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August 28, 2014

Posts by Tharima


Total # Posts: 11

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My professor claims this is not arguing anything still. "This is still not an argument, but a statement. It's a description of the current situation, but what are you arguing? You must analyze different options, sides, and points of view in an argument. You must be ...
April 12, 2010

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Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not been successful because athletes are now using hard-to-detect growth hormones to enhance performance. HOW TO MAKE IT MORE ARGUMENTIVE ?
April 12, 2010

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I hope I do well on this paper because writing this thesis was the hardest. Thanks for all your help I really do appreciate it !!
April 12, 2010

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or... Various approaches to prevent steroids in sports have not bin successful because athletes are now using hard to detect growth hormones which calls for a analysis of better approaches I hope you are patient with me .
April 12, 2010

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Honestly ! What would you advise me to stick to at this point . Because I have attempted writing atleast 5 thesis statements and I am dreaded !! If I go about the statement I put above I do not have enough sources to defend my argument either . Please do advise
April 12, 2010

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Sorry* Is this a better thesis ?
April 12, 2010

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Drug testing before and after games hasn't changed the number of athletes who now secretively use Growth Hormones that are tough to detect through ordinary methods like urine samples.
April 12, 2010

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Originally I was trying to find out what is the better method to prevent steroids in sports because I already had many sources which have researched the different approaches to discouraging using steroids... but I just did not know how to word it.. As a result I came out with ...
April 12, 2010

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Well Growth Hormones have become relatively hard to detect because we make them within our bodies. which is what I found out through research
April 12, 2010

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So should I say . An analysis on different methods to ban steroids in sports brings a challenge to the sports industry: drug testing before and after games hasn't changed the number of athletes who secretively use the type of steroids which cannot be detected.
April 12, 2010

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Is this a good thesis statement or is it too broad with the 4th Amendment part ? Should i Cut it out ? An analysis on different methods to ban steroids in sports brings a challenge to the sports industry: accepting methods like drug testing before and after games or taking a ...
April 12, 2010

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