure it's an arguable premise. If no one would disagree with you, then there's nothing to convince others about. ...

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
Read through those steps and follow them. Each step doesn't have to result in a complete paragraph, but all the steps need to be addressed and dealt with.

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
"[w]rite a 3-paragraph editorial that tries to persuade students at the University of Georgia to accept African-American students." <~~???

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
I don't find it persuasive, although I don't disagree with your premises. These three paragraphs are basically saying this is what you believe and everyone should agree with you. It's not persuasive! http://www.powa.org/index.php/convince Read through the steps her...

Editorial Evaluation (Writeacher)
You need to clarify this: "...I believe we should treat African Americans differently..." This seems contradictory to the whole rest of the paper.

Health/Writing
I know a young man who is going through brain cancer for the second time in his life. The tumors are removed by surgery and then he's treated with radiation and chemotherapy to try to remove any cancer cells that surgery didn't get. No one knows what causes the tumors ...

business study,accounting,economics,mathematicaly
Read through the related questions and replies below.

English
He was seen watching TV. All else is correct.

ENGLISH
"graph" means what? "scope" means what? Which one can you DO?

ENGLISH
Two good places to look up roots and meanings: http://www.dictionary.com and http://www.etymonline.com

ENGLISH
"dark 1" needs to do some thinking! 1. B 2. not A!! What are the roots of these four words, and what does each root mean? 18. Yes, C.

Some kind of math
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CIS/105
Here's a whole collection for you to choose from: http://www.webenglishteacher.com/tech.html

CIS/105
The first thing you must do is decide what you'll focus on: "...multimedia tools that aid classroom instruction. Include details about how each might influence learning." Until you decide on those, none of the rest matters. The rest of the instructions are just t...

Literature (Writeacher!)
I doubt it, but if another tutor can help, he/she will respond. #1 - Your questions mainly have to do with works that I'm not familiar with at all. #2 - Many of the questions are opinion questions, for which there are no wrong answers as long as you can explain why you bel...

Literature (Writeacher!)
I have no idea.

Literature (Writeacher!)
No idea.

Literature (Writeacher!)
I have no idea.

English 3
How is your text defining "linguistic change"?

Social Studies
Someone here will be happy to check your answers.

LA 12
Have you read the play?? It's very clear in there what the ghost says. http://nfs.sparknotes.com/hamlet/page_2.html

english
http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/fallacies/ Scroll down to read about the different fallacies. This is probably Post Hoc or False Dichotomy, but you'll need to read through all of these to determine the answer for yourself.

english
Summarizing means that you include only the most important ideas and leave out the details. You should end up with 5 or 6 sentences. You give it a try, and someone here will be happy to check it for you.

English
One you write your summary, post it here if you'd like feedback from someone. No one here will write your paper for you, though.

Health
Are you supposed to guess?

Physical Education
In addition to searching on the Internet, you also need to make best friends with the reference librarian(s) in your local or college library. Libraries these days subscribe to enormous research databases, and they are often usually more useful than Internet searches. Ask your...

Fine Art
http://www.google.com/search?q=cubism&oq=cubism&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l5.2252j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=119&ie=UTF-8 You'll need to read, read, read. This particular type of art has never appealed to me. Sorry.

English
You'll need to make an artificial break. Just go into the webaddress and put one space after a / or a ? or whatever non-letter (symbol) there may be.

language
I agree.

language
Can you remove/erase any of these things?

language
http://www.answers.com/indelible What do you think?

Literature
None, apparently.

Eng1511
Do you mean one of these? http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/apostrophe.htm http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm#single_quotes

Eng1511
What in the world is an inverted comma??

English
Whenever you are writing a comparison/contrast paper (paragraph, essay, research paper), you need to plan it out very carefully on paper first. Try this: 1. Write all the information about one of your topics on one page. 2. Write all the information about the other topic on an...

poem the voice by pat mora
It's right there, in the first line.

Fine Art
OK, here are some ideas then. Take two sheets of paper, one for each of the paintings. Focus just on one painting, and on one of the sheets of paper brainstorm for 1, 2, and 3 in the list. Then on the other sheet of paper, do the same for the other painting. When you have &quo...

Fine Art
What is "the critique method"?

Not enough info
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BUSINESS
I find it hard to choose among those 3. All are drawbacks, in my opinion. If I had to put them in order, I guess I could see how D would be the worst of them.

BUSINESS
A, B, and D!!!

BUSINESS
I agree.

ENGLISH HISTORY
None, apparently!

Health
http://www.google.com/search?q=diseases%2Fillnesses+caused+by+bacteria&oq=diseases%2Fillnesses+caused+by+bacteria&aqs=chrome..69i57j69i58.1749j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8#q=diseases+and+illnesses+caused+by+bacteria

LA-check my answers
Both are correct.

Digital Footprint Safety ~CHECK MY ANSWERS~
No, sorry. In which answer do YOU do NOTHING, but stuff happens anyway. Passive, remember?

Digital Footprint Safety ~CHECK MY ANSWERS~
Your first answer is correct. The second answer is not. http://www.answers.com/passive

courtesy
You're welcome!

courtesy
In writing? On the phone? In person??? Thank you for helping me ________.

Art-help.
You're very welcome. =)

Art-help.
I agree with you. =)

Art-help.
And you think ... ?

English
#1 -- Do NOT type in all-caps. It's considered shouting (rude) on the Internet, and certainly do not turn in papers to your English teacher like this! #2 -- Make a list of what you would like to have in a house. How many and what kinds of rooms? What kind of decor? Where w...

Subject area
If you truly want a physics or chem tutor to help you, you'd do better to post the REAL subject, not some abbreviation that they may not recognize.

ipc = ???

Socials 9
I think you mean "women," right? Not one woman? What "reign of terror"? When? Where?

BUSINESS
I disagree.

Literature
This is a chapter from a book I read far too long ago to remember details. You need to reread the story and/or study this: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/joyluck/section3.rhtml

Response Essay (Writeacher!)
Do you have an outline to go with this thesis statement? Don't even think about starting to write the body of the paper without an outline! What details from the story will you use to prove that your thesis is true? Those details will be obvious in your outline.

Social Studies
Did you ever see the movie Lawrence of Arabia? Here's a clip: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ZQAHJawdZ0 Notice how the Arabs are dressed.

Social Studies
Umbrellas and hats protect people from the sun as well as the rain.

Social Studies
I'd bring B and C!!

history
Are you supposed to guess at what words go in the blanks??

help me with this language arts.
Ms. Sue already gave you her take on this. Neither she nor I have read the story, so you'll need to reread the story as many times as it takes in order to answer 1, 2, and 3.

English
???

BUSINESS
You're welcome!

BUSINESS
I'd choose D. It's the only other thing that makes sense.

Social Studies
Sorry ... I didn't see the NOT in the question. Hideous question!! Which is NOT a factor ... ? Yes, B is correct.

Social Studies
Incorrect. C and D are correct.

English
Neither. http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/infinitive.htm

English (Proofreading)
Once you have taken out all the unnecessary words, you'll know where to place punctuation if you decide to put them back in. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/hyphen.htm http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/dash.htm http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar...

English (Proofreading)
First of all, go through and delete all the unnecessary words ... but don't delete words that take away from the basic meaning.

English (Proofreading)
No one will do this for you, but someone here will be happy to check your work for you.

Some kind of math?
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English
The first question is asking for your reasons for choosing to study what you do. The second question is asking who or what (event) pointed you in this direction.

History
For #1 -- According to the chart here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_emperors_of_the_Qing_Dynasty (scroll down), which one ruled first? For #2 -- it's DEFINITELY not B!! http://www.newworldencyclopedia.org/entry/Qianlong_Emperor

History
Wikipedia can be a great help, for sure. And remember to use the external links (at the bottom of each Wikipedia page) for further information about the topic.

History
Sorry about those other posts ... one was done by an impostor who has now been banned. I don't know anything about Ottoman history, sorry.

soc. stud. --- check my work pls!!!
The first three are correct. I don't know about the 4th. Have you read up on Jackson's presidency ... online or in your text?

writing
And you think it's ... ?

english
And you think it's ... ?

Grammar
Are you instructed to have a label? or a title? If you are supposed to have a label, that's fine. If you are supposed to have a title, then make one up, but don't use the exact title of what you're summarizing.

A Peculiar Question
A single sheet of paper with single spaced typing on it will hold approximately 60 lines. So if you have 1" margins at the sides, top, and bottom and double space everything, 20 lines will probably be about one page IF you are to leave room at the top for the standard MLA...

A Peculiar Question
That depends on font, font size, margins, single or double spaced ... What are your exact directions?

A Peculiar Question
Yes ... simply retell the story in summary fashion, not telling it differently.

English
http://www.differencebetween.com/difference-between-summary-and-vs-synopsis/ Read carefully and let us know what you decide.

Math easy please help
Which digit is in the hundredths place?

ss-help
Your choice for 2 is correct. Read read read ... http://www.google.com/search?q=1830s+indian+removal+act&oq=1830s+removal&aqs=chrome.1.69i57j0l2.11050j0j7&sourceid=chrome&espv=210&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8 http://www.google.com/search?q=Worcester+v.+Georgia&oq=Worcester+v.+Georgia&aq...

ss-help
And you think ... ?

ss
Right.

ss
http://www.history.com/topics/presidential-elections Scroll down and read about the election of 1824.

ss --- 1 question!!!
As Bobpursley said before, this is a badly written question and bunch of answer choices. The answer is probably A, except that they were looking for work, not education necessarily. Cities then and now were/are not always safe. That hasn't changed in centuries. However, ci...

English
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plot_(narrative) Notice Freytag's stages and the graphic at the right (scroll down a bit). What do you think?

INF 103
Right

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