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What are "federal anti-discrimination laws"? Which ones do you think may have "gone too far"? And what do you think "gone too far" means? What does "employment at will" mean? Are you sure that what happens in one state does or does not ...
"Help please" (aka bumblebee) is now banned for blatant cheating here.
med law && ethics
The wording in this question is just plain awful ... and with a major grammatical error! Frankly, now that I get it that "health care provider" = doctor, I think both A and B are correct. What horrible text and test writers we have these days!
Not while you're taking a test!! Tests are there to measure what YOU know, not what other people know.
"give me" ??? That's not how this website works. Please read and re-read the directions on the Post a New Question page. Do you understand what "Please show your work" means?
Yes, "raise" works well instead of "make" -- and in 3 and 6, the verb could also be "ask." One suggestion, as an alternative, is this: 5. If you want to raise a rebuttal to the speaker's point, raise your hands.
math - ??
This reads like nonsense. Please proofread and repost -- in correct and complete English.
The only other thing I'd do, to remove repetition, is to omit these words: "on your chairs" (because you know they won't sit on their desks!!). Otherwise, it all reads really well!
You have the word "debate" three times in the first three sentences. You should delete "over the debate." Space and capital T is needed in the last section. See it? Also there needs to be a space after the comma in that same sentence. (I know the spaces, ...
In what line do you think she is referring to fame? (Consider the lines numbered; in this case there are 8 lines.) Is there an adjective in there to help you understand her attitude? Im Nobody! Who are you? Are you Nobody too? Then theres a pair of ...
language - incomplete
What poem? What poet? ??
Stratification in Sociology
That's your assignment, which no one here will write for you. Besides, your instructor wants to know what YOU THINK, not one of us. If you have questions about the assignment, post them here. If you want someone here to critique your thinking and writing once you've ...
Grade 6: money and measures
Read through Related Questions below.
1. OK 2. OK 3. No 4. OK For 3 -- Speaker 2 will make a speech about the disadvantages of watching TV. OR Speaker 2 will speak against watching TV.
I'd use 3 with a little rephrasing: You can rebut the speaker's argument.
#1 is the sentence to use.
I'll try ... no guarantees, though! Which countries are considered "Caribbean South America"? http://s2.thingpic.com/images/Aj/cFgp4PNtAfZ1ppJbRX5MsAWq.jpeg Choose one in which there's been an interesting economic activity, and then research and write about ...
Math PROBABILITY part 1
Another who cannot spell "please" correctly?? <shaking my head>
math plzzz help quick
I'm really appalled by the number of people on this website who don't know how to spell "please." Very sad.
English (please check my work !)
You're very welcome.
English (please check my work !)
Yes, 2 must be "me" because it's one of the objects of the preposition "with." 4. was already correct. For 3, study this: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/gerunds.htm#possessive
English (please check my work !)
Two are correct and two are incorrect. Go back and re-study pronoun uses.
Some kind of math
Inability to follow directions. =(
Social Studies please help
http://www.history.com/topics/compromise-of-1850 Read carefully and let us know what you decide.
Foods and Nutrition
Google is your friend!! Read lots. http://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=which+foods+contain+most+protein
Better get busy!! http://www.poetry4kids.com/lessons/how-to-write-an-acrostic-poem/ F E D E R A L I S M Once you finish it, someone here will check it for you if you wish.
1. rebut (one t) 2. OK 3. OK The second sentence is probably best.
You don't need to use the word "contest." The word "debate" is already a noun and serves the purpose. Yes, delete "contest"!!
You need to read "The Most Dangerous Game" from which you should get lots of different ideas. http://archive.org/stream/TheMostDangerousGame_129/danger.txt
When you make the letter "p", your lips are already almost in position to make the letter "f". Don't try to separate the word into two words, but pronounce those two letters in quick succession.
http://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=treaty+of+paris+1763 or http://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=treaty+of+paris+1898 ???
Supportive Learning Environment
This is FAR more than SraJMcGin will take on. Please isolate the few (no more than 5) items you would like to be checked.
I disagree with C as your choice. Please re-think. You might also go to www.google.com and look up Hippocratic Oath, just to make sure you know what it says.
What word is the subject of that sentence? Make it plural, and then make the other words in the sentence fit with a plural subject.
I'd change the subject to plural form and then change the pronoun to match. How would you do that?
Make a sentence out of it, Milissa. Thermometer measures heat. So ____ measures ____. Do you see why Bobpursley is right?
If you remove "the" before "August" and use a lower-case "g" on "government", it'll be fine!
I'd write this: Eliminating the floodwall caused devastation.
Save this webpage somewhere: http://writerswrite.co.za/200-most-common-redundancies It's a terrific list of most or maybe all the redundancies we read and hear every day -- on TV, in the news, etc. =)
The phrase "end result" is redundant. That is, you don't need both words. Omit "end" and it'll mean the same thing. Same with "completely eliminating" and "utter devastation." Which words can you eliminate and keep the meaning ...
I'd just write this: You will become obese if you continue eating fast food.
It's wordy, but it is definitely more formal!
Yes, both those ways work fine. I've heard some people saying "in twenty oh one" as well.
All are correct except sentence 3. Nice!
Google is your friend! 1. Go to http://www.google.com 2. Type in principles of art 3. Press the Enter key. 4. Read lots and take notes 5. Re-search with other search words if you need to.
Either D or A ... not sure which.
Ms. Sue is exactly right! We warn and ban ALL PEOPLE who attempt to use this website to cheat. For blatant and full-scale cheating (such as an entire test or exam), THIS is the warning!
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/ Here's everything you need to know re MLA guidelines. Use the list on the left as your table of contents. Also, check out the sample works cited page near the bottom of the contents list so you can see how citations should...
Diseases data classification & clinical coding
See your other post.
Diseases data classification & clinical coding
There are no tutors here who have expertise in this subject area. Please use your text, study materials, and a good search engine or two to find your answers. 1. Go to http://www.google.com or http://www.bing.com 2. Type in pros cons manual indexing (or whatever search terms ...
Google is your friend! http://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=han+dynasty+golden+age
http://www.historynet.com/secession Read VERY CAREFULLY and then let us know what you decide.
Israel as it exists today? I agree.
kagzi -- ??
It would be nice if you followed directions. School Subject: ___________ (Examples: math, science, algebra, geography)
You, too!! =)
Id like the fifth speaker to come to the podium to give a speech in favor of watching TV. She will summarize her teams argument. Thank you. Next, the last speaker will come to the podium and make a speech in opposition to watching TV. All is finished. Thank you for...
I think there's a better answer. Read lots and let us know what you decide. http://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=What+goal+led+Israelis+and+Palestinians+into+conflict
1. The other student should make a counteragrument to the speaker's points after the argument. When the debate between the speaker and some students finishes, the next speaker should come to the podium to deliver a speech. 2. The pros team is composed of three persons, and...
You should use "on" in the first example sentences. ---------------------------------- 3. First speaker, come to the podium, please, and deliver a speech about the topic. (I made a couple of corrections.) In front of a classroom, when there is no raised part made of ...
Have you read the play? Are you clear on what dramatic irony is? http://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=define+dramatic+irony+in+literature Let us know what you decide to include, and someone here will check your work for you.
Confused ~ Isn't the Indian Ocean south of Asia? What do you consider Asia to be comprised of? Which countries?
http://www.lib.utexas.edu/maps/world_maps/world_pol97.jpg Let us know what you decide.
LA ( anyone help or correct me plz
1 and 2 -- I don't know. 4 - 8 -- correct
Google is your friend! Read lots and let us know what you decide. http://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&rlz=1C5CHFA_enUS705US707&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=How+did+the+Emancipation+Proclamation+change+the+Civil+War
Is your question concentrating only on slavery in the US before the Civil War? Don't forget that slavery has existed for millennia! http://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=slavery+in+ancient+rome You can substitute GREECE, EGYPT, CHINA, ...
Do you really expect someone here to take this entire test for you? If you post what YOU THINK the answers are, someone might check them for you.
You're very welcome!
http://www.cm90si.podserver.info/geog3000/maps_files/image008.jpg?i=1 What do you think?
6th grade social studies
Someone here will be happy to check YOUR ANSWER. What do YOU think?
6th grade Social studies quiz PLZZZZ HELP ME!!!!!!
Go to http://www.dictionary.com and look up all four of those terms. Let us know what you decide.
As it reads, it means $6.99 for all 6 CDs. If the writer meant $6.99 for each CD, he/she should have written it this way: I buy 6 CDs for $6.99 each. How much change ...
There will not be examples of "not...a hundred percent" because it's not normal phrasing. "I didn't finish the work" is all you need. 2 and 3 are OK -- meaning I did part of the work, but didn't finish. 4 will be OK if you use "finish"...
Of 1, 2, and 3, #3 is the best sentence. #2 is "iffy" and #1 is not used. Simply saying "I don't like him" is all you need. Again, of 4, 5, and 6, #6 is the best. The others are not used.
1. I disagree with you a hundred percent. 1-1. I don't agree with you at all. (Are both the same?) yes 2. I don't agree with you a hundred percent. 2-1. I agree with part of what you said. (Are both the same?) No. Sentence 2 is not standard phrasing. You could have 2 ...
4-1, 5-1, and 6-1 are much better, yes. You really don't need the adverb there. The sentence "I don't agree with you" is already complete. =)
To keep the same meaning as the original (which is fine, by the way), I'd use choices 2, 3, and 5. 4 implies "maybe" not "must be". 6 states what happened in the past, but not what must occur in the present.
Reed is correct. Be sure to read everything here: http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1485887315 This is your warning.
I'd divide it like this. You can do the rephrasing and put in the correct punctuation. Hint: I'd use a colon after the first rephrased clause in the second part and then commas or semicolons to separate the parts of the series. Reserving the property requires a $500 ...
"the right of way profession" <~~I've never heard that phrasing before. No idea.
Both are correct, yes, but #1 is smoother, less wordy than #2.